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« Reply #120 on: February 24, 2007, 09:00:56 AM »
Why did i say Oedipus complex? Sorry, I meant sisterly love. I guess I sorta mixed it in or accidentaly thought that incest was part of the complex *then again, it CAN be considering its still family love*. RIKA+LONG HAIR = happiness.

. . . that was.... -_-' <3.  DAMMIT what was Rika saying about Miki before she started crying?! URGH! That part is killing me as much, if not more, for Yossui's answer to Rika. Oh Miki~ Always saving the day when the drama is happening.

... XD Miki cracks me up in any story, serious or not. Love the temper. love love love.

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« Reply #121 on: February 24, 2007, 10:34:52 AM »
Yay, an update!:MKgroovin:

It has to be Miki who's kicking the doorXD  I can't think anyone else doing it xD

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« Reply #122 on: February 24, 2007, 04:50:41 PM »
Man, Miki interrupted the good part, but it's understandable! Poor Aya needs help! D:

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« Reply #123 on: February 24, 2007, 05:14:08 PM »
*eyes bleed* ...Ok Im going to try and get this straight. Correct me if Im wrong...I just want to summary this chapter


There WERE two Clans.

Nakazawa was the leader of one (Along with Nacchi, Miki, Rika, Kaori, Maki)

Mr. Yoshizawa was the leader of the second. But he died. So Yossi became the new leader after winning a fight and decided it would be better if the two groups come together (Because lots of men and a lot of little girls isnt a good idea?)

Aya is Yossi's Step Sister.

When Rika met Yossi she fell in love.

When Miki met Aya, hell broke loose ^^

Yossi was angry at Aya for not helping. Aya yells at Yossi and tells Yossi something painful about her father! (Aya and Mr Yoshizawa had a love affair?Lol)

..ahhh...I cant wait to see whats happening next. Its so deep.

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« Reply #124 on: February 25, 2007, 02:09:02 PM »
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. . . that was.... -_-' <3. DAMMIT what was Rika saying about Miki before she started crying?! URGH! That part is killing me as much, if not more, for Yossui's answer to Rika. Oh Miki~ Always saving the day when the drama is happening.

... Miki cracks me up in any story, serious or not. Love the temper. love love love.

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well, you'll now something about what was on Rika's mind when she was talking to Yossi in the next chapter. Miki herself will answer you XD
and yeah, no matter what, you can't help but :heart: Miki :P


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*eyes bleed* ...Ok Im going to try and get this straight. Correct me if Im wrong...I just want to summary this chapter


There WERE two Clans.

Nakazawa was the leader of one (Along with Nacchi, Miki, Rika, Kaori, Maki)

Mr. Yoshizawa was the leader of the second. But he died. So Yossi became the new leader after winning a fight and decided it would be better if the two groups come together (Because lots of men and a lot of little girls isnt a good idea?)

Aya is Yossi's Step Sister.

When Rika met Yossi she fell in love.

When Miki met Aya, hell broke loose ^^

Yossi was angry at Aya for not helping. Aya yells at Yossi and tells Yossi something painful about her father! (Aya and Mr Yoshizawa had a love affair?Lol)

..ahhh...I cant wait to see whats happening next. Its so deep.

(*Pulls out PTA Charm and chants - "There's not place like Perv"*)


yeah, you're right about the two clans, but Maki was with Yossi, not Yuko XD
and no, mr. Yoshizawa and Aya hadn't a love affair... she was like her daughter, for God sake! XDXD Let's say just that Yossi's father wasn't too proud of her own daughter and preferred Aya over her...
I tell you right now, Mikan... Don't expect perv in this fic.. there'll be just some hints, but definitely nothing explicit :P

I'm working on the next.. so expect it soon ^^

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« Reply #125 on: February 25, 2007, 08:53:57 PM »
And things become a little more clear. I will wait for the next update.

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« Reply #126 on: February 25, 2007, 11:34:18 PM »
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Aya opened her eyes slowly and found herself in an unfamiliar room flooded with the sunshine. The pleasant feeling and the warm travelling over her body made her think that she’d died and was already at heaven.

“You’re feeling better?”

The voice took Matsuura to reality again. Well, she wasn’t dead, but she wasn’t at home either… The gentle expression in the face of the woman in front of her just made Aya to feel more insecure and take a defensive pose.

“Who are you?”
“Kaori” answered the woman quietly.

Of course, the younger didn’t recognize that name and her first reaction was to try to get up from the bed and run away. But she didn’t think about two complications in her plans; her wound and a pair of strong arms keeping her lying on the bed.

“It’s ok, Aya” said a friendly voice “She brought you back”

Seeing her patient a bit more relaxed, Kaori decided to leave the girls alone to talk.

“Maki? How…?”
“We almost lose you. If Fujimoto wouldn’t carried you here in time…”
“Miki…” whispered the younger in an almost inaudible voice, trying to recap in her mind what happened “The last thing I remember is that we argued…”
“Well, you should thank her”

Matsuura stared at her friend and an awkward silence filled the room for a moment.

“Look… Aya, I’m going back home with Eri”
“Great. I don’t wanna be here another se…”
“You’re not coming” said Maki emphatically “We can’t take that risk. Anyway, I’ll be back soon. I’m just going to take the girls here as you sister wanted”
“What?! You can’t make that decision on your own!”
“I did it already” answered Goto with a resolute tone in her voice “You know it’s the only chance we have to survive”


***
                     

“You’re ok?”

Fujimoto turned to the opened door and saw Rika looking at the blood stained clothes on the floor.

“Yeah, don’t worry. It’s not mine” answered the younger pulling down the importance to the fact that she almost die hours ago.

Her friend’s indifference made Rika angry and, walking towards her, she took Fujimoto’s by the arm, turning her to make the younger look at her eyes.

“When you’ll stop doing this, Miki!? When you’ll stop risking your life as if nobody cared about it?! I don’t wanna lose you too…”
“That didn’t seem to matter when you asked me to go back that day and risk our life for something that was already lost it!” Miki got rid of Ishikawa’s grip “Do you really think that I don’t know that you still blame me for leaving her? You told me then, remember? That I let her die ‘cause she wanted to take you away from me!”
“You know I didn’t mean it…”
“Of course you did!”

Suddenly, a knock interrupted the conversation.

“Miki, you’re lady’s awake”

Hearing Kaori, Fujimoto gave the talk for finished and walked towards the door. But before closing it behind her, she turned to Rika one more time.

“You know? I’d had exchanged my life by hers just to make you happy…”


***


Matsuura had decided that she wasn’t to stay another minute there. Even if Maki had told her to not move ‘til she came back, Aya couldn’t stay in that place, much less alone. So, without taking in consideration her friend’s prohibition, she made her mind up to go home on her own.

She saw her clothes on a chair next to bed and began to get dressed as quickly as her leg allowed her, until she heard something. When she turned to the door, Aya found a stunning Fujimoto leant against the frame with a wide mischievous smile in her lips, which remembered the younger that she was still half naked.

“Going somewhere?”
“Home” answered Aya while passing her head through the collar of her shirt.
“Well, good luck then”
“Thank you” replied the younger with sarcasm.

Aya was ready to leave the room when one of Miki’s arms blocked the exit.

“Ok.., I didn’t save your life out there to let you now serve them the breakfast in a plate”
“No one asked you to do it”

The younger pushed Miki and tried to get out of the room but Fujimoto wasn’t going to give up so easily and took her by the arm.

“You’re not going anywhere”
“Stop me”

And she did it. Aya fought desperately against Miki’s grip and even tried to punch the older, but with the disadvantage of her wound, Fujimoto had enough time to hold her tightly. With her resistance, Aya just got to lose her balance and take Miki with her. Luckily, the other girl was fast enough to make them fall on the bed. Even so, Matsuura kept fighting and Miki didn’t have another choice but take the younger by her wrists and, using her own weight, make Aya unable to move.

Both breathing heavily, stared at each other without saying a word. Then, unexpectedly, Miki’s lips were on Aya’s.

“What the hell are you doing?!” shouted Matsuura, finally reacting.
“Keeping you here…”

Fujimoto’s words weren’t more than a whisper that caressed Aya’s lips before kissing her again. This time she didn’t stop with the younger’s complaints and deepened the kiss, exploring every inch of Aya’s mouth with her tongue. Soon, Matsuura gave up at fighting…

What the girls didn’t know was that, from the door that they forgot to close because of the fight, a surprised Maki and Yuko were watching the scene.

“See? She’ll be ok” whispered Yuko on Maki’s ear “Miki can take good care of her…”

Aya and Miki were too busy to notice their presence and Nakazawa, as quiet as she could, closed the door in silence to not bother them. Then, she took Goto along with her and began to walk with a smirk in her face.

“We should make a party, don’t think so?”


To be continued...


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« Reply #127 on: February 26, 2007, 12:19:24 AM »
GAM sex, yay.

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« Reply #128 on: February 26, 2007, 12:32:15 AM »
You have changed your singnature!
Waiting for 12.

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« Reply #129 on: February 26, 2007, 01:07:10 AM »
I was waiting for something like this to happen~! <3 Hopefully, Aya realizes that Miki isn't that bad and love her in return :]

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« Reply #130 on: February 26, 2007, 02:01:50 AM »
Double posting, I know, but I was too lazy to click le edit button xD.

LEEEN~! LOOK AT WHAT YOU MADE ME DO xD~!



Er, if it's too inappropriate, I'll take it off xD Resizing the picture made the scar look weird, but oh well xD~! I kinda half-assed it actually, haha. Hell, I don't think I even finished drawing it xD! I'll draw a better version later on xD

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« Reply #131 on: February 26, 2007, 02:08:59 AM »
MmmMMMmmMMMmmm, velvey likes. :drool:

*edits after seeing Yuu-sama's picture*

:drool: :heart: :drool: :heart:
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« Reply #132 on: February 26, 2007, 03:31:22 AM »
DAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMIIIIIIIIIIIITTTT! I'm mad at GAM right now >.> :evil: Especially with H-O not including any of YoCharMi in their new poll but including AyaMiki.... >.> I'm upset xD

BUT, BUT! Urgh, your story xD (and damn Yuu's picture. By the way, awesome ^_-) it's making me.... ugh. Dammit.


DAMN MIKI FOR BEING AWESOME AND LOVING RIKA *breaths*. Wow, I can't believe she said that...

PTA loves you Mikan <3  We had charms? i did'nt eevn know we had some of those...
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« Reply #133 on: February 26, 2007, 08:21:51 AM »
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Don't expect perv in this fic.. there'll be just some hints, but definitely nothing explicit :P
Nothing explicit? Dang :(  Oh well, the fight--> kissing scene was nicely done though. :)


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“When you’ll stop doing this, Miki!? When you’ll stop risking your life as if nobody cared about it?! I don’t wanna lose you too…”
“That didn’t seem to matter when you asked me to go back that day and risk our life for something that was already lost it!” Miki got rid of Ishikawa’s grip “Do you really think that I don’t know that you still blame me for leaving her? You told me then, remember? That I let her die ‘cause she wanted to take you away from me!”
“You know I didn’t mean it…”
“Of course you did!”

Suddenly, a knock interrupted the conversation.

“Miki, you’re lady’s awake”

Hearing Kaori, Fujimoto gave the talk for finished and walked towards the door. But before closing it behind her, she turned to Rika one more time.

“You know? I’d had exchanged my life by hers just to make you happy…”
So Miki was in love with Rika while Rika was in love with the Yossi of that world? :scratch

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« Reply #134 on: February 26, 2007, 10:14:02 PM »
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Waiting for 12.


yeah, I've changed to celebrate miki's birthaday  XD
for next chapter.. wait a bit more :P

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So Miki was in love with Rika while Rika was in love with the Yossi of that world?


yep, that's right. In fact.. Miki was in love with Rika before she knew Yossi..

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   Double posting, I know, but I was too lazy to click le edit button xD..
LEEEN~! LOOK AT WHAT YOU MADE ME DO xD~!
Er, if it's too inappropriate, I'll take it off xD Resizing the picture made the scar look weird, but oh well xD~! I kinda half-assed it actually, haha. Hell, I don't think I even finished drawing it xD! I'll draw a better version later on xD



you're picture's great Yuu-chan, as always ^^ waiting for that better version..
while.. look at what YOU made me do XDXDXD (I had promised to not do it again -_-)

a lot better than the last, though... :P

well, I'll go back to the fic now..

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« Reply #135 on: February 26, 2007, 11:05:28 PM »
Wow. I love this fic! XD I've never really gotten the time to read it, but I've been wanting to for a while. ^^;; I'm glad I did too. :D I love the plot in general. *-* And as I was reading a few chapters I was saying to myself "Heh, nice cliffhanger but I have the next chapter right here~!" XD XD But trust me, if the chapter wasn't posted for most of them, I would of been pulling out my hair waiting for a new chapter! I love how Miki got Aya to stay. ;D Then Maki and Yuko made me roffle. XD
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« Reply #136 on: February 27, 2007, 04:00:38 AM »
Ooohhh the Aya/Miki kiss was written really hot...then the drawn pictures just made it even better!

Lots of drama going on here...I suggest they all get drunk then the truth will come out. I wonder what kind of alcohol they even have in this time? *scratches head while thinking* Oh well XD

Peeping town Maki and Yuko were hilarious ^.^

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« Reply #137 on: February 27, 2007, 04:14:37 AM »
Well...there wasnt a perv but there was perv implied...I still give my thanks to the power of the PTA CHARM!!! (Owaranai I thought we should have some sort of summoning thing...cookies, charms..I dunno...up to you)

YAY! YAY YAY!! GAAAaaaAMM!!! YAY!! Me still thinks its a bit fast though...but me doesnt care because its GAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaM YAY YAY!!

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« Reply #138 on: February 27, 2007, 06:27:36 PM »
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YAY! YAY YAY!! GAAAaaaAMM!!! YAY!! Me still thinks its a bit fast though...but me doesnt care because its GAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaM YAY YAY!!


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but Aya can still enjoy a little Miki and then act bitchy and deny everything afterwards XD

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« Reply #139 on: February 27, 2007, 06:46:37 PM »
hey.. nobody said that they were in love already...
Miki just used her 'weapons' to make Aya stay XDXD

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