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AKB48 Fanfics => AKB48 Fanfics => Topic started by: Mai-chan on July 23, 2012, 12:56:26 PM
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LIST OF CHAPTERS:
Chapter 1 - Double Idol (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1069480#msg1069480)
Chapter 2 part 1- Small Talk (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1071307#msg1071307)
Chapter 2 part 2 - Why did I forget? (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1072328#msg1072328)
Chapter 3- Idiot... (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1072486#msg1072486)
Chapter 4-The Rival (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1074091#msg1074091)
Chapter 5-The Announcement (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1075430#msg1075430)
Chapter 6- The First Kiss (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1077437#msg1077437)
Chapter 7 part 1- Preview (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1090574#msg1090574)
Chapter 7 part 2- Sudden Return (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1107016#msg1107016)
Chapter 8 part 1- A Seek to their past (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1116081#msg1116081)
Chapter 8 part 2- An Incoming Surprise (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33414.msg1122971#msg1122971)
HIATUS
UWAH~!!! 2nd fan fiction and still! it's atsumina again haha I ship them so hard XDD :wub:
Anyways~! the fan fiction will update every monday~! :D (I hope OTL still a High School student D:)
So hope you'll enjoy reading it~!!!
The Problems for 1 Month Chapter 1- Double Idol
It was passed midnight when the AKB48 concert in Shibuya AX finished.
all of the fans all leave the concert location after the encore performance finished, and at the AKB dressing room
some of the AKB members are preparing to go home and some members wants to go somewhere else,including...
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"Yosh I'm all set!"said by Takahashi with all her might.but when she is going to open the
door to leave the dressing room suddenly,someone hugs her at her back.and Takahashi was shocked
and looked straight at her back and as she sees the person that hugged her back she smiled.
It was just the person that she expected to do that to her and it was...
"Why did you do that to me again Acchan?"yes it was the ace and center of AKB48,Maeda Atsuko a.k.a. Acchan.
"It's my "Surprise Goodbye hug attack!" as acchan said with a big smile on her face.
"Surprise Goodbye hug attack?" Takamina wondered.
"Where are you heading?let's go walk outside together~!" acchan said.
"A-aahhh I can't walk with you right now sorry.." Takamina said to acchan with a worrying face.
"eh~? But--"
"UWAH!I'M LATE!sorry acchan I really have to go!"Takamina said so nervously.
Takamina rushed to go outside the dressing room leaving acchan behind.
"what's wrong with her all of a sudden..." acchan said with a lonely face.
And after 10 minutes...
"I'm sorry that I'm late!" said by Takamina to someone.
"no it's ok your just in time,here's your mic. and thank you for not
letting Persona down."said by the person she was talking to.
"no problem and thanks,Riku." said by Takamina with a smile.
"HERE'S WHAT YOU'VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR!!!HERE'S PERSONA!!!"said by the MC with all his might.
"are you ready?" Riku questioned Takamina.
"Yeah."
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*NOTE:The Persona group in this fan fiction are true guys and has no relation to the Mendol Drama. P.S. sorry for my lame writting skills OTL
FLASHBACK:
"I REALLY BEG YOU PLEASE!!!!"said by Riku kneeling down infront of Takamina.
"Stop that kneeling and sit down!"Takamina said with a worrying face.
"ok then...but please I beg you!Just 1 month and it's all over!"Riku repeats begging Takamina to help him.
"hmm....but is my height ok to be Kai?" Takamina said.
"That's why I'm begging you!your face is like a guy and your height is perfect!"Riku said.
"really?a guy that is in your group and has the same height as mine?" said by Takamina with a shocked face.
"YEAH!....well actually he's 150 cm but it's not that obvious right?"Riku said.
"Ok well since your a close friend of mine..."Takamina said.
"OHHHH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!"Riku said repeatedly.
"calm down will you?"Takamina said.
END OF FLASHBACK:
"OK~ so that was Persona!" said by the MC.
@Persona dressing room:
"FINALLY~!It's over~" said by Takamina with full of relief.
"still you have 1 month of being Kai"said by Kuu(one of the members in Persona)
"Yeah...I can Handle it don't worry!"said by Takamina with a smile.
"Takamina" Riku said.
"yes?"Takamina questioned.
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"Thanks again" said by Riku with a wink.
"no problem!"Takamina smiled.
"Well I have to go..."said by Takamina while removing her wig.
"woah,woah,woah!what are you doing?" Kuu said all of a sudden.
"I'm going to dress up as myself duh!" Takamina said.
"Are you stupid?you need to dress as Kai until you reach home!" said by Riku with a large tone.
"huh?"Takamina wondered.
"I believe Riku is right." Kuu said.
"The media is always waiting in every exit in this building just to get an interview with us,especially
Kai,that means you."Riku said with a serious face to Takamina.
"and even if you remove that wig..." Riku added.
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"You do have a point..."Takamina said with her tension down.
"Well! we have to go!"Riku said with a smiling face.
"Good Luck at the media!"Kuu added.
"ah Yeah...."Takamina said.
and so after that Takamina dressed up as Kai's formal wear given by Riku.
AFTER 5 Minutes: At a certain exit door...
"the security guard said that this exit is where medias are just a few and not that many...
so...here we go."Takamina said while holding the door knob.
as she opens the door she saw the media interviewing another person although she can't see on who the medias are interviewing.
"ah...that must be Riku and Kuu there...hehehe this is my chance to escape"Takamina said with a grin on her face.
as Takamina attempts to escape some of the media notices her escaping the scene.
"KAI!!!May I have an interview with you?"a random media approch her.
"Y-yeah..."Takamina said with a dissapointment tone because she didn't escaped.
"No!me first!"a random media appeared.
"No me!"and another one.
"ME!"and more media camed to get an interview with her.
but then takamina looses her patience to the crowded media and said:
"SHUT THE F**K UP!!!!!!!!!"Takamina said with full of anger.
after on what she said the whole media didn't said a word...and after that silence Takamina said:
"Just interview Riku and Kuu like earlier!I have to go home!"Takamina said straigt to the media.
after she said that one of the media answered her and said,"But we are not interviewing Riku and Kuu earlier"
Takamina was shocked that it's not the two that the media are interviewing earlier and so takamina questioned
the media on who are they interviewing earlier and as Takamina's question was done the media pointed the person
that they were interviewing to....and as Takamina turned her head to the person the media was pointing to...she was
shocked because what she saw is really not Riku and Kuu but...
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......It was Acchan.
TO BE CONTINUED~!!!
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yey~ done with Chapter 1~ thanks for those who read this fan fiction~!
See you on Chapter 2 minna-san~!! :byebye:
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Hmmm.... I like the twist of this story. What happened to Kai btw? and why is acchan in there?!
Guess, I have to wait for the next chapter. -sigh- and the drawings' cool also. keep it up!
Update soon pls!
Ja~
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ohohoho :wub: finally you've posted it in here.. I want the next chapteeerrrsssss :heart: :heart: :heart:
good luck yedz! :thumbsup
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Omg! I love this!
Did you drew the pictures? It's damn nice!
I look forward to your updates!
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Wow! Did you draw the pics? It's great :twothumbs :twothumbs
And I like the story :heart: :heart:
Waiting for the update~
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JAJA now takamina crossdress like kai.. awesome.. she gonna have a lot of troubles.. but what happen if acchan fall for "him" :O... nice fics and nice images :D congratualtions :D
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LOL Maichan finally you post it here :cow:
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The drawing, did you drew it yourself? nice drawing.. :on lol:
The fic seems like the typical AKBxMendol cross fic at first.. but the twist at the end really got me curious.. :hehehe:
I'm guessing.. Acchan must be Persona's fan.. :bingo: she went there to watch their performance.. or maybe Acchan already know Taka disguising as Kai.. :ding: that would be really interesting.. :glasses:
Need to know what happen!! waiting for the next update.. :on comhere:
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It was really nice!! XD
Got me so interested in it~
Made me really curious in what will happen next!! ><
I was wondering if Acchan follows Takamina all the way there?
Really wonders whether Acchan will found out that Takamina is Kai there~
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So cool! The drawing and everything!
It's like reading a manga :thumbsup
:kneelbow:
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WOAH~!!! :shocked: HOLLY SHERLOCK HOLMES~! So many replies~!
For those who questioned if I'm the one who drew it then the answer is~
Yes~! I'm the one who drew it :D Just want to make some drawings and such XD
other questions that is related to the story cannot be answered of course~!I don't
want to release some SPOILERS and such.
well right now I'm kinda bored so I'll update this fan fic earlier than it's original update~!
this is only the 1st half of Chapter 2 so you all might feel that the update is too short but yeah after
the 1st half I might update it tomorrow :DD
The Problems for 1 Month CHAPTER 2 PART 1/2
Takamina was so shock as she knows that acchan was the one being interviewed by the medias.
as Takamina looks at acchan's eyes, acchan looks away to her.
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Takamina didn't understand why Acchan is afraid to look at her straightly ,until she realizes that right now she is Kai.
Curiosity came to Takamina when she notices that, what does Kai have to do with Acchan? and what is their relationship
to each other? As Takamina finishes thinking about that she remembers that she has to go home and because of that she
acted mad and said "Then interview her and not me!" then leaves the scene,but suddenly...
"AWW COMMON!you always act like that Kai!just 1 Question and we will leave!" one of the medias bravely shouted that to Kai/Takamina.
"OK but just 1 Question" Takamina said with a sigh in the end.The media becamed furious and raises their hands of which Takamina will pick
for that 1 Question.
"You,the one with the red cap."Takamina said.
"Alright!"The media guy was so happy that he was the one who Kai/Takamina picked.
"Ok so what is your question so we can get over with this thing."Takamina said.
"What's your opinion....through Maeda Atsuko?"the media guy Questioned Kai with a serious look in his face.
As Takamina hears the question the media guy said,she hears alot of whispering going on saying:
Random media1:What is that guys problem?
Random media 2:Don't know,Don't care.
Random media 3:That question again?
Random media 4:He just wants to hurt Acchan's feelings....poor acchan...
Takamina is really getting curious of what kind of person Kai really was and so she answers the question by saying...
