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« Reply #100 on: January 26, 2007, 07:30:53 AM »
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She has succeeded in every task set before her, including a Trial of Necessity.

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Even with the short, however intense, training she has had, Tanaka has performed with supreme grace and honor, especially for one so young, and easily captured her first mark of blood.
Holy carp she DID carry out the "orders" Aichan gave her! :shocked:

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“I’m afraid Tsunku may have to do without even more of his performers, at least for the time being,” Ai said finally, causing a glance by Reina, though the speaker kept looking ahead. “The stage is set. Now you and I have some work to do to save his Project…” She finally turned to face Reina. “And hopefully much more.” The knowing glint in the girl’s eyes sent shivers down Reina’s spine.
WTF? To "save his Project" ??!??!? What in blue blazes is going on????

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« Reply #101 on: January 26, 2007, 09:41:08 AM »
I'm pretty certain Ayaya is still alive. How Reina pulled it off without any of the Chosen people noticing is still a mystery to me though :ONdunno:

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This was a warm Ai, a gentle Ai, the Ai that she was sure Risa grew to be best friends with, the Ai that Reina never got to know.


^ my favourite part of the new chapter.  It was all warm yet sad :ONfarofflook:

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« Reply #102 on: January 26, 2007, 12:48:59 PM »
lol...despite all that's happened, my main concern is how will Reina :panda_argh: and Eri :ONcry:make up...as well as Ai and Risa. :pen_what::pen_shocked:

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« Reply #103 on: January 26, 2007, 06:56:46 PM »
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lol...despite all that's happened, my main concern is how will Reina :panda_argh: and Eri :ONcry:make up...as well as Ai and Risa. :pen_what::pen_shocked:


LoL. I figured that's what some of you would only care about. :P You'll see what happens with all that, though it may not end up quite like people are expecting...

I love how you guys are guessing and questioning what's going on in the story. That's one of my aims - getting you to think. I'm afraid that's also why so few people read and respond too, along with the length. >.> Even though I know more of you are out there reading than do respond! Please comment. It makes me happy. :) And maybe you'll mention something that is interesting to someone else.

It seems like most people are interested in Reina-Eri and what happened with Ayaya. That's why I tried to reveal more of Ai's character in this chapter - I believe she's actually the most complex in the story. Though, maybe that's why no one talks about her, because no one knows what in the world is going on with her. :lol: There will be more Eri - probably in the next chapter though depending how I sequence what's to come next. As for Ayaya... There have been hints about it so far, but now that Reina has been initiated you probably won't hear much about it at least for a while.

A bit of an explanatory comment to help with an immediate question - Ai's words at the end of the chapter that so many people seem interested in - the performers Tsunku may have to do without for a while are Reina and Ai. They'll be taking a little unannounced "break". They have a lot of work to do, you know? Don't worry, that doesn't mean none of the other characters will be around. Quite the opposite, in fact. Also, remember, and this goes for the whole story - just because people believe something doesn't necessarily make it true. The world is a complicated place and people are fickle creatures. ;)
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« Reply #104 on: January 26, 2007, 07:42:25 PM »
Haha, I'm more intrigued with Ai's character really. What had made her join such an organization in the first place? And what are her true motives anyway? She strikes me as a schemer :] As for Aya's situation, it might be connected to 'saving' the project. But right now, I'm debating. I'm pretty sure Aya and Miki, when she was still alive, had been a part of something that rivals the agency Ai and Reina work for now. However, this has made me wonder for awhile now... About that agency Ai and Reina work in... And whatever Miki and Aya were involved in...

Who are the true villains of the story?

But nonetheless, I can't help but think that in the future, there might be a Reina versus Ai confrontation, as that's what stories like these usually point to. I would elaborate more, but I fear I might spoil too much for readers as I'm usually on target with analysises such as this xD...



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« Reply #105 on: January 26, 2007, 08:26:08 PM »
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I'm pretty certain Ayaya is still alive. How Reina pulled it off without any of the Chosen people noticing is still a mystery to me though :ONdunno:
I'm hoping that's the case. Reina can look at Aichan and go "you taught me too well." :D

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« Reply #106 on: January 27, 2007, 06:36:48 PM »
Well, for everyone's enjoyment, here's yet another installment of my little story. ^^;; Don't expect it to keep up like this though... I definitely have to start getting busy again on Monday. Well, for the meantime, enjoy. :)

Chapter 21 – Flight for a Fight

Looking down at her hand as she wrapped it carefully in a large bandage, Reina winced at the neat slice she saw across it. She hoped it wouldn’t leave a scar, but realized that was likely wishful thinking. The cut was deeper than it looked when the Chairman held his sword in front of her. At just the memory of him her mouth twisted in a growl and she tugged the bandage hard. “Itai…” she groaned before she could help herself.

At her cry, she felt Ai behind her leaning over her shoulder as if to see what was the matter. “Having problems?” the girl asked playfully.

Reina turned to her and grimaced. “No,” she replied. Before she could catch herself, her eyes fell down to Ai’s still-gloved hand.

“Did you never notice I’ve been wearing gloves lately?” the girl asked. Reina blinked and looked up at her. “When we train or are in rehearsal or performing I wear both gloves, which isn’t anything out of the ordinary. When I take them off you’ve likely never noticed.” She tugged at the fingers of her gloved hand and pulled it slowly off, afterwards raising her palm to Reina. There was a light scar slanted across the middle, very similar to Reina’s.

“I stood in that room the same way you did,” she explained, soft eyes looking into Reina’s before becoming distant after a moment. “Except I was alone, so some things were much more difficult…” Her eyes adopted a look of sadness and even slight distress, making Reina restrain herself from patting the girl’s arm. Quickly though, Ai blinked and her gaze returned to focus on Reina. “No need to look so concerned,” she said with a small smile, patting Reina on the shoulder. “I’m still standing here in front of you, after all.” Reina gave her a skeptical look. Yes, she was standing in front of her, but she wondered how much of the girl she used to be was left. She thought she saw some of it tonight, though it reeked of ambition. Then again, according to her when Reina visited her apartment what seemed so long ago, her ambition was apparently always there, just now directed at something different. Reina wondered what that might be.

“So I guess we share more than just the skills you’ve taught me now, huh?” Reina asked, lifting her bandaged hand.

Ai smiled in return. “More than you know.” She turned and walked over to the window, looking out into the city. “I started wearing these gloves shortly after Miki’s accident,” she continued, and Reina silently watched her. Despite all her promises when she blackmailed Reina into joining her, she rarely even mentioned the incident. “I suppose you could say Miki to me was kind of like Ayaya to you. Though, you’re smarter than me, aren’t you?” She turned back around, tilting her head while looking again at Reina. Reina kept her face as blank as she could. “I mean, that and whatever you did at the Council was all you needed to get Initiated. And my request, of course.”

She smiled. “The mark for Ayaya was given to me, do you know? You showed so much promise though, I thought I’d pass it on to you as a bit of a test to see what you would do. If you managed it, I thought that might be evidence enough to help you advance to where you at least wouldn’t be at the mercy of the beck and call of any low level management and so we might be able to work together instead of me having to lead you around. But of course, you surprised me again, didn’t you?” Her smile widened. “I always knew from the first there was something special about you.”

Beginning to feel uncomfortable, Reina made sure her bandage was secure and began to pack her things. “I don’t know what you’re talking about,” she said, not looking at the girl she was addressing. “It seems I haven’t done a single thing I’ve wanted to since your Miki assignment.” Eri stared at her within her head, but she brushed it off. And look how that turned out… she thought.

There was a pause for a moment until Reina gave a glance to the girl standing by the window. She still smiled, but her look was full of sadness. “Another thing we share in common,” she said quietly.

Stuffing a last skirt into her bag, Reina rose and gave Ai a hard look. “You keep talking about Miki and how her accident was a task assigned to you. Now you say it’s the same as Ayaya and me.” She shook her head. “It’s not, though. I knew what they had against Ayaya. I still think it’s ridiculous, but she was the reason I was blackmailed to join you since it seemed she was getting too close to something Yamagata and whoever wanted to hide. Why Miki, though? What does she have to do with any of this?”

Ai looked at her for a short time before walking back around near her and sitting down on the bed. She motioned for her to sit beside her, and Reina reluctantly complied. It was still a moment before Ai began though, as she leaned forward looking at the floor apparently searching for the words. “Do you remember those two men who approached you in the alley when you left the club after our… dance contest?” she asked finally. Reina nodded, unsure of the girl’s point. “Do you have any idea what they wanted with you?”

Reina tried to remember back to that time, but it was mostly foggy since it was something she would rather not dwell on. The main impression she was left with was Ai’s knife whizzing between them before becoming stuck to the wall through a torn tie. Thinking harder, she grimaced, a sick feeling overcoming her.

“It appears you do,” Ai said, studying Reina’s face closely. Reina nodded. Ai’s words now were all the confirmation she needed. Still, it would have been her choice, right? Thinking of how flirtatious she was though, she really wasn’t too sure what her choice would have been had she been pressed. Morning Musume sure didn’t seem to be going anywhere too fast.

“Is that how they pick up girls? In the dark of some alley somewhere?”

Ai nodded. “The alley you found them in is one of the most common. They have a good eye for idols or other celebrities that might be interested in something a little bit extra on the side, or instead.” Reina still felt slightly sick. Her experiences since then, and especially with Yamagata, had changed her opinions on some things. Ai reached up and stroked her hair softly. “Anyway, Miki was apparently also one of those girls.” Reina’s eyes now glistened with sadness. She was afraid of that. “Except, she approached them about it, and they did her certain… favors… in return for her consideration. Unfortunately, she must not have realized what kinds of strings were attached to those favors since she changed her mind and wanted out. She had even been invited to the chambers you and I just came from.” Reina couldn’t tell whether Ai was regretful or spiteful while describing the dead girl’s actions. Feeling her hands tender on her hair, she decided on regretful. “So of course, as I’m sure you know by now, they couldn’t let her just go, and she had no intention of continuing. So, they decided to stage a little accident. The one I was involved with was only the second actually. The first one was a failure…” She trailed off after that, and Reina looked to her for further explanation, but was interrupted by a sound coming from the door.

The handle turned and the door swung open, revealing two girls silhouetted in the hall’s lighting. They walked in and Reina cursed beneath her breath. She felt Ai’s hand leave her hair and trace down her arm.

“Reina-chan,” one called out. “We talked it over and thought we should come and have a talk with you.”

She now could make out the form of Eri walking into the low lamplight within the room, trailed by Risa not far behind. The two girls stopped after just a few meters though as they saw the two girls on the bed.

“Oh,” Eri continued. “You’re not alone.”

Risa walked up beside her and looked carefully at Ai. “Hi Ai-chan,” she said. Both girls adopted odd looks when they studied Ai’s outfit.

“Hello Gaki-san,” Ai said. Reina realized the girl was now holding her hand. “Eririn.”

Eri now looked between Ai and Reina, obviously noting how close they were, and on Reina’s bed. Risa still had eyes only for Ai. “I’m sorry if we’re… interrupting?” Eri said in a confused and slightly exasperated manner.

“No, you’re no-“ Reina began, and started to stand before she felt herself held to the bed. She looked down to see Ai’s gloved arm snaked around her waist.

“I was actually just leaving. Reina-chan and I were just about to run off together, as a matter of fact. We hoped to do it in secret, but that obviously didn’t work,” she said with a grin and shrug as if she’d just been unfortunately found out. She turned to Reina, and Reina faced her, mouth hanging slightly open. Of course she wouldn’t know what was going on with Eri – the girl no longer kept a close watch on her since she had her in the palm of her hand since she began training – but where did that come from?

She raised her hand along with Reina’s between them and squeezed it slightly, saying, “Reina sweetheart, I’ll meet you in the lobby in a half hour. Don’t be late. We don’t want to miss the last train back to Tokyo.” Then, before Reina could react, she leaned in and kissed Reina on the lips, a strong kiss made deeper by the fact that Reina’s mouth was already open. Reina’s body seemed to turn to jelly, making her unable to tell how long it lasted, but the next thing she knew Ai was standing in front of her and releasing her hand. As she turned away, she was giving her a not unkind “You know this is for your own good” look. She then brushed smoothly past a very still pair of girls and passed out the door. Reina stared after, licking her now moistened lips she had pressed tightly together and her hand still half-raised before her.

After a short moment, she managed to catch Risa nudging Eri, who seemed to shake out of a trance and look back with wide eyes. After just that glance, both girls turned to face Reina, Eri’s eyes wide in a face drawn with emotion and Risa giving her a low-browed glare.

“What in the world is she talking about?” Eri asked finally in a weak and obviously skeptical voice. “You two are running away together to Tokyo?” Reina thought the girl was about to burst out laughing. “We still have two more nights of concerts left here first.”

Obviously they are not running away to Tokyo,” Risa growled with absolute certainty. “I would like to know what they are doing, however.” She gave Reina a very level look, puckering her lips and tapping her foot slightly with crossed arms as if expecting explanation. Every few seconds her eyes flickered over to Reina’s packed suitcase.

Still staring as if stunned, Reina tried to speak, but nothing but air came out. She cleared her throat. “Actually…” she said in as strong a voice as she could muster, though to her it still sounded all too breathless. “…We are running off to Tokyo tonight. We… um…” She looked at Eri, who was gazing very earnestly back at her. For her own good, huh? “She’s right…” she said, lowering her eyes and face. “We’re running off together. We know Tsunku and the public would never accept us, so we’re going into hiding. Don’t bother trying to find us. If things change, maybe… maybe we’ll come back out eventually.” She watched as she played with her fingers in her lap, waiting for the explosion or sound of a door slamming she knew was going to come.

Instead… “That…” Risa sounded as if she spit that out, “is the most ridiculous thing I have ever heard! There is no way you and Ai-chan…” She paused for a moment as if just realizing once again that she just saw her and Ai-chan. “It’s just ridiculous!”

Reina chanced a look up and saw Risa’s face filled with disbelief and Eri’s, surprisingly, with expectation. “You two are just joking around, right?” she asked eagerly, apparently wanting Reina to drop it and admit it already. “You’ve confided in her about it… for some reason…” she said in a voice that stumbled along, very conscious of Ai’s ex-best friend beside her, “And when you two saw us walk in, you did that to get back at us, right?” Again with the eagerness.

“Some joke, with her tongue halfway down your throat…” Risa grumbled, almost as if to herself. Eri ignored her.

Beginning to get frustrated, and a little bit distraught, Reina quickly stood. ‘No,” she said, and turned around to zip her bag. “Like I said, we’re running off to Tokyo.” She picked it up, and pointedly avoiding looking at the two girls, shuffled past them, snatched her coat from the closet handle, and put her hand to the door. However, she paused before opening it. “I thank both of you for… for being there for me, and for your trust,” she said, head bowed slightly toward the floor and eyes down facing the door away from the girls. “I’ll hopefully see you again some day.” Then, without waiting for any response, she quickly pulled the door open and dashed out, nearly running down the hall to the stairs. Once she reached the stairwell and heard no sound behind her, she stopped and leaned back against the door. “Thank you…” she said again under her breath, and began her way down.

In the lobby she met up with Ai, who had somehow already changed and was now in just a normal pink blouse and long pleated skirt with designs embroidered all over it. “I hope you didn’t let them down too hard,” she said cheerily.

Reina glared at her. “That was not fair, you know.”

Ai just kept smiling and shrugged. “It worked, didn’t it? You got away from them and I don’t see them hunting you down for their talk.”

Reina forcefully kept her arms at her sides. They wanted to reach up and strangle the girl. Or else hug her. She wasn’t sure which. “Well you got your wish. I’m alone again. Or at least, you have me to yourself.” She tilted her head to study Ai. “I wonder how you’re going to treat me.”

“Oh,” Ai said, waving her hand dismissively. “The days of me dominating you in every way are over now. After tonight, you have equal authority as me. I think the question is really… How will you treat it?” She peered at Reina, and her expression seemed to soften. “I’m hoping we can at least be friends,” she said mysteriously. “That way, you wouldn’t really be alone.”

Reina licked her lips and swallowed unconsciously. “I suppose that depends on if you keep that distant attitude and keep trying to murder my other friends…” she responded.

Ai suddenly became serious, and she spoke with seeming honesty, “I haven’t forgotten who I was,” she began, and her eyes rose as if she could see something through the ceiling. “I didn’t choose this, but I’ve made the best of it, the same as you have. If you and I can make what I hope true, some day things might get back to ‘normal’.” She looked back down to Reina. “And hopefully in some ways better off than we were before.” Reina felt like swallowing again. “Come on, we have to head to the station if we’re going to make the train on time.” She reached for Reina’s wrist, and Reina let her pull her gently along.

Once outside, Reina tightened her coat to the moderate cold. After a moment when Reina thought about some things, she spoke, “You say that we’re equal now, and that you won’t be ordering me around.” She glanced over at Ai, who was looking ahead along their way. “So why am I running off to Tokyo right now, when it’s obviously not what I want to do?”

“Isn’t it?” Ai asked. “I haven’t forced you into anything. You made no complaints about coming along.” Reina stayed silent, not wanting to think of the reasons she might want to stay with Ai right now. “In any case,” Ai continued. “I do have a request to make of you, which I think after tonight you will… probably agree to do.” The girl, still clutching Reina’s wrist, pulled her closer so their faces were only centimeters apart as they walked. She then explained, in a soft voice, “You’ve seen the harm the Chairman and his misuse of power can do. The Council are really nothing more than business people, with at least as much power as those from Toyota or NTT. True, they make most of their money in business that skirts the law, if not does away with it entirely - we do physical training for more of a purpose than tradition, of course – but Yamagata takes it to the extreme. As you know, he orders people killed if they’ve done no more than slighted him, and the way he treats many of the girls he brings in…”

Reina felt her shiver slightly and hesitate for a moment. She tugged her arm slightly from Ai’s grip and instead took the girl’s hand in her own. She felt Ai squeeze it softly before continuing, “They all brought me in against my will, but I’m of no illusion who was always behind it all. I worked and fought my way up as hard as I could, but when I arrived here I realized I needed help. I never did want you to get involved, but you insisted on being involved, so… I thought I’d try to fulfill an old dream I had, one that you so far have fulfilled perfectly.”

They now neared the train station, so Ai continued in a quicker voice, “I’m sure you saw how the Council aside from Yamagata looked at us earlier. You can’t think your approval came as a random twist of fate. They see something in us, and though I don’t fully understand why, I think it’s up to us to rise to it. They’ve sat in those chairs for so long under Yamagata that they couldn’t lift a hand without him matching it, but you and I are new. We’re unpredictable elements. We’re already so out of the ordinary, almost nothing else would make things more unusual.”

Arriving at the stairs up to the station, she stopped and turned to Reina, taking both of her hands. Reina looked into her face, and she did look like the Ai from a year ago again. “Please, Reina,” she asked in a voice that did sound like a sincere plea, “Help me bring the Chairman down.”

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« Reply #107 on: January 27, 2007, 08:10:57 PM »
Ai's a schemer indeed.

Poor Reina can't go back to her normal life... Just yet...

Once again, this reminds me of Homer's The Odyssey xD Challenges ahead, and eventually, Reina will 'master two worlds' and then 'Come home' as the two stages of it say xD. Well it seems that those two are seriously dropping out of the entertainment industry for awhile eh? Actually, I still say a Reina versus Ai conflict is inevitable xD

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« Reply #108 on: January 28, 2007, 02:50:59 AM »
So it's one of those "If you love them, let them go" deals in terms of Eri and Risa. :(


So Aichan wants to take out Yamagata? Maybe she can be redeemed after all.

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« Reply #109 on: January 28, 2007, 06:24:59 AM »
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Oh hot damn, time to meet the big-wigs! :w00t:

Poor Eri, even though she kinda screwed herself over by making out with Mamechan, you still can't help but feel badly for her.


They didn't really make out right? They only wanted to. But then again I have a lousy memory XD

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What had made her join such an organization in the first place? And what are her true motives anyway? She strikes me as a schemer :] As for Aya's situation, it might be connected to 'saving' the project. But right now, I'm debating. I'm pretty sure Aya and Miki, when she was still alive, had been a part of something that rivals the agency Ai and Reina work for now. However, this has made me wonder for awhile now... About that agency Ai and Reina work in... And whatever Miki and Aya were involved in...


Yes I wonder about Ai too. Why did she join the organization? Was she forced into it? If no then why? And why can't she get Risa involved like she did Reina?

I'm curious about GAM too of course. Arghs so many questions :ON@_@:

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« Reply #110 on: January 28, 2007, 07:55:59 AM »
Kill The Chairman. That makes me think about the bakajo test and the idiot Chairman. I could just imagine Ai and Reina cutting him down while he screams for mercy. Lol

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« Reply #111 on: January 28, 2007, 11:05:11 AM »
I don't check the forum two days and there are already two more (long) chapters to read. You have a very impressive output. Random questions that popped into my head while reading the past two chapters.

What is the council of the Raven? is it some sort of idols only death squad? Why only idols? Does Yamagata have a master plan? What is it?

What does Ai think of Reina? What is Ai's plan? What did Yamagata do to Ai? Has she killed anyone else?

Why is Reina going along with Ai's (not very well defined) plan? What does Ai mean when she says that they are "equals"? Does she mean Reina's position in the order. (Taisho? And what does that mean anyway?) Are Very Bad Things going to happen to everybody?

Another excellent pair of chapters. I'm excited to see where all this is going.

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« Reply #112 on: January 28, 2007, 03:46:49 PM »
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They didn't really make out right? They only wanted to. But then again I have a lousy memory XD

If you're talking about Eri and Risa, Reina saw them after the Christmas party a few chapters ago...

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Yes I wonder about Ai too. Why did she join the organization? Was she forced into it? If no then why? And why can't she get Risa involved like she did Reina?

Ai mentions several times that she joined against her will, like Reina, but it's slightly ambiguous as to why... You might be able to read between the lines and figure it out though. ^^ And she didn't want to get Reina involved, but Reina insisted in sticking her nose into Miki's accident... so I'm guessing she doesn't necessarily want anyone else to get involved either. Would you want to get your best friend to become a murderer (and who knows what else)?

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I'm curious about GAM too of course.

GAM rules all.

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What is the council of the Raven? is it some sort of idols only death squad? Why only idols? Does Yamagata have a master plan? What is it?

It's not idols only. Ai and Reina just happened to be ones. Actually, that's part of the reason those two are of so much interest - they're more than the average salarymen or criminals involved in the organization, although they do recruit "girls" that used to be idols or 'celebrities' from time to time. Remember what Ai said about the Council consisting of business people?

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Why is Reina going along with Ai's (not very well defined) plan?

That's what Reina was asking herself at the end of the last chapter. ^_^
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What does Ai mean when she says that they are "equals"? Does she mean Reina's position in the order. (Taisho? And what does that mean anyway?)

If you don't know what that is or what these mean, I urge you to look them up in a Japanese dictionary (I recommend Jim Breen's @ http://www.csse.monash.edu.au/~jwb/wwwjdic.html): 大将
It's a ranking in the Council's organization, and the word should give you a good idea of what kind of ranking it is. :) I've slightly Americanized the word for those that are picky. :P
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Are Very Bad Things going to happen to everybody?

Oh, it wouldn't be too interesting if they didn't, now would it? :lol: I will say this though... for those familiar with my writing, I do intend to give this a happy ending (though that ending is still quite far off).

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Arghs so many questions :ON@_@:

And see? I actually do answer some. :lol:

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« Reply #113 on: January 29, 2007, 09:39:06 AM »
Wah I think I was holding my breath after Eri and Risa walked in.  I kept wanting Reina to clear things up and make things good again with Eri !  But alas...I seriously hope Eri/Risa don't join the organization while the two are off to Tokyo!  That would just be too evil :o

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« Reply #114 on: February 02, 2007, 10:54:24 AM »
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What does Ai mean when she says that they are "equals"? Does she mean Reina's position in the order. (Taisho? And what does that mean anyway?)

If you don't know what that is or what these mean, I urge you to look them up in a Japanese dictionary (I recommend Jim Breen's @ http://www.csse.monash.edu.au/~jwb/wwwjdic.html): 大将
It's a ranking in the Council's organization, and the word should give you a good idea of what kind of ranking it is. :) I've slightly Americanized the word for those that are picky. :P

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大将 【たいしょう(P); だいしょう】 (n) general; admiral; boss; (P)
黄頷蛇; 青大将 【あおだいしょう】 (n) common harmless snake
足軽大将 【あしがるたいしょう】 (n) samurai in command of a troop of foot soldiers
お山の大将; 御山の大将 【おやまのたいしょう】 (n) king of the castle; king of the mountain
餓鬼大将 【がきだいしょう】 (n) boss of the children (in the neighbourhood); boss of the children (in the neighborhood); bully
総大将 【そうだいしょう】 (n) supreme commander
若大将 【わかだいしょう】 (n) young leader or master
征夷大将軍 【せいいたいしょうぐん】 (n) commander-in-chief of the expeditionary force against the barbarians; great, unifying leader
大将軍 【だいしょうぐん】 (n) commander-in-chief

Ah, so Reina and Ai are commanders-in-chief, bullies, young leaders, snakes, mountain kings, generals, and samurai. That explains it, thanks.

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« Reply #115 on: February 09, 2007, 10:01:01 PM »
After a long two weeks, I finally have another chapter to share with you all. This one is just more of a transition chapter, but still, as always, please enjoy. :)

Chapter 22 – A Quiet Night In Tokyo

Thwack!!

A knife vibrated as it stuck into a wall at the side of a dim alley. A young girl dressed in a short white skirt below a tight, midriff-bearing shirt with a short red leather coat to match stood as if paralyzed, wide eyes glancing between the two men in front of her and the knife she could barely see that had just flown between them.

“I thought I told you not to come around here any longer. This is my city now,” a youthful but strong female voice called out from the darkness. “I won’t have you approaching any more girls.”

The two men standing with hands crossed behind their backs exchanged glances, and one eventually spoke in the direction of the voice, “You know our business. We come under special orders from the Chairman himself to resume recruiting practices in Roppongi Hills, as well as elsewhere in the city.”

“You heard what I said,” the voice rang out once more.

“If we stop now, the Chairman will be very displeased. You may have had some small success in your… innovations… but our traditional business still continues. Likely he will…” The man speaking looked at his companion before continuing, “…want to speak with you in person.”

“Is that a message?” the voice responded, amusement creeping into its tone. “If so, please do me the honor of telling it to me face to face.”

The sound of heels now came from the voice’s direction, and eventually the form of a small girl appeared. The girl sported a tail of hair threaded through a band on top of her head and hanging to the back and strode in high red heeled boots, with dark tights beneath tight cut-off denim shorts. A waist-length black leather jacket, buttoned up as if against the cold, covered her upper body, and tight black fingerless gloves adorned hands that swung with her arms as she strolled with an air of cool confidence. One hand closed over something that couldn’t be seen from the front.

She walked toward the men and stopped only a short distance from them, the other girl now peering over at her attempting unsuccessfully to get a good look. Apparently, however, she was still too shocked and frightened to move her feet.

One of the men’s eyes narrowed as if affronted at being addressed by a small girl such as her, and his arm tensed. “There is no message yet. However, the Chairman forbade nothing.”

They stared at each other a moment longer. Suddenly, the man sprinted toward the small girl fluidly as a jaguar, brandishing a pistol in one hand and a knife in the other.

The girl stood still though as, with the man’s lunge, time seemed to slow. She watched the gun rise up toward her and, when he had closed half the distance, with a quick crouch and flick of a wrist, the knife she gripped in her hand snapped up and flew toward him. Before he had the pistol pointed at her, the knife caught it in its glide and knocked it free of his hand, the hand jerking up in response. The man’s face twisted and he brought the knife around, but the girl, now in a full crouch, dodged at the last second to the side, a sideways chop of her hand on his wrist knocking the knife free as well. No sooner had she landed then she dove again toward him, her quickness far out-matching the man’s bulk, well-conditioned though it was, and she caught his wrist to pull it behind him, sliding another dagger out from the recesses of her jacket to slash across the back of his knee.

Time suddenly returned to normal and the man collapsed in pain while being pushed chest-first into the ground, the girl holding his wrist tightly and fast behind his back. The man could not recover, and tried to look sideways up into the girl’s face as one grizzled cheek ground against the hard pavement.

“I take it I make myself clear?” she asked the thug, whose struggles were beginning to cease. Soon he became still, only staring at her with his one available eye. He jerked his face slowly in a nod. “Good,” she said, and released him, stepping back quickly. She looked over at the other man, still standing as he was before as if nothing unusual had just happened.

After a moment of capturing her eyes, he gave a glance to the humbled and hobbled man on the ground. “Tsuruda has been a servant of the Council for years,” he said easily. “He did not like the idea of your rise. He thought tradition should be held. He doesn’t understand Japan is adopting a new order.” He brought his eyes back to the girl’s. “Despite my personal feelings, I do understand. Power claims power. You would not have attained the Council’s approval without earning it. I have no desire to become maimed as well.” He now pointedly did not look at his fallen partner.

“Power is nothing,” the girl said, her voice now full only of youth. “I only do what I must, and what I feel I can, in order to help set things right again.”

“As you say, Taisho Tanaka,” the man said automatically with a slight bow of his head.

Reina stood and stared at him while holding her knife with its blood-stained tip pointing upward, her lips pursed in an effort to avoid showing her distaste. “Get your companion out of here,” she ordered finally, kneeling to quickly wipe her knife tip against his coat.

The man came and pulled Tsuruda to his good leg. “We’ll tell the Chairman we ran into some trouble…” he said uncertainly.

“Tell him whatever you want,” Reina replied, her knife stashed once again and her arms crossed, now staring with pursed lips at the girl, who seemed to be attempting to speak. “He knows how things stand here, and he knows he won’t do anything to change it. He could stop wasting the time of people like you, though.” The man just bowed as he pulled the other away down the alley and into the darkness.

“…You’re Reina Tanaka!” the girl squeaked, seeming to be able to find her voice now that the men were gone. Reina ran her eyes up and down the girl, from her well-muscled legs to the outline of her well-filled bra. “Aren’t you supposed to be, like, dead or something?” The girl’s voice held a mix of excitement and nervousness in it, but fear still lingered.

Reina tilted her head. “Why, you must have me confused, Miss. I have no idea who this ‘Reina’ is. Now, shouldn’t you be getting back to wherever you’re going to sleep for the night? I’m hoping it’s your apartment or a hotel room.” After she finished, Reina strode over and tugged the knife from the wall, seemingly giving it a thorough inspection. She heard a squeak from behind her as if the girl had just remembered what Reina just did, and then the sound of her running down toward the alley exit in her heels.

Reina shook her head. Some of these girls would probably end up in the sex business anyway, but she still was not going to let the Chairman do whatever he wanted with them. Memories of hints Ai gave her of what he might do filled her mind and heart, and she stuffed her knife likely harder than she needed to into the sheath on the outside of her skirt. She may not be able to accomplish much, but she could be sure to keep as many girls around here away from his touch as possible.

She turned around and leaned back against the wall, crossing a red-booted foot over the other as she watched the celebrities and starlets begin once again to pass down the alley. Some looked to the sides since they knew something had happened here just moments ago, but she made sure they didn’t notice her in the darkness. She sighed. Well, this place should be free of his filth for the night.

She pulled away from the wall and walked slowly toward the center of the alley and into the light so she wouldn’t be noticed as out of the usual. Once there, she strode the opposite direction of most, her eyes staring ahead at the door to Maniacal Love, though her awareness spread much farther.

Once there, she opened the door to the sound of tonight’s band blaring out, walking past the doorkeeper as if not noticing him, though he gave her a low bow. Fortunately seeing nobody near, she calmly ducked to the side and pulled open a nondescript door. Once within, she passed down the hall just the other side of the first floor lounge’s wall until she reached a window out into the lounge itself. She stopped in front of it and crossed her arms, gazing out at the entertainers who were trying their best to entertain themselves tonight… as well as anyone they were lucky to get acquainted with. None of them noticed her watching, of course. She’d never really known it before, but one-way mirrors were incredible things.

“I heard there was a little trouble outside, Mistress Tanaka?” a man with an oily voice queried from beside her as he arrived at the window as well.

“There won’t be any further worry for you, Yamada,” she replied, not bothering to look at him. She hadn’t liked the man before she learned that, in her new position, she was actually his superior, and now his sleek and oily manner, which before was manufactured politeness toward her as a customer, now reeked of questionably motivated eagerness to please. He knew whom she now represented, though he still did not seem thrilled about working at the discretion of a seventeen-year-old girl. She made the distinction quite clear, however.

“I’m very happy to hear you say that, Mistress Reina,” he praised. “But…”

She turned to him quickly and narrowed her eyes, causing him to break off his speech and begin bowing repeatedly. “If I say there’s no need to worry, Yamada-san,” she said with a smile and the sweetest voice she could muster, “Please believe me, there is no need to worry.”

“Yes,” he responded, still bowing. “Of course, Mistress Reina.” He backed away bowing as if he wanted to be somewhere else as quickly as possible, but stopped himself short apparently finding better judgment. “Would you like something to drink?” he offered, as if getting her something was the last thing he wanted to do. Still, he hid it well. The man wasn’t too much of an idiot, after all. Otherwise, Reina could not have used him.

“No,” she said dismissively, turning back to the window. She then only heard his shuffling as he let her be.

She had to have someone who knew what he was doing running this place. It had been a few weeks since she and Ai returned to Tokyo, and at first she hadn’t known what to do. For all of Ai’s talk about the work she needed help with, there seemed to be very little Reina actually needed to do. Ai arranged meetings with apparent contacts from high in the organization, for what purpose Reina could only guess, leaving her to fend for herself the majority of the time, which usually involved training.

After nearly a week, Reina seriously considered returning to Morning Musume when they were scheduled to return to Tokyo as well. Aside from feeling otherwise useless, she began to miss performing, as well as the girls she had come to be close with. Even though Eri and Risa had upset and betrayed her, with the time apart she found that she really did miss them. She even missed Sayu, though she wasn’t sure if she’d go as far as Koharu as well. The girl knew most everything about her anyway, so she had a feeling of all of them, she was the one most likely to show up soon.

However, an article in Friday on that very day changed everything. She was expecting it of course, but seeing it still came as a shock – in that issue, the magazine reported that “Tanaka Reina and Takahashi Ai of Morning Musume” had gone missing and were presumed dead. It even had interviews with Tsunku, expressing regret and seeming to imply that they didn’t have much hope of finding the two girls alive. After that article the story exploded in the national news, with police soon saying they had no leads and would close the investigation. That seemed quite soon to Reina, but she had a feeling from some of the looks Ai gave her that she and the Council had something to do with the investigation’s brevity.

She could still have returned of course, but reading what all the papers said, she felt that she would never be able to handle the shame of returning after all of it and having to explain it away some way or another. Plus, it was soon after that she discovered exactly what her new standing meant, and she realized that she carried quite a large amount of influence around the city. Members of the organization owned a large part of businesses both here and across Japan, and she apparently had a high enough ranking that they were forced to listen to her. Of course some, like Tsuruda from the alley just minutes ago, wouldn’t listen until she proved she deserved the ranking. Her reputation was growing though, and that led her to embark on some ventures of her own – one being the Maniacal Love. She instituted, with Yamada and others’ advice, some new policies that seemed to her a bit more… ethical. She was amazed at how ingrained in the underworld this place was.

Once Kobe received word of some of the changes she’d made, she had a few run-ins with men like Tsuruda. The Chairman was very proud of his girls, after all. She was having none of it though, and with the surprisingly increased profitability she managed to obtain, the Chairman couldn’t overtly subdue her without looking like a sulky fool himself. Reina smiled at that image. He might not like some of the things she’d done, but had apparently developed an outward respect for her management. As long as he didn’t realize he should be watching her even more closely…

That brought her thoughts back to Ai. She bit her lip, regretting now not requesting a drink from Yamada. Well, there was no way the man would return anytime soon now. She still wasn’t sure whether she hated or loved the girl, but she kept finding herself working with her toward whatever aims she had. Reina hated the fact that Ai was responsible for Miki’s death and had also ordered her to kill Aya, but whenever Reina looked into those hard dark eyes she saw a girl not unlike herself who was dragged into her new career kicking and screaming, even though Reina still didn’t know how or why. She decided it must have had something to do with Miki by the way the girl talked about her, but the specifics she could only wonder at.

As the weeks back in Tokyo passed however, the two girls seemed to be “working together” less and less. Ai kept having her meetings and doing other things that Reina could only guess at, while Reina had been trying out her new authority at places like the Maniacal Love and just practicing her newfound skills. She was rather surprised over how successful she’d been, but perhaps that was why anyone else seemed to be leaving her alone for the most part. The few chances she was able to see Ai, the girl had nothing but smiles for her, but for the most part, nothing very exciting was happening beyond her occasional tussles with men sent by Yamagata.

A face from the other side of the lounge caught her attention, and her mind cleared as she stared on at three girls entering the lounge from the second-floor stairwell. Eri, Risa and Sayu were laughing, though in what Reina thought was a somewhat subdued manner, and they were red-faced as if they’d either just been dancing hard or drinking hard. Reina didn’t think she particularly wanted to know which. As they crossed toward the door and closer to Reina’s window chatting away, Eri paused for a moment and looked directly over at Reina. Reina’s breath caught, though there was of course no way the girl could see her through the mirror. Risa and Sayu walked on a few steps before realizing their companion had fallen behind and stopping their chatting, coming back to pull the turtle girl along, Risa telling her something with a laugh while giving an amused glance over at the mirror herself. They succeeded in pulling a now somewhat pouty Eri away, but the girl kept staring toward Reina a moment before turning back around to join her friends.

Reina let out the breath she held since first staring into the girl’s eyes and watched after them as they headed out the front door. Apparently they weren’t into subtlety tonight. Waiting a few minutes after seeing the girls leave, she tightened her jacket slightly and left out the back door herself, keeping to the shadows while passing through the alley. Nobody paid any attention to her of course – what people did in this alley was nobody’s business but her own – and once out beside the motel she approached a dark sedan and smoothly entered the back seat.

“Where to, Tanaka-san?” the driver asked, stealing a last sip of coffee before setting it down and starting the car.

“Take me home, Daisuke-kun,” she told him in a warm voice.

“Yes, ma’am,” he responded politely and cheerfully, and pulled out into the road. Once again smiling at the boy’s politeness, she looked out her window at the brilliant lights of the city as she rode down the still-busy late-night Tokyo streets. Yes, life had become rather quiet lately. But, still smiling, she didn’t think she really minded all too much.

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« Reply #116 on: February 10, 2007, 06:35:18 AM »
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“Where to, Tanaka-san?” the driver asked, stealing a last sip of coffee before setting it down and starting the car.

“Take me home, Daisuke-kun,”
Daisuke? As in, the intern from the photoshoot and Miki's funeral? He knows about Reina? :shocked:

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« Reply #117 on: February 10, 2007, 04:38:57 PM »
Ah, good to see Reina is seemingly comfortable with her job. However, I could definitely tell that although her performance was grand, her spirit in doing so was not because she misses home (Of course, the camaderie of Morning Musume) ;_;...

Don't worry Reina! You'll return home soon!

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« Reply #118 on: February 11, 2007, 01:12:20 PM »
^Yeah I hope Reina gets to go back too!  However I'm still praying that everyone..erm everyone remaining gets to make it out alive in the end!  *thinks back to the last story...*sniffles*  

but since there's more to come before the ending I hope Eri finds her way to Reina!  Even though Reina has Ai and Daisuke near by, it's just not the same XD

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« Reply #119 on: February 11, 2007, 04:15:14 PM »
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^Yeah I hope Reina gets to go back too!  However I'm still praying that everyone..erm everyone remaining gets to make it out alive in the end!  *thinks back to the last story...*sniffles*  


Yes they can't die, not anyone of them *begs* But I wonder how are Ai and Reina can return to MM with that article.

PS: Reina's so cool in her new "job". Total kickass :yay:

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