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Re: All Aboard!
« Reply #220 on: April 09, 2007, 09:08:16 PM »

Me: Ack. *starts running* Everyone pray that Miki doesn't kill me! *runs faster*

After the pirate discovered a hint, please don't get yourself killed. We need the next chapter fast! Here  *Throw something to Estrea* It's chopping board. try to block her knives or something. If the ladle works, so as the chopping board. Good luck *jump on an empty crate on the way to hide from Miki's sight*

"Oh... Hi... Eri..."  ;D
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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #221 on: April 09, 2007, 10:29:02 PM »
Go Aichan!! But Risa just couldn't stay calm under Miki's method...after all...she is the reaction queen. And Kamei!! Cute! Ah...Aya still sore about Miki...oh well..she'll get over it. Can't wait for more.

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #222 on: April 09, 2007, 10:43:13 PM »
Go Aichan Go! but don't hurt Miki XDD
I loved the last two chapters. The Melons ploting to release Rika-chan from her wedding is priceless XD and poor Boss, letting her out of the chapter XD
The Navy girls have been discovered! I can't wait to know what's going to do Miki to Aya now...  :wahaha:

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #223 on: April 10, 2007, 02:40:19 AM »
OMG luv this fic! Miki-groping master! Aya/Miki action, close-combat specialist Eri! Married Ai/Risa! Yossie/Rika interaction! Pirates! Navy! you got everything! i luv this! Aww, Ai and Risa protecting eachother! hope miki wasnt badly hurt! please update as soon as possible!

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #224 on: April 10, 2007, 04:29:16 AM »
GAH THE TAGAKI was so cute!!!  :heart: First it was Risa protecting her Ai-chan, and now Ai protecting her Gaki-san!  :D

::dies!::

Now I'm worried about what's going to happen to Ayaya and her crew...and...if Ai can be the cook aboard their navy ship.  :)

Eri in a crate peeking out was too cute. aww!!  :heart:

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #225 on: April 13, 2007, 02:24:26 PM »
OH SHIT. O___O;;

This is bad, really bad. o___o;;; I feel a big fight comming up. :x It's gunna be cool though. *___* Really cool.

I fear for Risa's safty. :O! Maki wont do anything too bad, right? :O?

RIGHT? O__O;;

Ah, and in the last chapter, I loved MK <3 Megumi kicks ass. XD

Write more~!

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #226 on: April 14, 2007, 05:03:59 AM »
So now both of the group knows of each other origins XD... Will one of them start a war? Hello! Project Pirates vs Hello! Project Navy XD.

Rika might wants to stay with Yossi instead of the navy, but for her as a nobility, will she want to stay with pirates? I have a feeling she'll ask Yossi to flee with her instead ^^;

Ai-chan wins against both Gaki and Miki, wins against navy and pirate, so that means her hidden power is awesome XD? The workers in Ayaka's tavern may be a group of hidden mercenaries, seeing Ayaka can pass as a torturer too XD

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #227 on: April 14, 2007, 07:07:19 AM »
Now, hold on a sec, I wasn't trying to imply that I don't enjoy your hilarious shenanigans. They are pretty darn hilarious after all. It's just that I had an itch for some more plot. And of course I would love to see some cultural/historical footnotes if you'd care to share them.

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #228 on: April 14, 2007, 09:26:16 AM »
Maybe Yossi don't wants a pirate live for Rika, and she's going to make Rika to go with Aya and her crew

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #229 on: April 14, 2007, 07:24:40 PM »
And anyway, replies first, chapter after! As usual XD.

Yuuyami: No fight, no fight. Just...more complications later. XD

FIM: Mass quoting yay. XD And yeah, Aichan rocks with her ladle. ^^

JFC: Go go Aichan! ^^ And Aya being fed her soup was indeed cute. XD

black velvet: Haha you'll get used to the "wife" description eventually. :P

ferrar1: Threesome? Sheesh. :P

lil_hamz: Another threesome fan?! Gee. Lol. XD

slave: Threesome fan No.3. Lol. You get Ishiyoshi yes, but sorry, it's all GAM here baby. :P Learn to live with it...and maybe love it too. :P

Mikan: Tsk, Gomattou fantasies? *starts fantasising also* ....great, now I can add insomnia to my list of health problems. Damn you! :P

Amarghetta: Lol I am glad for your concern, and yes, managing this many characters is really exhausting. It takes longer and longer to write each chapter, so I hope everyone can be patient. :)

Sancho: Thanks for the chopping board! *said board is currently riddled with knives* It saved my life many times over. :)

C60533: Well well, long chapter ahead, sorry for the delay! XD

len.chan: Haha well you'll find out what happens in the next chapter! XD

Econxp: Welcome aboard! XD Glad you are enjoying the story. :)

orangesocks: Yes, Takagaki is the cutest. XD

Saikami: Maki will be delaying the punishment to Risa due to certain unforeseen circumstances. Unfortunately, that just really worsens Risa's situation, but I won't say why or how. :P

Ren: War? Make love, not war! Ok, end stupid cheesy comment. :P Lol Ayaka and her workers as mercenaries? XD Interesting idea. :P

iacus: Well I have plenty more hilarious shenanigans planned in the future, so no worries. And I would never forget the plot too. XD I'll add in cultural and historical footnotes when my brain is clearer (aka not at 3am in the morning like now XD). ^^ Glad you liked the chapter. ;)

Nana Oosaki: Hello and welcome! Well, we'll just have to see what happens next, don't we? XD



Phew that was a lot of comments. And no, I'm not discouraging you people to comment. More comments are love. XD Now you get to wait while I split the chapter into 3 posts cos its uber long again. XD

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #230 on: April 14, 2007, 07:26:54 PM »
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Woo! First wedge of Essy's story! <3

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #231 on: April 14, 2007, 07:38:28 PM »
Chapter 17


This is the part where we go "Oh shit". Eri thought to herself, curling into a tiny ball inside the crate. This was a very bad situation. Very bad indeed. Good as the crew of the Defiance was, there was no way, absolutely no way, that they could take on a whole town on their own. Of course, right now their identity was still known only to that strange group of people that were even weirder than the ones than ran the show on board the Defiance. She didn't want to contemplate the chaos that would occur if the news leaked out to the rest of town that there were navy in the area.

Eri didn't think it was possible, but she was starting to think that everyone else was crazy. Captain Matsuura was so unorthodox that it was a miracle that she wasn't booted out of the navy before all this insanity happened, while the First and Second Mates were inappropriately involved in ways she never imagined possible before (never underestimate the observational powers of a turtle-in-hiding). Risa had seemed relatively normal to her despite the tendency towards hysterics, but clearly even Risa had gone mad and gotten married in a flash to some barmaid. That lady Ishikawa too, other than being a runaway bride, had been sort of normal otherwise, but then the woman had gone and jumped into some stranger's arms before the bounty hunters had caught up once again. Eri didn't even want to start with the strange new group she had encountered just now.

The whole world was going crazy. With the possible exception of Yuuki, Eri was sure that she was the only sane person around in town. The thought made her want to hide even more, and the crate was feeling very comfortable as of now. Who cared about the fact that there was probably going to be a huge fallout from the fact that their identities had just been revealed?

Eri was the kind of person who was concerned about survival, and was perfectly content to lay low until the whole mess blew over. Unless she absolutely had to, she wouldn't leave the relative safety of the crate for now. Best to just stay put and watch the proceedings.

Her decision made, the sailor hunkered down in the crate, her experience with small spaces helping as she found the best position to be in without causing muscle cramps. Now to hope that the world didn't come to an end after Risa's inadvertent slip of the tongue...

~*~*~

The bump wasn't very severe. She had had worse in the past. But the blow to her pride was a bit more pronounced. Being hit with a ladle wasn't a story she wanted to share with anyone else in the future. It was just too embarrassing.

Her foul mood was compounded further when the naval trio came down from the second floor. Aya was still pale, but if she was still feeling unwell she did not let it show in her posture and expression. Her two companions stuck close to her, wanting to help her but knowing that Aya would not appreciate being treated as an invalid.

"Going somewhere?" Miki asked coldly, even as Aya's face immediately formed into a familiar scowl upon seeing the knife-loving pirate. Keeping her calm, the naval captain, replied coolly.

"We do not wish to overstay our welcome. If you will please move out of the way." Miki had positioned herself at the bottom of the stairs, preventing the trio from leaving.

"Do you intend to leave without repaying your debt to me?" Miki goaded, and a tic appeared on the side of Aya's forehead. She clearly didn't enjoy being reminded of that. Behind her, Maki frowned and glared down at the shorter female pirate that was causing her best friend so much distress.

"I will not forget your kindness," Aya's tone was acid. "I will remember the debt, and I will return it by not killing you the next time I see you." The last part came out through clenched teeth, Aya's distaste for pirates unconsciously coming to the fore as she spoke. Natsumi nudged Aya in the back warningly, clearly not liking how the conversation was turning out. They didn't need a confrontation right now.

Slightly taken aback by Aya's words, Miki was more than a little stunned (and just a tiny little bit hurt) by the sheer contempt and disgust present in Aya's voice. She was sure that she didn't warrant a response like that. Heck, Aya had been cold and a little mean to her earlier during all the groping, but never actually outright hating or being completely disgusted with her the way she was now. Miki was a bit confused by the change in attitude. What was wrong with this girl? Did the evil twin just decide to come out to play?

Their little staring match was interrupted by, predictably, Yuko.

"Hoy Miki, these ladies are NAVY!" The pirate captain belted out loudly for Miki to hear, but thankfully not loudly enough to let everyone else outside the tavern to listen in. Behind the pirate captain, Rika looked apologetically at the stunned naval trio, but didn't contribute anything else at the moment. There wasn't much for her to say anyway.

A collective 'shit' ran through the trio's minds. This didn't look good.

Miki had a stunned expression on her face for a moment, but it quickly faded and was replaced by a smirk. She didn't have anything against the royal navy in particular, since her hatred was mostly directed at slavers, but generally the navy was just a sort of a boogeyman for pirates in her opinion, and the knife throwing pirate wasn't easily spooked by how apparently mighty the Empire's naval force was.

That might have something to do with the fact that Yuko's crew habitually trawled the Eastern Sea where the naval presence had never traditionally been as strong as it would have been in the Western Sea and the Northern Rim, or even in the central region. There was mostly but a token presence of the Empire's supposedly mighty fleet in the East, since most of the ships had been diverted for the war efforts in other more troubled regions. The only real issue troubling the Eastern Sea had always only been pirates, not enemy armadas, so the Naval Command rated that somewhat further down their list of priorities when allocating their fleet deployment. As such, Miki wasn't as afraid of the Navy as she should probably be, since any and all Naval forces she had met up till now (not many really) had not been the cream of the crop, or to put it bluntly, were second-rate pushovers.

"How did you know that?" Miki asked idly as her captain strode over to stand beside her. Yuko smirked.

"The girl cracked after you left."

Miki beamed and preened slightly. "See, I told you it would work." As if the pirate had known it would all along. Yuko snorted and turned to level a deadly gaze at the tense trio on the stairs.

"And now I think, you people owe us an explanation before we start trying to kill each other."

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Eri watched as Risa was ushered back within the tavern by the ladle-wielding fiend who was probably her friend's new wife, judging from the garbled description she had gotten from her before the whole incident with that scary person had occurred. The woman was pretty, she had to admit. Not bad at all. At least Risa had good taste.

But with the movement of the action to within the tavern, it meant that she wouldn't be able to see or hear what was happening from where she was. Eri didn't like that idea. But she liked even less the idea of leaving her safe zone. What to do now then?

The answer, after a moment or so of thought, was obvious. She didn't really have to leave the crate to be able to eavesdrop on the others. She could just bring the crate along with her.

Her decision made, Eri crawled out of the side of the open crate, tipped it over so that the open end would fit over her head and hide her body, while allowing her to move around slowly by shuffling along with most of her body inside the crate.

Never underestimate the ingenuity of the turtle in her makeshift shell indeed.

~*~*~

If this were a traditional Wild West standoff, all we were short of were the pistols at the ready. Well, one person did have pistols galore, but said person was currently huddling with her wife and not really in any shape for any kind of a fight at the moment.

However, this was not the Wild West since for one, they were in the wrong region (east instead of west), and two, they were indoors in a port town and not in the main street of some small town set in a desert-like environment. Not to mention that it wasn't high noon either.

Nevertheless, the tension was high. Ayaka had quickly stepped in after hearing the unexpected bombshell, and delivered a speech that basically boiled down to "don't wreck my tavern any more than you already have!", before wisely retreating to the sidelines with a cup of tea. The pirates who were present were all gathered on one side of the main area of the tavern, and Rika was standing with them (mostly because of Yossi). The smaller group of navy people clustered together on the other side, with Ai by Risa's side still trying to calm the younger girl down (and slowly succeeding).

"Well? What is the Royal Navy doing in our humble little town?" Yuko drawled pleasantly, resting the tip of her broadsword on the ground and leaning on it.

Quick looks were exchanged between the three naval officers, a silent conference on what to say. Aya's eyes were hard, Maki's were tense but cool, and Natsumi had her "let's lie our way out of it" expression on. Quite naturally, Maki sided with Nacchi, and Aya was forced to cede the floor to her First Mate to diffuse the situation.

"We were navy until about 2 weeks or so ago." Natsumi began, laying special emphasis on the past tense of the statement. Taking a deep breath, the diminutive little woman continued.

"Unfortunately, as you can see, our fine captain here is a stubborn mule," Aya shot Natsumi a deadly glare, while Maki's lips twitched in merriment. "that disregards all the rules when she likes it, and we ended up aiding Lady Ishikawa over there in her escape on her wedding day." Rika nodded in acknowledgment of the fact.

"And all that because Aya reeeeeeeeally dislikes our dear lady's fiance." Maki added helpfully.

"Well the man was a jerk and...you know." Aya made a funny hand-flopping gesture trying to signal something, and Maki snickered beside her. "I couldn't very well let another woman marry someone like that and ruin her life forever."

"I don't know what...oh." Yossi started, before suddenly comprehending what Aya was trying to carry across. "I see." Kaori had also clearly gotten the hint, and was telling a confused Kei what exactly it meant, with Miki and Yuko interestedly listening in. Rika turned to look innocently at Yossi.

"What does she mean?" The boyish pirate coughed uncomfortably, before leaning over to whisper in Rika's ear, prompting a blush from the noblewoman at the information.

"Anyway." Natsumi interjected, clearing her throat. "Because of our actions in aiding the lady in her escape, we are in trouble." She said matter of factly. "To make matters worse, we prevented the local officials from getting a hold of lady Ishikawa for a second time when we docked at an Imperial port 2 weeks ago, and that's when the bounty hunters started coming in...we've been labelled as kidnappers and marked down for arrest if we stepped into any Imperial base."

"The problems of having a stubborn captain..." Maki sighed dramatically, and winced when Aya's booted foot dug unerringly into the back of her left ankle. "Ow."

"Is this true?" Yuko turned to ask Rika, who nodded in affirmation, adding. "It's something my father would do. He has enough influence to force expulsion from the Royal Navy if he chooses to." The naval trio shot carefully guarded grateful glances at the woman they had assisted, since while there was nothing false in her statement, it had helped to strengthen their lie by emphasising what could have happened.

"So basically we're here because we don't have a choice." Natsumi concluded, putting on her most morose face. Her lie interlaced bits and pieces of enough truth to make it sound convincing, and in any case, she knew that the situation she just described was the one of worst-case scenarios that could take place given their current position. Assuming they didn't die here first because the pirates didn't believe their story of course.

"If that's so, then why did the girl call someone 'Lieutenant' anyway?" Kei pointed out sharply. At that, Maki narrowed her eyes and glared backwards at Risa, who flinched and cowered back into Ai's embrace.

"Force of habit, probably." Aya covered easily. "We might be cast out from service, but some habits are hard to change."

Risa looked like she was about to say something, but Maki's evil look in her direction ensured her continuing silence. The look promised all sorts of unpleasantness for the sharpshooter later. Risa gulped nervously and prayed for her life.

There are a brief conference between the senior pirates. Miki just looked bored standing out of the circle, while gazing appraisingly over at the navy side. Aya didn't like the way the pirate was looking at her, and glared straight back. A slow smile spread on Miki's face at the hostility evident on Aya's face.

"So, what do you plan to do now, ex-navy?" Yuko asked, after her brief confab with her own officers. Natsumi shrugged eloquently and yielded the stage to Aya, who stepped forward to answer.

"Run some more, I guess. The bounty hunters won't decide to stop coming after us any time soon. They are already found us last night, as you can see." The young captain gestured at her shoulder wound with a grim expression.

"Poison's pretty nasty to be a regular staple on bounty hunters. They do want you alive, don't they?" Kei observed. Aya seemed to sink into a thoughtful mood, while Natsumi frowned behind her. Maki picked absently at the bandaged cut on her upper arm, thinking aloud.

"You don't think it's that case we're on to...?"

"It's not possible, is it?" Natsumi started uncertainly. "They can't possibly have pinned that down on us that quickly."

"Unless the message went astray..." Aya mused, then paled suddenly. "If that's true..."

"Shit." Maki summarised succinctly.

"Mind letting us in on the big secret?" Miki asked before any of her own shipmates could open their mouths.

More quick glances around. Then Aya sighed. "If I told you we got accidentally involved in some mass conspiracy and that someone is trying to eliminate us to keep it secret, would you believe me?"

"No." Yuko replied immediately. "But let's just pretend that we do anyway."

Aya looked conflicted for a second. On one hand, the case they had discovered was something on the order of a major corruption scandal within the Empire's bureaucratic structure, and she wasn't really thrilled about sharing it with anyone, much less a bunch of pirates. But in any case, the more she delved into the case, the less faith she had left in the official command structure of the navy AND the bureaucracy in general. These pirates might be on the wrong side of the law, but at least they were unashamedly criminal, Aya thought with a certain irony. Much better than those well-dressed hypocrites back in court, in a way.

Making a snap decision, Aya spoke.

"Short version, we stumbled on evidence of official corruption higher up the food chain, and my message back to request investigation might have been intercepted for all I know, so someone out there obviously wants us dead because of it." It was accurate without revealing too many details that outsiders didn't have much business knowing about.

"Politics." Yuko growled with obvious disgust. Aya shrugged casually, sharing the same distaste but not showing it on her face.

"Bad timing I guess. Considering that we just 'kidnapped' someone from one of the most powerful families in the Empire, this is a good time for whoever is behind the corruption to send people after us as well. They could just grab Ishikawa, then kill the rest of us to erase the evidence, and then go back and claim that we had to be eliminated because we put up resistance to their efforts at capture." Aya shook her head ruefully even as she began to piece together the full extent of their true predicament mentally. How could she not have thought of that possibility earlier? It had taken the comment that ordinary bounty hunters didn't traditionally use fatal poisons on their weapons before it managed to raise her suspicions about the whole thing. Poison was usually something for assassins and other rogues. Bounty hunters generally didn't resort to that, unless they were one of the more unsavory types that were more despicable in their methods.

Considering the kind of men she had faced last night, she had known that it wasn't the usual kind of bounty hunter that Rika's father would have sent after them. Those people knew better than to lay a hand on the lady, whereas those men from last night had been only too willing to want to violate their target. Not even the stupidest bounty hunter would want to cross that line, not when their patron was someone as powerful and influential as the Ishikawa clan.
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Even if they were not officially expelled from the Royal Navy as Nacchi had eloquently lied about earlier, Aya began to realise that their position was far more insecure than she had first anticipated. If the message back to her father had been intercepted, not only would they be in danger, but it might implicate her family as well. That wouldn't do at all. If it were possible, she wanted to go back right now and ascertain their safety with her own eyes. But first they had to avoid getting killed right here and right now.

"Seems like quite a situation you have there, eh?" Yuko noted with an inscrutable expression. The naval people held their breath. Would their story be convincing enough to avoid a fight?

"Eh who cares?" Miki looked bored already, and was picking at the dirt under her fingernails with one of her smaller blades. "Those weaklings from the Royal Navy won't dare to step into a pirate town. I believe that they're here only because they really aren't navy anymore." She gestured at the group opposite, who were bristling slightly at being labelled as weaklings. Even Risa managed to shake herself out of her stupor enough to look indignant.

"I resent that. The Royal Navy isn't that incompetent." Aya glowered at Miki, who grinned impudently back. "What, you admitting you're navy and saying that they're not incompetent?" Aya looked nearly murderous, but Natsumi stepped in quickly.

"Well we were, but we do care not to be labelled as wimps, even if technically we aren't part of the fleet anymore. Pride and all that. How would you like it if someone walked up to you and insulted your ability?" It was a quick counter, which Miki smirked at.

"I'd shove a bunch of daggers up their ass, but that's not the point." Miki flipped her blade and slipped it back up her sleeve. "The point here now," she paused dramatically, "is what you are going to do, and whether we will let you do it. Ain't that right, oh revered captain of mine?" Yuko snorted at Miki's cheekiness. "Shut your trap you little devil." Miki flipped a finger at Yuko irreverently and leaned against the counter.

"As annoying as that little devil is." Here Aya snorted in agreement. "She pretty much got it right. What are your plans? If you mean no harm, we might just consider letting you pass without injury. But no guarantees, of course." Yuko looked at them expectantly, tapping her fingers on the hilt of her sword meaningfully.

"Run like hell, of course. Didn't we say so before?" Aya sounded a little irritable, as if she wanted to get out, and fast. Miki kept trying to catch her eye, but Aya steadfastly looked elsewhere. Puffing out a small breath, Aya stared directly at Rika.

"Well my lady, we will be leaving soon. I must ask you if you wish to stay with us, or leave with your...friend." Aya's eyes flicked to Yossi, who looked uncomfortable for a moment under the searching gaze. Clearly, Aya was curious about who this person was, since it seemed highly unlikely that Rika would be acquainted with a pirate. But it didn't seem polite to ask under the circumstances, so the young captain shelved that thought aside for future reference.

Rika hesitated. She knew that the navy girls were lying about being in trouble...actually she wasn't sure after this. The addition of the secondary problem worried her, since she had not been aware of that fact, and it seemed genuine enough. But it mattered not, since from the moment she had first laid eyes on her Yocchan, she knew she would not be going along with them any longer.

"You can't." Yossi said very quickly, cutting her off. Rika blinked disbelievingly at her childhood friend. What did she mean?

"You know me...I'm not the person I was before...I can't let you live a pirate's life like I do now...it's not fair to you." Yossi fumbled desperately for the right words, trying not to sound like a heartless, idiotic jerk but not really succeeding. She winced when she saw the glimmer of tears in Rika's luminous eyes. Shit, I hate it when she cries! The pirate thought to herself in a panic, knowing that once Rika turned on the waterworks, she would be helpless before her every demand. At least, that was true 10 years ago.Yossi had toughened up since, although she had to admit that the tears still made her feel terrible enough to want to hug Rika and agree with whatever the other girl said. However, Yossi knew that she had to be strong and not crumble in this, since it was for Rika's own good.

Seeing her Yocchan resist falling before the waterworks treatment, Rika was impressed, but not too thrilled about not being able to change the decision. So she decided to play dirty and pull out the big guns that she reserved for special occasions.

Yossi blinked rapidly at the change. What was this? How could anyone be so...heartwrenchingly adorable?! Her eyebrow twitched unconsciously several times. Must...hug...NO! Yossi tried in vain to tear her eyes away, but they stayed rebelliously locked on the alluring visage before her. That face...her eyes drifted down from the glimmering tears in Rika's eyes, down to the sad little pout, and on to rest on the trembling lower lip...

The pirate gulped, her knees feeling weak. Any and all thought of banishing Rika away was erased from her mind in that instant as her defenses crumbled. Rika smiled inwardly at her victory, but didn't let it show on her face. Pressing her advantage, she stepped right into Yossi's arms (and the pirate instantly wrapped those arms around her) and leaned her head against Yossi's shoulder. "I'm glad we agree." The sneaky little woman purred silkily at a dazed Yossi, who didn't seem fit to reply at all at the moment.

"Remind me to avoid her." Maki observed to Natsumi, who was politely masking her chuckles. "She's even more dangerous than you." At that, Natsumi raised an eyebrow, clearly viewing it as a challenge. Maki smirked...but faltered slightly when Nacchi suddenly went all puppy-eyed on her. "Um...uh...I'll take that back..." The usually coolly flirtatious lieutenant actually seemed a bit knocked off balance. Natsumi turned off the charm and smirked right back. "Good girl." That got a growl as a response, but Nacchi only reached over fearlessly and patted Maki's head with a wide grin. Aya tried to ignore the two behind her, rolling her eyes at the absurdity of the whole situation.

Miki was grinning also at the exchange between Yossi and Rika. In a singsong tone, she crooned teasingly.

"Whipped~ Whipped~ Whiiiiiiipped~"

The other pirates snickered, while Yossi just looked miserable and horribly embarrassed at the same time (but she didn't think to let go of Rika for some reason).

"...shut up..." The boyish pirate groaned at the heckling from her shipmates. Miki looked completely unrepentant, as usual, but she did stop the chanting...but not the evil smirking of course. Miki gives up smirking rights to no one.

Aya coughed, trying to divert the topic back to where it all began. "Well since that issue's settled, I guess we'll be on our way..."

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« Reply #232 on: April 14, 2007, 07:39:29 PM »
She hadn't counted on Miki interfering of course. The knife-throwing pirate stealthily imposed herself between Aya and the broken doorway of the tavern, ignoring the death glares from both the young captain and a certain taller lieutenant behind her.

"Hold it." Aya levelled a stern gaze at Miki, who was impeding her exit. "What now?" Her voice was exasperated as she looked at the older girl.

"You're just going to leave without repaying your debt to me? You owe me your life you know." Aya frowned. She had almost forgotten that.

"I know that. But what do you want? I can't offer you anything else except my gratitude." Exasperation and irritation laced that voice. Miki smiled lazily.

"I haven't really thought of it yet...until I do, you should stay with me." Behind Aya, 2 pairs of eyes nearly popped out of their sockets. Aya herself clenched her teeth together, grinding the molars against each other as she tried her best not to try and choke the person who had saved her life.

"I can't do that." Every syllable came out rather strained. Miki looked absolutely nonchalant and uncaring. "That's not my problem, is it? What about that supposed honor of yours? Aren't you people supposed to be really honorable and all that crap? Are you going to just skip out on this debt then?"

Direct hit. Natsumi winced for Aya's sake, and wondered if Aya might just decide to murder Miki on the spot to get out of her predicament, saviour of her life or not. People did have limits after all. The navy captain didn't show any outward sign of her inner conflict, but Natsumi knew Aya well enough to sense the murderous intent hovering around the younger woman.

Cool...keep cool...calm... Aya recited the mantra inside her head, knowing that losing it would only entertain that infuriatingly obnoxious pirate before her. Taking a deep breath, Aya tried to combat the overwhelming urge to whip out her gunblade and chop Miki into tiny pieces. Self-control won out, fortunately or not.

"I cannot, and will not, follow you. You are the most obnoxious, self-centered, and impossibly shameless person I've ever had the displeasure of meeting in my whole life up to now." Aya paused, savoring the twitchy expression on Miki's face, before continuing. "Unfortunately, it is a distinct misfortune of the times that I do owe my life to you, and while I acknowledge the debt and offer my gratitude, I cannot accede to your churlish request now. But trust that I will not forget the debt, and on my honor and that of my family, I will repay it one day. This I promise, that as long as I, Matsuura Aya am alive, I will repay that debt to you one day."

Given the state of her emotions, that was quite a speech by Aya, certainly one that would have made even her father proud. Miki, for her part, looked somewhat stunned due to Aya's less than flattering description of her personality. Somehow, hearing it being put that way from someone like Aya profoundly shocked the pirate. It just...hit her a lot harder than it would even if it came from someone else. Just the way she said it...

Taking the opportunity since Miki was distracted at the moment, Aya quickly pushed past her and went out, Maki and Natsumi tagging along behind, Natsumi nodding in farewell to the rest of the pirates, who were finding some amusement in Miki's current imitation of a stone statue. Risa, on the other hand, whispered a few quiet words under her breath to Ai, clutching at the older girl's hand and squeezing it comfortingly, before chasing after her superior officers.

By the time Miki had recovered from her trip to "What the fuck was that?"-land, Aya and company were already out of the tavern and several yards away. Incensed, the pirate dashed to the doorway and yelled.

"I'll get you for that!"

Without even sparing a glance backwards, Aya waved one hand dismissively. "I'll be waiting for it."

Turning around, Miki growled at her snickering shipmates. "Shut up, damn you." Her eyes strayed back to the departing group, or specifically, to one captain prodigy that had irresistibly captured her attention and sucked it in like a vortex with no return.

Damn her...

~*~*~

Reina was whistling as she took the back alleys, crisscrossing the narrow lanes to get back to the wharves sooner after her second trip of the day to the blacksmith. The burly man had been greatly amused to see her back within 15 minutes of departing his smithy, but wisely chose not to comment further since the expression on the wonky-eyed girl's face was...unpleasant, to say the least. The inconvenience of having to retrace her steps didn't sit too well with her, even if she did get a bit of action with the little skirmish earlier.

Passing by the opening of another alley without a care in the world, Reina hefted her load of freshly repaired and newly made light harpoons, determined to get back to the ship to drop off the load. However, a strange movement in the alley she had just walked by caught her attention, and being a naturally curious person, the wonky eyed pirate couldn't help but slow and turn around to take a second look.

Weird. Nothing. There was nothing out of the ordinary. Just some abandoned crates and barrels, and piles of rubbish scattered in random piles, just like any other alley. Reina was sure she thought she had seen something move...but since there was nothing, she would go on...

Wait. Reina blinked and rubbed at her eyes with her free hand. Was she hallucinating? Did a crate just...move on its own? Her eyes wide, Reina watched as the crate in question jiggled to one side, shuffling across the ground like it was being moved. Except there was no one moving it. At least, no one that was apparent. Reina didn't really believe in ghosts, but she was willing to overturn that belief at the sight of the mysterious moving crate. It spooked her.

That last thought knocked some of her spine back into her. She wasn't a coward, damnit! There were no such things as ghosts! She was going to march right over there now and prove it. She would!

Feeling somewhat frightened by her own audacity, she reached over her shoulder to grab at her main weapon, the specially reinforced battle harpoon that was slung across her back. The weight of the familiar weapon lent her strength and courage, and slowly the wonky pirate advanced, her feet making very little sound on the floor as she moved closer to the independently moving crate that was currently shifting near the back door of some place.

A couple of feet away from the supposedly haunted crate, Reina paused, lifting her harpoon higher and shifting her grip, readying for a thrust to break the crate and prove once and for all that there were no ghosts in the world.

CREEEEAAAAK!!! The sound of splintering wood as the sharp end of the harpoon made contact was gratifying, but what Reina did not expect was the equally surprised yelp that squeaked from within the crate at the same time. Just when the pirate thought that perhaps ghosts really did exist, the crate fell apart sufficiently to reveal a crouching Eri...and the harpoon that had narrowly missed impaling the hidden girl's arm.

"What the hell are you doing?!" They blurted at each other at the same time. Eri shrank backwards, falling on her butt and wincing when some wood splinters poked her awkwardly. Reina just looked confused. What in the world was this girl doing, hiding in a crate and moving around with it on her like some kind of second shell? Even as she thought that, Reina voiced her opinion aloud.

"What are you, some kind of turtle? Crawling around with a crate on top of you!"

Eri blinked rapidly. "How did you..." Then pausing when she realised that someone just pulled the turtle reference to her again. Worse yet, this girl didn't even know her and she made turtle jokes too! Did the world hate her surname that much?

Life just wasn't fair to her at all.

~*~*~

"How long before our preparations are complete?" Aya asked briskly as she paced the deck of her ship, glad to be back on it after so long. Well, technically, it hadn't been all that long, less than a day actually, but the string of events in between had stretched the hours a lot more than she liked.

"We need to round up the crew first I'm afraid, it's on a bit of a short notice. And we do have to finish up the repairs before we sail. We can leave earliest just before sunset, though in that case we might as well wait until the next morning before we sail out." Natsumi replied professionally as she checked her list. Aya sighed. "Can't it be any quicker?"

"Hey, we got that Ishikawa off our backs, so the bounty hunters won't be after us anymore." Maki commented as she stopped by her two comrades. Aya smiled tolerantly at the taller woman.

"That's not the point Gocchin. They still think she's with us, so if we leave quickly it would draw attention away from her. Might as well give her a bit of a breather and a headstart for them to start running before the bounty hunters catch on to the fact that their quarry's elsewhere already."

Maki shrugged with a sidelong glance at her captain. "How very nice of you."

"Well, might as well do her one last favor after wriggling our way out of protecting her." Aya said, turning to face the seaward side of the ship. "And there's also that thing with those attackers from last night...I wasn't lying about that part, we might actually be in trouble there..." With a frown, Aya fell silent, thinking about the implications.

"You don't think that really..." Maki began, but Natsumi shushed her with a look, trying to reassure Aya.

"Don't worry, I'm sure your family will be safe. Your household guards can take care of them if nothing else." Aya smiled at that.

"Yeah...Boss and the rest...they can take care of things..." The youngest of the trio looked distant for a moment. "I miss them." She admitted. "All of them."

"Well, take a break for now, we'll take care of things until we can sail." Natsumi said firmly. "It'll be a bit of a rush, but I'm sure we can make it out of port before the sun sets." Beside her, Maki nodded in agreement.

Unable to find the energy to protest, Aya acquiesced gracefully, leaving her officers to do the work. It would take a while, but she could wait. She trusted their ability after all.

An hour later, the sky had darkened, storm clouds gathering ominously overhead and obscuring the sun from sight. The sky was dark and heavy, with imminent threat of a fierce thunderstorm. Maki had gone to ask a resting Aya if they were to set sail even in a storm when their preparations were complete, and Aya, ever the reckless captain, insisted on their departure plans. Nothing short of a hurricane would change her mind on that matter.

A half hour after Maki's report, Aya got restless and went out of her cabin to check on the progress, and was met by Yuuki, who informed her that the repairs were almost complete, although Nacchi and his sister had personally gone out to help round up the stragglers before they actually set sail. The sky remained threatening overhead, with flashes of lightning and the roll of thunder rattling like a drum in the moist air. But there was yet no rain.

Impatient herself, Aya got off the ship, intent on seeking the other two out and get them back. Stragglers were secondary, what was important was getting her officers back on board so they could leave on schedule.

Maki came back to the ship first, with a couple of sailors she managed to find. Speaking to her younger brother, she learned that the captain had gone about a half hour ago, and that Nacchi hadn't come back from her search yet either. Yuuki then suggested that they complete the preparations while the others were away, so that there would be no delay when they returned. Shrugging, Maki agreed, beginning to oversee the operations as befitting her rank, ignoring the fact that the air was getting uncomfortably humid and thick as the moisture in the air built. Tropical storms were such unpredictable affairs some time, the lieutenant mused. Quick to build, and fierce when it broke, but ultimately it would clear as quickly as it came.

15 minutes later, the First Mate returned. She didn't find anyone else. But she was holding a piece of parchment, her face pale even as Maki hurried up to her, wondering what could be wrong. Wordlessly, the parchment was handed over, even as Natsumi said those fateful words in a cracked voice.

"She's not coming back with us."

The storm broke overhead, sending showers of rain down onto the face of the earth, in benediction or in lament, it could not be known. Only that the sky wept in unrelenting torrents, echoing the hearts of the mortals it gazed down upon.

As if it would never stop, as if it would endure forever...

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I repeat, no one kill me after Miki nearly murdered me at the end of last chapter!

Maki: And I will do what she failed to do, you little twerp of a director.
Me: What do you mean, twerp?! And why do you want to kill me? o_o
Maki: What did you do to Aya, you nutso?
Me: Well, you just have to wait like everyone else to find out. XD
Maki: I guess I have to do this the hard way... *rolls up sleeve*
Me: *pales* Oh...shi....nooooooooo dooooooooooooooon't!!!!

-screen fades out-
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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 16 up]
« Reply #233 on: April 14, 2007, 07:40:54 PM »
Dibs on first comment! <3

Eri made me feel giddy throughout the whole chapter XD It must suck to have Kame(i) as a surname, the turtle jokes never cease to make me laugh so much xD!!!!

I see you're really getting the plot going with this chapter, with the corrupted officials wanting to silence Crew Royale for discovering secret information >.o

Aya pwned Miki. Sweeeeeeeeeeeeet xD! Miki's reaction was so priceless, it's a kodac moment! :D


And Aya...

WHAT.

THE.

FUCK?!


Watchoo do to her you evil authoress you?!  :OMG: :stoned: :scolding: :frustrated:

...

...

You are going to write the next chapter after you are done sleeping, yes?

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 17!!!]
« Reply #234 on: April 14, 2007, 08:18:35 PM »
yay! new chapter!!! im addicted to this fic, u must update asap!...please? :heart:

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 17!!!]
« Reply #235 on: April 14, 2007, 08:38:51 PM »
AYAAAAAAAAAAA!!
you're eviiil!

now I'll keep all night wondering what happened to her! A possibility is that Miki kidnapped her... but again, if was Miki, Nacchi wouldn't be so worried, right? although I really wish that it was that what happened XDD

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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 17!!!]
« Reply #236 on: April 14, 2007, 09:34:08 PM »
Hahaha, Reina found the Kamei-in-a-box. <3
I still want one.

And quoted just because I share similar feelings:

And Aya...

WHAT.

THE.

FUCK?!


Watchoo do to her you evil authoress you?!  :OMG: :stoned: :scolding: :frustrated:

Mmrr... I'm too tired to write much else.
Just got power back in my house...
Keep up the awesomeness. <3
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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 17!!!]
« Reply #237 on: April 14, 2007, 09:43:43 PM »
Eri and turtle ways XD I could picture it happening in my head so well XDD And, of course, she'd choose safty for herself over everything else, I means she DID ditch Risa in that haunted house that one time. :O But actually going out into the allyway like that? Priceless. Let there be TanaKamei love ;D!!

Rika with the waterworks made me laugh, and then how Yossie didn't fall for it but was having to force herself to resist made me laugh harder. Then you threw at us Rika doing the puppy face~! I feel bad for Yossie being put in almost a trance by it, but who wouldn't?

Then Nacchi had to do the face too, are you trying to kill me with cuteness? XD Because it's working. :imdead:


Risa left her wifey :O~!


...

-gangs up with Maki- Watchu do to Aya~!? >:C!!
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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 17!!!]
« Reply #238 on: April 14, 2007, 10:46:57 PM »
Quote
"The girl cracked after you left."

Miki beamed and preened slightly. "See, I told you it would work." As if the pirate had known it would all along. Yuko snorted and turned to level a deadly gaze at the tense trio on the stairs.

"And now I think, you people owe us an explanation before we start trying to kill each other."
Okay, HERE is where it gets interesting. :D


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She didn't really have to leave the crate to be able to eavesdrop on the others. She could just bring the crate along with her.

Her decision made, Eri crawled out of the side of the open crate, tipped it over so that the open end would fit over her head and hide her body, while allowing her to move around slowly by shuffling along with most of her body inside the crate.
Cute. That is all. ;D


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Ai by Risa's side still trying to calm the younger girl down (and slowly succeeding).
Succeeding in calming her down? I wonder what she was doing...


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Quick looks were exchanged between the three naval officers, a silent conference on what to say. Aya's eyes were hard, Maki's were tense but cool, and Natsumi had her "let's lie our way out of it" expression on. Quite naturally, Maki sided with Nacchi, and Aya was forced to cede the floor to her First Mate to diffuse the situation.
Oooooh, interesting move by Aya.


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"And all that because Aya reeeeeeeeally dislikes our dear lady's fiance." Maki added helpfully.

"Well the man was a jerk and...you know." Aya made a funny hand-flopping gesture trying to signal something, and Maki snickered beside her. "I couldn't very well let another woman marry someone like that and ruin her life forever."
More Keita bashing!  :bigdeal:


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Rika turned to look innocently at Yossi.

"What does she mean?" The boyish pirate coughed uncomfortably, before leaning over to whisper in Rika's ear, prompting a blush from the noblewoman at the information.
Poor, poor naive little Rika. :shy2:


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Then Aya sighed. "If I told you we got accidentally involved in some mass conspiracy and that someone is trying to eliminate us to keep it secret, would you believe me?"

"No." Yuko replied immediately. "But let's just pretend that we do anyway."
Conspiracy? Is this for real or part of the act?  ???

at Yuko's reply.


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"You can't." Yossi said very quickly, cutting her off. Rika blinked disbelievingly at her childhood friend. What did she mean?

"You know me...I'm not the person I was before...I can't let you live a pirate's life like I do now...it's not fair to you." Yossi fumbled desperately for the right words, trying not to sound like a heartless, idiotic jerk but not really succeeding. She winced when she saw the glimmer of tears in Rika's luminous eyes. Shit, I hate it when she cries!

...

Seeing her Yocchan resist falling before the waterworks treatment, Rika was impressed, but not too thrilled about not being able to change the decision. So she decided to play dirty and pull out the big guns that she reserved for special occasions.

Yossi blinked rapidly at the change. What was this? How could anyone be so...heartwrenchingly adorable?! Her eyebrow twitched unconsciously several times. Must...hug...NO! Yossi tried in vain to tear her eyes away, but they stayed rebelliously locked on the alluring visage before her. That face...her eyes drifted down from the glimmering tears in Rika's eyes, down to the sad little pout, and on to rest on the trembling lower lip...
Oh shit that's just playing dirty, not to mention hella slick.  :hehehe:

*dammit I miss the Pimp emoticon*


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"Remind me to avoid her." Maki observed to Natsumi, who was politely masking her chuckles. "She's even more dangerous than you." At that, Natsumi raised an eyebrow, clearly viewing it as a challenge. Maki smirked...but faltered slightly when Nacchi suddenly went all puppy-eyed on her.
Ok, THAT's just not fair.  :tantrum:


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Miki was grinning also at the exchange between Yossi and Rika. In a singsong tone, she crooned teasingly.

"Whipped~ Whipped~ Whiiiiiiipped~"
That's just so....so...MIKI! 


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"You're just going to leave without repaying your debt to me? You owe me your life you know." Aya frowned. She had almost forgotten that.

"I know that. But what do you want? I can't offer you anything else except my gratitude." Exasperation and irritation laced that voice. Miki smiled lazily.

"I haven't really thought of it yet...until I do, you should stay with me." Behind Aya, 2 pairs of eyes nearly popped out of their sockets.
Speaking of Miki (and maybe about being whipped :P), it's pretty obvious here that despite just having met the previuos night, she really likes Aya. Why else would she want to be around? She wikes her!   :k-thrilled:


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Aren't you people supposed to be really honorable and all that crap? Are you going to just skip out on this debt then?"

Direct hit. Natsumi winced for Aya's sake
*winces* Ooooooooooooooooooh.


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By the time Miki had recovered from her trip to "What the fuck was that?"-land, Aya and company were already out of the tavern and several yards away.
I've been there a few times. :P


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Reina blinked and rubbed at her eyes with her free hand. Was she hallucinating? Did a crate just...move on its own? Her eyes wide, Reina watched as the crate in question jiggled to one side, shuffling across the ground like it was being moved. Except there was no one moving it. At least, no one that was apparent. Reina didn't really believe in ghosts, but she was willing to overturn that belief at the sight of the mysterious moving crate. It spooked her.

...


"What the hell are you doing?!" They blurted at each other at the same time. Eri shrank backwards, falling on her butt and wincing when some wood splinters poked her awkwardly.
Again, just cute. If this were a scene in a show/movie, it'd be a lighthearted comedic moment, watching Reina keep looking back in between instances where Eri moved the crate.


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Impatient herself, Aya got off the ship, intent on seeking the other two out and get them back.
Uh-oh.  :dunno:


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"She's not coming back with us."
Aya's been kidnapped??? Was it Miki?!?!? Has Aya been Miki-napped????   :frustrated:
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Re: All Aboard! [Chapter 17!!!]
« Reply #239 on: April 14, 2007, 11:36:23 PM »
Now I thought it would have been Risa who stays behind with her wifey. Or did Ai sneak aboard? Wait, I just realized something: for a ship captain to marry you don't you have to be on their ship?

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