Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume

[cheesesticks]

Ah damnit, don't just let this die! Especially if it involves Eri! lol

[chao_88]

really needs update!! love the story,,,

[00HB]

you can copunt me too in this motion!
[even if I'm guilty of doing the same ¬¬' ]

[meowchi]

Ack the fic isn't dead! I already have the actual story written on paper, it just needs to be typed up and posted... The fic had to be postponed though because if my hectic schedule! But expect updates soon!!の人がSprinTと夢に向かって.

[ferrar1]

^ Nice to see you updating Meowchi !!

And what a nice sig, it captured Eri nicely

Btw please do not be offended that we are demanding updates to this story, we just hate to see this story stop because we love it so much

[meowchi]

Eri Kamei
Flight 707
October 8, 12:27 PM
 

Eri and Sayumi, hand in hand, sprint down the messy corridor. Their gasps for air echo against the fibers of the cabin.
“ Eri, s-slow down! “
Eri stops in place and promptly turns around, causing Sayumi to forcefully bump into her.
“ Ow~! “ Eri cries out as her partner generously slumps over, panting heavily. Eri rubs her shoulder. Sayumi shuts her eyes, hoping to preserve some sort of energy.
“ Why do you need to stop? “ Eri asked frantically. “ Eh? I mean, we just started… “
“ T-that’s terrible! “ Sayumi cringed as she tries to talk over her desperate gasps for air. “ I-It’…s been almost 3… hours! Besides… I-I hate running… Can Sayumi t-take… a break? “
“ You can’t be serious! “ Eri’s eyes widen with surprise. She tugs at her, prodding her to continue forward. Sayumi doesn’t budge.
“ Sayumi! “ Eri whined. “ We have to keep moving! …And just so you know, it’s only been 5 minutes! “
“ Really? Oh, but 5 minutes is still a long time! “ Sayumi seemed to regain her breath. “ Can you carry me please? “
Beneath the ensuing awkward pause, Sayumi coughed sarcastically, hoping to sound desperately tired.
“ No way! “ Eri paused. “ Besides, you probably weigh more then me anyway! “
She starts to pace forward, dragging Sayumi along with her. The scraping sound of Sayumi’s shoes against the carpet seemed to scream across the room.
“ Why are you yelling! “ Sayumi pouts. “ I just thought I’d ask since my legs hurt from all this dumb running... “
Eri doesn’t say a word. She frowns, causing Sayumi to pause in thought.
“ Sayumi’s sorry to make you mad…”
“ I’m not mad! “ Eri abruptly replies. She stops in place once again and turns around. Sayumi prominently hangs her head down, expecting some kind of scolding.
“ I’m… “ Eri repeated. “ Sayumi, I’m not mad. It’s just this whole situation is just... You know, not normal!? “
Sayumi paused as she makes eye contact. “ But the important thing is; you’re not mad, right?
Eri quickly shakes her head. “ No…No.”
“ What a relief! “ Sayumi muffled. “ You’re weird when you get mad. “
“ Eh? Why? “ Eri curiously replied.
“ Because, I hardly ever see you get mad… “
“ Huh? That’s not true… “ Eri slides her index finger against her lip as she goes into deep thought. “ There was that stupid papaya thing. I know, I know, I know I chose a mango! They had to have switched th- “
“ Um, “ Sayumi interrupts. “ You’ve told me that story a few times already. “
“ Really? I don’t remember telling you? I think. Oh! “ Out of pure randomness, Eri snaps out of her thought. “ Let’s go! Are you ready to run some more? “
“ Umm… “ Sayumi reluctantly nods her head. “ Yes. “
Eri gives a blank stare. “ Not only are you a bad runner, you’re a bad liar too! “
Before Sayumi could reply, Eri begins bracing herself to carry her friend. She places her feet apart and lays out her arms, almost as if she were to catch a ball.
“ What… are you doing? “
“ Your legs hurt right? I can carry you. “ Eri said proudly as she stomps her foot to emphasize her point. She closes her eyes. “ Just… jump into my arms or something. “
Sayumi carefully analyzes the new situation. A brief pause follows. “ Suddenly I don’t think that’s a good idea. “
“ Just try it! “ Eri prods. “ I’ll just pretend you’re a ball or something. Haven’t you seen all those catches I’ve made during practices? “
“ But I’m not a pink ball… Can you open your eyes at least? “
Eri thinks about it. “ No, cause then it’ll be harder for me to pretend! “
Sayumi whimpers. “ Well, just make sure you catch me, ok? “
As if in trance, Eri nods.
Sayumi slowly inches closer to Eri, preparing to leap into her arms.
“ Um! Here comes Sayumi the kickball who is coming towards you now~ “
Before Eri could reply, Sayumi elegantly jumps into her arms. The way Eri caught her though, not so elegant, as the force of the landing almost tipped her over.
“ Ugh! “ Eri groans. Time seemed to come to a complete stop for Eri as she ignores Sayumi’s weight.
“ Wow! You actually caught me! “ Sayumi squealed graciously as she braces her arms around Eri’s neck. “ You really are amazing! “
With her legs wobbling and her arms trembling, Eri struggled to walk forward. She managed to walk a few inches. Wanting to inform Sayumi on how abruptly she jumped, nothing comes out but a weak whimper. Eri grunts some more, hoping to give Sayumi a clue that she is way to heavy for her to handle. Sayumi immediately notices Eri’s distress.
“ Don’t give up Eri! “ Sayumi chants. “ You can do it! “
Suddenly, a noise pops out from the exit behind them.
Footsteps. Running footsteps.
Rushing towards them.
A familiar cry for help follows.
Eri manages to open one eye as she and Sayumi exchange a look of concern. Sayumi peers back. She gasps with a smile.
“ Kusumi! “
“ K-Kusumiii…? “ Eri echoed as a whimper.
Sayumi carefully positions herself back to the ground as Eri turns around.
Kusumi!
Eri was relieved to see another familiar face. Both girls watched as Kusumi leaped towards them, making her lose balance. Sayumi promptly catches her, breaking her fall.
“ Help! “ Kusumi stammered as she shakes Sayumi by the shoulder. “ Help me, please! “
Eri looked on. She hadn’t noticed before, but Kusumi seemed outright dishelved; her hair in a mess, her eyes pink and her right hand clutching her stomach.
“ What’s wrong? “ Sayumi and Eri seemed to ask at the same time.
Sayumi flinched as Kusumi violently shakes her head. “ I don’t believe it.. She… She’ll kill us.. All of us! “
Kill… Us?
“ Who? Us…? “ Sayumi muffled. The remark hadn’t sunken in yet.
Kusumi frantically glances behind her, her grip clutching her stomach seemed to harden. Eri peers behind Kusumi. Nothing. No one.
Was someone following her?
“ Who? “ Eri asks trying to sound calm.
“ With the three of us, “ Kusumi continued. “ We can stop Hitomi! I just know it! “
 

