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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 26 UPDATED 2/22
« Reply #180 on: February 22, 2012, 03:54:29 PM »
They (Atsumina) is back together. Sweet moments ~~

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 26 UPDATED 2/22
« Reply #181 on: February 22, 2012, 06:24:30 PM »
 :farofflook: You are a great writer Loveforever-san  :bow:
The fic will be ending soon...I hope that you will continue write great fics onwards...  :thumbsup

Sweets moments Acchan such a tsundere hahha the kissing tree scene was so hilarious!
Herpes and all *ROFL!

The surprising sweet moments for KojiYuu & the troll couple MariMii hehe

Thank you for your update!
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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 26 UPDATED 2/22
« Reply #182 on: February 23, 2012, 06:30:04 AM »
the kiss!! takabaka :D make you wifeyhappy ok :D with smexy thing and all

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 26 UPDATED 2/22
« Reply #183 on: February 23, 2012, 09:06:48 AM »
I'm so glad they are finally together <3

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 26 UPDATED 2/22
« Reply #184 on: February 25, 2012, 04:38:52 AM »
LOL at kissing the tree. That was too cute. And I'm so happy that they're back together!
Ooh, what's this about Miichan and Marikoo? O:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 26 UPDATED 2/22
« Reply #185 on: June 20, 2012, 06:40:56 PM »
HNGGGG!! Wow this story is really good and very well written too. You're a great author, I must list you down now on my favorites  :onioncheer:

I love how the way Acchan act tsundere over TakaMina. wahahaha I was laughing so hard, especially the "kiss the tree" part. Hahaha Oh God Acchan!!  :luvluv2:

Thanks for all your updates, I wonder if there are still other updates to come? Heee.. Great job on this fic! :thumbup

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 26 UPDATED 2/22
« Reply #186 on: June 20, 2012, 11:19:03 PM »
Wwwa what a cute fic! Ive really liked it!
That MariMii at the end was great!

Hope you continue it soon!
♥ 恋がしたいのに、うまく恋ができない… そもそも、恋愛なんて私たちには贅沢なんだろうか?  ♥

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Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #187 on: July 26, 2012, 11:53:24 PM »
Part 27

Day of the concert

   “Acchan and Takamina you guys are up next! Please get ready.” The stage director yelled out, not knowing where the duos were. (In the private dressing room backstage) “Atsuko, are you sure this is what you want?” The captain asked placing her hand on top of the aces shoulder. “Un.. This is where I want it to be. Let’s make this concert a memorable one, shall we?” She gave an unquestionable smile to her girlfriend. “Girls! You’re up! Hurry get out here!!” “Haiii!!” They both shouted in unison running towards the stage hand in hand. The lights on stage immediately shut off… All you can see now are the glow sticks waving around in the pitch dark stadium. Everything becomes intense. The light begins to dim on as the beat started playing. Shocked to see who were on stage doing their first duet together, the crowd goes insane. The fans started chanting “ATSUMINA! ATSUMINA! ATSUMINA!”

Acchan: furi hajimeta hosoi ame ga
giniro no donchou wo
orosu you ni
maku wo tojita
sore ga watashi no hatsukoi

Takamina: machibuse shita
futatsu me no roji
koe mo kakerarenai mama
shita wo muitara
ajisai mo naiteita

Together: konna ni aitaku temo
konna ni suki demo
me no mae wo toori sugiteku.

         After the song was finished, the crowds were still going crazy from the surprise performance. Finally the lights came back on.. “MINNA SAN KUNICHIWA”. Takamina greeted the crowd. And crowd applauded excitedly. “MINNNNNNNNNNNAMIIIIIIIIIIIII” The wota’s screamed. “I’m going to do it.” Acchan whispers to her lover. “Wait. Let’s announce it together.” They both held each other hands with a slight blush on both their cheeks. “Huh? What’s going on?” the crowds chattered.
“I, Takahashi Minami” and “I, Maeda Atsuko” // UNISON: “Decided from today on, we will be graduating from AKB.”  BACKGROUND: “What!???? NO……………” The crowd shouted. “PLEASE STAY” MINAMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!! ACCHANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!! The other members were shocked; they didn’t see this one coming at all. Tears begin to form in their eyes. “You guys may be wondering why… huh?” Acchan questioned the crowd.“NANIIIIIIIIIIIII?! NANI!?” the crowd shouts back. Acchan hesitated placing one hand on her chest with tears falling from her eyes. “I broke a rule..one of the most important rule of all in AKB. And I must take responsibility for my own actions.” “NANIIIIII!?” “I fell in love and I don't regret it at all…” she says looking towards Takamina with a beautiful yet nervous smile. She also had seen her parents in the crowd.. She couldn’t have felt more proud of herself for being honest with everyone.“Yeahhhhhh! GO ATSUKO!!!” Her father shouted to support her. After all that’s all he can do after that huge fight they had.
           
          Takamina and Acchan laughed. “And I Takahashi, Minami had also committed the same crime. I also fell in love..and if you ask with who? Isn’t it obvious?” She smirks to the crowd. “Atsuko..” she got down on one knee.. I know I’ve asked you this already…and you’ve answered me before. But again will you marry me? I want the world to witness it. I want them to know who I fell truly deeply in love with." The crowd was stunned, sure they knew they both had broken a rule..but not with each other.. “GANBATTE TAKAMINA!!!” they applaud and wooooo. Surprisingly the crowd also supported them. “Yes! Yes yes!” the ace repeated and jumped into her lovers arm planting a slow but very passionate kiss in front of everyone. They kissed like there was no tomorrow, like they’re the only one that existed on that very stage. The crowds begin to go even crazier, shouting “ASTUMINA” and throwing flowers on to the stage.” All the other members came out from the back stage to congratulate them and saying there farewell.. Meanwhile..backstage.. “Nyan nyan! Us next please, us next!”  “Yuuchan, no! I will never in a million years marry a pervert like you!” Yuko felt hurt hearing those words and pouted with puppy eyes. “Okay okay..I lied. I will someday marry you but not yet, she patted her girlfriend on the head. "But for now let's keep it a secret and keep our career going.” “YAY!” Yuko shouted excitedly running around in circles like a happy squirrel. Yuko also cupped her girlfriend cheeks and kisses her nonstop in an annoying way. “MUAH! MUAH! MUAH! (She kept cupping and letting go constantly) “BAM” Haruna’s fist flew forward. “Ittaiiiiiii” Yuko nose starts to bleed. “Gomen ne, gomen ne! it was just a reflex.” Haruna apologized worriedly and kisses her boo boo.” Yuko looks the other way and smirks (at the readers)  with her eyebrow shrugging up and down…

TBC…

Finally the wedding will be coming soon! Lol took me 5768686 years to update this. Sorry!! xD

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #188 on: July 27, 2012, 01:23:39 AM »
uwaaaa... this is just so sweet.. I wanna see the wedding.. and ho-honeymooooon,,babies, and all.. wahahha lolz.. (sorry I've gone too far) ahahaha  :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

thanks for the update!!!  :D

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #189 on: July 27, 2012, 02:36:02 AM »
WOW!!!!!!!! They announced at aconcert and all!!!! :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #190 on: July 27, 2012, 03:49:36 AM »
What if this will happen for real in Tokyo Dome Concert XD

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #191 on: July 27, 2012, 06:48:44 AM »
yeah you are the best... that why im talking about takaboy :D

the end!! kojiyuuu you are a teaser yuuchan

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #192 on: July 28, 2012, 07:53:25 PM »
YEi! Update!

Woot? Wedding? Can't wait to read it!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #193 on: December 07, 2012, 12:32:43 AM »
this fanfic is the best, really love it..
thanks for writing.   :)

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #194 on: December 07, 2012, 04:35:21 PM »
i like the way you made this fics, really want to read the upcoming fics. I used my whole day to read your stories. Please continue this fics as fast as possible. I cant wait to see what happen next.

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #195 on: December 07, 2012, 09:10:10 PM »
Thanks for reading guys! I appreciate the comments!  :otomerika: I didn't think anybody reads my work anymore hehe. But I'll make sure I'll update this sometime soon...next part will be the ending  :(

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #196 on: December 08, 2012, 08:33:32 PM »
I'm still waiting for your update ;)  :love: :love: I can't wait to see how this wonderful story ends.. yay! Thanks for your hardwork!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 27 FINALLY UPDATED 7/26
« Reply #197 on: December 08, 2012, 09:16:38 PM »
The wedding part!!!!
Waiting for the update!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 28 END 12/10
« Reply #198 on: December 10, 2012, 10:19:11 PM »
as promised..the ending  :grin:


Part 28 END

10 years later…

“Mom!!!!  Nami’s not playing nice.” a child whines to her mother running from the other room.
“What is it Atsu? What did Nami do this time?”
“Nami Takahashi Maeda, get in here right this instance!” Atsuko yelled out to her other daughter.
Nami walks into the room with her head hung low from the fear of getting yelled at.
“Now, Atsu tell mommy what Nami did.”
“Well..we were play getting married and she won’t let me be the bride.” Atsu pouted.
“Oh, is that all?” Atsuko chuckled.
“But mom..I really want to be the bride and wear the dress!” Nami opposed.
“Girls let’s have a talk.” Atsuko sat them on the couch with both daughters on opposite side of her.
“Now, now. It doesn’t matter who gets to be to be the bride or wear the dress, as long as you love the person. Am I right?”
Both girls smiled. “Like how you love Papa?” Atsu asked.
“Un..”Atsuko nodded
“What was yours and papa’s wedding like?” Nami added.
Atsuko blushed because all the memories came back to her.

*FLASHBACK*

“Atsuko, will you take Minami to be your lawful wedded wife?”
“I do.”
“And Minami, will you take Atsuko to be your lawful wedded wife also?”
“I do.”  Minami smiles despite wearing a tux she had not agreed to wear.
“If anyone can show just cause why this couple cannot be legally joined in marriage, let them speak now or forever hold their peace."
Everything was in complete silent.
“Okay then, Now you may kiss.”
Minami blushes and leans in for the kiss.. before their lips touched..
“I object!” someone yelled out.
The crowd was stirred up trying to see where it’s coming from.
“Miichan?” Minami was confused with her best friend actions.
“Minami, I'm glad you won her heart but if you ever hurt her I will hunt you down and kill you!” Miichan says in a terrorizing way.
Minami’s face went pail cause of fear. ”Don’t worry, I promise not to hurt her.. I love her too much.” Minami smiles..
“Okay, let’s get on with the ceremony. Again, Now you may kiss”
Minami was really happy this is happening, they’re finally going to be married. She again leans in for the kiss…
“I object!” another person screamed out in tears.”
“Mom!!!!!!!!!!!!” Atusko whined.
“I’m sorry, it’s just that my little girl is growing up and leaving us..” her mother sobbed.
“I don’t want you to stay here in New York.” She frowns..
“Mom, I promise I will visit whenever you want.”
“On demand?” her mom stopped crying and asked innocently.
“Yes mother…”
“Okay..if there are no other objections, let’s get on with the ceremony.”
“For the third time, Now you may kiss”
Before their lips met.
 “I object!”
“WHAT NOW!????” Minami yells in anger with a terrifying look.”
“I just wanted say that hehe!” Yuko chuckled, although scared at the same time.
“Okay..if there are no other objections, let’s get on with the ceremony. Now you may kiss”
Minami hurried and closed the gap between the two before someone can object again.
They kissed slowly and very passionately.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

“Honey I’m home!” Minami yells out entering the front door.
“Hi kids! Look who I brought here today.”
“Auntie Tomochin!” the girls yelled in unison and ran to her for a bear hug.
“Papa, mommy was just telling us about your wedding day.”
“Heyyyyy, what did I tell you guys about calling me papa, its mommy also!”
“But you look and act like a papa” Nami shrugged.
“Wow, I can’t even tell you girls apart anymore!” Tomochin says while tickling them. The girls giggled constantly. ”Auntie Tomo..I’m Nami!” “And I’m Atsu.” They said trying to gasp for air.
“The perks of being twins huh?” Atsuko laughed.
“So what did we learn today?” Minami asks her kids.
“That it doesn’t matter who gets to wear the dress or be the bride as long as you love the person you’re marrying.” The twins again said in unison.
“WHAT!??? SHE SAID THAT!???” Minami shouted. Minami stood there with FAILLLLLLLLL written all over her face.
“You forced me to wear that tux although we agreed to both wear dresses! What happen to as long as you love each other it doesn’t matter what we wear??”
I always get my way.” Atsuko smirked.

END


A/N: the twins are tomochin's biological kids from a sperm donor..she let atsumina adopt them. :)

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 28 END 12/10
« Reply #199 on: December 11, 2012, 03:14:50 AM »
ooooh really love this fanfic thanks for finished  :heart:

Yuko So fun and troll  :lol: :lol:

Happy ending  :inlove:

Thanks for upload part 28 with a final really great

I HOPE THIS NEVER END.    :tantrum:

Arigatou   :wriggly:

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