Author Topic: Oh The Games We Play (Read 48312 times)

freya86 · « **Reply #80 on:** January 24, 2007, 05:54:00 PM »

I guess I can deal with whatever you have in store for us ... btw, I also love Ishiyoshi II so I wouldn't mind if Rika ended up with Erika

But then of course Miki would have to end up with Yossi, just because you can't leave Yossi all alone ^^

Anyway, great new chapter! How I'd have loved to be at that party!!!!

And bad Yuuchan, leaving your own party early *tststs*

Yuuyami · « **Reply #81 on:** January 24, 2007, 08:02:58 PM »

Aww, Miki <3

Rika knowing of the bet, eh? Makes me wonder if she's going to join in on the fun or try to stop the game, or even realize the reasons why Yossie refused to touch her/Yossie locking herself in her room was mostly due to the game.

Gahh, I hope Rika clears up her mind o_o;

Yossie too.

And gahh damn I can't wait until Miki realizes how nicer she got and her true feelings~! <3

Owaranai_sLaVe · « **Reply #82 on:** January 24, 2007, 10:54:22 PM »

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“This is not how I imagined I’d get you in bed, Yossui.” Miki laughed aloud to herself as she rolled herself out of bed and went into the bathroom.

I was LOL'd by that one

Also, the credit card thing.

The last line of Ch. 9 is so... ugh, cant even describe it. Atleast Miki had the heart to turn away while Yossui was crying. Then again, I guess its beacuse both of them are so strong that they dont like to know someone is crying, or crying themselves. Love that.

hmmm, MM girls dancing... and drunk. Ive always wondered how they looked like dancing to songs that weren't in H!P, just normal party/club dancing.... I just laugh at the image of Yossui dancing The Peace and drunk.
Damn that Rika! Oh well, even thought you've been a bitch in all the fanfics, I still love you

I hope Miki and Yossui end up together in this story. I think that Miki has always liked Yossui and just used this stupid bet to get closer to her and tried to make it innocent while Yossui was still vulnerble. I dont see Rika and Yossui ending up anymore after that last chapter... nope, still had hope in ch.9 though... Oh well, I really thing Miki deserves the ever oblivious Yossui (I still think Yossui is oblivious that shes a pimp sometimes....)

-Owaranai_sLaVe

C60533 · « **Reply #83 on:** January 24, 2007, 11:47:26 PM »

Quote from: jenmoshka;291924

“This is not how I imagined I’d get you in bed, Yossui.” Miki laughed aloud to herself as she rolled herself out of bed and went into the bathroom.

But you were still imagining that eh :ONglasses:
“Bet…what bet?” Rika looked at Ai, puzzled.[/QUOTE]
Risa...weren't you the one who decided to help Miki in the first place :ONsweat:

You have Risa and Ai as the only official couple so far? What bout the tortoise and the hare? Seriously, you have go to keep this fic up. If you went on a hiatus I would probably :ONtemper:

len.chan · « **Reply #84 on:** January 25, 2007, 12:30:58 AM »

uohoho... I wanna know Rika's reaction when she'll know about the bet

and about Miki... Love is in the aiiir ~ XDXD

Quote from: C60533

If you went on a hiatus I would probably:ONtemper:

I second that

JFC · « **Reply #85 on:** January 25, 2007, 03:53:52 AM »

Damn, that scene could've really turned ugly with Yossi being as smashed as she was. Good thing Miki seems to be able to hold her booze better.

I just hope Yossi didn't end up puking in Miki's bed.

Rika now knows about the bet.

Way to go Aichan.

When you think about it, maybe now Rika will help Yossi win by getting Viyuden to seductively/endlessly pester Miki. This could be gooooooooooooooood.

jenmoshka · « **Reply #86 on:** January 25, 2007, 05:16:34 AM »

jenmoshka · « **Reply #87 on:** January 25, 2007, 05:21:41 AM »

Owaranai_sLaVe · « **Reply #88 on:** January 25, 2007, 06:18:56 AM »

OMG

This is like... crack. At first I thought Rika was mad in the beginning beacuse she came from Miki's room and they probably did it. But towards the last, it was obvious she was trying to mess with her. I thought though, that she was gonna be pissed enough into seducing her so she could loose the bet, then have no one at all. hahaha, thats ebil. (evil).

Ah short rewrites are better than the whole thing! I have long chapters... and my recent one.. ugh, I rewrote the whole dame thing when i started. IT took me like 3 days to do the first two pages. My head hurt that much. But its good to know writers that care that much

I dont even know why i pictured Drunk The Peace dance ... it's way too late for me to be staying up at times....
Hell yeah, heartbraker! But it wasnt supposed to be in a bitchy way

. More like she rejects everyone *cept Yossui and Miki*. Yes, thats how I like it, in threes

-Owaranai_sLaVe

Blizzard · « **Reply #89 on:** January 25, 2007, 06:43:30 AM »

:ONshock: OMG! Poor Yossui! I wonder what Miki's gonna do about that. And then there's Yuko and Kei, on a roof, naked... :ONerr: Um, weirder things have happened? lol

Slave is right, this is like crack. I'm totally addicted. It's awesome that you update so frequently! Looking forward to the next fix! Keep up the great work! :ONluvluv2:

Hiatuslacuna · « **Reply #90 on:** January 25, 2007, 07:34:52 AM »

Well Slave showed me this and well... Crack, yes... Its the only word for it.

It took a sec to get off the ground... But DAMN. I'm so wondering where you're going with this.

Perhaps an Evil Rika? Our for Miki's blood..

Slave will keep me posted when the next chapter pops up.

Glad to see the a fellow Canuck can write such a good story. Keep up the good work.

freya86 · « **Reply #91 on:** January 25, 2007, 08:38:56 AM »

Quote from: Blizzard;292669

And then there's Yuko and Kei, on a roof, naked... :ONerr: Um, weirder things have happened? lol

*rofl* @ Blizzard's comment

Waaa, Rika is so complicated!!!! But I still feel bad for her. And for Yossi

MyDearYossi · « **Reply #92 on:** January 25, 2007, 11:34:56 AM »

OMG! Rika slapped Yossi:ONshock:
Damn you, Ishikawa:ONgrr:

arina_shinh · « **Reply #93 on:** January 25, 2007, 02:16:13 PM »

new reader!! *waves*
I love the last scene... kinda hard to imagine Rika being that mad and Yossie cying but hey, you really make me believe that's what happen....

I.ALMOST.CRY.

Mikan · « **Reply #94 on:** January 25, 2007, 02:27:16 PM »

Yes, another intriging chapter. And now for my comment!!

Blizzard said it all. For the Yuko/Kei moment. Lol. Ah...The good times.

Rika/Yossui moment. Wow. I expected Rika to get all shitty over Yossui being at Miki's house. I thought it was going to turn into a 'They must have slept together so Im not going to listen or ask for an explanation' moment but no, Rika did the thing I probably would have done if I were riddled with guilt - she went to get Yossui back.

I was sitting there wondering if Yossui was going to cast aside the bet and embrace Rika but no, that would mean an early end to the story. (If you were hoping for that, you just missed your window

).

I like Miki as this caring character. We hardly see that. You see her standing up for herself or her being a Yankee or a pervert or a love sick goof but not this Miki. Yes, I know I must sound like a fool going on and on about something so trivial but thats just the way I am. I guess I care so much about the characters persona because that is the thing that leads the story. 'Dont judge a book by it's cover. Judge it by the characters'.

Moving on.

The slap? Shizzam! Love some heated arguements.

That and I see Rika as a bit of a Hot/Cold Bitch (I blame Len for this way of thinking).

Moving on further.
Are you gonna make a cover? Hahaha...sorry...it was floating around in my mind and I wondered if you might...

len.chan · « **Reply #95 on:** January 25, 2007, 04:03:29 PM »

^ hey, It's not my fault if you think that way of Rika, Mikan. She had already that 'bitchy' aure, I've just develope it XDXD come on.. no one can be so 'charmy' and don't have a dark side

stefy · « **Reply #96 on:** January 25, 2007, 04:11:39 PM »

woahh.... this is gonna be addictive for me... Rika slapped Yossi!!! I'm suprised Yossi was calm though out the fight, I'll bet she went over to Miki's after that.

jenmoshka · « **Reply #97 on:** January 25, 2007, 09:42:24 PM »

jenmoshka · « **Reply #98 on:** January 25, 2007, 09:45:41 PM »

C60533 · « **Reply #99 on:** January 26, 2007, 12:04:54 AM »

Yuko........Kei.....roof........:ONhehehe: And RIKA!!! This is my reaction in order :ONshock: :ONgrr: :ONangry1: :9bbc76d5: and thanks to your last chapter :ONfrustrated: SO MUCH DRAMA!!! Though I must say these are quite better than the soap operas I was forced to watch one summer :evil: Eh? Hope you aren't overloaded w/ work...mind if I ask what you do? Still...write more :ONhee: