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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 24 UPDATED 2/7
« Reply #160 on: February 07, 2012, 10:27:38 AM »
EHHH??!! What Happen to AtsuMina!? and WTH?!! Takamina kissed Tomo?!!!! NOOOOO!!! :OMG:
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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 24 UPDATED 2/7
« Reply #161 on: February 07, 2012, 11:46:36 AM »
Arrrgg!!!! No!!!! Stupid father!!!!!!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 24 UPDATED 2/7
« Reply #162 on: February 07, 2012, 02:36:36 PM »
 :badluck: After all the obstacles and confessing I was so happy
that they finally are together!  :onioncheer: Everything is happy and dandy.

But then!  :shock:
Tun tun tun Acchans father came and saw everything!  :fainted:
More DRAMA! Atsu-Mina breaking up!
More heart breaking for the readers.. :on speedy:
YES! This fic will not going to end yet!  :on GJ:
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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 24 UPDATED 2/7
« Reply #163 on: February 07, 2012, 02:53:12 PM »
OMG, this is a hurt breaking moment for Atsumina !
Somehow, Takamina is really love Acchan afterall that she willing to give up Acchan just for the sake of Acchan's father.
I hope the ending is a good news to us (readers) who wanting the next chapters soon ^^

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 24 UPDATED 2/7
« Reply #164 on: February 08, 2012, 02:37:46 AM »
Oh, why?! what?! No! Takamina, you can't kiss Tomochin.
And poor Acchan, too. Waiting in the rain until she lost consciousness. ;____;
I want them back together alreadyyyy.

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 24 UPDATED 2/7
« Reply #165 on: February 08, 2012, 05:36:25 AM »
takabaka!! why do you kiss tomichin!!! awww my poor acchan... wake up takaboy fight for your wifey!!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #166 on: February 10, 2012, 02:09:41 AM »
Arigato for your comments everybody! I very much appreciate it. Sometimes I feel like giving up on the story but you guys give me motivation! so thank you for reading! I RABB CHUU !  :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: Here's part 25, enjoy!! sorry for any grammar mistakes!


Part 25

   The ace missed two days of practice, locking herself in her bedroom. Ever since that incident, not once did she step out. Flashback of happy memories with Takamina got the best of her at the moment. All she does is cry and cry on her bed, hoping that the pain will go away.  The members would try and call her but she wouldn’t respond to anyone. Her mother was really concerned. “Acchan, please come out. You haven’t eaten or drunken anything for the last two days. If you keep this up, you’ll get sick.” her mother tried coaxing her from the other side of the door. Still there was no response from the ace. Her father was also very worried, although he knew it was probably his fault. In the dining room her parents were having a discussion. “Maybe we should just let them be.” Acchan’s mother proposed. “Are you crazy? Two girls shouldn’t be together. That’s just absurd! ” “But they are in love… do you think we have any right to stop them?” “I don’t care! It just isn’t right.” “Doesn’t it kind of remind you of a certain someone?”  “What do you mean? ...” her father asked with a confuse look. “Remember when we were young?” “Go on, I’m listening.”  “My parents didn’t want us to be together because they thought you we’re a play boy.” She chuckles.  “It took some time, but once they got to know the real you…they finally accepted us.” she smirks, nudging at her husband arm. “Yeah, but that’s a different story!” “How is it any different? Love is love...you can’t help who you fall in love with right?” Acchan’s father was left speechless. Finally he didn’t have any remarks to counter with. “Don’t you want our daughter to be happy like us?” she added “Of course I do. Seeing the way she is right now, her happiness is all that matters.”  “Okay then, just let them be.” “Souka, I guess you’re right. Now I fully understand.” he agreed while sighing. “Now, go and talk to your daughter.” She shoves him towards the stairs.

   Although her father was not the type to admit he’s wrong, for the sake of his daughter happiness, he gathered up the courage to go and talk to her. As he reaches her bedroom door, he hesitates to knock, so he sat himself beside Acchan’s door. “Acchan, please listen to me. I have something really important to tell you.” The ace heard her father’s voice but decides to ignore it and kept weeping. “It’s about Takahashi-san.” As soon as she heard that name, her attention was all there.” She didn’t know why she even wanted to listen about the person who broke her heart but she listened anyway. “I know about you two.” Her eyes inflated in shock. “How does he know?” she thought. “And there’s something else.”  He sighs.  “The truth is...I wasn’t happy about it at all so the day you left the house first, I threatened her to stay away from you. I even said things I shouldn’t have that hurt her.” “WHAT THE F*CK!” was all that she can think of saying right now but she didn’t. Finally she slammed the door open, her anger took over her sadness in seconds. “You have no right to do that!” She yelled furiously at her father. “You’re right, I don’t… and for that I’m really sorry. Believe me I want to take back everything I said to her.” “Don’t you think it’s a little too late for a sorry? She broke my heart because of you!!! Now I know what driven her to do what she did.” “Acchan, please... forgive me!” he held onto her arm. “I’ll deal with you later but now I have to go find her.” She pushes her father’s arm off and ran. “I’m proud of you." A voice said from a distance. "I’m sure someday she will forgive you, after all you did gave her life.” The aces mother said to her husband. He didn’t reply but just gave a half smile.

   The ace ran into practice. “Tomochin! Where’s Minami?!” “I don’t know. She hasn’t been here for two days.”  “Oh, okay then. I will go look for her, please call me if you hear from her.”  Just when the ace was about to run off again, Tomochin pulls her back. ”Wait! Acchan, I’m sorry about happened two days ago. If it makes you feel any better, the kiss meant nothing at all to me.” She smiles facing Kasai and giving off a blush. “Don’t worry, I understand.” She smiles back at Tomochin. “But don’t forget, the kiss is only a onetime thing.” Acchan winks at her. “Miichan! Do you know where Minami is?” “I haven’t seen her, maybe she’s at home?” “Right!” the ace replies and ran off again. Finally she arrived at Takamina’s house. She knocked on the door several times and her mom answered. “Ohayo Maeda-san, what are you doing here? Shouldn’t you be at practice with Minami for the big concert tomorrow?” “Minami’s not home?” “No..I thought she was at work with you.” “Oh..yeah, that’s right she is.” She lied. So that Takamina’s mother wouldn’t have to worry. Acchan quickly pulls out her cell phone and dialed Haruna. “Nyan Nyan, I can’t find Minami anywhere. You’re her best friend; do you have any idea where she would be?” “Did you check everywhere yet?” “No, not yet but I will.” “Well I’d say go where you think she’ll be when she’s upset or angry.” “Okay, thanks for the tip.” Acchan hangs up and rushed to look everywhere. Even at the ice cream shop where Acchan first apologized to Minami, and at the park bench where they first met. Just everywhere she thought she would be. From going to variety of places, Acchan stops to pant. It's beginning to get frustrating for her. When she called Takamina's cell phone, it was also out of range."Where could she be?" a tear drop falls from her eyes. But then it hit her..

*“Well I’d say go where you think she’ll be when she’s upset or angry.”* What Haruna had said earlier resounded in her head.

TBC…

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #167 on: February 10, 2012, 03:52:44 AM »
Acchan go find your Minami and clear things up. I want both of u be together again. ^^

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #168 on: February 10, 2012, 04:22:09 AM »
Yeah!! Way to go Acchan mama~ XD
Glad to know that Acchan papa is finally going to accept Takamina and Acchan~ :D
I wonder where Takamina went.. :?
But I know Acchan will find her~~ :grin:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #169 on: February 10, 2012, 05:22:15 AM »
Im excitced!! that was like a action movie in my head... acchan looking for takamina.. and I add more places jeje

Come acchan you have all my support make your husband happy...

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #170 on: February 10, 2012, 08:21:39 AM »
Owh!!! I'm glad that Acchan's father changed his mind!!!!  :hee:

Acchan!! go and find your Minami!!!! I'm happy!!!  :farofflook: I bet Minami went to the place where she proposed to Acchan before..LOL.. or maybe not..  :on lol:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #171 on: February 10, 2012, 08:27:01 AM »
Flean, you!!!! LOL well it's nice to know that you remember stuff from the story!!!  :P

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #172 on: February 10, 2012, 11:20:57 AM »
Flean, you!!!! LOL well it's nice to know that you remember stuff from the story!!!  :P

I've been following this story from the start.. LOL..  XD and I also do still remember how many times I was depressed because of this fic..  :lol:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #173 on: February 10, 2012, 02:20:24 PM »
hisashiburi....and da hell Taka kissed Tomo?!  :angry:

yey happy daddy changed his mind  :yep: thanks to mommy  :D
Yeaah Acchan go and find your love!  :panic:
and get married soon ooo yeeaaaa  :inlove: :inlove:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #174 on: February 10, 2012, 04:57:07 PM »
Run Acchan! RUN!

Waa! I'm glad that you didn't give up...or this fic wouldn't be finished
and we readers would be really sad. Because after all it's a great fic.

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #175 on: February 11, 2012, 11:25:29 AM »
GYAAHH!!  :heart:

Acchans father accepted it  :inlove:

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please update soon I love your fic :)

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 25 UPDATED 2/9
« Reply #176 on: February 11, 2012, 03:09:04 PM »
Finally Maedapapa is not that heartless, I'm glad
Tomotomo? :)

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 26 UPDATED 2/22
« Reply #177 on: February 22, 2012, 07:29:52 AM »
story is coming to an end soon... :(


Part 26

“I used to come here all the time when I was little, to get away from my problems... I thought I’d share it with you. Now when I’m angry or frustrated…you’d know where to find me.”
   
   “That’s right..the cliff!” Acchan hurried to the place where their first date took place. When she reached the top, she saw the captain sitting there staring out into the city… lost in her own world. The ace was relieved to find her safe and sound. “Minami!” The ace yelled out from a distance.”  “Ac-c-cchan?” she recognize the voice right away. “What are you doing here? You shouldn’t be here...” “Why can’t I be here, it’s a public place…isn’t it?” Acchan refuted back. “Un..gomen.” “Sorry for what? For kissing Tomochin or for not telling me what happened between you and my father?” The captain was caught off guard by the statement. “How did you…” “He told me everything.”  “Yeah, but that doesn’t change a thing.” the captain said in disappointment and looked away. “Yes it does! It changes everything! No one can tell me who to love or who not to love!” “But your father..he doesn’t approve of us.”  “Minami, are you not getting the point? There’s a reason why he told me, baka!” “You mean he’s…” “YES!” Acchan yells back with a huge smile on her face.  “Acchan...” Before she can say anything else, the ace ran towards the captain, Takamina extended out her arms in response. Acchan jumps into Takamina arms wrapping her legs above the captain’s waist and her arms around her neck. Despite how heavy she is, Takamina managed to carry her. Their foreheads were touching. Lost into each other’s eyes they stared at one another full of happiness. Takamina leaned in for a kiss.. “Na uh uh..” Acchan shook her finger back and forth waving it in front of her lovers face. “What? Why can’t I kiss you?” Takamina pouted. “Did you forget about something?” “Uh..I love you?” “NO! Not that!! You kissed Tomochin!! Remember!!?!?” “Acchan.. You know that kiss meant nothing at all to me...” she whines. “If you ever want to kiss me again…you have to kiss that tree over there 5 times.” The ace chuckled. “But..what if I get a splinter? I won’t be able to kiss anymore.” “Hey, you should of thought of that before you kissed her..humph! “You’re so cute when you’re jealous. You know that? Haha.” Takamina pretends to drop Acchan...and Acchan screams for her life. “Is it just me or you gotten heavier?” Takamina teased. “What!?!? That’s it! You’re kissing the tree 10 times!” “Okay okay I quit!” Takamina laughed.

   Takamina sets her girlfriend down and walk towards the tree. “Are you sure about this? You know the concert is tomorrow. I can’t go up there with my lips all cut up, they’ll probably think I have herpes.” She says pouting. “Even better!” the ace snickered. Takamina was 4 inches away from the tree; she closes her eyes and lean in half way and stops.”Acchan, the tree is so dirty with ants on them! Can we just talk about this?” “Nope! Come on, if you hurry up we can get to practice!” Fine...” The captain gave in and leans in all the way. Just before her lips touches the tree. Acchan jumps in front it...their lips met..Takamina was surprised but very pleased. She made the kiss longer and deeper until they needed to gasp for air. “What about the tree?” Takamina asks. “You really want to kiss the tree don’t ya? hahah” “No, no! That’s not what I meant.” “The thought of you kissing that dirty tree just for me is already enough for me.” Acchan blushes. Takamina couldn’t help but stare at how cute her girlfriend was acting. “What are you staring at?! Let’s go to practice! “Yes your highness!” the captain giggles. As they were walking back down the path, Acchan kept whining. ”I’m so tired.” “Here, get on my back. I’ll carry you the rest of the way.” “Really??” Acchan smile lights up. “Anything for my princess.” The ace blushes again at how sweet her girlfriend is to her. ”I’m such a lucky girl.” Takamina piggy backed ride her all the way down the path.. Acchan fell asleep with her face snuggled into Takamina’s neck. ”Kawaii..” the captains murmurs to herself. Takamina didn’t want to wake her up yet so she carried her all the way to the Akb Theater. After all, it wasn’t far from where they were. “Psss..Acchan..wake up. We’re here.” Both girls walked into practice hand in hand.. The members started applauding as they both made their way in..you can hear some saying “kawaiiii..” and others shouting. “Get a room!” Takamina and Acchan blushed as they were clapping, then the captain tries to break the happy atmosphere by yelling “What are you guys clapping for!? Get back to practice, there’s nothing to see here!!” The members just ignored her and laugh.. “Nyan Nyan, can we hold hands too?” Yuko asks her cat like girlfriend. “You don’t have to ask.” she smiles back at her lover and kissed her on the lips in front of everyone. Everyone was shocked, they had no clue that the two were dating. Sure they know Yuko was harassing her all the time but they didn’t know Haruna actually likes it. “Wow, they’re good at hiding things.” Mariko-sama said to Miichan. “Ha, you think they’re good? Well look at us! No one even has a clue!!!” Miichan laughs evilly.

TBC…

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 26 UPDATED 2/22
« Reply #178 on: February 22, 2012, 11:43:23 AM »
Yea! They're back together finally~~ :wub:
That was so sweet~~ XD
LOL~ No one knew about Mariko and Miichan yet!! They're good at hiding things..!! :twisted:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 26 UPDATED 2/22
« Reply #179 on: February 22, 2012, 03:14:28 PM »
story is coming to an end soon... :(

Woot?! NOOO! Why it end so fast?! I still want to read your Wonderful Stories!


~ Btw, An Update! I Love it! My AtsuMina...Finally! Haha.. No one knew about MariMii's Secrets!


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