[JFC]

YOSSI!!!

[meowchi]

Kamei Eri
Flight 707
October 8, 12:48 PM
 
Kusumi courageously leads the way. Sayumi and Eri reluctantly followed.
Not too long ago, they passed an unconscious Ai and Reina, still strapped into their seats. It was an eerie moment, slowly walking past their sedated friends across the obscure cabin. Everything seemed so lifeless. Motionless.
Be brave, Eri told herself. Be brave.
Sayumi briefly glances at Eri, making eye contact.
She looks… terrified.
Eri gives a deliberate nod with a petite smile, hoping to showcase some sort of bravery. Sayumi slowly returns the favor as they both clasp hands yet again.
As they enter the next cabin, Kusumi briefly glances back, probably making sure they were still following. Eri gives another nod, hoping to acknowledge Kusumi as they all enter. Kusumi doesn’t seem to notice.
“ Hey… This place is too.. dark now. “ Eri said cautiously. “ We should go back. “
Kusumi immediately shushed Eri.
“ She’s around here somewhere… We have to be quiet…“ Kusumi softly acknowledged. “ I was able to sneak away… just before she… “
Kusumi winced.
“ Just before she what? “ Sayumi said uneasily.
“ Before she… tried to cut me… “
The girls, now at a snail’s pace, step across the dim cabin. None of the lights were on. The windows were shut tight.
Eri didn’t know what to think. Hitomi wanting to kill everyone? Why?
It doesn’t make sense.
She could feel scattered debris beneath her steps. Then all of a sudden, something wet. A puddle.
“ Ah! “ Without delay, Eri tensed up. Her gait stopped in mid-air, giving her a flamingo-like pose.
Everybody seemed to flinch at once.
“ What!? What?! “ Sayumi and Kusumi stuttered.
“ I.. I stepped in something!!! “ Eri hysterically giggled. “ Ahaha~!! “
“ W-Why are you laughing?! “ Kusumi squealed out.
“ Wait, I know that laugh!! “ Sayumi cried out anxiously. “ She only does that laugh when she’s really freaked out!! “
“ That can’t be good!! “ Kusumi added.
“ Waah~!! “ All girls seemed to shriek out in unison.
Eri tries to step out of the puddle, towards Kusumi. But to no avail.
“ I-I can’t move! I froze up! “ Eri said.
I’m scared stiff!
Kusumi hastily searches for Eri’s free hand in the dark and grabs it. “ This way! “
Eri was about to hop towards Kusumi, that is, until she had a shocking revelation.
“ But you’re in front of me, and Sayumi’s behind me, and I’m holding both of your hands! That’s impossible! “
My arms aren’t that long!
“ Sayumi, you have to let go so Eri can hop over! “
“ But if I let go, I’ll be lost for sure! I can’t see anything! “ Sayumi replied.
Kusumi paused. “ Ok! Than I’ll hop over towards you, Sayumi! “
“ Wa-wait! “ Eri squealed with her eyes closed.
Too late. Kusumi leaps over, but doesn’t quite make it all the way. The unknown substance splashes on all 3 girls, as Kusumi abruptly hops in the middle of it.
“ Omigosh! “ Kusumi squeaks. She quickly hops again, out of the puddle, yanking Eri out along with her. Sayumi breaks their fall. The damage had been done.
“ Omigosh! “ Kusumi reiterates, in the same tone.
“ Why did you do that! “ Sayumi asks irritatingly. “ You got us all wet with whatever that icky stuff is! “
Eri could feel the fluid ooze into her shoes. It was an unpleasant feeling.
“ I thought maybe I came over to this side so we could just walk around it… “ Kusumi simply said. A tone of regret overcame her voice. “ I didn’t mean to… “
“ That’s~ “ Sayumi moaned.
“ It’s ok… “ Eri interrupted. “ She was just trying to help. It’s dark anyway, it’s hard to see anyth- “
Suddenly, a violent clang echoed across the cabin. The girls freeze in a huddle.
“ Did you hear that? “ Eri whispered. She listens attentively.
“ Can I say no? “ Sayumi replied.
“ No. “
Once more, the violent clang screams across the dark cabin. Followed by a dragging noise which slowly saturates the air.
“ It’s her! “ Kusumi cries out. “ She’s in here!!! “

[iacus]

First comment. Yay for Kameshige! Yay for badass Miki! Yay for homicidal Yossie! Yay for updates! Yay for Meowchi! Yay for everyone!

[Sukoshi]

Love the updates!  so Yossie is trying to  wah...but I thought she only went mad cause she thought Eri killed Risa. :ONdunno: But then again where was Risa when they went back to where Ai chan and Reina were and what happened to Miki  :ONfrustrated:  *awaits more*

[chao_88]

yay new chapter,,,!! man, i've been waiting for this updates,,,

[meowchi]

Eri Kamei
Flight 707
October 8, 1:00 PM

“ Q-Quick! “ Eri stuttered. She jerks Sayumi’s sleeve. “ Turn on the lights! “
“ Uh-huh~, like I know where everything is! “ Sayumi replied.
The girls desperately squint around them, hoping to catch a glimpse of a light switch.
“ Hitomi, is that you? “ Sayumi cries out.
No response.
Kusumi starts to clap. “ Did it work? …Oh no! “ She claps again. And again.
“ What are you doing!? “ Eri cries out, confused. She mimics Kusumi’s claps, not knowing why she is actually clapping. Sayumi, wanting to help out, begins to clap as well.
After a brief moment of pure clapping, a baffled Eri speaks up.
“ Why are we clapping?! “
“ To turn on the lights! I saw it on TV once! “
“ That doesn’t work on planes!! “
Suddenly, something solid crashes by them. Their clapping ceases as a metallic clang trembles across the room.
“ Ha? “ Kusumi says, bubbly as she stands closer to Eri. “ She’s throwing stuff! “
“ Hitomi! Is that you?! “ Sayumi nervously asks yet again.
Eri waits for a reply. She listens attentively.
“ Eh? “
What is that… gurgling sound?
Before she can ask however, a metal rod slams against her chest.
Eri shrieks out in pain as she falls over. Her eyes seal shut. The pure blunt force of the impact throbs alongside her torso. She feels her limbs tense up, paralyzing her from shielding herself.  
“ Haa!!! “ Kusumi screams as she lunges towards the new darkened figure beside them. The metal rod drops, crashing against the cabin floor.
“ Eri!!! “ Sayumi screams, struggling to talk over the fight ensuing in the background. She kneels, frantically rolls Eri onto her back and clutches her shoulders. “ Eri! Eri!!! “
Sayumi’s voice bounced within her skull. Her vision reduces to a darkened blur as her eyes roll towards the back of her head. Her hearing, barely audible now, as a violent ringing sensation fills her ears. Eri begins to pass out. That is, until she feels a warm, familiar hand, clasp against her own.
S-Sayumi!!, Eri thought as the hand tightens.
She couldn’t hear, but she knew Sayumi was right there, next to her, hanging on dearly.
Sayumi…
Eri begins to fight the agony.
Can’t breathe…! Eri prods herself, hastily ignoring the pain. Don’t give up!!!
Her mouth screams for air, but nothing comes out. She clutches her chest with her free hand, ignoring the immediate sensitive tenderness.
She struggles desperately to open her eyes, only successfully opening her right. Eri’s mouth still gaped open, hoping for air.
Sayumi’s grip tightens.
Somehow the pressure from Sayumi, sways Eri in control. She begins to take in air, little by little. Her eyes, although wet from tears at this point, starts to regain itself. Her hearing also starts to recover, making the ringing sensation fade away.
Eri suddenly hears Sayumi’s faint whimper. She was crying. Tears trickled down Sayumi’s cheeks, landing gracefully on Eri. Her eyes were closed.
Sayumi….
A hazy figure becomes visible, appearing directly behind her distraught friend. Eri struggles to talk, hoping to warn her of the incoming danger.
“ S…Syuh…!! “ Nothing comes out.
Promptly, a knife comes into view as it is slowly being lifted above Sayumi’s head. The assailant, prepares to strike again.
Sayumi!!!
Eri scrutinizes in anguish as her friend, still in sorrow, oblivious of the incoming weapon, poised ready to strike.

[lil_hamz]

SAYUMI!!!!!!!! Oh god NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo :panda_omg2:
Is she gonna die? Or will Eri save her? But if the attacker (Yossi?) could make her way to Sayu that means Koha is dead? :ON@_@: Poor kid and she was so brave too :ONcry:

Oh and I just gotta ask... where's Risa? Besides how could the 3 of them leave Ai and Reina just strapped in their seats? Unless.... unless they are dead already :ONfainted:

[Sukoshi]

KYAaa~! Sayu!  How's Eri going to save Sayu in that state?!  They need a miracle!  *hopes Koharu is still around to save them*  either that or Miki (though now that I think about it...didn't the attacker originally have a gun?  Does this mean there's more than one dangerous person aboard?)  *gasps*  :panda_omg2:

[meowchi]

Eri Kamei
Flight 707
October 8, 1:06 PM
 
She’s going to die! Eri thought in distress. Do something!
In hopes to provoke Sayumi, she firmly grasps harder, advocating more pressure in their grip.
No response. The pointed knife still lingered above.
“ Syu..! S-Sayumi!!! “ Eri manages to scream in a forceful whisper. Immediately, Sayumi opens her sobbing eyes.
But it was too late.
Eri gawks helplessly. The knife begins to thrust downward.
N-NO!
All of a sudden, the plane fiercely rocks horizontally, tossing Eri and Sayumi against the walls. Eri bangs her skull. A deafening smash booms outside the walls, followed by a sound of something large crashing into water. The roaring of the engines ensued, more evident this time.
We hit something!!! Eri couldn’t believe it. But we’re still in the air…
Sayumi moaned. In the background, she hears a whimper.
Kusumi!
From the sound of it, it seems they both landed not too far from Eri.
I have to… get us buckled in..! But... Hitomi!! Where is she?
At this point, dealing with the assailant seemed pointless. She didn't even know if it was Hitomi to begin with. But what Eri does know is that it won't be long before they crash into something indefinitely. She could practically feel the whole plane descending.
Have to… get up.
Her head ached so much, it made her legs ache. She couldn’t move. The limbs on her upper torso were barely usable, and on top of that, she had little feeling in her legs.
I can't ... even move them...
She was trapped in her own paralyzed body.
“ Nngh...! “ Eri gasps, hoping to call out Sayumi’s name, but to no avail. Her chest was still impaired.
“ Eri! …Kusumi!! “ Sayumi yells out, screaming over the roar of the engine. “ Where?! Where are you?! “
Eri pokes her throat, hoping to prod herself into speaking. She was able to muffle grunts, but they were barely audible, due to the engines.
Stupid plane..! Eri squirms. We’re going to die on this stupid pl-
“ Is it on?! “ A loud familiar voice interrupts her line of thought.
Eri paused. “ …! “
Miki! …It was Miki!
She glances around hastily. She couldn’t see anything.
So... It wasn't Hitomi... it was Miki all along! Why is she doing this to us?!
“ Dammit, I don’t know! “ Miki says frantically. “ Push… * zhhhh * -ose buttons… * zhhhh * -er ther…! “
Miki’s voice seemed scrambled.
“ Ah! “ Eri realizes Miki’s voice derived from the intercom. A static sound blares from the speakers. She could still hear Miki’s voice, but it was barely audible over the static.
The lights in the cabin suddenly flicker on. Eri squints, the light seemed like a blinding force, her eyes were still used to the dark. She tries to glimpse at the room, but from her angle, she couldn’t see anything but the bottom of the seats.
“ * zhhhh * -peat, this is… * zhhhh * -ujimoto!! “ Miki’s voice seemed to regain itself. “ * zhhh* -ay seated and brace for impact!!! I repeat, this is Miki Fujimoto!!! Stay seated and brace for impact!!!! I repeat, thi- “
“ Miki!!! “ Another voice muffled from the speaker. Eri at once recognized the second voice.
Hitomi!
“ That’s enough! “ Hitomi screamed. “ We have to get buckled in, now! “ Her voice faded off as her rushing footsteps echo into the speakers.
“ Shit! “ Miki continued. Her fingers rattle into the microphone. “ Listen everybody, we will live through this! I expect to see each and every one of you when this thing ends!! “
She listens as Miki’s voice fades away.
Wait... if Hitomi is with Miki... Eri prods. Then... who..?
The static returns. She notices voices in the background, but the ringing sensation in her ears returned, blurring her hearing. Eri hadn’t noticed before, but she was slowly falling unconscious. Her eyes start to roll back towards the back of her head once again.
This is it… Eri peacefully thought. I love you… Everybody.
She begins to close her eyes, until suddenly; a pair of hands abruptly clutches her underarms. Eri dizzily looks up. It was Sayumi.
“ Kusumi!! “ Sayumi screams out. “ Kusumi, she’s over here!! “
“ Thank god!!! “
A few seats back, Eri hears Kusumi rush towards them. On each step Kusumi took, a whimper follows. “ Ow! …Ow! …Ow! Ow! “
With teamwork, they quickly heave Eri onto her feet. Eri’s legs immediately limp downward. She couldn’t stand. Or even talk. Sayumi says something, but it was barely audible to Eri. Kusumi quickly scuttles to pick up Eri’s legs. They haul her over to the nearest middle seat.
Oh…
By now, Eri’s body is numb, with literally no ounce of energy left. Her hearing; gone, making her temporarily deaf. She struggles to keep her eyes open.
Kusumi quickly fastens Eri’s seatbelt, securing her in. Eri rests her head against the seat as she gazes at Kusumi and Sayumi, whom are trying to talk to her, unaware of her hearing situation. Eri was however, able to make out what they were saying, by the movements of their mouths.
“ We’ll make it, Eri… We’ll make it, Eri. “
After giving small smiles, and gestures of encouragement, both girls quickly take their seats by Eri. The seats rattle as they rush to buckle in. Though Eri was unable to feel it, they all begin to clutch hands. Eri’s limp hands in each of their grip.
We’ll make it.
Eri shuts her eyes, unable to hold them open any longer. At that moment, under her numb body, she could faintly feel the seats violently jerk forward. She cringed as her blood recoiled to the front of her body. It felt like she was in the middle of an earthquake. A silent, black earthquake.
We’re crashing… Eri thought as she finally falls unconscious. We’re crashing...

