Author Topic: Oh The Games We Play (Read 48374 times)

freya86 · « **Reply #201 on:** February 22, 2007, 11:07:14 AM »

Waaaa, I didn't even get around to commenting on the last chapter and now the new one's already out! Damn, that happens when you're stuck with writing papers for university *grr*

Anyway, I'm glad you solved the Rika/Erika thing. I'm sort of glad that it went this way, because I'd hate to see Erika turn into a jealous bitch. So, thumbs up

But there will be a RikaMiki confrontation and it's going to be bitchy all the way. That's something I can deal with

Also, Yuko/Kei is always FTW, so yay yay yay for my favorite couple

stefy · « **Reply #202 on:** February 22, 2007, 12:13:12 PM »

Yossi isn't in love with Miki?... not yet? aww she still has Rika in her heart yay~ (assumptions only)... But then after what Rika did, I'm not sure anymore... Your making me confused!! and poor Yossi, she's drowning her sorrows in alcohol. Wonder who answered the phone... drunk Yossi? Nakazawa-san? or Kei-chan? Anyways nice chapter!

Blizzard · « **Reply #203 on:** February 22, 2007, 09:46:51 PM »

I laughed so hard when we found out it was Kei's credit card that Yuko was using! It figures though!

I'm actually glad to see that Yossui isn't in love with Miki yet. It's only been 10 days (thanks for the count, jen) since things really started to escalate. It hasn't even been that long since Rika slapped Yossui. It would just be moving too fast if she was already totally over Rika and heads over heals for Miki. We've got plenty of time left for that to happen and plenty more story to come (I hope)!

Like always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter (I want to know what Miki left for Yossui)! Keep up the great work!

MyDearYossi · « **Reply #204 on:** February 22, 2007, 11:01:44 PM »

Yossi is just confused. She doesn't know who she is in love withXD But she will realize that Miki is the one she loves, or that's what I hope:ONhee:

Can't wait to read what Miki left to Yossi. New pictures of herself?

And I'm also looking forward to what Rika is going to say to Yossi.

JFC · « **Reply #205 on:** February 23, 2007, 01:42:58 AM »

IshiYoMiki FTW!!!

KrazyForKamei · « **Reply #206 on:** February 23, 2007, 03:52:05 AM »

Yay lots of new stuff! Poor Yossie almost lost in 2 chapters back. That Miki is a tricky one. I used to think Yossie was strong...but after THAT she must be like a freakin rock. Miki stretching *drool*

Yuko and Kei

That was so great. Kei's right...that was so mean. But that's Yuko for you. Yukei is awesome...glad you worked it in here ^.^

Uh oh..Rika and Miki confrontation. I smell a cat fight....I hope >

Poor Erika. Well atleast Rika didn't lead her on anymore or anything. That was nice of her...I guess

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #207 on:** February 23, 2007, 05:13:54 AM »

Go Erika! That's the kind of response I was looking for. Hmm, maybe a little too early for guessing but I'm thinking either Yossui ends up with Miki, despite Rika's best efforts and in the end Rika just accepts it. Or Yossui goes back to Rika and Miki's pissed but endures it silently.

arina_shinh · « **Reply #208 on:** February 23, 2007, 02:08:26 PM »

Nooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could you leave your fic like that? I want to know teh conversation between Rika and Yossie!! Haha...

I love how you plot your fic.... Yossie is so confuse with her feeling.... (didn't i tell you i love complicated feeling? Haha...) So, she's not in love with Miki..... not yet.... but soon? Maybe she didn't realize it. But Miki is already in love with Yossie right?

Post soon....

Owaranai_sLaVe · « **Reply #209 on:** February 24, 2007, 08:48:02 AM »

Ah YoCharMi. It's better than breathing Oxygen

I'm really seeing that mud or jello wrestling idea coming soon!~ *ok not really, but its one of my parallel universe thoughts*.

