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The Path I choose.... Update, [2/05/13]
« on: April 03, 2013, 06:18:51 AM »
Hi AKB48 fans!   :twothumbs

This is Miko!  :cathappy:

I love writing fanfics but I have constant writer blocks so I thought that I could make a story so that I don't have to think hard about what readers would like to read, so in order to do that I made this story, so the readers can kinda choose what happens next...sorta

Of course, there will be consquences/ bad ends and might end quicker than others. So of course some options are better than others but not knowing where the path takes you...that's what makes it fun right?  :P

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The Path I choose....
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Takamina,earlier than anyone else, entered the AKB48 studio and wandered about. She settled herself down the nearest table and fumbled through her bag to find her well preserved manga, that she never had the time to read and enjoy. As she looked through her bag, her hands grabbed onto a CD and she brought it out.

She smiled as she looked at the cover of the CD.

Jane Doe
Takahashi Minami


Yesterday she had her first solo single released and she was tremendously happy, her goal to becoming a solo artist was progressing. But the happiness soon dispersed a bit as her fingers traced the back of the tracklist and stopped as it reached the song only Type C had.

Migikata

She smiled sadly.

That's right...

When her solo debut was announced, the person she was holding, the person who she was first sharing her happiness with was Atsuko. Her irreplaceable partner and her ace.

Takamina, once again looked at the imprinted word, Migikata, and tears slowly cascaded from her eyes onto the CD. She gave a bitter smile and closed her eyes.

I wonder who's right shoulder you're depending on now?

Just then, Takamina received a text and slowly she raised her hands to take out the phone from her bag.

From Yuko,

I know I should be at practice right now, but the cheese at this store is just GREAT! I know you're early anyways, so come down to the AKB48 cafe now! Nyan Nyan wants to see you aswell....Don't you steal my Nyan Nyan away from me. But yeah, you should come, we can have a little celebration for your release!!!!


Takamina gave a heavy sigh and chuckled, Yuko never fails to make her laugh. The midget smiled and was about to text back when, she received another text, this time from someone she hadn't heard for in a long time. 

From Acchan,

I'm outside the studio. Can I see you now? I can't be here for long...


Takamina startled by the text, jumped a little in bubbling excitement. Acchan's here...

The midget was about to run out of the studio door, but instead bumped into one of her kouhai's. "Ah, Takamina! Thank god, you're here. I'm having trouble learning a new move for the new song. I'm sorry for troubling you but do you perhaps have the time to teach me now?

The leader stood there, trying to gather her thoughts...what should she do?

a) Text her friends saying she can't make it and stay behind to teach her Kouhai. After all she is the leader and this is her responsibility.
b) Tell her kouhai that she will teach her the move, and invite her to cheese eating with Yuko and Nyan Nyan.
c) Apologize to her kouhai and run to eat cheese
d) Apologize to her kouhai, saying that she will be back really quick and go an meet Acchan for a bit,apologizing to Yuko that she can't have cheese with them. 
e) Pretty sure her kouhai loves Acchan, perhaps they could both go meet her together, and text Yuko that she can't have cheese with them today.
f) Take everyone to cheese eating. Acchan and her Kouhai

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The option with the most votes, wins and will be the trigger to the next chapter. Choose wisely :)

Thank you for reading!!!:) 

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« Last Edit: May 02, 2013, 09:59:02 AM by Mikomiko »
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Re: The Path I choose....
« Reply #1 on: April 03, 2013, 07:59:44 AM »
Eh? WE get to vote on this? While I wantTakamina to just run straight out to see Acchan, a jealous Acchan being rejected by Minami because of a kouhai is always an interesting sight. Somehow I like to see a sad Atsuko then Takamina will come and cheer her up and they will make up and kiss. Urgg I don't know how to vote.

On a side note, Atsuko's migikata is always always always Takamina's.

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Re: The Path I choose....
« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2013, 08:11:25 AM »
I like the concept but I won't vote because I want to see all paths XD
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Re: The Path I choose....
« Reply #3 on: April 03, 2013, 09:54:05 AM »
I dont know I cant choose
so why dont you do like kurosawa87-san just said
ya.. let make some ''If Takamina choose...''
I will waiting :cathappy: :cathappy:
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Re: The Path I choose....
« Reply #4 on: April 03, 2013, 11:48:06 AM »
I like your idea

I would choose D because I want to see atsumina hehe

I know I am being selfish but what can I say I love Atsumina :P XD
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Re: The Path I choose....
« Reply #5 on: April 03, 2013, 12:15:25 PM »
I think kurosawa87 idea is pretty good lol. Like what will happen if she choose a/b/c/d/e/f XD

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Re: The Path I choose....
« Reply #6 on: April 03, 2013, 02:39:48 PM »
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Re: The Path I choose....
« Reply #7 on: April 03, 2013, 09:57:55 PM »
Great start :D & poor Minami, always faced with decisions to make :P Tough choice, as mentiond she is the leader & should teach her kouhai but postponing the arrangement for a little while should be okay ^_^'' Atsuko is only there for a limited time though & her friends did go out of their way to invite her too tho :S Ah, i can't choose T__T Lol. Trying to think like Minami hurts, don't know how she always does it lol.

Well maybe super Minami can somehow pull off doing everything :P
Guess if I had to really choose hm...it's between A and D as much as A kills me but I mean it'd look bad if the leader ditched helping out a kouhai to go meet her friends...But if D implies that she will still teach her kouhai after finishing talking to Atsuko then I choose that :D I;ll feel bad for the group invite but she can see the members another time i guess :P
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Re: The Path I choose....
« Reply #8 on: April 04, 2013, 03:50:59 AM »
I would say D and F

Since Atsuko did said that she would not be there for a long time... so meeting her should not take a long time

About the Kouhai... she can take care of her later... when you have more time or during practice hour or on break time between practices

Or tell the Kouhai to find someone else if she needed ASAP

Even if she is a GM doesn't mean she needs to priorities others before hers

As for Yuko and Haruna... if only eating... may be she could do it later or some other times

But Yuko did say that Haruna would like to talk to Minami about something..

So it might be important... for Haruna to look for Minami that she could not talk on the phone

I can't wait to find out more

Thank you for the interesting fic

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Re: The Path I choose....
« Reply #9 on: April 07, 2013, 10:37:16 AM »
Dig this back up. Please update I want to see all the paths that Takamina choose XD

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Re: The Path I choose....
« Reply #10 on: April 07, 2013, 02:36:57 PM »
Good concept!
I chose the f answer hehe

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The Path I choose.... Chapter 2
« Reply #11 on: May 02, 2013, 09:57:57 AM »
A/N: D had the most votes

Tanchan: Mou~ You didn't vote, but haha you're right, all those thoughts were running through my head and I had no idea what to choose so I gave the task to you guys.  :twisted: Hehe. Yup, Atsumina's Migikata love. Hope you enjoy this chapter!

kurosawa87: As much as I want to write about all the options.... :( I can't...my head doesn't produce many ideas...gomen. So... :cow: hehe vote, please. Hehe.

Hii_chan: Hmm...Voting is hard, isn't it. But only one decision can be made! Muwahaha  :grin: Hehe.

Elo: D is good!!!!! Haha

bimbo:  :nervous All 6 options? Takamina's gonna explode...haha...

TTLuver497: Awesome! Another vote!

arrow27: Haha, I know right? Minami and her decisions...she's so admirable. As I was reading I was in a dilemma between A and D. I Hope you enjoy the next chapter!

cisda83: Good Analyzing! Hope you like this chapter

Tanchan: Haha, thank you!
 
kahem: Thank you. Hope you can keep voting and reading.

By choosing D: The little Migikata flashback was unlocked:)

If....A/B/C/D/E/F

Takamina looked at her kouhai and sighed. She couldn’t make a decision on what to do, should she go meet Yuko, Acchan or stay? She was in deep thought, so deep that she shrink due to the pressure.

The end.

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Chapter 2: Meeting Acchan


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Takamina patted her kouhai on the shoulders and asked her to wait for 5 minutes or so because she had something important to attend. “I’ll be back in 5 minutes. Won’t be long. Start practicing.”

The midget waved back to her kouhai as ran down the theatre while texting Yuko, she can’t make it to ‘cheese eating’. Rushing down the corridors, Minami tripped and landed face first on the hard ground, giving her a bruise right on the centre of her forehead.

Disregarding the pain, Takamina got up and ran towards the entrance of the theatre, to find the former ace in her usual disguise. The midget could feel her heart literally bursting out her chest. How long has it been since she got to see her?   

“Minami!”

“Atsuko…Come inside first.”

The pair found a secluded place in the theatre and instantly, Acchan enveloped her best friend in a tight and warm hug.

“Hmm…Minami, Congrats.”

“Haha…thanks.”

Acchan scruntinised the older girl and leaned in to touch the growing bump on her forehead. Her eyes lowered to the midget's grazed knees. "Did you fall?" She asked concern rising from her voice.

Takamina blushed, looking away she nodded hesitantly. "I'm still a fail....haha..."

"No, you're not. You're just adorable." Acchan smiled, causing the shorter girl to go redder even more.

"So why are you here?"

"Mou~ Can't I visit you without a reason?" Acchan pouted, causing Takamina to go frantic. "I didn't mean it that way."

Acchan laughed and patted the younger girl on the head. "Actually I came because..."

 Fumbling in her bag, she took out Takamina’s new single, the Type C version.

“Um….Takamina….” Acchan fidgeted and turned her gaze away from AKB’s general manager, her cheeks tinted pink.

She’s so cute. Takamina couldn’t help thinking.

Acchan took the CD with both hands and bowed. “Please would you sign this for me?”

“W-What? Atsuko…what are yo-“

“I am your biggest fan after all, so what’s wrong with asking for a signature from my favourite singer?” Acchan looked into Takamina’s eyes. “Please, Minami?”

Takamina chuckled and took out a marker from her pocket, scribbling something on the CD, she smiled. “You can only read it when I’m not here okay?”

Acchan nodded happily, and watched her best friend furiously draw on her solo CD.

“Why’d you buy Type C? I personally think I look cooler in Type A…” the midget asked while still writing.

Acchan giggled.

“I bought all of them…they all reflect you, Minami. Type A, a mysterious thief reflecting your infamous introduction line, “I may look like a yankee, but my heart is glass…” Type B, where you are the most beautiful singer, with the most beautiful voice and mostly importantly the most beautiful heart. But Type C’s my favourite…after all you sang….our song.” A huge blush crept towards both of their cheeks.

“A-A lot has happened, right?” Takamina mumbled.

“Yeah….”

1 year ago...

“I still remember, even now
The summer I feel in love….”

Acchan took her headphones off and opened the recording doors.

“Akimoto-sensei, I can’t do it…I can’t sing this song.”

Akimoto, still sitting down with his arms crossed, looked up at her, and sighed.

“Why is that?”

“The lyrics you wrote…there’s no way I can sing this!”

“There’s nothing wrong-“

“Sensei! You don’t understand, I can’ t sing this! It’s too personal!”

“Maed-“

Before he could finish what he wanted to say, Maeda had already left the studio.

“Um…Akimoto-san, what –“ One of the producers asked.

“It’s okay…she’ll be back tomorrow” Akimoto stood up from his seat and exited the studio.

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He doesn’t understand at all, how could he write something like this…I bet he spies at us…or else how does he know I feel this way…how does he know that this is exactly how I feel when I’m with-

“T-Takamina?” Acchan watched the midget walk into the room, with the other members, however where she was situated, they couldn’t see her, thankfully. They must’ve finished the recording of Akbingo ,judging from their P.E outfit. She had never really enjoyed variety shows, she always seemed to be tired whenever she’s on. It’s only when she’s right next to her that things seem better.

Soon after, everyone dispersed out from the room, to return home for the day. Acchan stood up from her hiding space and was about to leave the room when –

The door slammed open and in came a rushed midget. “A-Aachan! You're here! The staffs are looking for you…ah, I was so scared something might’ve happened to you….”

The midget sighed in relief and took Aachan’s hands. “Don’t ever do that again.” Acchan nodded and smiled.

“Don’t ever hide again, whatever happens you can always complain to me.” Takamina returned the smiled and pulled Acchan’s hand.

“Come on, let’s tell the staff you’re alright, and then let’s go home together.” Aachan caught in the moment and Takamina’s kindness, simply nodded.

(Migikata)

“….and I can’t sing it…”

“Hmm…if you really don’t want to, I’ll help talk to them…but judging from what you said, perhaps it’s not that you can’t sing it, and it’s not because it’s too personal but because you’re scared…scared of something.”

“Scared?”

Just then, the blue,clear sky turned grey and droplets of rain fell from the sky causing them to both yelp. Takamina held Aachan’s hands tightly and took her towards a bus stop, for shelter. At this point, Aachan had completely dismissed the cold presence of the rain and instead stared longingly at Takamina’s back.

They reached the shelter, with both of them dripping wet. Takamina looked at Acchan and she looked back, both of them bursting into giggles and laughter.

      When we’re together I can even enjoy the rain…

The pair sat on the bench, and Aachan unconsciously placed her head on Takamina’s right shoulder. “Minami…what am I scared of?”

Minami looked back, and after a brief silence, she took a deep breath and replied.

“I don’t know… …maybe scared how true those words are… scared of the emotions it provokes in you.”

“So....all along...I was…scared…”

“But… I’ve read the lyrics…and it seems like a wonderful feeling…”

Aachan smiled, snuggling closer to Takamina, she whispered. “Yeah it is….”

“I don’t know who this person you’re thinking of is…but..I’ve read the lyrics and…maybe, perhaps…if it makes you feel less anxious…maybe you can think of me as you sing....haha, I mean you do constantly lay on my right shoulder…haha..” A small blush could be seen from the midget and all Aachan could do was feel fuzzy and warm inside.

Little did Takamina know, the song was all directed to her.

“As I gently Iean against you
All my worries fade away
And I’m filled with bliss

Nostalgic, yet painful
Is how I remember that summer....”

From the recording room, Aachan’s eyes never left Takamina’s, and in was just that instance that she realized that she was indeed scared, scared of what she felt…scared of reading ‘her diary’ to the world, but now she couldn’t be happier, feeling what she did for a certain midget.

She wanted to tell the world...."All I need is Takamina."



“Thank you Minami…” Acchan smiled, her head lowered.

Handing back the signed CD, Takamina smiled back. “You’re welcome.”

Looking at her watch, Acchan gave her farewell and ran out of the room. Takamina smiled sadly at the ground and was about to walk out when –

The door opened suddenly.

“Atsuko….”

“Minami…one more thing…” Acchan drew her best friend into a hug and kissed her bruise forehead. 

Takamina blushed instantly at the intimate contact. “I miss you…Takamina….and you’ve gotten really pretty and cool.”

.....

Takamina was speechless, and only after a while did she come back, she chuckled to herself before walking out of the room back to the practice stage to teach her kouhai.

(The Path I choose)


Acchan ran back into her car, as it drove her to her next job. Her hands took out the CD from her bag and a single tear drop fell onto the case.

Atsuko, no matter where you are, my right shoulder is always yours.

"You have no idea how you make me feel Minami..." Clutching the CD close to her heart, she closed her eyes and smiled.

(The Path I choose)

Yuko and Atsuko’s apartment


Kojiharu looked at the wrapped item in her hands and then at Yuko. “We never had any free time together…I couldn’t give this to Takamina…and I won’t be seeing her until her birthday…” Yuko grimaced.

“I’m sure she’s free right now…call her and tell her to come here to receive her present, if you’re that concerned.”

“I could do that…”

Suddenly, Kojiharu was pushed towards the ground when Yuko on top, her eyes full with jealousy, she leaned in and kissed her Nyan Nyan. As desperate as Kojiharu was, her strength failed her as she attempted to push Yuko off.
Kojiharu’s hand reached her pockets and she contemplated what she should do

a)   Leave the present aside and give her full attention to Yuko
b)   Speed dial Takamina
c)     Slap Yuko hard on the cheek to wake her up and go to Takamina's.

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Chapter End.

Thank you sooooo much for reading!!!! Don't forget to Vote  :D

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Re: The Path I choose.... Update, [2/05/13]
« Reply #12 on: May 02, 2013, 10:07:24 AM »
Well it is still up to you but the point was I still won't vote for an option because I think I like the surprise :nervous
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Re: The Path I choose.... Update, [2/05/13]
« Reply #13 on: May 02, 2013, 10:58:23 AM »
Ah... You are making us voting again...

You have a very interesting way in making the readers involved with your story...

Eh... Minami fell down while running to Atsuko... So cute...

I agreed with Atsuko's opinion about Minami's covers CD.

Ah... Migikata... I like that song personally... I think that was the best song I have ever heard from Atsuko's albums.

I like how you made a bit of story about Migikata... that personally reflect Minami and Atsuko situation

Ah... Haruna has something to give Minami... what is it?

And Haruna wanted to give it before Minami's B'day... Erm... curious

Eh... Yuko is jealous of Minami... over Haruna's gift for her...

Well... what is my vote....

To be honest... I would choose B... as she said she would like to give it to Minami ASAP...

Both Haruna And Minami have been very busy and they have different schedule..

There is no guarantee Haruna would be able to get another free time similar to Minami...

So she should speed dial Minami... so she could get it over with.

For A, to be a good lover of coz' giving attention to your lover is needed... but not at any time...

There should be a time and situation to do that... some more Yuko seems to always get jealous so easily

Like she doesn't trust Haruna at all... Also keep giving into Yuko's demand doesn't make any relationship good in long run...

Haruna would get tired sooner than later...

And for C, may be good... in any fic... I always seems to see that Yuko always got hit every now and then when she could not control herself...

But may be not to hit too hard... Haruna should just said she has an important thing she has to do... after that finish she can spend time with Yuko without any worries right?

Well Thank you for the fic...

Can't wait to see the next

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Re: The Path I choose.... Update, [2/05/13]
« Reply #14 on: May 03, 2013, 07:16:25 AM »
I choose C because that's usually how NyanNyan would do. And they could go together so that Yuko could see Takamina won't take Haruna away from her since she already has Acchan :twisted:

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Re: The Path I choose.... Update, [2/05/13]
« Reply #15 on: May 03, 2013, 09:59:45 AM »
Atsumina scene... it's touching and very emotional.

Everyone doesn't want to loose this pairing. Yet, so that's why Migikata & Omoide No Hotondo were created.

It's to make everyone remember this pairing, and so for the both of them. They can't be separated.

I feel like..... hey Acchan, Takamina, you two should read this fic!!!

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