[jenmoshka]

meowchi, you're absolutely awesome!!There's something about your descriptive writing that made me clutch my chest when reading about Eri's pain...  It's so realistic and the suspense is absolutely killing me!! This is one thread that I'm going to sit on until the end, I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for each new post from you!! Loving it

[Blizzard]

Risa is the killer!  And Kusumi was in the dark and delusional when she thought Risa was Hitomi!  After the plane crashes and we get closer to the events from the very first chapter, somewhere in there, Eri saves herself by beheading Risa (probably accidentally, considering she's most likely concussed).  Thus Hitomi (not knowing Risa is the real killer), finds Risa dead by the hands of Eri and thinks Eri is the killer.  Then she goes all "I'll cut you before you cut me" on Eri!  :ONshifty:

(I should probably reread it before I guess, but oh well.)

My head hurts from all that thinking.  :ON@_@:

-edit- As for why Risa went homicidal, the tofu diet was slowly warping her mind and then Ai stole her chocolate dammit!

[ferrar1]

Nice 4 updates at 1 go

Everyone except Risa seems to have an alibi.. strange.. but Risa will be dead.. :panda_argh:
As Jenmoshka have said earlier on, this is a good piece of descriptive writing Keep writing !

[JFC]

Damn, this is getting confusing. o_o

Know what though? I still love it! :yay:

[lil_hamz]

Risa is the killer!  And Kusumi was in the dark and delusional when she thought Risa was Hitomi!  After the plane crashes and we get closer to the events from the very first chapter, somewhere in there, Eri saves herself by beheading Risa (probably accidentally, considering she's most likely concussed).  Thus Hitomi (not knowing Risa is the real killer), finds Risa dead by the hands of Eri and thinks Eri is the killer.  Then she goes all "I'll cut you before you cut me" on Eri!  :ONshifty:

(I should probably reread it before I guess, but oh well.)

My head hurts from all that thinking.  :ON@_@:

-edit- As for why Risa went homicidal, the tofu diet was slowly warping her mind and then Ai stole her chocolate dammit!

Errrr wait.... there is like almost a 10 cm difference between Yossi and Risa so that's no way Eri could mistake them for each other. Unless she's really short sighted and lost her glasses So the only other explaination is.... drum roll please.... Koharu's LYING. Duh duh duh. As for why she's lying I have no clue

Ditto on the descriptive writing. Man if I was half as good I probably won't have to be stuck in English class :ONfrustrated: