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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Loveforever on September 13, 2011, 08:00:18 AM
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Hi everyone i'm new here! and i was bored and decided to write a fict. sorry if it's kind of short right now..i'm just starting out to see how it goes hehe! :oops:
Part 1
It's new years, at dusk the streets were filled with loud and joyous people celebrating a new beginning. I felt really happy being with my family on this wonderful night except for the fact i was forced by my mom to wear a kimono.Yes it might be a tradition but those things are quite uncomfortable.I needed a break from the noises and the outfit,so i decided to walk home to change. My house was not very far from where the celebration was held. As i was walking by I heard someone crying coming from a bench nearby the river...in my head i thought "HOLY SHIT A GHOST! run TAKAMINA RUN!" but i froze because i was so frightened. I hesitated to look at the direction where the sobbing was coming from but then i heard a cell phone ringing, also coming from that direction so i'm like "wait a minute ghost's don't have cell phones". I finally come to realization it's a human being. It was really hard to see at night and there was no light nearby but i can see a figure, it was a tall girl with shoulder length hair...I walked a bit closer to take a look and i still couldn't see. It's too dark out. Now i'm beside her standing while she was sitting on the bench still crying while looking down at the ground. I asked her "are you okay? a girl like you shouldn't be out here all alone,it's dangerous at this time of night, you know." She didn't answer but her cries starts to get ear-piercing loud. Suddenly i felt a warm fuzzy feeling around me. My blood rushed to my cheeks as i felt this stranger sponatneously hugging me tightly. Her head was position into my chest still weeping as my shirt soaked from her tears.For some reason hugging her back felt so right, my heart starts pounding harder and pumping faster. This unknown feeling in my chest that i've never encounter before,"what is it??..No this can't be right..what could these feelings mean if i haven't seen her face or even got to know her?
TBC...
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The ghost part made me laugh ^^
Welcome by the way and continue it's great ;)
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Arigatou ! :cow: I will continue and thanks for welcoming me kahem! :D
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Another Atsumina??? XD yeay!!! :cow: :cow: me like it!!!!
WELCOME Loveforever~~ :welcome
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yay AtsuMina's fict!! :luvluv1:
Why is Acchan crying?? :pleeease: but Takamina is right there for you Acchan! Dont worry!! :onioncheer:
Please continue! :kneelbow:
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HI guys thanks for reading! n thanks for welcoming me Flean! :D i'm not good at writing but here goes nothing!
Part 2
Minami POV
I don't know who she is but i hugged her back, lending her a shoulder to cry on. I'm sure its comforting her since she's not letting go of me, somehow i felt really happy." Where are you??" I heard a voice screaming from afar..it sounded like a middle age man. As soon as the girl heard that mans voice she dropped her arms off my waist and dashed away as fast as she could. I suddenly felt sad and alone. Then i thought.. "Eh!!!" Did this man try to hurt her or something?did she get raped!?! Is that why she's crying!? Just the thought of that drove me crazy. I'm going to teach this guy a lesson! He got close enough by me so I put my arms in front of him and shouted chotto matte! I held up both my fist ! Then suddenly he asked nicely " have you seen my daughter?" ehhhh!? his daughter!? Ahhh what am I doing trying to beat up her father..I flailed my arms around embarassed. Slowly, I put down my arms smiling slightly with a fail expression. "sorry sir! I didn't mean to do that, I thought you were trying to hurt her..heh!" "It's okay,I'm glad you were trying to protect my daughter". "Arigatou" he said. "If you don't mind me asking, what happened? Why is she crying?" He then sighed and said it was announced today that she is in an arranged marriage. Since all of our family and friends were gathered here for new years I took the opportunity to tell everyone." HUH!?" My jaw dropped and it felt like someone punched a hole through my heart. I then just responded with an "oh..." "Well then excuse me while i'll try and find my daughter" he said. He then walked into the night...Great! i didn't get to ask him for his daughters name,at this rate i'll never find out who she is or how she looks! FAILED again! gahhh !!!!
Atsuko POV
I know i'm a bad child, a delinquent and always causing trouble in school but why did my father have to punish me this way?After he told me i was arranged to get married... I ran as fast as i could out of the house. I knew that my family will try and find me so i ran to a dark place where no one can find me...by the river..I was so upset that i just needed to be alone. How could he..without talking it out with me first...My father knew how i felt; how i wanted to find true love on my own..I sobbed and sobbed at a bench until my eyes started to hurt.I couldn't see anything.. Then i heard someone asking me if i was okay.. Judging by the voice it was a girl. I was vulnerable at the moment so I grabbed the girl by her waist and hugged her tightly releasing all my anger and tears...I somehow felt relieved..In my whole life no one has ever bother to ask me if i'm okay other than my father. I was captivated by her words and her actions; how she held onto me quietly without saying a single word.I didn't know how she looked but that really doesn't matter. It's the first time someone has shown concern towards me. I started to feel something in my heart, pitter pattering..Suddenly a voice interrupted calling out for my name "Acchan ! Achhan ! where are you??"Somehow my father managed to find me. I had to run, I didn't want to see him..As i pull away i felt something snagged onto her shirt but i had no time to check what it was. I hid behind some bushes.About 10 minutes later he showed up. I'm guessing he stopped to talk to that girl.."AAAAHHHH" my father screamed. It seems he tripped on something, I was so worried i came out of hiding to help him up.."Ah Acchan, there you are. Gome ne I didn't tell you about the marriage." he said. "If you really cared about me you wouldn't have agreed to the purposal" I exclaimed! I started to cry again, I could tell by the sadness in my fathers eyes that he didn't want to see me sad either. "Okay Acchan, I'll make you a deal..If you can get into the all japanese girl group akb48, we'll call off the engagement. Thats the only way for you to stay single." "Really dad?! do you mean it?" "Yes Atsuko I mean it, audition is in a week so be prepared!" "I won't disappoint you then!" I said happily..For some reason when i'm happy i thought about that girl from earlier.. wait a minute! who is she???
TBC..
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LOL... her father wanted her to join AKB... :rofl:
update soon.. XD
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The part when her dad wanted her to join AKB is ==> :pig laugh: :pig laugh:
so weird to have that kind of deal :on lol:
please update :grin:
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wow so this before AKB huh. Stupid father of Acchan but that's alright since His sort of the reason why Atsumina meet
once she pass the audition she'll see Takamina again!
update soon
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Hehe yeah it's weird but it's the only way she can't get married and I had no more ideas lol!!!!
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^ but its kinda interesting... LOL... :lol:
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Part 3
Takahashi Residence
Takamina finally made it home safely still disappointed from her earlier interactions. Her outfit was soaked so she hurried, changing out of her Kimono to shower. As she took off her outfit she had seen something unusual attached to her top. "A dangling earing" " Eh? Where did this come from?" Takamina then had a flash back. "Oh! it must've snagged onto me when that girl hugged me.. "From now I shall keep this earing,maybe one day i'll meet her again." Takamina said with a lustful smile. She then showered and headed to bed falling asleep with the earing in her hand.
Next morning
"Wake up Mi chan!" yelled Takamina's mother. "Come downstairs! It's time for breakfast!" "Hai MAMA" Takamina yelled back." I'm coming !" Every morning during breakfast time, her family would watch the news at the kitchen table.(mini tv on the counter) "Mama can you please turn that up?" "Okay dear,one second." (On the tv); Today top news, "An audition for the all japanese girl group " AKB48" will be held at the akb theatre next week from today @ 7:00 A.M. PLEASE BE PROMPT OR BE DISMISSED!" "Oi mi chan why don't you go audition for it?" her mom said. "We know that you love to sing and you have a very great voice,so why don't you give it a try?" Her father added. Takamina looked down and frown. She was known to fail at everything, Although she loved singing..she has a fear of being rejected. "Mi chan, what's wrong?" her mom asked. "Oh, it's nothing mom." "It has to be something, i could tell by your facial expression darling" Her little brother then interrupted the conversation by saying "Takamina, I know you can do it! it's your dream to become an idol" he says with a confident look upon his face. Takamina felt very touched to hear her brother say such a thing. "Hai! i will do it then!"
Maeda Residence
Acchan headed up stairs to her bedroom all giddy after the discussion she had with her dad. While taking off her accessories, she didn't notice one of her lucky pair of earings was missing on one side of her ear. She just threw everything in her jewlery box ..She was too tired to notice anything. For the past few nights all she heard was her parents yelling back and forth at eachother. Her mom was upset that if Atsuko made it into AKB, she would have to take back her words from the family her daughter was arranged to get married to. Her mom didn't want to be called a liar..But it was settle and no use for arguments, in every Japanese household the man of the house always makes the DECISION.
Day of the AUDITION
"ANK ANK ANK ANK" the alarm clock rang..." OMGGGGGG it's 6:30 A.M." Takamina shouted. For several days Takamina woke up late but today wasn't an exception. "Today is the day for the audition, if i don't make it on time then i'll never get another chance again."Takamina was so in a hurry, she grabbed the first thing in her closet and threw it on. Not knowing what her appearance is like, she ran to the subway anyway...took it down town to the theatre then she got off at her stop "OSH! Only 3 more blocks away" It is now 6:50 A.M when she looked at her watch..She then started running fast as lightning then "BAM" she crashed into something...
TBC..
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I wonder what she is wearing
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Takamina might be looking so messy :rofl: :rofl:
I wonder if Acchan's dad will accept her and takamina nyahahahaha :grin: :grin:
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they're going to meet again... XD
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Nice, they're finally going to meet!!!!
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Thanks for reading guys! :heart: sorry if this gets confusing. i'm just a "beginner" :doh:
Part 4
Takamina slammed into another girl striking her body with full force.Both girls ended up at opposite ends landing on their bottoms."Damn it! Hey watch where you going will ya?" Acchan shouted with an attitude."Thanks to you, you just made me late for an audition jerk!" Atsuko always make trouble everywhere she goes..she grew up as an only child who always gets her ways,no manners or anything either.The only people she respects is her parents. Takamina blacked out for a second, finally looking up Takamina was stunned by this girls beauty. Something about this girl seem real familiar to her she thought but it's not coming to her."Man my butt hurts", Oh and I'm really sorry about bumping into you like that.." Takamina replied. "Sorry doesn't cut it punk and get out of my way,you're going to make me more late!" Acchan said.. and walks away.."Wow,what a bitch" Takamina thought. Acchan and Takamina made it to the theatre door at the same time.."Please let me audition sir! It wasn't my fault that i'm late, it was this girls fault!" Acchan said pointing at Takamina. "My future depends on it,please let me audition sir" Takamina said. "I'm sorry but both of you are to be dismissed, you both can't enter. It won't be fair to other girls, I would be breaking the rules if I let you in. And if i get caught, I will be fired." SEE NOW LOOK WHAT YOU DID!" Acchan yelled. "Oh shut up, you probably weren't gonna make it into the group anyways. They will probably only hire you for your looks!" Takamina yelled back. "Welcome sir Aki- P" The door man greeted a well groom looking man in a suit." "What seems to be the problem here? i could hear screaming and yelling all the way from my car" Aki-p asked the door man. "Oh, these two girls were late for the audition and i won't let them in so now they're arguing back and forth blaming eachother." "I see, say..why don't you let them in, i'll let this one slide. They both have the looks and it look like they have the potential to be an idol." "Thank you so much sir" both girls says at the same time. Acchan now giving Takamina a face of annoyance. They both sat down on chairs lined up waiting patiently to be called up for their turn. "Is that you Haruna?" Takamina asked excitedly sitting 5 seats away from her.."OMG hey!! come sit next to me Takamina, I've missed you so much." They both hugged for a more than 30 seconds then a squirrel like girl shouted "hey get off my Nyan Nyan!" "Yuko please stop being jealous,she's my old friend babe" Haruna said to her girlfriend. "Hehe, I'm sorry but i can't help but yell at everyone who touches you because you're only mines to touch."Oh hi I'm Yuko by the way" Yuko said to Takamina. "Nice to meet you" Takamina giggled. Haruna and Minami were best friends since they were toddlers until Haruna moved away. Takamina always looked up to her and admire how pretty she is and she still does. People always get the wrong idea of Takamina liking her."So when did you moved back? and why didn't you tell me?" Takamina asked with a frown. "It was a spur of the moment last minute thing,I'm glad to see you again though" Haruna said. "Hai, me too..lets all try our hardest then shall we?" Takamina said with a huge smile. "Takahashi Minami, please come up to the stage" one of the judges called out. "Oh gosh i'm so nervous... Takamina then started singing and tried dancing..the judges were wowed by her voice but not so much by her dance routiune. "Jeez this girl is all show but no go, why is she even dress up like a hip hop yankee looking dancer anyway when she can't even dance at all"..Atsuko said to Mi chan, a person she just be friended. They both clicked right away from the start..Mi chan laughed and replied back saying " but i think she is real interesting." "Atsuko Maeda, please come forward to the stage" the judges once more called out. "Wow that girl is pretty but she looks way too shy" Yuko said. "Ha...Yeah right that girl is not shy, she is a bully!" Takamina replied not knowing she's the girl she's been waiting to meet. "Nah uh, really?" "Looks could be decieving huh?" Takamina asked Yuko. "Anyway Takamina why are you dressed like that?" Haruna asked. Takamina then express a face of failure, she face palmed herself when she realized what she was wearing; baggy pants,a shirt that was way too big for her and big hoop earings with messy hair.. "Alright girls, we will be announcing who made it into the group after our discussion" another judged announced.
TBC... :lol:
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Lol the arguing
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LOL... they were end up arguing with with other.. :lol:
please update... the story start to get more interesting.. :twothumbs
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Results..
'Takahashi Minami will be captain, Maeda Atsuko center, Minegishi Minami,Kojima Haruna,Itano Tomomi,Shinoda Mariko and etc .. "You girls will be put into Team A! The rest of girls whose name wasn't called,you will be split into Team K and Team B." " Great, how did I get stuck with Takahashi.. just by looking at her i get annoyed." Acchan thought. "Yay! we're in the same team, from now on you'll be my wifey!" Miichan shouted cheerfully squeezing acchan.
A week later...
During dance rehearsals,Acchan was frustrated because she couldn't memorize the dance steps to "river". Although Takamina doesn't seem fond of the ace..she offered her help. The ace was indecisive about it at first .."If i don't accept her purposal, i will be forced out the group and get married." Acchan thought. "Okay I'll accept.. but that doesn't mean we are friends or anything, got it!?" "Pshh this girl is so full of herself,what makes her think i want to be her friend." Takamina thought. Later on that day they both stayed behind to practice, having the studio to themselves. The ace was walking towards takamina..suddenly she tripped over her own shoe laces and fell on top of the captain ..causing their lips to almost touch. Acchan quickly pulled back but found herself locking gazes with the chibi..neither of them could take their eyes off one another..."Why do i feel so funny inside?..why am i feeling this way?..She's actually looks pretty cu---" Then a voice interrupted Acchan thoughts "what are you guys doing?" miichan said with a jealous tone. "eww..get off of me.."Acchan said to the captain. "me get off of you? You're the one who's on top of me!" takamina exclaimed pushing Acchan off onto the ground causing a loud thud."Ouch! asshole!! that hurted" the ace complained. "Nothing, we were just practicing" Takamina answered.."well we'll continue this tomorrow Acchan! Bye now.." the captain walked off.." "what was that all about?" Miichan said with a suspicious look." It was nothing Miichan..don't worry about it.."" Okay then..Let's have lunch together wifey!"Miichan said pulling the ace by the hand..
Next Day @ Rehearsal
"Have anyone seen an earing??" Takamina asked in a panic voice running around like a maniac trying to find the earing.." I must've of dropped it when we fell yesterday.." "You can always get another pair of earings, you cheapo" Acchan and Miichan said in a unison.." Heyyy!!! I'm not cheap!! This earing is important to me! It belongs to someone who means alot to me.."Eh!!? You have someone you like? and this person wears an earing???? that's a weird guy if you asked me.." Miichan says laughing. Takamina was embarassed,causing her face to flush with redness because Miichan doesn't know it belongs to a girl. "Ha ha ha ha who would like a midget like you " The ace added feeling a bit jealous after what happened between the 2 yesterday. Meanwhile... in the middle of practice Miichan goofed around and went behind Acchan groping her butt and running away. Coincidentally Takamina was right behind her. "ECCHI!!!!"A sudden scream that can be heard across the whole studio echoed out of acchan's mouth. Everybody turn to look at her direction to see what was stirring up all the comotion.. Acchan turned around and slapped Takamina across the face in front of everyone. Takamina's face began to turn bloody red. She now has a palm mark stamped on her right cheek.."Why the hell did you do that for?" Takamina yelled. "Don't play stupid! I know you touched me! You pervert!!!"Acchan said angrily. "Wait! Acchan, I did it..I'm sorry" Miichan stated. "Oh..." was all that Acchan could say. Takamina with her little angry self walked away mumbling all the way to the dressing room. Most of the members tried calming takamina down but it didn't work."I'm surprise no one has calmed her down yet" Miichan said to Acchan. "Is she that angry?" Acchan asked. She started feeling really awful about it."Just go and apologize to her" Miichan suggested. Instead of apologizing Acchan wrote a note slipping it under the door..In the note it says "Meet me at the icecream shop nearby." As acchan walked back into the middle of the dance studio, she stepped on something..she remove her foot and picked it up.."OMG...is this the earing she's looking for?! it looks really identical to my favorite pair of earings.. could she be??...nah it can't be..I'll keep it for now until i know for sure it's not mine.."
TBC...
:panic: :panic: :panic: can't think anymoreeeeeeee lol
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Lol the slap poor captain
I like Miichan's character
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:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: poor takamina and it seems the relationship getting develop XD XD
write more~ :grin: :grin: :grin:
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LOL... that was fast... they just joined AKB and already practicing river... XD
Taka is angry~~ Acchan better do something... :banghead:
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Hehe yes river is their debut single in this story cuz it's my favorite song :twothumbs
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HEI, COME ON!!! you can do it, I really hope you have a lot of idea now... XD XD XD XD XD the story... keep me feel curious and interesting.... :heart: :heart: please write more soon !! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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:O :shocked :O :shocked
TAKAACHANNN!!!!! LMFAOOO i guess its for the best that maybe Takamina is mad...Oh well~
whatever happens Takamina will always togetherrrr be~
PLEASE UPDATE SOOON!!!
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Thanks for reading guys! here's another part! :thumbsup
Part 6
After practice everyone left home.. except for Acchan, she went to the icecream shop. 30 minutes have passed and the captain still didn’t show up. Acchan thinking that Takamina isn’t going to come, made her way to the door to leave. As soon as the ace opened the door, the chibi captain walked in at the exact time causing them to collide. This time their lips actually met, their eyes widened.. too shocked to move... Acchan now realizing what position they were in shyly pull back with a slight blush on her cheeks.. “Gome ne Minami”. Takamina still stunned held her index and middle finger to her lips “My first kiss..why!????????whyyyyyyyyyy does it have to be with this devil??? ahhhhhhhhh…” Takamina squealed in her mind. “Give me back my first kiss you psycho!” the captain shouted at the ace . Acchan expression changed from embarrassment to infuriation “You’re first kiss??... hey!! you walked into me remember!? and I already apologized so be quiet, it’s not like I wanted to kiss you or anything” Atsuko yelled back. “You guys act like a married couple,forever arguing” Haruna interrupted laughing. “No we don’t” Takamina cried.. still whining to Acchan about giving her kiss back. “Oh, Haruna you’re here too?” Acchan asked disappointedly. “Yeah Takamina invited me if that’s okay with you.. sorry I made her late.” “Yeah..sure,sure it’s okay..have a seat..” Darn it, I can’t apologize to Takamina in front of Haruna..it’s humiliating..Acchan thought..”Well why did you ask me to come here today Atsuko?” Takamina asked. “eeh ehh..eh to..erm..” “Just spill it alreadyy!” “well it’s kind of personal..” “Oh..should I leave you two alone then?” Haruna asked. “That’ll be nice,thanks Haruna..” “Okay I’ll just order the stuff up there while you both talk..” “Okay” Takamina replied.. “Umm..about earlier..I’m..i’m.. eh I’m really sorry that I slapped you..” Acchan finishing the sentence quickly. “Oh wow the princess actually know how to apologize..just kidding..” Takamina snickered. “Don’t worry I was only mad for the moment..is that the only reason why you brought me here today?” “Hai….” Acchan replied. “You could of just said it to me in the dressing room..” the captain said with a wink. Acchan face starts to reddened..”well okay, you can go now! That’s all I wanted to say” “Eeeeeeee!? We already ordered..too bad I’m staying and you are too! “ Takamina said with a smile.. “This girl…after all the harsh things I say to her she’s still so kind to me…what an interesting person..” Acchan thought..”Okay guys I’m back” Haruna said carrying their icecream to the table. “How come theres only two?” Acchan asked..”Oh sorry I didn’t have enough change, Takamina and I can share ^_^” Haruna fed a spoonful of chocolate to Takamina.. “OI SHIIIIII..”Takamina started blushing,smiling and giggling..Acchan begins to feel uneasy..her chest tightens..”Do they like eachother?..” the ace thought..feeling jealous..”Why am I feeling like this? I shouldn’t, I don’t like her..just ignore it Acchan, just ignore it..”Speaking to herself in 3rd person.
It was getting dark out…Yuko picked up Haruna and left first..”Erm Atsuko, do you want me to walk you home?” “I’m fine I can walk myself ” “You sure?” “Hai, I’m positive..” “Okay well be safe! Okay? Watch out for pervs..since you’re a beautiful girl and all..” Acchan starts to blush again. “See ya Atsuko” Acchan walked to where the street lights were dim..the night was getting scarier and quieter..She had a feeling that someone was following her..Everytime she would look back there was nothing..Near an alley way 2 men showed up… “Hey pretty girl..lets have some fun tonight” one of the old men said pulling her hands,they both surrounded her looking at her up and down..”Yummy, she looks tasty” the other man said with a scary looking smirk..” Don’t touch me!” Acchan screamed.. Both men started pulling on her clothes..trying to get it off.. Acchan was really frightened and fainted.. Suddenly a small figure showed up yelling..“ Stop before I kick your asses! I’m a f**king black belt and I will not hold back!” “HUH? Well well look what we have here there’s another girl for you” The man said to the other one..” Oh.. such luck we have, one for me and one for you.” Before the men could approach her, she dragon fly jump kicked one of them in the chest..The other one she constantly punched him as if he was a punching bag, one punch after another connecting to his stomach. Both men was terrified and scattered away like a bunch of ants..”Acchan, are you okay?” there was no response. She was knocked out cold…Takamina brought her to her house and called her parents to tell them Atsuko was staying the night. Takamina lifted her up the stairs into her room .. “Jeez this girl is heavy!!What does she be eating!?” Takamina thought.. she layed her down in her bed and looked at how angelic Acchan is when she’s asleep and NOT TALKING..(LOL) she starts to notice how filthy her clothes has gotten..” I have to change her… “ The captain began to take off her shirt..slowly pulling it off her shoulders..Takamina’s blood started rushing to her face as she sees Acchan’s bra strap.. “her body is so sexy..her tummy is flat, she has nice plumped breast and a firm butt..Takamina thought..Finally done changing her clothes Takamina nose starts to bleed… Takamina slapped herself twice in the face”WTF..I’m such a perv…”
TBC…
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Hahahah Takamina! Don't blame yourself Acchan is sexy after all lol
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yeah agree Acchan is sexy :thumbup
LOL Acchan is heavy!!! :rofl: :rofl:
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OMG!!!!! i love the ATSUMINA fanfic you write!!! Good Job!! :thumbsup :thumbsup :twothumbs, DO UPDATE SOON!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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LOL... :lol: takaboy bleeding from seeing acchan half naked... :twothumbs :twothumbs
how did she know Acchan have a firm butt?? did she touch it?? hahaha... such a pervert captain... :rofl:
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OMG :w00t:
Our midget perverted captain :lol:
it's nice that they are slowly progressing
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jaj yeah how takamina know about butt...
yeah don t blame you takamidget... acchan its hot.. but remember jus look not touch....
and acchan jealousy.. love a lot..
if you want maybe a kojiyuu scene please :D
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8) sorry i kinda half assed :shakeit: this one..but here's a treat for you Haruko..lol :roll:
PART 7
“Should I try to wake her up? Nah..She looks really peaceful.” Takamina thought.. Takamina begins to stare at Acchan ..”I never noticed how attractive she is..why is my heart racing so fast?” Takamina slowly moved closer to the aces face without realizing it. ”those lips… why do I have the urge to kiss them?” Takamina held back as she sighed.. she was confused about her feelings. Lying next to Acchan made her feel at ease so she fell asleep…
Next morning
Acchan groaned as she woke up. Her eyes were still a blur…as her vision starts to clear up she notices an outline of person’s face positioning only a few centimeters away from hers.. “Chibi!?” Acchan freaked out, moving away and pulling all the sheets to her side covering herself up.. Awaken by Acchan’s scream, Takamina woke up rubbing her eyes.“Oh… you’re finally awake” Takamina said with a smile.“What happened last night? How did I get here?” Acchan said with a worried face.. “Last time I was conscious, there were two guys trying to harass me..” Takamina smile started to disappear.. ” I …i…i…. found you naked in an alley way…I’m sorry Atsuko but..but…you’re innocence was taken away by those two men..As soon as I got there, they ran off…” Acchan eyes starts to water, her face scrunched up..”why do I have to be so weak, now I’ll never be good enough for anybody” Acchan cried… “I’m just kidding, I’m just kidding Atsuko!!! don’t cry!! ” Takamina wrapped her arms around her laughing… “YOU JERK !!!! HOW DARE YOU JOKE WITH ME ABOUT THIS?!?!” Acchan yells punching Takamina with light girly hits.. “HAHAHA man oh man you should of seen your face!” “what really happened then?” Acchan asked. “Well I followed you..even though you were stubborn and kept saying no..anyways I’ll get to the point.. I kicked their butts before they could lay a hand on you!” Takamina says with her fist held in the air looking all dorky. “ Thank you for saving me..Acchan says with a hint of red on her cheek bones. “Hey wait a minute! You didn’t see anything when you changed me did you!?! I’ll poke your eyes out if you did” “no no…I didn’t see anything I promise” Takamina lied as her nose starts to bleed again.. she held her hands over her nose trying to hide it..” BRB I need to use the bathroom” she lied once more running to the bathroom to wash her face. “Alright! I’m back!” “eh Minami what time is it?” Yikes!! We’re 20 minutes late for practice, lets hurry Atsuko !”
Meanwhile @ practice..
“Nyan Nyan! Where are you going?” The squirrel like girl asked Haruna while clinging onto her arms.. ” Yuko, we can’t let people know that we’re an item or else we’ll be kicked out.” “Then why did you tell Minami about us?” “Because I trust her” Haruna replied. “Do you like her or something? I see the way you look at her Nyan Nyan!..” I don’t.. she’s just a childhood friend!” “Okay fine, I’ll believe you this time..” Yuko said in a disbelieving tone.. Miichan walked up to Haruna and Yuko..”Did you see my wife anywhere? she’s never late to practice..” Miichan asked furrowing her brow…”I really miss her..” “Hmm..now that you mention it, Minami is also late..” Yuko answered. “Do you think those two got something going on?” Haruna asked out of curiousity.. “Of course not! She has eyes only for me” Miichan exclaimed with an annoyed expression. “Hey guys!!! Sorry we’re late!” Acchan and Takamina shouted in unison. Both girls looked at each other and blushed.. when they realized that they said it at the same time. Miichan unexpectedlly grabbed onto Acchan and dragged her away... Takamina suddenly felt alone..she didn’t want Acchan to go. She wanted Acchan stay by her side. She was beginning to feel jealous towards Miichan and Acchan's relationship..As for Haruna she walked away from Yuko to talk to Takamina..”What’s wrong Minami?” Haruna asked. “Nothing’s wrong” the captain replied. “I can tell that something is bothering you…You like Atsuko don’t you?” “No way…ha I will never like someone like her..” “You can try to deny your feelings but you can’t lie to me that easily..i’m your bestfriend after all.” “hai…I know but I already have someone else that I like too..” “Eh!?! NANII? NANII?” Haruna was startled that it might be her that Takamina likes..”Well here’s the thing..I don’t know her..” Haruna was a bit relieved after hearing that response. “But what do you mean you don’t know her!?” Haruna bellowed. “You remember the earing I was looking for?” “Yeah what about it?” “That earing belongs to that girl” “Um you know..I think I seen Atsuko picked up something from the floor the other day,why don’t you go ask her if it’s the earing?” “Really???” “Yeah Really.” “But..I’m confused about my feelings, can I really feel the same way for two different person?” “Only your heart can answer that Minami” In the meantime Yuko was furious..”why did she just walk away from me like that!?” she thought.. “right after I accused her of liking that midget! She wanna be all affectionate with her..proving me right” “I’ll show her!!” During practice Yuko went around being lovey dovey with almost every girl..Haruna starts to notice it and glares at her. Haruna was really angry to see her beloved squirrel messing around with other girls..”why is she acting like this?” she was upset.. so she took a break and went into the dressing room to cool down..as soon as she walked into the room, the door slammed behind her.”Nyan Nyan..” Yuko whispered hugging her from behind. “what do you want!? Isn’t those other girls enough for you!?” Haruna replied. “Nyan nyan…I was trying to show you how I felt..” “Showing me how you feel??? So you feel that we should see other people!? Is that it?” “NOOO..that’s not what I meant..I was showing you how it feels to be jealous, earlier you ignored me for Minami and it made me feel pathetic. I’m sorry if I hurted you, trust me! I have feelings only for you.. I lo—“ Before Yuko can finish her sentence..Haruna cupped the squirrel face and kissed her in the most passionate way.. to shut her up. She teased the corner of her mouth gently with her tongue, making her want more.. Rapidly their tongue were fighting for dominance but both broke it up gasping for air.. As Yuko hands starts to move up from haruna’s waist and into her shirt..A knock on the door interrupted them. “Hey girls! We have an announcement to make so come out of there as soon as you can” Aki-P stated. “Come on Yuko, lets go..” “But Nyan Nyan! Just a little bit more pleaseeee..” Yuko whined..” “No, we have to go..maybe later ok? Haruna winked at Yuko. “BINGOOOOOOOOOOOOO” Yuko shouted excitedly.
TBC…
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thanx... Jelousy haruna I like... and takamidet jelousy too... aww akip why do you interrupting the kiss... very bad.. for us jajaj good job.. im waiting for the next chapter
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Kojiyuu jealousy hehehe
Poor Acchan, Takamina pranked her xD
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WOW!!!! :inlove: :w00t: :panic: Nice fanfic.... good job, please update soon.......... :wub: :wub: XD XD
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Nyan nyan not be jealous !! Yuko love only youuu !!!
nice fic ! please update soon :luvuluvu:
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Sorry guys..i've been slacking off lately because of work but thanks for reading :) here's another part..
PART 8
“Girls you will be spending some time in New York for an Anime Festival from February 7th to the 15th! So pack your bags! Are you guys excited!?!?” Aki-P shouted enthusiastically “NEW YORK??? But I can’t even speak English! The only thing I can say is I like shrimp!” Miichan said to Acchan with a pout. “Haha its okay Miichan that’s why there’s a Google translate app on our phone” Acchan reassured her chuckling. “Suggoiiiiii! I can’t wait to perform in New York and go sight-seeing...” Takamina hollered eagerly. “You girls will be pairing up for the trip, 2 in each room for the hotel.” Aki-P stated. “Hai” the girls screamed out excitedly. “Please, please, please… pair me up with Acchan” Miichan whispered quietly to herself.” “Minegishi and Maeda, You girls will be rooming together.” “YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!” Miichan shrieked like a little happy girl causing everyone attention to be on her.. “ I mean errr.. uhmm cool” she said more maturely. “What a loser, HAHAHA” Minami thought although she felt envious of her. “Kojima and Oshima, you two will be rooming together..” Yuko was so happy she started to do silly dances making Haruna laugh. “Stop that!” Haruna exclaimed with a blushing face. “ Itano and Takahashi, you will room up together, this will give you girls a chance to get to know eachother.” Both girl smiled at eachother.. “Isn’t it inappropriate for a boy and a girl to room up with eachother?” Mariko and Miichan said jokingly. “Ehhhh!! What do you mean by that?” Takamina replied. Her failed expression slowly started to appear. “Watch out, Takamina might just hit on you..after all she is a boy.” Haruna said laughing hysterically.” Tomochin then, said “I think she’s a cute boy” turning around shyly trying to cover her blushing face. “Hahahahaha why are you lying to her for?” Acchan exclaimed. although she’s feeling upset about it. “Arigotou Tomomi, Atleast someone thinks I’m cute here” Takamina said with a smirk. Aki-P also announced all the other pairs.
Next week on the Flight to Ny..
It takes 1 and a half day to get there... Everyone was asleep..except for Takamina and Miichan, they both sat beside Acchan on each side. Acchan sleeps through everything so she can’t hear the conversation.. “Errm..Takamina, I want to ask you something but I don’t know if I should ask you.” “Hmm..? what is it? You know you can tell me anything..” Takamina said. “I think…i..i think i…umm..” “Yes? Come on ask me...” “I think I like Acchan…” “Oh…” Takamina said with a disappointed tone… “You know since you’re very close to her, can you to help me confess to her on Valentine’s day in New York? Please say you’ll help!” Miichan lifted her two hands putting it together in a praying position and showing Takamina her puppy face... “How can I refuse? Of course I’ll help you... after all we’re friends” Takamina says with a fake smile..
@ the hotel..
“Hmm for some reason the weather here is weird, why is it not snowing?” Acchan asked Miichan while sitting in their room. “I guess it’s global warming? I don’t know..Miichan answered confused. “Miichan, I always wanted to try the hamburgers here,I heard this is better than the ones in japan..later on do you want to go and try some?” Acchan asked. “Sorry, but I can’t..I already made plans with Mariko. Maybe tomorrow?” “Oh no it’s fine...” Acchan decided to go by herself. The place she was looking for was across town. She took the subway there...Acchan found her way there using an app. on her phone. The place is called “Burger and Barrel” ..It was listed as one of the best burger place in New York. “Hey Miichan where’s Atsuko?” Takamina asked worriedly.. “I think she went to this burger place across town? I don’t know.. why?” “By herself?? That’s not safe!!..do you know what the place is called?” “Burger and Barrel” Miichan answered feeling bad about letting Acchan go alone. Takamina dashed out the main lobby of the hotel where Mariko and Miichan was having a drink. She went up to her room to map quest the place..while searching, the gadget on the side of the laptop says there will be a severe storm..Takamina rushed out bringing an umbrella with her..she didn’t want the same thing to happen to Acchan when she walked home alone before..Meanwhile at the shop Acchan was enjoying her burger. It’s almost 8 p.m., that’s what time the shop closes. Acchan looked outside, it started to rain really hard.. the storm was coming really fast..the staffs and everyone else had already left. Acchan began to walk as it was raining..she was drenched in seconds...Suddenly the rain had stopped..but how? Acchan stood still and gradually look on top of her..” An umbrella? Who could this be?” She thought. She turned around deliberately and seen the smile of the person whom she been longing to see.. “Taka…mina…what are you doing here?”Acchan nervously asked. “I came to walk you back to the hotel..it’s dark out and a storm is coming” Takamina said with a concerned look on her face. “Hai” Acchan said shyly… The storm started to get worse, all the electricity went out on the streets and there was no signal on their phone either.. “Minami..I’m really scared” Acchan said shakingly..” “It will be okay..Hold on to my hands Atsuko..” Acchan felt relieved and felt butterflies in her stomach…”This feeling..I don’t ever want it to end..” Acchan thought.. The wind blew harder causing the umbrella to break.. They both ran as fast as they could into a phone booth..The booth is small causing their body to press against eachother soaking wet..Takamina began to blush..“There’s an abandon warehouse over there, we’ll have to stay there for the night” Takamina said calming Acchan down.. “But it’s scary…” Acchan replied.. “Don’t worry..I’ll be right beside you no matter what” Takamina said assuring her..
TBC…
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wah!!! they went to NY!!!! :w00t: nice moment in the phone booth~~ XD
I wonder what will happen... spending the night together in an abandon warehouse~~ :P
update soon~~ :banghead: :banghead:
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:w00t: :w00t:
NEW YORK!!!
It's suck that Acchan and Takamina aren't roommates!
but ohh well, for sure, they'll have a wonderful time together at the abandoned warehouse :grin:
nice update
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Finally! You update.. :cow: and they went to New York too, Wow! :w00t:
haHa! I really like this story.. :twothumbs there feelings is developing now to eachother..
I'm really happy.. :D I hope they will be safe and have a wonderful time at the abandon warehouse..
i smell some problem too, like Micchan.. :smhid Oh! dear Micchan, just go with Mariko, ok? ;)
and also at the 1st part of this chapter, I smell some TakaTomo pairings, heHe! Ok that's all.. Z
Update soon, and Thanks! I love it.. :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Wahhh Takamina... and Acchan... alone in warehouse... :k-inlove:
Stop running my imagination *////*
Please update soon I want to know what happend :luvuluvu:
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acchan be careful with takaboy... he can do it perver things... ;D
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Part 9
“The boarded window is broken, Let’s go through this big opening here Atsuko.” The captain said pulling Acchan’s hand. “Are you sure it’s okay to stay here? I mean..what if it’s haunted?.. I don’t want to go in..” The ace replied.“Fine then you stay out here all wet and by yourself, make sure you say hi to the ghosts that’s staying outside with you”..Takamina said teasing Acchan. “Minami!!!! Fineeeeee..I’ll go in with you!” Acchan said whining… The ace held onto Takamina from behind while the captain lead the way through the place. The place was dark, luckily they had their cell phones to use as a flashlight.”It’s actually not that bad in here,I see a lot of equipment we can use” Takamina stated. “Yeah It seems like someone’s been here before..maybe people who doesn’t have a home stays here occasionally” the ace said. “Ahhh! Who’s that over there?” Takamina screamed. “Nanii nanii!?!? “ Acchan cried squeezing the captains hand even tighter. “Just kidding,hahahaha” Noticing how Acchan held on tighter, Takamina was pleased. “Grrr!! You just don’t know when to stop joking around do you? MINAMI!!!!” “Okay okay I’ll stop” she giggled. “It seems like someone made a fire here in the middle of the warehouse.” The ace stated. “It’s freezing..sit at this corner and wait Atsuko, while I make a campfire” “Eh?! Wouldn’t the warehouse go on fire then?” Acchan said trembling. “ Not if I do it carefully and far away from everything plus the ground is pure cement…you worry too much Atsuko.” “mm okay..how do you know so much about these things Minami?” “I was in the girl’s scouts when I was younger…we had to learn about these things..it’s apart of the survival guide.” “Ohh..Minami so kakkoiiii!” Acchan said with a huge grin on her face.. “Haha it’s no biggie!!” Takamina said turning red and shaking her hands in her face back and forth. “Hachoo!” Acchan sneezed.. “Are you catching a cold Atsuko?” “I think so” the ace replied. Acchan trembled and shook even more..they were still in their damped clothes. Takamina was done making the fire..Acchan began to turn pale. Takamina began to worry.. “Take off all your clothes Atsuko..” Takamina hesitatingly said. “What? No…” Acchan said barely speaking..”You have to! or else you’ll get even more sick” “But it’s so cold..” the ace said quietly like she is about to pass out. Takamina immediately stripped Acchan down to her under garment and put a blanket she found on her. Acchan was too weak to resist. “I know it’s not tidy but you really need it just for tonight.” Takamina stated. Acchan laid beside the fire, but not too close either. While laying there Takamina hung dry their clothes..Takamina is very shy with her body but with the situation going on it caused her to forget about it, all she could think about is the aces well being. Takamina sat beside the fire keeping watch on Acchan.. “It’s sooo cold…” Acchan said shaking even harder. “Atsuko! Atsuko are you okay?” “I’m so cold..i can’t take it anymore.” She replied. Takamina had no choice but to strip each other fully naked. “Minami..what are you doing?” “Shhh..it’s okay don’t speak” the captain said. Takamina lied on top of Acchan bare naked wrapped into one blanket caressing her tightly. “I’m sorry Atsuko..this is only way for you to stay warm..” Acchan nodded shyly. Takamina heart began to beat faster and harder..so as Acchan’s as their soft body touches..the warmth of her body helped alot keeping the ace from trembling. Both their faces turned bright red as their heart raced against each other..tonight their body became one. (basically they fell asleep, don't think about naughty things yet ROFL)
Next Morning
“Ring ring ring” the captain cell phone went off..Takamina instantly woke up rushing to put on her clothes. She missed the call but her phone persistently went off..”Hello?” “Minami! Where are you?? And where is Atsuko!? we’re really worried over here!!” A voice shouted from the other line. “Miichan, were okay..I’ll tell you about it later when we get to practice. “Okay,just hurry ! our performance is only 2 days away so we need to practice all we can.. “Hai, see you later.” She hangs up the phone. “**YAWNS** who was that?” Acchan asked timidly. “Oh..Are you feeling any better??” “Yes.. Arigatou. sorry I’ve been quite a burden .” Acchan said not looking directly at the captain because of the redness on her face.”It was Miichan,they’re really worried about us, so lets hurry back. Oh, and about yesterday… sorry about what I did..let’s not ever bring it up again..okay?” Takamina said falsifying a smile. “Hai I won’t” Acchan said dissapointingly.. she began to think that Takamina was embarrassed and didn’t like the idea of them being together. Really it’s because the captain doesn’t want Miichan to know about what had happened between them two. If Miichan knows,Takamina will feel like she betrayed their friendship. “Minami? Can you look the other way while I get dressed?” Takamina was just dazed out staring at Acchan..” Oh oh sorry I didn’t realize I was staring.” She stated. “Heh! It’s okay.. i knew you’ve always been a perv since day one. “What!?? No I’m not!! See if I’ll ever help you again woman! Hurry up and get dress before I leave you behind!” the captain yelled. “HAHAH I was just joking,now let’s go.” “She have always been there for me..what would I have done if she wasn’t here for me..”Acchan thought.. feeling like a little girl who just developed her first crush .
Back at the hotel
“Atsuko, are you okay??” Everyone asked ignoring Takamina’s presence..”Am I not here or something” Takamina thought. Takamina was upset so she walked back to her room like a dead person.. ”Thank god, you’re okay! Tomochin stated embracing the captain. The captain was surprised by the unexpected hug..”Hey Tomomi, I’m fine thanks for your concern..” Takamina replied with a smile. “We’re going on a tour guide today on the NYC DUCKS,it’s so cool..i heard it turns into a boat ride.. Go shower and get ready..” “Really??? I will finally get to see the statue of liberty??, yyeyeyeye!” “Hehe you’re so cute when you get all giddy.” Tomochin said without realizing it. Takamina blushed at the things Tomochin says to her, she felt like she was being praised. “Ehm no Minami…Would you like to be my date for the ride?” Takamina hesitated to answer, she was thinking about Acchan but she knew Acchan was going to pair up with Miichan anyway. “Hai. It would be my pleasure to escort you.” The captain said happily.
TBC…
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When I read this~
Both their faces turned bright red as their heart raced against each other..tonight their body became one.
I was like :mon mischief: :mon blood:
But when I read this~~
(basically they fell asleep, don't think about naughty things yet ROFL)
me like this -->> :mon ehh: :mon suspect:
btw, nice update!! :mon fyeah: and I'm sensing TakaTomo~~ :mon nyah:
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hhaha yes, honestly i'm a fan of takatomo pairing :D buttt i love atsumina too much and thanks for reading :lol::peace:
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Ohh God I really though something happened to them.... :grin: :P :grin:
and I never knew that warming up thing works on gurls too, I thought it works with guys only......
Next chapter is going to be interesting....I wanna see Acchan getting jealous over Tomochin and Takamina's closeness and vice versa with Takamina
update soon
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VERY.. VERY NICE CHAPTER!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: TAKAMINA SO MANLY.... (^_^)
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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Body warmth works with everybody not just guys, as ling as you are a warm blood human being lol but yea I can't wait either and takamina is manly !! Lol Jk it fits her personality haha n thanks for reading I'll update when I have time.
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Takamina is so effective ! She always knows what to do :luvuluvu:
I like Takatomo but Atsumina is better :vv:
Please update soon, I want to know what happend :k-wink:
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Aww why why you stopped my Perver mind aww
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Wooooooo!!! The night in the warehouse!!!!!
I think Tomochin will hit on Takamina
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:banghead: :banghead: :banghead: sorry i took so long to update but here's another part.
Part 10
“Hmm..what should I wear with this sundress..” the ace thought as she was getting dressed for the tour. Her sundress was a strapless, in the color of white with pink flower prints.. and a lace/ribbon tied around the waist..the skirting was just right above the knees. Overall the dress was elegant and flowing. “Wow you look really stunning in that dress.” Miichan stated. “HEHE Thanks” Acchan says smiling delightedly. “Ne, Atsuko who are you trying to impress?” “Umm no one..i just want to look nice today” the ace replied. ”Maybe Minami will notice me more” she thought while smirking.. “Why don’t you wear it with these earings? I think it compliments your dress really well.” Miichan suggested pointing at the opened jewlery box. “How come one side of this earing is missing though?” Acchan in return gave an amused face and rushed to her backpack.” Oh I almost forgot..Kamisama!” her jaw drops.. “so it was her.. on that new years night..”. “I wonder… if she would still feel the same way if she finds out it has been me all along.” The ace was more confused than anything else..she didn’t know whether to be happy or to be upset about it.” If that chibi already liked the me she didn’t know..what are the chances of her falling for the real me she knows.” Acchan sighed..“The bus is boarding right now,we have to get going so hurry!..” “Haiiii” although she put her earings on, it was covered by her hair. The members were all boarded ,the last ones in were Tomochin and Takamina. They ended up sitting across from Acchan and Miichan. “Aww, don’t they look boyfriend and girlfriend? heh!” Miichan giggled asking the ace..The ace started to feel uneasy, her mind was swirling with angry emotions and thoughts..”Yeah sure..”she answered mumbling. Miichan starts to notice a change in the aces face. It looks more serious than ever before..”Is Atsuko jeaIous? I wonder if she likes Takahashi-san..everytime I make a joke like this, she looks so distressed. I have to know..” In the bus..Acchan kept looking their way.. watching their every move with an irritated look. Takamina didn’t pay no attention to Acchan..Tomochin kept the midget busy by talking her ears off.. but that’s what the captain likes about Tomochin,they never run out of things to talk about. “Attention everybody! First stop.. we will be going to the Statue of liberty. You can also buy souvenirs.. so ENJOY!” the bus driver broadcasted. The bus drove around for awhile,they took their time to admire the view of the city.. on the ride they practically waved to everyone who walked by. Finally the bus slid down a boat dock and turned into a boat..”AHHH SUGGGOIIII” they all shouted excitedly. Yuko started to sing “RIVER” and Takamina accompanied her by dancing.. “SIT DOWN DUMMIES!!!” Haruna shouted. Everyone started laughing hysterically but the ace..she just stared out into the lake..something was bothering her.. Acchan thoughts : ”Wow, Minami pays attention to everyone but me! I even tried to look pretty for her today but jeez she’s like a dumb blonde!”
@ the Statue of liberty..
At last, they arrived on the island where the statue stood..Takamina was so eager,she ran to the stands where they sold souvenirs. She bought 2 statue of liberty crowns..after she had gotten them she ran back to Tomochin. “Here..let me help you put it on..” Takamina smiled. “Grrr..after what happened in the warehouse, I can’t believe she forgot about me already!”Acchan rambled in her thoughts again. The members made their way to the top..now that they are at the top, both Tomochin and Takamina kept giggling and pointing out to the city. “That’s it! I can’t take this anymore.” Acchan said grabbing some flyers that were set on a table. She crumbled it up and threw it at Takamina’s head. “WHAT THE…” Takamina looked back and seen Acchan acting really clingy to Miichan.. “Miichan..I love this city..when we get married..this is so gonna be the place” “Ehhh…OKAY” Miichan answered very joyfully. “Yes !!she wants to marry me! but Atsuko is strange, all of a sudden she comes out of nowhere and say this..I hope she’s not trying to make takahashi-san jealous..” “Jeez Louizzz..Atsuko look so hot in that dress but what the hell!! why is she being so lovey dovey with that Miichan!? “Don’t tell me that gachapin confessed to her already..Valentines day is not until tomorrow! What am I saying??..I should just let them be..Huyzzzz” “Okay girls let’s go! Last stop is Madison square Garden”
@Madison square garden
“Cool,There’s a lot of little shops around..” The ace indicated. Miichan and Acchan walked around by themselves..Takamina secretly followed them while Tomochin stayed with the other members. Acchan stopped to look through the glass of a window of a fancy store. “OH MY! That’s the prettiest ring I’ve ever seen..$1000 American dollars? Someone please kill me right now..” “That is too expensive” Miichan stated. Lets keep walking…The ace kept staring before walking away.. “Excuse me sir..Can I see that ring?..” “Sure thing little girl..” “Little girl?!? I’m 20 years old! But okay I’ll take that as a compliment.” Takamina hesitated trying to decide to buy it or not. “Okay, I’ll take it!” “Are you sure?” “Yes I’m sure…It might hurt my pocket but it’s nothing I can’t make again,am I right?” “Ah..smart choice..this is best ring we have too.” “Okay can you put it into a gift bag?” “Sure can!” “Thank you” Takamina said leaving the shop. Takamina happily skipped with the bag in her hand even though she can’t skip properly. “Hey Minami..are you stalking us?” Acchan asked Takamina who was behind them..” Um no…I just happened to walk by..is that a problem?” “Grrr you and your smart mouth! Go wash it out with soap!!” as the ace yelled…the wind blew into the aces hair revealing both earings on her..”That…that earing….it’s yours?” Takamina stuttered..”Mmhmm.” The captain was too shocked to speak anymore.. knowing that the girl she’s been longing to meet has been right in front of her eyes the whole time. It was too much for her to take in at one time but secretly she was content with the fact that the girl she liked are not different people but the same person. “I have to go..see ya..” Takamina rushed back to the crowd as her heart started pounding faster.. “Wait!” Acchan shouted..but Takamina was already gone..“I know it’s wrong but if Atsuko rejects Miichan’s confession tomorrow.. When we get back to Japan I’m going to tell her how I feel.. I can’t hold back my feelings anymore..”
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TBC...
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Taka is going to confess?? :w00t: wOOttt!!
Update soon~~ I wanna see them together!!! Taka's confession + ring = can't wait!!!! :mon inluv:
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wow!!! :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: I hope that Miichan know something going on between both of them, Takamina + Atsuko, :wub: :wub: and she make up a situation on the valentine that make Takamina to confess and the other members also help her to accomplish the mission... (^_^) hehehe..
ALL THE BEST!!! Update SOON!! :heart: :bow: :bow:
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yeah i love it when its going to the climax!! :yossi: Taka's confession!! :inlove: :inlove:
I can't wait! please update asap!! :twothumbs
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omg omg omg :cow:
Atsuko must reject Miichan’s confession :on chew:
Please update soon!
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go takaboy.. propose like amen :D
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Part 11
Aki-p gathered all the girls after the tour. “There has been a change of plans, the concert will be held today instead of two days later. We will be leaving New York earlier than we expected.” The members starts to panic because they didn’t get enough practice time. "It is now 3 o'clock pm. Everyone please get ready.. practice all you can.. we will start the concert at 6 o'clock pm sharp. Please do your best and thank you for all of your hard work." "Gosh I'm so nervous.." Haruna said with her face turning sour.. "Don't worry Nyan Nyan..i'll practice more with you so you won't be so nervous" Yuko said to her girlfriend.."Oh..and after that can we practice in bed later too?" Haruna didn’t say anything but responded to Yuko with a slap to her head. "Never!" "Hey it was worth a try,atleast I made you smile hehe." " Haruna couldn’t help but laugh. They were secretly holding hands during the meeting and sneaking in small kisses here and there. "Kojima and Oshima!" "Yes..Aki-P?" they answered muttering. They were afraid they got caught. Sweat was dripping from both their foreheads from fear.. "I want you girls to perform Kinjirareta Futari (forbidden pair)" "Thank godddd that's all he wanted to say." Haruna sighed in relief.. "Isn't it funny that he picked a song that fits our love life?" the squirrel said nudging her lover on the shoulder" "Do you think he's pretending not to know?" "I doubt it." Yuko smirked. The members had a really successful concert in the Webster hall..over 1000 people came to see them..reaching the level of capacity."Get some rest girls,there will be a handshake event @ 10 a.m - 12 p.m tomorrow."
Next day/February 14th Valentines day/Handshake event
"Ne, Atsuko, Takahashi-San was really popular with the girls today wasn't she?" Miichan stated trying to test out the ace reaction again. "I didn't notice.." Judging by her tone you can tell that she was slightly jealous. "How can you not notice? Most of her fans lined up to shake her hands were girls..she’s such a ladies man".. "So..?" "I was just saying..well I have something to do so I'll see you later tonight @ 8 p.m in central park?" "Mmkay" Acchan answered wondering why they’re going to go there.. The ace kept thinking about how she wanted to be with the captain on this special day. Nothing else was on her mind other than her precious Minami.. Meanwhile around 3 p.m in the afternoon Takamina went searching for flowers for Acchan..she ended up buying flowers called “Forget me not” They are flat, 5-lobed blue, pink and white flowers with a yellow center. “I really hope she like these..” she thought to herself. She also thought about giving Acchan the ring..but she wanted to give it to her when she confesses later on.. The members all met up in the main lobby exchanging gifts..”Erm..Minami?” The shy Asuka and Amina called out for the captain. “Yes?” Both girls pulled out there arms shoving candies and cards into the captains small hands. They hurriedly pecked her on the cheeks on opposite sides with not enough time for Takamina to realize it. Both girls ran away squealing.. leaving Takamina speechless with two lipstick marks on both side of her cheeks. “EEEEEEHHHHHH,What just happened???…” The shocked captain frozed with her eyes wide open. Finally snapping out of it the captain wiped it off and went searching for her beloved Acchan. “Does anyone know where Atsuko is?” ”I think she’s upstairs making homemade chocolate” Miichan answered. ”I’m curious..What did you get her?” “Unn..just plain blue flowers..nothing special..but here’s your gift” Takamina swiftly handed Miichan a box of chocolates to get her attention off the flowers. “OUUU thanks a lot Takahashi-san” The gachapin couldn’t wait but rushed over to the couch to eat her sweets. Chewing with her mouth full she murmured “Don’t forget about the plans for tonight,ok?..” “Okay..i’ll set it all up,don’t worry.” Takamina answered with sadness in her voice. “Minami!!” Acchan called out..”Oh there you are..these are for you..” the captain handed the flowers with a hint of blush on her face. “Ahh thank you so much,they’re really beautiful.” “The flowers are called forget me not.” “ehh? what does that mean?” The captain hesitated to answer…”ehto…it means true love, hope, rememberance, and memories.” “True love?” she asked smiling. “I hope that you keep all the memories we had close to your heart..” she answered shyly turning around.. After hearing those words from the captain, the aces face began to flush with red. In the meantime Tomochin came and interrupt..”May I please cut in?” the sharp toothy girl asked the ace. “Uhh..I guess so..and here is your guy’s gift.” Acchan said disappointingly giving Tomochin and Takamina beautifully wrapped separate bags of chocolates. “They’re homemade” “Oh wow you’re awesomely talented, let’s all open it up together and try it.” The members also agreed to it. “OOOSSHIII” they all said.. ”Hey…why is Minami the only one with the white chocolates” Yuko asked... “Baka!! Be quiet. I think it mean she likes her..” Haruna whispered in the squirrel ears giggling. “Yeah, How come?” Miichan asked being more suspicious. “Erm..I-“ Acchan tried to answer.. but was cut off by Takamina “It’s because I don’t like dark chocolate.” She lied. “Oh..souka,Takahashi-san..can I talk to you in private?” “Sure..” The double Minami’s walked off.. “Do you like Atsuko?” “Heh..that’s really straight forward of you..but no I don’t.” The captain lied again.. “I know you do..please don’t lie to me..” Takamina doesn’t like lying so she told the truth. “I admit I do..but don’t stop your confession just because of me.” “Hai…I won’t..I know it isn’t right for two girls to be together but I’m in love with her..will you still help me with the plans for tonight then?” “Of course I will..I still want you to have a fair chance of winning her heart.” “Thanks a lot Takahashi-san..that means a lot to me.”
@ 8 O’clock in Central park
Miichan waited in the park..with a candle lit dinner w/ two champagne glasses and candles on a mini table.. “Hey I’m here, whoa what’s this all for?.” “Atsuko, um..have a seat.” “Did you do this all yourself?” “Actually Takahashi-san set this all up for us” Acchan was upset to hear this..If Takamina did like her back, she wouldn’t have done this for Miichan the ace thought. “I am impressed..it looks so romantic but why?..” “Yeah about that.. I brought you here because I wanted to tell you something..but how about we eat first?” “Oh..okay” Miichan opened the top to the dinner plates..”Ahh Sashimi, my favorite..” Acchan starts clapping her hands being child like. “Okay so what is it that you wanted to tell me?” “Wait there’s more..” The skies begins to brighten up with fireworks shooting across the whole park in every different colors and in every direction.. Acchan was amazed by the view.. ”Atsuko..Daisukii…I’ve been feeling this way about you from the beginning.. from that moment we met, we clicked right away..Please tell me you feel the same way about me..” The ace was shocked to hear this from the playful Miichan. She was wordless..”Please say something.” “Ehhto..I’m Sor-“ Before Acchan could finish answering..the gachapin already knew the answer...”I’m sorry..I only see you more like a sister to me..I appreciate everything that you’ve done for me but I can’t be with someone whom I don’t love. I mean..I do love you but not in that way..” “Is there someone else?” Acchan hesitated to answer truthfully.. “Yes..there is..” “Who is it? Is it Takahashi-san?” “What…how’d you..” “I can see it in both of your eyes that you love eachother..” “She loves me?” “You have to ask her yourself..I can’t answer that for you,only she can..” “Souka...” “Now run along and go get your girl, it’s still Valentines”..”Hai! Thank you so much for understanding..I love you Minegishi” she said as she rushed away to find the captain to declare her love.
TBC….
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Poor Miichan T_T
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aww miichan dont worry you can pimp whatever of more 100 girls in project48 :D
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nanka I feel sorry to Miichan, but I feel happy for my AtsuMina :cow: :cow:
Acchan! Go get your love!! :heart:
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Finally update!! Thanks a lot... :heart: :heart: :heart: I just read it today.. my notebook just broke down about 7 days I think... nice chapter!! hope Atsuko have time to meet Takamina!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :wub:
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Waa~ I love it! :wub:
I'm hoping Tomochin will have a more aggressive role in getting Takamina~
XD Love It!!!!!
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Go Acchan!!! Find Taka!!!! :onioncheer: and taka, go confess to Acchan~~ :luvluv1:
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Part 12
The ace was on her way to find Takamina at the hotel , in the subway heading back..she had a phone call..”ring ring ring” *caller id: Aki-P* “Moshi moshi ” “Ah..Atsuko I have important news to share with you” “Hontoni? What is it?” Acchan said excitedly “I have a great opportunity for you to boost your career” “how so?” “An agency called me and offer you a role in a Drama” “Oh my gosh! Really?!?! NO WAY…” “Are you excited?” “Yes! Yes of course..it’s an honor” “But..” “Eh? But what?” she asked curiously. “There’s a down side to it..It will be filmed in Korea for a month or so..when we leave back for Japan,You would have to fly straight into Seoul instead.” Acchan was silent, all you can hear was her breathing.. she was thinking about the person she loved most and how she didn’t want to be away from her for so long. “Atsuko?” “Hai, I’m still here..” “Well think about it okay? You can give me an answer before the night ends” “Oh okay..thanks a lot Aki-P, I’ll make sure I give you an answer by midnight.” “Mm..Okay, take care” “Hai” * hangs up*
Meanwhille at the hotel..
“Ne,ne Minami..what are you writing over there?” Tomochin asked . “Oh..it’s nothing..” she tore the paper and crumbled it throwing it into her back pack. “Are you sure it’s nothing? you spent hours on that paper..why all of a sudden you’re throwing it away.” I was just scribbling heh..” Takamina climbed onto her bed sighing.. “I wonder what that Minegishi and Atsuko are up to..should I be worried? I can’t believe I set up the most romantic atmosphere for them..I’m such an idiot. I need to know what’s going on right now..should I call?” Hesitating to pick up and dial...she told herself “Neh I shouldn’t, I’ll sound too desperate.” “Minami..what are you thinking about?” Tomochin smiled and jumped on the bed laying on next to her.. “Eh..eh..” The captain was surprised by her actions and how close she was. “Is it okay if I lie on your chest?” “Heeeeeeeeh? W-w-w-hy..??”Takamina asked stuttering. “Because I don’t have any one to spend Valentine with..” Takamina felt bad and let her lye there “Why didn’t you spend it with Kasai? I heard her asked you to be her Valentine” “Oh god..don’t mention her..her Chiyuness gets on my nerves,if I hear it one more time..i might just clock her in the face..” Tomochin said chuckling. “Hahahaha that’s funny and true..but she’s a really nice girl. You should give her a chance.” “I’ll take your word of advice..well maybe.. but there’s someone else I already got my eyes on hehe” “Hontoni?” Takamina asking with her eyes wide open and enthusiastically. “Yeah..but I can’t say who yet” “Oh..I know exactly how you feel..” Takamina stated. Suddenly there was a knock on the door. After 1 knock, Haruna and Yuko already opened the door walking in.. “Umm..did we interrupt something?” Yuko asked with a pervy smirk..”go ahead and proceed” she also added. Haruna kicked her girlfriend on the leg. “Shut up Yuko.. Hey do you guys want to go eat dinner together?” “Sure” Tomochin answered. Takamina on the other hand got up really fast.. ”It’s not what you think!” “HAHA sureeee we all know you’re a play girl takaboy! I seen what Asuka and Amina did to you. You dirtry giir--” Yuko teased. “That’s enough Yuko! Lets go...” Haruna yelled dragging the squirrel out the door saving Takamina from embarrassment. In the hotel, there is a fancy restaurant where they decided to eat at. “Hey..I need to talk to you in private” The captain said to the cat like girl. “What is it?” “Can we go to the bathroom?” “Umm, I don’t know..Yuko might get jealous again.” “Well tell her I like ATSUKO!!!” “You’re not shy about it?” “Of course not..when it comes to her..nothing else matters.” “Dang..You caught the love bug!!” “Heh..yeah..i think so too.” “Okay go wait in the bathroom, I’ll let her know later” “Can you guys wait for the food? I have to use the bathroom” Haruna asked Tomochin and Yuko. “Okay,make sure you hurry” Yuko pouted. “Okay I’ll try” .. Haruna replied. Takamina pulled Haruna aside as soon as she reached the door. “Nanii?!” “Help me Nyan nyan!” “Help you on what??” “I need you to help me practice confessing to Atsuko.” “Do we really have to do this right now?” “Of course,she’ll be back soon!!!” The ace rushed in..trying to catch her breath.. She spotted Tomochin and Yuko ”hu..hu..do..d-d-dd-do you know where I can find Minami?” “She’s in the bathroom over there” Tomochin pointed. “Do you need water Atsuko? ” “No uh oh t-t-th-thanks” she said while trying to catch her breath..Acchan slightly opened the door to the bathroom.. when she heard two girls talking she frozed. She over heard and seen Minami confessing to Haruna.. “I love you..please be my girlfriend, I loved you for a long time..” Takamina said, then hugging Haruna tightly. Acchan tears slowly dropped from her eyes..she tightens her fist as her eyes began to turn dark..her lips turned into a straight line.. As she let go of the door…she began to run as fast as she could up to her room..she cried and cried like she did the first time she met Takamina on New years. “My heart it hurts..is this what it feels like to have a broken heart? If so..I don’t want to be in love ever again..” She said to herself as she sobbed harder and harder.. Acchan picked up her cell and dialed Aki-P’s number.. “Hello ?” Aki-P answered.. “I—I made up my decision..I want to do it..” “Are you okay Atsuko? I can hear you sniffling” “I’m fine…but can you please get me a flight out of here right now?” “Why??” “I just don’t want to be here right now” “Oh..okay I’ll respect your wishes,pack up and be on your way to the airport.” “Thanks Aki-P” “No problem.” *hangs up*
In the bathroom
“Is that enough practice for you yet? Yuko and Tomomi is waiting for us! You cheeseball” “Don’t Make fun of me!” Takamina shouted. “I can’t help it..you’re so cheesy, HAHA!” “So what did you think of it?” “Of what?” “The confession!!! BAKA!!! Sometimes you’re such an airhead Nyan Nyan!” “Oh,hehe it was perfect..but next time don’t hug me so tightly,I like hugging girls..not little boys like you” “That’s it!! I will tell Yuko that you like me so she can punish you!” “No no don’t. I was just kidding! Now lets go eat.” “That’s what I thought! Bwhahaha” They all finished their dinner.. Miichan walks in..”Hey guys did you see Atsuko anywhere? her stuff is not in the room anymore..” “Really??” Takamina asked worriedly . Everyone began to search for her..until Aki-p walked in..”Calm down girls..Atsuko is on her way to Korea to film a drama. She couldn’t leave any notices because she was in a hurry to catch the flight. But everybody should start packing their bags as well. We will leave to Japan @ 5 a.m.”
TBC…
Sorry no confession yet! kekek i love teasing you guys!! :rofl: I'm thinking about turning it into Takatomo instead, i'm beginning to love them more than Atsumina LMAO jk!!! ATSUMINA FOREVER! :wub: :wub:
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huaaaaa Acchan!!! She heard it!! :banghead: :banghead: she misunderstood the situation, :bleed eyes:
please update it quickly, I want my AtsuMina to be together........... :panic: and please no more misunderstanding :bleed eyes:
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NOOOO~~ :banghead:
this is not right!!! :O I want my atsumina!!! :panic:
and acchan gonna leave for a month or so? :bleed eyes:
please make acchan comeback quick, then takamina can confess to her. :cry:
anyway, goodjob. :twothumbs
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WA!!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :banghead: :banghead:
Poor ATSUKO..... please ATSUMINA :bow:
I hope that TAKAMINA know that ATSUKO hear him practice in the bathroom... and after 1 week without ATSUKO by her side TAKAMINA ask Aki-p for a break and holiday and she went to KOREA to find her.... :wub: :inlove: just my imagination .....hehehe... :nervous
hope ATSUMINA forever... nice chapter :twothumbs :twothumbs good job and GOOD LUCK!!! :wub:
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Huaah~! NO~!!! :smhid Acchan misunderstood it.. :cry:
I hope AtsuMina will be back soon, and I'm very sad to what happen, Hayss~! :smhid
I Like TakaTomo too, But I Love AtsuMina, There's so many Drama's here, heHe! But I Like it..
Write what you Like Mr./Ms. Writer, I'll support it, THANK YOU and GoodLuck, Update Soon.. :)
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Thanks guys for reading, i appreciate the comments eheh i'm a girl btw, i just wanted to add more drama to spice up the story, btw there will be more DRAMA coming soon pwhahahaha just be patient and in no time they will be together... well Maybe...or maybe not hah jk! :twisted: :D
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Ah bad timing Acchan but it's more interesting ^^
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:( Aww.. Acchan...
Well.. :smhid Takamina is kinda unlucky there...
This could spice things up between Takamina and Tomochin 8)
And I wonder what Tomochin would do with this opportunity to close the gap between her and Takamina 8)2
:banghead: Can't wait for the update ;)
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Acchan!!!!! :pleeease: What have you done to my AtsuMina!!!! :fainted:
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Part 13
Minami POV
"Why did she leave without saying a word to anyone?... Thats not like her at all..Something must be wrong..I've been calling several times but it keeps going to voicemail." The members and i just arrived in Japan not so long ago so I hurried into Aki-p's office. "Ehm..excuse me for barging in here like this Aki-p but I want to ask you something if you don't mind." "Sure, what is it?" "How long will Atsuko be gone for?" I asked trying to catch a breath from running the whole way there. When he shook his head, I knew it wasn't going to be a good answer. "Atsuko will be in Korea for a month." I froze at the thought of not seeing her face for one whole month...my heart sunken from hearing those words. I needed to see her, there was so much things left unsaid that I needed to tell her. 2 weeks has passed. All I can think about is her. Every day, every night and everywhere I turn all I can see is her face, I’m beginning to think I'm starting to lose my mind slowly… day by day. Is this what love feels like? I don’t get it. Why does it hurt so much? Another week has passed still no calls back; I’m beginning to feel like she's avoiding me. What did I do to deserve this? My heart is aching so bad right now...I would fly to Korea if I could but my career is just now launching off. If I leave now, everything I worked hard for will just be thrown away.." as we we're practicing Miichan came up to me. "Did you talk to Atsuko yet Takahashi-san ?" "No ..She hasn't call me back yet. I left so many messages but still no replies." "oooh..souka.." she replied with a secretive face.. "what's with that face miichan?are you keeping something from me???" "Well, I didn't want to be the one to break it to you but I feel like I should tell you.." There was a long pause coming from Miichan. "We speak to each other almost every day. I’m surprised that she haven't spoken to you yet, I thought you would be the one person she would talk to everyday while she's overseas." “What?!?!?" I screamed furiously. I felt as if someone just had stabbed me through the heart. "So, how is she!?" I asked shaking Miichan back and forth crudely. " "She's doing real good she says." "Majisuka? Why is she ignoring me only.. what did I do?.." " I really don't know Takahashi-san.. you can ask her yourself. I don't want to get in the middle of it.." "I surely will then." It's nearly a month but it feels like a year without her by my side. Just 1 more day and she will be here and I’ll be waiting patiently for that moment to come."
Atsuko POV
"My eyes, it hurts... Every night for 2 weeks after filming, I would cry in my bed to ease the pain but it feels as if nothing will change. I ignored all of Minami's calls and started talking to Miichan and other members every day to get my mind off of her but still it doesn't seem to work... How could Minami do this to me? Am I just a pawn in her game to play? after all those time, she kept leading me on without realizing it… how could I be so foolish not to see it coming? Especially with all those girls fan girling over her... She’s just a player and always will be. First it was me... then Tomomi, and soon it will be Haruna. We're all just victims. Although I hate her so much right now… it's hard not to think of her, I know truly deep down inside I still love her. The feelings I have are so strong that it's getting really hard to overcome.” We were done filming for the day… Takeru-kun, my main co-star asked me out on a date. At first I refused, but he kept on being so persistent. My first impression of him was that he's a good looking guy and he’s probably a snob. But he actually turned out to be the sweetest guy you’ll ever meet. Next day I finally agree to go on that date… I had time to think about it last night; if I wanted to get over Minami, I needed to start seeing other people. I know there’s no dating in Akb but no one will ever find out because we agreed to keep it a secret. Two more weeks has passed, not a day goes by without me thinking of Minami...it made me guilty for leading Takeru-kun on… Our relationship is one sided, he likes me a lot but the only reason why I’m dating him is to make Minami jealous. I’m finally going home today; he is also tagging along to do some interviews with me to promote our drama in Japan.
Reaching 1 Month mark
"Minami! Minami! I hear Atsuko is coming back home today! Finally, You can tell her how you feel! Haruna cheered on for the captain. “Really? When will she arrive???” Takamina asked overly excited. “In 2 hours..Are you going to pick her up from the airport and propose to her Taka boy? THAT WOULD BE SOOOOOOO KAWAIIII” Yuko snickered. “Eeeeh? Our relationship hasn’t even started yet.. Why did you have to tell that squirrel about it Haruna!? She teases me nonstop now!” Takamina pouted. “So that “squirrel” would get off my back about me liking you, duh cause I really really don’t!” “You say it like it’s a bad thing!!!” Takamina cried back. “Well that’s because it is a bad thing.” Yuko added laughing crazily. “Awww shut up!” The captain frowned. Meanwhile… Acchan flight flew in an hour earlier than expected; she made her way into the practice building to surprise the members. Although she was nervous to see Takamina and Haruna together, she tries not to let it get in the way. The ace walked in slowly, everyone attentions on her now... “I’m back” Acchan simply smiled. The members ran towards her bear hugging her and squeezing her, particularly Miichan. “We missed you!” Miichan said smiling. “Especially a certain someone” she added. The captain was not in the practice room at the time, she was walking through the building to get some cold water bottles for the members. Acchan looks around and didn’t see the captain anywhere. “Why am I even looking for her after what she did?” she thought. “Well, hey guys I’m going to Aki-p’s office now so I’ll see you guys in a bit.” Acchan walked out the dance studio as Takamina was running in causing them to clash into each other. ”Hey watch it!” Acchan screamed before looking up..feeling on her sore bum she fell on. ”That voice..Atsuko???” Takamina asked.. smiling enormously. “We’ve got to stop meeting like this” The captain happily said. Getting on her feet first, Takamina helped the ace up…Before Acchan can move or say anything the captain forcefully pulled the ace into a warm embrace and planted a very passionate kiss on her. Acchan was shocked and surprised leaving her eyes wide open. Without realizing it, her eyes closes and she was responding to the kiss… At that second the ace starts to remember the scene in the bathroom. She pushes the captain off...” Stop.. What are you doing Minami??” she asked repulsively.
TBC...
ps..next chapter is gonna be sooooooooo crazyyyyyyyyyyy..stay tune lol :panic: :panic: :panic: please don't kill me about the Takeru guy!! soon things will fall into place hhehe.
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Kisu!!! kisu!!! kisu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :ptam-glow:
and please no heart breaking moment again~~~ :mon runcry: I can't bear it when my OTP hurting each other~~ :OMG:
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Yea!! :heart: Update~!!! :heart:
:thumbsup Hoho.. Takamina so daring~ Kissing Acchan pationately~~ :wub: :inlove:
Your the man Takaboy :on GJ:
I hope that Takeru won't do something stupid :angry:
:fainted: And I also hope that the misunderstanding will be cleared up soon :cat:
Please :mon cute: update soon~ And Thank You :kneelbow: for updating XD
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NO WAY~ :w00t:
takabaka kiss acchan first? :inlove: this will never happen in the real life, but this is fiction so... XD :twothumbs
YAY!!!! make her your, takabaka. ;) :cow:
and to AU: please don't make them misunderstood anymore, will u? :bow: the last time really make my heart broken. :(
ps: that takeru guy seem will to be a third wheel :banghead:
ps2: thank for update and update soon. 8) :fap
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Whoa! Whoa! :w00t: :shocked OMG! the Last scene, heHe.. XD
Acchan now thought that Takamina is a Player, hoHo.. :smhid
I wonder what will happen next, and what about the Takeru guy,
is he going to be a probLem to Atsumina reLationship? I guest Yes!
Own question, own answer.. :P
well! Thanks, it's getting more interesrted now :twothumbs, but it's breaking my heart.. :(
Update soon.. :)
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yeah!! takaboy show maeda who is the boss!! :D.. jajaj ok i forgive about takeru.kun but... update soon please
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Hmm..should i post my update right now? i am suddenly in a writing mood..what do you guys think,should i do it? :onionwhip: :onionwhip:
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^ Please update.... :bow: :bow:
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Part 14
“Why did you ignore my calls?” Takamina asked. “No reason..” the ace replied. “Never mind that” The captain said grabbing both the aces hands. “Atsuko.. From the first time I met you... we’ve had a misunderstanding, I thought that you were obnoxious, selfish, and an ugly hearted spoiled brat. I know that we didn’t like each other before. We’ve had our differences but being with you every day changed my mind, I’ve gotten to know you a lot better..you’re not as bad as I thought you were. You’re actually really sweet,caring and beautiful inside and out. We’ve became closer..so close that I’ve fallen for you. ..I love everything about you and every inch of you..especially when you smile and your nose starts to wrinkle..it’s so cute..Oh and when you get jealous..I secretly like it because it shows that you feel the same way for me, what I feel for you. It’s really hard not to fall in love with you really. Who would of ever thought that hate would turn into a form of love..right? It took me awhile to realize it. I think it must be fate that you also turned out to be the girl I was looking for from that New year’s night.. Now that all of the missing puzzle pieces are put together.. all you have to do now is accept my confession and we can finally be..Daisuki Atsuko..Daisuki.” The halls went silent..the ace was left speechless with tears forming in her eyes..she was moved by her words but she knew that everything she said is a lie due to the bathroom incident. “Say something Atsuko..” Takamina gestured “Gomen ne..Minami… Although your words were touching..I only see you as a friend, we can never be anything else other than that..You’re just confused at the moment.” “No! no I’m not..I love you Atsuko. Just give me a chance to prove it to you please.” The captain tugged the aces arm.. “I am really sorry Minami.. I really am..I ‘m already in a relationship with someone else” “Who???? Miichan??” “No…it’s not her..” “If not her than who?!? Tell me!!” Takamina yelled from frustration. “Sato Takeru..” “The guy from the drama??” “Yes..” “Seriously??him?” Takamina started to sob.. “So I guess I should give up then right?” Takamina tears started dripping from her eyes. “Yes..me and you could never work..you’re not my type,and you’re a girl anyways.” Acchan also added trying to make the captain feel as awful as she did from before.. The captain was very angry with what Acchan just said to her..it was unnecessary, especially when she was spilling her heart out.. “How could you be so cold? Fine,Atsuko..I promise myself..you will never be anything else to me other than a friend.” Those words struck the aces heart..Takamina said it so boldly.
The captain couldn’t handle it anymore and ran off out of the building balling her eyes out. The sentence “I promise myself..you will never be anything else to me other than a friend.” kept repeating in her head as she cried. Running across the street, Takamina didn’t pay any attention to the moving traffic on the road. When a driver seen her, his car didn’t stop on time. “BAM” She smacked right into the car leaving her bleeding and unconscious. “Someone please call 911!!!” the driver who doesn’t have a cell phone yelled out for help.” After some minutes, an ambulance arrived to take her away. Meanwhile..Acchan was left there stunned in the hallway..Yuko and Haruna walked into the hall fill with laughter and all smiles.. “Hey Atsuko, congrats to the both of you..you must be happy huh?” Haruna asked cheerfully. “Happy? Why would I be..and congrats to what?” “Didn’t Minami just confessed to you? I’ve been practicing with her for a while now for the real thing today.” “Practice??..You mean..what I heard in the bathroom last month was all fake?” “Oh..You heard it? Gomen ne. Yep it was all for you.” “Oh my god…so everything she just said to me now was the truth?” “Yes it was all real..why?” “I had a misunderstanding.” “Oh.. haha never, I’m with Yuko, you know.. but don’t tell anyone and I won’t tell on you guys” Haruna winked at Acchan “Kamisama! I have to go.” Before she can head to the door..Aki-P stepped in. “Everyone I have bad news to share with you.” “Nanii? Nanii?” Everyone was startled to know what was going on. Aki-p sighed and hesitated to announce the news. “Takmina…she..” “Minami?? Minami what??” everyone asked with concern. “She..huys, she was just involved in a car accident. She is rushed to the hospital right now.” “WHAT!?!?!” the aced was dumbfounded. Acchan pushed everyone out the way and was immediately on her way to the hospital and so was everyone else.
TBC...
Now that the misunderstanding is cleared up,what will happen next?? :dizzy: :byebye: Goodnight everyone! don't kill me flean lol
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Ah! Almost but at least it was a kiss ^^
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Oi!!! Oi!!! :scolding: What have you done to my Taka!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :frustrated:
She just confessed to Acchan and "BAM!!!" :mon scare: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Do something!!!! Don't make her die, lost her memory or something~~~ :mon fierce:
Better fix this!!! or I~~~ :mon uggh: :mon kungfu:
ps : sorry if over reacted~~ I got goosebumps when I read this chapter~~ :mon surr:
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OMG OMG OMG I like it I like it :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:
Hope takamina will be fine :mon determined: Don't kill her :mon worklate:
a little tsundere will be fun :mon evillaff:
I'm waiting your next part :mon pray2: :mon prayer:
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:cry: :cry: omg omg omg what have you done to taka? :bleed eyes: :mon ghost:
please dont kill her and make my Acchan feels guilty for what she just said to taka :mon pray2: :mon pray2:
Acchan..........go get your love now! :mon yeah: :frustrated:
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Oh no!!! my TAKAMINA!!! :cry: :( :bleed eyes:
MY BE SHE WILL LOST HER MEMORY!! :banghead:
what gonna happen to ATSUKO and her new Boyfriend.. break up?? :?
Please save ATSUMINA :bow:!!!
UPDATE SOON... NICE CHAPTER... :wub: :inlove:
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this story are a wonderful !!!!!!!! :luvluv1:
you must go as soon as possible please :pleeease: :dizzy:
poor little Takamina :gyaaah: q I hope everything right for her! :D
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:) Yea!! Misunderstanding Cleared~
But..... but..... :cry: Takamina.... car accident... :OMG:
Hopefully nothing too bad like 'death' will happen..... just something like memory loss..... :bow:
Please update more :mon cute:
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:w00t: Confession~~~
And misunderstanding cleared :mon inluv:
But.... car accident??!!!!! :stoned:
Please.. nothing too bad.... :on speedy:
Update soon :onioncheer:
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Part 15
@ the hospital
“Doctor! Please let me in there.” The ace begged while crying. “I’m sorry Ms., I can’t let you come in unless you’re a family member.” the doctor replied. “Please be patient and wait in the waiting room area like everyone else.” “I’m sorry Minami..it was all my fault. I’m so sorry.” The ace cried out trying to push her way into the emergency room. Two security guard we’re called over..holding the ace back from entering the room. Later on..Miichan and the other members were able to calm her down. “Atsuko, don’t cry.. I promise she will be okay; we don’t want to see you like this, please cheer up.” Miichan said. “Minami is a strong person.” Haruna added. “But it was my fault..If anything happens to her, I blame myself.” “Don’t blame yourself Astuko, there was nothing you could have done to prevent it from happening.” Yuko stated. Almost two hours has passed, the surgery procedure was finally done. The doctor walked in. The first to jump out of her seat was Acchan. “Doctor! Is she okay!? What’s her condition?” The doctor began to shake his head.. “There are some good news and some bad news, what would you guys like to hear first?” “The good” everyone yelled out. “The procedure went well; she is in stable condition right now and alive. Thank god… Usually not many people survive this kind of trauma.” Everyone was relieved to hear the good news. “But what’s the bad news?” Acchan asked in rush. “…well, she was hit on the head really hard which caused internal bleeding. We were able to stop it but… she has not yet awoken. Sorry to say but we don’t know when she will wake up; it could be days, months, or even years. I’m sorry guys.” Sadness was filled in the air within the waiting room. Everyone was too shock to speak. Most of them began to cry. As for the ace.. she ran and made her way into the room where the captain was kept stabilized. Holding on to Takamina hands she sobbed non- stop. “Minami...please wake up. I didn’t mean to say any of those things to you. I was just angry, I thought that you were lying to me about how you feel. The truth is I do love you too, everything that you said to me made me happy. If you wake up, we can be together.. Don’t you want that? Please get up! I was stupid to believe that you were in love someone else. I’ll do anything for you but please just wake up! Please…” the ace screamed while weeping.” Suddenly a hand appeared on the aces shoulder. “Atsuko.. go get some rest, you need it. We’ll take turns taking care of her.” Tomochin insisted. “No..I don’t want to go. I want to stay right here beside her tonight.” “Alright then, I’ll be here tomorrow, you have work to take care of. Don’t forget about your interviews.” Tomochin added. For several weeks Tomochin and Acchan has been taking turns coming to spend a night with the captain. One night, Tomochin had confessed to Takamina whom she liked.. although she couldn’t hear a thing. “Minami… I know that you and Atsuko have mutual feelings towards one another,but I have always liked you also.. So much that it hurts me to see you like this. I know I stand no chance against the ace so I hope for nothing but the best for you two. Yeah… I know it’s pathetic that I’m telling you now...while you’re unconscious but I’m a coward. A coward of rejection. Sleep well my love” She kissed the captain on the forehead.
A month later
“Where am I?” Takamina asked as she walk in a dark path. “Come my child, walk into the light” A voice from above said. “W-w-what? Who’s there?” the captain stuttered. “Don’t worry my child; I’m here to take you away from all this pain and suffering.” “What do you mean?? I’m fine, nothing is wrong with me” she asked confused. Takamina was so frightened she ran the opposite way from the light. “Ah..souka..I guess it’s not her time yet...” the voice chuckled being amused. He then decided to strike her with a lightning bolt.. it suddenly strucked her from behind.. Then “Bam!” she woke up. Waking up,Takamina seen two girls resting their heads on her bed from both left and right side. Takamina was alarmed as she gotten up… and screamed “where am I?” Acchan and Tomochin heard her voice and immediately got up. “Minami! You’re awake” Acchan said happily embracing the captain tightly. “Eh..Let go of me…Who are you?” takamina said pushing her away. “Ha..that’s not funny Minami,you know who I am!” “Minami? Who’s Minami???” the captain asked. The aces smile soon started to disappear slowly..“Doctor! Doctor please get in here” Tomochin yelled out. The doctor finally came in.. “Sorry but you girls have to leave the room, she’s in a panic state right now.” In the waiting room they await. “What’s wrong with her doctor?” Tomochin asked. “Huys…it seems to me that she have memory loss. She doesn’t remember anything at all but I have explained everything to her.. so she is much more calm now. In a bit you guys can go in and visit her..I told her that you guys are her very good friends.”
TBC…
sorry it's a bit rushed ! :banghead: and thanks everyone for reading my crappy fic!! :bow:
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She is not dead yay!!!! But she lost memory T_T
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Noooooo drama again!! :OMG: uhuhuhuhu... I am happy taka is alive, but she lost her memory!! LOST HER FEELING TOWARD ACCHAN!!! :banghead: :banghead: :bleed eyes:
please, make it happy ending. :fainted: dont tell me you are going to make TakaTomo instead? :stoned:
btw, update soon. :banghead:
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Lol you read my mind moekare. ;) haha Jk I'll try to update soon, thanks for reading again oh btw I love ur fics :oops:
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:on gay: Thank you so much for the update XD
Takamina :cry: But Thank God (or you :P ) she didn't die :)
Hope you update soon :mon cute:
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Thank you so much for the update :)
Adding Drama XD Yea! But hopefully Takamina will heal soon :thumbsup
Thanks again and hopefully you'll update soon :bow:
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I almost cried again~ LOL.. :lol: Luckily taka is okay~~ XD but she lost her memory??? :smhid
somehow~~ I think that she just pretending not to remember~~ :P
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wow wow yeah takamina loss her memory, come on acchan get up and fight for your husband`s memory.. you need to be so strong because you have a rival lover... its gonna be interesting.. i`ll be waiting..
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Part 16
Atsuko POV
"Who are you?" was the only question that resounded in my head...When those three words came out her mouth, it felt like someone pierced a knife through my chest. Suddenly my world just fell apart in seconds..does this mean her feelings for me are gone?..I feel like breaking down right now.. but I have to be strong in front of her,she doesn't know who I am anymore. i can't let it end like this..I have to make her remember! I need you Minami, more than ever.
Room
As the ace and Tomochin walks into the room, a little shy voice echoed across the room.."Gomen ne, I didn't mean to yell at you guys earlier,but hey it's nice to meet you two ..what are your names?" takamina asked. the ace responded with a sad look while tomochin is getting ready to introduce herself. " I'm To--" before Tomochin could answer, Acchan cuts her off.. " So you really don't remember anything at all?" the ace asked hoping for a positive answer.. "Eh-to.. Sorry I don't remember anything at all" "try to think Minami try.." "Hai I'll try my best" for several minutes the captain was trying to think harder but nothing came to mind. "Ano..i'm sorry,it's not working" "please try harder minami" "erm..hai i'll try again" she tried thinking hard as possible then a flashback hit her. She began to make faces as she was having the flash back; in that flash back; ( "Fine ,Atsuko..I promise myself..you will never be anything else to me other than a friend.") "Ahhh! My head, It hurts" the captain scream as her head started to ache.. "It's okay, you can stop.. you don't have to try anymore..if you do you'll only hurt yourself." Tomochin said with concern and rolling her eyes at the ace. "Ne,minami what did you see?" Acchan still prying. " "Don't force it,takamina will only get worse" tomochin said to Acchan. " uh i'll be fine, well I just remember me standing in an empty hall..I was talking to someone but I couldn't see that person clearly.." " go on minami.." "umm the only thing I can remember was saying" "Fine,Atsuko..I promise myself..you will never be anything else to me other than a friend.” "Eh!?" Tomochin said in shock. "Takamina can only remember her last interactions" Acchan thought. "Do you guys know who Atsuko is?" the captain asks. "That's he--" Tomochin tried to answer but was interrupted again by the ace. "We don't know any Atsuko,right Tomomi?" the ace nudged Tomochin to lie. "Oh yea.. we don't know anyone name Atsuko" Tomochin agreed..trying to play along since that's what achhan was signaling for. "oh, so what are your names? You guys never told me yet" " Owh..my name is Acchan and this girl right here is Tomomi,we're all really good friends" "Acchan? That's a weird name" Takamina chuckled. "Hehe yeah I guess it is" the ace replied. "Tomomi...I know this is really straight forward of me to say...but.." The captain pauses for a short time. "Heeeh?! Go on say it, I don't mind..whatever it is." "You're..eh,how do I say this..erm..very very gorgeous." The ace was really surprise to hear that. She gave a hurt look but did not say anything. "Ah,arigatou" tomochin answered turning red.
Takamina POV
I don't know who I am..my head, it's in pain.. I can't stand it. These people..they call me Minami..so that must be my name..the doctor explained to me what had happen.I'm trying to process everything, I'm really scared right now. Suddenly two girls walked in that I seen from before.. I couldn't help but stare at one of the girls, it was like love at first sight when I seen her smile at me. She is really beautiful.. I want to know her name so I asked. Ah..so her name is Tomomi,what a pretty name to match a pretty face. After I told her how gorgeous she was..I seen a figure waiting near the door,it was a guy..he looks like hes waiting for Acchan because he keeps looking at her. So I asked her.. "is that your boyfriend at the door?"I giggled teasing her. She turned to look back and hesitated to answer.."Oh, hai that's takeru kun." She introduces him to me. I think they're a cute couple. "We have to go to our interview" he said to her. Soon they both left,she said she'll be back later..it seems she cares alot about me and I appreciate that.These girls they claim to know me,They told me that they are my friends but should I believe it?although I can't remember anything or anyone..they seem like nice people so maybe I should just put my trust in them. I still wonder who Atsuko is though..why do I have this flashback with that name in it?does she mean something to me?
TBC...
Things are becoming more complicated,will Takamina end up with Acchan or Tomochin? Stay tune !
lol sorry i made things crazier but its too keep the series going well thank you again for reading. :bow: :bow: :banghead:
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You just switch ON my depression mode again~~ :fainted: Taka!!! please remember!!!! :err:
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WHATTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :on thumbb: DON'T DARE TO MAKE IT TAKATOMO!! :on voodoo: :on voodoo:
you broke my heart :on cloudeye: oh my AtsuMinaaaa :mon whine:
and btw thanks for reading my ficts. :on asmo:
but this story is so complicated :on polter:
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Oh YES!!!! UPDATE!!!!! XD
OMG :w00t: Takamina love in first sight with Tomochin????? :panic:
I can't wait to read more about what will happen later!!! :banghead:
Will Takamina end up with Acchan or Tomochin???!!!! :? XD :wub: :inlove:
Thank You So Much for the Update :) :twothumbs :thumbsup
:bow: Please Update Soon :cathappy:
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:OMG:
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!
I want Atsuminaaaa~ Not Takatomo~ :on cloudeye:
BUT!!! it is so awesome :luvluv1:
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No!!! My poor Takacchan!!! Takamina! You have to remember!!!
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oh my god!! atusmina!!!!
poor acchan but i feel that she deserves this T_T gomen ne..
and takatomo its good for me but just a little.. acchan need to fight agains tomochin and win of course :D
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6 P.M. @ Night
The ace was now done with her interview. On her way out of the studio she had a chat with her co-star. “Ano..Takeru-kun, I have something very important to tell you.” “Yes? What is it?” He replied “I’m sorry..We can’t see each other anymore.” “Why not?” He asked sadly “I’m really sorry that I didn’t tell you from the beginning but before I met you..I was already in love with someone else.” “Ah..souka I understand, well you’re a really wonderful girl.. Whomever that is that has your heart is one lucky person.” “Aaa..Thank you so much for understanding; we can still hang out sometimes though!” “Ah yes,that would be nice..” He chuckled. “Well see ya! Be safe and tell Minami I said hi.” “Haiiiii! I will”. She shouted as they parted ways. Before heading back to the hospital to see Takamina, the ace stopped by the flower shop. “Excuse me sir, do you guys hold the flower called Forget me not?” “You’re in luck little lady! We actually have one left in stock.” Acchan was happy to hear that because that’s what the captain gave to her on Valentine’s day.. “Maybe if I get her these flowers,she will remember the feelings we shared.” The ace thought while smiling. “I can only be hopeful.” As the ace walks into the room, she stopped when she seen that Tomochin was still there feeding the captain. “I’m sorry,did I interrupt something?” the ace asked in a hurtful tone. “No..no..come in Acchan” Takamina insisted with a smile. “I guess I’ll get going now...” Tomochin stated. “Please..don’t go.” The captain pouted. “Gomen ne, Minami..I can’t because of work and all..you’ll get discharged soon so til then we can see each other ok?” “You promise?” “Don’t worry I’ll keep my words” Tomochin winked. “Wait, I need to speak with you outside the room before I go Acchan” The ace walked out with her. “Why did you make me to lie to her? She has the right to know who you are Atsuko.” “I can’t tell her who I am..I don’t want us to start out in bad terms.” “You have to tell her soon before she finds out your real name… and she’ll want to know more about what happened between you two.” “Thank you for not saying anything.” “It’s okay but I don’t want you to keep lying to her so..make sure you tell her. Okay I gotta go now so take care of her..Bye”
“Here, I got these for you.It’s called forget me not” Acchan handed the flowers to Takamina as she walked back in. “Sugggoii..it’s so pretty.” After smelling the flower and looking at it for a little. Takamina head started to hurt again, she lifted her hands to her forehead. A flashback is starting to happen again. (She sees herself handing the same kind of flowers to that unclear person.) “Minami, are you okay!? Should I get the doctor??” “No..It’s okay..the doctor says it’s normal but I hate it when my head hurts out of nowhere. Anyways never mind that... Today I asked Tomomi out on a date, would you and your boyfriend like to go with us?” Acchan felt a sudden heaving feeling in her chest like she couldn’t breathe anymore..when the captain told her. “Actually I broke up with him today.” “Eh! Why? You guys look so good together.” “Because…” Takamina waited for an answer..”Well you don’t have to tell me if you don’t want to..would you like to join us with just yourself then? I want to know more about myself and I know I can count on you to tell me.” Acchan didn’t know whether to say yes or no..she didn’t want to witness the love of her life being with someone else. “Erm..okay then.” She agreed just to keep an eye on them.
Next day…
Takamina was discharged and able to go home..her mom and dad came to pick her up. As she walked into her room..she thought to herself “Wow..it’s so pink in here..I guess I was a really girly person” she chuckled. She then jumped and lied in her bed. “Finally I’m home.” She said out loudly to herself. Next to her bed was a backpack, she was curious what kind of person she was so she decided to open it. In that back pack there was a ring and a balled up letter. When she had seen the ring and paper, her head begins to hurt again.. Another flashback; (She sees herself buying the ring for someone who really wanted it and she sees herself crumbling a love letter) After seeing another flashback she just decided to ignore it since it’s in the past. She was in the middle of opening the paper but was interrupted by a yell. “Minami! Acchan is here to see you.” Her mom yelled out. “Okay mom! Let her up here..” As Takamina yelled back,she dropped the letter on the floor forgetting about it. “Hi! Minami” the ace said excited to see her. “Hey, wait up here,let me go get you a drink and some snacks Acchan.” “Hai!” the ace said happily.
Atsuko POV
First thing when I woke up, I went straight to Minami’s house. I couldn’t stand being away from her for one day. I wanted to see her every chance I get and try to remind her of who I am. As I walked into her room, she already offered me something to eat and drink. Ahh…she still the same old Minami, so sweet and caring. While waiting for her I found something on the floor, a letter. I really wanted to know what it says so I sneaked a peek. In that letter:It says she loves me but she didn’t know the words to say. It says that she never knew that she could ever feel this way and that she only wishes someday that I would feel the same. Tears start to develop in my eyes as I continued reading. I can’t believe she kept the sweetest secret from my heart for so long… I love her…but someone else has her heart now...We hung out all day, it was fun..she also met the other members.
Three days later..
“Acchan, are you ready for our three way date?” “Erm I guess so.. Where are we going?” “To the beach! It’s Tomomi’s idea” she said smirking. “Grr..I bet she just want to show off her body to Minami” Acchan dazed in her thoughts. “Let’s go Acchan!” They arrived to the beach in the afternoon... Tomochin begins stripping into her bikini right in front of Takamina.. “Wow..look at her,she’s a bombshell isn’t she?” Takamina asked nudging the ace.. The ace didn’t reply back but walked away mad. “Eh? What’s wrong with her?..” the captain thought. All day they lay in the sun, swam, and made sand castles. They also had drinks since they all just turned 20. Takamina was the only one who couldn’t handle a little alcohol and started wobbling. It was clear that she was drunk. She began flirting with Tomochin a lot. “Give me a kiss TO-MO-MI..” She said slowly. “No..” Tomochin said shyly turning around blushing. “Aww, come on just one.” she closes her eyes and puckered out her lips.” Acchan was really pissed so she slapped Takamina. “Itaaii, What was that for?” “You’re drunk, go home! “ Acchan yelled. Basically the ace slapped her out of her trance. Her head begins to hurt again.. “Ah not again.” Flashback; ( Someone is screaming "ECCHI!!!!” and slapped her)
TBC...
Yay! she's slowing remembering every heart felt moment with Acchan :nervous :nervous
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:w00t: she started to regain her memories!!!!! :cow: Taka!!! please remember!!!! :mon blowhorn:
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hahaha i knew you'd be happy flean!!! :ptam-ok: :onionshower:
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Takamina never could forget Atsuko(http://i1110.photobucket.com/albums/h456/kiniki902/yoko/149.gif)
Thanks so much for update(http://i1110.photobucket.com/albums/h456/kiniki902/yoko/209.gif)
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Oh!! :w00t: Takamina starting to remember her moments with Acchan!!!
I was a bit shocked when Acchan slapped Takamina :shocked well.. she's jealous!!! XD
Takamina being flirty :lol:
Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
Hope you would update soon :bow: :bow:
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I want my Takacchan together but I'm feeling bad for Tomochin
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jajj takamina drunk is hilarious..
Im really feel respect for tomomi because until now she is not take advange about takamina... shes is really a good person
Acchan you need to be more fast come on go and kiss takamina!! like a boss!! jaja ok dont do that maybe you will scare her :D
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:w00t: Drunk Takamina is being flirty XD
:) Takamina starting to regain her memory with Acchan :D
sigh* :smhid Takamina telling Acchan how nice Tomochin's body is... She's so... air headed?? :?
Thank You for the Update :thumbsup It was :twothumbs
Please Update Soon :bow:
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Part 18
After that incident, Takamina tried calling Acchan several times to apologize for the way she had acted. Acchan ignored her…every call went to voicemail. “Please leave a message after the tone. *Beeeeeeeeep*” was all she heard repeatedly, so she decide to leave a message. “Acchan,please pick up..you can’t avoid me forever..we have practice together tomorrow. I don’t know why you’re upset but I hope we can talk about it.” *clicks and hang up*
Next day @ Practice
Takamina spotted Acchan in the studio... “Acchan! Hey, Acchan!” she called out. The ace started to walk away faster, ignoring the captain presence… “Hey, wait up” she pulled one side of the aces shoulder. “Why are you so mad at me?” There was a long silence between the two..”Are you serious? You’re not going to answer me?”Takamina asked. Finally minutes have passed..”Gomen ne..I think it’s best if we don’t speak at all.” The ace stated. Somehow those words upset the captain’s feelings. “But…why?..I thought we are friends.” “Please just respect my decisions, okay? Thanks bye.” After practice was finished. The ace took a cab to go home. “Taxi, can you please take me to this address?” Takamina really wanted to know what was bothering the ace so she trailed her from behind in another cab. “Please follow that cab sir.”
In Atsuko’s cab
“Aren’t you that famous Maeda Atsuko girl from Akb48?” the cab driver asked while smirking. “Yeah, it’s me” Something was strange about the way the cab driver looked at her. “I’m a very big fan of yours.” “Owh really? Thanks.” She replied. “Um sorry sir but I think you’re going the wrong way.”she added. “Don’t worry I’m just taking a short cut, it’s faster this way.” He said with an untrusting look. “Owh okay” Suddenly the car stops at an abandoned warehouse… what she didn’t know about him is that he’s a stalker, he knew that Acchan takes this cab route home all the time. “Excuse me but why are we stopping here?” “Maeda I’ve been watching you for a while now…you’re so scrumptious looking!" He licked his lip. "Today you will finally be mine.” he said holding a baseball bat taunting her. Acchan was really frightened; he tied her up and left her in the warehouse, while he makes a phone call outside. Meanwhile Takamina seen that the other cab had stop at a weird location..”Okay, sir you can let me off right here.” “That will be $12.57” She handed him a $20. “Keep the change sir.” “Thanks cutie, I’m off now...Bye.” he said. “What the hell?? Where’s Acchan?” She thought. She was suspicious so she text Tomochin. In the text message: “4848 shibuya st. bring the cops with you. “ Takamina snuck into the warehouse... the creepy stalker guy didn’t pay any attention while arguing on the phone. The captain seen that Acchan was tied up with a sock in her mouth. “Acchan! Are you okay!?” she asked as she untied her and took the sock out of her mouth. “Thank god, how did you know I was here?” the ace asked in relief. “I followed you here.” “Becareful that guy out there is very dangerous.” The ace stated. Both girls begin to sneak out quietly but Takamina stepped on a branch on the ground by accident causing a loud crunch. He then faces their direction. “Hey !!!!! come back here you little B*tches!” he screamed and began chasing them as they ran. He finally caught up to them..he was really angry so he swung the bat at Acchan. Before it reached her, Takamina used her body as a shield. He smacked the steel bat right into her skull, causing blood to drip from her head. “Noo!!! Minami!! Stop please.. just stop hitting her,I’ll do whatever you want!” the ace begged and cried. Takamina mind went blank for a second as random flash backs of memories with Acchan struck her. Before he can hit her again,someone pulled the bat back from his hand. “Stop right there!!!! You are under arrest for kidnapping and attempted murder.” The cop pointed the gun at him.. forcefully arresting the criminal.. “Minami!! why did you do that for!? It should’ve been me…I’m so sorry, why do I always bring so much trouble around you?.. I swear I won’t be mad at you anymore If you just hang on longer…” The ace wept. Takamina tried to speak... She can barely say anything but managed to say: “Atsuko.. I’d risk my own life just for your safety, you mean everything to me...” Takamina said as she fainted. “Atsuko?...did she just called me Atsuko?” By hearing the name Atsuko, she knew that Takamina remembers everything now. The impact on her head caused her full memory to come back. Takamina was once again rushed to the hospital in an ambulance.
TBC…
my poor takamini :( :ptam-hbk: ok bye bye thanks for reading people! I appreciate the comments hehe!
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Yea!! Update!!! :peace:
Takamina memory finally come back!!!! :w00t:
:( ... Takamina was rush to the hospital again.. :cry:
Hope everything will be alright..
Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
Please Update Soon :bow:
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HOORAY!!!!!!!!! An Update~~~ :thumbsup
Thank you so much for Updating this :)
I've been wanting to know what happen next XD
Yea!! Yea!! Takamina finally remember Atsuko.. although a bit hurt... :nervous
:( Poor Takamina... she was rushed to the hospital again.... :panic:
Hopefully everything will be alright in the end XD
Thanks again for the update!!! Please do update soon because I want to know what happen to Minami.. :(
Really curious here XD :bow: :bow:
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Minami begin to regain her memory back... But was rush to the hospital.. please continue... want to know what happened next....
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cool.. old minami is back.. now make happy to your wifey..
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why!!!! why!!! taka... please be okay~~~ :bleed eyes:
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Enjoy.. :P
Part 19
The captain had woken up …first thing on her mind was her precious Acchan. “Atsuko? ... where are you?..” She woke up rubbing her sleepy eyes. The ace blushed knowing that the captain was calling out for her.. “I’m right here beside you Minami.” The ace stated as she start grasping the captain’s hand. The captain responded with a forced weak smile. “Seems like this is my favorite place to be huh?.” the captain jokingly said. “Minami.. please don’t ever scare me like that again. If I lose you, I wouldn’t know what to do anymore..” “Don’t worry, I’ll be okay..” “ And I’m so sorry about the misunderstanding from before. I should of known bet--” “Shh…you don’t have to explain anything to me Atsuko… I heard everything that you’ve said to me when I was in a coma, I just couldn’t respond in that deep sleep.” “..so you know how I feel about you then?” Acchan asked shyly... “Hai..Come closer Atsuko..” Takamina insisted. The ace begins to move closer... now both their eyes met. Acchan got lost in her glistening brown eyes. Staring at each other..Takamina spoke first. “I love you Atsuko.” “I lo—“Before the ace can say “I love you” back. Takamina already clutched Acchan’s head from behind pulling her in for a kiss. The kiss started out slow and very passionate. As the ace responded to it.. the kiss got even more intense..they were beginning to fight for dominance..at one point they had broken it gasping for some air but continued kissing afterwards. Things were beginning to heat up as the ace changes her position..she is now on top of the small captain… there was no stopping them at this rate. Acchan’s heart began to race faster against Takamina’s chest as she transfers her puni hands towards the aces lower frame.
The ace was really anxious to remove the captains garment.. Things were getting hotter and heavier.. then there was a loud thud..they had stopped because of it. (When Acchan started moving quicker, she accidentally made Takamina’s head hit the head board.) “Ittaii..my head..” Takamina laughed. “Minami..are you okay?..are you hurt?!? I’m so sorry!!!” “HAHAHAHA Atsuko,you’re so clumsy!” “Mou..Minami don’t make fun of me..I ruined the moment didn’t I?” She pouted.. “Aww..don’t pout ..or your face will get stuck like that” Takamina teased. “I’m glad we stopped though…I don’t want my first time to be in a hospital.. It’s Kowaiiiiiii” Acchan said in a serious tone. “Yeah let’s not rush into it,I don’t know what I was thinking..” Takamina added. *Knock knock* Acchan quickly jumped off of Takamina’s bed. “Minami!! You’re awake!” Tomochin came in with a huge smile. “Acchan your hair is a mess..what happened?” Tomochin added “Ermm..errmm..i woke up on the wrong side of the bed today I think.” Takamina couldn’t help but giggle at her excuse. “Hi Tomomi!” the captain said with high energy. “You sure sound like you’re feeling well today..are you excited to see me!? hehe.” Tomochin exclaimed “Mouu…she’s so full of herself!! Minami is only thinking of me..not you!!” the ace scream in her head. “Haha sure that too…but actually I’m happy because I finally got a girlfriend.” “Girlfriend?!? Who said that I was your girlfriend?” Acchan said sticking out her tongue. “EH!!! If you don’t want to be my girlfriend..I’ll ask Tomomi to be then!” Acchan began to show her angry face.. “Uh oh..I’m scared now..I’m just kidding!! Please don’t kill me Honey.” She smiled at Acchan. “Oh..I see..” Tomochin said sounding disappointed. “Well I just wanted to come in and say hi..i’ll be on my way now..see you guys at practice!” Tomochin was happy for Takamina although disappointed in a way. “As long as she’s happy..that’s all that matters.. Best of luck to you two” Tomochin thought in her head while walking away..
“Attttttt—su—koo----! Please don’t be mad at me..I was just kidding” “You just don’t when to stop do you!?” Acchan poked her pointing finger at her lovers torso multiple times.. “Ittaii.. hehe..Don’t worry! From now on it will be Everyday Acchan.” Hearing those words the ace cheeks start to turn tomato red. “Eh..don’t be so corny..will ya?! The ace replied. “EEEEEH! The things I get for trying to be sweet..haha.. Ne Atsuko..When I get discharged..let’s go on a real date..just the two of us…Ne??..” “Uh…… how about NO!” “IYAYA! Don’t make me beg Acchan…you’re such a tsundere!!” “Fine! I’ll agree to go only because you’re in a hurt condition.”
TBC...
LOLOLOL Acchan is so mean to her lover but thats how she shows her affection. :nya: :on woohoo: :on cigar:
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uwaaaa~~~ :nya: what a lovely couple~~ I'm so happy~~ Go Go AtsuMina~~ :on woohoo:
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lolz~ XD
i thought Takamina is weak :shocked ...this call power of love, doesn't it? :lol: :smhid
Acchan is so mean. hahaha. :grin:
so good that they're together now. :heart: my Atsumina!!!!! :cow: XD (fangirling~)
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They're finally get to be together (Acchan and Takamina)... happy ending for them...
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Yes!!! They are finally together!!! Acchan and Takamina :wub: :inlove:
Haha.. Acchan what a tsundere XD
Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
Hope you update soon XD
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Yea! Taka and Acchan finally together!!! :twothumbs
Although I pity Tomochin.. but that's for the best :)
Acchan is such a tsundere :wub:
Thanks for the Update :peace:
Please Update Soon :bow:
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When I read "that" part I was wondering "hey, aren't they in the hospital and Takamina has just woken up XD?" Luckily you stopped the scene in time or else Tomochin might have stepped in and saw and she would go :nervous
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yeah the kiss scene was the best part.. jajaj poor takaboy you need to be happy your wifey demands..
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FINALLY!!!!!! The are together!!!! Hehe hormones ^^
Poor Tomochin T_T but Chiyuu is here
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Part 20
Takamina was discharged from the hospital a week later after being fully healed. “Minami… Where are we going at this time of night?” The ace asks while being blind folded by her girlfriend. “Don’t worry, we’re almost there.” Takamina chuckled. “Grrr… this better be good! How much longer is this walk going to be?! My legs are about to fall off!” “Just a bit more, hang on a little longer honey.” “Is this what you call a date? It’s 10 o’clock at night.. I’m tired.” the ace pouted. “Okay, we’re here” Takamina unfolded the blind off of Acchan’s eyes. “Now, open your eyes.”
“Wowwwwww…Suggoiii ne!” the ace shouted. As she opens her eyes, she realized she was on top of a cliff where she can see the whole city view light up at night, in Tokyo. “How did you manage find this place Minami?” The ace clings onto the captain tightly. “I used to come here all the time when I was little, to get away from my problems... I thought I’d share it with you. Now when I’m angry or frustrated…you’d know where to find Me.” she kisses acchan on the forehead. “I love you Minami” Acchan said with her forhead attached to Takamina’s. “I love you too..but that’s not all, look over there.” She pointed to a spread blanket/sheet on the ground with a basket full of goodies. “Oh my god Minami, it’s amazing.”
“Come on… lets go sit down” Takamina suggested. “I brought your favorite food.“ “Kyaaaa, you’re so sweet. No one else knows me like you do.” The ace said.. who couldn’t stop smiling. “So are you having a good time so far? See it wasn’t that bad was it?” “Hai, I guess it made up for the long walk.” the ace mumbles while chewing with her mouth full. “You look really cute tonight Atsuko..even when you’re eating.”“Mouu...Minami don’t tease me..” she stopped chewing her food.
“Marry me.” Takamina suddenly said out of the blues… Acchan was shock,she thought she heard wrong so she stared while giving a blank expression. There was a moment of silence between the two lovers. “Ah..Itt-itaaiii..” Takamina scream while holding onto her own chest… “What’s wrong!?” the ace panicked. “Are you okay Minami!?" “I’m going to die.” the captain replied. “Die? what do you mean die?” Acchan asked ,still panicking like crazy. Takamina finally finishes her sentence. “I’m going to die if you don’t marry me.” She says pulling out a ring. “Does this ring look familiar to you Atsuko?” “Oh my god, is that?” “Yes it is…” “The ring that I wanted from New York!? But how’d you know? Only Miichan knew…” “Well remember how you made fun of me, saying that I was stalking you that day?..actually I was.” Takamina chuckled. Acchan was blushing like there’s no tomorrow. “Yes, I’ll marry you Takahashi Minami.” Their lips met..embracing one another. “Your kiss never fails to send chills going down my spine Minami” “What? Did the tsundere princess just finally say something sweet?” Takamina teased. “Don’t get so used it!” Acchan said jokingly. They both sat there staring out into the city. Acchan who is sitting between the captain’s legs fell soundly asleep in Takamina’s arm.
Tbc...
PS. Sorry this part is a little short and boring but oh my god...writing this i think i just developed Diabetes. Too much sweet in this one hahahah. :wub:
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“Marry me.” Takamina suddenly said out of the blues… Acchan was shock,she thought she heard wrong so she stared while giving a blank expression.
Yes!! I had the same expression as Acchan before I went.. waaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!! :ptam-glow: Taka proposed!!! :ptam-shy:
I'm so in the good mood right now~~~ :gmon twirl: weeee~~~ I need AtsuMina wedding~~ :gmon flowers:
This chapter really dangerous for me~~ Diabetes~~ :gmon no: But I love it!!!! :gmon hot:
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She proposed!!! Oh fuck yeah!!!
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yea takaboy like a man propose your wifey.. jaja but be careful mayba sexadicchan want to star with the honeymoon :D
so sweet chapter i like it
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kyaaa !! :gmon flowers: :gmon flowers: Taka u're the man! Finally you proposed her! So sweeeet :gmon heartu:
eh?? Still TBC??
I need the next chapter!! Write it nau~ :mon cheek:
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Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~
Takamina already proposed :ptam-glow: :ptam-glow: :ptam-glow:
I need the next chapter..
YOU MUST UPDATE IT NOW... UPDATE NOW... UPDATE NOW... UPDATE NOW!!! :on voodoo: :on voodoo:
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Part 21
Next day @ Practice.
“Acchan... Why are you smiling so much today? Did something happen between you two?” Yuko teased moving her eyebrows up and down, perverted like. The aces face begins to flush in red as she remembers her unforgettable date last night. “Hey! It’s not like that at all!!” The captain yells flailing her arms around. Yuko stood there dazed and drooling as her imagination runs wild. Haruna then pulled one side of the squirrel’s ear snapping her out of her trance. “Sometimes I feel like I should put you in a cage and lock you up.” Haruna says to her girlfriend. “Ittai..itai! Gomen ne, Nyan Nyan. Please let go, I promise I’ll stop.” Yuko begged. “Get your mind out the gutter, you ecchi!” Takamina added shouting as her cheeks partially turned rosy due to embarrassment. “Not yet Yuko, but pretty soon and hopefully it’ll be something worth waiting for.” Acchan said chuckling joining in on the fun.
“HHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH?” Takamina shrieked standing there stunned and dumbfounded with her eyes widened. “I’m just kidding Minami.” She chuckled again kissing her lover on the cheek. “Whew!” Takamina shouted in relief wiping the sweat off her forehead. “Takamina is someone who believes in sex after marriage.” Acchan stated while stretching her arm slowly trying to show off her ring. “Is that an engagement ring!? ” Haruna exclaimed! “the ring is GORGEOUS!” she says while giving Yuko a death glare. “Nyan Nyan! Don’t worry I’ll get you one when we graduate.” She says running off hiding behind Takamina. “But how are you guys going to get married if it’s impossible, especially when you’re in AKB?” Yuko questioned. “Eh..I never thought about that” Acchan pouted scratching the back of her head. Takamina already had a plan in mind.” Don’t worry Acchan, we will get married somehow or some way even if it takes forever!” she said reassuring her lover. Acchan’s pout instantly turned into a smile. “I love you My Minami” she said hugging the short captain from behind. “Maeda, Aki-p wants you to go up to his office for a personal meeting.” his assistance stated fetching the ace. “Hai.” She answered following the assistant up to the office. “Wait for me after..and let’s go home together?” she whispered to the captain before walking away. “Okay.” Takamina replied with a blush.
After the meeting was over, acchan made her way down the stairs in a hurry. Almost running past the doors and out of the building she stopped only to spot her adorable chibi girlfriend sound asleep next to a plant outside. From seeing such an angelic sight, the ace smiled. “Minami…” she murmurs. There was no response from the captain. The ace got close enough to where she can lean in for a kiss on the lips. Takamina was awoken by it..she opened her eyes slowly smiling. “Are you trying to take advantage of me while I’m sleeping pervert!” The captain teased. “Why yes I was, just kidding” The ace chuckled. “Minami, I’m sorry that I made you wait for so long.” “Don’t worry it’s only 4 o’clock.” Takamina replied. “Let me make it up to you. Katsudon is on me.”Acchan offered. “Okay!!!!!” Takamina answered quickly and excitedly to her favorite food. After Lunch, the two roamed around the downtown shopping strip hand in hand. “Ahhhhhhh! Atsumina!!!!” Three random girls screamed in unison running to ask for their autograph. Takamina immediately let go of her hand.
“Atsumina?” Takamina questioned. “Oh..Atsumina is Atsuko and your name combined.” One of the girls answered. “Eh..is that how you see our image?” Acchan giggled. “Yeah, you guys make such a cute couple! Too bad it will probably ruin your reputation if you guys we’re really dating!” the other girl added. “But I would be okay with it.” The girl smiled. Takamina’s beaming smile soon disappears after hearing that they both can lose fans due to their relationship. “Bye girls, thanks for the autographs.” The three girls walked away fangirling. As soon as they left, the ace reached out her hands to meet Takamina’s hand but she pulled away. “Atsuko let’s not hold hands in public.” “But why??? I want to.” Acchan whined. “Please just listen to me.” Takamina said in a serious tone. “I don’t care what other people think of us!” Acchan exclaimed. “Acchan, please just listen…you just recently got really popular, I don’t want you to lose fans over this…and Aki-p just asked you to star in another drama. If this gets out, you will lose everything you’ve worked hard for and I know how badly you want to become an actress.” “I don’t care! I will give up everything just for you.” Acchan replied still being stubborn. “What about my dreams, Atsuko?” Finallly understanding the situation, the ace walked in silent not saying a word. “Sighs… I hate seeing you like this.” Takamina said grabbing the ace by the hand. “Let’s go home.” A smile reappears on the aces face.
TBC…
Will they able to keep the relationship a secret anymore? To find out... Stay tunedddddddd. :rofl:
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Yay! Update! XD
Oh, Takamina worried about their reputation. She's so thoughtful. I wonder what will happen next? Thank you.
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I need an AtsuMina marriage!!!!! :frustrated: Update soon!!!!!!! :kneelbow:
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omg omg omg atsumina T_T now you are inte real world, in that world there is a person who dont uderstand the "love" word and doesn`t matter the gender.. fight for you wifey atsuko...
sexadicchan make happy you wifey like a boss
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I'm staying tuned all the time just to wait for your next update..... :p
Please update soon
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So cute, they talk about marriage~
What will happen at home? Hehe
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OMG!! Engagement Ring!!! :w00t:
Way to go Takamina!! :thumbup
Takamina as usual is really thoughtful~~ :wub:
Can't wait to read more about this :twothumbs
I agree with Flean I also want an Atsumina marriage!!! :wub:
Somehow I'm sensing something bad coming up... :smhid
Dramatic moments?? :?
Thanks for the Update :thumbup :thumbup
Please Update Soon~ :mon cute:
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What??!! An update??!! How come I didn't know?? :w00t:
Thank you for the update :kneelbow:
Yea~ Acchan and Minami~ so lovey dovey :wub:
This chapter is so great and sweet :inlove:
Need the next chapter ;)
Please update soon :thumbsup
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Part 22
“Can you please spend a night? Pretty please with a cherry on top!” the ace begged her girlfriend while holding onto her back with her chin on her shoulders. “Well, Okay.. But only because you rarely call me pretty.” Takamina starts to batter her eyelash. “Ew, don’t do that.. it’s not cute” Acchan laughed. “Hey!! You only want to be sweet when you want something huh? Fine then, you’re sleeping alone tonight!” “No! noooo! I was just kidding, please stay!” the ace stomps her feet and whine. “Aww you’re so cute when you act like a child” Takamina patted her girlfriends head. “I’ll stay in one condition” “what is it?” “If you promise to love me forever.” Takamina grins. “Of course I will.” Acchan replies trying to hide her blushing face by turning away. As soon as they walk through the door, the aces parents greeted them. “Ohayo,Takamina-san.” “Hello, Mr. and Mrs. Maeda” she greeted them back. “Oh, please just call us Mom and Dad.” Her father suggested. “M-mo-mom and Dad?” her eyes widened “Yes, why not? You’re just like a daughter to us now.” They smile reluctantly, not knowing that their daughter is in a forbidden relationship. Acchan was happy to hear such comments, but Takamina on the other hand was nervous. “Well it’s getting late; we should go to bed now. Good night mom, good night dad!” Acchan snatches Takamina’s hand and dashes up the stairs trying to avoid the awkward moment. “That was scary..for a second I thought they knew about us.” “Yeah it was, well we have a big day tomorrow so we should get some rest.” “Uhn…”
While lying in bed, Takamina lied on Acchan’s chest using it as a pillow rest. Just when she was about to fall peacefully asleep, Acchan opens her mouth. “Ne, Minami..” “Hmm?” she answered tiredly. “I’m scared. Do you think the world will ever accept us?” After hearing that question, Takamina got up and looked into her eyes. “I don’t know. But as long as I’m with you, nothing else matters.” She holds onto her hands. Acchan’s worry instantly went away just by hearing those few words. “I love you Minami.” “Uhn..” The captain answers. “Aren’t you going to say it back?” Acchan pouted. “Even If I say I love you a thousand times, it would never be enough.” Takamina gently remove Acchan’s bangs out of the way and kisses her girlfriend on the forehead. “I’m glad I have you in my life.” Acchan smiled.”Ehh one more question before you sleep though.” “Hmm?” “Who is going to be our bridesmaid?” “How about I pick two and you pick two.” Takamina suggested. “Okay then I choose Miichan and Mariko.” “Eh, why Miichan?” “Why not?” “I just think it would be weird because she used to like you…who know maybe she still does.” “Are you jealous?” Acchan teases. “Of course not! Look who’s in bed with you right now.” Takamina smirks. “So who do you pick?” “Uh.. Haruna and Yuko. By the way I will be the one wearing the dress; I always wanted to know what it feels like.” Takamina snickered. “What!! Not fair..I want to wear the dress!!” “I think a tuxedo suits you more since you’re taller Atsuko.” “But I’m not the guyish one here!”Acchan laughed. “Ha ha funny!” Takamina frowns. “Fine..how about we both wear a dress.” “Okay, but you do know marriage means graduation right?” “I know..there’s nothing in this world I want more than marrying the person I love.” Acchan pokes Takamina’s in the nose. Takamina blushes. “Now I can sleep well tonight.” :)
Next morning the alarm went off. Takamina wakes up; she stretches her arms out accidentally punching her girlfriend in the face. “Ah gomen gomen, I didn’t mean to hit you in the face.” She rubs Acchan’s face making sure it feels better. “Eh..this person. I hit her face and she still didn’t even wake up.” Takamina thought. “What a heavy sleeper, she sleeps just like a dead person hahahaha.” Takamina stares at her sleeping beauty, she couldn’t help but smile. She wondered what the ace is dreaming about since there was a smile across her sleeping face.” Takamina smiled and moved closer to hear her breathe. “I don’t want this moment to ever end.” she thought. “HOLY our concert practice is today, I got to wake her up now but how…” Suddenly a light bulb appears on top of her head. Takamina begins kissing her girlfriend everywhere in the face. *peck,peck,peck,peck,peck* “I’m up, I’m up” she shouted and giggled. “Is this how you’re going to wake me up every time Minami?” “Mhmm!” “Oh god I should escape now before I get stuck with you.” The ace joked. “Be quiet!” she tickles her girlfriend ( playing and rolling all over the bed). “Stop!” Acchan yells in ticklish pain. “Acchan! Takamina-san! Breakfast is ready” her father shouted. Thinking they didn’t hear him, he walked up the stairs and heard giggling. The door was a little crept open, as he looks inside, he seen something he should not have seen.“Stop! Hahha please stop” “I’ll stop if you give me a kiss” Takamina demanded. Acchan blushes. “Fine! There!” She kisses Takamina really fast. “That’s it? I want a longer one.” She smirks. “Okay.” Takamina let loose and Acchan took the chance to push her off and runs into the bathroom. Catch me if you can!” She sticks out her tongue.
TBC…
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You update. Thank you.
Lovely moment for Atsumina
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OMG!!! OMG!! OMG!!!!!!!!!! What's gonna happen??? :mon scare: Acchan's papa shouldn't have seen that!!!! :tantrum: or should he?? :dunno:
I need another update!!! argh!!!!!! :mon XD: I hope nothing bad happen!!!! :mon prayer:
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omg papa see them :O....
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Yea!! Thank you so much for the Update XD I've been waiting for this :D
Takamina and Acchan :wub:
But.. OMG!! Papa saw them!!! :shocked
Oh No!! I hope Acchan papa would accept them.. I'm worried :panic:
Please Update Soon :kneelbow:
I want to know what happen next :mon cute:
Thanks again :thumbup :thumbup
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Oh oh it's bad for them
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Part 23
After getting ready, the two girls went downstairs all jolly, for breakfast. Entering the kitchen they can sense a strange aura in the kitchen room. Her father’s facial expression wasn’t as pleasant as usual. Somewhat he was giving off a glare and her mother gave the look of sympathy. Acchan didn’t think anything of it. She thought maybe they got into an argument again, so it’s not like it’s anything new. Silence filled the air as they ate. Finally her father broke off the silence. “So... What are you guys up to today?” he asks in a serious tone. “P-p-practice.” Takamina stuttered. “Really?” He asked as if he didn’t believe a word she said. “Uhn..” the captain gave him a short and simple reply. “Dad, we have a big concert coming up this following week, will you guys be able to make it?” Acchan implied trying to get her dad to change his attitude. “That’s great; I assure you that we’ll be there to support you girls.” Her mom answered for him. “By the way a friend of mine is coming over today; make sure you make it home for dinner Acchan.” Her father stated. “Okay, well I got to get going now. See you later.” She hugs and kisses her parents on the cheek. Just as Takamina was about to leave too, he asked her to stay behind. Acchan didn’t know anything about it; she left in her own cab because she had a different project to go do before practice. “Do you love her?” he asked straight forwardly. ”Who?” she asked confused. “You mean Acc—“ Before she could answer any further. He cuts her off. “Don’t play stupid. I know you and Acchan are seeing each other, I seen it with my own eyes.” “Oh.” She answered dumb founded due to how shock she was, that he knew. “I’m so sorry.” She answered again. “Don’t be sorry, I’m the one who should be sorry for giving birth to a stupid nasty Lesbian.” “Please don’t say that sir.. You can say she made a disappointing lifestyle decision but Acchan’s nothing near stupid and way far from nasty.” “And you..you probably influenced her this way..you must of put some kind of spell on her!” he shouted “I didn’t! I truly love her and she loves me too!” she retorted back. “I forbid you to see her anymore!!! Either you graduate and stay away from her or I will disown her as a daughter. And you know well we’re the only family she has! You wouldn’t want us to do that to her do you!?” “Please calm down honey.” Acchan’s mother said to her husband. “I’m so sorry Takamina, he’s just not taking it well right now.” she added. “Don’t say sorry to her!” he yelled. Takamina stood there with tears swelling in her eyes..She didn’t want the love her life to lose family over her..Honestly she didn’t know what to do. She can’t live without Acchan. “I want our daughter to live a normal life! Have kids and do what an ordinary couple should do. I’m going to set her up with my friends son whether you like it or not..so please don’t interfere!” “I won’t” she answered trying to catch a breath from crying.. “I promise I’ll stay away from her and announce my graduation the day of the concert.” “Good! Now get out of my sight! ” he snapped.
Takamina ran crying her eyes out; she wondered why and how people can be so cruel towards lesbianism. Instead of practice, she ends up going home. *Ring ring* “Moshi moshi Takamina” “Aki-P, I’m sick today..I can’t come in.” she pretended to be. “Oh okay I will let everyone know.” During practice, everyone was shocked that the captain is missing a day of practice (excluding all her incidents) especially with a big concert coming up. Acchan just came into practice, right away she started searching for her girlfriend. “ Hey Miichan, where’s Takamina?” “I hear that she’s sick and not coming in.” “That’s weird, she was fine this morning.” Acchan says worrily. “Ohh did you guys have a sleep over without me?” she chuckled. The ace shyly turns away.. “Miichan! But we’re a couple now.” “I know, I was just joking.” She smiles sheepishly. “Don’t you think it’s weird though?” Miichan questioned. “What’s weird?” “That Takamina misses a big practice over being sick?” “Yeah it is strange..usually when she’s sick she still comes to practice anyway.” “Yep that’s what makes her our mighty captain.” “Well I’ll be right back; I’m going to make a phone call to her.” “Okay, tell her to get well soon from me.” “Hai I will.” The ace pulls out her cell phone and made the phone call but the call kept going to voicemail. “I guess I’ll stop by after practice to make sure she’s okay..but oh yeah that’s right, dinner.. I’ll call again later instead.” Takamina blankly stares at the missed calls on her cell phone… She couldn’t help but cry seeing that Acchan’s picture keeps popping up on the screen. Finally she decides to call her back, Acchan was busy practicing so she didn’t pick up. Takamina then decided to leave a message. “Acchan..this is really hard for me..but I don’t think we should see each other anymore.” She said coldly, without any explanations.
After practice, the ace didn’t have time to check her phone…she went straight home, not wanting to be late for dinner. The whole time she thought about her lover, when she reached for her phone to call her girlfriend at the doorstep…she remembered that she left it in the locker room. “Darn! They probably locked the doors by now. I really want to talk to her… But I can’t leave right now either; guests are over for dinner tonight. Hopefully I’ll see her tomorrow at practice.” She thought. “Acchan! You’re here! Come put you stuff down and come have a seat.” Her father said happily. Acchan thought it was weird how earlier this morning he seemed angry but now he’s all joyful. “I want you to meet someone…this is Mr. Sano and his son Izumi.” “Hello.” She bowed to the both of them. “Do you remember who he is Acchan?” “I don’t recall.” “Remember the arranged marriage? Well this is who you we’re supposed to get married to.” “I see..” she gives an uninterested short reply to it. “After you graduate from Akb, whenever that is..I still want you two to get married. So for now I want you to get to know one another.” ”WHAT!?” Acchan screams. “We made a deal dad!” “I know but this is what’s best for you.” “NO! I will not agree to this” She shouted again in front of everyone and ran up the stairs locking herself in her own room while sobbing. At this moment Acchan couldn’t think about anything else besides Minami. How badly she wanted to talk to her and how badly she needs to feel her touch. “Acchan!” her father called out. “Just leave her be.” Mr. Sano said. “I’m very sorry about this.” her mother apologized on behalf of her daughters’ behavior. “It’s fine, let’s not rush her into something she doesn’t want to do.” Mr.Sano suggested. “But..” “No buts..It’s final, call the arrangement off again. We will be going now. “No hard feelings then?” “None taken.” They both let themselves out. “How dare she embarrasses me in front of these people!?” Mr. Maeda yelled furiously throughout the house. “I had this plan all set for her and she goes and ruin it!” ”Honey, it’s fine..calm down. ”
TBC…
Don't kill me :nervous it wouldn't be fun if there's no drama :grin:
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aww i dont know if hate or love you because its a interesting fic... we know that most of the people dont know about love.. that doesn`t matter the gender.. but stupid people thinks that it is...
I like that this fic is realistic in that case... but i know that atsumina gonna to fight for their love..
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Thanks for the update :)
But this chapter is so.. sad.. :cry:
Acchan papa is so cruel.. :banghead:
He should let Acchan decide who she want to be with herself!! :angry:
I feel bad for Takamina... is she really going to graduate?? Pls say NO!! :(
Thanks again for the update XD
Please update soon :mon cute:
I really want to know what happen next, I cant stop thinking about it.. :kneelbow:
Thank you :)
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owh!!! update!!! I'll read later after class...
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Argh!!!!!! what have you done to my AtsuMina!!!!!! :frustrated: Oh God!!! Taka!!! no graduation!!!! :OMG:
Drama!!! I don't know if I hate it or like it!!! :temper: I'm depressed!!! :gyaaah: I should make more drama then!!! :on yellcard:
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Don't worry it's not you who I want to kill right but Acchan's father! That *bip* of *bip* *bip*!!!! Argggg!!!
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I really love your stories and I hope you could update soon! I'm soo anxious to see what'll happen. D:
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Urrg! What's wrong with Acchan's father? I've thought he might a nice guy! Unbelief that he was so cruel with too much negative! Nice fic ,anw! XD
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Thanks for reading guys! :grin:
Part 24
Next day @ Practice
“Has anyone seen Minami today?” Acchan went around asking. “She called in sick again I think.” Miichan answered. Soon as the ace heard that, she was worried sick about her girlfriend. “This is not like her at all..” she thought. Acchan ran to the locker room to find her cell phone. On the screen, there is one missed call and a voice mail message. Acchan hurriedly checked it; she somehow knew it was from the captain herself. After she listened to it, she froze and tears formed in her eyes as she heard those painful words “let’s break up.” Too speechless by it she dropped the phone out of her hands and onto the ground. “Tell me this isn’t true. Minami please tell me you’re joking.” she started mumbling to herself with aching in her voice. Her face was expressionless, just like she lost someone dearly. ”No I won’t believe it until you say it to my face.” She packed up her belonging and rushed out of practice.
Finally reaching her destination, Acchan knocked on the door repeatedly but no one answers. “Let me in! I know you’re in there Minami...Please let me in!” She shouted from outside. (Takamina parents are out of town, and only Takamina was home.) From the bedroom window, Takamina begins to feel guilty and hurt watching as the person she loves begged and cried. “It’s for the best.” Takamina muttered to herself. Two hours has passed Acchan is still there crying, desperate to see her. “Please don’t do this to me.” she pled. “Tell me why you want us to break up! Please...I want to know the reason why!” She kept on being persistence, knocking and knocking until she ran out of energy. The ace was at the point where she was about to faint. Suddenly it started raining and pouring out really badly. In the rain, Acchan got down on both knees and kneeled down. “I won’t leave until you come out!” She cries out. Takamina couldn’t stand to see the view so she turns away. Unexpectedly the ace loses her consciousness and fall to the ground. Takamina turns to look at her again, and seen that she was lying the ground with her eyes shut. Very panicked, she quickly run down the stairs and carried the ace back inside, fast as she could. “Acchan, I’m sorry.” She cried softly. Takamina undresses her, dried her up and put her into bed. Although she had seen this image before, Takamina face begins to turn bright pink. She stares at her lovingly and brushed her cheeks. “I’m sorry for doing this to you Acchan. But I only want what’s best for you. Your parents are probably worried sick about you. If they knew you were here, they’d probably freak out.” She spoke to the sleeping ace. The captain hastily went out of the room and quietly called Miichan. “Can you please tell Acchan’s parent that she’s staying over your house tonight?” “Why, what happened? “… Erm, It’s nothing.” “Don’t lie to me Takamina…If I’m going to lie for you, you have to tell me the reason why first.” “Alright, fine…but don’t tell anybody this, especially not Acchan. Okay?” “Okay, I promise.” Takamina had told everything to Miichan that night. Miichan felt helpless about the situation. From night until morning Takamina stayed by the aces side at all times and fell asleep beside her.
Next morning, Takamina had woken up earlier than usual and went to practice first. When the ace woke up, she was confused. She didn’t know how she ended up in Takamina’s room and all alone. “What happened last night and where is Minami?” she looked around searching for the captain. Realizing the captain isn’t there; she gotten dress and was on her way to practice. As soon as she got there, she spotted Takamina right away. The captain was standing right beside Tomochin. In the corner of Takamina’s eye, she had seen that the ace was heading her way, so she grabbed onto Tomochin and planted a kiss on the clueless girl. The ace stopped before walking any further. Her chest begins to tighten from the heart breaking sight. At that moment she felt as if her heart just had been shattered into a million pieces. “So this is why…” she said softly to herself, trying to hold back her tears. However she couldn’t hold it in. Her tears streamed down her cheeks as she walked away. “Acchan, what’s wrong?” Miichan looked at her. The ace didn’t reply back and just hugged Miichan crying quietly. Meanwhile… Tomochin pushes Takamina off. “What was that for!? Aren’t you with Acchan?” “I’m sorry, it was an accident. I gotta go!” Takamina rushed out of the building feeling hurt. “I’m sorry Acchan, I have to make you hate me somehow…”
TBC…
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Argh!!!!!!!!!!! :temper: Takamina!! what are you doing!!!! :frustrated:
and the heck!!! why did you kiss Tomo!!!! :on voodoo: OMG!!! I'm depressed!! :fainted:
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i'm sorry flean! :cry:
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EHHH??!! What Happen to AtsuMina!? and WTH?!! Takamina kissed Tomo?!!!! NOOOOO!!! :OMG:
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Arrrgg!!!! No!!!! Stupid father!!!!!!
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:badluck: After all the obstacles and confessing I was so happy
that they finally are together! :onioncheer: Everything is happy and dandy.
But then! :shock:
Tun tun tun Acchans father came and saw everything! :fainted:
More DRAMA! Atsu-Mina breaking up!
More heart breaking for the readers.. :on speedy:
YES! This fic will not going to end yet! :on GJ:
Can't wait for the next update
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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OMG, this is a hurt breaking moment for Atsumina !
Somehow, Takamina is really love Acchan afterall that she willing to give up Acchan just for the sake of Acchan's father.
I hope the ending is a good news to us (readers) who wanting the next chapters soon ^^
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Oh, why?! what?! No! Takamina, you can't kiss Tomochin.
And poor Acchan, too. Waiting in the rain until she lost consciousness. ;____;
I want them back together alreadyyyy.
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takabaka!! why do you kiss tomichin!!! awww my poor acchan... wake up takaboy fight for your wifey!!
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Arigato for your comments everybody! I very much appreciate it. Sometimes I feel like giving up on the story but you guys give me motivation! so thank you for reading! I RABB CHUU ! :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: Here's part 25, enjoy!! sorry for any grammar mistakes!
Part 25
The ace missed two days of practice, locking herself in her bedroom. Ever since that incident, not once did she step out. Flashback of happy memories with Takamina got the best of her at the moment. All she does is cry and cry on her bed, hoping that the pain will go away. The members would try and call her but she wouldn’t respond to anyone. Her mother was really concerned. “Acchan, please come out. You haven’t eaten or drunken anything for the last two days. If you keep this up, you’ll get sick.” her mother tried coaxing her from the other side of the door. Still there was no response from the ace. Her father was also very worried, although he knew it was probably his fault. In the dining room her parents were having a discussion. “Maybe we should just let them be.” Acchan’s mother proposed. “Are you crazy? Two girls shouldn’t be together. That’s just absurd! ” “But they are in love… do you think we have any right to stop them?” “I don’t care! It just isn’t right.” “Doesn’t it kind of remind you of a certain someone?” “What do you mean? ...” her father asked with a confuse look. “Remember when we were young?” “Go on, I’m listening.” “My parents didn’t want us to be together because they thought you we’re a play boy.” She chuckles. “It took some time, but once they got to know the real you…they finally accepted us.” she smirks, nudging at her husband arm. “Yeah, but that’s a different story!” “How is it any different? Love is love...you can’t help who you fall in love with right?” Acchan’s father was left speechless. Finally he didn’t have any remarks to counter with. “Don’t you want our daughter to be happy like us?” she added “Of course I do. Seeing the way she is right now, her happiness is all that matters.” “Okay then, just let them be.” “Souka, I guess you’re right. Now I fully understand.” he agreed while sighing. “Now, go and talk to your daughter.” She shoves him towards the stairs.
Although her father was not the type to admit he’s wrong, for the sake of his daughter happiness, he gathered up the courage to go and talk to her. As he reaches her bedroom door, he hesitates to knock, so he sat himself beside Acchan’s door. “Acchan, please listen to me. I have something really important to tell you.” The ace heard her father’s voice but decides to ignore it and kept weeping. “It’s about Takahashi-san.” As soon as she heard that name, her attention was all there.” She didn’t know why she even wanted to listen about the person who broke her heart but she listened anyway. “I know about you two.” Her eyes inflated in shock. “How does he know?” she thought. “And there’s something else.” He sighs. “The truth is...I wasn’t happy about it at all so the day you left the house first, I threatened her to stay away from you. I even said things I shouldn’t have that hurt her.” “WHAT THE F*CK!” was all that she can think of saying right now but she didn’t. Finally she slammed the door open, her anger took over her sadness in seconds. “You have no right to do that!” She yelled furiously at her father. “You’re right, I don’t… and for that I’m really sorry. Believe me I want to take back everything I said to her.” “Don’t you think it’s a little too late for a sorry? She broke my heart because of you!!! Now I know what driven her to do what she did.” “Acchan, please... forgive me!” he held onto her arm. “I’ll deal with you later but now I have to go find her.” She pushes her father’s arm off and ran. “I’m proud of you." A voice said from a distance. "I’m sure someday she will forgive you, after all you did gave her life.” The aces mother said to her husband. He didn’t reply but just gave a half smile.
The ace ran into practice. “Tomochin! Where’s Minami?!” “I don’t know. She hasn’t been here for two days.” “Oh, okay then. I will go look for her, please call me if you hear from her.” Just when the ace was about to run off again, Tomochin pulls her back. ”Wait! Acchan, I’m sorry about happened two days ago. If it makes you feel any better, the kiss meant nothing at all to me.” She smiles facing Kasai and giving off a blush. “Don’t worry, I understand.” She smiles back at Tomochin. “But don’t forget, the kiss is only a onetime thing.” Acchan winks at her. “Miichan! Do you know where Minami is?” “I haven’t seen her, maybe she’s at home?” “Right!” the ace replies and ran off again. Finally she arrived at Takamina’s house. She knocked on the door several times and her mom answered. “Ohayo Maeda-san, what are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be at practice with Minami for the big concert tomorrow?” “Minami’s not home?” “No..I thought she was at work with you.” “Oh..yeah, that’s right she is.” She lied. So that Takamina’s mother wouldn’t have to worry. Acchan quickly pulls out her cell phone and dialed Haruna. “Nyan Nyan, I can’t find Minami anywhere. You’re her best friend; do you have any idea where she would be?” “Did you check everywhere yet?” “No, not yet but I will.” “Well I’d say go where you think she’ll be when she’s upset or angry.” “Okay, thanks for the tip.” Acchan hangs up and rushed to look everywhere. Even at the ice cream shop where Acchan first apologized to Minami, and at the park bench where they first met. Just everywhere she thought she would be. From going to variety of places, Acchan stops to pant. It's beginning to get frustrating for her. When she called Takamina's cell phone, it was also out of range."Where could she be?" a tear drop falls from her eyes. But then it hit her..
*“Well I’d say go where you think she’ll be when she’s upset or angry.”* What Haruna had said earlier resounded in her head.
TBC…
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Acchan go find your Minami and clear things up. I want both of u be together again. ^^
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Yeah!! Way to go Acchan mama~ XD
Glad to know that Acchan papa is finally going to accept Takamina and Acchan~ :D
I wonder where Takamina went.. :?
But I know Acchan will find her~~ :grin:
Thanks for the Update~ :cathappy:
Please Update Soon :mon cute:
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Im excitced!! that was like a action movie in my head... acchan looking for takamina.. and I add more places jeje
Come acchan you have all my support make your husband happy...
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Owh!!! I'm glad that Acchan's father changed his mind!!!! :hee:
Acchan!! go and find your Minami!!!! I'm happy!!! :farofflook: I bet Minami went to the place where she proposed to Acchan before..LOL.. or maybe not.. :on lol:
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Flean, you!!!! LOL well it's nice to know that you remember stuff from the story!!! :P
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Flean, you!!!! LOL well it's nice to know that you remember stuff from the story!!! :P
I've been following this story from the start.. LOL.. XD and I also do still remember how many times I was depressed because of this fic.. :lol:
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hisashiburi....and da hell Taka kissed Tomo?! :angry:
yey happy daddy changed his mind :yep: thanks to mommy :D
Yeaah Acchan go and find your love! :panic:
and get married soon ooo yeeaaaa :inlove: :inlove:
Thanks for your updates!! Love it :) :peace:
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Run Acchan! RUN!
Waa! I'm glad that you didn't give up...or this fic wouldn't be finished
and we readers would be really sad. Because after all it's a great fic.
Thank you for your update Loveforever-san
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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GYAAHH!! :heart:
Acchans father accepted it :inlove:
:thumbup
please update soon I love your fic :)
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Finally Maedapapa is not that heartless, I'm glad
Tomotomo? :)
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story is coming to an end soon... :(
Part 26
“I used to come here all the time when I was little, to get away from my problems... I thought I’d share it with you. Now when I’m angry or frustrated…you’d know where to find me.”
“That’s right..the cliff!” Acchan hurried to the place where their first date took place. When she reached the top, she saw the captain sitting there staring out into the city… lost in her own world. The ace was relieved to find her safe and sound. “Minami!” The ace yelled out from a distance.” “Ac-c-cchan?” she recognize the voice right away. “What are you doing here? You shouldn’t be here...” “Why can’t I be here, it’s a public place…isn’t it?” Acchan refuted back. “Un..gomen.” “Sorry for what? For kissing Tomochin or for not telling me what happened between you and my father?” The captain was caught off guard by the statement. “How did you…” “He told me everything.” “Yeah, but that doesn’t change a thing.” the captain said in disappointment and looked away. “Yes it does! It changes everything! No one can tell me who to love or who not to love!” “But your father..he doesn’t approve of us.” “Minami, are you not getting the point? There’s a reason why he told me, baka!” “You mean he’s…” “YES!” Acchan yells back with a huge smile on her face. “Acchan...” Before she can say anything else, the ace ran towards the captain, Takamina extended out her arms in response. Acchan jumps into Takamina arms wrapping her legs above the captain’s waist and her arms around her neck. Despite how heavy she is, Takamina managed to carry her. Their foreheads were touching. Lost into each other’s eyes they stared at one another full of happiness. Takamina leaned in for a kiss.. “Na uh uh..” Acchan shook her finger back and forth waving it in front of her lovers face. “What? Why can’t I kiss you?” Takamina pouted. “Did you forget about something?” “Uh..I love you?” “NO! Not that!! You kissed Tomochin!! Remember!!?!?” “Acchan.. You know that kiss meant nothing at all to me...” she whines. “If you ever want to kiss me again…you have to kiss that tree over there 5 times.” The ace chuckled. “But..what if I get a splinter? I won’t be able to kiss anymore.” “Hey, you should of thought of that before you kissed her..humph! “You’re so cute when you’re jealous. You know that? Haha.” Takamina pretends to drop Acchan...and Acchan screams for her life. “Is it just me or you gotten heavier?” Takamina teased. “What!?!? That’s it! You’re kissing the tree 10 times!” “Okay okay I quit!” Takamina laughed.
Takamina sets her girlfriend down and walk towards the tree. “Are you sure about this? You know the concert is tomorrow. I can’t go up there with my lips all cut up, they’ll probably think I have herpes.” She says pouting. “Even better!” the ace snickered. Takamina was 4 inches away from the tree; she closes her eyes and lean in half way and stops.”Acchan, the tree is so dirty with ants on them! Can we just talk about this?” “Nope! Come on, if you hurry up we can get to practice!” Fine...” The captain gave in and leans in all the way. Just before her lips touches the tree. Acchan jumps in front it...their lips met..Takamina was surprised but very pleased. She made the kiss longer and deeper until they needed to gasp for air. “What about the tree?” Takamina asks. “You really want to kiss the tree don’t ya? hahah” “No, no! That’s not what I meant.” “The thought of you kissing that dirty tree just for me is already enough for me.” Acchan blushes. Takamina couldn’t help but stare at how cute her girlfriend was acting. “What are you staring at?! Let’s go to practice! “Yes your highness!” the captain giggles. As they were walking back down the path, Acchan kept whining. ”I’m so tired.” “Here, get on my back. I’ll carry you the rest of the way.” “Really??” Acchan smile lights up. “Anything for my princess.” The ace blushes again at how sweet her girlfriend is to her. ”I’m such a lucky girl.” Takamina piggy backed ride her all the way down the path.. Acchan fell asleep with her face snuggled into Takamina’s neck. ”Kawaii..” the captains murmurs to herself. Takamina didn’t want to wake her up yet so she carried her all the way to the Akb Theater. After all, it wasn’t far from where they were. “Psss..Acchan..wake up. We’re here.” Both girls walked into practice hand in hand.. The members started applauding as they both made their way in..you can hear some saying “kawaiiii..” and others shouting. “Get a room!” Takamina and Acchan blushed as they were clapping, then the captain tries to break the happy atmosphere by yelling “What are you guys clapping for!? Get back to practice, there’s nothing to see here!!” The members just ignored her and laugh.. “Nyan Nyan, can we hold hands too?” Yuko asks her cat like girlfriend. “You don’t have to ask.” she smiles back at her lover and kissed her on the lips in front of everyone. Everyone was shocked, they had no clue that the two were dating. Sure they know Yuko was harassing her all the time but they didn’t know Haruna actually likes it. “Wow, they’re good at hiding things.” Mariko-sama said to Miichan. “Ha, you think they’re good? Well look at us! No one even has a clue!!!” Miichan laughs evilly.
TBC…
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Yea! They're back together finally~~ :wub:
That was so sweet~~ XD
LOL~ No one knew about Mariko and Miichan yet!! They're good at hiding things..!! :twisted:
Thanks for the Update!!! :grin:
Please Update Soon~!!! :mon cute:
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story is coming to an end soon... :(
Woot?! (http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s376/Nakamii_Eririn/GIFs%20Decorations/177.gif) NOOO! Why it end so fast?! I still want to read your Wonderful Stories! (http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s376/Nakamii_Eririn/GIFs%20Decorations/331.gif)
~ Btw, An Update! (http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s376/Nakamii_Eririn/GIFs%20Decorations/o0020002010583043259.gif) I Love it! My AtsuMina...Finally! (http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s376/Nakamii_Eririn/GIFs%20Decorations/186.gif) Haha.. No one knew about MariMii's Secrets! (http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s376/Nakamii_Eririn/GIFs%20Decorations/o0020002011709118505.gif)
-Please, Update Soon! (Btw, Is it going to be 30 Part?) (http://i1048.photobucket.com/albums/s376/Nakamii_Eririn/GIFs%20Decorations/o0020002011709118548.gif)
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They (Atsumina) is back together. Sweet moments ~~
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:farofflook: You are a great writer Loveforever-san :bow:
The fic will be ending soon...I hope that you will continue write great fics onwards... :thumbsup
Sweets moments Acchan such a tsundere hahha the kissing tree scene was so hilarious!
Herpes and all *ROFL!
The surprising sweet moments for KojiYuu & the troll couple MariMii hehe
Thank you for your update!
Arígatou! :kneelbow:
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the kiss!! takabaka :D make you wifeyhappy ok :D
with smexy thing and all
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I'm so glad they are finally together <3
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LOL at kissing the tree. That was too cute. And I'm so happy that they're back together!
Ooh, what's this about Miichan and Marikoo? O:
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HNGGGG!! Wow this story is really good and very well written too. You're a great author, I must list you down now on my favorites :onioncheer:
I love how the way Acchan act tsundere over TakaMina. wahahaha I was laughing so hard, especially the "kiss the tree" part. Hahaha Oh God Acchan!! :luvluv2:
Thanks for all your updates, I wonder if there are still other updates to come? Heee.. Great job on this fic! :thumbup
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Wwwa what a cute fic! Ive really liked it!
That MariMii at the end was great!
Hope you continue it soon!
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Part 27
Day of the concert
“Acchan and Takamina you guys are up next! Please get ready.” The stage director yelled out, not knowing where the duos were. (In the private dressing room backstage) “Atsuko, are you sure this is what you want?” The captain asked placing her hand on top of the aces shoulder. “Un.. This is where I want it to be. Let’s make this concert a memorable one, shall we?” She gave an unquestionable smile to her girlfriend. “Girls! You’re up! Hurry get out here!!” “Haiii!!” They both shouted in unison running towards the stage hand in hand. The lights on stage immediately shut off… All you can see now are the glow sticks waving around in the pitch dark stadium. Everything becomes intense. The light begins to dim on as the beat started playing. Shocked to see who were on stage doing their first duet together, the crowd goes insane. The fans started chanting “ATSUMINA! ATSUMINA! ATSUMINA!”
Acchan: furi hajimeta hosoi ame ga
giniro no donchou wo
orosu you ni
maku wo tojita
sore ga watashi no hatsukoi
Takamina: machibuse shita
futatsu me no roji
koe mo kakerarenai mama
shita wo muitara
ajisai mo naiteita
Together: konna ni aitaku temo
konna ni suki demo
me no mae wo toori sugiteku.
After the song was finished, the crowds were still going crazy from the surprise performance. Finally the lights came back on.. “MINNA SAN KUNICHIWA”. Takamina greeted the crowd. And crowd applauded excitedly. “MINNNNNNNNNNNAMIIIIIIIIIIIII” The wota’s screamed. “I’m going to do it.” Acchan whispers to her lover. “Wait. Let’s announce it together.” They both held each other hands with a slight blush on both their cheeks. “Huh? What’s going on?” the crowds chattered.
“I, Takahashi Minami” and “I, Maeda Atsuko” // UNISON: “Decided from today on, we will be graduating from AKB.” BACKGROUND: “What!???? NO……………” The crowd shouted. “PLEASE STAY” MINAMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!! ACCHANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!! The other members were shocked; they didn’t see this one coming at all. Tears begin to form in their eyes. “You guys may be wondering why… huh?” Acchan questioned the crowd.“NANIIIIIIIIIIIII?! NANI!?” the crowd shouts back. Acchan hesitated placing one hand on her chest with tears falling from her eyes. “I broke a rule..one of the most important rule of all in AKB. And I must take responsibility for my own actions.” “NANIIIIII!?” “I fell in love and I don't regret it at all…” she says looking towards Takamina with a beautiful yet nervous smile. She also had seen her parents in the crowd.. She couldn’t have felt more proud of herself for being honest with everyone.“Yeahhhhhh! GO ATSUKO!!!” Her father shouted to support her. After all that’s all he can do after that huge fight they had.
Takamina and Acchan laughed. “And I Takahashi, Minami had also committed the same crime. I also fell in love..and if you ask with who? Isn’t it obvious?” She smirks to the crowd. “Atsuko..” she got down on one knee.. I know I’ve asked you this already…and you’ve answered me before. But again will you marry me? I want the world to witness it. I want them to know who I fell truly deeply in love with." The crowd was stunned, sure they knew they both had broken a rule..but not with each other.. “GANBATTE TAKAMINA!!!” they applaud and wooooo. Surprisingly the crowd also supported them. “Yes! Yes yes!” the ace repeated and jumped into her lovers arm planting a slow but very passionate kiss in front of everyone. They kissed like there was no tomorrow, like they’re the only one that existed on that very stage. The crowds begin to go even crazier, shouting “ASTUMINA” and throwing flowers on to the stage.” All the other members came out from the back stage to congratulate them and saying there farewell.. Meanwhile..backstage.. “Nyan nyan! Us next please, us next!” “Yuuchan, no! I will never in a million years marry a pervert like you!” Yuko felt hurt hearing those words and pouted with puppy eyes. “Okay okay..I lied. I will someday marry you but not yet, she patted her girlfriend on the head. "But for now let's keep it a secret and keep our career going.” “YAY!” Yuko shouted excitedly running around in circles like a happy squirrel. Yuko also cupped her girlfriend cheeks and kisses her nonstop in an annoying way. “MUAH! MUAH! MUAH! (She kept cupping and letting go constantly) “BAM” Haruna’s fist flew forward. “Ittaiiiiiii” Yuko nose starts to bleed. “Gomen ne, gomen ne! it was just a reflex.” Haruna apologized worriedly and kisses her boo boo.” Yuko looks the other way and smirks (at the readers) with her eyebrow shrugging up and down…
TBC…
Finally the wedding will be coming soon! Lol took me 5768686 years to update this. Sorry!! xD
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uwaaaa... this is just so sweet.. I wanna see the wedding.. and ho-honeymooooon,,babies, and all.. wahahha lolz.. (sorry I've gone too far) ahahaha :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
thanks for the update!!! :D
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WOW!!!!!!!! They announced at aconcert and all!!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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What if this will happen for real in Tokyo Dome Concert XD
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yeah you are the best... that why im talking about takaboy :D
the end!! kojiyuuu you are a teaser yuuchan
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YEi! Update!
Woot? Wedding? Can't wait to read it!
ArígatoU! :kneelbow:
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this fanfic is the best, really love it..
thanks for writing. :)
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i like the way you made this fics, really want to read the upcoming fics. I used my whole day to read your stories. Please continue this fics as fast as possible. I cant wait to see what happen next.
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Thanks for reading guys! I appreciate the comments! :otomerika: I didn't think anybody reads my work anymore hehe. But I'll make sure I'll update this sometime soon...next part will be the ending :(
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I'm still waiting for your update ;) :love: :love: I can't wait to see how this wonderful story ends.. yay! Thanks for your hardwork!
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The wedding part!!!!
Waiting for the update!
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as promised..the ending :grin:
Part 28 END
10 years later…
“Mom!!!! Nami’s not playing nice.” a child whines to her mother running from the other room.
“What is it Atsu? What did Nami do this time?”
“Nami Takahashi Maeda, get in here right this instance!” Atsuko yelled out to her other daughter.
Nami walks into the room with her head hung low from the fear of getting yelled at.
“Now, Atsu tell mommy what Nami did.”
“Well..we were play getting married and she won’t let me be the bride.” Atsu pouted.
“Oh, is that all?” Atsuko chuckled.
“But mom..I really want to be the bride and wear the dress!” Nami opposed.
“Girls let’s have a talk.” Atsuko sat them on the couch with both daughters on opposite side of her.
“Now, now. It doesn’t matter who gets to be to be the bride or wear the dress, as long as you love the person. Am I right?”
Both girls smiled. “Like how you love Papa?” Atsu asked.
“Un..”Atsuko nodded
“What was yours and papa’s wedding like?” Nami added.
Atsuko blushed because all the memories came back to her.
*FLASHBACK*
“Atsuko, will you take Minami to be your lawful wedded wife?”
“I do.”
“And Minami, will you take Atsuko to be your lawful wedded wife also?”
“I do.” Minami smiles despite wearing a tux she had not agreed to wear.
“If anyone can show just cause why this couple cannot be legally joined in marriage, let them speak now or forever hold their peace."
Everything was in complete silent.
“Okay then, Now you may kiss.”
Minami blushes and leans in for the kiss.. before their lips touched..
“I object!” someone yelled out.
The crowd was stirred up trying to see where it’s coming from.
“Miichan?” Minami was confused with her best friend actions.
“Minami, I'm glad you won her heart but if you ever hurt her I will hunt you down and kill you!” Miichan says in a terrorizing way.
Minami’s face went pail cause of fear. ”Don’t worry, I promise not to hurt her.. I love her too much.” Minami smiles..
“Okay, let’s get on with the ceremony. Again, Now you may kiss”
Minami was really happy this is happening, they’re finally going to be married. She again leans in for the kiss…
“I object!” another person screamed out in tears.”
“Mom!!!!!!!!!!!!” Atusko whined.
“I’m sorry, it’s just that my little girl is growing up and leaving us..” her mother sobbed.
“I don’t want you to stay here in New York.” She frowns..
“Mom, I promise I will visit whenever you want.”
“On demand?” her mom stopped crying and asked innocently.
“Yes mother…”
“Okay..if there are no other objections, let’s get on with the ceremony.”
“For the third time, Now you may kiss”
Before their lips met.
“I object!”
“WHAT NOW!????” Minami yells in anger with a terrifying look.”
“I just wanted say that hehe!” Yuko chuckled, although scared at the same time.
“Okay..if there are no other objections, let’s get on with the ceremony. Now you may kiss”
Minami hurried and closed the gap between the two before someone can object again.
They kissed slowly and very passionately.
*FLASHBACK ENDS*
“Honey I’m home!” Minami yells out entering the front door.
“Hi kids! Look who I brought here today.”
“Auntie Tomochin!” the girls yelled in unison and ran to her for a bear hug.
“Papa, mommy was just telling us about your wedding day.”
“Heyyyyy, what did I tell you guys about calling me papa, its mommy also!”
“But you look and act like a papa” Nami shrugged.
“Wow, I can’t even tell you girls apart anymore!” Tomochin says while tickling them. The girls giggled constantly. ”Auntie Tomo..I’m Nami!” “And I’m Atsu.” They said trying to gasp for air.
“The perks of being twins huh?” Atsuko laughed.
“So what did we learn today?” Minami asks her kids.
“That it doesn’t matter who gets to wear the dress or be the bride as long as you love the person you’re marrying.” The twins again said in unison.
“WHAT!??? SHE SAID THAT!???” Minami shouted. Minami stood there with FAILLLLLLLLL written all over her face.
“You forced me to wear that tux although we agreed to both wear dresses! What happen to as long as you love each other it doesn’t matter what we wear??”
I always get my way.” Atsuko smirked.
END
A/N: the twins are tomochin's biological kids from a sperm donor..she let atsumina adopt them. :)
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ooooh really love this fanfic thanks for finished :heart:
Yuko So fun and troll :lol: :lol:
Happy ending :inlove:
Thanks for upload part 28 with a final really great
I HOPE THIS NEVER END. :tantrum:
Arigatou :wriggly:
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what amazing fic.. jejejej atsuko is the baws like always :B
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nice ending :)
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Before their lips met.
“I object!”
“WHAT NOW!????” Minami yells in anger with a terrifying look.”
“I just wanted say that hehe!” Yuko chuckled, although scared at the same time.
yuuchan you should not ruin their kissy" moment nee :mon annoy: :mon lol:
finally it's came to the end :mon runcry:
great work, thanks for such a great story :mon lovelaff:
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Great Ending!
Great Fic!
:bow:
Thank you!
I'm amused with the twins..
The dress thing was humorous :lol:
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Before their lips met.
“I object!”
“WHAT NOW!????” Minami yells in anger with a terrifying look.”
“I just wanted say that hehe!” Yuko chuckled, although scared at the same time.
yuuchan you should not ruin their kissy" moment nee :mon annoy: :mon lol:
finally it's came to the end :mon runcry:
great work, thanks for such a great story :mon lovelaff:
Yuko So fun and troll :lol: :lol:
Happy ending :inlove: hehehe..
It's really good to read this even it's the 2nd time i read this it make me happy.. :)
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Very good ending :twothumbs