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« Reply #200 on: February 25, 2007, 08:06:21 PM »
I just started reading this fic yesterday and I can't stop! i really really like it. ^_^ you're a great writer, seriously :ONkneelbow:

As for the last chapter (which is so surreal! I love it)... I think the gray color is intentional because it's supposed to be some kind of premonition / dream?

Then again... dreams don't always happen, so I'm hoping that Miki won't really die >_< Just Risa dying is bad enough :ONcry:

Looking forward to the next chapters :D

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« Reply #201 on: February 26, 2007, 11:40:30 AM »
man,,,i've read the whole story you're such a great writer! :D

but the last chapter about miki, it really confused me,,,:ONdunno:  i mean, how did miki die???? she was fine back there. :ONgyaaah: well, i hope it just a dream,,, in fact, you write it in grey colour such premonition or something,,,,

looking forward for the next chaper!:ONhee:

still hope miki don't die,,,:ONsad:

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« Reply #202 on: February 28, 2007, 03:22:55 AM »
Ai Takahashi
  Flight 707 Wreckage
  October 8, 9:27 PM
 
  Inside the lit cabin, Ai sits cross-legged alongside Miki- whom is laid down on her back, unconscious.
  Maybe I did something wrong?
 
  She double-checks Miki’s shoulder, which is wrapped neatly, in torn, white cloth. A sling, using the same fabric, roused around Miki’s neck, bracing her arm firmly in place.
 
  “ …Brace the ball of the humerus into the joint, check. Sling is sturdy, check… “ Ai utters under her breath, as she remembers those long lectures during nursing classes she’d taken at Hinode  High School.
  She’d forgotten most of what she learned, but the basic ‘survival methods’, as her teacher used to call it, stayed.
 
  Everything is good to go but… Ai frowns as she scratches her head. But…why?
 
  Concerned, Ai carefully picks up the plastic cup sitting next to her, pauses, and takes a sip. The warm, plane-filtered water eases down her throat, leaving a musky after-taste.
 
  She’d been watching intently as Miki continues to groan Eri’s name for-
 
  -the past few minutes. That isn’t normal.
 
  Miki starts to breathe heavily, her groaning stays the same, but, small sweat beads begin to form on her forehead. Ai could practically feel Miki’s body heat increase.
 
  “ Miki? “ Ai says, a little alarmed now.
  She was at a standstill, of whether or not to wake her up; Miki had fainted after-all, a nasty one too- right after she pulled the trigger on that man. Luckily they were able to get Miki rested right away, with Ai quickly tending her dislocated shoulder as the others search the plane for weapons, utilities and most importantly, food.
 
  Glancing at her watch, it’s been about an hour since the others actually left the cabin, but, it seemed like days- Ai desperately wanted to check up on Hitomi, Reina, Eri- or anyone for that matter, through the two-way radios they’d recovered from the corpses of the hijackers.
  But, for the last few moments, she had her mind occupied on Miki, who is apparently having some sort of dream with Eri.
 
  “ I’d better call them back here… “ Ai says, reaching for the radio, beside her, until suddenly-
 
  -Miki abruptly tilts her head backwards, bringing her chin up prominently into the air as her faint groans grow into long moans. Her feet, gradually tenses inward, giving them a ‘crescent’ shape.
  “ Ah… ah… “ Miki moans, lightly- her mouth staying open, almost in a satisfactory grin.
  She moans Eri’s name once again, as her free arm slowly crosses against her heavily-breathing chest, while her fingers smoothly grace lightly above her sweaty neck- leaving a prominent outline.
 
  Ai just stares on blankly, not quite sure what to make of it.
  She knew Miki was having a dream, some sort of dream, but wasn’t sure if it was-
  -a bad or … good dream.
 
  The feeling of butterflies weld up in Ai’s stomach, a little shocked, and a little amused at the same time.
  She takes another sip of water, the musky taste forcing her to make up her mind.
 
  That’s it- time to wake up, missy!
 
  Ai places the cup next to her-
 
  -and then Miki shrieks.
 
  “ Ha-ah! “ Ai stutters, startled- accidentally knocking the cup over, spilling water onto the grubby floor.
  “ Miki! Miki! “ She swiftly clutches Miki by her shoulder, and shakes, trying her best to wake her up.
 
  Miki shrieks once more- turning into a scream this time, not even taking the time to recover her breath as she curls up into a fetus position- her bare legs puddle against the spilled water.
  Her body tenses up.
 
  “ Miki, wake up, please!
  Ai shakes harder.
  And harder.

  Hoping to see Miki open her eyes, and a vocal response, she just hears frantic, ghastly wheezes.
  Ai tightens her grip on her shoulders- and her mouth drops in shock.
  Miki’s skin, it felt like she’d been through a fiery blaze.
 
  I-Impossible- she, she must be over a hundred degrees!
  Staring intently at Miki’s face, Ai realizes Miki had formed some sort of red discoloration inside her skin.
 
  The voice inside Ai’s head panicked quickened words, as she realizes- that can only mean one thing; her heart is going to fast for her to handle.
  -it could be, be brain trauma, o-or a stroke, or-
 
  Her friends’ sudden increase in body temperature flabbergasted Ai, and I knew I should’ve woken her up earlier!
 
  Miki suddenly stops her rapid wheezing, and with that- her body lays calm.
  Ai looks on anxiously, her eyes concentrating on Miki so hard, it made her dizzy.
  “ Miki! “ Ai repeats.
  She shakes her, not as hard as last time, but just enough to prod her back and forth.
 
  No response.
  Miki just lays in silence, her whole body flimsy, as if she were in an infinite sleep.
 
  “ Oh, god… “
  Ai let’s go, slowly retracting her arms back towards herself, not wanting to think about the possible realization- Miki is dead.
 
  “ Oh god, oh god- “ Ai repeats hysterically. She trembles as she quickly presses her index and middle fingers against Miki’s warm neck.
  A mixed feeling of relief and distress rushes into Ai’s stomach, there’s still a pulse- she’s still alive!
 
  “ Mi-Miki, can you hear me? “ Ai says as she takes her fingers off.
  Still, no response.
 
  Ai hesitantly picks up the battered radio behind her. She clumsily brings it in front of her mouth, shaking as she presses and holds the red button on its’ side.
  The radio emits a small beep.
  “ C-Can anyone hear me? “
  She lets go of the button, unsure if the radio is still in working condition or not. The radio emits another small beep.
  A pause ensues.
  She waits for a reply.
 
  Yo? “ Hitomi says curiously. The static, debris in loose audio deforming her voice a bit. “ Hah, I guess the radios’ do still work~
  The expression in Hitomi’s voice, forces Ai to calm herself down a bit.
  “ I need ya’ll to get back here... Quick as you can. “
  A pause. “ Anything wrong? …What about Mi-
  “ Just- just hurry. “ Ai interrupts as she leans in towards Miki to feel her pulse again. “ Miki- she… I think she’s in a coma. “
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« Reply #203 on: February 28, 2007, 03:33:54 AM »
Woohoo, feature updates!

Check out the 1st post! The awesomely talented Rei.rev.07, generously took the time to make a cover design for me, check it out!

http://forum.jphip.com/showthread.php?t=6245

Some things I updated-

- Added an INDEX in the 1st page for quick chapter reference.
- Added the plot summary (Now that I got the prelude stuff outta the way XD)
- Added BGM (Background Music/Sounds) to certain Chapters! They are inserted in certain chapters to purely emphasize the feeling/atmosphere. They range from simple raindrops to dramatic music. Note that future chapters will have BGM's as well!

The past chapters w/ BGM's are:

Chapter 1 (Background Sounds)
(Prelude) October 11 - 1:49 AM
 Eri Kamei

Chapter 3 (Background Sounds)
October 8 - 4:54 AM
Ai Takahashi

Chapter 8 (RISA'S THEME)
October 8 -  11:57 AM
Ai Takahashi

Chapter 9 (TO THE COCKPIT!)
October 8 -  11:57 AM
Miki Fujimoto

Chapter 15 (Background Sounds)
October 8 -  5:09 PM
Ai Takahashi

Chapter 22 (Background Sounds)
October 8 -  7:45 PM
Risa Niigaki

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« Reply #204 on: February 28, 2007, 03:41:06 AM »
fabulous cover, Eri's PB cover came just in time :D

Short update :( looking forward to the next few chapters as you uncover the 1st casualty from MM...

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« Reply #205 on: February 28, 2007, 04:22:17 AM »
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A mixed feeling of relief and distress rushes into Ai’s stomach, there’s still a pulse- she’s still alive!
Dammit meowchi don't scare me like that!   :ONsweat:

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« Reply #206 on: February 28, 2007, 05:10:37 AM »
Yay~ Miki is still with us :ONcry:

ooo the bgm idea is very nice!  I've always loved reading this story with soft melodies/dramatic music..now to check out the themes you picked =D

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« Reply #207 on: February 28, 2007, 05:37:15 AM »
^ Hehe, had a streaming prob, so I've decided to post the original BGM, BGS instead!

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« Reply #208 on: February 28, 2007, 05:37:36 AM »
NOOO, MIKI! :ONgyaaah:

But thank god she's still with us (!?). It feels like something supernatural is at work >_<.

Lovely cover there! The BGM is a great idea too (though I'm still hesitating right now since I'm scared that it'll be scary :(). Looking at the index, I can't believe all those chapters besides the prelude didn't even take up 24 hours @_@;;.

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« Reply #209 on: February 28, 2007, 06:58:44 AM »
Yes!  An update!  And background music as well!  Way too awesome!  It's amazing how much a little bgm can add to the intensity of a chapter.  

As for Miki's condition, yikes, talk about freaky.  Especially her dream.  

I so can't wait to see what happens!  Keep up the great work!

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« Reply #210 on: February 28, 2007, 10:37:36 AM »
yay! new update!! :tfr9a7wg: love the background music too!:ONluvluv2:

and for Miki,,,,yey, she still alive!! :baa60776:

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« Reply #211 on: February 28, 2007, 06:54:14 PM »
Thank goodness.... I thought she flippin' died.
But then again, you can't kill the top bitch, now can you? :)
Yay for Yossui's sarcasm.

Damn, even on the verge of death, Miki is still such a perv <333
Nurse Ai? I like.

LOVE the cover.... damn Rei's PS skill. Sigh, it looks really awesome.
I'll listen to the sounds when I get home D:

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« Reply #212 on: February 28, 2007, 09:24:05 PM »
BGM: City of the Dead (2.36 MB)

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Risa Niigaki

  Unknown City
  October 8, 9:38 PM
 
  Risa headed straight for the tower, thanks to its' prominent lights looming over the city. Her mind hoped to get there, without encountering any more of those, go ahead Gaki, say it- those zombies, but, by the condition the city was in, it was nearly impossible.
 
  The foul stench of death reeks around her, raging into her lungs as she takes in air. She picks up her pace as she passes by a group of sprawled corpses, on a nearby sidewalk.
 
  “ Ugh… “ She utters, plugging her nose.
  It was a nightmare, punctuated with whispering howls, the stink of decay, and once, a distant explosion that made her limbs feel weak.
 
  Although the sight of things seemed like a living nightmare, she somehow managed to hold on to her hope that the tower would be a safe haven, that there would be some kind of crises center set up, manned by police and paramedics- people in authority making decisions and marshaling forces.
 
  It wasn’t just a hope, it was a need; the possibility that there might be no one left in this city to take charge was unthinkable.
 
  When she finally stumbled out into the street in front of the tower building and saw the burning cars, she felt like she’d been hit in the gut. But it was the sight of the decaying, moaning-
 
  -military soldiers?!, staggering around the dancing flames that truly wiped out her hope. There were about twenty of them, some wearing camouflaged attire, others in blooded white sailor uniforms- lurching through the wreckage or dead and bloody on the pavement, not a hundred feet from the front of the tower gates.
 
  Risa forced the despair away, fixing her sight on the gate that seemed to lead to the tower buildings’ courtyard. Whether or not anyone had survived, she had to stick with her plan- put out a call for help. Concentrating on her fears would only make it harder to do whatever what needed to be done.
 
  She ran for the gate, nimbly dodging a horribly burned uniformed soldier with blackened bones for fingers. As she clutched the cold metal handle and pushed, she realized that some part of her was growing numb to the tragedy, to the understanding that these things had once been humans, citizens of this city. The creatures that roamed the streets were no less horrible, but the shock of it all just couldn’t be sustained; there were too many of them.
 
  Not too many in here, thank god…
 
  Risa slammed the gate shut behind her and pushed her sweaty bangs off her brow, taking a deep breath of the almost fresh air as she scanned the courtyard. The small, grassy park to her right was well lit enough for her to see there were only a few of the once human creatures, and none close enough to be a threat.
 
  She could see the three flags that adorned the front of the tower station house- one of Japan’s national flag, Nisshoki ([FONT="]日章旗[/FONT])- the one next to it, the Japan Air/Ground Self-Defense flag- and finally, the Japan Maritime Self-Defense flag.
 
  They all dangled, just above an enormous plaque that read-
 
 
-[FONT="]ROCKFORT ISLAND PRISON –[/FONT]
 
[FONT="]EST. 1944[/FONT]
 
  Next to it, Risa could tell there had been a sign, but it was gone, probably just another sign to adorn the name.
  She gazes at the flags again, hanging limp in the shadows, and the sight resparked the hope that she thought she’d lost; whatever else happened, she’d at least made it to someplace that spoke her language. And it had to be safer than the streets.
 
  She hurried past a blindly reeling trio of the dead, easily avoiding them- two men and a woman; all three could have passed for normal if not for their mournful, hungry cries and uncoordinated staggers.
 
  They must have died recently-
 
  -but they’re not dead, dead people don’t gush blood from their eyes. Not to mention the walking-around-and-trying-to-eat-a-Musume thing…
 
  Questions she hadn’t yet had time to ask herself flooded through her mind as she jogged up the front steps to the station, questions she didn’t have the answers for-
 
  -but she would soon, I’m sure of it.
 
  The door wasn’t locked, but Risa didn’t allow herself to feel surprise; with all she’d been through since the incident on the plane, she figured that it would be best to keep her expectations to a minimum.
 
  She pushed the door slowly, and peeks through the crack.
 
  Empty.
 
  There was no sign of life in the grand old lobby of the tower building- and no sign of the disaster that had overtaken the city. Risa gave up on not feeling surprised, entering slowly, closing the door behind her and stepping down into the sunken lobby.
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« Reply #213 on: March 01, 2007, 01:39:50 AM »
Eri Kamei
  Flight 707 Wreckage
  October 8, 9:38 PM
 
  Following closely behind Hitomi, the girls rush back to the cabin- where they’d left Ai and Miki.
  Eri clutches her bag, neatly against her side, filled with food and supplies she’d found scattered in the debris.
  She tries her best not to slip on the rubble.
 
  “ Are we going back? “ Kusumi asks, a little too loud.
 
  The rest of the girls were clueless, as to what happened. Hitomi didn’t say much, other than to follow her, and to not split up, but Eri understood the whole situation. With the others, searching in different cabins, she’d overheard Hitomi’s conversation with Ai- since Eri had the third radio.
 
  Miki, in a coma- but how? Eri thought. She just hurt her shoulder… well, from what Hitomi told me.
 
  “ Hey-! I see another pack of peanuts~! “ Reina calls out excitedly from behind. “ I call dibs, sucka’s! “
  Her footsteps start to rattle away.
 
  “ Reina! “ Hitomi replies, not even looking back. “ Ignore it. “
 
  Reina's footsteps stop as a confused utter escapes her and she eventually continues to follow.
 
  “ Besides, “ Sayumi giggles. “ We already found like- uhm, a million of those? “
  “ I think you mean, everyone else found a million of those. Reina on the other hand, just found, two. “
  “ That’s cause Reina was too busy in not helping us lo- “
 
  “ Stop it, you guys… “ Eri says softly, in an attempt to calm them down.
  Her mind still stuck on Miki, and their arguing somehow emphasized on how bad the situation had gotten.
  Not worse, but bad.
 
  They all fall silent, the eroding waves outside of the plane muffling in the background.
  Eri wanted to say something cheerful, to lighten the atmosphere, but decided against it, merely because she had no idea what to say.
 
  Reaching the exit, they slide into the curtain, piling into the cabin one by one.
  Eri looks around the room, and near the other side of the cabin, on the aisle, she spots Ai, kneeling beside Miki, whom is covered in Kusumi’s yellow blanket.
  “ Hiii~ “ Sayumi says girlishly.
  Ai looks in their direction, surprised, and from her kneeled position she gets up- reluctantly showcasing a small wave.
 
  “ Dammit… “ Hitomi murmurs as she quickly heads over, dropping her bag. She kneels down, and feels Miki’s forehead with her palm.
 
  Ai says something to Hitomi, but it’s barely audible, due to the questions of confusion filling the air, as the rest of the girls assess the situation.
  “ Yo- she’s not up yet? “ Reina asks.
  Eri clutches her bag as she slowly paces towards Miki. “ No, she isn’t… “
 
  “ Hey Eri, wait up~ “ Sayumi begins to follow until-
  -Kusumi giggles. “ She’s a sleepy Mikitty puff! “
 
  “ Stop that! “ Sayumi elbows Kusumi, suddenly forgetting about Eri.
  “ Huh? “
  “ That’s my job. Being cute, I mean. “
  “ Why do you keep saying that? “ Reina says annoyed. “ We’re all cute! In our own ways... "
  Reina pauses. “ Gawd that was so corny. “
 
  Ignoring their fainted conversation, leaving them behind, Eri kneels next to Ai, and examines Miki, not noticing the weird look Ai gives her. Eri brushes away her bangs from her eyes as she gazes down, softly nudging Miki’s arm, wishing Miki would just open her eyes.
 
  “ She was dreaming. “ Ai says. “ I think. “
  Eri and Hitomi flash Ai a look.
  “ You think? “ Hitomi replies, confused.
  “ Uh-huh. Well… she was moaning. “ Ai elbows Eri gently across her arm. “ Moaning ‘Eri’… “
 
  My …name?
 
  “ Eh? “ Eri squeaks, not sure of what Ai had just said. “ Me? “
  Hitomi just peeks a glance at Eri, not saying a word.
  Ai nods and shrugs. “ I’m as clueless as you are. But… whatever her dream was- I think it put her in a state of shock; she started screaming… yelling… It, it was horrible. “
 
  “ Can she hear us? “ Eri asks.
  Ai looks away, ignoring her question. “ I-I should’ve woken her up… “
  Eri spots Ai’s sorrow from the tone of her voice and puts her arm around her, hoping to coax the feeling away.
 
  A sudden increase of volume occurs randomly in the background discussion, pausing their assessment.
  Only 20,000 points!? Well, guess what- I can get 60,000 points, with one hand! “ Sayumi yells.
  Reina scoffs. “ Who cares! Tetris is so~~~ boring! “
  “ Can you teach me how to do that? “ Kusumi whimpers.
 
  Ai, Hitomi and Eri glance over at them, but quickly get back to the matter at hand.
  “ Eh, is that even possible? Because… to get in a coma’, from a dream…? “ Eri says, puzzled.
 
  “ It’s possible… I mean, it could be something else too, like- a stroke… intoxication… metabolic abnormalities… central nervous system diseases… acute neurologic inju- “
 
  Hitomi holds up her hand, gesturing Ai to stop. “ Whoa, hey- In our language please? “
  Ai pauses, thinks about it, and scratches her head.
  “ Basically, from what I saw- huge chance she had some sort brain trauma, from her dream… “
  Ai stops. She looks over towards the other group.
 
  “ Reina can type 160 WPM- on my cell! So yeah, talk to the hand girly! “
  “ 160 WPM is nothing compared to my ‘love-WPM’! “
  “ What the hell are you talking about? “
  “ Let’s have a race, fuu~! Can I host pretty please? “
  “ NO! “ Reina and Sayumi yell in unison.
 
  “ Which means…. “ Eri nods, distracting Ai, and emphasizing her tone so Ai could continue.
 
  “ Which means she could’ve been dreaming about something bad- real bad, like, dying... Her mind probably thought it was real, so it shut her off. She’s basically on ‘stand-by’… “
 
  Hitomi rubs the back of her head. “ Well, that’s convenient. How long til’ she wakes up? “
 
  “ No idea. It’s up to her mind, and how much she wants to wake, I guess. “
 
  “ Can she hear us now? “ Eri asks again, remembering her question from earlier.
  “ Un. “ Ai nods. “ So hear that Miki? Please wake up soon, we’ll be waiting for you! “
 
  Eri looks on. Miki lays still, as if she were frozen in time. It surprised Eri, about being in Miki’s dream, if she actually was dreaming, and it sent guilt down her spine.
  Why did it have to be my name?
 
  “ We can’t do anything for her, besides hope for the best. “ Hitomi says unwillingly. “ We’ll have to spend the night here and- “
  “ Eh? “ Eri interrupts. “ I thought we were gonna go search for Risa… “
 
  Ai tends to Miki, fixing the blanket that covered her body.
  Hitomi pauses as she watches. “ …Change of plans. “
 
  What?
 
  “ You can’t be serious… “ Eri says a little frantic, feeling guilty. “ She could be freezing to death for all we know- no weapons, and she didn’t take much food ethi- “
  “ Look. “ Hitomi interrupts sternly. She showcases an intense stare as her eyebrows tense up. “ I’m just as worried as you are, but for now, we can’t do a damn thing about it. With Miki’s situation added on to the mix, I’m not about to let another one of us get lost, or even killed. “
 
  Ai looks at Eri, with consideration. “ Eri, Hitomi’s right… We don’t even know what’s out there…. “
  Hitomi continues. “ If Risa doesn’t come back by morning, we’ll start a search group for sunrise- no earlier, no later. “
 
  That… That’s too long-
  Without thinking, Eri abruptly hops onto her feet. “ If Risa doesn’t come back by morning, that means she’s dead!!
 
  Suddenly, the whole room became silent. The argument that paralleled in the background stopped.
  Eri choked.
  She didn’t mean to scream- it just… came out that way.
 
  Reina chirps. “ Oh, wow… “
  “ Who is dead. “ Kusumi says, more like a confused statement, rather than a question.
  “ Eri…? “ Sayumi iterates soon-after.
 
  All the eyes in the room gazed at Eri. And, for a moment, she regretted it.
  But just for a moment.
 
  “ End of discussion, Eri! “ Hitomi stands up from her kneel, her eyebrows even more tense. “ As leader of this group, we wait. No ifs, ands, or buts.
 
  Eri looks away, snapping a look at Sayumi’s group, whom is curiously pacing towards her now.  
  “ Now go start unpacking for the night. A change of clothes at least. “
 
  Eri bites her lower lip, and stares back into Hitomi’s eyes. She feels the urge to oppose, but restrains herself.
  “ What’s going on? “ Reina asks softly as they come to a stop.
  Sayumi lays her hand on Eri’s shoulder as Kusumi looks on from behind.
 
  “ That goes for all of you! “ Hitomi continues, ignoring Reina’s question.
  “ Huh? “ Kusumi utters. “ What goes? “
  Ai quickly shushes Kusumi.
 
  With Eri and Hitomi still staring keenly at each other, absorbing each others’ opposition, the rest of the girls begin to pace towards the cabin exit, heading north, to where they first sat at.
 
  “ Drama! “ Reina says exaggeratedly as she walks, a little irritated by Hitomi’s ‘ignored’ response.
 
  “ Did I do something wrong… “ Kusumi asks cluelessly, which prods Ai into escorting her out. Ai says something to Kusumi, but it was inaudible to Eri.
 
  “ Let’s go Eri… “ Sayumi speaks softly, her hand on Eri’s shoulder lightly nudging her.
  Eri pauses. “ I’ll meet you there. “
  “ But- “ Sayumi glances at Hitomi.
  “ I’ll meet you. “
 
  Nodding her head as she see’s her cue; Sayumi slowly walks out the cabin in silence, the curtains fluttering behind her.

A pause ensues. So quiet they can hear the faint footsteps of the others.
  “ So are we going to keep on playing the stare game or are you gonna’ ask me out? “ Hitomi says.
 
  Eri ignores her remark. “ You’re abandoning her, you know. “
 
  “ Eri. “ Hitomi points. “ Unpack. “
 
  Feeling her lips weld up as if she were about to cry, Eri grimly looks away and heads out. Her footsteps kick across mounds of rubble, making her feet ache, but she didn’t care. She had to do something, and, if Hitomi won't do it-

- I will.
 
  Just before Eri enters the curtain, she glances behind, just enough time to see Hitomi clasp her face as she kneels beside her unconscious friend.
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« Reply #214 on: March 01, 2007, 01:44:04 AM »
I knew it!!! Zombies!!! I hope Risa can get to a com station before Miki turns so she can get a cure.

Edit: First post...yes!!!

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« Reply #215 on: March 01, 2007, 02:02:06 AM »
^ So did I glcorps! Oh man this is getting really good.

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« Reply #216 on: March 01, 2007, 03:55:25 AM »
The BGM from risa's part fits really well! It made the chapter more spooky O_o

So poor Risa have to depend on herself for the night? >_< hope nothing will happen to her... not yet at least :(

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« Reply #217 on: March 01, 2007, 05:49:36 AM »
There are really zombies on the island?!  :ONomg:  wah...when you guys were talking about zombies earlier I thought you guys were joking around! :o

Ugh...I now get the feeling that Eri is going to go out to find Risa...unforunately she finds her not alive and hence :ONshifty:  Hitomi :ONfrustrated:

oh wait, the steward is still unaccounted for so my guess is probably still off.

Anyways thank you so much for all the updates recently!  Even though I'm totally creeped out with the zombie city, I totally love the Reina-Sayu-Koha moments :heart:

Forever stuck in memory: Reina and her two packs of peanuts :ONxD:

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« Reply #218 on: March 01, 2007, 06:05:17 PM »
The 3 youngest girls are so much fun!! Gawd I'm giddy from laughing XD
But still you feel like shaking some sense into them. Hello, remember the situation you are in?
Eri Eri Eri.... please don't run off searching for Risa on your own :baa60776: Though I really want some "we time" between them - I :heart: KameMame, I shall not be selfish. There is a greater good XD

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« Reply #219 on: March 01, 2007, 06:38:17 PM »
Risa Niigaki
  Rockfort Island Prison, First Floor
  October 8, 9:53 PM
 
  “ Hello? “

  Risa kept her voice low, but it carried, echoing back to her in a whisper. Despite what was going on outside; everything inside looked practically new; three floors of classically styled architecture in oak and marble.
 
  There was a stone statue of a man, hoisting what looked like to be a boulder on his back, in the lower part of the large room, stairs on either side leading up to the receptionists’ station. In the floor in front of the statue showcased what looked like to be the islands’ emblem, as it portrayed a crafty design with the words-

  -Rockfort Island.
 
  It gleamed softly in the diffuse light from the wall lamps, as if it had just been polished.
 
  No bodies, no blood… What’s going on here?
 
  Uneasy at the profound silence of the huge chamber, Risa walked up the stairs to her left, stopping at the counter of the reception desk and leaning over it; except for the fact that it was unmanned, nothing seemed out of place.
 
  Feeling her heart jump, Risa spots a phone on the desk below the counter. Risa picked up the receiver and cradled it between her head and shoulder, tapping at the buttons with fingers that felt cold and distant.
 
  Not even a dial tone; all she heard was the sound of her own heavily thumping heart.
 
  She put the phone down and turned to face the empty room, trying to decide on where to go first.
 
  There were four doors leading away from the lobby to different parts of the sprawling station, two on the west side and two on the east.
  After thinking about it, she frowns, not sure which door to actually go through.
  Deciding that she had to start somewhere, quick, she contemplates with her index finger across her lips.
 
  “ Drastic times call for drastic measures… “ Risa says, talking to herself.
  She points and re-counts each door once more, nodding her head.
  Ready- go!
 
  “ Eeni-mini-maini-moe, catch-a-tiger-by-the-toe, if-he-him-hollers-let-him-go, eeni-mini-mani… “ Her whole body twirls as she retracts her point from the east door to the west.
“ …moe! “

 
  She jogs towards it, her bare feet making silent thuds against the hard floor. It was a random choice, but somehow, Risa had a good feeling about this door.
 
  At least, that’s what she told herself.
 
  More likely she was glad because it was the closest, and the tomb-like silence of the oversized lobby was giving her the creeps.
 
  The door wasn’t locked, and Risa pushed it open with her foot slowly, holding her breath and hoping that the room would be as undisturbed and orderly as the lobby.
 
  What she saw instead was the confirmation of her earliest fears; the creatures had been there- with a vengeance.
 
  The long room had been trashed, tables and chairs splintered and overturned everywhere she looked. Smears of dried blood decorated the walls, splashes of it in tacky, trailing puddles on the floor, leading towards-
 
  Risa choked. “ Oh, man- “

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