Author Topic: Oh The Games We Play (Read 48330 times)

C60533 · « **Reply #62 on:** January 23, 2007, 04:17:49 AM »

LOVING IT :ONluvluv1:!!!! Another update :yay:!!!! -35 degrees Celsisius? :ONshock:!! You really need to think of beaches and the Sun...or the warm feeling you get from reviews :ONglasses:!!! Anyway KEEP IT UP :ONbyebye:

Owaranai_sLaVe · « **Reply #63 on:** January 23, 2007, 06:19:12 AM »

I dont know how the fook i did it, but i somehow missed the chapters on page 3....meaning i skipped page three. good thing i read the sentence of Yossui pacing around in ch. 7 (?) before reading on.

I too love it how you make Miki stick to her real character. So sly...hot... playful...

*wait, waah?*

Anyway, Nice to see such a nice fic. Reminds me of another story (well not the story line, just how things are moving... Dont mind me... I dont make sense often

).

-Owaranai_sLaVe

Mikan · « **Reply #64 on:** January 23, 2007, 10:34:13 AM »

Zzzziing! Thank god! An update! Thats what I needed to cheer me up, thanks!

Hizzah, Yuki/kei -ness. Thats awesome. I wanna know what Kei has to say!! baaah!! I hate it when that happens! People cut you off with something else and you totally forget your train of thought!

Makoto definately seems like Makoto. Yay for that. And Yay for the dialouge! Lol. My mind can only wonder at what she'll do to help Miki with her bet. *imagines Makoto in tight leather. Shiver* Ok well...maybe she wont take that path..but it would be kinda interesting..

You MUST access the perv. Its interesting. I must recommend you the words of Reina's eyes. (no idea if its a guy or a girl) Reina writes about strange topics that.

*phone rings*
Shit, sorry I gotta answer that. I'll harrassing you later

freya86 · « **Reply #65 on:** January 23, 2007, 08:27:17 PM »

I completely agree with Mikan, awesome Yuko/Kei!!! There's not enough of that out there, so you rock for writing 'em

I absolutely love your Risa, btw. She's so adorable. Not that the real Risa is not adorable

Blizzard · « **Reply #66 on:** January 23, 2007, 09:25:08 PM »

Great couples, great storyline, the inclusion of Makoto, and everything makes me so addicted to this! :ONfarofflook:

Everytime I read about Risa running through the hall, I get this mental image of a Chibi-Risa running anime style. Ya know, where the legs are a blur and hands are waving up and down like mad! I always end up laughing like crazy! :ONwahaha:

Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work! :ONluvluv2:

Yuuyami · « **Reply #67 on:** January 23, 2007, 10:51:51 PM »

Oooh, with the addition of Makoto, this will surely be interesting <3

And Risa running around chibi-style is amusing, I should draw that xD

jenmoshka · « **Reply #68 on:** January 23, 2007, 11:11:24 PM »

jenmoshka · « **Reply #69 on:** January 23, 2007, 11:21:42 PM »

freya86 · « **Reply #70 on:** January 23, 2007, 11:37:41 PM »

Quote from: jenmoshka;291220

Chapter Nine
“What’s so important that you went and ruined your credit card over?” Yossui asked as she began to pick up the scattered papers. Miki bent down and helped Yossui as she replied innocently enough, “It’s one of Yasuda-san’s cards, and I wouldn’t ruin my own.”

LMAO ... that's soooo Miki

Great new chapter ... I'm curious how the Rika/Yossi will evolve from now one ... because I LOVE Ishiyoshi!!!

Quote from: jenmoshka;291213

And Yuko/Kei is kind of a given for me, I'm still surprised there isn't more people writing about them, they're fun characters to get into!

It's funny how you say that because just last week I was talking to a friend about "established" couples in H!P, like Ishiyoshi, GAM, and we both mentioned how Yuko/Kei really seems to have moved up there as well ... one of those "given" pairings

katatsumuri · « **Reply #71 on:** January 23, 2007, 11:40:13 PM »

I'm more a ishiyoshi shipper...

so reading this chapter makes me go :ONwriggly:

C60533 · « **Reply #72 on:** January 24, 2007, 12:02:25 AM »

....The situation is slightly similar to something that's happening to one of my friends :ONdepressed: Not exactly the same but similar. Anyway, hoping to see how it turns out.

Yuuyami · « **Reply #73 on:** January 24, 2007, 03:17:18 AM »

Oh dear, torn ><

And it seems that Miki was being serious this time. I like the air of a serious Fujimoto :]

Makes me wonder if Miki's the character you plan on working on the most with character development other than Yossie. I'd like to see Miki's growth over the chapters <3!

-pats hardhat- :]

Blizzard · « **Reply #74 on:** January 24, 2007, 05:58:42 AM »

Just the thought of Yossui getting teary-eyed makes me go "Awwww." :ONcry: I liked the rollercoaster reference, it's quite fitting for the situation. I'm beginning to think there might be a Miki/Rika confrontation looming in the future. Like always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the great work! :ONluvluv2:

Oh, Yuuyami, you already have drawn a Chibi-Risa that's close to that (with the addition of 8 wings, if you get my drift). That's how the initial thought crossed my mind. Then with jenmoshka's descriptions, the rest of it just clicked.

jenmoshka · « **Reply #75 on:** January 24, 2007, 03:33:27 PM »

jenmoshka · « **Reply #76 on:** January 24, 2007, 03:39:48 PM »

Mikan · « **Reply #77 on:** January 24, 2007, 05:00:16 PM »

AHAHA!! I laughed out loud at Miki's bed comment. Well, I thought that she might actually try something on her. Or get some of the other girls to get her while she is drunk. Well, it seems they all have a bit more taste than that. Cool. And Miki seems to be more caring that I origanally thought her out to be. Which I see is kinda cute. I think atm I've O.D'd on Miki/Aya friendships (I spent the last 6-8 hours reading Lovex2) so its nice to hear about the other end of the scale ..a nice...boyish/brotherly yet sexy Yossi/Miki pairing.

Also, Yuko starting the party early? Hahaha. Poor Yossi. And Poor Kei.

yay!! First comment!!

_Hitomi_ · « **Reply #78 on:** January 24, 2007, 05:35:20 PM »

Nice chapter!
Poor Yossi... she's so depressed... but thanks god Miki is here

Miki-Yossi

Yuko and Kei, just perfect!. And Ai... oh Bigmouth Takahashi

Wuffer · « **Reply #79 on:** January 24, 2007, 05:36:50 PM »

For the sake of lurkerlove presented within this thread, I must reply.

I've been doing nothing but lurking for the whole time after registering. xD

For the fic... I don't have any magnificent thing to say. I was a little surprised with Rika's confession of love acouple of chapters back.... It was so sudden. I knew it, of course, who wouldn't love Yossi.

I expected more to happen before, some more insight on Rika's thoughts. This does look like it's more about Yossi and Miki so I guess it's alright to leave Rika with lesser attention.:ONdunno:
Oh, the chapters are too short! xD Well, not always. Anyway, I like this! :ONhee: