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Re: Traveler
« Reply #280 on: May 01, 2007, 08:44:16 AM »
.. Whyy why did she have to leave Rika like that..... how sad, but that last kiss between the 2 was just priceless.

can't wait to find out where they'll end up next.

Have a safe trip and have fun in Japan!

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #281 on: May 01, 2007, 05:41:04 PM »
17? *starts singing Dekoboko Seventeen* My new party number. Maybe my new beer goal.

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #282 on: May 01, 2007, 07:53:02 PM »
Seventeen because it was her new record? Haha what a great way to end it (like always, Miki <3~)
Man, sucks to see Yossui leave after finally confessing/making up with her. Oh well, I can't wait to see what's in the new world! *cough**singsSEXYAILAND**cough*
Have a safe trip to Japan, best wishes on seeing famous people :D

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #283 on: May 02, 2007, 08:38:03 AM »
Can't wait to read how's the new world ;D

Yossi and Rika's goodbye was so bitter sweet... :k-sad:

Have a nice trip!!!! :byebye:

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« Reply #284 on: May 03, 2007, 01:53:38 AM »
oh yes miki survives, i can breathe again.  wow so yossie finally leaves this world, huh? can't wait to see where she's going next

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #285 on: May 03, 2007, 03:30:34 AM »
Yay, Miki lives!! :D I hope the next world will be a little less hostile for Kaoru and Yocchan. Ah, a bittersweet parting between Rika and Yocchan. How strange if the next world they go to still has a Yossie. Ah well, more Yossie is  :heart:.

Have a fun trip!

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #286 on: May 03, 2007, 06:01:18 PM »
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“I love you too, Princess”
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! She said it! She SAID IT!!!


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“She ask me to give you a message”
“What?”
“Seventeen”

Everbody, even Aya, didn’t have a clue about what that message could mean but Yuko began to laugh out loud.

“That deserves a party!”
NEW RECORD!!! ;D


Have fun on your trip, can't wait to see what world Yossi and Kaoru land in next.

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #287 on: May 11, 2007, 09:03:13 PM »
well... I'm back XD
you'll still have to wait a few days for the next chapter 'cause I coulnd't write anything.
This was just to say that I'm back to work :P

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #288 on: May 13, 2007, 11:25:38 AM »
Welcome back len.chan! how was the trip? hope you did have fun there

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #289 on: May 13, 2007, 06:30:03 PM »
Hello! Rest up and don't let the jet-lag get to you! :)

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #290 on: May 22, 2007, 08:14:24 PM »
GOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN  :kneelbow:
I'm really sorry for the delay, but as I promised, here's finally, the new world XD
I hope you like it.



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The first thing that Yossi saw in the new world was the floor’s rough surface.

Once the blinding light disappeared, the sharp pain of hundred knives hit her head. It was nothing like the first time; it wasn’t just a simple headache. The pain overwhelmed her senses, she felt sick, she felt her strength leaving her body and her legs couldn’t stand her anymore, making her collapse to the ground.

“Yoshizawa-san!”

Kaoru saw her falling and kneeled at her side, but Yossi didn’t answer. Her mind was blurred, unable to form any word.

“Wait here, I’ll find help!”

Yossi wanted to scream ‘no!’ to stop the younger but her voice couldn’t leave her throat. Kaoru had disappeared from her sight. The young traveler didn’t seem to understand that their priority was to go home and that being separated wasn’t a good idea. It was like if she hadn’t learnt anything from her previous adventure against the man-eating monsters. She tried to stand up, regretting every minute to have left the other world. No matter how dangerous it was, anything else was better than the pain she was feeling now.

As Yossi concentrated all the strength in her legs trying to leave the ground, a strong wind began to blow. Her legs failed again, her vision blurred and that damn wind… It was like if fate wanted her to not move from there.

Exhausted, she let her body fall and ended lying upwards on the ground, trying to recover some air. Finally, the pain seemed to leave her at the same pace that the wind lost its strength and became just a little breeze caressing her skin.

“Captain?”

The singer didn’t need to open her eyes to recognize that voice. Again, someone familiar in an unknown world.

“For God sake, what happened to you?”
“Long story, Mako-chan…” she said smiling slightly “…long story”


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Kaoru was totally lost. She repeated once and again in her head that had been a bad idea to leave Yossi back there and go alone to find help. Maybe it’d been better to go straight to the next world and the next and the next ‘til they finally reached Kaoru’s and could send Yoshizawa back to her own place. But what if the sudden changes made things worst? The whole travelling thing seemed to affect too much the older. First the headache, now that horrible pain reflected on Yossi’s face. Something was wrong. Something was really wrong and it was in part because of her, because of that stupid trip. All that never would have happened staying quietly at home, living like a normal student and forgetting her stupid fantasies.

I must have listened aunt Ayumi…

The funny thing was that she couldn’t remember clearly when all start it. Maybe was the day she found that letter hidden inside an old book…, or maybe began with all the tales her mom told her before going to sleep when she was a child, tales about far away worlds, about courage and friendship but, most of all, tales about a shinning knight who used to fight for the sake of a better world.

Now, after being able to meet that person, the tales her mom told her didn’t seem so unbelievable. Yoshizawa Hitomi wasn’t just a fantasy. Not that Yossi was the super-hero type that she had imagined, she wasn’t even the Yoshizawa that her mother knew, but someway, there was something extraordinary in her, an amazing aura of self-confidence and the power to make her feel safe. Even if she was dying in pain like right now.

I must hurry…

She kept running, even if she didn’t know where to go. The priority at that moment was to find someone who could help Yoshizawa-san and then go back home as soon as possible. That was the plan. It should be easy.

Someone must be hearing her prayers up there ‘cause, finally, she saw a pair of silhouettes not so far. Two men to be exact. Two men wearing what seemed uniforms and weapons. Guards maybe? Kaoru didn’t care. There wasn’t time and they could help. Full stop.

“Excuse me!”

The men turned their heads to find a foreign girl running towards them.

“What’s wrong, Miss?”
“My friend, she needs help!”
“Ok, calm down, girl” said the taller of the two men “Where’s your friend?”

Kaoru couldn’t recall exactly where the place where she left Yossi was, but she tried to describe it and explained to the guards the way she followed ‘til reach where they were now, describing as much as she could the things she saw during her run. Luckily, the men knew the place and a faster way to get there.

“So, where’s she?”

The guards stared at her as if they’d been just tricked and waited for a good excuse for it.


“She’s probably hidden somewhere near” said the girl a bit confused too “Just…, wait a minute, ok?”

Where the hell she went? Was all that Kaoru could think. Even if she was feeling better enough, Yossi knew that she would go back for her as soon as possible. She should have waited there. Or maybe…, maybe something happened. Maybe that place wasn’t so safe as she thought at first and had been a really, really bad idea to leave her alone. What if…

“Yoshizawa-san!” she shouted with a bit of desperation in her voice. She couldn’t be far, she couldn’t…

While she was still searching around, one of the men approached her with a serious expression on her face.

“You said Yoshizawa?” he asked rudely.
“Yes” Kaoru didn’t pay to much attention to the question ‘cause she had more important things to worry about, but when the taller guard took her arm something told her that there were more trouble coming through.
“Yoshizawa Hitomi?” asked again the man to confirm it.
“Ye..s…”

The taller looked at the other man, who nodded in understanding.

“I’m sorry girl, but you’ll have to come with us”
“Eh? Why? I’m sure she isn’t too far, just wait”
“Don’t worry. If she’s here we’ll find her” then the man turned to his comrade “You stay here and start the research. I’ll take care of the prisoner and inform the others about this”
“Ok”
“Wait, prisoner?!” still with the grip of the guard around her arm and hearing those words, Kaoru began to panic “Why am I a prisoner?!”
“You’re arrested as Yoshizawa’s possible accessory” the man answered serious and began to walk pulling Kaoru along with him.
“But what did Yoshizawa-san?!”

The guard growled as the girl started to run out her patience.

“Princess Guard’s Captain Yoshizawa Hitomi is wanted in charge of the King’s murder”



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“You’re feeling better?”

The soft voice whispering in her ear, the warm hand caressing her forehead… Yossi was, indeed, feeling much better. The headache and the sickness were already gone. Couldn’t say the same about her body, which was still weak and a bit in pain, but it was something she could deal with. At least, she wasn’t feeling like dying anymore.

Now it was time to evaluate her new situation. So, she opened her eyes slowly and examined every detail around her. She was in a bed, a very comfortable bed, in a really huge room a bit over-decorated, with flowers paints on the walls, thin and pink silk curtains failing from the ceiling and covering the windows…, all very girlish.

And then, Yossi diverted her attention to the woman besides her, to the soft features and the deep eyes looking at her.

“Where…?”
“Don’t worry. You’re safe now”

Even if it wasn’t true, the smile that came with those words would had make Yossi believe any lie.

“You’re sure about that?” questioned someone from one of the corners of the room “We’re inside the palace. Anybody can see her”
“Then you shouldn’t have taken her here at first, Ogawa. But it’s ok” she said turning again to look at Yossi “Even if it’s inside the palace’s walls, my chambers are big enough and no one would dare to enter here without asking permission first”
“But Princess…” tried to tell Makoto again.
“Stop complaining, Lieutenant” the Princess voice was categorical “Better go to find something to eat. She must be starving”

Makoto left the room with a bow and the Princess returned her attention completely to her guest, who was already trying to stand up from the bed to leave as well.

“No way” said the girl in front of her making Yossi sit again against her will. Not that was difficult. The singer was still weak and just a little push made it work “You’re staying here until we find what to do”
“Rika…”
“I told you, Yocchan. You’re safe here…” a gentle and delicate hand caressed Yossi’s cheek and travelled to the back of her neck, playing with Hitomi’s hair and then pulling her closer for an unexpected, brief and soft kiss “…with me”



To be continued...

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #291 on: May 22, 2007, 08:40:37 PM »
Hero in World Five, Villain in World Six? Roffle xD

But somehow, I did expect to see a medieval world with princesses and castles in a world eventually, just not this soon, haha. And duuuude, the yossie from this world is alive? Since they didn't seem too surprised, almost expecting to see her too o_O...

-still waits for that crackish Yossie x Yossie pairing somewhere- xDDDDDDDD

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #292 on: May 22, 2007, 08:47:20 PM »
Yossi's murder???? It has to be some kind of misunderstanding xD

I already love this world ;D

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« Reply #293 on: May 22, 2007, 11:21:53 PM »
o man what the heck did yossie do in this world!

O woah, Rika a princess! defiantly fits her personality, haha

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #294 on: May 23, 2007, 01:41:11 AM »
o man what the heck did yossie do in this world!

O woah, Rika a princess! defiantly fits her personality, haha


The same here, It must be a misunderstanding but it would be great if yossie really kill him, I mean, another face of her  :wahaha:

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #295 on: May 23, 2007, 02:53:46 AM »
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I'm really sorry for the delay, but as I promised, here's finally, the new world XD
No worries! As long as we get our fix. :D

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Nah.  ;)



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Once the blinding light disappeared, the sharp pain of hundred knives hit her head. It was nothing like the first time; it wasn’t just a simple headache. The pain overwhelmed her senses, she felt sick, she felt her strength leaving her body and her legs couldn’t stand her anymore, making her collapse to the ground.
Something about the "jumping" process is causing this?


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“Captain?”

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“For God sake, what happened to you?”
“Long story, Mako-chan…” she said smiling slightly “…long story”
Yossi's a Captain? Of what?


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Maybe it’d been better to go straight to the next world and the next and the next ‘til they finally reached Kaoru’s and could send Yoshizawa back to her own place. But what if the sudden changes made things worst? The whole travelling thing seemed to affect too much the older. First the headache, now that horrible pain reflected on Yossi’s face. Something was wrong
Yeah, if it weren't for the whole "horrible pain" thing, that would probably be the safest course of action. The less time spent on each world, the less chance of being exposed to the potential dangers of each world.


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Someone must be hearing her prayers up there ‘cause, finally, she saw a pair of silhouettes not so far. Two men to be exact. Two men wearing what seemed uniforms and weapons. Guards maybe? Kaoru didn’t care. There wasn’t time and they could help. Full stop.
Why do I get the feeling that it's going to a one of those "us VS them" deals with Mako (who found Yossi) and company being against the guards that Kaoru found?  :-\


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“Yoshizawa-san!” she shouted with a bit of desperation in her voice. She couldn’t be far, she couldn’t…

While she was still searching around, one of the men approached her with a serious expression on her face.

“You said Yoshizawa?” he asked rudely.
Uh-oh. That's not good.


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“Princess Guard’s Captain Yoshizawa Hitomi is wanted in charge of the King’s murder”
Of COURSE it had to be something big.


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“Where…?”
“Don’t worry. You’re safe now”

Even if it wasn’t true, the smile that came with those words would had make Yossi believe any lie.
Rika. Gotta be.


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“You’re staying here until we find what to do”
“Rika…”
“I told you, Yocchan. You’re safe here…” a gentle and delicate hand caressed Yossi’s cheek and travelled to the back of her neck, playing with Hitomi’s hair and then pulling her closer for an unexpected, brief and soft kiss “…with me”
Yep...definitely Rika.

And of course, she's gotta be in rabu-rabu with Yossi.  ;D


So then, considering the whole patricide thing, Rika must obviously believe that Yossi's innocent. Wonder if Rika is actually the "alibi" for that world's Yossi?  >:D


Right now I'm thinking like Yuuyami, and wondering if the Yossi of this world is actually still alive? If so, where's she hiding? What if we have a YossiXYossi encounter? What will happen (other than Rika getting all sorts of horny ideas ;D ) ???

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #296 on: May 23, 2007, 03:45:52 AM »
Yikes, so Yossie's wanted for murder in this world, huh? Wow, how can Rika be so nice to the person suspected of killing her father? Now I'm suspicious of this Princess Rika, especially with the line: "Even if it wasn’t true, the smile that came with those words would had make Yossi believe any lie." Yikes...(?)

I wonder what happened to the Yossie in this world then? Will the two Yocchans meet, assuming she's alive? Hm!

Anyway, glad you're back, len.chan! And WOO for the latest chapter!

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #297 on: May 23, 2007, 08:13:54 AM »
I dont see much weapon carrying or GAM potential but with the Rika action and murder in the mix it out ways my first thoughts. BRING ON THE NEXT WORLD BABY
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Re: Traveler
« Reply #298 on: May 23, 2007, 12:12:40 PM »
I've been a silent reader for a while and just need to say this!! You're awesome writer!! love how the story goes... can't wait to see what will happen to Yossie next!!

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #299 on: May 23, 2007, 01:12:53 PM »
I have a few theories for the Yossie of that world:

1) Mind controlled by the evil of Miki

2) Persuaded to kill by the sexiness of Princess Rika

3) Framed through the jealousy of Ayumi and Makoto

4) Wanted to rule herself, which is why she is close to Rika

I know it's early, but they just had to be said.

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