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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 18 UPDATED 11/26
« Reply #120 on: November 27, 2011, 09:16:37 AM »
why!!!! why!!! taka... please be okay~~~  :bleed eyes:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 19 UPDATED 11/28
« Reply #121 on: November 28, 2011, 12:04:13 PM »
Enjoy.. :P

Part 19
 
        The captain had woken up …first thing on her mind was her precious Acchan. “Atsuko? ... where are you?..”  She woke up rubbing her sleepy eyes. The ace blushed knowing that the captain was calling out for her.. “I’m right here beside you Minami.” The ace stated as she start grasping the captain’s hand. The captain responded with a forced weak smile. “Seems like this is my favorite place to be huh?.” the captain jokingly said. “Minami.. please don’t ever scare me like that again. If I lose you, I wouldn’t know what to do anymore..” “Don’t worry, I’ll be okay..”  “ And I’m so sorry about the misunderstanding from before. I should of known bet--” “Shh…you don’t have to explain anything to me Atsuko… I heard everything that you’ve said to me when I was in a coma, I just couldn’t respond in that deep sleep.” “..so you know how I feel about you then?” Acchan asked shyly... “Hai..Come closer Atsuko..” Takamina insisted.  The ace begins to move closer... now both their eyes met. Acchan got lost in her glistening brown eyes. Staring at each other..Takamina spoke first. “I love you Atsuko.” “I lo—“Before the ace can say “I love you” back. Takamina already clutched Acchan’s head from behind pulling her in for a kiss. The kiss started out slow and very passionate. As the ace responded to it.. the kiss got even more intense..they were beginning to fight for dominance..at one point they had broken it gasping for some air but continued kissing afterwards. Things were beginning to heat up as the ace changes her position..she is now on top of the small captain… there was no stopping them at this rate. Acchan’s heart began to race faster against Takamina’s chest as she transfers her puni hands towards the aces lower frame.

   The ace was really anxious to remove the captains garment.. Things were getting hotter and heavier.. then there was a loud thud..they had stopped because of it. (When Acchan started moving quicker, she accidentally made Takamina’s head hit the head board.) “Ittaii..my head..” Takamina laughed. “Minami..are you okay?..are you hurt?!? I’m so sorry!!!” “HAHAHAHA Atsuko,you’re so clumsy!” “Mou..Minami don’t make fun of me..I ruined the moment didn’t I?” She pouted.. “Aww..don’t pout ..or your face will get stuck like that” Takamina teased.  “I’m glad we stopped though…I don’t want my first time to be in a hospital.. It’s Kowaiiiiiii” Acchan said in a serious tone. “Yeah let’s not rush into it,I don’t know what I was thinking..” Takamina added. *Knock knock* Acchan quickly jumped off of Takamina’s bed. “Minami!! You’re awake!” Tomochin came in with a huge smile. “Acchan your hair is a mess..what happened?” Tomochin added “Ermm..errmm..i woke up on the wrong side of the bed today I think.”  Takamina couldn’t help but giggle at her excuse. “Hi Tomomi!” the captain said with high energy. “You sure sound like you’re feeling well today..are you excited to see me!? hehe.” Tomochin exclaimed “Mouu…she’s so full of herself!! Minami is only thinking of me..not you!!” the ace scream in her head. “Haha sure that too…but actually I’m happy because I finally got a girlfriend.”  “Girlfriend?!? Who said that I was your girlfriend?” Acchan said sticking out her tongue.  “EH!!! If you don’t want to be my girlfriend..I’ll ask Tomomi to be then!” Acchan began to show her angry face.. “Uh oh..I’m scared now..I’m just kidding!! Please don’t kill me Honey.” She smiled at Acchan. “Oh..I see..” Tomochin said sounding disappointed. “Well I just wanted to come in and say hi..i’ll be on my way now..see you guys at practice!” Tomochin was happy for Takamina although disappointed in a way. “As long as she’s happy..that’s all that matters.. Best of luck to you two” Tomochin thought in her head while walking away..

   “Attttttt—su—koo----!  Please don’t be mad at me..I was just kidding” “You just don’t when to stop do you!?” Acchan poked her pointing finger at her lovers torso multiple times.. “Ittaii.. hehe..Don’t worry! From now on it will be Everyday Acchan.” Hearing those words the ace cheeks start to turn tomato red. “Eh..don’t be so corny..will ya?! The ace replied. “EEEEEH! The things I get for trying to be sweet..haha.. Ne Atsuko..When I get discharged..let’s go on a real date..just the two of us…Ne??..”  “Uh…… how about NO!” “IYAYA! Don’t make me beg Acchan…you’re such a tsundere!!” “Fine! I’ll agree to go only because you’re in a hurt condition.”

TBC...

LOLOLOL Acchan is so mean to her lover but thats how she shows her affection.  :nya: :on woohoo: :on cigar:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 19 UPDATED 11/28
« Reply #122 on: November 28, 2011, 12:29:25 PM »
uwaaaa~~~  :nya: what a lovely couple~~ I'm so happy~~  Go Go AtsuMina~~ :on woohoo:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 19 UPDATED 11/28
« Reply #123 on: November 28, 2011, 12:30:05 PM »
lolz~  XD

i thought Takamina is weak  :shocked ...this call power of love, doesn't it?  :lol:  :smhid

Acchan is so mean. hahaha.  :grin:

so good that they're together now.  :heart:  my Atsumina!!!!!  :cow:  XD (fangirling~)

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 19 UPDATED 11/28
« Reply #124 on: November 28, 2011, 01:13:38 PM »
They're finally get to be together (Acchan and Takamina)... happy ending for them...

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 19 UPDATED 11/28
« Reply #125 on: November 28, 2011, 02:01:59 PM »
Yes!!! They are finally together!!! Acchan and Takamina :wub: :inlove:
Haha.. Acchan what a tsundere XD

Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
Hope you update soon XD

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 19 UPDATED 11/28
« Reply #126 on: November 28, 2011, 02:03:30 PM »
Yea! Taka and Acchan finally together!!! :twothumbs

Although I pity Tomochin.. but that's for the best :)

Acchan is such a tsundere :wub:

Thanks for the Update :peace:
Please Update Soon :bow:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 19 UPDATED 11/28
« Reply #127 on: November 29, 2011, 02:59:42 AM »
When I read "that" part I was wondering "hey, aren't they in the hospital and Takamina has just woken up XD?" Luckily you stopped the scene in time or else Tomochin might have stepped in and saw and she would go  :nervous

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 19 UPDATED 11/28
« Reply #128 on: November 29, 2011, 06:15:03 AM »
yeah the kiss scene was the best part.. jajaj poor takaboy you need to be happy your wifey demands..

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 19 UPDATED 11/28
« Reply #129 on: November 29, 2011, 08:56:29 AM »
FINALLY!!!!!! The are together!!!! Hehe hormones ^^
Poor Tomochin T_T but Chiyuu is here

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 20 UPDATED 12/2/11
« Reply #130 on: December 02, 2011, 06:23:54 AM »
Part 20

         Takamina was discharged from the hospital a week later after being fully healed. “Minami… Where are we going at this time of night?” The ace asks while being blind folded by her girlfriend. “Don’t worry, we’re almost there.” Takamina chuckled. “Grrr… this better be good! How much longer is this walk going to be?! My legs are about to fall off!” “Just a bit more, hang on a little longer honey.” “Is this what you call a date? It’s 10 o’clock at night.. I’m tired.” the ace pouted. “Okay, we’re here” Takamina unfolded the blind off of Acchan’s eyes. “Now, open your eyes.”

   “Wowwwwww…Suggoiii ne!” the ace shouted. As she opens her eyes, she realized she was on top of a cliff where she can see the whole city view light up at night, in Tokyo. “How did you manage find this place Minami?” The ace clings onto the captain tightly. “I used to come here all the time when I was little, to get away from my problems... I thought I’d share it with you. Now when I’m angry or frustrated…you’d know where to find Me.” she kisses acchan on the forehead. “I love you Minami” Acchan said with her forhead attached to Takamina’s. “I love you too..but that’s not all, look over there.” She pointed to a spread blanket/sheet on the ground with a basket full of goodies. “Oh my god Minami, it’s amazing.”

    “Come on… lets go sit down” Takamina suggested. “I brought your favorite food.“ “Kyaaaa, you’re so sweet. No one else knows me like you do.” The ace said.. who couldn’t stop smiling. “So are you having a good time so far? See it wasn’t that bad was it?” “Hai, I guess it made up for the long walk.” the ace mumbles while chewing with her mouth full. “You look really cute tonight Atsuko..even when you’re eating.”“Mouu...Minami don’t tease me..” she  stopped chewing her food.

   “Marry me.” Takamina suddenly said out of the blues… Acchan was shock,she thought she heard wrong so she stared while giving a blank expression. There was a moment of silence between the two lovers. “Ah..Itt-itaaiii..” Takamina scream while holding onto her own chest… “What’s wrong!?” the ace panicked. “Are you okay Minami!?"  “I’m going to die.” the captain replied. “Die? what do you mean die?” Acchan asked ,still panicking like crazy. Takamina finally finishes her sentence. “I’m going to die if you don’t marry me.” She says pulling out a ring. “Does this ring look familiar to you Atsuko?” “Oh my god, is that?” “Yes it is…” “The ring that I wanted from New York!? But how’d you know? Only Miichan knew…” “Well remember how you made fun of me, saying that I was stalking you that day?..actually I was.” Takamina chuckled. Acchan was blushing like there’s no tomorrow. “Yes, I’ll marry you Takahashi Minami.” Their lips met..embracing one another. “Your kiss never fails to send chills going down my spine Minami” “What? Did the tsundere princess just finally say something sweet?” Takamina teased. “Don’t get so used it!” Acchan said jokingly. They both sat there staring out into the city. Acchan who is sitting between the captain’s legs fell soundly asleep in Takamina’s arm.

Tbc...

PS. Sorry this part is a little short and boring but oh my god...writing this i think i just developed Diabetes. Too much sweet in this one hahahah. :wub:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 20 UPDATED 12/2
« Reply #131 on: December 02, 2011, 06:37:29 AM »
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“Marry me.” Takamina suddenly said out of the blues… Acchan was shock,she thought she heard wrong so she stared while giving a blank expression.
Yes!! I had the same expression as Acchan before I went.. waaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!  :ptam-glow: Taka proposed!!!  :ptam-shy:

I'm so in the good mood right now~~~  :gmon twirl: weeee~~~ I need AtsuMina wedding~~  :gmon flowers:

This chapter really dangerous for me~~ Diabetes~~  :gmon no:  But I love it!!!!  :gmon hot:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 20 UPDATED 12/2
« Reply #132 on: December 02, 2011, 08:10:41 AM »
She proposed!!! Oh fuck yeah!!!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 20 UPDATED 12/2
« Reply #133 on: December 02, 2011, 08:30:04 AM »
yea takaboy like a man propose your wifey.. jaja but be careful mayba sexadicchan want to star with the honeymoon :D


so sweet chapter i like it

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 20 UPDATED 12/2
« Reply #134 on: December 02, 2011, 08:40:01 AM »
kyaaa !!  :gmon flowers: :gmon flowers: Taka u're the man! Finally you proposed her! So sweeeet  :gmon heartu:
eh?? Still TBC??
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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 20 UPDATED 12/2
« Reply #135 on: December 03, 2011, 03:07:17 AM »
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~

Takamina already proposed  :ptam-glow: :ptam-glow: :ptam-glow:

I need the next chapter..
YOU MUST UPDATE IT NOW... UPDATE NOW... UPDATE NOW... UPDATE NOW!!!  :on voodoo: :on voodoo:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 21 UPDATED 12/19
« Reply #136 on: December 20, 2011, 05:53:00 AM »
Part 21

Next day @ Practice.

   “Acchan... Why are you smiling so much today? Did something happen between you two?” Yuko teased moving her eyebrows up and down, perverted like. The aces face begins to flush in red as she remembers her unforgettable date last night. “Hey! It’s not like that at all!!” The captain yells flailing her arms around. Yuko stood there dazed and drooling as her imagination runs wild. Haruna then pulled one side of the squirrel’s ear snapping her out of her trance. “Sometimes I feel like I should put you in a cage and lock you up.” Haruna says to her girlfriend. “Ittai..itai! Gomen ne, Nyan Nyan. Please let go, I promise I’ll stop.” Yuko begged. “Get your mind out the gutter, you ecchi!” Takamina added shouting as her cheeks partially turned rosy due to embarrassment.  “Not yet Yuko, but pretty soon and hopefully it’ll be something worth waiting for.” Acchan said chuckling joining in on the fun.

   “HHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH?” Takamina shrieked standing there stunned and dumbfounded with her eyes widened.  “I’m just kidding Minami.” She chuckled again kissing her lover on the cheek. “Whew!” Takamina shouted in relief wiping the sweat off her forehead. “Takamina is someone who believes in sex after marriage.” Acchan stated while stretching her arm slowly trying to show off her ring. “Is that an engagement ring!? ” Haruna exclaimed! “the ring is GORGEOUS!” she says while giving Yuko a death glare. “Nyan Nyan! Don’t worry I’ll get you one when we graduate.” She says running off hiding behind Takamina. “But how are you guys going to get married if it’s impossible, especially when you’re in AKB?” Yuko questioned. “Eh..I never thought about that” Acchan pouted scratching the back of her head. Takamina already had a plan in mind.” Don’t worry Acchan, we will get married somehow or some way even if it takes forever!” she said reassuring her lover. Acchan’s pout instantly turned into a smile. “I love you My Minami” she said hugging the short captain from behind.  “Maeda, Aki-p wants you to go up to his office for a personal meeting.” his assistance stated fetching the ace. “Hai.” She answered following the assistant up to the office. “Wait for me after..and let’s go home together?” she whispered to the captain before walking away. “Okay.” Takamina replied with a blush.

   After the meeting was over, acchan made her way down the stairs in a hurry. Almost running past the doors and out of the building she stopped only to spot her adorable chibi girlfriend sound asleep next to a plant outside. From seeing such an angelic sight, the ace smiled. “Minami…” she murmurs. There was no response from the captain. The ace got close enough to where she can lean in for a kiss on the lips. Takamina was awoken by it..she opened her eyes slowly smiling. “Are you trying to take advantage of me while I’m sleeping pervert!” The captain teased. “Why yes I was, just kidding” The ace chuckled.  “Minami, I’m sorry that I made you wait for so long.” “Don’t worry it’s only 4 o’clock.” Takamina replied. “Let me make it up to you. Katsudon is on me.”Acchan offered. “Okay!!!!!” Takamina answered quickly and excitedly to her favorite food. After Lunch, the two roamed around the downtown shopping strip hand in hand. “Ahhhhhhh! Atsumina!!!!” Three random girls screamed in unison running to ask for their autograph. Takamina immediately let go of her hand. 

       “Atsumina?”  Takamina questioned. “Oh..Atsumina is Atsuko and your name combined.” One of the girls answered. “Eh..is that how you see our image?” Acchan giggled. “Yeah, you guys make such a cute couple! Too bad it will probably ruin your reputation if you guys we’re really dating!” the other girl added. “But I would be okay with it.” The girl smiled. Takamina’s beaming smile soon disappears after hearing that they both can lose fans due to their relationship. “Bye girls, thanks for the autographs.” The three girls walked away fangirling. As soon as they left, the ace reached out her hands to meet Takamina’s hand but she pulled away. “Atsuko let’s not hold hands in public.” “But why??? I want to.” Acchan whined. “Please just listen to me.” Takamina said in a serious tone. “I don’t care what other people think of us!” Acchan exclaimed. “Acchan, please just listen…you just recently got really popular, I don’t want you to lose fans over this…and Aki-p just asked you to star in another drama. If this gets out, you will lose everything you’ve worked hard for and I know how badly you want to become an actress.” “I don’t care! I will give up everything just for you.” Acchan replied still being stubborn. “What about my dreams, Atsuko?” Finallly understanding the situation, the ace walked in silent not saying a word. “Sighs… I hate seeing you like this.” Takamina said grabbing the ace by the hand. “Let’s go home.” A smile reappears on the aces face.

TBC…      
   
Will they able to keep the relationship a secret anymore? To find out... Stay tunedddddddd. :rofl:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 21 UPDATED 12/19
« Reply #137 on: December 20, 2011, 06:07:31 AM »
Yay! Update!  XD
Oh, Takamina worried about their reputation. She's so thoughtful. I wonder what will happen next? Thank you.

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 21 UPDATED 12/19
« Reply #138 on: December 20, 2011, 06:16:51 AM »
I need an AtsuMina marriage!!!!!  :frustrated:  Update soon!!!!!!!  :kneelbow:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 21 UPDATED 12/19
« Reply #139 on: December 20, 2011, 06:25:30 AM »
omg omg omg atsumina T_T now you are inte real world, in that world there is a person who dont uderstand the "love" word and doesn`t matter the gender.. fight for you wifey atsuko...

sexadicchan make happy you wifey like a boss

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