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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 13 UPDATED 11/7
« Reply #80 on: November 08, 2011, 06:04:17 AM »
yeah!! takaboy show maeda who is the boss!! :D.. jajaj ok i forgive about takeru.kun but... update soon please

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 13 UPDATED 11/7
« Reply #81 on: November 08, 2011, 07:05:08 AM »
Hmm..should i post my update right now? i am suddenly in a writing mood..what do you guys think,should i do it? :onionwhip: :onionwhip:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 13 UPDATED 11/7
« Reply #82 on: November 08, 2011, 07:29:57 AM »
^ Please update....  :bow: :bow:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 14 UPDATED 11/8
« Reply #83 on: November 08, 2011, 07:49:02 AM »
Part 14

“Why did you ignore my calls?” Takamina asked. “No reason..” the ace replied. “Never mind that” The captain said grabbing both the aces hands. “Atsuko.. From the first time I met you... we’ve had a misunderstanding, I thought that you were obnoxious, selfish, and  an ugly hearted spoiled brat. I know that we didn’t like each other before. We’ve had our differences but being with you every day changed my mind, I’ve gotten to know you a lot better..you’re not as bad as I thought you were. You’re actually really sweet,caring  and beautiful inside and out. We’ve became closer..so close that I’ve fallen for you. ..I love everything about you and every inch of you..especially when you smile and your nose starts to wrinkle..it’s so cute..Oh  and when you get jealous..I secretly like it because it shows that you feel the same way for me, what I feel for you. It’s really hard not to fall in love with you really. Who would of ever thought that hate would turn into a form of love..right?  It took me awhile to realize it. I think it must be fate that you also turned out to be the girl I was looking for from that New year’s night.. Now that all of the missing puzzle pieces are put together.. all you have to do now is accept my confession and we can finally be..Daisuki Atsuko..Daisuki.” The halls went silent..the ace was left speechless with tears forming in her eyes..she was moved by her words but she knew that everything she said is a lie due to the bathroom incident. “Say something Atsuko..”  Takamina gestured  “Gomen ne..Minami… Although your words were touching..I only see you as a friend, we can never be anything else other than that..You’re just confused at the moment.” “No! no I’m not..I love you Atsuko. Just give me a chance to prove it to you please.” The captain tugged the aces arm.. “I am really sorry Minami.. I really am..I ‘m already in a relationship with someone else” “Who???? Miichan??” “No…it’s not her..” “If not her than who?!? Tell me!!” Takamina yelled from frustration. “Sato Takeru..” “The guy from the drama??” “Yes..” “Seriously??him?” Takamina started to sob.. “So I guess I should give up then right?” Takamina tears started dripping from her eyes.  “Yes..me and you could never work..you’re not my type,and you’re a girl anyways.” Acchan also added trying to make the captain feel as awful as she did from before.. The captain was very angry with what Acchan just said to her..it was unnecessary, especially when she was spilling her heart out.. “How could you be so cold? Fine,Atsuko..I promise myself..you will never be anything else to me other than a friend.” Those words struck the aces heart..Takamina said it so boldly.
 
The captain couldn’t handle it anymore and ran off out of the building balling her eyes out. The sentence “I promise myself..you will never be anything else to me other than a friend.” kept repeating in her head as she cried.  Running across the street, Takamina didn’t pay any attention to the moving traffic on the road. When a driver seen her, his car didn’t stop on time. “BAM” She smacked right into the car leaving her bleeding and unconscious. “Someone please call 911!!!” the driver who doesn’t have a cell phone yelled out for help.” After some minutes, an ambulance arrived to take her away. Meanwhile..Acchan was left there stunned in the hallway..Yuko and Haruna walked into the hall fill with laughter and all smiles..  “Hey Atsuko, congrats to the both of you..you must be happy huh?” Haruna asked cheerfully.  “Happy? Why would I be..and congrats to what?” “Didn’t Minami just confessed to you? I’ve been practicing with her for a while now for the real thing today.” “Practice??..You mean..what I heard in the bathroom last month was all fake?” “Oh..You heard it? Gomen ne. Yep it was all for you.” “Oh my god…so everything she just said to me now was the truth?” “Yes it was all real..why?” “I had a misunderstanding.” “Oh.. haha never, I’m with Yuko, you know.. but don’t tell anyone and I won’t tell on you guys” Haruna winked at Acchan  “Kamisama! I have to go.” Before she can head to the door..Aki-P stepped in. “Everyone I have bad news to share with you.” “Nanii? Nanii?” Everyone was startled to know what was going on.  Aki-p sighed and hesitated to announce the news. “Takmina…she..”  “Minami?? Minami what??” everyone asked with concern. “She..huys, she was just involved in a car accident. She is rushed to the hospital right now.” “WHAT!?!?!” the aced was dumbfounded. Acchan pushed everyone out the way and was immediately on her way to the hospital and so was everyone else.

TBC...
 
Now that the misunderstanding is cleared up,what will happen next??   :dizzy: :byebye: Goodnight everyone! don't kill me flean lol
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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 14 UPDATED 11/8
« Reply #84 on: November 08, 2011, 08:11:56 AM »
Ah! Almost but at least it was a kiss ^^

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 14 UPDATED 11/8
« Reply #85 on: November 08, 2011, 08:24:30 AM »
Oi!!! Oi!!!  :scolding:  What have you done to my Taka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!    :frustrated:

She just confessed to Acchan and "BAM!!!"  :mon scare:  NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! 

Do something!!!! Don't make her die, lost her memory or something~~~  :mon fierce:

Better fix this!!! or I~~~  :mon uggh:   :mon kungfu:

ps : sorry if over reacted~~ I got goosebumps when I read this chapter~~  :mon surr:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 14 UPDATED 11/8
« Reply #86 on: November 08, 2011, 08:35:16 AM »
OMG OMG OMG I like it I like it :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:
Hope takamina will be fine :mon determined: Don't kill her :mon worklate:
a little tsundere will be fun :mon evillaff:
I'm waiting your next part :mon pray2: :mon prayer:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 14 UPDATED 11/8
« Reply #87 on: November 08, 2011, 02:34:55 PM »
 :cry: :cry: omg omg omg what have you done to taka?  :bleed eyes: :mon ghost:
please dont kill her and make my Acchan feels guilty for what she just said to taka  :mon pray2: :mon pray2:

Acchan..........go get your love now!  :mon yeah: :frustrated:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 14 UPDATED 11/8
« Reply #88 on: November 08, 2011, 02:54:29 PM »
Oh no!!! my TAKAMINA!!! :cry: :( :bleed eyes:

MY BE SHE WILL LOST HER MEMORY!! :banghead:
 
what gonna happen to ATSUKO and her new Boyfriend.. break up?? :?

Please save ATSUMINA :bow:!!!
UPDATE SOON... NICE CHAPTER... :wub: :inlove:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 14 UPDATED 11/8
« Reply #89 on: November 08, 2011, 04:23:54 PM »
this story are a wonderful !!!!!!!! :luvluv1:
you must go as soon as possible please :pleeease: :dizzy:
poor little Takamina  :gyaaah: q I hope everything right for her! :D
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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 14 UPDATED 11/8
« Reply #90 on: November 09, 2011, 03:36:33 PM »
 :) Yea!! Misunderstanding Cleared~
But..... but.....  :cry: Takamina.... car accident...  :OMG:
Hopefully nothing too bad like 'death' will happen..... just something like memory loss.....  :bow:

Please update more  :mon cute:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 14 UPDATED 11/8
« Reply #91 on: November 09, 2011, 03:38:00 PM »
 :w00t: Confession~~~
And misunderstanding cleared  :mon inluv:

But.... car accident??!!!!!  :stoned:

Please.. nothing too bad....  :on speedy:

Update soon  :onioncheer:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 15 UPDATED 11/16
« Reply #92 on: November 16, 2011, 08:26:51 AM »
Part 15

@ the hospital

“Doctor! Please let me in there.” The ace begged while crying. “I’m sorry Ms., I can’t let you come in unless you’re a family member.” the doctor replied. “Please be patient and wait in the waiting room area like everyone else.” “I’m sorry Minami..it was all my fault. I’m so sorry.” The ace cried out trying to push her way into the emergency room. Two security guard we’re called over..holding the ace back from entering the room. Later on..Miichan and the other members were able to calm her down. “Atsuko, don’t cry.. I promise she will be okay; we don’t want to see you like this, please cheer up.” Miichan said. “Minami is a strong person.” Haruna added. “But it was my fault..If anything happens to her, I blame myself.” “Don’t blame yourself Astuko, there was nothing you could have done to prevent it from happening.” Yuko stated.  Almost two hours has passed, the surgery procedure was finally done. The doctor walked in. The first to jump out of her seat was Acchan.  “Doctor! Is she okay!? What’s her condition?”  The doctor began to shake his head.. “There are some good news and some bad news, what would you guys like to hear first?” “The good” everyone yelled out. “The procedure went well; she is in stable condition right now and alive. Thank god… Usually not many people survive this kind of trauma.” Everyone was relieved to hear the good news. “But what’s the bad news?” Acchan asked in rush.  “…well, she was hit on the head really hard which caused internal bleeding. We were able to stop it but… she has not yet awoken. Sorry to say but we don’t know when she will wake up; it could be days, months, or even years.  I’m sorry guys.”  Sadness was filled in the air within the waiting room.  Everyone was too shock to speak. Most of them began to cry.  As for the ace..  she ran and made her way into the room where the captain was kept stabilized. Holding on to Takamina hands she sobbed non- stop. “Minami...please wake up. I didn’t mean to say any of those things to you. I was just angry, I thought that you were lying to me about how you feel. The truth is I do love you too, everything that you said to me made me happy. If you wake up, we can be together.. Don’t you want that? Please get up! I was stupid to believe that you were in love someone else. I’ll do anything for you but please just wake up! Please…” the ace screamed while weeping.”  Suddenly a hand appeared on the aces shoulder. “Atsuko..  go get some rest, you need it. We’ll take turns taking care of her.” Tomochin insisted.  “No..I don’t want to go. I want to stay right here beside her tonight.” “Alright then, I’ll be here tomorrow, you have work to take care of. Don’t forget about your interviews.” Tomochin added. For several weeks Tomochin and Acchan has been taking turns coming to spend a night with the captain. One night, Tomochin had confessed to Takamina whom she liked.. although she couldn’t hear a thing. “Minami… I know that you and Atsuko have mutual feelings towards one another,but I have always liked you also.. So much that it hurts me to see you like this. I know I stand no chance against the ace so I hope for nothing but the best for you two. Yeah… I know it’s pathetic that I’m telling you now...while you’re unconscious but I’m a coward. A coward of rejection. Sleep well my love” She kissed the captain on the forehead.

A month later

“Where am I?” Takamina asked as she walk in a dark path. “Come my child, walk into the light” A voice from above said. “W-w-what? Who’s there?” the captain stuttered. “Don’t worry my child; I’m here to take you away from all this pain and suffering.” “What do you mean?? I’m fine, nothing is wrong with me” she asked confused. Takamina was so frightened she ran the opposite way from the light. “Ah..souka..I guess it’s not her time yet...” the voice chuckled being amused. He then decided to strike her with a lightning bolt.. it suddenly strucked her from behind.. Then “Bam!” she woke up. Waking up,Takamina seen two girls resting their heads on her bed from both left and right side. Takamina was alarmed as she gotten up… and screamed “where am I?” Acchan and Tomochin heard her voice and immediately got up. “Minami! You’re awake” Acchan said happily embracing the captain tightly. “Eh..Let go of me…Who are you?” takamina said pushing her away. “Ha..that’s not funny Minami,you know who I am!” “Minami? Who’s Minami???” the captain asked. The aces smile soon started to disappear slowly..“Doctor! Doctor please get in here” Tomochin yelled out. The doctor finally came in.. “Sorry but you girls have to leave the room, she’s in a panic state right now.” In the waiting room they await. “What’s wrong with her doctor?” Tomochin asked. “Huys…it seems to me that she have memory loss. She doesn’t remember anything at all but I have explained everything to her.. so she is much more calm now. In a bit you guys can go in and visit her..I told her that you guys are her very good friends.”

TBC…

sorry it's a bit rushed !  :banghead: and thanks everyone for reading my crappy fic!!  :bow:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 15 UPDATED 11/16
« Reply #93 on: November 16, 2011, 08:50:51 AM »
She is not dead yay!!!! But she lost memory T_T

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 15 UPDATED 11/16
« Reply #94 on: November 16, 2011, 08:57:55 AM »
Noooooo drama again!!  :OMG: uhuhuhuhu... I am happy taka is alive, but she lost her memory!! LOST HER FEELING TOWARD ACCHAN!!!  :banghead: :banghead: :bleed eyes:
please, make it happy ending.  :fainted: dont tell me you are going to make TakaTomo instead?  :stoned:
btw, update soon.  :banghead:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 15 UPDATED 11/16
« Reply #95 on: November 16, 2011, 09:08:03 AM »
Lol you read my mind moekare.  ;) haha Jk I'll try to update soon, thanks for reading again oh btw I love ur fics :oops:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 15 UPDATED 11/16
« Reply #96 on: November 16, 2011, 09:21:12 AM »
 :on gay: Thank you so much for the update XD

Takamina :cry: But Thank God (or you :P ) she didn't die :)
Hope you update soon  :mon cute:

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 15 UPDATED 11/16
« Reply #97 on: November 16, 2011, 09:23:38 AM »
Thank you so much for the update :)
Adding Drama XD Yea! But hopefully Takamina will heal soon :thumbsup

Thanks again and hopefully you'll update soon :bow:

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« Reply #98 on: November 16, 2011, 11:50:28 AM »
I almost cried again~ LOL..  :lol:  Luckily taka is okay~~  XD  but she lost her memory???  :smhid

somehow~~ I think that she just pretending not to remember~~  :P

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Re: Who are you? (Atsumina) Part 15 UPDATED 11/16
« Reply #99 on: November 17, 2011, 06:24:36 AM »
wow wow yeah takamina loss her memory, come  on acchan get up and fight for your husband`s memory.. you need to be so strong because you have a rival lover... its gonna be interesting.. i`ll be waiting..

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