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« Reply #20 on: December 31, 2006, 11:09:52 PM »
“That’s the stupidest thing I have ever heard come from your mouth.” Miki said after she finally stopped laughing.

Maki sighed, “It might be stupid, but it’s damn true.”

“Okay, okay.” Miki said, laying down on the dry side of her bed. “Well, I would like to see this story thing of hers…Did she seriously write a fanfic about you?” Miki coughed to hide her laugh.

“Yes, she did.” Maki said, still not sure what to think about that, “And how? Break into her room?”

“Of course.” Miki said as if there was no more explaining to it.

“Are you nuts? Just break into her room, that’s a great idea.” Maki said, a sarcastic tone lingering with her words.

“Tomorrow, while we’re at dance practice. You have the day off, just go in then. She always has her door unlocked, so it shouldn’t be a problem.” Miki said, sitting back up.

[Reina’s Room]

“Are you serious?” Reina asked, her eyes widened slightly, “That’s creepy!”

“Yeah! I swear it’s true!” Eri said, nodding.

“Wow, for now on, I’m locking my door.”

[Miki’s Room]

Maki thought for a moment. “Fine. Sneak in, photocopy the papers, get out.”

“I like it. Simple, easy to remember.” Miki said, quoting her new favorite foreign film.

“Yes, very.” Maki said, standing up and stretching. “And don’t talk to her about it or suck her dry or I’ll kill you.”

“Yup yup. Don’t suck her dry until after your date with her, right?”

Maki rolled her eyes, “It’s not a date. But, I’m out of here before I choose to seriously hurt you.” she said simply and walked out the door.

“You know I could kick your ass!” Miki called out as Maki shut the door.

“Ugh, that girl.” Maki groaned, walking down the hall.

Soon enough, she was out of the Morning Musume apartments and walking through a nearby park, her little shortcut to her own apartment. With dark sunglasses and a hat on, she was glad that nobody would recognize her, the last thing she wanted tonight was attention.

The idea of Reina knowing her secret ruined her appetite for the night, the fresh air was rather nice though.

Your date is in two days, you should go out and buy something sexy.

Maki blinked for a moment, and shook her head.

You know you want to…

Maki rolled her eyes at this.

Get out of my head, you’re bad enough in person, Miki. And why the hell you do want me to buy sexy clothes!?

Miki’s evil little laugh echoed through Maki’s head.

Ah, but you just told me to go away, so sucks for you.

With that, the voice left Maki’s mind, which caused her to curse out loud.

“She is so friggin’ difficult and perverted!” the soloist growled, unlocking her apartment door and walking in. She kicked her shoes off and soon made her way to the couch with a bowl of chocolate ice cream.

[Many Bowls of Ice Cream Later]

Maki felt her eyes grow heavy and she found herself re-reading the same line for the sixth time in the book she had. Yet she didn’t remember any of the things she read thanks to a certain wonky-eyed teenager making Maki worry her head off. Finally, she gave up and decided that sleep was a better option.

She slipped off her jeans and practically collapsed into her bed and pulling the covers over herself.

I should get some sleep, if I lose sleep now I’ll look terrible on Friday for my date-- What the hell!? Damnit Miki! You even got me thinking it’s a date!

After a few minutes of mentally fighting with herself, Maki fell asleep, hoping tomorrow would be a better day.

[The Next Morning]

That buzzing was going to drive her nuts, but Maki was far too tired to move her hand a whole five inches to turn it off.

Buzz. Buzz. Buzz.

“God damnit!” Maki slammed down on the alarm clock, causing it to make a weird noise before complete silence. She sat up, and looked over at what was left of her clock. The red numbers glared “10:55”

Wow, did I really ignore my alarm clock for almost an hour?

She rolled out of bed, and eventually was decent and walking out the door. (More or less, she was running considering she was having a late start for her little “Break into an Idol’s Room” plan.)

Playing a part in Pinch Runner came in handy at times like these, she bolted from her apartment to the Morning Musume apartments in a record time of three minutes, and it was a fifteen minute jog there. Although she was out of breath, Maki was back on schedule.

“You have to be shittin’ me…” Maki said, glaring at the elevator door which had a paper reading “Out of order.” across it. “I just ran the whole friggin’ way here, and now I have to climb four flights of stairs?”

And so Maki climbed the four flights of stairs, complaining the entire time to herself, but she still did it.

“Okay, nothing can go wrong from here.” Maki said, taking in a deep breath as she stopped at Reina’s door. She put her hand on the handle, starting to turn it.

Locked.

“What the hell!?” Maki yelled in frustration, then realizing that she shouldn’t be yelling at a time like this.

She let out a very stressed sigh, “Well, only one thing to do.” she said to herself, walking down the dreaded stairs.

She walked outside and around to the side of the building. “Okay, this shouldn’t be so hard.” She looked up, finding the window that lead to Reina’s room. “Damn…That’s really high.” She climbed up onto the set of emergency stairs and while clinging to the railing for her life, she walked up to Reina’s window and opened it. Yet, for some unknown reason, which Maki believes to be the gods revenging her for stealing lunch money from kids in fourth grade, the window only opened up half way. It wouldn’t budge any more than that.

Maki wanted to yell many things an idol should not yell as she tried to fit through that window, yet her upper body was stuck, thanks to the area many perverts loved on Maki Goto so damn much.

A good ten minutes passed before she managed to squeeze herself through the small window and send herself  face first into the floor.

“Ouch…” Maki groaned as she stood up, rubbing her nose. “At least I got in here…”

She looked around the room, and quickly walked over to Reina’s laptop and desk. “Where did all the papers go?” She sighed, realizing that she did not have enough time to search “It’ll take way too long to find all this, she might not notice if I just print it here, right?”

She opened up Reina’s laptop and turned it on, once the welcome screen popped up, so did a box asking for a password.

“Damnit…” Maki growled, “Hmm…Okay we’ll start off simple: Tanaka Reina.”

Wrong.

“11111989?”

Wrong.

“Why isn’t there a hint box? Erm…Purple Kittens?”

Wrong.

A good forty-five minutes passed before she got it right, which she was amazed enough she did before throwing the computer out the window.

“Of course it was Yakiniku…” Maki mumbled to herself as she opened searched Reina’s computer for the story.

“Okay, search: all files and folders. Keyword: Maki Goto.” Maki said as she typed, for some reason she had a weird knack of saying what she was typing. “Enter.”

“…”

After sorting out what wasn’t the story and just pictures or videos and commenting on Reina’s good taste in what pictures she had of Maki on her computer, she finally found it.

“…”

“Holy hell! Forty-eight chapters!? God…Better start printing now.” She pressed print and papers were starting to print from the small printer on the floor.

Maki sat back in the chair and put her hands behind her head. All was finally starting to work out according to plan.

Ah, just minutes away from everything being printed off and then I can shove the stack of paper up Miki’s ass and prove to her I wasn’t being stupid.

The last paper printed and Maki picked up the stack, “Now just to get out of --”

The door unlocked and someone was coming in.

Oh gahh!  Maki closed the laptop and ran to the closest hiding spot: Reina’s closet. Did two hours seriously pass already!?

Reina walked into her room, “Ugh, I hate dance practices so early…I could still be sleeping.”

She plopped down on her computer chair and opened up her laptop, “Hmm…I thought I shut it down. Wow, shows how much I pay attention.”

Maki shifted so she was now sitting in a more comfortable position, she had a feeling that it would be a while before she had a chance to leave.

An hour passed by, and Reina rested her head on her desk, “I just don’t know what I should put for it…” she mumbled to herself, unaware that Maki was listening. “Just having it be a normal climbing accident would make it seem unreal in her case…But what should I put? Damnit, I hate writers block.”

Maki blinked as she pulled her knees to her chest, recalling that accident. So she was making it all up from her mind…

Reina stood up and walked over to her dresser, pulling out a pair of pajamas. Maki was grateful that Reina didn’t keep her clothes in her closet.

As Reina dressed, Maki turned her head away…But found herself looking through the corner of her eye.

Goto! What the hell are you thinking!?

Maki mentally kicked herself and looked away once again.

A tune started to play from Reina’s jeans on the floor, Maki recognized it as a Flame song, yet she didn’t know which one. Maki looked once again.

Reina picked up the cell phone and placed her pajamas on her bed, “Hello? …What do you want? …Oh just shut-up.” Reina sounded horribly annoyed, “…Fujimoto, I have no clue how you found out about Friday, and if you say the anything on the lines of “Reina, you should go out shopping for something sexy” I’ll kill you.”

Maki made a mental note to smack Miki next time she saw her, but then continued to listen.
Reina paused for a moment, and her free hand was clenched.

Wow, Reina can look like she could kick anyone‘s ass when she is pissed like that…Even if she is in her bra and panties.

“No, I don’t care that you’re my sub-leader!” Reina growled, “…You have no rights to be butting into my personal life!”

Maki nodded even though she knew Reina couldn‘t see her. Miki did sometimes love to place herself into other peoples business.

Apparently Reina and Miki got into some form of an argument about “respecting your superiors” and the phone call lasted a good hour before Reina hung up on the sub-leader.

“That girl is difficult and perverted…” Reina mumbled, starting to change into her pajamas again.

Maki let out a quiet sigh, at this moment, all she wanted to do was get out of here. She rested her head on her knees and closed her eyes.

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Maki lifted her head, realizing she had fallen asleep.

How long have I been asleep for? Minutes? Hours?

She peered out the closet door, everything was dark. She must of slept a while. Slowly, making sure that she made no noise, she peeked her head out of the door to see Reina’s bed.

A lump was under neither the covers, hopefully asleep. Maki slowly walked out of the closet, making as little noise as possible.

Before she walked out of Reina’s room, she slowly crept over to her bed. For some weird reason, she just wanted to see Reina.

Reina was laying peacefully in bed, her hair was down and slightly messy, she was laying on her side and Maki thought she looked simply beautiful with the moon’s light reflecting on her skin.

Maki set the papers on Reina’s bedside table carefully, and just sat on the edge of the bed. She smiled, the girl looked so peaceful while she was sleeping, it was almost contagious because Maki seemed to grow calm as well. She pushed aside Reina’s bangs and lightly kissed her forehead before starting to get up.

Yet something stopped her.

Maki found herself being held around the waist by Reina, who was still sleeping, as if she was a giant teddy bear. Maki tried to pry herself away, but ended up laying in the bed next to Reina somehow. From that moment on, Maki would never underestimate the strength of a sleeping girl again.

What the hell am I supposed to do?

It was rather comfortable though. Maki figured if she just stayed put for a moment or two, Reina would eventually let go. She closed her eyes for a second before she heard realized that she was pulled slightly closer to Reina.

Maki smiled. I wish I could capture this picture.

“Maki-san…” Reina mumbled lightly in her sleep, which automatically caught Maki’s attention, but before she could think more on the subject she felt Reina’s lips lightly, barely press against her own for just a brief moment.

Maki blushed and felt Reina’s hug loosen, Maki had her chance to leave. Yet, almost had to force herself up. She didn’t want to leave this peaceful zone, something made her want to stay with Reina.

After getting out of the bed, Maki felt rather cold. She quietly grabbed the papers and walked out of the room.

“Sweet dreams.” Maki whispered before closing the door behind her.
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« Reply #21 on: December 31, 2006, 11:14:09 PM »
AWWWWWWWWWW~!

The last moment turned my insides into pure sugar <3

Jee, I wonder how Maki's going to feel the next time she sees Reina >:]

Write more m'dear cousin~!

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« Reply #22 on: January 01, 2007, 12:11:25 AM »
Ooooo! Sleep Hugging. I remember a good moment of that in my life that made me smack my brother. Freakin' great story. Maki falling asleep everywhere, and beating the crap out of her alarm clock ^^
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« Reply #23 on: January 01, 2007, 01:33:18 AM »
This is getting really good, good job

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« Reply #24 on: January 01, 2007, 06:16:45 AM »
Lol, not many people really know what to say to something like that. Sweet chapter, Maki/Reina grew on me with Yuuyami's fic, you're just elevating it upwards.

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« Reply #25 on: January 01, 2007, 06:35:14 AM »
Miki calling Reina when she was in her undies. Talk about great timing! :ONkekeke:

How does Miki know about Maki's secret? Is she *gasp* one too? :ONstoned:

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Maki set the papers on Reina’s bedside table carefully, and just sat on the edge of the bed. She smiled, the girl looked so peaceful while she was sleeping, it was almost contagious because Maki seemed to grow calm as well. She pushed aside Reina’s bangs and lightly kissed her forehead before starting to get up.

