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Re: Traveler
« Reply #320 on: June 30, 2007, 03:34:08 PM »
Sometimes it's good to be away for a while... Especially if I get to read updates like this when I come back. ;)

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #321 on: June 30, 2007, 06:20:19 PM »
I apologize for not commenting in forever, but . . . this is getting better and better! I thought that I would miss the other world, but I like this one as well. I guess it doesn't matter where Yossi goes, everyone will have the same (or similar) connections.

Anyway, the King killed the King, eh? I'm thinking that there was a time travel effect or something. :P

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #322 on: July 05, 2007, 05:24:35 PM »
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The unknown ended being a dark cell waiting for her at the end of a corridor.

“I haven’t done anything!”
“That’s useless” said a voice somewhere near “It’s a lost of time to try to talk to them. I know, I tried”
“Who are you?”
“Oh, sorry” From the corner of the cell next to hers, Kaoru saw a silhouette moving out of the shadows “Takahashi, Ai”
Omgass! They've got Aichan too!  :shocked:


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“I was just trying to get help ‘cause Yoshizawa-san was feeling sick and then those guards arrested me ‘cause they say that I’m some kind of accessory from the King’s murder and took me here where I definitely shouldn’t be!”
“You know Yoshizawa-san? She’s here? She’s alive?” asked Takahashi with a hint of hope in her voice and without paying attention to the rest of the speech that her new roommate had done almost without breathing.
Ok, so this world's Aichan definitely has some connection to this world's Yossi. Question here is, is it in a good way or a bad way?   :?


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“Please, tell me! It’s important” asked the older again, desperately “If you’ve seen her that means that she’s alive and if she’s alive, she can tell everybody what really happened!”
“And… what really happened?” Kaoru forget a moment about her worries and saw Ai-chan words as a way to get some information from the other girl, instead of telling her about Yossi “Why are you here?”
“I saw the real killer”
EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH~!!!  :OMG:

THE REAL KILLER?!?!? If Aichan saw the real killer, then she can help exonerate Yossi. So who's idea was it to throw her in a cell, and why? Immediately I'm thinking about this "Counselor" and thinking that he/she, if not someone else, is the real mastermind behind this conspiracy and that this world's Yossi was a scapegoat.


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“Why didn’t you tell them?”
“Of course I did!” now it was time for Aichan’s outburst, who went to the door of her cell and kicked the bars “I’ve spent the last five days trying to explain what I saw but nobody believes me!”
“Why? Who was?”
“The King”
“No, I mean, who killed him?”
“I told you, the King”

An awkward silence filled the room for a second until Kaoru finally reacted.

“The King killed the King?”
“I knew you wouldn’t believe me” said the older, sitting in a corner and crossing her arms with a deep sigh “God, I don’t even believe myself…”
“No, wait a minute. You mean there were two kings? Two identical men?”
“I know, I’m crazy”
Perhaps some type of impersonator/doppleganger...or even maybe ANOTHER TRAVELER!  :scared:


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The Lieutenant turned her head and looked at the table. On in, there was just the tray with food she had left a moment ago, anything else. There was not signal from Yoshizawa-san’s belongings. Then, she returned her attention to the opened window and the curtains swinging with the slight breeze coming from outside.

Please no…
Either the princess' room isn't that high up, or there are ledges outside that Yossi was able to use to climb down.


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“At least she could have said goodbye…”
“I’m still here”

Yossi’s words didn’t reach Mako’s ears in time to let the younger process her presence there and avoid running into the taller. Surprised, she made some steps back and stumbled, ending with her ass against the cold floor of the balcony.
Oh...she's still there...nevermind then.


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a guard that Kaoru hadn’t seen before opened it and came inside the jail seizing someone tightly. That someone turned out to be another girl that the young traveler had met before.

“Say hello to the new guest, girls”

The newly arrived, with her wrists and ankles tied with chains, stared at the other two girls for a moment before the guard pushed her inside an empty cell. Then, she turned to the bars, looked at the guard and smiled mischievously.

“You know I won’t stay long”
“The last time we underestimated you…” said the man approaching the cell and looking back at the daring girl “I’m not going to make the same mistake twice. If you try to escape again, I’ll forget that you’re a girl”
Sounds like the girl might be Miki...or possibly Reina.  O0


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“You’re really funny, you know?” he said turning to the girl “Those chains you’re wearing are maid of the most resistant metal of the country. If you can escape from them, maybe, we’ll talk”

And those were his last words before closing the door and leaving the three girls alone.

“Those haughty men…” sighed the chained woman while she was turning to one of the corners of her cell, giving her back to the other two “I was just trying to be nice…”

Both Kaoru and Ai heard a noise coming from their partner’s cell, like if something really heavy had fell to the floor. What was her surprise when the other girl turned to them completely free from her chains…

“What the…?” Kaoru needed to ask a lot of things but she couldn’t form the words properly. That girl wasn’t kidding when she said that she could escape.
Well, so much for being "the most resistant metal of the country". :lol:

That be some serious escaping skills right there! Whoever this is could help Aichan and Kaoru escape too! :rockon:

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #323 on: July 29, 2007, 01:29:55 AM »
I'm thinking Reina...? Be neat if the girl was Eri, though I'm not sure how she'd fit into it. Poor Ai-chan, being locked up and all.

If the King killed the King, perhaps someone in Kaoru's future has something to gain in this and disguised himself? Maybe some dude who's conquering one dimension at a time, and starts by eliminating Yocchan in every one(?) Hmmm...

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #324 on: August 13, 2007, 09:15:39 PM »
Len.chan has some problems with her internet conection, so she's not able to post the next chapter yet. But she's going to post it as soon as posible. Please be patient.

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #325 on: August 14, 2007, 04:32:12 AM »
That's great :w00t:  I will be waiting patiently for the next chapter.

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #326 on: August 14, 2007, 06:43:21 AM »
Len.chan has some problems with her internet conection, so she's not able to post the next chapter yet. But she's going to post it as soon as posible. Please be patient.
Thanks for the heads-up.

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #327 on: August 14, 2007, 07:06:22 PM »
Ok, I suppose I can wait more...  XD
Don't worry, always there's time  :yep:

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Re: Traveler
« Reply #328 on: August 20, 2007, 07:43:15 AM »
sometimes I want to throw my computer through the window, I swear...
I'm still without internet (now I'm posting at work), but I just wanted to say that I'm still working on the fic and I don't forget that you're waiting. Hopely my connection will be back within this week. Until then... sorry again for the wait.

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Traveler ch. 26
« Reply #329 on: August 25, 2007, 11:48:41 AM »
I'm still without internet, but I've borrowed a friend's computer a few minutes and I can finally post the chapter.
thanks to everybody who has been waiting 'till now.

26


Ishikawa stepped into the throne chambers, followed near by Niigaki. Nobody noticed it ‘cause her face wasn’t even reflecting it, but Rika was trembling inside. A call so urgent from the Counsellor could just mean one thing; trouble. What if they found out already that Yossi was inside the Palace? Of course, the Princess would be the first person they’d want to ask about it. Everybody there knew that she and the Captain were close, not how really close, though.

“What you have to tell me better be important, Counsellor. I was busy” said the Princess, making clear with her tone that her status made her stay above everyone else in the room.
“What? Doing your nails?” asked another voice behind her.

Turning her head, Rika glared at who had just entered. Another woman at her side whispered something at the ear of the newly arrived.

“Oh! Come on, Aya. I was just trying to loosen up the air a bit.
“You always so caring, sister” replied Ishikawa clearly pissed of.
“And you always so stiff…”

Aya, seeing that there was no point in trying to stop them, made a few steps back and left the two sisters enough space to argue freely.

“They never get tired, uh?”
“Yeah” answered Aya with a resigned sigh. Then, she looked at the girl at her side and met with Sayumi’s bright eyes “I’m sorry, Princess” said the older bowing “I didn’t know it was you”
“Don’t feel sorry. People seem to not notice me, anyway. I’m already used to it” replied the younger with a slight smile “So, you know why they wanted to see us?”
“I don’t have idea, highness. Those two began to argue before we could ask”

Both girls turned to look at the pair in front of them still fighting, wondering if they should stop them. It wasn’t the first time and it wouldn’t be the last that the two sisters tried to hurt each other, and not just verbally talking.

“Has arrived to my ears that your beloved Captain could be back in town. What do you think? Should we watch our backs?”
“Don’t talk like that about her. You know she’s innocent”
“She ran away, Rika. How can you still be so blind?!”
“I trust her”
“Dad trusted her and look at what happened. Everything is a mess because of her!”
“Everything was a mess before she arrived!” Ishikawa finally exploded “Or I have to remind you who saved your ass every time you got yourself into a fight because you got drunk at some tavern? She always kept your pretty face safe and covered all. That doesn’t mean anything to you?!”
“I’d like to believe in her as much as you, but people doesn’t change, Rika-chan. She was a…”

Before she could end the sentence, the sound of Ishikawa’s hand against her cheek resounded around the room. Everybody stay silent waiting for the worst to happen.

“Enough, Miki” said Rika with firm voice, not allowing the younger’s glare to scare her.

When Aya saw the fire on Fujimoto’s eyes, she knew that it was time to do something before the rage could take control over Miki’s actions and make something that she’d regret later. The princess was raising her hand to reply to her older sister when Matsuura stood between them and seized Miki’s arm before she could move.

“Please…”
“But she…” the princess was going to complain when her eyes met with Aya’s and understood that it was a lost battle “Ok” she sighed and relaxed her muscles, letting Matsuura’s hand rest in her arm.
“Well…” an older woman a few meters away from them cleared her throat “Now that our beloved Princesses had enough fun… Can we talk about the issue why I called you?”
“Of course, Counsellor” answered Sayumi making a few steps to stand in front of her two sisters, who even now where glaring at each other.
“Abe-san, please”

At the Great Counsellor request, Natsumi took an envelope from the inside of one of her kimono’s long sleeves and gave it to Sayumi, who opened it and began to read it immediately. It took less than one minute for the Princess to finish the letter. Then, she raised her eyes, looked at the Counsellor and finally turned to her sisters with a worried look on her face.

Rika took the piece of paper that the younger was passing to her and read it too.

“This is true?” asked Ishikawa staring at the Counsellor.
“A messenger arrived this morning from the South and knowing the King’s brothers… I’m afraid that yes, it’s true”
“What are you talking about?” asked Miki, taking at the same time the letter from Ishikawa’s hands and reading it “Oh, shit”
“With the King dead it was just a matter of time” stated the older woman.

Rika felt Sayumi’s hand taking hers trying to find some comfort. There was just one more question to ask.

“Nakazawa-san… What we should do?”

The Great Counsellor Nakazawa Yuko took a deep breath and looked straight at Rika’s eyes.

“Prepare for the war and pray for a miracle to happen”


***


“Who are you?”


“No one important” answered the stranger.
“You seemed very important to me when that guard treat you like the most wanted criminal over the country” said Ai-chan, suspecting about the identity of their new roommate.
“Well.., not the most wanted. Just one of them”
“Goto-san…” whispered Kaoru.

Takahashi turned towards the other cell where the young traveller was standing. She was heard the almost inaudible name that Kaoru had said but still couldn’t relate it to anything. Goto… Goto… Why it seemed familiar?

“Oh!” she exclaimed, widening her eyes in realisation “Goto Maki! You are one of the most wanted bandits of the country!”
“You’re a bit slow, don’t you?” smiled the older while she approached the bars separating her cell with Ai-chan’s “Wait…, aren’t you one of Yocchan’s pets?”
“I’m Lieutenant Takahashi, not a pet and… you said Yocchan?” she asked a bit confused “Only Princess Ishikawa call Captain that way”
“Forget it”

But Takahashi wasn’t going to let it go so easily. Why a famous bandit had familiarity enough to call her Captain by her nickname? Of course, Yoshizawa-san knew about Goto, it was part of her job, but the way Maki had said the name…

“Goto-san..., how did you get rid of the chains?” Kaoru’s question brought Ai-chan back from her thoughts. The answer to that could be interesting.
“None of your business”
“You know Yoshizawa-san, right?” insisted the younger.
“Well…, yeah. What about that?”
“We need to get out of here. She’s in trouble and we have to find her” Kaoru’s voice began to sound a bit desperate “If you’ve been able to brake those chains, you can take us out of here”
“What makes you think that I care about what happens to her?”

Maki answer was a bit cold. She turned giving her back to the girls, looking now at the darkness of her cell. Kaoru should think about something quickly. Maybe the older was the only opportunity she had to escape and find Yoshizawa-san. So, the younger tried to gather together in her head all the information she had about Maki and her relationship with Yossi, learned across the time and space during her trip.

“If I’m not… wrong…” began to say the younger “Yoshizawa-san and you are friends”
“We were friends. Long time ago” Goto was still facing the walls of her cell, maybe trying to avoid that the girls could see the sad look in her eyes.
“If there’s something left from that friendship you’ll help us”

Silence. For a few moments, the air in that jail could be cut with a knife and Kaoru cursed herself and her mouth for being so bold to tell the older something like that, until she heard a sigh.

“Just tell me what happened” said Maki.
“You don’t know?” asked Takahashi half surprised half sceptical.
“I’ve been away for a while. I missed something important?”
“The death of the King”

Goto turned immediately and looked at the girls still not believing what Ai-chan had said.

“He was killed five days ago” continued the Lieutenant “And Captain’s the main suspect”
“You have to be kidding me” laughed Maki.
“No, I’m not” answered the younger a bit offended.
“Come on, Yocchan wouldn’t kill a fly”
“That’s not what the whole country thinks. And since that happened, everybody’s looking for her, no matter if it’s for help her or catch her”
“That’s why you’re here, right?” asked Maki “Because you tried to help her?”
“We don’t have time for this now” burst Kaoru attracting the attention of both girls who stared at her a bit confused “We’ll explain everything, but first you have to take us out of here”

Judging bye her face, the older didn’t seem to like that anybody gave her orders and that girl didn’t even asked properly. But there was something in her words that made Maki to forget about that and think about the younger’s request. There was desperation in her voice. That girl was really worried about Yocchan and she just couldn’t deny helping her.

“Ok. I’ll do it”
“That’s gre…”
“But…” interrupted Goto before the younger could get too excited “I’ll just help you to get out of here. Don’t ask for anything else, ok?”
“That’s enough” smiled a satisfied Kaoru.
“When we’ll do it?” asked Ai-chan.
“Now”
“Now?! But it’s still early!” shouted Takahashi.
“And?” asked Goto while watching carefully every inch of the metal door. She didn’t even pay attention to the almost hysteric lieutenant.
“And?! Wouldn’t be safer to do it at night?!”
“I guess so” answered the bandit “But I’ve got an important appointment with someone who’s probably already angry at me. I love my head, you know? I’d like to keep it over my shoulders a bit more” then the older turned to the girls again “So, we’re going. Close you eyes”

The two younger girls looked at each other through the bars, surprised at the strange request.

“Why we have to...” began to ask Kaoru.
“Don’t ask, damn it! Just do what I say or I’ll leave both of you here, ok?” Maki waited until the girls nodded to continue “Eyes closed and, don’t matter what you hear, don’t open it”


***



“I’m gonna die...”
“Why you keep saying that?”
“Because Princess is going to kill me!” shouted a desperate Makoto.
“She won’t”
“No..., you’re right. First she’ll torture me ‘till know where did you go and then she’ll kill me”
“Ogawa, you’re overreacting” said Yoshizawa rolling her eyes in amusement.

The two girls stopped for a moment, hiding themselves against a wall of the castle. The older looked around her and she seemed to recognize the place, as if she would have been there before.

“Aren’t we there yet?”
“Almost” answered Ogawa “Why do you wanna go there? Who are you looking for important enough to risk your life?”
“A friend”
“Owes you money?”
“What? No!” said Yossi looking confused “Why do you say that?”
“Because you don’t have friends” was Makoto’s serious answer.

Hitomi was tempted to say ‘I have friends’, but then she remembered that she wasn’t in her world and that, maybe, the Yoshizawa that she was displacing didn’t have friends. In fact, she didn’t know almost anything about the Captain.

“Then..., what are you?” she asked to Mako-chan again.
“Your Lieutenant”
“And Rika-chan?”
“The Princess is your lover. That doesn’t count”

The older lowered her head and stuck her eyes on the ground, thinking hard about what Ogawa had said. No friends? Any? She had met her friends in the previous world. Yuko, Rika, Miki, Aibon, Nono, Maki.., even Ayaka, although they couldn’t really meet. Then, what happened? Why don’t even Mako-chan thought about her as a friend?

***



“All done” said Maki “Let’s go”

Kaoru and Ai-chan opened their eyes at once to discover the doors of their cells both on the ground and the bandit standing in front of them, waiting. They had been hearing weird noises while they had their eyes closed, as if the metal was cracking and then falling on the floor, but they’d never imagined that Maki would be able to actually shatter the door that way.

“What? Now you wanna stay?” asked the older, crossing her arms and staring at the girls, who quickly denied with their heads “Then, move your asses out of that jail. The soldiers will be here soon”

Ai-chan obeyed immediately and soon was at Goto’s side asking questions that Maki wasn’t going to answer, but Kaoru, while she was passing over the door, saw something that caught her attention and stopped.

Water?

She kneeled and stretched her hand until touching the transparent liquid that was all over the edges of the metal. She hadn’t any doubt, it was water, but, how had arrived there was a mystery. Kaoru raised her eyes and looked at the bandit. She was arguing with Takahashi about the best way to get out of there before the guards find out that they’d escaped. The traveller just stared at her trying to find answers.

Who was that woman?

She was strong...

A bandit...

A friend?

In any case, better to have her as an ally.

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Re: Traveler [ch. 26 up]
« Reply #330 on: August 25, 2007, 12:11:43 PM »
Ah, good to see you back with a chapter. ^_^

Oh wow, the newcomer in the prison was Maki?! o_O Never even thought it would be her.

And LOL at the 3 princesses. Rika and Sayu I can see being royal easily enough, and Miki the regularly rebellious one...hehe. Just, lol. XD And Nacchi and Yuko being part of the court. XD

Oooh caught in the middle of a brewing war. Interesting. :D Yossi doesn't have friends in this world? o_O And yet, she has people loyal to her. But I suppose loyalty doesn't equate friendship, although friendship does imply loyalty (at least true friendship does). Hmm, fascinating.

Ok, speculation time. How did Maki break the metal? Kaoru found water around the metal. Discarding the HOW for the moment, my theory is that Maki somehow froze the metal with ice, and then shattering the frozen metal when it was made brittle because of the subzero temperatures. That would account for the cracking sound that they heard when their eyes were closed. As for how the ice would make metal brittle in the first place, I'm guessing the liquid was first forced to seep into the metal, then somehow frozen, which weakens the metal, and makes it possible to be broken up. As for the means by which Maki has accomplished this feat, I have no idea. But since this is technically a different reality to begin with, the rules must have changed, and perhaps while technology is not as evident, magic might exist? Hm. Will wait to see what your answer to this will be. XD

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Re: Traveler [ch. 26 up]
« Reply #331 on: August 25, 2007, 01:22:42 PM »
You’re back with a new chapter :mon lovelaff:

So she was Maki. And she has some kind of magic skills? Interesting... But more interesting is what happened between Yossi and Maki since they were friends.

War? Oh, crap...

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Re: Traveler [ch. 26 up]
« Reply #332 on: August 25, 2007, 06:14:36 PM »
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“What you have to tell me better be important, Counsellor. I was busy” said the Princess, making clear with her tone that her status made her stay above everyone else in the room.
“What? Doing your nails?” asked another voice behind her.

Turning her head, Rika glared at who had just entered. Another woman at her side whispered something at the ear of the newly arrived.

“Oh! Come on, Aya. I was just trying to loosen up the air a bit.
“You always so caring, sister” replied Ishikawa clearly pissed of.
“And you always so stiff…”
Hmmmmm...considering how easily they started sniping at each other, Rika's "sister" must be Miki, and Aya is her attendant like how Risa is Rika's attendant.

Hmmm...any chance of some GAM rabu-rabu here? =D



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“They never get tired, uh?”
“Yeah” answered Aya with a resigned sigh. Then, she looked at the girl at her side and met with Sayumi’s bright eyes “I’m sorry, Princess” said the older bowing “I didn’t know it was you”
“Don’t feel sorry. People seem to not notice me, anyway. I’m already used to it” replied the younger with a slight smile “So, you know why they wanted to see us?”
“I don’t have idea, highness. Those two began to argue before we could ask”
A third sister, and it's Sayu? What is this, an alternate universe version of King Lear? :?

Poor Sayu gets ignored...mind you, with sisters like Rika and Miki who have such strong personalities, it's not that surprising. Probably comes in handy at times too, like when she wants to sneak around and do something that she probably isn't supposed to. :P



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“Has arrived to my ears that your beloved Captain could be back in town. What do you think? Should we watch our backs?”
“Don’t talk like that about her. You know she’s innocent”
“She ran away, Rika. How can you still be so blind?!”
“I trust her”
“Dad trusted her and look at what happened. Everything is a mess because of her!”
“Everything was a mess before she arrived!” Ishikawa finally exploded “Or I have to remind you who saved your ass every time you got yourself into a fight because you got drunk at some tavern? She always kept your pretty face safe and covered all. That doesn’t mean anything to you?!”
“I’d like to believe in her as much as you, but people doesn’t change, Rika-chan. She was a…”
Hmmm...this makes it sound like Yossi had a less-than-honourable past before she became captain of the guard at the castle.  Evidently it was cause for concern for Miki. She seemed to want to trust in that world's Yossi, but that nagging feeling she had just wouldn't let her.

And what exactly was Miki going to say if she had been able to finish that last line? Yossi was a...what?



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“Well…” an older woman a few meters away from them cleared her throat “Now that our beloved Princesses had enough fun… Can we talk about the issue why I called you?”
“Of course, Counsellor” answered Sayumi making a few steps to stand in front of her two sisters, who even now where glaring at each other.
“Abe-san, please”
EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH?!?!? :OMG:

The Counsellor is NACCHI!?!?!?  You're not going to make Nacchi the villain in this, are you?????  :gyaaah:



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Natsumi took an envelope from the inside of one of her kimono’s long sleeves and gave it to Sayumi, who opened it and began to read it immediately. It took less than one minute for the Princess to finish the letter. Then, she raised her eyes, looked at the Counsellor and finally turned to her sisters with a worried look on her face.

Rika took the piece of paper that the younger was passing to her and read it too.

“This is true?” asked Ishikawa staring at the Counsellor.
“A messenger arrived this morning from the South and knowing the King’s brothers… I’m afraid that yes, it’s true”
“What are you talking about?” asked Miki, taking at the same time the letter from Ishikawa’s hands and reading it “Oh, shit”
“With the King dead it was just a matter of time” stated the older woman.
Lemme guess...with the king dead, his brothers from the south feel that his lands and wealth rightfully belong to them (since none of the girls are old enough to rule yet on their own) and as such, they're coming to lay their claim as the new rulers of the land. 

Not good. Though maybe...maybe this means that whoever really killed the king was sent by one of his brothers! :scared:



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“Nakazawa-san… What we should do?”

The Great Counsellor Nakazawa Yuko took a deep breath and looked straight at Rika’s eyes.

“Prepare for the war and pray for a miracle to happen”
Huh? So Nacchi's not the Counsellor? Yuko is?

If you mentioned this previously I must have forgotten it.  :mon sweat:



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“Goto Maki! You are one of the most wanted bandits of the country!”
“You’re a bit slow, don’t you?” smiled the older while she approached the bars separating her cell with Ai-chan’s
Maki's a bandit, eh? One of the most wanted? She must be damn good.



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“Wait…, aren’t you one of Yocchan’s pets?”
“I’m Lieutenant Takahashi, not a pet and… you said Yocchan?” she asked a bit confused “Only Princess Ishikawa call Captain that way”
“Forget it”
Shit, this world's Yossi used to be a bandit? She and Maki must have known each other back then (perhaps even being partners) for her to refer to her with such familiarity.  No wonder Miki has mistrust for her. Whoever really killed the king must have planned to frame Yossi right from the start. Assuming that everyone knew of Yossi's criminal past, she'd make an easy scapegoat.



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But Takahashi wasn’t going to let it go so easily. Why a famous bandit had familiarity enough to call her Captain by her nickname? Of course, Yoshizawa-san knew about Goto, it was part of her job, but the way Maki had said the name…
Oooooooooooooooooooooooh...so NOT everyone knows about Yossi being a former criminal? If not, then how did she manage to become one of the palace guard (let alone the Captain). Who else knows and how/when did they find out?  :o 



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“You know Yoshizawa-san, right?” insisted the younger.
“Well…, yeah. What about that?”
“We need to get out of here. She’s in trouble and we have to find her” Kaoru’s voice began to sound a bit desperate “If you’ve been able to brake those chains, you can take us out of here”
“What makes you think that I care about what happens to her?”
Sounds like Maki's pissed off at this world's Yossi as well. Perhaps she felt betrayed or abandoned when Yossi joined up with the palace guard. Hell, for all we know Yossi was the one who actually captured/turned Maki over to the authorities in the first place to save her own skin.



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“I’ve been away for a while. I missed something important?”
“The death of the King”

Goto turned immediately and looked at the girls still not believing what Ai-chan had said.

“He was killed five days ago” continued the Lieutenant “And Captain’s the main suspect”

...

“Come on, Yocchan wouldn’t kill a fly”
“That’s not what the whole country thinks. And since that happened, everybody’s looking for her, no matter if it’s for help her or catch her”
Okay, so regardless of whatever ill-feelings she might have, she still knows Yossi enough to not believe that she killed the king.


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“I’ll just help you to get out of here. Don’t ask for anything else, ok?”
“That’s enough” smiled a satisfied Kaoru.
“When we’ll do it?” asked Ai-chan.
“Now”
“Now?! But it’s still early!” shouted Takahashi.
“And?” asked Goto while watching carefully every inch of the metal door. She didn’t even pay attention to the almost hysteric lieutenant.
“And?! Wouldn’t be safer to do it at night?!”
Indeed, it doesn't exactly make sense to try and escape during the day when the majority of the prison guards are still on duty. It's also easier to sneak around at night than it is during the day.


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“But I’ve got an important appointment with someone who’s probably already angry at me. I love my head, you know? I’d like to keep it over my shoulders a bit more” then the older turned to the girls again “So, we’re going. Close you eyes”
Maki has an appointment to keep? It must have been made long before she was thrown in her cell, or a message was somehow snuck in and given to her.

And why do they have to close their eyes?  :pig huh:  Maki doesn't want them to see her technique for escaping from their bindings or something?



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“Aren’t we there yet?”
“Almost” answered Ogawa “Why do you wanna go there? Who are you looking for important enough to risk your life?”
“A friend”
“Owes you money?”
“What? No!” said Yossi looking confused “Why do you say that?”
“Because you don’t have friends” was Makoto’s serious answer.
Yossi doesn't have friends? Was this world's Yossi generally un-sociable except to a select few?  If

And who are they going to meet up with? Maki? :dunno:



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“All done” said Maki “Let’s go”

Kaoru and Ai-chan opened their eyes at once to discover the doors of their cells both on the ground and the bandit standing in front of them, waiting. They had been hearing weird noises while they had their eyes closed, as if the metal was cracking and then falling on the floor, but they’d never imagined that Maki would be able to actually shatter the door that way.

...

Ai-chan obeyed immediately and soon was at Goto’s side asking questions that Maki wasn’t going to answer, but Kaoru, while she was passing over the door, saw something that caught her attention and stopped.

Water?

She kneeled and stretched her hand until touching the transparent liquid that was all over the edges of the metal. She hadn’t any doubt, it was water, but, how had arrived there was a mystery.
There's obviously something more to Maki than we've been lead to believe. She's undoubtedly more than just a simple thief.  Whatever abilities she has (if any), they must have helped make her a good/effective/successful bandit. 

Question now is, if Maki does have some special abilities, is the same true for this world's Yossi? If so, was THAT the reason that she became a palace guard and eventually became captain? Perhaps it wasn't Yossi's choice to join up, perhaps she was "drafted" because someone saw that Yossi's abilities (if she has any) could be useful.

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Re: Traveler [ch. 26 up]
« Reply #333 on: August 27, 2007, 07:35:08 AM »
 :w00t: an update!

I didn't expect Miki to be a princess or Maki to the be the bandit at all! Kept thinking Miki would be the bandit. Nevertheless, Rika and Miki and their sibling rivalry was entertaining.

Mokoto is so cute here! But I wonder why Yossi has no friends, maybe she just has no friends Mokoto knows of. Like Maki? Which leads to a big question mark regarding this worlds' Yossi's past.
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Re: Traveler [ch. 26 up]
« Reply #334 on: August 28, 2007, 05:42:43 AM »
The 3 princesses, quite a mix that became sisters.  I love how they are portrayed in the story.  If Yuuchan is on their side, I get the biased preconceived notion that they are a great/strong kingdom. 8)  Nacchi and Yuuko, that type of tagteam seems like they rule with an iron fist. :lol:

I too wonder about Yossie of this world. What is her relation to people in her past and present? She has no friends but so far there's 2 people in love with her and Maki who still believes in her as a good person.

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Re: Traveler [ch. 26 up]
« Reply #335 on: September 13, 2007, 05:36:56 AM »
ook! I'm connected to the world again XD
first, let's reply some comments.

well, since Estrea explained it better than I could have done it, I won't tell much more about Maki. Yes, she have some 'special' skills and about her relationship with Yossi I'll let you know a bit in the chapter that I'm about to post. Wich leads to Yossi and her social life. It's true that she didn't have any friends? There's no answer for that right now. You'll have to wait XD
God, JFC,  you're comments are always difficult to reply 'cause you make to much questions XDD well, I can tell you that there are two reasons why Yossi joined the Palace's guard and became captain. One will be pretty obvious after the next chapter. The other I'll keep it secret for a while :P About Maki's appointment.. that person didn't appear yet in the story but it'll have a lot to do in the way she'll act. They had this 'date' planned before Maki left some time ago.

well, that's all I can tell for now XD

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Traveler ch. 27
« Reply #336 on: September 13, 2007, 05:45:17 AM »
oh.. and I know that the first post it's still a mess. I'll edit it when I come back from work.


27


It’s her fault!

Her fist crashed against the first thing she found, what ended being on of the columns of her room. Something that she regretted immediately.

“You shouldn’t have done that” said Matsuura walking towards the Princess and taking her aching hand “You’ve hit an innocent column, you know?”
“I can’t help it!” Miki let go Aya’s hand with rage “You were there! You know what’s going to happen!”
“Don’t shout at me ‘cause that’s not my fault, ok?!”

Matsuura shouted back. She knew that the only way to make Miki calm down was being firm against her. It was a reckless attempt; it’s true, because, as the whole country knew, was better go to hell than make Princess Fujimoto angry...

“I’m sorry” said the Princess lowering her voice and looking at the younger girl in front of her with submission.

Maybe she was a demon, but with Aya, when it was just them, alone, away from curious eyes, she let out her true self. Indeed, a sheep with wolf's clothing.

“It’s ok” replied Matsuura taking tenderly Miki’s hand again “I understand how you’re feeling, but you can let the rage take control on you”
“Nothing would have happened if she...”
“Stop saying that,”
“She...”
“She nothing. I know you love her, Miki. After all, she’s the one who brought me back to you” Aya smiled and caressed the older’s cheek before letting her hand rest on her face “You’re angry because she disappeared, because she makes you worry about her...” suddenly Aya stopped talking and stared at Miki, narrowing her eyes with concern “You’re ok?”
“Yeah. Why are you looking at me like that?”
“Miki, you’re burning. You’re really really feeling well?”

The Princess looked at her friend who seemed really worried. She was feeling well; in fact, she was feeling better than ever, but Aya wouldn’t believe her and Miki couldn’t tell her what was really happening either ‘cause didn’t even her knew it yet.

“Maybe I’ve caught the flu or something” she lied “Last night I went to the river and it was a bit cold...”
“You went to the river?” Aya’s expression changed. She was now angry “It was freakin’ cold outside, Miki!”
“And you weren’t here to warm me up...” complained the Princess with a playful grin, taking Aya’s waist and attracting the girl towards her.
“Not this time, Fujimoto” Matsuura needed all her will to stop her before Miki could touch her lips. Then, she moved away and began to walk towards the door of the room “I don’t want to get sick, too”
“Aya~ stay with me” begged the Princess “Come on~”
“Change your clothes and go to bed” Matsuura’s expression softened “I’ll bring you some soup”

Miki nodded happily and smiled at her friend, but once the door closed behind Aya, her smile dropped from her lips.

“I can’t let you know...” Miki stared at her hands. She could feel the blood in her veins boiling “I can’t”


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Rika was walking back to her chambers thinking about the letter. They were in deep trouble. It wasn’t the first time that her uncles menaced the kingdom, but they’d always had her father to stop them. The only war she knew about was the one that happened when her grandfather died and the four brothers fought for the throne.

Now they were alone. Their kingdom never had a great army and their best soldier, the only one her father would had trust enough to lead them, was now the most wanted criminal.

If only you could remember...

“Not even our first kiss...” she sighed.


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“Take your hands off of me!”
“Why we should do that?”
“You’re going to be in trouble! You don’t know who I am!”

The four bandits burst in laugh.

“Of course we know, Princess” answered the one that seemed to be the leader “That’s why you’re here”
“Boss, we should keep going. The soldiers are probably following us already and this place is dangerous”
“You’re afraid of a few little soldiers?” laughed him making fun of his men “Give me five minutes. I wanna have some fun with our guest”
“But boss, this is Inaba’s territory...”
“I don’t care about that woman and her little minions” he said while approaching her face dangerously to the Princess’s “We are... OUCH!”

The bandit stood up quickly and brought his hand to touch his bleeding lip.

“BITCH!” he shouted taking a knife from his belt “I’m gonna teach you...”
“Oh no, you won’t” said another voice coming from the shadows.

The four men turned to look at the intruder, well, the intruders, to be exact, ‘cause they were two. Two stunning girls, with rough boots and loose-fitting trousers. The one with long hair was wearing a vest over a simple t-shirt and the short haired, the one that had stopped the bandit’s leader, just a dirty white tank top and a black scarf around her head. All that combined with two beautiful swords aiming towards the bad ones.

The leader was still looking at them with rage, still cleaning the remains of the blood with the sleeve of his shirt.

“You know? That serves you well” said the taller of the girls.
“Who the hell are you?!”
“How he called us, Gocchin? Minions?” she asked turning to her friend that had followed her outside the shadows.
“Atchun will laugh when we tell her”
“Anyway, I think we should be the ones asking, since you’re inside our territory”

Two of the bandits jumped back when the girls walked towards them. The other one stayed next to their leader and whispered at her ear.

“Boss, they’re Yoshizawa and Goto... we can’t win...”
“You think I’m scared of two little girls? We are four”
“Yeah, you’re four” interrupted Yoshizawa “It’s a bit unfair, don’t you think, Maki?”
“Maybe a little”
“We are bandits” replied the leader laughing “We don’t play fair!”

Without warning, the bandit took the Princess by her wrists and held her with the knife dangerously near her neck.

“Maybe you didn’t understand me” Yoshizawa raised her sword and a serious glare replaced the smile that she’d been wearing on her lips ‘till then “This isn’t fair for you”

The bandit’s hand shook and she just need that heartbeat, while the man doubted, to make the Princess free form his grip. She was so fast that not even the air noticed her movements and, just seconds later, Ishikawa was safe on Goto’s arms while the taller returned her attention to the bandits.

“I’ll give you two options” she began to speak again to the man that someway had ended with his ass on the ground “One; you run as fast as you can out of our territory, without the girl, of course, or two; you stay and fight”
“If I was them I’d choose the first one” whispered Maki to the dazed princess’s ear.

Of course, the man was too arrogant to let a woman trample on him and, with a signal, he ordered his men to surround Yoshizawa.

“Bad choice”
“You’re not going to help her?!” asked finally the Princess to Maki while they walked out of the dangerous area where was going to take place the fight.
“Don’t worry, those are just mere exercise for her. Besides, she likes to play the heroine all the time”

Rika stared at her saviour from the distance. She didn’t look like the typical girl from the city and, looking at her clothes and after hearing what the men had said, she probably was a bandit from a rival gang. But, there was something. She had felt it when Yoshizawa took her away from the man. Ishikawa couldn’t tell what it was, but it was strong.

As strong as the thrust that sent the leader back to the ground. One of his men tried to surprise her from behind, but he had no opportunity ‘cause, before he could notice it, the girl had already torn his thigh with the sharpen edge of her sword. The other two hesitated for a moment. Their leader was still trying to get up and the other cried like a baby on the ground holding his leg. They looked at each other and thought the same. Better two at once.

The girl just kept the sword in its scabbard and smiled. Soon, there were two other men unconscious on the ground. Then, she walked slowly towards the leader, who was on her knees and holding her bleeding right arm.

“Next time...” she began to say “...you’ll choose the first option”

And that was the last he heard before a fist sent him to make company to his friends at dreamland.

“You’re slow”
“I was just having fun” replied the taller girl to her friend. Then she looked at Rika “Sorry for the mess, lady. Are you ok?”
“I... uhm... much better... Thank you”

A kind smile appeared on the taller’s lips. She couldn’t tell why, but the way that girl was looking at her made the young bandit feel the same excitement than when she was in a fight, a real one. The blood pumping in her veins, her muscle tensing up, the warm invading every inch of her skin, the butterflies in her stomach... No, wait... That last one was new.

“It was a pleasure” she finally replied.
“Come on. Stop flirting with that girl and let’s go home” said Maki interrupting and taking the taller by the arm “I’m hungry”
“But we can’t leave her alone here”
“Didn’t you hear them?” asked Goto pointing at the bandits on the ground “They said that there were soldiers coming after them. She’ll be fine”

Yoshizawa wasn’t sure about it, but maybe was better that way. They didn’t need a confrontation with the soldiers. She nodded at her friend and turned to the lady just to say goodbye in an apologetic way.

“Wait!” suddenly, Ishikawa took her hand and made the bandit turn again.
“Something’s wrong?”
“No... just... How... how can I repay you?”
“Re...pay?”
“Yochan! Come on!” called her Maki “Someone’s coming!”

But she didn’t pay attention to her friend. She just stared at the beautiful eyes looking at her before taking her reward without even thinking.

It could have been just a goodbye kiss, but it was just the beginning.


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“Yocchan?” asked the Princess after closing the door of her room and being sure that nobody can hear her.

No answer.

“Come on, it’s not funny” she began to look around a bit worried “We have to talk about something important, please”

Nothing.

Her things weren’t there, the plate of food untouched... Then Miki’s words came to her mind again.

Maybe people don’t change after all.



To be continued...
« Last Edit: January 17, 2008, 04:50:18 PM by len.chan »

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Re: Traveler [ch. 27up]
« Reply #337 on: September 13, 2007, 07:23:23 AM »
yatta~ welcome back!

Aya and Miki are talking about Yossi right? So Miki doesn't hate Yossi, she's just putting on a front? So then whats Miki up to? Is she trying to find Yossi or save her in some way?

woo woo Yossi saving the damsel in distress, kakkoii! Ok so thats why Maki and Yossi knows each other, and thats how Yossi and Rika meet... their bandits under Inaba, who is like their boss? But then how did Yossi end up becoming a captain? My guess is Rika told everything about how she got saved to her father or something and they tried to look for Yossi? But then... next question is how did she end up being suspected as a killer? whoa lots of question marks, anyways welcome back len-chan once again!

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Re: Traveler [ch. 27up]
« Reply #338 on: September 13, 2007, 11:33:20 PM »
W00T for flashbacks to the past.  I was confused when it flashed back at first...I thought Rika got kidnapped after that council meeting. :k-crazy:
Those bandits aren't too bright are they? But worked in everyone else's favour. :lol:  Inaba-san's the leader of Maki and Yossie, and they're all part of the same group and have territory?  This part of the story really piqued my interest.
Rika and Yossie's meeting got me thinking of pastel colours with flower borders found in shoujo manga. :usagiii:

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Re: Traveler [ch. 27up]
« Reply #339 on: September 14, 2007, 12:09:48 AM »
Flashbacks in your fic are always good. Maki does own some skill there, perhaps surpassing even Yossi? And it wasn't the duo's deliberate attempt to save Rika, but so happened the kidnappers were in their territory huh? Interesting. Well, your stories are the hardest to guess, always with some twist, so I'll just sit back and wait for your updates. And since your connection's back, I hope the updates will be more frequent.

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