-Owaranai_sLaVe
Yay for not sleeping~

haidokun · « **Reply #210 on:** February 26, 2007, 06:35:00 AM »

Rika dialed the familiar number and didn't have to wait long for someone to pick up on the other end, “Hello, Yo-chan?”

a drunken yossie answers the phone perhaps? :ONhehehe:

“I won’t stop loving you Rika-chan, I promise…”

:ONluvluv2: wow, erika is so in love with rika. hihihihi

C60533 · « **Reply #211 on:** February 28, 2007, 12:46:43 AM »

Man. I've missed a bunch of you wonderful chapters. So...Erika really cares about Rika but she's willing to let her go(my interpretation). Besides, there's another member of Biyuden you can hook up with.

Rika, you've taken so many hearts...be careful or you might not end up with any of them. <--the end of a friends drama, more or less. Oh~ Miki and Rika face off. So, winner gets Yossie?

Evil Ace · « **Reply #212 on:** February 28, 2007, 02:11:08 AM »

wow, that was great, well written too. keep up the good work.

modesta107 · « **Reply #213 on:** February 28, 2007, 02:18:35 AM »

ahh leaving the fic at a high point I see? o well nice chapter anways

Mikan · « **Reply #214 on:** March 04, 2007, 01:29:52 AM »

WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE!?
Hahaha! From the shadows they come!!

00HB · « **Reply #215 on:** March 05, 2007, 04:18:21 AM »

Mikan-sama... I do believe this fic is something else....
don't know... maybe becouse it's writen by a self-proclaimed lurker...
and it's a damn good story.... with some awesome conversations....
don't know at all....
but tha fact is: it manages to bring lots of lurkers to the bright side...
and guess what! you can count another one!
Awesome work here!
I just red all previous chapters and I'm looking forward to reading the next one! loved it!

[hey.... you still owe us a hot YoMako scene! I love Makoto... you can't just leave her this way

]

jenmoshka · « **Reply #216 on:** March 12, 2007, 06:46:09 AM »

jenmoshka · « **Reply #217 on:** March 12, 2007, 06:48:46 AM »

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #218 on:** March 12, 2007, 07:37:56 AM »

And the true feelings come out in the drunkenness.

Ishiyoshi ga suki!!

Mikan · « **Reply #219 on:** March 12, 2007, 02:52:06 PM »

I snorted. You should have heard it. I tried to laugh but yeah decided to stifle it..so it came out as this "pffnnn*snort*" ...Anyway! First order of business!

Your reply to my comment (Jen - "@Mikan Shizzam ^^")
Nobody says it better than Natsuo (See Sig.)

Chapter 20
Well, its just like the rest. Which may sound bad but really, its not like that at all. What I mean is that your style hasnt varied much. I think you're still growing and I very much expect myself to be writing full reports on how you have developed as a writer and such.

Btw, Im glad you changed those little things I picked you about

Nice to see the parties are in the right place. SPEAKING OF PARTIES! Did you just write me up in this fic as Yossui or what? Lol!!! I had a chuckle at the umbrella reference. Good times...goooood times. It also sounds like me to try and take my shirt of to show of my abs (even when Im sober)...dont you think?

Ahhh...the pinching of skin. A really good friend of mine read me this kick ass story by this kick ass writer (who is also very attractive I might add) about pinching and the dangers of. What are your thoughts on the subject?

Oh and another thing to make me lol is Yuko breaking off with the beer. "They bore me". LOL...I can image that.

Story wise this is great. Its not so drama and I can kinda see where this might be going but who knows, you might surprise me! Rika seems like a goody goody taking care of Yossui and not taking her up on the kiss.

So this is a rather decent spam! Im happy! And you appear to still be sleeping so I hope that when you wake you appreciate this because depending on your writing speed this might be my last comment on your story for a while

Love,
The Great Mikan

Author Topic: Oh The Games We Play (Read 48374 times)

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