Yet something stopped her.

Maki found herself being held around the waste by Reina, who was still sleeping, as if she was a giant teddy bear. Maki tried to pry herself away, but ended up laying in the bed next to Reina somehow. From that moment on, Maki would never underestimate the strength of a sleeping girl again.

What the hell am I supposed to do?

It was rather comfortable though. Maki figured if she just stayed put for a moment or two, Reina would eventually let go. She closed her eyes for a second before she heard realized that she was pulled slightly closer to Reina.

Maki smiled. I wish I could capture this picture.


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« Reply #26 on: January 01, 2007, 08:52:07 AM »
Damn, that last bit made me need a dentist. :)

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Maki wanted to yell many things an idol should not yell as she tried to fit through that window, yet her upper body was stuck, thanks to the area many perverts loved on Maki Goto so damn much.
I say again...HOT DAMN! :lol:

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« Reply #27 on: January 01, 2007, 11:09:18 AM »
Ok, I'll let myself be sappy now: That description you gave of Reina sleeping was very well done. Very beautiful. Everything after it was both lovely and sexy. Sappy mode off!

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« Reply #28 on: January 01, 2007, 05:33:02 PM »
Ah, the movie I was referring to isn't even released yet or anything, but I remember seeing a preview at the theatre a few weeks ago . . . ^^; I can't even remember the name of it, but this woman writes about his real life, and whatever she writes, he has to do it. It sort of reminded me of this, since Reina is writing real events, but is unaware of it. xD

I'm assuming Miki is a vampire, too? Cool! Also, the cuddle scene was excellent!

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« Reply #29 on: January 02, 2007, 05:54:46 PM »
That was the best damn chapter ever!!!!! I laughed so hard. I started giggling to myself and my friends thought I was going crazy! I love how it started out and I absolutely LOVE Maki and her adventures. But the last little bit made me melt. So amazing. I'm still in awe and I read a day ago....

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« Reply #30 on: January 03, 2007, 09:01:09 AM »
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Ah, the movie I was referring to isn't even released yet or anything, but I remember seeing a preview at the theatre a few weeks ago . . . ^^; I can't even remember the name of it, but this woman writes about his real life, and whatever she writes, he has to do it. It sort of reminded me of this, since Reina is writing real events, but is unaware of it. xD


Ah I remember seeing the trailer for that movie too!  LOL let's just hope that Reina isn't trying to kill off the main character then XD

and wah Miki's a vamp too!  Maki should have just used her telekinesis powers and asked Miki to cause a diversion so Maki could leave but then again we all know Maki didn't really want to leave ;)

anyways I'm have fun reading this so can't wait for more :D

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« Reply #31 on: January 04, 2007, 02:25:11 AM »
The movie you guys are talking about is "Stranger Than Fiction" ^_^ I wanna see this!

Anyway, I really laughed at Miki being able to use telepathy with MAki... this totally makes me think Miki is a vampire, haha. XD I love Miki's advice... because thats exactly the advice me and my friends use!

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« Reply #32 on: January 04, 2007, 02:34:56 AM »
Were they actually communicating telepathically, or was Maki just doing a "what would Miki say" type thing?

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« Reply #33 on: January 05, 2007, 01:21:54 AM »
Yuuyami: Mmm, sugary insides. Yummy XD

Rei.rev.07: XD Sorry for the long wait!

Tanachan: Yup, gotta love abusing an alarmclock <3

Pepto Bismol: Thank you. ^^-

rndmnwierd: ReinaxMaki = :heart:

wordsworth: It's Miki, of course she has timing like that. XD And yup, Miki's one too. :D

JFC: XD hawt damn it is then. Oh, and Maki and Miki were talking telepathically.

glcorps2002: aww, your sappy mode was nice ^^-

black velvet: I'll have to check out that movie some time ^^;; Ah yes, I loved the cuddle scene too <3

YoukaiChica: I'm really glad you liked it so much. :D

Sukoshi: Ah, another hears about the movie. And of course Maki didn't want her to. ;D But another reason is told in this chapter. :D

Owaranai_sLaVe: Yay -searches for the movie- thanks :D And that's how my friends are too. ^^- basically thats where I get a lot of ideas.
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« Reply #34 on: January 05, 2007, 01:25:17 AM »
When Maki reached Miki’s room, the Groping Devil was sleeping soundly. Maki didn’t dare wake her up, God forbid waking Miki up twice in the same day. It was suicide. So, Maki simply stuck a pink sticky note to Miki’s forehead, explaining that she was going to stop by Friday morning to tell her everything. (She had work the next day.)

[Friday Morning]

Maki slowly got up and walked into her bathroom, starting to brush her teeth. She looked in the mirror and noticed a small spot of dried blood from the side of her mouth.

“Ah, missed a spot.” she said, wiping it away with a wet cloth, “I guess I was so tired when I got home I barely cared to clean up.”

Just as Maki finished brushing her hair, her cell phone ran. “Most likely Miki wondering where the hell I am…” Maki mumbled, picking up her phone.

“Hello?”

“Hi Goto Senpai. Might I ask, what were you doing two nights ago?” To Maki’s surprise, it wasn’t Miki on the other line, but Eri.

“Erm, just at my apartment. Why? And umm…How’d you get this number?”

“I have everyone’s number in Hello! Project, that’s all.” Eri replied cheerfully, “Well, I was just wondering, because I had this weird dream two nights ago that you snuck into Reina-chan’s room and almost got caught but hid in her closet until she fell asleep. I just figured I should make sure it didn’t really happen or anything. I was going to call yesterday, but you had work.”

Maki’s eyes widened, “Ah…You’re so weird Kamei-san.” Maki laughed nervously, “Why on Earth would I do that?”

“I have no clue actually.” Eri said, “Well, that’s all I really wanted to ask. I have to go now. Bye bye Goto Senpai!”  With that, the random turtle hung up.

Maki let out a sigh, “That was messed up beyond all hell.”

[Miki’s Room Later that Day]

“You were stuck…in her closet?” Miki snorted, “Wow, you have been really pathetic lately. Why didn’t you just make an illusion?”

Damnit…I didn’t think of that.

“I didn’t want to risk it. If she can write all this, then why couldn’t she be able to see through an illusion?” Maki pointed out, trying to avoid more embarrassment. She didn’t even dare tell Miki about the kiss.

Although, it had been on her mind all day. Their lips barely touched, yet Maki was going nuts about it.

“Maki-san…” Reina mumbled lightly in her sleep, which automatically caught Maki’s attention, but before she could think more on the subject she felt Reina’s lips lightly, barely press against her own for just a brief moment.

And Reina also said her name right before they kissed, did that mean she liked her? Maki didn’t know what to think. She didn’t hate the kiss, not in the least bit. But was it only because of the fact that she was so shocked about the whole thing and is now confused and actually thinking that she enjoyed the moment? Maki wasn’t a rare name, Reina could of meant anyone when she said the name, not just her.

“Then why didn’t you contact me telepathically, I could of helped.” Miki pointed out, interrupting Maki’s thoughts.

“Yeah, like you would help me. The most you would do was make fun of me and drive me nuts.” Maki replied flatly.

“So? I would of come to your rescue eventually.” Miki said, scanning over the papers again. “Well, she must know something. Everything here is pretty accurate.”

“Not pretty accurate, completely accurate. Everything there is completely true down to the last hair.” Maki sighed, “Not a bit of false information. And I know she is making it up, or at least thinks she is making it up.”

“So she doesn’t know about us at all? Nor our world?”

“I don’t think so.”

“Well then, we’ll just keep it cool and act like everything is okay unless we find out that she does really know.” Miki said, leaning back on her couch.

“Sounds like a good enough plan.” Maki said, standing up, “Now off to go shopping.”

“Have fun. Don’t suffocate anyone with your boobs. And remember, get something sexy!”

Maki threw one of Miki’s shoes at her on her way out the door.

[Reina’s Room at 7:14 PM]

“It’s a five star restaurant?!” Reina exclaimed, her mouth hung open at her friend’s words.

Figures it would be the new five friggin’ star restaurant that I’ve never heard of!

Eri laughed, and put her hand under Reina’s chin, closing her mouth for her. “What, you didn’t know? It’s just opened about a week ago and it’s really nice!”

By the time Eri finished her sentence, the wonky teen was already searching through her drawers. “What the hell am I supposed to wear then?!” Reina threw every article of clothing she had onto the floor, “I don’t have anything nice enough to wear to a place like that!”

Eri carefully removed a pair of black panties with dark purple skulls on them from her head and dropped them on the floor. “Don’t worry about it--”

“How can I NOT worry!?”

Eri grabbed her backpack that she brought along, “Because I know you too well.” she said with a smile, “And I figured that you wouldn’t have something, so I got a dress for you.” she tossed over a dress.

“Eri-chan, you’re a life saver.” Reina said, looking at the dress with a relieved smile. “I’ll be right back, let me try it on.” She walked into the bathroom, soon returning after a few minutes.

“Wow…This sure is something.” Reina said, looking into the mirror. Dark purple always looked great on Reina, considering she wore it all the time, and the dress fit her perfectly. Held up by the spaghetti straps that hung off her shoulders, the dress lightly flowed down her body, tight at the top, and nicely loose from her waist down. It ended at her shins but had a slit in it on her left side ending at the middle of her thigh. It showed off her bare back and her legs quite a bit, which made Reina wonder if Eri had a secret side of her that was horribly good at choosing sexy clothing.

“Ah, it was nothing.” Eri said with a nod, “It’s what friends are supposed to do.”

“But I don’t have any shoes to go with this…” Reina thought out loud.

“Figured that too.” Eri said with a laugh, holding up a pair of black heels with thin straps that went up the wearer’s legs.

Reina laughed, slightly embarrassed, “Well, you know me too well.” She took the shoes and slipped a foot into one.

Although it took several minutes to get the shoes on correctly, they looked great with the dress. Reina turned around in the mirror, “Should I do something with my hair?”

Eri gave her a grin, “Why should you?” she said, “I thought you said it wasn’t a date.”

“It’s not. But that doesn’t mean I can’t look nice.”

“Okay, okay. Whatever works for you.”  she replied, walking over to the door. “I have to go though, promised I’d hang out with Sayu. Good luck.” Eri gave a thumbs up and walked out.

Reina smiled, and walked into her bathroom. “Okay, a half hour ‘till she gets here.” she said, pulling down her hair down.

Man…I sound like I’m desperate…

That half hour went by rather quickly for Reina. Who simply decided to keep her hair down. She sat on her couch, just waiting for Maki. Each second going dreadfully slow.

Finally, a knock was heard from the door. Reina sat up, and almost ran to the door and opened it.

She looks so…Beautiful.
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« Reply #35 on: January 05, 2007, 01:36:04 AM »
"dark black" -giggles-

Anywho, love Reina's franticness, and Eri's secret sense of sexy clothing xD~!

Can't wait to see how this 'date' goes >:]

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« Reply #36 on: January 05, 2007, 02:10:05 AM »
Eri's a psychic!:ONstoned:

And Maki can make illusions!:ONstoned:

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Eri carefully removed a pair of black panties with dark purple skulls on them from her head and dropped them on the floor. “Don’t worry about it--”

Reina has to wear this on her next PB :w00t:
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« Reply #37 on: January 05, 2007, 03:27:52 AM »
Eri is really wierd and suspicious . . . but, I'll forgive her for her cuteness and sexy taste! Rawr! I'm really looking foward to this, er, dinner they're having. (Okay, I'm calling it a date!)

slave: Thanks for clearing up the title! :D Looks like Sukoshi knew what I was talking about as well . . . I didn't know if anyone had heard of it, as I haven't seen a lot of advertising, really.

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« Reply #38 on: January 05, 2007, 03:43:22 AM »
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“Then why didn’t you contact me telepathically, I could of helped.” Miki pointed out, interrupting Maki’s thoughts.

“Yeah, like you would help me. The most you would do was make fun of me and drive me nuts.” Maki replied flatly.

“So? I would of come to your rescue eventually.” Miki said
I loved this part. XD XD XD

And wtf Eri's psychic and doesn't realize it? :o

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« Reply #39 on: January 05, 2007, 03:51:25 AM »
like the whole vampire plot line
and lmao at the interaction that
maki and miki share
and aww at the sweetness between maki and reina

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