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« Reply #160 on: February 13, 2007, 06:20:39 AM »
He should have killed Koha on the spot.. XD

Anyway i think 1 of the girls from MM is 1 of his accomplice, the stewardress :doh:

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« Reply #161 on: February 13, 2007, 05:31:11 PM »
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Why do I get the feeling Sayu's going to miss and accidentally hit Yossi instead?


Either that or get shot.

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« Reply #162 on: February 13, 2007, 06:18:42 PM »
Damn!

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« Reply #163 on: February 13, 2007, 06:28:22 PM »
Wait a minute. Didn't you say that Risa dressed up in the stewardess outfit because there was blood everywhere? And didn't Ai see someone running away dressed as a stewardess? And she yelled but the person sisn't turn around...

You know, it just seems a little too fishy for me. Where exactly did Risa go????

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« Reply #164 on: February 13, 2007, 06:36:10 PM »
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Wait a minute. Didn't you say that Risa dressed up in the stewardess outfit because there was blood everywhere?

She did, too much blood from defending herself from 'that' person...

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And didn't Ai see someone running away dressed as a stewardess? And she yelled but the person sisn't turn around...

The 'person' ( won't say if it's risa on not) running from the  plane, actually was already too far off to hear Ai- plus Ai was enclosed in the plane, not to mention the sound of the waves crashing down on the shoreline didn't help her grab that persons attention.

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You know, it just seems a little too fishy for me. Where exactly did Risa go????

That'd be giving away the future wouldn't it? :o
You guys are reading from the perspective of the girls (Eri, Ai an' Miki), so what they know/see/hear, you know/see/hear! Sorry! :heart:

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« Reply #165 on: February 13, 2007, 09:37:49 PM »
Been a while since I last commented (sorry about that). :pen_sorry:  A lot has come to light since then too.  

I kind of figured that was how the weapons were brought onboard, once Miki mentioned the killer stewardess.  Is there a true mastermind behind this plan (aside from the cargo manager)?  It doesn't really seem likely, to me anyway.  But, you'd think he'd notice that one girl was missing.  And since he didn't, it's a little suspicious.  Either way, the plan must have been a poor one.  I mean, the plane "accidentally" crashed, and the two accomplices are both dead.  The words "harebrained scheme" come to mind.  

Aside from all that, I'm really hooked on this!  This last chapter really turned up the suspense a notch too.  Will Sayumi hit the guy, or will she hit Yossui?  I bet she closes her eyes when she swings too!  :pen_nod:

I really can't wait for the next chapter!  Keep up the great work!

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« Reply #166 on: February 13, 2007, 11:12:11 PM »
XD I guess lurking is not my kind of thing...
DAMN! You had me on high levels of suspense when the man came to Eri and all that commotion happened *plus, Miki cursed... it was too cool*.

I love how you portray the girls in this as well, especially the older girls who feel the need to be more calm and collected *Yossui <3*.

But damn, cant deny the feel the to love someone as hardcore as Miki XD she just reminds me of any action movie of the hero getting hurt and trying to act hard. I love those kinds of heroes :)

Risa... damn, I hope shes not ebil. It's the bunny I tell you, the bunny! in a parallel universe, it really is the Gremlin keekee

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« Reply #167 on: February 15, 2007, 06:18:04 PM »
Hello. I'm just new to the forum. My friend said that I can read a lot of funfic at this site. Well, his right. Tons of title gave me a headache. I don't know where to start. So I browse for a while, looking for an interesting title. Having Eri's name included in the title really dig. Eri is one of my weaknesses. I've read it for a few days and it's really, really great. I'm impress with your work. That's why I'm happy because I'm not dissapointed to the first fic I've read here ( although I've already read some from the other site :-P ) PLease keep it up. I will root this title till the very end. XD

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« Reply #168 on: February 16, 2007, 01:10:13 AM »
I like how the evil villian so easily started to spill the beans to the girls.  It was so movie like =D  now if this were a movie, a hero should come to save them all any minute now!  (yes reading your story really does remind me a good action movie and I'm loving it! )

oh yeah good thing the gun man isn't so bright and didn't notice the blood stains on the girls' clothing but then again he's already so drunk XD

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« Reply #169 on: February 16, 2007, 05:13:15 AM »
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I like how the evil villian so easily started to spill the beans to the girls.  It was so movie like =D  now if this were a movie, a hero should come to save them all any minute now!  (yes reading your story really does remind me a good action movie and I'm loving it! )

oh yeah good thing the gun man isn't so bright and didn't notice the blood stains on the girls' clothing but then again he's already so drunk XD


I never understood why villians do that. Don't they ever learn that nothing comes out of gloating and not killing their victims? Cuz they always, always manage to get away XD

Yeah the hero should be Risa *crosses fingers* but in this case it looks like Sayu's the one. If she doesn't hit someone else by mistake :MKevil:

I had to force myself to stop thinking about Risa in that stewardess uniform before I could think about what's gonna happen next :p My guess is, Sayumi's not gonna be successful in her attempt to wack the bad guy cuz
a) Koharu cracks (yes even more than she has already) and everyone is distracted
b) The remaining evil stewardess appears
c) Risa:heart: bursts in

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« Reply #170 on: February 16, 2007, 10:33:47 AM »
"You've killed Risa... and now I have to kill you."

I just lost interest ;_;

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« Reply #171 on: February 20, 2007, 06:45:09 PM »
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Risa Niigaki

  Mountainside
  October 8, 7:45 PM
 
  Twilight had mended across the mountains, painting the jagged horizon in shades of purple dusk. The winding blacktop eased through the gathering darkness, surrounded by shadowed hills that soared into the cloudless sky, extending towards the first faint glimmerings of starlight.
 
  Risa might have appreciated the majestic view a bit more if she wasn’t so goddamn scared.
 
  Scared for the others-
  -Scared for my life.
 
  Her warm, soft bare feet throbbed against the hardened ground as she runs on top of it. Sweat glistened down her forehead, stinging her eyes.
  She’d stumbled on this, what looks like to be a man-made road not too long ago, giving her a faint glow of hope- and desperation.
 
  This road- there has to be some kind of civilization near here, she thought, remembering the desolate roads she’d seen in Fukui. That picture was indeed a major contrast of what she sees now; memories of walking down the nearby lake by Ai’s house, thousands of Sakura leaves falling all around her. It made her smile, a faint smile, but still a smile nonetheless. Her thought of course, was short-lived, as the moment at hand takes over her. Snap out of it Risa- get some help, go back, save everyone.
 
  The plan seemed simple enough, sure, but Risa was worried.
 
  I'm so exhausted.
 
  Thoughts raced across her mind, no matter how hard she tried not to think about it. She’d find help, at least she hoped, but she’d have to trace her way back to the crash-site, find each and every one of her friends- assuming they’re still alive, locate any of the hijackers- god forbid if there are more of them, and get the hell off this-
 
  -“ Stinkin’ island… “ Risa says under her heavy breaths.
 
  As it was, she had a hard time just running, let alone the latter. Eating the last few packets of peanuts gave her a few ounces of energy, but basically, she was screwed.
 
  Way to go Gaki. First time to be heroic and you’ll be fainting in the middle of no-where-land. Good call.
 
  Risa glances at her sports watch; She cringes as the strength to bring her arm up was unbearable. The digital numbers glowed prominently in the dark. She started searching at six, and it was already just before eight.
 
  “ Stinkin’, stinkin’, dumb island… “
 
  Risa pumps her legs a bit harder, ignoring the small jagged pebbles that stabbed at her feet. The thought of her friends being in danger hurt the most.
 
  You can do this, Gaki! Just like Monday mornings, cycling to school!
 
  Making a sharp right, Risa spots a tower, standing dominant, glimmering in the distance. As she focuses her view, she notices smaller buildings, placed all around it. A smile of awe overcomes her-
 
  -finally!
 
  Focusing on the light, she whips alongside the dark road, her heart pounding and stomach in knots, Risa doesn’t seem to notice the bloody and battered sign, hidden deep within the trees.
 
  ROCKFORT ISLAND PRISON
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« Reply #172 on: February 20, 2007, 11:15:58 PM »
Eri Kamei
  Flight 707 Wreckage, Unknown
  October 8, 7:45 PM
 
  “ Sayumi! Hit him now! “
  Eri was scared, but still managed to say the words.
 
  Sayumi stutters something, and starts to move, but hesitates. Her eyes widen with awe, as the deep grunts of the man, screech in the background.
 
  “ Sayumi!? “
 
  Her eyes blink, staring on and focuses on Eri. “ Eri, I-I ca- “
 
  Sayumi stops, interrupted, as the man violently throws himself backwards, falling just a few feet in front of Kusumi- slamming Hitomi into the ground. Debris and broken boxes scathed in all directions. The pure blunt force of the impact forces Hitomi to let go. He was free.
  No- No, no, no!!
 
  Hitomi moans. Her teeth clenched as her eyes wrinkle shut. Having the wind knocked out of her, she closes her fists, hoping to ease the burning sensation in her lungs.
 
  Eri couldn’t believe it. The moment, the opportunity, the minute, the passing second; they’d been waiting for it- anxiously desiring it with dreaded anticipation-
  -Only to have it pass us by, like a falling leaf.
 
  The man quickly regains himself, clutching his throat as he comes to a kneel, just a few feet in front of Kusumi. He quickly grabs the rifle, hoisted at his side and abruptly brings it to an aim, pointing it towards Eri’s group.
 
  “ Don’t even fucking think about it! “
 
  She freezes at the sight of the metallic barrel. Eri stares, waiting for the man’s next sentence- when she suddenly catches glimpse of a figure to her upper right.
  Eri hadn’t noticed before, but some of the girls, seeing the passing opportunity, had already mounted into action.
 
  …Reina-
  - stood still, just in front of Sayumi; her posture frozen in mid-run. Her face, tensed up, careful not to make any sudden movements. To Eri’s left-
  -Ai…
  - also frozen, stood alongside a slumped Kusumi, probably stopped in the middle of helping her… Eri thought. That’s everyone… but-
  “ Miki. “ Eri hums under her breath. She turns her head just enough to catch glimpse of her, and, there she stood, sweating profusely. With her eyes shut tight, her hand shivering against her arm, the back of her head leaned against the wall, her mouth gaped open for air.
 
  She’s struggling to stay awake… Eri thought, remembering her own dire situation earlier.
 
  “ On the goddamn floor- next to her, NOW! “ He alternates the pointed weapon between Ai and Reina, the sound of his voice alone made them jump. With no hesitation, they quickly obey, scuffling to sit next to a distraught Hitomi. In the background, Eri hears Miki begin to move, but the man points at her, making her stop.
 
  “ Don’t fucking move. “
 
  By now the man has fully recovered himself, and makes it clear by standing up with ease. As he angrily looms over them, his back, unexpectedly turns towards Eri.
 
  A chance! Eri thought. I- I have to do something!
  She squeezes Sayumi’s moist hand.
  “ Eh…? “ Sayumi mouths.
  Without saying a word, Eri starts to prod Sayumi, nodding her head at the pole; silently gesturing to give it to her quietly.
  “ On your goddamn bellies! “ He demands, shouting at Ai and Reina, practically screaming at the top of his lungs. Interrupted, Sayumi and Eri look on. The exaggerated scream alone was enough to make Eri forget about her newly-formed opportunity. There was something different about his voice. Something wicked. Something-
 
  -insane.
 
  Eri bites her lip, understanding what is about to happen.
 
  Oh- god, no…
 
  Hitomi coughs violently, still deranged on her back. Through her rasp breathings, Eri could practically feel Hitomi’s lungs withered from the shock, gasping for oxygen. She moans, a softer moan this time, but-
 
  As if on cue by the mere sound of Hitomi’s voice, the man violently stomps his booted heel into Hitomi’s left shoulder, and holds it in place. The debris beneath her, cracks and pops, unable to maintain its’ already broken form under the increased pressure.
 
  She screams. Not by shock, or pain- but by anguish, and misery. Her right hand tries to push his rough boot away, but gives up. Her deafening cries made the hair on back of Eri’s neck stand.
 
  “ That’s right… “ The man says with demonic pleasure. He presses the tip of the rifle against Hitomi’s forehead, firmly holding it in place. “ Scream… SCREAM!! “
 
  He buries his heel against her shoulder even more. Tears of angst riddle down the side of Hitomi’s face. A crack bewilders into Eri’s ears, only, the crack didn’t derive from the debris-
 
  -It came from her. Her shoulder.
 
  “ Fuck the money. Having my way with you all is enough satisfaction I can handle. “
 
  Drool runs down his mouth as he stands over Hitomi. She was his slave, mounted in place by a world of pain.
  Have to do something before-
  Without thinking, Eri opens her mouth to scream in opposition when suddenly-
 
  Sayumi shrieks, thrusting the pole and her body towards the man, yanking Eri along with her.
 
  Time seemed to stop. Everything jumbled into slow motion. Eri gazes at the pole, held firmly in Sayumi’s hand, slam down against the back of the man’s head.
  Eri gawks, staring intently. A silent pause ensues. A pause Eri wished wouldn’t have happened.
  He doesn’t budge.
 
  “ Ah…ah…. “ Sayumi utters uncontrollably, dropping the pole. It implodes a deafening smash as it plummets to the ground, more so however, in Eri's mind; the plummeting pole alone was a symbol of their failure.
  Her failure.
  Eri feels her knees become weak. “ It… It didn’t even… “
  Before she could finish her sentence, the man slowly turns, and faces them. His feet start to pace towards Sayumi. Without saying a word, he smiles.
 
  “ Tickles. “
 
  Eri ogles in horror as he brings the rifle to an aim, straight at Sayumi’s quivering face.
  No, this dream- can’t be happening do something!!
 
  As the inner voice inside Eri clutters her mind with frantic words, Eri kicks the man across the shin. A sharp pain shoots up her big toe, making her cringe, shutting her eyes. It felt like she kicked a block of metal.
 
  That had to have stopped him- if it hurt me, it really, really hurt him!
 
  Eri opens her eyes, expecting to see some sort of painful response.
  She freezes. Her eyes entangled with his.
  The man hadn’t budged.
 
  I-I kicked him as hard as I could!
 
  “ Tickles. “ He repeats himself.
 
  Kusumi starts to sob.
  Eri braces herself, expecting some kind of physical hit- but it was too late. The man swiftly slaps Eri across the face, the imprint of his hand cluttering up the blood flow in her cheek, causing an intense prickly pain. She falls to her knees, slumping over; her hands still tied within’ the human chain, giving her a ‘crucified’ posture.
 
  “ No- No, stop it! Stop it!! “ Sayumi frantically screams out, bracing her arms around Eri’s body.
  The man snorts. A mischievous laugh follows as he kicks Sayumi on her side, thrusting her away from Eri. He hoists the rifle back onto his side, as if it were a symbol of victory, power.
  “ Sayu-mi… “ Eri says grimly. She feels something warm on top of her head. Something refined. Eri shuts her eyes as she realizes it’s-
 
  -his hand, oh god it’s his hand.
 
  The man grips a handful of Eri’s hair; each additional strand offered some sort of satisfaction to him. His breathing increased to exaggerated rasping, almost as if watching pain gave him a sense of joy.
  He pulls.
  At first, a faint prickly sensation fills her ears.
  Then, he pulls harder, with enough force to begin lifting Eri up from the ground.
  The faint sensation grows into an intense spiky pain. She clenches her teeth as the agony overcomes her- her ears, her head, even her arms; her body begging for Eri to stop the pain, but she couldn’t.
  She wanted to scream, to remind herself that she was still alive, but restrains herself-
 
  -I won’t let this b-bastard have it his way- his sick pleasure…
 
  “ Drop her! “ Reina screams at the top of her lungs, interrupting Eri’s grim thought. Almost immediately, the man lets go. Eri looks up, her eyes, sore from the pressure, but the pain was worth it. A relieved gasp escapes her as she spots-
  -Reina! With- With a gun! I… I don’t believe it!
 
  Reina stood, just a few feet away, aiming a small handgun at the man. He slowly turns. The man just stares. He begins to walk towards her, slowly, but steadily.
  “ Stay where you are! “ Reina reiterates, using the same drastic tone.
  No response. The man ignores her.
  Seeing her chance, Sayumi quickly crawls to Eri and grasps her. Eri returns the favor, but still keeps an intent gaze on the situation.
 
  “ Pull the trigger. “ He smiles.
 
  With no hesitation, Reina pulls the trigger-
  -only to have a small flag pop out, with huge cartoony letterings that read, “ BANG! “
 
  “ Oh no… “ Eri murmurs. Sayumi turns her head away, not wanting to look.
 
  Reina backs up, still pulling the trigger; the realization hasn’t sunk in for her yet.
  Her hand begins to tremble, making the toy gun rattle erratically.
 
  “ You think I’d be stupid enough to give you a real gun? “ The man scoffs as Reina backs into a nearby pole, stopping her in place. She throws the toy gun at him, but misses entirely.
  “ Auh! “ Reina whimpers as he reaches her.
  The man abruptly lifts Reina by her shirt, pushing her against the pole. Sounds of rips and tears arise from Reina’s purple blousse- barely able to support her weight.
 
  “ Fake gun, love. Too bad. “
 
  He sticks out his slimy tongue, encased in shiny saliva, and leans in towards Reina’s face.
  Oh god I can’t watch!
  Eri begins to glimpse away as a loud mechanical click from above, startles her. Expecting the worst of surprises, she starts to look upward, when-
 
  “ Yep. “ Miki suddenly says, a little out of breath. “ Too bad for you- THIS gun is real. “
 
  The man freezes. His breathing comes to a complete stop- realizing his dreaded mistake.
  “ Gotcha. “ Reina winks as she portrays a small peace sign with her petite fingers.
  While the man drops Reina to turn around, Miki waits and pulls the trigger- just enough time to see the mans’ disguised shock; the last emotion he’ll ever portray as the bullet rips through his head.
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« Reply #173 on: February 20, 2007, 11:42:56 PM »
2 updates today! :heart: yay! :heart:

Wow...that was just...wow. Really intense, really well writen as always, loved it!

Crazy bastard...and ummm...ROCKFORT ISLAND PRISON?!?  What the hell?! ahhhh! So many questions left unanswered! As always, I await your next chapter! :D
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« Reply #174 on: February 20, 2007, 11:59:36 PM »
Holy . . . This fic is REALLY intense! I was cringing at all of the Musume abuse. D:

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« Reply #175 on: February 21, 2007, 12:13:57 AM »
SPOILERS!
Dun dun dun~! So, with the latest additions-

*Risa stumbles upon some sort of populace from the distance! Are they friendly? Or hostile? Will she be able to find help?
*The sign! Poor Risa was too distracted to see it! What exactly is ROCKFORT ISLAND PRISON? Is it just a prison...? Or, because of the blood on the sign... something more?
*The battle-exhausted Musume's! Are there more hijackers on the plane the man didn't say anything about? What about Ayumi? Just who exactly is she?



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Aside from all that, I'm really hooked on this!  This last chapter really turned up the suspense a notch too.  Will Sayumi hit the guy, or will she hit Yossui?  I bet she closes her eyes when she swings too!  :pen_nod:


You know, when I originally wrote it a while back, I did in fact have Sayumi whacking Hitomi on the head XD

But then I thought, nah, that's too obvious!

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But damn, cant deny the feel the to love someone as hardcore as Miki XD she just reminds me of any action movie of the hero getting hurt and trying to act hard. I love those kinds of heroes :)

Risa... damn, I hope shes not ebil. It's the bunny I tell you, the bunny! in a parallel universe, it really is the Gremlin keekee


Miki is hardcore. To prevent speculations of the story though, I can't say any more about her! But yes, she is hardcore! XD

By the way, LMAO @ your parallel universe comment!


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Hello. I'm just new to the forum. My friend said that I can read a lot of funfic at this site. Well, his right. Tons of title gave me a headache. I don't know where to start. So I browse for a while, looking for an interesting title. Having Eri's name included in the title really dig. Eri is one of my weaknesses. I've read it for a few days and it's really, really great. I'm impress with your work. That's why I'm happy because I'm not dissapointed to the first fic I've read here ( although I've already read some from the other site :-P ) PLease keep it up. I will root this title till the very end. XD

Hi Sancho! Yeah, there's a ton of great writers at jphip, isn't there? I'm just glad to be part of this awesome fan-ficcing community! I'm also glad you're happy with my story- being it your first fic here and all! This is actually the 1st fic I've ever written, so it's a great feeling to receive praise from hipstah's such as yourself!

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(yes reading your story really does remind me a good action movie and I'm loving it! )

oh yeah good thing the gun man isn't so bright and didn't notice the blood stains on the girls' clothing but then again he's already so drunk XD

There's a lot more action/suspense coming too! This is just the landing! XD Thanks for your praise!

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I had to force myself to stop thinking about Risa in that stewardess uniform before I could think about what's gonna happen next :p My guess is, Sayumi's not gonna be successful in her attempt to wack the bad guy cuz
a) Koharu cracks (yes even more than she has already) and everyone is distracted
b) The remaining evil stewardess appears
c) Risa:heart: bursts in

Risa unfortunately is too far to do anything at this point, but remember this; Risa doesn't just die! She's a big part of the story! How, you might ask? Well... keep on' reading, woohoo!

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"You've killed Risa... and now I have to kill you."

I just lost interest ;_;

Aww- but Risa plays a big part still! Come on, join the EK vs. MM nation!

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I've never switched from being scared, angry and relieved in such a short period of time before.

At the end I just seriously went, "YES! IN YOUR FACE YOU SICKO!"

Damn, that was some chapter!

It was a close call, wasn't it? Poor Reina almost got licked! Bah! XD

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Wow...that was just...wow. Really intense, really well writen as always, loved it!

Crazy bastard...and ummm...ROCKFORT ISLAND PRISON?!?  What the hell?! ahhhh! So many questions left unanswered! As always, I await your next chapter! :D

Thanks for your praise jenmoshka! I'm honored to have you part of the EK vs. MM nation! Woohoo! Expect updates this/or next week!

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« Reply #176 on: February 21, 2007, 04:59:16 AM »
Wow wow wow clap clap clap

it looked like a scene taken out from a well written movie. The scenes were so real that it made me cringe whenever the girls got thrown, slapped kicked around :D except *coughKoharu's casecough*

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« Reply #177 on: February 21, 2007, 05:32:53 AM »
O____________O HOLY Sheit...... That last bit was all the action I needed. I DID NOT see that coming. I imagined all this bad and horrible stuff would happen... I'm on a Miki high now thanks to you xD.... jeebus, love that woman! It was just... ugh! <3

Risa...... Oh gosh, please no >.> she's trying hard dammit!

Lol well I like to have a parallel universe for every story. And my sick parallel universe thought that the guy was gonna rape them when he told htem to get on their bellies :bleed eyes:

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« Reply #178 on: February 21, 2007, 06:00:55 AM »
Oh my god!  That was so awesome!  I was glued to the screen as I was reading!  You must update soon (please?)!  This was kind of like watching a kick-ass fight scene in a movie, you get a rush from just watching (reading, as it were)!

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Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #179 on: February 21, 2007, 06:40:08 AM »
Oh FUCK YEAH Miki shoots that fuckin' bastage!!!

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my sick parallel universe thought that the guy was gonna rape them when he told htem to get on their bellies :bleed eyes:
That actually was his intention. He actually says it:
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