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« Reply #420 on: November 24, 2006, 09:55:49 PM »
Rndmnweird: Hence the title, Confessions XD

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Ferrar1: <3 And about the true villain thing, I’m trying to keep this as real as possible, so don’t expect great villains that like, tortures everyone or something.

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Saikami: As it’s supposed to be at the end XD –jumps up and down at the confession too <3-

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« Reply #421 on: November 24, 2006, 09:57:09 PM »
Actually, you CAN adress younger brothers as "Nii-san". I think.
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« Reply #422 on: November 24, 2006, 10:01:11 PM »
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Chapter 26: Silence






Those memories…

Rika gave a small sigh into her arms. Once again, she had her knees pulled to her chest, with her arms resting on top of them.

“So…” Yossie began, she was sitting right next tot Rika, though the said person’s back was facing the Morning Musume leader, “What did you say to Maki?”

“The truth,” The Viyuuden leader shifted her position so that she faced Yossie, “Nothing more, nothing less than the blatant truth…”

“I see, and everyone else?” Yossie pulled Rika back so her head was resting on her halp.

“Their truths of course,” Rika raised her hand to carress the hair slightly covering Yossie’s right eye, “It revolts me how they often misunderstand.”

“Is that so?” Yossie chuckled, “What other things revolt you?”

“You revolt me,” Rika said in a frown, “Be nicer to me.”

“Aren’t I being nice to you right now?” Yossie asked in her scheming smile.

“Be nicer! Nicer! Nicer!” Rika simply repeated, now caressing Yossie’s face, “You used to be much nicer than this…” Then she was struck with a sudden realization, “You…that woman…!” Rika got up. There was a knock on the door, to which Rika immediately answered.

Remembering the “kind” you…

Yui was behind the door, “I received a call from the apartment…” and whatever the details were, Yossie couldn’t hear Yui too well.

“Who does she think I am?!” Rika finally said, thus confirming what Yossie thought might have happened.

“Did Shibata-san do something again?” Yossie asked as she got up.

“I have to leave, sorry I can’t look at the full moon with you,” and with that, Rika left, Yui following after.

I wish I could see that again…

“That’s nice, saying she’s sorry that we can’t view the moon together, but I’m mean for not saying ‘it’s okay’ to her…” Yossie chuckled as she looked out the window sill, the moon partially clouded due to the rain.

“Haha, I sense a storm, a mental one rather than a physical one…” Yossie gave a brief laugh, “I’m definitely going to enjoy this…”

But that kindness is probably gone forever…

Miki was sitting on the balcony, or rather, sitting on the balcony railing. Even if it was raining, she would always look at the stars and moon whenever she had the chance. It could be one of the things that justify her being from Hokkaido, looking at the sky or not minding wet clothes. However, because she was Miki, the only person that knows she has such a “wussy” habit (as Miki called it) was Aya.

Amidst her gazing, she looked at the pond, its surfaces disturbed by the pestering rain. She saw a distant figure in the rather condense rain. Recognizing who it was as the person got closer, Miki jumped from the balcony and landed on all fours like a cat. She stood up and walked towards the figure several meters away.

“Ojou-sama, what are you doing here so late and without an umbrella?” Miki asked, wary of the creepy smile Rika was giving.

“I’ve come to see Reina.”

Miki stood her ground firmly and glared at Rika, “I’m afraid I can’t let you do that. Reina needs her rest.”

“She’s not doing work tomorrow, so there’s one excuse.”

“You sound irritated, I won’t let you take your anger out on Reina, it’s my duty as sub-leader to make sure she’s well.”

“To make sure she’s well? Don’t make me laugh, since when did you care so much for others rather than yourself?”

“I don’t. If I don’t do my job, I won’t get paid for it well.”

“Haha, Miki, you’re such a greedy idiot,” Rika placed her hand over her lips to muffle a small laugh.

“Oh please, it’s not all about the money, it’s the intention of seeing my members not complain.”

“Then you’re simply greedy for the sake of making your life better at the expense of others. You know we already discussed this…” Rika’s voice was now getting irritated.

“I’m still not going to let you see Reina, it’s late enough as it is.”

“Are you disobeying my order?” Rika asked in an agitated voice.

“Something happened, didn’t it?” Miki replied back, “What’s wrong, Ojou-sama? I know you’re obviously irritated, but you seemed like it long before we spoke.”

“Because I felt sick!” Rika shouted as she punched Miki hard in the cheek. “Who are you to try empathizing with me?!” she yelled as Miki stumbled backwards, blood trickling down her lip from biting it too hard as the hit connected. “You’re such a pathetic greedy fool!” Rika moved her leg backwards, as if to kick Miki. The sub-leader wa ready to accept the next hit, but it never came; Reina crouched in front of Miki and halted the blow using both her arms in an X formation.

Rika then brought her leg back and stood formally, Reina also doing the same. When she had her arms at the side, Miki noticed the bruises Rika left of Reina’s arms.

“I went about the house, doing my business, when I saw you two screaming. Please stop, because I think you’re waking the neighbors and us afar,” Reina said in a steady, but forced tone of voice.

“Giving me a command too? You’re such a terrible person,” Rika smiled. “Though, I came here to speak to you regardless of what rude attitude you display.”

Reina was silent, but glaring.

Rika smiled, but had a contemptuous look, “Don’t think you’re special, you peasant. Don’t think you’ve ‘won’ or anything like that. You are an outsider, a lonewolf has no right to meddle in our affairs.”

Reina felt obligated to yell back, but feared Rika might do something to inflict greater injuries.

“Let me tell you something… You know why Konno and Ogawa graduated? It’s because they both tried to meddle in our affairs, but in the end, it only caused them grief, and they even asked Kaori to make them forget about everything, including Risa being inflicted with the curse.”

Reina was speechless at that point, imagining Risa’s pain.

“And in the end, they, the Orochi, will all return to me… A never-ending paradise… A happy paradise… And I won’t allow you to join us…”

“…Is that really happiness? Confining everyone and restricting them like that? That’s your definition of happiness?” Reina finally asked.

With a sigh, Rika replied, “Your happiness and our happiness are different. Who are you to judge us with your fairytale values?”

Rika… She’s not like the others… Her existence is very different from the other Orochi… What is she really? Reina recalled the story into her head again. There were the elderly parents… The Orochi itself…

“Who are you… What are you to the orochi?” Reina trembled as she asked that question to Rika, who simply flattened her smile and continued to glare at her contemptuously.

Then there was Kushinada, the eighth daughter that was saved by Susanoo, god of the wind and storm…

That was it.

God.

“I am the closest being to Susanoo, a descendant of his. I am the one, who harbors the full burden of the Orochi, I am the master of their souls.”

“Ojou-sama!” A familiar voice called out, “I was looking for you. You’ll catch a cold standing out in the rain like that.”

Rika turned around and clung to the person’s arm, and then sneered at Reina, “I’m sorry for making you worry, Yui. I’ll go back now.”

Did Yui just call her…?

“Oh yes, since you apparently have no idea yet, Yui is the fourth head of the Orochi.”

“Then…”

Alright so… Nakazawa-san is the 2nd, Murata-san the 3rd, Okada-san the 4th, Miki the 5th, Iida-san the 6th, Maki the 7th, and Gaki-san is the 8th…

“Who is the first head of the Orochi?”

“She hasn’t told you yet? It’s a part of her nature to probably never let you know then… Nonetheless, I think rather than watching out for me, you should be watching out for her.” Rika said in an exasperated sigh as she walked towards Reina.

Then who? Who is the first and final Orochi?

“In the end, they will all be at my side, we cannot be apart…” Then she raised a hand to move Reina’s wet bangs out of her face, “Don’t you dare try to destroy our happiness…Otherwise, you’ll be punished…” And with that, Rika and Yui left.

Reina collapsed to her knees, sobbing. So she’s the descendant of god…The one highest of them all… Is that the reason why they can’t disobey her that easily? The curse… The mysterious shackles that binds the Orochi…the curse that chains everyone… Is also chained to God?
Reina felt hands at her arms, lifting her up to stand. Miki, the blood from her mouth washed away by the rain, took Reina’s arms and inspected them of her bruises.

“Doesn’t seem like much. It should heal in a few days,” Miki simply said solemnly.

“Miki… Your cheek…” Reina’s eyes were averted to the redness of it.

“S’okay. She beats the crap out of me all the time,” Miki said as she wiped the tears off of Reina’s face.

“Damn, I’m getting such a hugeass headache…” Miki twitched as she held her head with one of her hands. “This is why… That’s why we unfortunately have to abide by her. Obedient. Restrained. Chained by her connection. If I try to act against it, the blood within me will argue and that usually gives me the worst kind of headaches ever… I hate it…” she said, a single tear escaping, but she simply wiped it off, “we should get inside, don’t want to have colds tomorrow or something.”

Reina did not need words, she turned around and headed back for the house, Miki following after. When they both got inside, Miki headed straight for the bathroom, leaving Reina to have to change her clothes and dry her hair before going to bed. However, when she reached the stairs, she overheard voices, and she sidled with the wall in order to eavesdrop.

“Good thing they’re back…” she heard Risa sighing.

“I told you they didn’t need rescueing. Besides, if we did try something, Ojou-sama would get angry…” she now heard Maki.

“Now that I think about it… Why did we have to leave Tanakacchi alone when we had to come to the meeting? If Yuko had only wanted to gather us for that meeting, then why invite everyone else? We could have had the meeting on a different date… But I knew Ojou-sama wanted us to leave Tanakacchi’s side and come to her’s…”

“I’m thinking…” Maki began, “If we had chosen to stay rather than go, Ojou-sama would have been especially angry. So what we did… We protected Reina by going to Ojou-sama…”

Reina had peeked, and saw Risa smiling, “You make it sound like we’ve done something very good. I’m happy…”

Reina felt the tears come to her again, but she slapped her face a bit, wiped her tears, and came in, “Sorry if I worried you!”

“Good timing Tanakacchi! Maki was blackmailing me!” Risa ran over and hid behind Reina.

“What the hell? I was not!” Maki crossed her arms and raised a brow. “Anywho, we need to sleep. It’s like, one in the morning now.”

The younger two agreed and Risa left for her room. Maki opened the door to their shared room. Reina immediately went for her luggage while the older went and laid on the bed. Reina did not bother changing in a different room, for she knew Miki would do to her if she had suddenly barged in the bathroom, so instead, she changed right in front of her luggage—and Maki.

Maki couldn’t help but compare her thoughts to what Miki probably thinks of all the time. The cursed watched as Reina took off her shirt and pants from her slightly wet body, and was thankful that the rain didn’t soak her undergarments to the extent of having to change those too, because otherwise, Maki could have had a heart attack and passed on right there. Then she proceeded to place new pajamas on, and then took her towel from the chair and placed her clothes there to dry. Still facing the luggage, she proceeded to dry her hair as best as she could, before finally throwing that over a different chair.

Maki quickly turned the other way, to hide her excessive blush, and felt the bed get heavier as Reina stepped in and under the covers. Feeling her redness fade after awhile, Maki turned over to face Reina, who seemed to be clutching her eyes too tight, which suggested to her that the wonky-eyed teen was bad at faking sleep. Maki shifted position again, and accidentally brushed her leg off of Reina’s in doing so.

“You’re really cold…”

“It’ll be normal eventually, just give me half an hour or so…” Reina opened her eyes to look at her idol.

“Or if I do this…” Maki hugged Reina on impulse, “It’ll probably take about half that time.”

She felt satisfied when she felt Reina blush in the embrace. Oh the joys of having ‘dual-pillows’ instead of the negative: being smacked constantly.

“I’ll hold onto you for as long as you’re cold.”

“Thanks,” Reina looked up at Maki, who felt her heat rising again at such an innocent glance. They both would have been internally screaming in their heads if they knew that they, themselves, were blushing.

Though, time stood frozen as they gazed into each other’s eyes, trying to understand the thoughts of the other’s, the mind of the other’s, even the true personalities of the other’s. Both came to one conclusion within their own minds: They are both kind people.

“Good night,” Reina finally said, before closing her eyes.

“Good night,” Maki smiled, before also closing her eyes.

They both had pleasant dreams that night.







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« Reply #423 on: November 24, 2006, 10:20:21 PM »
Yay, first post. <3 Keep the ReinaxMaki coming!!! And Reina and Rika > Great chapter! So cute at the end, it made me squeal.
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« Reply #424 on: November 24, 2006, 10:30:39 PM »
:O!

Rika is like.. God?

So, who is the 1st head? Is it another Musume?
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« Reply #425 on: November 24, 2006, 10:51:21 PM »
Oh my gah....... Im so freaking glad I read today. I guess its a good thing i was behind so i got to read two chapters at once.

AH! AH! I dont even know where to start.... your fanfic made me have a spazzam....
Why is Rika still a loveable bitch? *I guess its videos upon videos of Charmy that brainwashed me to forever love rika* Is it really Maki's fault and is she really lying to the people who asked how her dad died? Man, Rika really knwos how to make a person feel like crap in this story...
One word for Rika, "Crrraaahzy~" Repeating words, minipulating people... If I wasnt sure, I would have thought she was one of those bipolar mafia leaders.

YAY for Miki being sneaky, faking from a low blow, and caring... even if it is sorta greedy. Sigh, although thinking of Reina (and Maki watching her) change infront of Maki is cool, I would have liked to see how a play out of Reina walking in and changing infront of Miki would have turned out.

Damn man, whats up with Risa and Ai? At first I thought Ai was just bitchin' but Risa played it off like a gangsta...
Its sorta weird how Miki is now acting calm towards Rika. But I guess the whole blood link is explainable...
Hmm Reina and Gotou....

EDIT: about the Nii-chan thing. From what I know, and I what i see all the time... Onii-chan/san/sama signifies that he is older. -Nii-chan can also mean older (or EX: Taka-nii, Taka-niichan). Really though, I dont think that Nii is used for anyone younger, unless you are a stranger.

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« Reply #426 on: November 24, 2006, 11:55:53 PM »
A heavy chapter! Woah lots of excitement for one that wasnt so long...

Miki and Reina getting their asses kicked by Rika. They shoulda just double teamed her and drowned her in that pond that was there. Or do Gods not drown? XD

Maki having naughty thoughts was funny as anything. Shes always so calm and stuff...makes u wonder whats going through her head. And it seems that sometimes whats going through her head is very "ecchi" lol

As for the first head...i think i know who it is *devil horns* *evil laugh* ahh ha ha ha! ahh ha ha ha!

I hope Reina and Maki get together sooooon! ^_^

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« Reply #427 on: November 25, 2006, 03:57:42 AM »
SO CUTE!!!! :heart:

And Rika's being mean again. vv,,

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« Reply #428 on: November 25, 2006, 04:58:47 AM »
yummy delicious cheesecake...
Yay you posted another chapter!!
*sigh* and once again it was fantastico!
>_>...But I ate all the cheesecake...
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« Reply #429 on: November 25, 2006, 05:17:36 AM »
Out of boredom, I went and made a picture out of myself according to the abstract point in the recent chapter.



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« Reply #430 on: November 25, 2006, 08:33:50 AM »
^ ?? You mean that's you !!

I thought it was MAKI when i scrolled past till i read your comments below XD

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Reina crouched in front of Miki and halted the blow using both her arms in an X formation

wow Reina can fight? surprise surprise :D

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Miki was sitting on the balcony, or rather, sitting on the balcony railing. Even if it was raining, she would always look at the stars and moon whenever she had the chance. It could be one of the things that justify her being from Hokkaido, looking at the sky or not minding wet clothes.

i love your description of Miki :heart:

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Ferrar1: <3 And about the true villain thing, I’m trying to keep this as real as possible, so don’t expect great villains that like, tortures everyone or something.

I meant that the true villain ( Head of Orochi?) is not out yet and the plot is still far from over.

Nice chapter, continue to write please !
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« Reply #431 on: November 25, 2006, 12:04:24 PM »
Nooo! I've missed so many chapters and read them all in one go just now, so I'm sure I can't remember everything! XD  
 
Yossi's character is still really mysterious, can't really get a firm grip on what's going on through her mind... or if she's planning something..
 
All the Maki/Reina moments you have are just priceless, way too adorable!!
 
And go Reina! She can fight?! Rika must have used quite a lot of power for Reina's arms to bruise to quickly.
 
Btw, that's an awesome 'Silence' picture! :P

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« Reply #432 on: November 25, 2006, 12:16:04 PM »
I loved this chapter and Rika really is a bitch, but i like it.
I want to see more Reina\Maki moments, they are sooo cute and as I said in my last comment, my new favourite pairing :D

The pic of you is really nice too :D

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« Reply #433 on: November 25, 2006, 04:22:33 PM »
Miki has concern for her kouhai? Now that's something! :ONglasses:
I can't imagine Reina saving Miki from that Rika-kick after she stuffed that empty carton of milk tea in her mouth, but it just proves how awesome Reina is :ONhee:
But will there be a time where Miki will be the one getting the hit for Reina? :ONglasses:

I like the way you portray Miki, from the touching demon to the sub-leader character. She has a good side after all. :ONhee:

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« Reply #434 on: November 25, 2006, 04:51:00 PM »
Hmm, who could the first head be? Shibata, maybe? Or Yossui? No, it can't be Yossui, you already said she was human. *mentally crosses off list* Hmm....

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« Reply #435 on: November 26, 2006, 03:32:56 AM »
Ok, suspissions on who the 1st head is:
 
Tsunku: You never said if all the Orochi had to be female. Plus he was the one who helped select the winners of the audition.
 
Natsumi Abe: She does have a somewhat demonic smile, and we havent seen her yet.:drool:
 
Sayumi: Conflict over who the cutest between her and Rika could just be a cover for te aggression she has for the god who killed her.
 
Nono: Her crazy personality hides her evil side. Aibon Fridayed herself just to hide from her!:twisted:
 
But also, wouldn't Rika be a demi-god because she is a desendant of a god and a human?

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« Reply #436 on: November 26, 2006, 03:35:41 AM »
Shibata as the first head? I suppose that would work.... There's something wrong here....For some reason, the whole Yossi Rika Yui thing is really freaking me out.....

Could the first head perhaps be....MARI? LOL jk. Or I think I am.....Mari...haha...no offence that is...

anyways, great chapters! Yossi is giving me a really bad feeling... Who were those letters in bold directed at.... Remembering the kind you.....were they from Rika's thoughts directed at Yossi? and Rika saying " You used to be much nicer" makes me feel like I'm missing something.

Did yossi change? Perhaps Yui had something to do with it? She seems to hate Yui alot....Yossi that is. This is all making me think alot. Can't wait for the next chapters....What does Shibata have to do with this...hmmm

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Ok, suspissions on who the 1st head is:

Tsunku: You never said if all the Orochi had to be female. Plus he was the one who helped select the winners of the audition.

Natsumi Abe: She does have a somewhat demonic smile, and we havent seen her yet.

Sayumi: Conflict over who the cutest between her and Rika could just be a cover for te aggression she has for the god who killed her.

Nono: Her crazy personality hides her evil side. Aibon Fridayed herself just to hide from her!

But also, wouldn't Rika be a demi-god because she is a desendant of a god and a human?


=P I don't think it's Tsunku because the poem refers to all the cursed as girls...

Nacchi! I forgot about her... *smacks self* Ofcourse! She's probobly the most likely candidate in my opinion....Shibata would be second...

Sayumi ...as the head. Sayumi. I suppose it's possible...Sayumi's face has always come off as a bit evil to me....something with her eyebrow and eye position...

As for nono...doesn't seem likely to be either W member, but who knows =P
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« Reply #437 on: November 26, 2006, 03:47:10 AM »
Saikami: This might make you squeal too <3

Shoko: Well, more like a demi-goddess. You know, Kushinada's mortal and Susanoo's a god. But the god line diminishes through time, so she probably has much less than 1/64 of that power, nonetheless, the Orochi are still attached to her so it doesn't matter. And you'll see the first head PRETTY soon. XD

Slave: Yay for loving bitches XD As for Ai, we'll see about her later :]

Krazy: I hope to see Reina and Maki get together soon too :]

Mayonnaise: Mmhmm :<

Loser87: You ate it all? ; ; -dives into your throat (With a hardhat of course) and looks- Aww. It's all digested ;_;

Ferrar1: Hmm, not sure about that, but I think I can say, looking at my plans, that the fic will probably not even exceed 50 chapters.

Goosefish: Well, in this chapter, Yossie lets out a wee percentage about her  in the story, so maybe that will help :]

Shunjunsweden: Thanks XD They're one of my major favorites too <3

Wordsworth: Perhaps she will, perhaps she won't. We'll see later on :]

Rndmnweird: Technically, I, the narrator didn't say so. Only Reina thought so.

glcorps2002: Yeah, a demi-god :] But it was amusing reading your guesses.

To y'all: I dunno, I'm receiving the pressure of making chapters longer instead of the usual 6-7 pages because some of you seem to enjoy the long chapters o_O For now, 6 pages is the minimum :]

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Chapter 27
« Reply #438 on: November 26, 2006, 03:48:30 AM »
Not too long, not too short. 7 pages on word :]







Chapter 27:  My Vow, My Desperation


The sun crept through the dark blinds; there were lines of light over the sleeping musume. Soon, the woman turned, facing the light, and groggily opened her eyes, eyeing the empty space next to her.

“Oh yeah… She left yesterday… How could I forget?” the woman sighed.

“Be nicer! Nicer! Nicer! … You used to be much nicer than this…”

“I wonder… Is she even aware of the reason why I’ve been a little disloyal to her lately?” Yossie sighed as she got out of bed, glad in black pants with white stripes at the side, and a navy blue shirt with long sleeves. She walked over the wood-paneled floor and pulled on the shade and set it up, so the sun basked her in its morning glory.

A ring-tone sounded in the air, and the leader didn’t have to go far to pick it up from the coffee table and answer it.

“Good morning, Ojou-sama.”

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Maki woke up to a melody, not an irritating or repetitive one, but rather, a beautiful melody. She rubbed her eyes groggily and listened intently to the melody. It was one of the songs from the Ribon no Kishi musical, Anata ni Aitai she believed it was called. She got up and made the bed, noting the missing presence, and made the connection with the melody.

She looked at the mirror to make sure at least her hair was presentable, and then walked out of the room. She immediately followed the melody, and was lead to a different room in the hallway, and its door was opened slightly. Before she intruded, she looked into the crack of the door, and was met with a person’s back to her.

That person was sitting on a bench, playing Anata ni Aitai on the piano.

Smiling, she entered the room and sat on the bench next to the pianist, the girl noticing another presence, but continued playing.

Maki watched as fingers touched the white and black keys, producing beautiful sounds as the strokes were combined in harmony.

“You look really different when you play piano, Reina,” Maki finally said, deterring that the song is coming into an end.

“Do I?” the yankii smirked, playing at a decrescendo, “explain.”

“For one thing, you look very mature and seem very empathetic when you play,” the older smiled.

“Ah…I see… Thank you…” Reina blushed, and then stopped playing, “To be honest, I don’t really know too many songs off the top of my head, and even with the sheet music, I get frustrated easily when I don’t hit the notes right, especially when I learn a new song, so that’s why I don’t really play the piano that much.”

“Well, practicing a lot will make you get better, that’s what they say, right?” Maki chuckled as she patted Reina.

“True, I’ve been getting better at this one particular song…” Reina turned to face the keys again. “I’m not sure what will come of you when I play it so, I’m going to tell you what it is first,” and then Reina told the cursed what she was about to play.

“The most that would happen if I heard someone other than within our curse play it, Is that I would probably be struck speechless, and maybe even shed  a tear, all of the cursed react that way, not really sure why…”

“Maybe it’s because your blood remembers it?”

“Yeah, I guess…” Maki scratched the back of her head sheepishly, “But how do you know the song anyway?”

“Iida-san sang it for me once, and played it on guitar, so later on, I asked her to put it on sheet music for me to practice on piano, she also took the liberty of making another set of sheet music with the vocals incorporated into the piano.”

“Ah ha, impressive, but which one are you playing?”

“The version with the vocals incorporated into the piano. I tried singing it once, but I think I was really off-key; I think the song is meant for alto. Here it comes.”

And Reina began to play it.

And what Maki said earlier was true. She opened her mouth as if to say something, but not a sound came out. She looked at Reina’s fingers playing each key to perfection, and felt a single tear fall out, to which she immediately wiped away.

Elsewhere in the house, Miki heard the piano amidst her looking into the refridgerator, and nearly dropped the carton of milk tea she had in her hand. With her arm, she wiped away the tear that came.

In a different part of the house, Risa was brushing her hair for she had just come out of the shower. Recognizing the familiar melody, she stopped her action, and simply wiped her single tear with her towel.

Last but not least, Yuko simply passed the room for which the pianist and her idol was residing in, before hearing the all-too familiar tune. The soloists paused in her tracks.  She, too, fell into the obligatory fate of shedding a lonesome tear.

Eventually, the song came to an end, and everyone else resumed their activities.

“Er…What did you think?”

“You did it very well, that’s one of the best covers I’ve heard so far…”

“Nah, you don’t have to say that, I know I must’ve hit the wrong note somewhere…”

“No, you did it perfectly, I felt it. If I didn’t, then I wouldn’t be speechless and shed a tear.”

“Ah damn. Good point there,” Reina looked off to the side, shifty-eyed.

“Well, you keep on playing something, I need to go shower,” and with that, the 7th head left.

Reina, at a loss of what to do, followed Maki out, but went down the stairs to see if there was any breakfast in sight. Though, her intentions were diminished when she saw Miki eating instant ramen while watching TV. Yuko was sitting on the stool, drinking some green tea, while Risa seemed to be in the kitchen, cooking something. Reina was just about to go see what she was cooking, but was surprised when she saw three familiar visitors at the back door.

Reina went over and allowed the remaining 6th generation and the 7th generation member into the house, “So, had fun with shopping?”

“We didn’t buy too much, but we had a lot of fun!” Koharu beamed. Eri and Sayumi decided to seat themselves in the sofa with Miki, staring as she slurped her noodles.

Miki’s eyes diverted left at Eri, and then right for Sayumi, and she constantly moved them as she swallowed. “What?” She asked in an irritated voice, “Is there something you want to tell me?”

“Why does your cheek have a patch on it?” Sayumi asked innocently.

“And Reina, why are both your arms bandaged?” Eri also asked.

Reina and Miki looked at eachother, trying to figure out an excuse, before Miki finally said, “we had a small yankii battle.”

“Wow! Fujimoto-san must’ve lost! Because a head injury is more points than limb injuries!” Koharu smiled innocently.

Miki let out a small ‘feh’ before throwing away the ramen cup and throwing the chopsticks (which narrowly missed Risa) into the sink.

“Oh the joys of morning,” Yuko finally said, before drinking a bit of the tea. “It’ll be sad when we have to go.”

“Yeah, but we can reflect on the ride home!” Eri raised a finger in the air. Everyone heard a small whimper, and turned to look at the source of the noise.

Once again, Koharu was deadly pale white, shivering occasionally. Though, it wasn’t as stressed, for she made sense with her words. “I hope I can at least return home alive…”

“That’s okay, squirt, just ride home with Kaorin,” Miki suggested, sitting back down on the couch.

“I was never any good at rock paper scissors!”

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“Ah, did the children leave?” Yossie yawned as she opened the door.

“Ah… So you’ve awoken,” Megumi didn’t bother looking at Yossie, since she was rather focused on the newspaper in her hands.

“Oh…” Yossie raised a brow, wondering how she ended up walking into a different room other than her original destination of the living room.

“Ah… By the way, will you please close that door? I am sure you do not wish to invade any further.”

Yossie smiled sheepishly, before leaving Megumi to do her business in the bathroom by shutting the door and heading for the living room. When she looked at the living room, it was also desolate. Not even Kaori was anywhere to be found.

The Morning Musume leader then sat in a comfortable leather chair and sighed. She observed her surroundings with her eyes, not moving her head, and then pondered.

Her pondering was interrupted when Kaori entered the room, and sat in the couch opposite of her.

“So where were you?”

“…In my room…” Kaori said as if it was the most obvious thing in the world.

“Oh, guess I was too tired, haha, so where are the children?”

“They are at the other house.”

“I see, I see… I hear Ojou-sama gave Reina quite the scare. That and she hurt her and Miki.”

“You seem to be enjoying it, seeing you smile as you state injuries,” Kaori replied, resting her left arm on the arm rest of the sofa.

“I can’t help it. It’s my nature,” Yossie only smiled in return.

“You must be very pleased with whatever you’re planning.”

“Why are you speaking to me in such a harsh tone?” Yossie raised a modest brow, but continued smiling.

“And you claim that you’re not using Reina?”

“Of course,” Yossie waved her hand dismissively.

“You’re doing a fine job of using her as your pawn for you selfish reasons.”

There was a brief silence.

“Do you remember the day you finally met us? Met fourth generation that is. Maki, Yuko, and you upon seeing Rika, shed a single tear. That was due to finally seeing Ojou-sama in person for the first time. The blood remembered that promise that the Orochi and Susanoo exchanged long ago. But it became something painful for you three. However… For me, it still lingers in my heart.”

That one instance, it flickered…Such a bittersweet feeling…

“’I want to make it last an eternity. I want to make it tangible. I want to make it reality.’ I recall saying. Yes, I still remember that vow. And here I am, doing anything I could to make that vow come true. I don’t care about the methods of achieving what I vow to make happen.”

Kaori was silent, unsure how to reply.

“I don’t care if I hurt anyone making it happen. I don’t care about hurting innocent people making it happen. I even don’t care about hurting the people I love to make my vow come true. Sure, I hate myself for being that desperate, especially when I look at Reina, she’s a good person. But what has to be done must be done. I don’t care if I’m the last person standing on earth to see my vow come true. I will go that far if I must.”

“…Hitomi…” Kaori was still searching for words.

“Such a human like myself has to be the most cursed of them all…”

“What I find most revolting is that amidst all this, you say it all while smiling a contemptuous grin.”

Yossie laughed a bit before finally saying, “Such is my nature. I can’t change it. To get what I want, I may even be forced to backstab those I love.”

“…Whatever the consequence, make sure you are prepared. One of these days, someone will let loose on you.”

“Of course, I am very well aware of that, hence what lengths I’m going to reach it. I’m not particularly fond of pain, but I guess I can’t help it.”

“I’m not going to be on your side.”

“Yeah, I know,” Yossie waved her hand.

“But I’m not going to be your enemy either.”

“Ah, that’s good to hear,” Yossie scratched the back of her head. “Glad to know you’ll be struggling in the neutral side.”

“You make it sound like a war is going on.”

“Something like that,” Yossie chuckled, “Everyone’s fighting, even the good people have to fight to suppress the bad ones like me. Actually, I’m kinda dropping the subject here, but I have to leave at perhaps 18:00 for a meeting. I’m not coming back here.”

“I will notify the others,” Kaori simply stated.

“Thank you. You’re a kind person. Keep struggling.”

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There’s this feeling…

“Well this was an amusing day…” Reina did her routine bed flop.

“I can’t believe the day went by at the blink of an eye,” Maki said in a single breath, eyeing the red lines on the digital clock reading 22:00. “Full moon is tomorrow, I definitely can’t wait! I hear Yuko stored some moon cakes in one of the other houses.”

“Autmn’s pretty muching kicking off to a good start, eh?” Reina rolled a bit so that her head was on the pillow.

“Ah… Autumn… Persimmon and chestnuts… I can taste them now…” Maki gave a satisfied sigh as she sat on the bed, Reina scooting over a bit to give her space.

“Yeah, we should go shopping for them tomorrow then, a moon-gazing night with good stereotypical autumn food, haha, but for now, I think we should sleep. I’m exhausted…” Reina said as she slipped underneath the covers.

“Yeah, tomorrow will be another good day,” Maki smiled as she shut off the lights. When she got into the bed, Reina turned to face her in the darkness.

“Mm, definitely can’t wait for it,” Reina grinned, “Hope I don’t lose sleep waiting for it.”

“Nah, you won’t,” Maki chuckled, “Anyways, good night.”

“Good night,” Reina replied, and for some odd reason, she moved herself over and kissed Maki’s cheek, and turned the other way, blushing profusely at the confusion of why she would do such a thing, with Maki also confused as to why there was now a kiss involved in their good-nights…

This feeling… It can’t be put into words…

It was almost complete darkness in Rika’s room. It might have been in total darkness if she had not forgotten to pull on the shades for her glass balcony door. Instead, the 99% moon illuminated her room in a silvery essence, giving light and shadow to it as if it was a masterpiece of art.

The true masterpiece was slumbering peacefully, not a single implication of a nightmare. Like an artist admiring her art, Yossie was standing outside of the balcony, watching her beloved Ojou-sama sleep peacefully.

“You are so beautiful when you sleep…”

But I fear that if I don’t recognize that feeling…

Yossie, specifically, was standing on top of the balcony railing, the very railing her Ojou-sama usually leans on. Draped over her arms was her green airforce jacket, a gift from UFA. For it was such a nice jacket, Yossie wouldn’t dare ruin it for something as simple as seeing someone. So underneath that jacket, she was wearing a black spaghetti strap top, which also wasn’t ruined by her visit.

After all, her lone single wing was on her left shoulder blade.

“Good night, my dear Ojou-sama. I hope your dreams are pleasant,” she said in a content smile, before flying off into the darkness.

I’ll lose it forever.









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Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #439 on: November 26, 2006, 04:07:16 AM »
omg....

YOSSI? I thought she wasn't cursed...

lol now Rika's warning makes sense!

These chapters make Yossi sound so cruel....

- waiting patiently for the next chapter-

I.Love.This.Fic.

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