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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 16 UPDATED 11/21
« Reply #100 on: November 21, 2011, 10:56:50 AM »
Part 16

Atsuko POV

"Who are you?" was the only question that resounded  in my head...When those  three words came out her mouth, it felt like someone pierced a knife through my chest. Suddenly  my world just fell apart in seconds..does this mean her feelings for me are gone?..I feel like breaking down  right now.. but I have to be strong in front of her,she doesn't know who I am anymore. i can't let it end like this..I have to make her remember! I need you Minami, more than ever.

Room

As the ace and Tomochin walks into the room, a little shy voice  echoed across the room.."Gomen ne, I didn't mean to yell at you guys earlier,but hey it's nice to meet you two ..what are your names?" takamina asked.  the ace responded with a sad look while tomochin is getting ready to introduce herself. " I'm To--" before Tomochin could answer, Acchan cuts her off.. " So you really don't remember anything at all?" the ace asked hoping for a positive answer..  "Eh-to.. Sorry I don't remember anything at all" "try to think Minami try.." "Hai I'll try my best" for several minutes the captain was trying to think harder but nothing came to mind. "Ano..i'm sorry,it's not working" "please try harder minami" "erm..hai i'll try again" she tried thinking hard as possible then a flashback hit her. She began to make faces as she was having the flash back; in that flash back; ( "Fine ,Atsuko..I promise myself..you will never be anything else to me other than a friend.")  "Ahhh! My head, It hurts" the captain scream as her head started to ache..  "It's okay, you can stop.. you don't have to try  anymore..if you do you'll only hurt yourself." Tomochin said with concern and rolling her eyes at the ace. "Ne,minami what did you see?" Acchan still prying. " "Don't force it,takamina will only get worse" tomochin said to Acchan. " uh i'll be fine, well I just remember me standing in an empty hall..I was talking to someone but I couldn't see that person clearly.." " go on minami.." "umm the only thing I can remember was saying" "Fine,Atsuko..I promise myself..you will never be anything else to me other than a friend.” "Eh!?" Tomochin said in shock. "Takamina can only remember her last interactions" Acchan thought. "Do you guys know who  Atsuko is?" the captain asks. "That's he--" Tomochin  tried to answer but was interrupted again by the ace.  "We don't know any Atsuko,right Tomomi?" the ace  nudged Tomochin to lie. "Oh yea.. we don't know anyone name Atsuko" Tomochin agreed..trying to play along since that's what achhan was signaling for. "oh, so what are your names? You guys never told me yet" " Owh..my name is Acchan and this girl right here is Tomomi,we're all really good friends" "Acchan? That's a weird name" Takamina chuckled. "Hehe yeah I guess it is" the ace replied. "Tomomi...I know this is really straight forward of me to say...but.." The captain pauses for a short time. "Heeeh?! Go on say it, I don't mind..whatever it is." "You're..eh,how do I say this..erm..very very gorgeous." The ace was really surprise to hear that. She gave a hurt look but did not say anything. "Ah,arigatou" tomochin answered turning red.

Takamina POV

I don't know who I am..my head, it's in pain.. I can't stand it. These people..they call me Minami..so that must be my name..the doctor explained to me what had happen.I'm trying to process everything, I'm really scared right now. Suddenly two girls walked in that I seen from before.. I couldn't help but stare at one of the girls, it was like love at first sight when I seen her smile at me. She is really  beautiful.. I want to know her name so I asked. Ah..so her name is Tomomi,what a pretty  name to match a pretty face. After I told her how gorgeous she was..I seen a figure waiting near the door,it was a guy..he looks like hes waiting for Acchan because he keeps looking at her. So I asked her.. "is that your boyfriend at the door?"I giggled teasing her. She turned to look back and hesitated to answer.."Oh, hai that's takeru kun." She introduces him to me. I think they're a cute couple. "We have to go to our interview" he said to her. Soon they both left,she said she'll be back later..it seems she cares alot about me and I appreciate that.These  girls they claim to know me,They told me that they are my friends but should I believe it?although I can't remember anything or anyone..they seem like nice people so maybe I should just put my trust in them. I still wonder who Atsuko is though..why do I have this flashback with that name in it?does she mean something to me?

TBC...

Things are becoming more complicated,will Takamina end up with Acchan or Tomochin? Stay tune !

lol sorry i made things crazier but its too keep the series going well thank you again for reading. :bow: :bow: :banghead:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 16 UPDATED 11/21
« Reply #101 on: November 21, 2011, 11:16:39 AM »
You just switch ON my depression mode again~~  :fainted:  Taka!!! please remember!!!!  :err: 

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 16 UPDATED 11/21
« Reply #102 on: November 21, 2011, 11:33:12 AM »
WHATTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  :on thumbb: DON'T DARE TO MAKE IT TAKATOMO!!  :on voodoo: :on voodoo:
you broke my heart  :on cloudeye: oh my AtsuMinaaaa  :mon whine:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 16 UPDATED 11/21
« Reply #103 on: November 21, 2011, 12:08:02 PM »
Oh YES!!!! UPDATE!!!!! XD
OMG :w00t: Takamina love in first sight with Tomochin????? :panic:
I can't wait to read more about what will happen later!!! :banghead:
Will Takamina end up with Acchan or Tomochin???!!!! :? XD :wub: :inlove:

Thank You So Much for the Update :) :twothumbs :thumbsup
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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 16 UPDATED 11/21
« Reply #104 on: November 21, 2011, 03:35:11 PM »
 :OMG:
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!

I want Atsuminaaaa~ Not Takatomo~  :on cloudeye:
BUT!!! it is so awesome  :luvluv1:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 16 UPDATED 11/21
« Reply #105 on: November 21, 2011, 07:10:25 PM »
No!!! My poor Takacchan!!! Takamina! You have to remember!!!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 16 UPDATED 11/21
« Reply #106 on: November 22, 2011, 05:17:02 AM »
oh my god!! atusmina!!!!

poor acchan but i feel that she deserves this T_T gomen ne..

and takatomo its good for me but just a little.. acchan need to fight agains tomochin and win of course :D

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 17 UPDATED 11/22
« Reply #107 on: November 22, 2011, 06:24:17 AM »
6 P.M. @ Night

   The ace was now done with her interview. On her way out of the studio she had a chat with her co-star. “Ano..Takeru-kun, I have something very important to tell you.” “Yes? What is it?” He replied “I’m sorry..We can’t see each other anymore.”  “Why not?” He asked sadly “I’m really sorry that I didn’t tell you from the beginning but before I met you..I was already in love with someone else.” “Ah..souka I understand, well you’re a really wonderful girl.. Whomever that is that has your heart is one lucky person.”  “Aaa..Thank you so much for understanding; we can still hang out sometimes though!” “Ah yes,that would be nice..” He chuckled. “Well see ya! Be safe and tell Minami I said hi.” “Haiiiii! I will”. She shouted as they parted ways. Before heading back to the hospital to see Takamina, the ace stopped by the flower shop. “Excuse me sir, do you guys hold the flower called Forget me not?” “You’re in luck little lady! We actually have one left in stock.” Acchan was happy to hear that because that’s what the captain gave to her on Valentine’s day.. “Maybe if I get her these flowers,she will remember the feelings we shared.” The ace thought while smiling. “I can only be hopeful.” As the ace walks into the room, she stopped when she seen that Tomochin was still there feeding the captain. “I’m sorry,did I interrupt something?” the ace asked in a hurtful tone. “No..no..come in Acchan” Takamina insisted with a smile. “I guess I’ll get going now...” Tomochin stated. “Please..don’t go.” The captain pouted. “Gomen ne, Minami..I can’t because of work and all..you’ll get discharged soon so til then we can see each other ok?”  “You promise?” “Don’t worry I’ll keep my words” Tomochin winked. “Wait, I need to speak with you outside the room before I go Acchan” The ace walked out with her. “Why did you make me to lie to her? She has the right to know who you are Atsuko.” “I can’t tell her who I am..I don’t want us to start out in bad terms.” “You have to tell her soon before she finds out your real name… and she’ll want to know more about what happened between you two.” “Thank you for not saying anything.” “It’s okay but I don’t want you to keep lying to her so..make sure you tell her. Okay I gotta go now so take care of her..Bye”

   “Here, I got these for you.It’s called forget me not” Acchan handed the flowers to Takamina as she walked back in. “Sugggoii..it’s so pretty.” After smelling the flower and looking at it for a little. Takamina head started to hurt again, she lifted her hands to her forehead. A flashback is starting to happen again. (She sees herself handing the same kind of flowers to that unclear person.) “Minami, are you okay!? Should I get the doctor??” “No..It’s okay..the doctor says it’s normal but I hate it when my head hurts out of nowhere. Anyways never mind that... Today I asked Tomomi out on a date, would you and your boyfriend like to go with us?” Acchan felt a sudden heaving feeling in her chest like she couldn’t breathe anymore..when the captain told her. “Actually I broke up with him today.” “Eh! Why? You guys look so good together.” “Because…” Takamina waited for an answer..”Well you don’t have to tell me if you don’t want to..would you like to join us with just yourself then? I want to know more about myself and I know I can count on you to tell me.”  Acchan didn’t know whether to say yes or no..she didn’t want to witness the love of her life being with someone else. “Erm..okay then.” She agreed just to keep an eye on them.

Next day…

Takamina was discharged and able to go home..her mom and dad came to pick her up. As she walked into her room..she thought to herself “Wow..it’s so pink in here..I guess I was a really girly person” she chuckled. She then jumped and lied in her bed. “Finally I’m home.” She said out loudly to herself. Next to her bed was a backpack, she was curious what kind of person she was so she decided to open it. In that back pack there was a ring and a balled up letter. When she had seen the ring and paper, her head begins to hurt again.. Another flashback; (She sees herself buying the ring for someone who really wanted it and she sees herself crumbling a love letter) After seeing another flashback she just decided to ignore it since it’s in the past. She was in the middle of opening the paper but was interrupted by a yell. “Minami! Acchan is here to see you.” Her mom yelled out. “Okay mom! Let her up here..” As Takamina yelled back,she dropped the letter on the floor forgetting about it. “Hi! Minami” the ace said excited to see her. “Hey, wait up here,let me go get you a drink and some snacks Acchan.” “Hai!” the ace said happily.

Atsuko POV

   First thing when I woke up, I went straight to Minami’s house. I couldn’t stand being away from her for one day. I wanted to see her every chance I get and try to remind her of who I am. As I walked into her room, she already offered me something to eat and drink. Ahh…she still the same old Minami, so sweet and caring. While waiting for her I found something on the floor, a letter. I really wanted to know what it says so I sneaked a peek. In that letter:It says she loves me but she didn’t know the words to say. It says that she never knew that she could ever feel this way and that she only wishes someday that I would feel the same. Tears start to develop in my eyes as I continued reading. I can’t believe she kept the sweetest secret from my heart for so long… I love her…but someone else has her heart now...We hung out all day, it was fun..she also met the other members.

Three days later..

    “Acchan, are you ready for our three way date?” “Erm I guess so.. Where are we going?” “To the beach! It’s Tomomi’s idea” she said smirking. “Grr..I bet she just want to show off her body to Minami” Acchan dazed in her thoughts. “Let’s go Acchan!” They arrived to the beach in the afternoon... Tomochin begins stripping into her bikini right in front of Takamina.. “Wow..look at her,she’s a bombshell isn’t she?” Takamina asked nudging the ace.. The ace didn’t reply back but walked away mad. “Eh? What’s wrong with her?..” the captain thought. All day they lay in the sun, swam, and made sand castles. They also had drinks since they all just turned 20.  Takamina was the only one who couldn’t handle a little alcohol and started wobbling. It was clear that she was drunk.  She began flirting with Tomochin a lot. “Give me a kiss TO-MO-MI..” She said slowly. “No..” Tomochin said shyly turning around blushing. “Aww, come on just one.” she closes her eyes and puckered out her lips.” Acchan was really pissed so she slapped Takamina. “Itaaii, What was that for?” “You’re drunk, go home! “ Acchan yelled.  Basically the ace slapped her out of her trance. Her head begins to hurt again.. “Ah not again.” Flashback; ( Someone is screaming "ECCHI!!!!” and slapped her)

TBC...

Yay! she's slowing remembering every heart felt moment with Acchan   :nervous :nervous

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 17 UPDATED 11/22
« Reply #108 on: November 22, 2011, 06:31:03 AM »
 :w00t: she started to regain her memories!!!!!  :cow:    Taka!!! please remember!!!!  :mon blowhorn: 

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 17 UPDATED 11/22
« Reply #109 on: November 22, 2011, 06:44:45 AM »
hahaha i knew you'd be happy flean!!! :ptam-ok: :onionshower:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 17 UPDATED 11/22
« Reply #110 on: November 22, 2011, 07:07:09 AM »
Takamina never could forget Atsuko
Thanks so much for update

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 17 UPDATED 11/22
« Reply #111 on: November 22, 2011, 08:16:41 AM »
Oh!! :w00t: Takamina starting to remember her moments with Acchan!!!

I was a bit shocked when Acchan slapped Takamina :shocked well.. she's jealous!!! XD
Takamina being flirty :lol:

Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
Hope you would update soon :bow: :bow:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 17 UPDATED 11/22
« Reply #112 on: November 22, 2011, 08:27:14 AM »
I want my Takacchan together but I'm feeling bad for Tomochin

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 17 UPDATED 11/22
« Reply #113 on: November 22, 2011, 08:40:31 AM »
jajj takamina drunk is hilarious..

Im really feel respect for tomomi because until now she is not take advange about takamina... shes is really a good person

Acchan you need to be more fast come on go and kiss takamina!! like a boss!! jaja ok dont do that maybe you will scare her :D

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 17 UPDATED 11/22
« Reply #114 on: November 22, 2011, 09:37:45 AM »
 :w00t: Drunk Takamina is being flirty XD
 :) Takamina starting to regain her memory with Acchan :D
sigh* :smhid Takamina telling Acchan how nice Tomochin's body is... She's so... air headed?? :?

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 18 UPDATED 11/26
« Reply #115 on: November 26, 2011, 06:23:23 PM »
Part 18

                After that incident, Takamina tried calling Acchan several times to apologize for the way she had acted. Acchan ignored her…every call went to voicemail. “Please leave a message after the tone. *Beeeeeeeeep*” was all she heard repeatedly, so she decide to leave a message. “Acchan,please pick up..you can’t avoid me forever..we have practice together tomorrow. I don’t know why you’re upset but I hope we can talk about it.” *clicks and hang up*

Next day @ Practice

                Takamina spotted Acchan in the studio... “Acchan! Hey, Acchan!” she called out. The ace started to walk away faster, ignoring the captain presence… “Hey, wait up” she pulled one side of the aces shoulder. “Why are you so mad at me?” There was a long silence between the two..”Are you serious? You’re not going to answer me?”Takamina asked. Finally minutes have passed..”Gomen ne..I think it’s best if we don’t speak at all.” The ace stated. Somehow those words upset the captain’s feelings. “But…why?..I thought we are friends.” “Please just respect my decisions, okay? Thanks bye.” After practice was finished. The ace took a cab to go home. “Taxi, can you please take me to this address?” Takamina really wanted to know what was bothering the ace so she trailed her from behind in another cab. “Please follow that cab sir.”

In Atsuko’s cab

                “Aren’t you that famous Maeda Atsuko girl from Akb48?” the cab driver asked while smirking. “Yeah, it’s me” Something was strange about the way the cab driver looked at her. “I’m a very big fan of yours.” “Owh really? Thanks.” She replied. “Um sorry sir but I think you’re going the wrong way.”she added.  “Don’t worry I’m just taking a short cut, it’s faster this way.” He said with an untrusting look. “Owh okay”  Suddenly the car stops at an abandoned warehouse… what she didn’t know about him is that he’s a stalker, he knew that Acchan takes this cab route home all the time. “Excuse me but why are we stopping here?” “Maeda I’ve been watching you for a while now…you’re so scrumptious looking!" He licked his lip. "Today you will finally be mine.” he said holding a baseball bat taunting her. Acchan was really frightened; he tied her up and left her in the warehouse, while he makes a phone call outside. Meanwhile Takamina seen that the other cab had stop at a weird location..”Okay, sir you can let me off right here.” “That will be $12.57” She handed him a $20. “Keep the change sir.” “Thanks cutie, I’m off now...Bye.” he said. “What the hell?? Where’s Acchan?” She thought. She was suspicious so she text Tomochin. In the text message: “4848 shibuya st. bring the cops with you. “ Takamina snuck into the warehouse... the creepy stalker guy didn’t pay any attention while arguing on the phone. The captain seen that Acchan was tied up with a sock in her mouth. “Acchan! Are you okay!?” she asked as she untied her and took the sock out of her mouth. “Thank god, how did you know I was here?” the ace asked in relief. “I followed you here.” “Becareful that guy out there is very dangerous.” The ace stated. Both girls begin to sneak out quietly but Takamina stepped on a branch on the ground by accident causing a loud crunch. He then faces their direction. “Hey !!!!! come back here you little B*tches!” he screamed and began chasing them as they ran. He finally caught up to them..he was really angry so he swung the bat at Acchan. Before it reached her, Takamina used her body as a shield.  He smacked the steel bat right into her skull, causing blood to drip from her head. “Noo!!! Minami!! Stop please.. just stop hitting her,I’ll do whatever you want!” the ace begged and cried. Takamina mind went blank for a second as random flash backs of memories with Acchan struck her. Before he can hit her again,someone pulled the bat back from his hand. “Stop right there!!!! You are under arrest for kidnapping and attempted murder.” The cop pointed the gun at him.. forcefully arresting the criminal.. “Minami!! why did you do that for!? It should’ve been me…I’m so sorry, why do I always bring so much trouble around you?.. I swear I won’t be mad at you anymore If you just hang on longer…” The ace wept. Takamina tried to speak... She can barely say anything but managed to say: “Atsuko.. I’d risk my own life just for your safety, you mean everything to me...” Takamina said as she fainted. “Atsuko?...did she just called me Atsuko?” By hearing the name Atsuko, she knew that Takamina remembers everything now. The impact on her head caused her full memory to come back. Takamina was once again rushed to the hospital in an ambulance.

TBC…

my poor takamini :( :ptam-hbk: ok bye bye thanks for reading people! I appreciate the comments hehe!

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 18 UPDATED 11/26
« Reply #116 on: November 26, 2011, 07:05:10 PM »
Yea!! Update!!! :peace:

Takamina memory finally come back!!!! :w00t:
 :( ... Takamina was rush to the hospital again.. :cry:
Hope everything will be alright..

Thanks for the Update :thumbsup
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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 18 UPDATED 11/26
« Reply #117 on: November 26, 2011, 07:12:26 PM »
HOORAY!!!!!!!!! An Update~~~ :thumbsup

Thank you so much for Updating this :)
I've been wanting to know what happen next XD

Yea!! Yea!! Takamina finally remember Atsuko.. although a bit hurt... :nervous
 :( Poor Takamina... she was rushed to the hospital again.... :panic:
Hopefully everything will be alright in the end XD

Thanks again for the update!!! Please do update soon because I want to know what happen to Minami.. :(
Really curious here XD :bow: :bow:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 18 UPDATED 11/26
« Reply #118 on: November 27, 2011, 03:48:32 AM »
Minami begin to regain her memory back... But was rush to the hospital.. please continue... want to know what happened next....

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 18 UPDATED 11/26
« Reply #119 on: November 27, 2011, 07:42:47 AM »
cool.. old minami is back.. now make happy to your wifey..

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