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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #420 on: July 30, 2008, 05:44:18 AM »
Hitomi Yoshizawa
Rockfort Shore, Medical Compound
October 9, 8:21 PM



They stood at the north door in a dark and stuffy hallway, tightening bootlaces, adjusting belts, putting fresh clips into their berettas. Hitomi made sure the 2-way radio they'd found was secured tightly to her belt- it's the only form of communication they had with Risa- and when Hitomi was ready, she turned to Reina and nodded.

“Give it back to me.”

“You, Koha, and Ai will take the one on the left, northwest from here. Once we hear you get clear, Sayumin and I go straight across. If your guess is right, we’ll be in block D; if you’re upside down, block B. Either way, we secure the building, find the test number, and then wait for you to show up and give us the go-ahead.”

“And if I don’t.. .”

Sayumi took up the recital. “If we don’t hear from you in half an hour, we come back here and wait for Koharu and Ai. We complete the tests if it’s feasible—“

Reina grinned, a white flash in the gloom.
“—and then get our butts over the fence.”

“Right,” Hitomi said. “Good.”

They were ready. There were infinite variables in the equation, any number of things that could go wrong with the simple plan, but that was always the case. There was no way to prepare for everything that could happen, not at this point, and the decision to split up was their best chance to avoid detection by the Trisquads.

“Any questions before we go?” Ai spoke up, her youthful voice tight with concern. “I’d like to remind everybody again to be extremely careful about what you touch, or what touches you. The Trisquads are carriers, so try to avoid getting close to them, particularly if they’re wounded.”

Hitomi shuddered internally, remembering what she’d told them before—that one drop of infected blood could hold millions, hundreds of millions of virus particles. Not a pleasant thought, considering.
A nine-millimeter round could inflict a lot of damage....
. . . and they don’t lie down when they’re hit. The three by the boathouse just kept coming, walking and firing and bleeding. . .

They were waiting for her signal. Hitomi shook the thoughts off and thumbed the safety on her weapon, putting her other hand on the door latch.
“Ready? Quietly, now, on three—one . . . two . . . three.”

She pushed the door open and slipped outside into the cool night air and the whisper of ocean waves. It had stopped raining and it was much brighter than before, the almost-full moon having risen high, bathing the compound in silvery blue light. Nothing moved.

Straight in front of her about twenty meters away was Reina and Sayumi’s destination, and she was relieved to see a door set into the concrete wall facing block C; they wouldn’t have to go around to get inside.

Hitomi edged away from the door to her left, hugging the narrow shadow of the wall. She could just make out the front of the building she hoped was A, tall, wind-bent pines to the left and behind it. There was a darker shadow midway along its length, a door, and no cover in the thirty-plus meters that spanned the distance.

Once they stepped away from C, they’d be totally vulnerable.

If there’s a team between the two lines of buildings . . .
She shot a glance back, saw Koharu and Ai tensed and waiting behind her. If they were going to walk into a corridor of fire, at least she’d be in front;
Koharu and Ai should have time to get back to cover.

She took a deep breath, held it—
· and broke away from the wall, running in a low crouch for the dark square of the block’s entry.

Shapes of pallid light and shadow blurred past. Her entire being was waiting for the flash of an automatic, the crack of fire, the sharp and piercing pain that would take her down—but it was silent and still, the only sound the violent stammer of her heart, the rush of blood through her veins.

Seconds stretched an eternity as the door loomed closer, larger—
Then the latch was under her fingers and she was pushing, bursting into a stifling blackness, spinning around to see Ai and then Koharu come lunging in after her.

Hitomi closed the door quickly but quietly, sensing the emptiness of the dark room, the lack of life—and then the smell hit her. Either Koharu or Ai gagged, a dry bark of involuntary revulsion as Hitomi snatched for the torch, already dreading what she knew they would see.

It was the same terrible stink that they’d come across in the boathouse but a hundred times more powerful. Even without the recent reference, Hitomi knew the odor. She’d experienced it when she was walking by a murder scene in her hometown, Saitama, and once, in the basement of a morgue. The smell of rotting, multiple death was unforgettable, a rancid bile like sour milk and flyblown meat.

How many, how many will there be?

The beam snapped on and as it found the tottering, reeking pile that took up one corner of the large storage room, Hitomi saw that there was no way to be certain; the bodies had started to melt into one another, the blackened, shriveling flesh of the stacked corpses blending and pooling from the humid heat.

Maybe fifteen, maybe twenty. . . .

Retching, Koharu stumbled away and threw up, a harsh and helpless sound in the otherwise quiet room.

Hitomi quickly took in the rest of the chamber, finding a door against the back wall, the letter A blocked across it in black.

Without another look at the terrible mound, she hustled Ai toward the far door, grabbing Koharu as they passed. Once they were through, the smell faded to barely tolerable.

They were in a windowless corridor, and though there was a light switch next to the door, Hitomi ignored it for the moment, catching her breath, letting the two young team members collect themselves.

Apparently, they’d found the workers of Rockfort Cove; all but at least one of them, anyway
—and Hitomi decided that if they ran across her, she’d shoot first and not bother with any questions at all.
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #421 on: July 30, 2008, 05:52:43 AM »
Reina Tanaka
Rockfort Shore, Medical Compound
October 9, 8:35 PM



Sayumi and Reina stood at the door for a full minute after the others had gone, cracked open just wide
enough for them to listen. Cool air filtered through the opening, the far away hiss of waves — but no
shots, no screams.

Sayumi let the door close and looked at Reina, her pale features masked in the dim light. Her voice was
low, even, and terribly serious. “They’re in by now. You want to take lead, or would you prefer if I went
first?”

Reina couldn’t help herself. “It'll take us all night if you go first,” she whispered. “But you seem like the type who'd want to go at the same time, if you know what I mean.”

Sayumi sighed heavily, a sound of pure exasperation. Reina grinned, thinking about how easy she was. She
knew she shouldn’t devil her, but it was hard to resist. From what the others said, Sayumi Michishige kicked butt with a weapon and she was sharp as a tack in the brains department, but from Reina's own short experience she was also one of the most humorless people she’d ever known.

It’s my duty to help her lighten up. If we’re gonna die, might as well be laughing instead of crying.... A simple
philosophy, but one she held dear; it had gotten her through many an unpleasant situation in the past.

“Reina, just answer the goddamn question—“

“I’ll go,” Reina said mildly. “Wait till I get through, then follow.”

She nodded briskly, stepping back to let her by. She briefly considered telling Sayumi that she’d greet her at
the door wearing nothing but a smile, but decided against it.

They’d worked together for a few hours, and she knew from experience that she could only go so far before Sayumi got pissy. Besides, it was a good line, and she didn’t want to waste it.

As soon as her hand closed over the latch, she took a deep breath, letting her sparkling wit take a back
seat to what she thought of as her “S.W.A.T mind.” There was humor, and then there was conquering the
enemy—and while she enjoyed both immensely, she’d decided to keep them separate.

Gonna be a ghost now, gonna slide through the dark like a shadow....

She gently pushed the door open. No sound, no movement. Holding her Beretta loosely, she stepped
away from the building and moved quickly through the silvery dark, fixing on the door that was scarcely
twenty steps away.

Her S.W.A.T mind fed her the facts, the cool wind, the soft tread of boots against dirt,
the smell and taste of the ocean—but her heart told her that she was a ghost, floating like an invisible
shadow through the night.

She reached the door, touching the clammy metal bar with steady fingers—and it wouldn’t move. The
entrance was locked.

No panic, no worry, she was a shade that no one could see; she’d find another way in. Reina held up a
hand, telling Sayumi to wait, and edged smoothly to her right.

Silent and easy, shadow without form . .. Reina reached the corner and slid around, letting her heightened
senses continue to feed her information. No movement in the whispering night, the rough feel of concrete
against his left shoulder and hip, the steady pump of exhilaration and fluidity in her muscles. There was
another door, facing the broad, glimmering open-ness of the sea, cool light matte against metal.

Rat-atat-atat—atat!

Bullets hit the dirt at his feet. Reina spun and leaped backward, flattening herself against the wall as she
grabbed for the latch. Walking from the direction of the boathouse, a line of three—
· and Reina tore the door open and jumped behind it, heard the clatter of .22 rounds smash into the
metal, stopped inches from her body by the explosive ping-ping-ping that rattled the door.

She held the door open with her foot, took a split-second look around the edge and targeted the flash of
light, squeezing the trigger as chips of concrete and dust flew from the wall. The nine-millimeter jumped, a
part of her hand, and she was an animal now, at one with the thundering rounds, the pull of her breath, the
awareness of herself both as a woman and a bringer of death.

Another look and the line was closer now, the three dark figures taking shape. Reina got off another shot,
ducked behind the open door—and when he looked again, there were only two standing.

Snap.
Behind her.

Reina whirled around and saw them, two of them, ten feet away at the northeast corner of the building.
Both held automatic rifles.
But made no move to fire.

She felt panic then, a screaming, whining beast in her gut that threatened to devour her from the inside
out—
· holy sh**—

The fusillade of the M-16s was still approaching, but she could see only the creatures that stood there,
watching her with blank and rubbery eyes, wobbling on unsteady legs. The one on the left had only half a
face; from the nose down was a liquid, pulpy mass of tissue, chunks of dark wetness hanging from strings
of elastic flesh. The one on the right looked intact at first, if deathly white and dirty . .. until she saw the
ex-ploded mass of its belly, the limp, dripping snake of intestine flopped out against his bloody shirt.

· won’t engage until team A finishes—

Reina stepped backward into the warm dark of the building, using one distant arm to hold the door open
against the pair that still fired. She leaned out and aimed as carefully as she could manage, squashing the
panic as best she could. Neither of the creatures moved to defend themselves, only stood there, teetering
on rotting legs, watching her.

Bam! Bam!

Two clean head shots, explosively loud over the continuing rattle of the M-16s. Before they’d even hit
the ground, Reina heard another nine-millimeter thun-dering through the darkness, drowning the automatic
fire.
Sayumi—

She shot another glance around the door—and saw the crumpling figures of the engaged team a hundred
feet away, one of them still firing as it fell, its rattling rifle aimed uselessly at the sky. Sayumi crouched out
from between the buildings, handgun still pointed at the spasming shooter, her back to Reina.
· teams won’t engage—

“Don’t shoot him! Over here, leave him!” She turned, a lithe and graceful spin, sprinting to meet her. As
soon as Sayumi was through, Reina pulled the door closed, the crack of the automatic muted to a dull popping
sound.

Reina sagged against the door as Sayumi fumbled for the lock, Reina's brain still screaming at her that she’d
seen the impossible, that she’d just killed two dead men, that there was nowhere she could put that
information that wouldn’t drive her insane—
· can’t be, didn’t believe, didn’t believe it before, didn ‘t know and they were DEAD they were
ROTTING and they were—
Sayumi’s ragged whisper broke the warm dark, broke through the cycling chain of her spinning, dizzying
thoughts.

“Hey, Reina—was it good for you?”

She blinked, the words registering slowly. “Going first, I mean,” she added. “Was it everything you
hoped it would be?”

Reina felt a creeping amazement take the place of the whirling, terrible thoughts, the confusion ebbing, the
waters of her mind becoming clear again. “That’s not funny,” she said.

After a beat, they both started to laugh.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #422 on: July 30, 2008, 03:59:12 PM »
I loved the interaction between Reina and Sayu :lol:

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It’s my duty to help her lighten up. If we’re gonna die, might as well be laughing instead of crying.... A simple
philosophy, but one she held dear; it had gotten her through many an unpleasant situation in the past.
This sort of reminds me what my dad said to me a while ago, "No matter what happens in life, never lose your sense of humour."


Ever since I started reading this story, all most all of the time I would read it while listening to "Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni". The mood it sets is certainly not one with little pink bunny's hopping through meadows and pretty purple butterflies saying "Welcome to Candy Fields, where all of your dreams come true!" (If only. I would have Morning Musume greet me instead :P). It's from a horror anime which is named the same as the song, and boy do I get scared when I watch it at night XD

I can't wait for the update. I wonder how Aya, Eri and Risa are gonna get out of their little predicament ;) Maybe there are parachutes on the plane? But I don't think it would be such a clever idea to jump out of a plane over the sea.


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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #423 on: July 31, 2008, 05:23:12 AM »
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Ai glanced between her watch and the door several times. She didn’t think it had been 15 minutes, but it had to be close.
Reina and Sayumi weren’t back yet.
Where'd they go? Separating isn't exactly advisable.



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"Wait, there- type in 'blue series'," Hitomi prodded.
Ah, Yossi recognized something from the earlier message.



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Before Koharu could respond, Reina and Sayumi walked back into the room, both of them bolstering their weapons. Sayumi held a sheet of torn paper in one hand.
“Locked up tight,” Reina said. “Halfa dozen offices, no windows at all and only one other external door, north end. Oh- Sayumin nicked a grenade off a dead body too- she calls it 'a good luck charm.'”

"Yeeew-" Koharu gazed from her seat, sterning an exaggerated winced face. "That's gross~!"
"And totally tacky-" Reina chuckled, amused at the pink flush, gathering on Sayumi's cheeks.
Hey, you never know; it might come down to needing to use that grenade. :yep:  But anyway, what's on the torn paper they found?



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*YOSSI READS THE NOTE*
It almost sounds like they were trying to condition the creatures to work as a team in thier attacks.



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"What's a 'Tri-squad'?" Reina asked, peeking at the paper.
Sayumi was the first to respond. "Probably their technical term for 'Deltas', erm- zombies with guns, I mean..."
There's a recurring theme of the number 3 here. Continuing the "A" and "B" reference on the paper, it could be that should both of those fail, then a third team would enter the picture.



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Reina peered at the screen, mumbling, “. .. man who makes it doesn’t need it, buys it, doesn’t want it, uses it, doesn’t know it. . .”
Sayumi, who had been rereading the Trisquad material, looked up with sudden sharp interest. “Wait, we've seen that before. It was a trick question wasn't it?"
Hitomi peered, looking annoyed. "It's 'answer'."
I've heard that riddle before, the correct answer is actually "coffin".



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"But why would he go out of his way to write, 'I hid it for you'?..." Koharu asked softly, feeling overwhelmed.
No one said anything and Ai felt it was finally time to speak up. "Obviously this- this testudo is important- and if anything, it's our best lead in terms of evidence, which is what we're looking for-"
Question is, who was the "you" for whom he had hidden it?  If they can figure that out, they might be able to get an idea of what this "testudo" thing is (though it wouldn't surprise me if they ended up doing it in reverse order :P).



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"I was just about to say that," Hitomi brushed away her bangs. "-I'm assuming Matsuura took this testudo, Niita threw a fit, releasing the Trisquads, which infected the whole island- with no way out, Matsuura hid the damn thing and left behind clues- for others to find it."
Interesting theory...
* JFC strokes chin in a thoughtful manner.



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Hitomi drew five boxes in two lines, the same as on the map they'd found earlier, marking the southernmost box with the letter C. After a pause, she tentatively labeled the others, starting at the top left with A and going right to left, marking the test numbers next to each letter.

“Assuming that this is right side up,” she said, “and that
we need to complete the tests in order, we’ll be moving in a stagger, a zig-zag between the buildings.”
But of course, why would it be easy? :banghead:



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Ai spoke up, her youthful voice tight with concern. “I’d like to remind everybody again to be extremely careful about what you touch, or what touches you. The Trisquads are carriers, so try to avoid getting close to them, particularly if they’re wounded.”
Damn this sense of foreboding.  :tama-mad:



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Hitomi closed the door quickly but quietly, sensing the emptiness of the dark room, the lack of life—and then the smell hit her. Either Koharu or Ai gagged, a dry bark of involuntary revulsion as David snatched for the torch, already dreading what he knew they would see.
David? Who's David? :?



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*TANA-SHIGE*
Niiiiiiiiiice. :lol:



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She gently pushed the door open. No sound, no movement. Holding her Beretta loosely, she stepped away from the building and moved quickly through the silvery dark, fixing on the door that was scarcely twenty steps away.
...

She reached the door, touching the clammy metal bar with steady fingers—and it wouldn’t move. The entrance was locked.
Crud. :O



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*REINA GETS IN THE DOOR*
HOLY CARP!!!
:OMG:



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“Hey, Reina—was it good for you?”

She blinked, the words registering slowly. “Going first, I mean,” she added. “Was it everything you hoped it would be?”

Reina felt a creeping amazement take the place of the whirling, terrible thoughts, the confusion ebbing, the waters of her mind becoming clear again. “That’s not funny,” she said.

After a beat, they both started to laugh.
Man, these 2 sure like to flirt while they're in the middle of danger, don't they?
:mon lol:

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #424 on: July 31, 2008, 06:28:24 AM »
lol David XD  I think Meowchi likes to throw in some gender bender stuff to throw us off...yeah..that must be it  XD

aww I like the TanaShige :wub:  I'm like how you sprinkle in humor from time to time  :D

I wonder what's going to happen to Eri et al...If i had to choose between being flown to into one of Niita's traps or jumping out of a plane...I'd choose jumping out of the plane...preferably around blocks A to E XD  lol I guess that would be too easy?  but anyways great updates!  I'm always amazed at how well planned out your story is and how you are able to update so often!  I can't wait to see what you have in store for the girls  :luvuluvu:

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #425 on: July 31, 2008, 09:27:38 PM »
wah i just finished reading your story ...
its really really intense @__@

i don't want risa to die T.T;

your story is really good~
and you update really fast ^___^

hope you update soon
cause i can't wait to read the rest of it (:
keep up the good work~~
takagaki = <3 (:

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #426 on: July 31, 2008, 11:34:21 PM »
 KonaKaga : Whoa that sounds eerie! I'll have to check out that song you're talking about...

 JFC : 'David' is Hitomi's 'S.W.A.T mode'- Thanks for bringing it up actually- I just realized I hadn't explained that bit about her- I was so caught up in explaining that very same concept it in Reina's chapter (since I needed a filler for that), hehe... I'll go ahead and edit it so it won't confuse future readers...
Sorry for the confusion!  :cry:

 Sukoshi : LOL @ gender bender stuff... Actually- I type this all up as fast as I can whenever I get a chance to be on a computer- so some typos may occur here an' there- and sometimes I think faster than I type so it messes up the zone so to speak!!  :sweatdrop:

 x_sleepyhead : Thanks x_sleepyhead!
Yeah I'm trying to get in as much updates as possible before I go on a 3 month hiatus! Don't worry though, I won't leave my readers hanging!

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #427 on: August 01, 2008, 12:01:05 AM »
Ai Takahashi
Compound, Hall (nearing Block A)
October 9, 8:58 PM



THE FARTHER AWAY THEY GOT FROM THE front of the concrete block, the less noxious the air, for which Ai was deeply grateful. She’d been seconds away from vomiting herself, the smell was that bad—a greasy, oily stench that seemed almost tangible, an entity in itself.

As they moved quietly through the well-lit hall, she found herself thinking again about Niita Tomoko, about the story of the Marburg victims—and although there was no proof that Niita was behind the mass slaughter of Rockfort, Ai couldn’t shake the feeling that she was responsible.

The corridor led them past several open rooms, each as barren and sterile as the building they’d come from. They passed an exit at the far side of the block, and after another turn in the hall, finally came to a door marked again
with the letter A, and below it, 1-4.

There were three triangles beneath the numbers, each a different
color—red, green, and blue.

Hitomi opened the door, revealing a much shorter hall, stark fluorescent light
spilling into the stale darkness; there were two doors, one on either side.

Koharu found the lights and turned them on, and Ai saw that there were more of the colored triangles on the door to their right.
The other was blank.

“I’ll take the test,” Hitomi said. “Koharu, you and Ai check out the other room,
we’ll meet back here.”

Ai nodded, saw Koharu do the same. Koharu looked a little pale, but seemed steady enough, though she dropped her gaze when she noticed Ai looking.

Ai felt a pang of sympathy for her, realizing that she was probably embarrassed for losing her lunch.

They opened the unlabeled door and stepped into yet another windowless room, as stuffy and warm as the rest of the building. Ai turned on the lights and a
rather large office lined with bookshelves flickered into view. A steel desk sat in one corner next to a filing cabinet, the empty drawers standing open.

Koharu sighed. “Looks like we search here,” she said. “Ai-san, want the desk or shelves?”

Ai shrugged. “Shelves, I guess.”

Koharu grinned almost shyly. “Kay. Maybe I can find some breath mints or something in one of the drawers.”
Ai smiled, glad that she’d made the joke. “Save me one. I swallowed it down back there, but it was a close call.”

They locked gazes, still smiling—and Ai felt a tiny shiver of excitement run through her as the second stretched, lingering a few beats longer than a more casual exchange.

Koharu looked away first, but her color had returned, her cheeks slightly pinker than before. She moved to the desk and Ai turned to face a row of books, feeling a little flushed herself. There was a definite attraction there, and it seemed to be mutual—
-and it’s only about the worst time and place to consider it, her mind snapped.

Quit thinking about it, pronto.

The books were about what she might’ve expected, considering what they knew about the Trisquads and Rockfort. Chemistry, biology, a whole set of leather-bound texts on behavior modification, several medical journals.

As Koharu rummaged through the desk behind her, Ai ran her hand along the row, pushing the books toward the back of the shelf as she glanced over the titles. Maybe there was something hidden behind one of them.
... sociology, Pavlov, psych, psych, pathology—

She stopped, frowning at a slender black volume tucked between two larger books. No title.

She pulled it out and felt her heart speed up as she opened the small book, seeing the spidery handwriting on the lined pages. She flipped to the front, saw “Ryoko Yokohara” written in neat letters on the inside cover.
One of the people on the list, one of the researchers!

“Hey, I found a diary,” she said. “It belongs to one of the people from that list we found, Ryoko Yokohara.”

Koharu looked up from the desk, her dark eyes flashing. “Wow- really, really? Go to the back, what’s the last date?”

Ai ruffled through the pages to the end, scanning as she went. “Says October 2nd—but it doesn’t look like she kept it regular. The one before that is September 12 ...”

“Just read the last entry,” Koharu said. “Maybe it’ll tell us more about what was going on.”

Ai walked to the desk and leaned against it, clearing her throat.

“ ‘October 2, Saturday. It’s been a long and ridiculous day, the end of a long and ridiculous week. I swear to God, I’m going to beat the crap out of Louis if he calls one more stupid meeting. Today it was whether or not we should add a new scenario into the Trisquad program, as if we need another one. All he really
wanted was to get it on paper, and the rest of it was his usual bullsh**—the importance of teamwork, the need to share information so we can all “stay on the right track.

” I mean, Jesus, it’s like he can’t live with the concept that a weekly might go out without his name on it. And he hasn’t done sh** since the May disaster, except to try and convince everyone that it was Chin’s fault; so much for not speaking ill of the dead. Sanctimonious prick.

“ ‘Leo and I talked over the implants yesterday, that’s going well. He’s
going to write up the proposal this week, and we’re NOT going to let Louis touch it. With any luck, we’ll get a green light by the end of the month. Leo figures the White boys are going to want to run it past Xiaolin, though God only knows why; she doesn’t give a sh** what we’re doing out here, she’s off being
brilliant again. I have to admit, I’m looking forward to her next synthesis; maybe we can work out some of the bugs in the Trisquads.

“ ‘There was a minor scare in D on Wednesday, in 101. Somebody left the
refrigerator open, and Matsuura swears that there are some chemicals missing, though I’m starting to think he miscounted again. Hard to believe he’s in charge of the infection process, the man’s a dite and he’s sloppy as hell when it comes to maintaining the equipment. I’m surprised he hasn’t managed to infect the
entire com-pound. God knows there’s enough in there to do it.

“ ‘I should probably get over to D myself, make sure everything’s ready for tomorrow. Got a new batch shipping in, and Niita actually asked to watch the process; first time she’s come out of the lab in weeks, first time she’s ever taken an interest in what the rest of us are doing. I know it’s stupid, but I still want her to be impressed; she’s as brilliant as her own sister, in her own creepy way. I think she even intimidates Louis, and Louis is generally too
stupid to scare.

“ ‘More later.’”

The rest of the pages were blank.

Ai looked up at Koharu, not sure what to say, her mind working to clean the relevant bits of information from the rambling tirade. There was something in there that bothered her, something that she couldn’t quite place.

Missing chemicals. Infection process. The brilliant, creepy Dr. Niita and her sister. . . .

She no longer had any doubt that Niita had killed the others, but that wasn’t what sent her internal alarms jangling. It was—
“Block D,” Koharu said, a look of anxious fear playing across her face. “If we’re in A, Sayu and Reina are in D.”

Where there’s enough of the virus to infect the entire island. Where the infection process took place.

“We should tell Hitomi,” Ai said, and Koharu nodded, both of them moving quickly for the door, Ai hoping desperately that Reina and Sayumi wouldn’t find room 101—and that if they did, they wouldn’t touch anything that could hurt them.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #428 on: August 01, 2008, 12:10:20 AM »
Hitomi Yoshizawa
Compound, Block A (Test Room)
October 9, 9:13 PM



The test room was big, three of the walls lined with open-ended cubicles. Once she’d turned on the lights, she saw that the tests were clearly numbered and
color-coded, the symbols painted on the cement floor in front of each one.

All of the red series was on her left, closest to the door. She saw brightly colored blocks and simple shapes on the tables in each cubicle as he walked past, heading for the back of the room. The green series lined the wall opposite, though she ignored it entirely. The back wall was marked with blue triangles, the number four test in the far right corner.

As she neared the back of the room, she heard a faint hum of power coming from the blue test area. There was a small computer on the table in number two, a
keyboard and headset in three. As promised, the series was activated—though what they were connected to, she couldn’t imagine.

Can’t imagine and don’t care. Once we solve these little puzzles, we’ll find whatever’s been hidden for us and wait it out for Risa and Eri, away from this cemetery.
It can’t happen soon enough.

Hitomi had seen all she wanted to see of Rockfort Cove. The corpses in the front hall had been bad, but it was the thoughts that they’d inspired that troubled her, made her so suddenly eager to get her team out.

The Trisquads were dangerous and deadly, the monster in the cove’s waters had been horrible—but somewhere in the facility lurked a monster of a different kind entirely, one that had murdered her own people and then stacked them like kindling in a dark place. That kind of insanity chilled her far worse
than the immoral greed of any other human being, and she was afraid of what such a woman might do to the handful of girls trying to stop her.

We’ll find the “material,“ probably notes on Rockfort, perhaps on the virus
itself—and then break for the fence, get well away from this madness. Let the Feds handle the rest. If they’re smart, they’ll blow up the entire compound and gather the information from the ashes....


She stopped in front of the last cubicle, returning her attention to the task at hand.

She wasn’t sure what she was expecting to see, but the set up of test number four surprised her nonetheless. A table and chair, utilitarian gray metal. On the table was a pad of paper, a pencil, and an inexpensive chess set, all of the
pieces in place. As she stepped into the cubicle, she saw that there was a metal plaque set into the surface of the table, a string of numbers etched into the steel.

Hitomi sat in the chair, peering down at the numbers.

9-22-3//14-26-9-16-8//7-19-22//8-11-12-7

She frowned, looking up at the chess set and then back at the numbers. There was nothing else to look at; that was it.

She quickly sorted through the clues of Matsuura’s message, wondering which was supposed to be the answer.
Was it, “the letters and numbers reverse,” or “don’t count”?

Since there didn’t seem to be anything relating to time or a rainbow, it had to
be one of the two....

If the lines are in the same order as the tests, this is the letter and number reversal. But what letters, there aren’t any—

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #429 on: August 01, 2008, 12:14:28 AM »
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( Hitomi Yoshizawa - October 9, 9:13 PM )

Hitomi smiled suddenly, shaking her head. The numbers on the plaque didn’t go any higher than 26; it was a code, and a fairly simple one.

She picked up the pencil and quickly jotted down the letters of the alphabet, then numbered them backward; A was 26, B, 25, all the way back to Z, 1.

Glancing back and forth between the plaque and the paper, she wrote down the numbers and then started to decipher the message.

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« Reply #430 on: August 01, 2008, 06:14:18 AM »
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JFC : 'David' is Hitomi's 'S.W.A.T mode'-
Ah...I see.

Calling David her "S.W.A.T. mode" reminds me of the power-ups from Dekaranger. :cow:



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THE FARTHER AWAY THEY GOT FROM THE front of the concrete block, the less noxious the air, for which Ai was deeply grateful. She’d been seconds away from vomiting herself, the smell was that bad—a greasy, oily stench that seemed almost tangible, an entity in itself.
Yeah, as a former kitchen employee I've dealt with the smell of rancid grease. DEFINITELY not something you want to be around. :puke:



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Koharu sighed. “Looks like we search here,” she said. “Ai-san, want the desk or shelves?”

Ai shrugged. “Shelves, I guess.”

Koharu grinned almost shyly. “Kay. Maybe I can find some breath mints or something in one of the drawers.”
Ai smiled, glad that she’d made the joke. “Save me one. I swallowed it down back there, but it was a close call.”
:lol:

Nice tension-reliever.



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They locked gazes, still smiling—and Ai felt a tiny shiver of excitement run through her as the second stretched, lingering a few beats longer than a more casual exchange.

Koharu looked away first, but her color had returned, her cheeks slightly pinker than before. She moved to the desk and Ai turned to face a row of books, feeling a little flushed herself. There was a definite attraction there, and it seemed to be mutual—
EH?  :O

...

Aiharu? AiKo? Takasumi?



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She stopped, frowning at a slender black volume tucked between two larger books. No title.
Someone's personal journal, maybe?



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*AICHAN READS JOURNAL*
Geez, sounds like the operation was filled with ego-maniacs.
:dizzy:



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“ ‘There was a minor scare in D on Wednesday, in 101. Somebody left the refrigerator open, and Matsuura swears that there are some chemicals missing, though I’m starting to think he miscounted again. Hard to believe he’s in charge of the infection process, the man’s a dite and he’s sloppy as hell when it comes to maintaining the equipment. I’m surprised he hasn’t managed to infect the entire com-pound. God knows there’s enough in there to do it.
Hmmm...could it have been something as stupidly simple as that?

...

Probably. :banghead:


What's a "dite"? Shorthand for "idiot"?  :?



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She no longer had any doubt that Niita had killed the others, but that wasn’t what sent her internal alarms jangling. It was— “Block D,” Koharu said, a look of anxious fear playing across her face. “If we’re in A, Sayu and Reina are in D.”

Where there’s enough of the virus to infect the entire island. Where the infection process took place.
This would be more dramatic if we hadn't already gotten the chapter where Reina and Sayu fought off a bunch of those zombies in the building they ended up in. But...still...

REINA!!! SAYU!!! :OMG:



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As she neared the back of the room, she heard a faint hum of power coming from the blue test area. There was a small computer on the table in number two, a keyboard and headset in three. As promised, the series was activated—though what they were connected to, she couldn’t imagine.
There must be sensors in the room that detected her presence and started everything up.



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*YOSSI AT FOURTH TEST*
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Hitomi smiled suddenly, shaking her head. The numbers on the plaque didn’t go any higher than 26; it was a code, and a fairly simple one.

She picked up the pencil and quickly jotted down the letters of the alphabet, then numbered them backward; A was 26, B, 25, all the way back to Z, 1.

Glancing back and forth between the plaque and the paper, she wrote down the numbers and then started to decipher the message.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. :w00t:
* JFC deciphers.

Answer blacked out so others can try it. :D
[bgcolor=#000000]The message reads: REX//MARKS//THE//SPOT

"REX" is Latin for "king", so she has to do something with the King piece from the chess board!
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (Reader Interaction!! *Ends August 1st*)
« Reply #431 on: August 01, 2008, 06:41:15 AM »
waah~
that was a good chapter ^___^
i was expecting something creepy to happen ^^;
i guess that's coming up ... >_>;

anyways, reader interaction *nods*

i think the code is:
[bgcolor=#1d0000]rex marks the spot[/bgcolor]

hidden so i'm not a spoilsport xD
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (Reader Interaction!! *Ends August 1st*)
« Reply #432 on: August 01, 2008, 07:02:40 AM »
*wracks brain*

[bgcolor=#1d0000] Rex marks the spot

*googles*
Noun   1. Rex - a male sovereign; ruler of a kingdom

I guess this would mean the clue is the king on the chess board? [/bgcolor]

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (Reader Interaction!! *Ends August 1st*)
« Reply #433 on: August 01, 2008, 07:41:54 PM »
Hitomi Yoshizawa
Compound, Block A (Test Room)
October 9, 9:18 PM



Glancing back and forth between the plaque and the paper, she wrote down the numbers and then started to decipher
the message.

R . ..E... X. .. M. . .

The final letter was a T, and he stared down at the sentence, then at the chess board. It seemed that
somebody had a sense of humor.
REX MARKS THE SPOT.

“Rex” was Latin for “king.”
White always goes first, so . . .

She reached out and touched the white king. As soon as her finger contacted the piece, it swiveled in
place, turning around to face the back of the board. At the same time, there was a soft, musical tone from
overhead.

She looked up and saw a tiny speaker set into the ceiling.
Nothing else happened, no flashing lights or secret passageways opening up behind the wall.
Apparently, she’d passed.

How anti-climactic.

It seemed like an awfully complicated test for something as supposedly mindless as a Trisquad
zombie—though perhaps the researchers had been making plans for something else, something
intelligent.. . .

It was an unsettling thought, and not one she wanted to ponder.

She stood up and turned toward the front of the room—
· just as the door burst open, Ai and Koharu hurrying in, wearing matching expressions of fear.

“What is it?”

Ai held up a book, talking fast. “We found a journal. It says that the strain of the virus used to
infect the Trisquads is in block D, in room 101. Maybe everything’s fine, but if Reina and Sayumi touch
anything that’s been contaminated—“

Hitomi heard enough. “Let’s go.”

They turned and Ai strode past them, leading them back the way they’d come, Hitomi's thoughts racing.

They had passed an exit on the far side of the building, she could send Koharu and Ai to the next block
over while she went to D, just as originally planned—only much faster, and now carrying the horrible,
heavy fear that two of her people might accidentally uncover the virus.

It won’t happen, they’ll be careful, the chances of one of them getting a cut and then touching something
dangerous in a room that’s bound to be marked as some kind of a laboratory...


The reassuring facts did nothing to ease her mind. They hurried toward the exit, a deepening knot of
dread settling into the pit of Hitomi’s stomach.
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (Reader Interaction!! *Ends August 1st*)
« Reply #434 on: August 01, 2008, 07:44:52 PM »
You guys seriously cracked down on that R.I, hehe. Good thing cause I planned on having leader trapped if no one got it!
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (Reader Interaction!! *Ends August 1st*)
« Reply #435 on: August 02, 2008, 01:55:55 AM »
Sayumi Michishige
Compound, Block D (Hall)
October 9, 9:28 PM



They stood in the bright corridor at the center of D block,
silently listening for a sound that would tell them Hitomi had come. From their position, they should be
able to hear any one of the three external doors being used.

After securing the building and finding the
test room, Sayumi and Reina had chocked open all of the passages that led to the block’s exits.

Sayumi checked her watch and then rubbed her eyes, feeling a bit worn out from all of the night’s events, and still
sickened by what they’d found in room 101. Even Reina seemed unusually subdued, and definitely quieter
than normal.

Reina hadn’t cracked a single joke since they’d walked back to begin their wait. Maybe she’s
thinking about the gurneys, fixed with bloody restraints. Or the syringes. Or the surgical equipment
heaped in the sink....

They’d found the test room first, a large chamber filled with little tables, each marked with numbers
between five and eight; Sayumi had been somewhat disappointed to see that the blue series number seven
was just a handful of colored tiles with letters on them, half of them upside down and unreadable. All the
colors corresponded to a rainbow’s, though there were two extra violet tiles in the heaped pile. Since
they couldn’t risk messing with it until Hitomi had completed the first test, she’d reluctantly turned away,
suggesting that they check out the rest of the block.

They’d gone through a couple of offices, empty, and
a cluttered coffee room, where they’d found a box of incredibly moldy donuts and little else. It had been
the chemical lab that had told them the most about what kind of place Niita had created—and
although Sayumi didn’t believe in ghosts, the room had given her a feeling like nothing she’d ever
experienced before; it was haunted, plain and simple, haunted by the misery of fear and the cold,
nazi-esque precision of scientists committing atrocities against their fellow man—

“You thinking about that room?” Reina asked softly. Sayumi nodded, but didn’t say anything. Reina
seemed to sense Sayumi's unspoken desire not to talk about it, for which she was thankful.

The weight of the grenade, tucked in her pocket- a good luck charm, and it was the only other comfort she felt at the moment, and she longed to take it out, to feel
reassured by the explosive. Anything to take her mind off the lab room....

The outer door to 101 was clearly marked with a biohazard symbol and they’d briefly
discussed not going in at all, Reina arguing against entering a possibly contaminated environment. Sayumi
had pointed out that neither of them had any cuts or abrasions, and that they might find something about
the virus to take with them. The truth was, she couldn’t stand to let such an opportunity pass; she
wanted to see what was behind the closed door, because it was there. Because leaving it unopened
would get under her skin.

Reina had finally agreed and they’d gone in, stepping into a small entryway that was draped with sheets of
heavy plastic. There were shower nozzles overhead and a drain set into the floor; a decon area. A
smaller second door had opened up into the room itself, leading them into a mad scientist’s dream. Glass,
crunching underfoot. A tired smell of anxious sweat beneath the acrid odor of bleach. ...

Reina found the lights and even before the large room snapped into view, Sayumi felt her heart start to pound. There was a
dark tension that filled the air, a sense of foreboding that radiated from the very walls. Her father is a researcher for Ube, a chemical company- it looked like the countless lab facilities her father worked in; counters and shelves, a couple of metal sinks, a large, stainless steel refrigeration unit in one corner with a lock on the handle. And somehow, that was the worst—that the environment was so familiar, a place she’d always felt safe at when she visited dad at work.

The few differences were dramatic ones. The room was dominated by a stainless autopsy table, fitted
with velcro restraints—and there were two additional hospital gurneys next to it, likewise fitted. As she
walked over to look at one of them, she saw the dark, dried stains at either end; the thin pad was soaked
with blood from where a man’s ankles and wrists would be.

In the back of the room was a cage the size
of a large walk-in closet, heavy bars surrounding an unpadded bench. Next to the cage, several slender
poles leaned against the wall, each a meter or so in length—and tipped with hypodermic needles. They
were the kinds of instruments used to drug wild animals, allowing the person operating them not to get
within reach. Sayumi looked down at the gurney, lightly touching the long-dried stain, wondering what
kind of person could have willingly participated in such an experiment. The crust of blood was old,
powdery, and filled her with thoughts of what the victims must have endured, waiting in the cage, perhaps
watching as some gloved madman injected a toxic, mutating virus into a helpless human being....

It was a bad place, a place of evil deeds. They’d both felt it, both been affected by the realization of
what had gone on there—
Sayumi’s right eye itched, distracting her from the terrible remembrance, drawing her back to the
present. She rubbed at it, then looked at her watch again. It had been only twenty minutes since the
team had split, though it felt longer—

There was a sound of a door opening, followed by Hiotmi’s excited shout through the corridor. She’d
come in through the west entrance.
“Sayumi, Reina!”

Reina grinned at Sayumi, and Sayumi felt a wave of relief;
Hitomi was okay.

“Here! Keep walking!” Reina called back. “Take a right at the tee!”
Hitomi's footsteps pounded through the hall. In a few seconds, she appeared at the comer and jogged toward
them, her face tight with concern.
“Is everything—“ Sayumi started to ask, but Hitomi cut her off.

“Did you find the laboratory room? Room 101?”

Reina frowned, her smile fading. “Yeah, it’s back the
way you came—“

“Did either of you touch anything? Do you have any cuts, any small wounds that might
have come in contact with anything?”

Their confusion must have shown. Hitomi spoke quickly, looking back and forth between them.
“We found a journal, naming it as the room where they were infecting the Trisquads.”

Reina smiled again. “Well, duh. We figured that much out in about two seconds.”

Sayumi held out her hands, turning them over for Hitomi to see. “Not a scratch.”

Hitomi exhaled sharply, her shoulders sagging. “Oh, thank God. I had the worst feeling all the way over
that something had happened. We found the researchers in block A; Matsuura's note at the boathouse was right, she killed them—and our ‘she’ has a clear identity now. Ai seems certain that it’s Tomoko Niita. She was the one
Ai recognized from the list, and she has a rather sordid history, she can fill you in when we regroup. . .”

She shook her head, a wavering smile on her lips. “I just—I suppose I let my imagination run wild for a
moment.”

Reina smiled wider. “Jeez, Hitomi, I had no idea you cared. Or that you thought we’d be stupid enough to
stick ourselves with dirty needles in a place like this.”

Hitomi laughed, a soft, shaky sound. “Please accept my sincerest apologies.”

“Where are Koharu and Ai-chan?” Sayumi asked.

“Probably in the next test area by now. I saw them
safely off to block B before I came here ... did you find test seven?”
“This way,” Reina said, and as they started down the hall, Reina began to recount their run-in with the
Tri-squads.

Sayumi followed, rubbing at the maddening, elusive itch in her right eye. She must have irritated it with all
of the rubbing, it seemed to be getting worse. And to top things off, she felt a headache coming on. She
wiped at her eye, sighing inwardly at the timing. She never got headaches unless she was coming down
with something. The swim in the ocean must have set her up nicely for a cold—and from the building
throb in her head, it was going to be a nasty one.

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #436 on: August 02, 2008, 02:16:26 AM »
I joined recently and started reading this fic,
omg it's so good ><
This story practically glues me to my seat, I always forget my surroundings when I read this

oh and.. [bgcolor=#000000] OMG SAYUS INFECTED SAYUS INFECTED T___T [/bgcolor]


Anyway, this story is too good, I'm a total lurker and read up to the latest chapter in 3 days
I just happened to read something pretty bad before the latest chapter,
so.. reading this brought me utter bliss~ :heart:
thank you for updating so quickly~ :: worships ::
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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #437 on: August 02, 2008, 05:17:23 AM »
kyyyyyyyAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

*shakes Sayu* noooO~  Why did you have to touch it!  Man I hope it's not the full strain...I know Miki's already dead and Risa's probably going to die by the end but not Sayu too.... :OMG:


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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
« Reply #438 on: August 03, 2008, 01:32:33 AM »
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Hitomi Yoshizawa
Compound, Block D (Test Room)
October 9, 9:41 PM



The “time rainbow” test, number seven, took only a moment longer to complete than test number four,
what Hitomi had started to think of as the “chess test.”

Reina and Sayumi had shown Hitomi to the small table
in the big room, standing behind her as she’d uprighted the colored tiles and laid them out.

Beneath the heap of nine rainbow-shaded pieces was an elongated indentation, perhaps a foot long and two inches
across; it was clear that just seven of the tiles would fit. Seven colors in the rainbow, seven tiles.
Simple.

So why are there nine of them?

Hitomi ordered the pieces by their colors, placing them in a row beneath the indentation. Each bore a
different letter on the top, inked in black.

Red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo
· and three violet tiles with three different letters.

“Is it supposed to spell something?” Reina asked. Going from left to right, the first six tiles read:

J F M A M J

“Not in our language,” Sayumi said mildly.
The three violet pieces were:

J M P

Hitomi sighed. “It’s one of those where you have to figure out the next in the series,” she said. “Apparently relating to time. Any thoughts?”

Reina and Sayumi both stared down at the puzzle, studying the letters; Hitomi wondered if they were as tired
as she was starting to feel. Reina seemed distinctly less chipper than usual, and Sayumi looked fairly wiped
out, her skin pale and gaze somewhat distant. Of course they’re tired, but at least they’re making an
attempt. . .


Hitomi looked back at the colored pieces and tried to focus, but couldn’t seem to manage a single
coherent idea. It had been an awfully long day, periods of intense concentration interspersed with violent
rushes of adrenaline. She’d run through fear, self-doubt, determination and then fear again, plus a handful
of less clear-cut emotions.

Now she just felt frazzled, waiting to see what would come next....

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Re: Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume (New R.I latest chapter)
« Reply #439 on: August 03, 2008, 01:55:57 AM »
AG~H! SAYUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wonder if the infection's going to spread?
I've always been kinda wondering about the title. Eri Kamei vs. Morning Musume
Makes me think that everyone except Eri is going to get infected... At least let one more person be with her in the end if it goes like that! Like Risa!
Oh, about the puzzle... I absolutely cannot figure out these what comes next ones :doh: I'm sorry! Don't infect me!
I just need to wait for the update and smart people like JFC, Sukoshi etc...


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