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I don't really know her well but I think she's a person that is very motivated, and is very good ace of AKB48!"
After Takamina said that with a smile the whole media even Acchan was shocked by her answer and silence was covered by the whole scene,but Takamina didn't noticed that and just left the scene without knowing...
After that thing that happened earlier,Takamina goes straight home but suddenly she feels some weird presence near her, and as she looks back she saw Acchan! Acchan ran but Takamina hold her hand.
"Why are you following me Acc-- er...Maeda-san?"Takamina almost called Maeda's nickname "Acchan" while dressed up as Kai but the good thing is she remembered it quickly.and as Takamina questioned acchan....
Acchan said without hesitation "Can I have a small talk with you?"
"Uh sure..." Takamina wondered why acchan wants to talk to her.
"So let's go to the park?" Takamina question acchan.
"Yeah" Acchan agreed.
And after that they walk straight to the park with a bit of awkward silence and a bit of distance between them.
END of Chapter 2 part 1
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Thank you for all the people that read this fan fiction!!! pls. wait for Chapter 2 part 2~!!!
Sorry if I only drew Kai and not Acchan too >.<
this is my situation so that's why I only drew a few stuffs T______T
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Sorry if the Update is too short but please tune in for the Part 2 of Chapter 2! this time I'll make the Part 2 longer~ :ding:
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I don't really know her well but I think she's a person that is very motivated, and is very good ace of AKB48!"
After Takamina said that with a smile the whole media even Acchan was shocked by her answer and silence was covered by the whole scene,but Takamina didn't noticed that and just left the scene without knowing...
The smile from Takamina, I guess Acchan realize that smile is Takamina. So Acchan follow Kai/Takamina. ^^
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Just started reading this..
The pictures are so nice~ :wub:
I like the idea of pictures! :D
The story line is really good.
I wonder whats the relationship between Kai & Aachan....
Yes, it would be great if it was longer!! :cow:
Update Soon
I'll be waiting~ :roll:
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I like yours drawings :twothumbs
And the story is interesting ^^
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Oho... I think Acchan stalked Takamina. or Acchan knows Takamina's pretending to be Kai?
need the next update.
ja~
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omg!! that smile :D
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WOAH~!!!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
i don't have much thing to say~ i already said it! :doh:
btw~ thanks for the..... THAT! you know wait I mean~
and oh~ this is me! if you don't know~ Ram.....bu....tan~ xDDDD
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Hmm... I feel that Kai always bad-mouthing Acchan and suddenly Minami as Kai said Acchan is motivated makes them suspicious? :?
Hahahaha... agree with Sydney W
The smile from Takamina, I guess Acchan realize that smile is Takamina. So Acchan follow Kai/Takamina. ^^
Hope it'll be like that~ and interesting will happen~ XD XD
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Uwah~~!! thank you for the ones who still reads this fan fiction!!!!because of your comments I strive to make this fiction a good one~!
@sydney W nice way of thingking it~!thanks for reading :DD
@Popsicle Thank you~!!hm...kai's relationship to acchan?let's wait and see~!
@aoi sora hahaha nice meeting you here XD
Ok~!so This is the problems for 1 month Chapter 2 part 2~!
Enjoy :D
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The Problems for 1 Month CHAPTER 2 PART 2/2 -Why did I forget?
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"Urghhhh....This is getting so awkward...." Takamina said inside her head.
At that awkward moment Takamina is thinking of a good joke to Break the ice and so she thought
of something that she thinks acchan will laugh at,and she said:
"T-The wind is so cold right now I want to use a lion as my coat~!"with an awkward smile on her face.
"pffft....wahahaha!*doyoukoto?(what do you mean?)said by acchan while laughing so hard.
"It's nothing.I just wanna see you smile!"Takamina said with a relief face because her joke didn't fail
"Ehh?...uhm...thanks"Acchan said while blushing so hard *like a tomato
"Good thing that joke did well~!"Takamina said directly to acchan.
"I didn't go well."Acchan answered back.
"Huh?But the why did you laugh so hard?"Takamina wondered.
"It's because you remind me of a person that is a close friend of mine that also fails at joke like that~!"
Acchan said while smiling.
"Who?"Takamina asked while pretending to not know the answer.
"It's Taka--"Suddenly before Acchan completes the name that she was about to question,acchan felt so
sad without any reason by Taka's view.
"Acc-- I mean Maeda-san?What's wrong?"Takamina almost mentioned Acchan's nickname while disguising
as Kai.
"Unn" Acchan shooked her head by the form of saying no "I'm alright I just remembered something."Acchan said
while not looking straightly to *Kai*.
"What's wrong?I'm here to listen don't worry"Takamina said to Acchan while showing some deep understading
to show that he is a responsible guy.
"No,It's nothing.If your wondering who's that person it's Takahashi Minami"Acchan answered straightly to *Kai*
to end their talk about Takamina herself.
But Takamina didn't want to end their discussion so she asked Acchan
About who's that "Takahashi Minami" that Acchan was talking about and Acchan replied back and said:
"She's AKB48's Team A Captain" Acchan said with a smile on her face.
Takamina wasn't comfortable on that reply of acchan to her question,So she question acchan again, but this time
it's more specific and so Takamina asked acchan and said:
"Ah I see then...how will you describe her as...a friend?"as she asked that question her heart started to pump so hard.
Her emotions at that time was full of excitement and also nervousness on what is acchan's description about her as a
friend over this passed 6 years, and so Acchan said with a smile:
"She's A Good Friend...."
"ah.."Takamina can't reply properly.It's like her thoughts about their friendship with each other changed
because of what acchan said just now.
"Just A Good Friend?" she said inside her head.for all those years that's it?"A Good Friend" those words that acchan said
just now can't get out of Takamina's head. Iit's like she can't accept it nomatter what, but even if she can't accept it that it,
that's what acchan's description about her over those 6 years of friendship,Takamina don't want to continue questioning acchan
about her anymore even though she wants to now more about herself & what acchan thinks.
Suddenly...
Acchan's phone ranged.
"Ah!uhm,wait a sec. Kai." Acchan said to Takamina.
"Ah..sure."Takamina replied.
*Acchan talking to someone to the phone...
Hello?Ah!Yuko~!
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Ah!yeah!I almost forgot!Yes,I'll be there.
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Ah,By the way is Takamina there?
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Oh..I see,I'll see you there.Bye.
Takamina got curioused on why Yuko called acchan and why her name got mentioned.
"I'm really sorry Kai,I really want to talk with you but I have an appointment to attend"
Acchan said with a sense of dissapointment on her face.
"No It's ok.By the way where are you going?"Takamina asked.
"Oh, well...It's my Birthday today"Acchan said with a piece of nervouseness in her sentence.
"Ah~ well Otanjoubi Omedettou~!!(Happy Birthday)"Takamina greeted her.
"Thank you~!well I got to go,thanks for being with me tonight"acchan said to *Kai*
"No problem!"Takamina answered back
*As acchan left the scene...
"Why did I forget.....
"ACCHAN'S BIRTHDAY???!!!!!!!!!!"
T.B.C.
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Sorry if I just draw 1 piece in this fan fiction!too busy on school lately & exams are coming :dozing:
By the way~! aoi_sora requested this so TADA~!!
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If you want me to draw something you can request it :DD
NOTE~!!:I might update the fan fiction much earlier than the usual deadline that is monday so please tune in
for the latest updates~!
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takabaka!! you forgot acchan birthday!!!!
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takabaka!! you forgot acchan birthday!!!!
Stupid Takaboy is Stupid :lol:
thanks for reading by the way~!
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The Problems for 1 month Chapter 3
After changing her clothes...
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Takamina:DANG IT!ALL THIS TIME?!
FLASHBACK:
*Before Shibuya AX performance:
Acchan:Takamina~!
Takamina: not now Acchan!
*Listening Persona 3 seconds song
*Middle of the event
Acchan:Takamina~!here's a yakisoba bread to boost up your energy!
Takamina:No,I'm good,thanks anyways.
Acchan:But you might get hun--
Takamina:It's ok.
*Memorizing to Persona 3 seconds song & dance steps in her head
*Closing event
MC:Happy Birthday Acchan~!!!
Acchan:Thank you very much!!
@dressing room...
Takamina:Sanbyou mitsumeru dakede...
*Practicing the dance steps
END OF FLASHBACK
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Takamina:WHY?!WHY AM I SO COLD?!!
2 years ago...Acchan's 1st celebration of her birthday in AKB theater:
Acchan:*Minna!(Everyone) thank you for coming here and being with us to celebrate my birthday!
AKB fans:YEAH~!!!!
Yuko:wow~!what a strong reply for our fans!
Acchan:Thank you very much. *bows
Yuko:By the way Acchan,who's the 1st person that greeted you on your birthday today?
Acchan:To tell you the truth my mom was in 2nd place~!someone beated her.
AKB fans:WOAH~!!
Yuko:well who is it?
*Acchan points out the member who greeted her 1st.
Yuko:Wow!It's Takamina~!
AKB fans:WOAH~!!!!
random AKB fan:ATSUMINA!!!!!
Yuko:hahaha indeed.It's Atsumina,right?well how did Takamina greeted you 1st Acchan?
Acchan:well she called on my phone and I woked up because of that.
Yuko:Wow~!A phone call~!what did whe said?
Acchan:she said "Happy Birthday~!Sorry If I waked you up!I just want to greet you so badly right now,I lo--"
Takamina:WAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!Quit it already acchan!it's embarrassing!
Acchan:Eh?why wont you share our story with each other?
Takamina:It's embarrassing!*blush*
Yuko:hahaha Takamina really doesn't want to show her love from acchan in public huh?
*Akb members & fanslaughs
Takamina:Y-Yuko!It doesn't mean that if your the MC you keep teasing me like that!
Yuko:hahaha~!well~ It doesn't mean that if your the MC you keep sharing your failing jokes~!
*Akb members & fans laughs
Takamina:err...*blush
Acchan:Yuko stop that~!Don't tease my Takamina that way~!
Takamina:E-eh?!
Yuko:hahaha~ ok~
Acchan:You didn't mean that huh?
Yuko:yeah!
*Crowd laughs
Acchan:well anyways that's how Takamina do it everytime I'll celebrate my Birthday~!sometimes she's the 3rd person that
greets me and even 2nd!but that doesn't matter! the important thing is that...She didn't forget my Birthday!
AKB fans:YEAAAH~!!!ATSUMINA~!!!
FLASHBACK END
"Dang it!I focused on Persona too much I forgot that it's her Birthday today....
I'M SO STUPID!!!" Takamina said with full of disappointment.
RING RING, RING RING, RING RING
@ phone...
Takamina:H-Hello?
???:You're so stupid you know?From all the AKB members that would forget her birthday,why you?
Takamina:Y-Yuko...
Yuko:There is still time,Go buy her a gift,go to the *says location*.that's place where we are going
to celebrate Acchan's birthday.
Takamina:What should I buy?
Yuko:Buy something that she likes,It doesn't matter if it's cheap or expensive,but most importantly
it's from your heart!
Takamina:*smiles thanks yuko,you save me.
Yuko:Enough thanking me!Go buy her a gift!
Takamina:Ok,thanks again.
As Takamina bought her gift for acchan,she ran off as fast as she can on her destination
where Acchan's Birthday party is being held.
After a few,minutes she finally reached her destination but as she opens the door she was
too late...the party was over...Acchan wasn't there....Yuko wasn't there...the other AKB
members wasn't there and even Aki-p.( <--- wut? XD Writter's POV)
Takamina was so disappointed about herself...Acchan was always by her side earlier & she
didn't even remember a thing about her birthday at all...and so she thought "Am I really a
Good friend ? Do I really deserve it?"even though it's her own question she can't answer it
properly even if their friendship with each other reached for...6 years.
As Takamina was full of disappointed of herself, she hears some footsteps approaching her.
She thought "Maybe this person is Acchan",she can feel her presence and so she said:
"ACCHAN!"Takamina said with full of relief.
"Excuse me miss but we have to clean this mess up.The party just ended up a few minutes ago
so please leave,it's already midnight."said by the janitor.
"Ah,sorry..and thanks for your concern."Takamina said sadly.
Takamina left the building.she thought that if that person was acchan the her day would have gotten
better, that if she didn't concentrate on Persona so much then she have spent more time with Acchan
but she didn't...
As Takamina was so down on that time,suddenly someone hugged her on her back,she had no idea on
who's that person that is hugging her back until she heard that person's voice,saying:
"Osoi na...(You're so slow...)"said by the person behind her hugging her tightly.
Takamina was so shocked when she heard the voice of the person that was hugging her,but that was at first,
in the end she ended up crying and said...
"I'm...I'm.....
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I'M SO SORRY!!!!"Takamina said out loud while crying.
"It's ok I forgive you..."Acchan said.
"I'm sorry."Takamina said it repeatedly.
"It's ok.Stop crying will you?you're making me cry too!"Acchan said while she was also about to cry.
"By the way here's my gift for you...*Otanjoubi Omedettou.(Happy Birthday)"Takamina said with a smile.
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"*smiles Thank you...I'll treasure it forever..."acchan said while crying on takamina's shoulder.
"I'm so stupid right?for all the things that I would forget,It was your birthday.."Takamina said while hugging
acchan.
"Mou.... Baka...(Idiot...)"
Takamina accepted that thing Acchan said to her....what matters to her is that she spend some time with Acchan and
right now they are sharing the warmth of their body heat with each other even though she wish that day would never
end...
T.B.C.
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Ack~!! My neck hurts!!! (back/neck pain because of writting,editing and checking of type errors :depressed:)
I think I left some typos :err:
anyways please tune in for Chapter 4! >.< if not I'll probably not continue this atsumina fiction.... :badluck:
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amfff I forgot to say.... the update for Chapter 4 would be kinda late because exams are coming up on our school so sorry for those who tune in this fiction.... :kneelbow:
that's all :byebye:
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Takamina... Baka da yo... forgetting Acchan's b-day! tsk.
(I still think that Acchan stalked Bakamina to that Persona event.. hahah)
And good luck with the exams... then again have an exam too.. ><
Ja~
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Such a sweet chapter.. :farofflook: Acchan so forgiving.. :luvluv2: it's just that Taka!! :scolding: how can you forgot Acchan's birthday!! :temper: never forget her birthday ever again!! :on thumbb:
I really love your drawing.. :on GJ:
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I love your illustrations!
minami no baka! forgot the ace birthday :smhid
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Ow... so sweet :mon cute:
the teddy bear is so cute :mon lovelaff: kyaaa... and your drawing is so cool~ :mon thumb:
what matters to her is that she spend some time with Acchan and
right now they are sharing the warmth of their body heat with each other even though she wish that day would never
end...
^this make me :mon blood:
Good luck for your exam Mai-chan :mon blowhorn:
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Takamina... Baka da yo... forgetting Acchan's b-day! tsk.
(I still think that Acchan stalked Bakamina to that Persona event.. hahah)
And good luck with the exams... then again have an exam too.. ><
Ja~
Thank you!!! and also good luck on your exam too :D
Ow... so sweet :mon cute:
the teddy bear is so cute :mon lovelaff: kyaaa... and your drawing is so cool~ :mon thumb:
what matters to her is that she spend some time with Acchan and
right now they are sharing the warmth of their body heat with each other even though she wish that day would never
end...
^this make me :mon blood:
Good luck for your exam Mai-chan :mon blowhorn:
Thank you >.< I'll do my best in the exams :on GJ:
To Everyone~!:
I really thank you all for reading this fiction! (I thought no one's reading it :fainted:)
all of your comments boosts me up to create the Chapter 4 as much as possible! :on speedy:
I'll try doing the Chapter 4 after the exams! :D
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OMG!! I love your draws :D... they make your fic unique :D...
I think the best gift for atsuko gonna be a takamina´s kiss :D.. come on takaboy whe know tha you want :D
Ganbatte with you exam.. we are waiting for your updated
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Wow you draw using tablet? o3o
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Oh My God !!!!!! :twothumbs
Im Really happy you update very fast hehehe...
hope you can continue it..
i really love it..
thank you
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Wow you draw using tablet? o3o
Yes :D
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ah gee do you suppose we can oekaki chat? haha. i don't have any wota friend to drag along with akb related drawings xD
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Oh My God !!!!!! :twothumbs
Im Really happy you update very fast hehehe...
hope you can continue it..
i really love it..
thank you
^uwah~!!!arigatou~!! :shy2: thanks for reading~! :DD
OMG!! I love your draws :D... they make your fic unique :D...
I think the best gift for atsuko gonna be a takamina´s kiss :D.. come on takaboy whe know tha you want :D
Ganbatte with you exam.. we are waiting for your updated
wehehe~I think so too~ and If that happens in real life i will....:mon crazyinlove: :mon blood::mon angel: and by the way Thanks for the support~!! :kneelbow:
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The Problems for 1 month Chapter 4
@Persona Headquarters... (Actually it's just a house)
"SO~!why do you think I called you right here?"Riku said with a playful voice.
"Uhmm...because....Our show is successful yesterday~!!"Takamina said with a playful voice to join in with Riku.
"YEAH~!!!"Riku said with a playful voice.
"YEAH~!!"Takamina joined along.
"Lalalalalala~" dancing aroud~
"NO."Riku suddenly said with a serious face & voice.
"Eh....T-then what is it?"Takamina got a bit scared of Riku's serious tone of voice earlier.
"READ THIS AND EXPLAIN."Riku said while he slammed a newspaper on the table with a serious voice once again.
"Uh....ok...but why do I have to dress as kai in our meeting?"Takamina asked and still scared by Riku's fearful stare.
*BAM* Suddenly Riku slammed his hands on the table which startled Takamina,it's like she saw what's the real persona of Riku and then he said:
"LISTEN.....
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I'll be the one asking Questions here....so...READ IT....AND EXPLAIN."Riku said with a serious voice.
"OK!OK!No need to be rude!GEEZ!I'll read it ok?"Takamina said to chill out Riku.
While Takamina's reading the Newspaper Frontpage article...
Takamina:Center Position Kai in the Ikemen group Persona blah blah blah...finally changed?last night blah blah blah......
*After Takamina Finished reading the whole article....
"KAI HATES ACCHAN?!"Takamina reacted with full of shock.
"WHAT?! YOU FORGOTTEN THAT KAI HATES HER?!"Riku said with a shoked tone knowing Takamina didn't know a thing
about Kai hating Acchan.
"HOW COULD I FORGET IF I DON'T KNOW?!"Takamina exclaimed to Riku."WHAT?!I TOLD KUU TO TELL YOU RIGHT?!DIDN'T KUU SAID IT TO YOU?!"Riku exclaimed.
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Takamina & Riku....*Glares*
"W-well~!Look at that!I drop my spoon!silly me!J-Just continue your fight!Don't mind me!"Kuu said roughly with an awkward smile then he closes the door to the kitchen.
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"He didn't tell you,did he?"Riku said with a low tone of voice.
"*sigh No...."Takamina said also on a low tone of voice.
Riku sighted.
"Ok....Right now I forgive you...because you don't know a thing about Kai,but next time if you are curious ask us!"Riku said with a worried tone.
"ok but I know it now so Thanks!"Takamina said with a sense of relief that Riku came back to normal.
"Unless...after that interview Maeda-san called you and have an interaction with you~!But that's not
gonna happen right?"Riku said with a honest smiling face.
"Uhm...Y-yeah..."Takamina agreed awkwardly.
"OK then.this meeting of our is adjourned."Riku said to Takamina.
"Ok then,*Ittekimasu...(I'm going now..)"Takamina said.
"Oh yeah..remember...no interaction with Maeda-san while your Kai,got it?"Riku remind Takamina.
"Got it!"Takamina said with a smile.
*closes the door
Suddlenly....
"Oh~ look who we have here..."someone said to Takamina.
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"It's Kai from persona! or should I say, MIDGET!"the unknown guy suddenly insulted Takamina because she's
Kai right now.
"Wha..?"and ofcourse Takamina has no clue on what is that guy's saying.
"OI!are you listening to me MIDGET?!"The guy keeps insulting Takamina/Kai.
*Closes door goes back to Persona's HQ.
"Uh.........OI!KAIII!!! *bam *bam *bam *bam YOU COWARD!!!"the unknown guy keeps slamming the Door of the Presona's house.
"Uh....I guess....you meet him huh...."Riku said with an awkward tone.
"WH-WHO THE HELL IS THAT GUY???!!"Takamina said while holding the knob of the door.
"He's....Kai's Rival."Riku said.
"R-Rival?"Takamina wondered.
"No time to explain just go put off that wig and listen to what i say,I'll settle this."Riku said to takamina with a serious tone.
"Ok."Takamina answered back.
"here's the plan...."Riku whispers his plan to Takamina while Kai's rival is still slamming the front door.
*A few seconds later...
"LISTEN!I told you!Kai doesn't want you to talk to him right now!"Riku said to the rival of Kai while arguing with him.
"I WONT GO UNTIL H--
"MOU!SHUT UP!"Takamina said to the two guys that are shouting with each other.
"Uh...."The rival of Kai was shocked as she saw Takamina.
"Is this how you treat your guest...HUH RIKU?!"Takamina madly shouted to Riku.
"I'm really sorry Takamina....it's just that..."Riku was so sorry on what is happening right now.
"MOU!!!I HAVE ENOUGH!!!I'm leaving!"takamina said with a mad voice.
"Man!look what you've done!please leave?"Riku said to the rival of Kai while he's upset.
"tsk..."the rival of kai is so pissed of that Kai's such a weekling.
*The Rival of Kai leaves....
"*sigh finally he left....nice job!as expected of Takamina"Riku happily said to Takamina.
"hehehe~ well good thing he's pleased on that thing earlier!well I have to go now Riku!thanks again"Takamina said with a smlie.
"No Problem! and take care."said by Riku.
After that....@ a certain sidewalk...
While Takamina was walking in the streets on a familiar place, suddenly someone patted her right shoulder..
She was obvoiusly shocked and as she looks at her back...
"OSU~!"said happily by....Kai's Rival.
"Eh......*Dare?{Who are you?)"Takamina asked Kai's Rival pretending that she doesn't have a clue on who he is.
"Hahaha!I knew you would ask!That means I changed alot huh?"Kai's Rival said happily.
"E-eh????"Takamina was so confused on how is that Kai's Rival talks to her so happily.
"It's me!!Kobayashi Keitaro!"Kai's Rival said to Takamina.
"wait.......EH?!!!!Keitaro?!!!!You've change alot!!!!"Takamina replied to Keitaro.
"Hahaha I thought you've forgotten my name!" Keitaro said to Takamina.
"Why would I forget your name?we're close friends right?"Takamina said with a smile.
"Hahaha!by the way!why are you at the Persona's HQ?" Ketaro suddenly asks to Takamina.
"E-eh?well...it's nothing important!we just have a small talk!"Takamina replied to Keitaro.
"Eh?since when do you and Riku became that close with each other?"Keitaro asked.
"It's a long story on how the two of us met!"Takamina replied.
"Eh....well I have to go!I have a meeting with my boss!See you next time,Takamina!"Keitaro happily said to Takamina.
"Ah..ok see you next time."Takamina said directly to Keitaro.
*Keitaro leaves....
"*sigh...It's been awhile huh..."Takamina said inside her mind.
RING RING RING RING
"Eh...a phone call?"Takamina wondered on who's the person calling her.
@ the phone...
Takamina:Hello?
???:HEY HURRY UP!!!Practice is about to start!
Takamina:A-acchan!!!Ack!am I that late?
Acchan:Actually your not late...it's just that *whispers
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I want to see you right now...
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Takamina:W....Watashi mo....(Me too..)
Acchan:*smiles bye bye I'll wait for you.
Takamina:U-Un..
*BEEP
After that phone call Takamina goes straight to the Akihabara Theater for their practice but mostly...for Acchan.
"UWAH!!what Acchan said was so intense..."Takamina said while her heart is still pumping so hard.
Takamina POV
What the hell is this turn of events?Keitaro as Kai's rival....I can't have a rival that is my friend!
Kietaro is actually a friend of mine when I was in High school, actually there were three of us!Me,Keitaro and Takumi.
I was known as the little midget,you know because....nevermind...next is Keitaro,he was known as the cheerful guy
in our circle of friends that's why I'm so shocked at his big change today but as I can see his attitude didn't change a bit!
and last but not the least is Kirishima Takumi,known as the president of our class,that's why we call him Kaicho(President),
he's a nice guy and also protects me from bullies and others too!well that's his deed I guess as the president of the class
also his height is close to me that's why some people call us "The Two Midgets of class 2-C"and yes we're kind of irritated
by that caption.
End of Takamina's POV
T.B.C.
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UWAH~!!!!FINALLY THE EXAMS ARE OVER~!!! :farofflook: My brain got so tired by the questions though... :depressed:
Hahahaha I don't know what's happening to me but everytime I update this post
I always dream something that envolves atsumina moments that never happened
before XDD maybe kami-sama(God) is helping me boost up my energy~!
wehehe~ so that's why I want to update this fan fiction right now :DD
Anyways~!!! Please tune in for the update of Chapter 5~!!! :D
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THANK YOU FOR UPDATING
IM REALLY lOVE EVERY SCENES...
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complicated story sure is complicated XD
how long Takamina's gonna survive in this situation? XD
btw, I love your drawings :wub: especially the one that Takamina is blushing XD
will be waiting for your next update :thumbsup
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OMG!!! love your story and draws.. are amazing.. thanx a lot for this new chapter :D
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Wow! Haha! Hilarious! I like the abrupt call scene!
Acchan's call troll time!
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i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY love your drawings!!
please continue it..Felt like I'm reading a manga!
makes the fic more unique..
this astumina-ness is killing me as always! grrrrr
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complicated story sure is complicated XD
how long Takamina's gonna survive in this situation? XD
btw, I love your drawings :wub: especially the one that Takamina is blushing XD
will be waiting for your next update :thumbsup
Sankyuu~!!! :kneelbow:
Wow! Haha! Hilarious! I like the abrupt call scene!
Acchan's call troll time!
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EH?!?!?! :stoned: WHAT DID I DO?!?! :on blackhole:
nice drawing btw~ :on GJ:
i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY love your drawings!!
please continue it..Felt like I'm reading a manga!
makes the fic more unique..
this astumina-ness is killing me as always! grrrrr
Thank you very much for reading! :kneelbow:
hahaha I also get killed by some atsumina-ness in this fic. :on lol:
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ACK!!! :OMG: Sorry If my Update was so slow... :kneelbow:
Anyways enjoy Chapter 5~!!
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The Problems for 1 Month Chapter 5 - The Announcement
"AH~!!!!I'm so tired!!!"Takamina said while laying on the stage with full of sweat on her shirt.
"Taka~ Don't sleep on the stage~!"Acchan said to Takamina.
"Wehehe~ I like laying on the stage!It's just so cold~"Takamina said with a playful voice.
"But that's not good!your shirt is full of sweat and you might have a cold!here take this water"Acchan said while giving Takamina the bottled water.
"Ok~Ok~ and Sankyuu~!(Thank you~!)"Takamina got up and gets the bottled water of Acchan.
"*Gulp,Gulp,Gulp...AAAAAAH~!!!!That sure hit the spot~!!!"Takamina was so refreshed after drinking the water.
"Ne Takamina."Acchan said straightly to Takamina.
"Yeah?"Takamina answered.
"After the practice...could we go and stroll for awhile?"Acchan said nervously to Takamina because she thinks Takamina might decline her invitation.
"Sure."Takamina answered fastly.
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"REALLY?!You mean it?!!"Acchan was so shocked that Takamina agreed so fast
"Yeah~!well you know it has been awhile since we hangged out together~!"Takamina said with a smile.
"YEY~!!"Acchan hugged Takamina tightly.
"ACK!!Acchan Accha-- ack!I'm CHOKING!!"Takamina said while Acchan's still hugging her tightly.
Suddenly...
"Everyone Line Up!!"the choreographer announced to all the AKB members inside the theater.
After that all of the members are lined up and at that moment the choreographer said that someone's here
to announce something and so all of the members where wondering on what is going to be announced and
who is going to say it.The Choreographer said that for a meantime they should practice while waiting the
person that is going to announce the thing that they need to now.
And so A few minutes passed, someone opened the door, the members were shocked on who they saw and it was
AKB48's producer...Akimoto Yasushi also known as Aki-p.The producer walked straightly to the stage ans silence was
covered in the whole room, as the producer steps on the stage he straightly announced the thing he is going to say.
"The next concert that is going to be held in the TOKYO DOME CITY HALL is going to have........a new play"The producer
said with a straight and serious tone of voice.
as the members heard the announcement some started to mumbling,others started to whisper and some of them are just
waiting for the producer to continue the thing he was saying.
"I know some people of you are wondering on who is going to be the main characters of this play and what the story is about...
but first let me tell you a bit of the storyline."The producer said with a small grin on his face and other members looks so excited
on hearing the plot of the story.
"It's about a girl that has so many problems for 1 month...why?It's because it all started on her friend's request on covering up on
one of the group members in their Ikemen group and she agreed on it! and after her performance with the group, she suddenly
stumbled upon her friend but the thing is she doesn't know that the group member that she was covering up to hates that friend of
hers...SO!that's the plot."the producer said with a smile on his face.
"hm~ the storyline is so good!don't you think Takamina?"Acchan whispered to Takamina.
"Y-yeah...."Takamina was so shocked after she heard the plot, it's like she can't believe of the coincidences that is happening right now.
"Ah!and for the characters,it is already settled.I made a survey along time ago on who is the two members from AKB48
that you wanted to be the main character on the play, and the chosen one's are....Maeda Atsuko and......
Oshima Yuko."as the producer announced the two main characters suddenly yuko said...
"Uhm Akimoto-san!Apparently I don't want to be the main character."Yuko said with a nervous tone.
"Hm~?and why is that?"the producer asked.
"Because my heart is for Nyan-Nyan only~!"Yuko proudy said to the producer.
"Y-YUKO!"Kojipa suddenly gets embarrased becuase of what yuko said.
"Hahaha ok then.So who's the one that you want to replace your postion?"the producer asked.
"Hmm......ah!wehehee~ "Yuko grinned while starring at Takamina.
"What?why is she starring at me???No...don't tell me she's going to..."Takamina said in her mind while making a "NO!"
sign on Yuko.
"I'll choose Takamina!"Yuko said happily.
"*sigh I knew she wont listen..."Takamina said.
"Hm~ Takahashi huh?this is getting interesting....Are you ok with that Takahashi?"the producer asks.
"E-eh?Me?uhmm......Ok I'll do it."Takamina said roughly to the producer.
"Are you sure?you looked like you don't want to though!"The producer said to the leader.
"It's ok I'll do it."Takamina answered.
"Ok then. Our main characters are Maeda Atsuko and Takahashi Minami"the producer announced to all the members.
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"Hm~ The Ace and The Leader huh?I think this is going to be an interesting play."The producer said inside his head while smirking.
As the producer leaves, some of the members keep teasing the ace and the leader, saying that Atsumina finally camed back because it's a long time they see the two together.
After that a few minutes later...
"RAH~!!!WHAT'S WITH YUKO~?!MOU~!!!"Takamina said while shouting the things she wanted to shout earlier.
"Eh?then If you don't want to do the play why didn't you just say "No"?"Acchan asked Takamina.
"Well it's because...I want to....spend more time with you...."Takamina mumbled.
"What?what did you say?"Acchan pretended that she didn't heard the thing Takamina said.
"MOU!I didn't say anything~!"Takamina said while walking so fast and blushing so hard at the same time.
"Hey!Takamina come back here!your such a *Tsundere! "Acchan said while smiling and chasing Takamina.
"HEY!YOU'RE THE ONE THAT IS A TSUNDERE!! "Takamina said while pouting.
"hahaha~OK~!OK~!Just stop running will you!"Acchan said with a smile.
"Ok then!"Takamina suddenly stoppend running.
"W-wait!"Acchan can't stop running because of the downhill road.
"I GOT YOU!"Takamina said while opening her arms wide.
"W-WAAA!!!"
*TUD
"Ow...that hurts so bad...."Takamina said with a painful tone.
"Pft.....wahahaha!!"Acchan suddenly laugh.
"wahahaha!"and so is Takamina.
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"It's been a long time right?"Acchan said with a smile.
"Huh?"Takamina wondered.
"It's been a long time that we so much fun like this...just the two of us."Acchan said while blushing.
"Ah...Y-Yeah..."and so is Takamina.
*as they stand up, Acchan suddenly hugs Takamina...
"A-Acchan?"Takamina wondered on Acchan's sudden move.
"I'm excited for our play..."Acchan said while her eyes are close.
"Uh....*smiles...Me too..."Takamina said gently.
Acchan's POV
As I hug her tightly,I can hear her heart beating so hard...and so is mine...bit by bit our hearts are synchronizing
with each other...our body heat is getting hotter....much hotter than the end of summer...the smell of her hair is so nice...
It's like I'm on a field,full of flowers with a bright blue sky but just the two of us...I never felt this kind of feeling in ages......
right now....I don't want to let her go....I just can't....I don't want this day to end...I want to be with her....I want to make her happy...
I want to spend my whole life with her.....I want.....
her....
END of POV
T.B.C.
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hm~ What's going happen to Takamina now that she will play her role on what is really happening to her right now~?
Just tune in for Chapter 6 and Find out~!!
Ugh...My neck hurts again... :depressed: .... I need to rest this neck 1st~ ja matta ne~ :byebye:
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Your fic really made my day.. :farofflook: AtsuMina interactions here really sweet!!! :luvluv1: really made my heart melts~ :luvluv2: please give us more adorable and sweet AtsuMina moment!!! :mon innocent: I can't wait for the play!!! :mon fyeah:
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I love Yuko, and I love Aki-p! :lol:
the Atsumina moments on the downhill road are just too.. :wub:
now I can't wait for the next chapter XD
thanks for the update :thumbsup
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The plot of the play is just so much a coincidence!!!
I wonder if there's something behind... 8)
Nice Update! :thumbsup
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ATSUMINAAA :on bleed:
OHHHH MY HEART! ～♥
i love the ideia of making drawings and this fic is perfect, i'm looking forward to the next chapter...
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PLEASE UPDATE FAST..
I CAN'T WAIT YOUR NEXT CHAPTER..
IT;S VERY INTERESTING..
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Good move yuuchan :D, We know that aki-plove atsumina couple... this gonna be awesone i wanna se that play!! :D
once again great job with your draws :D
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your drawings i really really really like it..
I always say that right?
grrrrr
The story made my imagination filled!
yey!!
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Thank you for reading Everyone~!!! please tune in for the update~!Sorry If I update so slow lately...
there are many weird things that is happening to my life lately :dizzy: and I need to recover from it...
I hope you all understand.. :kneelbow: as of now I finally saw and read all of your feedbacks and I bet
you are all excited for the play~! and so I give you a little sneak peak of it~!
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that's all~!!
and I really thank you all for reading this fic.!! :kneelbow: :kneelbow: I hope this fan fic. kinda made your day nicer >.<
Chapter 6 will be updating soon~!! :byebye:
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Can't wait for your update! It's damn lovely! We need more Atsumina =)
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Can't wait for your update! It's damn lovely! We need more Atsumina =)
Thank you for reading~! :kneelbow:
Enjoy reading the latest update~! and please don't kill me :kneelbow:
The Problems for 1 month Chapter 6 - The First Kiss
The Next 2 days...
"WHY DID YOU LIED TO ME?!WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY THAT YOU WHERE HIM IN THE FIRST PLACE?!I THOUGHT WE WERE BESTFRIENDS?!"
"'Acchan will you calm down?I have an explanation for th--"
"CUT!What the Heck Takahashi?!?!That's not written in the script!!This is Take 5 already!TAKE FIVE!!!Focus will you?!"The director was so mad at Takamina because of her clumsiness.
"OK! 5 MINUTES BREAK!!"
"Hey...what's wrong Minami?"Acchan said in a worried tone.
"It's just that....*sigh....It's hard to explain..."Takamina said while in the same time upset in her own self.
"HEY~!Cheer UP~!"The Ace gives a strong pat on the leader's back.
"Ack!thank hurts you know?"the leader said with a painful tone.
"Hehehe~"The Ace just smiled on the leader's reaction.
Takamina sighted she doesn't know what to do on the play.It is just so realistic to her,she just want to say what she really feels and forgets the lines on the script.
It's like all of the happenings on the script is like the prediction on her future right now.
Suddenly the producer arrives with Tomonobu Togasaki (the manager of AKB) and approaches the director...
"How is it going with the play?"the producer asked the director in a formal matter.
"I-It's nearly done s-sir!"the director nervously said to the producer with a blank face.
"Nearly done?this play is just short but yet it's nearly done?as you know you have directed the earlier plays that involves this group and you have a beautiful career
as a 2 years experienced director but as you know that is not enough for me to be amazed by you.Remember the play you directed entitled Infinity?It turned out great
and it only lasted 1 and a half days and yet the script is long!and this play that you are directing right now is just a short play and yet 2 days had already passed?"the
producer said still in a formal speech yet with a scary aura around him creating the director to nervously say something back.
"It's...It's just that....--"
"I'M SORRY THIS IS ALL MY FAULT!"Suddenly Takamina cuts the words of the director;The producer,Togasaki-san and the Ace looks directly to the midget captain bowing
infront of the producer.Everyone's in shocked of the midget's sudden apology except for the producer;His face is blank with no expressions at all.........The director and
also the two doesn't know on what the producer is thinking right on that moment and the midget captain is still looking down on the wooden floor bowing infront of the producer.
It's like everyone is frozen on that time, no one is talking,no one is moving and not even the sound of the people from outside can be heard until the producer talks and breaks the ice by saying...
"So I see now I get it where this is going.I don't need explanations on what are your reasons right now for this play,you all can continue on what you are all doing earlier and
Takahashi,don't blame yourself to all of this,everyone's got a reason for all of this happenings around here,you understand?"
the midget captain raises her head and looks up to the producer with a serious face and properly said "yes" to the producer.
"Good.Director-san, how many takes is this scene you're doing?"
"Uhm....Take 5 sir..."The director said poorly to the producer and then looks down on the wooden floor.
"I see....in that case I have a special announcement for this play."the four people inside the room were at shock because of the sudden announcement Akimoto-san declared to say.
"IF well...IF the main characters meaning Maeda Atsuko and Takahashi Minami messes up on the stage and forgets their lines to say....we will make this play a.........
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FREESTYLE play.
"That's all.We have to go.Togasaki-san let's go."
"Yes."
The producer leaves...
"I could not believe this is happening to me!!A FREESTYLE PLAY?!Are you kidding me?!"the director is turning nuts to the producer's announcement earlier, he doesn't know on what to do in this play anymore.
"Director-san?"
"What now Takahashi?Are you going to ruin my career as a director too?!this is my chance to show my great skills as a director but then you came and ruining all of it!
and I'm doing this for the great Akimoto Yasushi!don't you know that my face will be printed on the newspaper if you fail this play in a negative way?!"the director keeps
lecturing the midget captain and bit by bit Minami's heart is falling apart, the harsh words that the director says to her is just too much for her heart to handle. yes,Akimoto-san
said not to blame herself to all of this happenings but right now she realizes that she's still the person to blame for why this thing that is happening right now is not going so well,
that she is also the reason that the producer announced the freestyle play,that she is also the reason why the director is losing fate over his career.It's all her fault,that is what
Minami's thinking right now and as she thinks deeper she suddenly sheds a tear on her cheeks,she doesn't know why but she can't stop.she wipes and wipes her tears off yet it
wont stop flowing into her eyes.the director ignores her crying and still lectures her and so the midget captain's heart is being pounded in to bits by the harsh words of the director.
"WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE TO JUDGE MINAMI?!"The ace suddenly shouted but with a scared tone to the director.
The director was shocked.The ace suddenly shouted on him straightly while the midget captain was still wiping her tears of her skin.
"And who do you think you are to scream on me?!"
"I am AKB48's Maeda Atsuko! and I know that I have no authority to say that things to you earlier, but it's true!Minami is different!she have done many things in AKB!she's a great
leader and never gives up on us!she never gives up! she's a great person!"
"Hmm............So?LIKE I CARE!"
The Ace suddenly turned black...it's like suddenly her aura changed,she was insulted by the director's harsh words that he said to her little captain, she was pissed off by the director's behavior.
"You should care. And you?what have you done in your stupid and wasted life?"
"S-stupid?!Listen here Ms. Maeda! as you know I have directed many plays and 2 movies right now!and that is just for 2 years only!"
"So?"
"So my life is not wasted!!!"the director is getting pissed off by the ace sudden chage of attitude.
"Yeah right."
The director suddenly grabs the Ace's dress with full of anger.
"Listen here MS. MAEDA ATSUKO. as you know I focused alot on directing many stuffs.I studied many things to directing and that is to be famous and to know my name!and here are my efforts
being paid off until you two showed off....know MS.MAEDA ATSUKO...what can you say about that?"
"What can I say?I say....Your wasting your life.2 years and you just aimed to be famous and your name to be known by everyone?is that what you all did for that life God gave you?Directing movies,plays
and etc.,to be famous and to be recognize?from all the directors I know, fame is not the main reason that they started directing.Yes,there are many reasons but there is one thing that most of the directors
say that you didn't and that is....the passion in directing and yes,I didn't even feel and see a scent of passion inside of you since I first saw you in Day 1 of this practice for this play,yeah you're a great director
but where is your passion?is it still half-baked in the oven? or is it rotten?like your heart."
The producer pushes the ace aways from him with incredible power.The ace was expecting that the director will do that to him, she was about to hit the wall but someone catches her and it was the midget Captain,Takahashi Minami.
"How dare you.....HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT TO M--"
"YOU DON'T HAVE THE RIGHTS TO TOUCH MY ATSUKO!"
"Well!LOOK WHO'S TALKING HERE!Ms.Takahashi Minami!you have finally stopped crying like a baby."
Takamina was pissed off, she was pissed off by the director pushing her Ace just like it's just toy or something.The midget Captain graps the shirt of the director.
"LISTEN you gay...you don't have and always have the rights to say that to Atsuko.you have to go through me to do
that."
"G-gay?!Why you!!!"the director tries to push the midget captain but he was shocked my the strength of it's grip to his
shirt.
"GET OFF OF ME!!!"
"Sure!"The Midget Captain pushes the director with great power thus the director face was accidentally banged on the wall.
"Atsuko lets go!"
"Carry me~"the Ace suddenly teases the Captain on a serious scene that is happening right now but yet the Captain didn't noticed that the Ace was teasing her because she thought that
the Ace has an injury because on the director's push to the ace earlier.Atsuko's heartbeat became so fast, it was the first time Minami carried her in a princess way.her face is so red, she
was so nervous yet so happy that this thing is happening right now.
"Hey.are you alright?"the Captain questioned the ace and still running out of the building.The ace nodded on the Captain's question, she just can't speak on that moment while her heart is screaming out of joy.
Many Minutes later...
@Atsuko's Apartment...
"UWAH~!!We finally get away from that creep!"the ace said with a relief tone.
"You know Acchan....what you did there was so brave...thank you...and sorry if that stinky gay director pushed you...
this is all my fault."Takamina turned down again because of her ace being hurt by blaming herself again.
"Mou~ you're blaming yourself again!"
"But it's really my fault..."
"For the last time,it's not!you're innocent Minami so stop blaming yourself ok?"
"*smiles ok."
"and if it wasn't for that stinky gay director I will not hear the sweet sentence that you said earlier~!"
"What sentence??"
"YOU DON'T HAVE THE RIGHTS TO TOUCH MY ATSUKO!I don't know that you love me that much~!"
".....E-EEEH?!?!?!I-I didn't said that!!"the Captain was so shocked that she let her guard off by saying that
embarrassing thing to the director.
"hahaha then who did?the director?"the Ace just teased her blushing Captain.
"Mou~Atsuko!!"Atsuko was laughing yet so happy while seeing her little captain's face pouting and blushing at the same
time.
"Ne Minami."
"Yeah?"
"I know that I'm too late to say this but I want to end this thing that I'm feeling inside my heart...."Suddenly the atmosphere changed in Atsuko's apartment they were joking earlier but suddenly it became serious.
"What is it?you can say it right now."The Captain was so worried to her beloved ace, she can see her holding her chest
making the Captain to know what's running in the mind of her beloved Ace.
"Minami...*Suki dayo...Do you love me too?"
"Is that a *Suki dayo as a friend?"
"Bakamina!!!do you think I will talk like that if it was a *Suki dayo as a friend?you're such a slowpoke!!"the ace pouted
for the slow understanding of her Captain.
"So I think that's a yes then?"
"MOU!!!"the ace pouted again but the Captain is just teasing her to see her cute and childish face.( and also to get some payback for teasing her too much.)
"I'm just kidding around...but you know honestly I was thinking that you just liked me as a friend...but in the end you're really just a pure tsundere!
why didn't you get in the sub unit of the Tsundere girls?"Takamina keeps teasing her beloved ace."MOU Minami!I'm not a TSUNDERE~!!!"the ace is pouting and blushing at the same time.
"Ne...I didn't hear your answer..."
"Answer?"
"Bakamina..."the ace pouted.
"hahaha....yeah....I love you too...so much more than a bestfriend....you are my life,you are my only one."
the cheesy words that Takamina said to Atsuko made her blush so much she almost looked like a tomato.It was the first time she heard that thing from Minami
to her ears,it was a pure joy to her on that night and so to make Atsuko's night complete she said...
"Then.....Kiss me."
The Leader suddenly blushed so hard by the sudden words of her beloved Ace.She suddenly remembered her first kiss that was from Atsuko too that happened on the
Heavy Rotation PV Making, she remembered that she was making effort to move her lips away from Atsuko from that time but after Atsuko's lips touch her lips she craves for more
and now this is her chance.
"This is my first time on kissing someone so....sorry if it's not the best kiss that I could give."
"It's ok infact I'm quite happy that I'm going to be the first girl that you are going to kiss..."
the two girls are blushing with each other making the atmosphere even hotter that usual.The Ace suddenly leans forward to Minami and then closes her eyes and awaits for the leader's
lips to touch hers.Minami's heart is pumping so hard, it's the happiest and the greatest day of her life because she finally knew that the love that she is feeling is not one-sided after all
but it was a pure love that they were feeling for each otherand so as the ace's face is so close to hers, she closed her eyes and let their lips touched together.As the Leader's lips touches
the lips of Atsuko bit by bit
their kisses gets wilder and wilder and wilder until they stopped to get some air.
"Atsuko...I love you..."
"*smiles...I love you more~"
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Meanwhile at a secured place...
"Akimoto-san....Don't you think you pushed to far?"
"It's ok Togasaki-san....I think this play is going to be an interesting one..."
"But the director said that he is going to quit!"
"He is going to quit?*smirks then let's fire him before he quits this play."
"but we don't have a director!"
"It's ok Togasaki-san because right now this play is going to be a Freestyle Play from now on."
"You sure are full of surprises Akimoto-san."
"hahaha.now let's fire that director,shall we?"
"Yes Akimoto-san."
T.B.C.
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WOOT~!!as you all notice I didn't draw anything here in this chapter and that's because....THE TABLET'S CABLE IS MISSING~!! :stoned: :OMG: :dizzy: :imdead:
and btw I made the hot scene not that detailed because I can't handle the heat on writing it! :on lol: it just makes me go :nya: so sorry if I lack of details on that
kinds of scenes :err: :depressed:
and still the next update still lies in your hands:DD
ja~ sankyuu for reading~!! :byebye:
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Thank you for posting your next chapter
please update always
thank you
i always wait for your next chapter
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aki-p you minnie!!
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Thank you for posting your next chapter
please update always
thank you
i always wait for your next chapter
Thank you for your support :)
aki-p you minnie!!
bhahaha :on lol: atleast the director was gone~!
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON
I WANT TO READ YOUR NEXT CHAPTER
HUHU :(
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON
I WANT TO READ YOUR NEXT CHAPTER
HUHU :(
Well I was about to write something about this so please read.
AUTHOR'S NOTE:
I know some of you are expecting the update Chapter 7 but I'm sorry because it's not... :(
As some of you noticed I haven't updated this fiction for the past few days and it's because
1ST obviously School and 2ND the disaster that happened to our country and that is a trouble
for me and my batch schoolmates because our time to submit our project for every subject is
risky and is hard to do and what I'm focused on right now is the play that we are having that will
be happening tomorrow and I was the one assigned to write the summary of the play~!look at the
coincidence!writing a play in school and writing the play in this fic. XD anyways the story that I'm
going to summarize is entitled "Iliad and Odyssey" it's a great epic by the way so why not try and
read it! :D
so that's my author's note right now and I will just HOLD this fic. for a while and if I have the chance
of writing or continuing this fic. I'll do it right away~! :on speedy: for the readers that really craves for
the next update I am really sorry and I beg for your patience that's all,thank you. :kneelbow:
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I hope you will be ok... but ii wanna know what happen in your country? PM maybe?
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I hope you will be ok... but ii wanna know what happen in your country? PM maybe?
a large typhoon got in to our country and has caused many lives of our people here though our
family is not affected our school is so that's why :(
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I hope you will be ok... but ii wanna know what happen in your country? PM maybe?
a large typhoon got in to our country and has caused many lives of our people here though our
family is not affected our school is so that's why :(
I came from the same country... it's not really a typhoon, but almost like one anyway. It was just rain and a really hard one at that.
Btw... What city are you from? I'm from QC.
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I came from the same country... it's not really a typhoon, but almost like one anyway. It was just rain and a really hard one at that.
Btw... What city are you from? I'm from QC.
I'm also from QC but my school is in Manila and as we know that was the part that mostly suffered from the floods and stuff :(
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HOW A SAD :(
I'M ONE OF YOUR FANS
I LIKE YOUR FAN FICTION VERY MUCH
BUT I WILL UNDERSTAND YOU
PLEASE.. IF YOU MAKE AN UPDATE ONE OR MORE CHAPTERS
THANK YOU
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I'm also from QC but my school is in Manila and as we know that was the part that mostly suffered from the floods and stuff :(
Yeah yeah... It's really had to commute because of that.
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That's so sad, i hope things get better soon...
i really love your fics and your drawings are amazing, so i'll wait patiently for your update.
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Mee too I will be waiting patiently and giving my support from here in Sweden
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Oh yay!!! kiss!!!
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Everyone I really thank you for your support, it really touched my heart and made me cry :mon waterworks: well just a bit not that much X3
anyways I really that you for your patience and for all of your support!right now I have a free time so I'm working on
the drawings for chapter 7 and also I need to get some payback of drawings because I didn't drew anything for Chapter 6!
here's a sneak peek for Chapter 7~!
(http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/488234_328386210584964_1194280436_n.jpg)
and yes when Chapter 7 is updated this pic. wont have any censors haha~ :on lol:
Again even if I repeat it over and over I really thank you for all of your support and I hope you'll support me 'til the end. :kneelbow:
Also I have some short stories so if you don't mind reading some of it I'm glad you did~ :hee:
Short Stories (http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=33402.0) <----- LINK
that's all thank you~! : :byebye:
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To all the readers:
Finally I have time to continue this story.I am really sorry for those who want to read this so badly
I just don't have much time to do this fan fic. in such a short time in one day,also there are three of
us siblings that are using the PC and I'm the youngest one and you know...I'm always the one not
getting the chance to use the PC much longer.Anyways the good thing is that I finally updated this fic.
but for now because I'm fully busy on school I'm just goin' to write the SUPER HALF part of Chapter 7
so enjoy >.<
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Skip if you still remember the happenings in Chapter 6.
Summary of Chapter 6:
Takahashi Minami and Maeda Atsuko was chosen as the two main characters for the play.Minami was so surprised by the script of
the play because it really matches her situation right now and so because of that she can't concentrate at the play and always make
mistakes on their practice for the play.After many days later Akimoto arrives at the practice room together with Togasaki Tomonobu
to check the status of the play and after hearing the situation the producer announced that if either the two main characters said
something wrong and random lines that are not written in the script then the whole play would turn into a FREESTYLE play, meaning
they can do whatever they want or say but the settings or the meet ups are still the same they just need to say something that is not
written on the actual script of the play.After hearing that the producer leave the scene together with togasaki.The director panicked on
the announcement and blamed Minami for all of that cause.The leader was hurt for the harsh words but Atsuko defended her but the
director doesn't care at all and pushed the ace because he's pissed off but the leader catches the ace and got mad by the director's
actions against her ace and so she pushed the director until he fell on the ground and then they fled of the scene.
END OF Summarry.
The Problems for 1 month Chapter 7 part 1
"I need to leave you..."
"What?I thought we will be together forever?"
"I'm sorry but it's just that I have someone that I love more than you..."
"No....you're just kidding right?"
"I'm sorry Acchan but that is the truth...I don't love you anymore..."
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"No...stop lying...."
"I'm sorry Acchan but this is goodbye..."
Minami let's go of Acchan's face and goes away from her.Acchan is chasing Minami but for some reason she cannot reach her no matter how fast her
speed of running is.Acchan didn't stop running but then the flat form that she is stepping at started to collapse and turned into a blood-like color.She
fell endlessly to the unknown place,she is crying on what Minami said and then suddenly as she falls endlessly to the unknown place....she saw a hand
that is reaching through her.She didn't think twice to reach that hand and so after she reaches that person's hand, she saw....her.
"MINAMI!"
"!!!A-Acchan!finally you are awake!you shocked me there!"Minami said with a worried tone.
Acchan suddenly hugged the leader tightly.
"You had a bad dream again?"
"U-Un..."the Ace agreed with a crying tone of voice.
"You made me so worried...you were crying as I woke up...I tried to wake you up but you still keep on crying....I tried to hold your hand and that's were you
suddenly woke up..."The leader said while hugging the Ace tightly.
"On my bad dream...no...that was a nightmare....I thought you love someone else....and then...you're going to leave me...."The ace said with a buffering tone of words.
"Why would I do that?I wont leave you...no matter what happens...I'm here."Minami clasped the crying Ace's hands and kissed it with her lips.she can feel her fear,
the shaking of her hands.The endless heavy heartbeats that she can hear through Acchan's body.Minami tightly hugs the Ace tightly and said.
"Just forget that nightmare ok?that wont happen,trust me.Let's go.we have a practice for the play,right?"
"U-un.....thank you..."The Ace weakly replied.
"Mou.What is that half-reply?now reply to me again...but with your smile."
"Ok.Thank you....Minami"the Ace smiled on the part where she said "Minami" and made the leader blush like a tomato.
"That's more like it."The leader said while smiling but still blushing.
END of Chapter 7 part 1
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yes.I know It's so short but I this is the best that I can do to update this fic. my schedule in weekdays is really ruff and at weekends I can't use the
PC too much because again I have 2 siblings that is also using it.So I hope you all wouldn't get mad at me because of this short update on Chapter 7
but it's the best way that I can do to not let you guys wait so long for this fic. to update. I'm sorry again for letting you all wait for so long. :bows:
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too short but still love it :D
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YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FINALLY UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU!!!!!!!
I HOPE YOU UPDATE MORE OFTEN IF YOUR NOT BUSY..
GOOD LUCK!!!
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sweet Atsumina moments :wub:
Acchan's nightmare.. hope it won't be a reality :o
thanks for the update! :thumbsup
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I hope Takamina will never leave Acchan
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uwah~!! everyone thank you for your support on this fanfic. and still kept on reading it~!
I really thought there are no more readers in this fan fic. cuz I update so slowly :on cloudeye:
but still thank you for all the readers out there~!
btw I can't draw on a digital thing right now cuz the app that i am using isn't installed yet in the PC and this leads to my question for you and that is....is it ok for you guys or gals for me to draw the scene in a traditional style in short just a sketch from a notepad or book?
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btw I can't draw on a digital thing right now cuz the app that i am using isn't installed yet in the PC and this leads to my question for you and that is....is it ok for you guys or gals for me to draw the scene in a traditional style in short just a sketch from a notepad or book?
well for me, I'm totally okay with that ^^
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Love this story! Looking forward for the next update! :grin:
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Arghh! So sad but wait for next part
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Just wanted to say that I've been a huge fan of this fic for awhile now and decided to finally comment, an I gotta say that I really love this fic a lot!~ and your drawing skills are amazing too!
I think you are a very talented person and I'll be waiting for you next update ~ :D
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It has been awhile~
Hey Everyone~!It has been uhm....oh! 1 and a half month since I update~!wait....WHAAAAAAT???!!! :stoned:
well that was my reaction after noticing that my fan fic. is taking so long to update and after that I just decide
to update it without putting any drawing on this chapter and for that I'm sorry :kneelbow:
I was so moved by all the replies I received from the latest update of Chapter 7.I still can't believe that there
are still people reading my fiction that hasn't been update for a long time and I actually shed a tear for that. :farofflook:
as for TakaNyan, I really thank you about that comment of yours it kinda make me...
(http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mbrkkruaz41qisl9lo2_500.png)
hehee~ :shy2:
oh yeah!enough of me blabbering!here's the latest update of Problems for 1 Month~! (finally~)
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Chapter 7 part 2 -Sudden Return
"ACCHAN!Hey Acchan!Come on!Don't snob me!"
The worried captain kept calling her Ace but not a single glance was given to her,instead Acchan fastly walk with her head straight up ready to go home
without looking & speaking to the captain.
TAKAMINA POV
Oh man...here we go again with the "Chase and run"thing.This usually happens when Acchan is jealous or if there is something that we can agree with each other.
How did it happen?Well it all started when...
FLASHBACK
"UWAH!Minami?!is that you?"as me and Acchan walked together after our practice for the play,I heard a familiar voice coming from afar.I looked at my back and it
was my friend,Keitaro.As I saw him I waved my right hand and smiled to him and so does he.
After we waved hand with each other,Keitaro approached me and it's like he was about to say something as he was getting closer to us.
"Yo Minami!gone from work?"
"Uhm...kinda."
"Hm~who's you're friend?"Keitaro asked while looking at Acchan with a joyful smile on his face.
"Oh...uhm...she's--"
"My name is Maeda Atsuko,AKB48's center"
Acchan suddenly cut my words and I'm quite surprised that she bravely introduced her name and position yo a person that she met for the
first time.I looked at Acchan at that time and I was wondering on why her face is so serious to a sunny guy like Keitaro.
"Ah so you're the Ace of AKB,huh?"Keitaro said with his kansai ben. accent and also with a smile.
"Yes."again with her serious face,I kept wondering why but I just kept silent and observe their conversation.
"Well it's nice meetin' ya Atsuk--"
"Don't you dare say my first name."
I was shocked on Acchan's actions,her gripping Keitaro's shirt and let it go was surprising.It was the first time I saw Acchan did that.After that
she just fled the scene without saying anything.
"What the hell is that?am I rude to her or somethin'?"
"I don't really know...well I need to go Keitaro,I'm going to clear things up."
"Ok and tell her I'm sorry of what I did."
"I don't think you did anything wrong,see you."
'Hm...I f you say so then,Ja!let's meet again some day!"
END OF FLASHBACK
"Acchan!"Minami kept calling the Ace waiting her to look at her and explain what she did but the Ace kept ignoring the captain and so Minami
has no choice but to hold her left arm tight to stop her from walking.Acchan didn't let Minami's hand go but just stare at the ground silently.
"Why did you did that?"Acchan didn't answer Minami's question,instead Acchan gave her an awkward atmosphere."Oi Acchan!don't you give
me a silent treatme--"
"IT'S A FAN'S INSTINCT OKAY?!"
"fan's....instinct?"Minami got confused on Acchan's answer.
"Yes!A fan's instinct!"
"So then it's a priority of a fan to grip the shirt of the person she fandomizes?"
"NO!I'm not a fan of Keitaro!in fact I HATE HIM!!"
"Hate?then why is it a "Fan's instinct"?"
"I'm sure you know this since you know him,I'm a fan of persona and their leader Kai is being insulted by calling him "midget"I mean can you
believe that?!"
"...so that's why....*please recall the first chapter :D Writter's POV "
"So that's why what?"
"AaaaaaAaAahhHh!!N-nevermind about that!w-well why does Keitaro keep insulting Kai?"
"Uh...well...rumors say that they were H.S. friend but it's kinda weird right?friends turns into rivals.Many people said that Keitaro started their rivalry
and that's why I hate him!"
"....H.S. friends...no ways....Acchan...I have to go somewhere....I need to clear things up."
"wher--"
"Sorry!I need to go!"as soon as possible Minami ran so fast it's like she's in a track in field competition or something.
"....Eh?"Acchan tilted her head.
After that....
"RIKU!!!"Minami exclaimed Riku's name after she opened and reached persona;s dorm.
"Yo Takamina!Great timing!I was about to--"
"Tell me!What is Kai's real name?!"
Minami's body was full of sweat drenching through her shirt,she kept catching some air through the room waiting for Riku's answer
"I knew you would figure that out..."
"....so he is..."
"yeah."Riku smiled.
"But...why?Why did he--"
Before Minami finish saying her question someone suddenly opened the door,as Minami and Riku looked at the direction where the door was,they saw...
"Yo!I'm back Riku!"
A guy with a solid black hair came in the persona dorm."I Don't know who he is but I have a strange feeling around him."Minami said inside her mind.
"Ah!Welcome back....Kai!"
"K--KAI?!"Minami exclaimed Kai's name with full of shock in her face.
"B-But Kai's hair is blonde right?"
"Ah that?well that's just hair spray!this is Kai's original hair color."Riku said while Minami is still confused on the situation right now.
"Anyways her name is Taka--"
"MEGUMI!Takahashi Megumi!Yoroshikunegaishimasu~!"
"Wha..?"Riku wondered on why Minami doesn't want to let Kai know her real name.
"Nice meeting you Megumi-san and thank you for covering as Kai for the past 2 weeks."Kai said with a smile on his face.
"Wait...I though he will be gone for 1 month?What's the point of the title of this story if he's here and it didn't even lasted for 1 month?
that's why this story is entitled "Problems for 1 Month" right?!"
"....what the hell are you talking about?"Riku said with a plain face.
"*sigh nevermind..."
"uhm...If you're wondering on why well actually I go to my province to visit my mom's grave.It's her 5th death Anniversary and I also
ask if it's ok to the group and they said that it's ok but only for 1 month and Riku also said that he knows someone to cover for me and
that is you Megumi-san and I'm really impressed that you do look kinda like me but I'm 150 cm though! but then I stop that brake because
I'm thinking that I might have been bothering that person that is covering me up for the past few weeks."after Kai explained everything,Minami
slowly asks...
"So...It's over?...the deal...is...off?"
"Yeah.I'm greatful that you cooperate and help us encounter many things with us."said by Riku.
"Arigatou ne!Megumi-san."
"....So...this is goodbye then."
"Un.I hope we still see each other again Mi-- er Megumi."Riku said.
"Sure,you can count on that Riku."
After Minami left the scene Kai suddenly spoke...
"...Riku..."
"Yeah?"
"...Why do you think that she didn't say her real name to me?"
"hm....I dont's really know the exact point Kai but maybe...she doesn't want to not let you remember
the "Takahashi Minami" that you used to know anymore."
".....Is that so?...*smiles....I guess...she still have that bruise in her heart huh..."
"I guess you're right....Kaicho."
T.B.C.
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WOOP~!WOOP~!What is Kaicho's relationship to our Captain Takamina?? find out on the next Chapter~
and yes I know that some of you are wondering..."What does Kai look like in this fiction?!!I want to see it!!! :scolding:" and many more mixed emotions~
well here it is~
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I was planning on putting it in the story but then there are words on the side that is really catchy to read so sorry for that because you can see my ugly handwritting and
btw that's how I write the story on scratch :on lol:
that's all~ and the Next Chapter lies in your hands~
If none wants to let this fiction continue it's ok. because I'm slow on updating this... :fainted:
OH! and btw do some of you have any twitter account?if so~ Let's follow with each other~!
here's mine~ https://twitter.com/SH_Yedz (https://twitter.com/SH_Yedz)
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WAAAH! This fic is so interesting! I seriously want to know what is going to happen in the next chapter! Thanks for the update! :hee:
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I've been reading ur fic actually.. :glasses: and its good of course I like it!! :hee:
keep updating Mai-chan~ :)
just take your time hehe
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pls update this as soon as possible!!!!
:banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
thank you for the update,
looking forward for more!!! :thumbsup
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Let me progress what I read. Because of 'something', Kai hates Acchan (maybe because she's close to Takamina :?). And because of another 'something', Kai hurt Takamina and it makes Keitaro hate him and be his rival.
So many 'secrets' for you to reveal in the next chapters, Mai-chan :lol:
I can't wait for this. And btw, your drawing is cute as usual :wub:
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Could it be that Takamina and Kai used to date XD? Kai (which is Takamina in guy form) and Takamina(her real female self) were a couple :wub:. Someone should make a fanfic about these two as I'm sure no one will object Takamina being with this guy :twisted:
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:? I'm so confused right now
Need to read from the start again.... :banghead: still don't get it...
Pls.. Update more:)
:twothumbs
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now Im confused -__-
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Thank you all for reading~! and as always all of your comments
amuse me~ all of your thoughts about the latest chapter is indeed
amusing and thanks for sharing your opinions on what do you think
will happen on the future chapters :)
Some of you might be also thinking "When will the play start?!!I'm so craving for it~!! :weeps:"
well I'm really sorry but this is still not the chapter for it XD
as for this Chapter we will be having Chapter 8 part 1 -A seek to their Past
and we know who's past that was :on lol:
well here's a preview of the next Chapter well actually it's just a picture XD
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That's all~
and please still tune in :kneelbow:
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Everyone Sorry for the wait!Update is done! :bingo:
this chapter as I said to my last post will be the past of two certain people in the fic.
so that your minds will be half-cleared to the confusions you are all having :)
sorry for the rough sketches. :sweat:
so.....ENJOY~!
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Problems for 1 Month Chapter 8 part 1:A seek to their Past
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"but what you did was wrong!"
"IT'S NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!!!
"I'm the student council president so it's my duty to--"
"RAHHH!!!!SHUT UP!!!!"
"!!!!"
"?!"
It was fall in Yoshinaga High,the place where I became the student council president and it is also my duty as the president to provide peace and order to the scholl
but right on that day I think I went a bit overboard.
"HEY!!President's having a fight with Riyota!"
"Eh?!Really?!Where?!I've got to see that live~!"
"Ground floor!"
On that day it all started as I saw class 3-C's Riyota Kurosawa insult a girl on the school gate,I can't hear what he was saying but I can see in the girls face that she is
being hurt by Riyota's words.
Riyota is known as a yankee and a school bully,even teachers are scared of him, with his skills and tall height who wouldn't get scared of him?but I don't agree that
all of us should be scared of him just because of his records of fights.
After I approached and said that he should apologize to the girl, he didn't listen to me but just declared a fight.I can see his fist clenched tightly knowing that I have
broke his temper.He was about to punch me in the face but then suddenly.
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A girl that I don't know suddenly appeared out of nowhere blocking the punch of Riyota.
She looked at me and said,"Are you alright....Kaicho?"
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"Kaicho?"
that was the first time someone said that to me and I felt kind of weird hearing it from her or maybe she just saw my armband that is color red knowing that I am the
S.C. President.
"Huh?T-Taka-kun!Stay away from this!"
"Riyota!Stop doing this!This isn't right you know?"
"tsk."
In such a small amount of time,that girl that I just met let Riyota leave the scene without making a fight.
"Are you alright?Sorry if my friend did that to you."
"No It's ok Miss,I'm the one who should apologize.Making a girl protect me is a big mistake that I did."
"Mou,what's with that formal speech? and don't call me "Miss"!I'm only 14 years old you know?My name is Takahashi,Minami!"
"Thank you very much Takahashi-san!"I said while bowing in front of her.
"Ah!it's nothing!stop doing this formal things to me!It's uncomfortable to me!your position is much higher to me so stop doing that! and
Just call me "Minami",ok?"
"Ah ok Taka....er...Minami.My name is Kirishima Takumi,nice to meet you."
"Nice meeting you Takumi-kun!"
"Y-you called me by my first name..."
"Is there a problem?"
"Ah....no there's no problem."
"Good~!Let's eat?"
"Huh?aaaaAAaAhHhhH!"
Minami grabbed my hand and run to the nearest canteen to eat.Takahashi Minami....was the very first friend that I ever made.
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After a few months later we became friends....ah no....it was more than that....we became best friends.She joined the Student council and elected as
V.P.(Vice President) and won.Thus "The Two Midgets of Class 2-C" was born.
On the other hand, Riyota Kurosawa changed for the good and became the School's S.C. Peace officer.
We also met a guy named Kobayashi Keitaro, a guy from Osaka and transferred here in our school.
Everything went great for me in this school year of mine.....until that day arrived..."
"Yo,Minami!What are we going to talk about?"
It was spring on February,that time Minami called me to talk about something important and so we decided to see each other at the back of the school.
I was so curious about what are going to talk about.After our last subject I rushed to our meeting place.
"Well I have a good news! and I want you to know it first!"
"Eh~ really?what is it then?"
"I passed the audition!I'm officially an AKB48 member!"
"AKB...48?"
"Eh???didn't I told you about that last time?"
"Ah...AKB48...yeah I....remember it now."
"Hey~ Why are you so down?"
"Didn't you said that if you passed and become a member of the group you'll stop going to school?"
"Ah....about that,I talked to the school principal and can you believe it?They're making me graduate!isn't that great?"
"Eh?really?I don't know that"s possible!"
"Neither do i!hahaha!"
"Hahahaha...."
Continuous laughters came out from ourselves but mine was just for hiding my true emotions on that time..
"Uhm....Today."
"Today?"
"Today is my graduation....Takumi-kun."
"?!!!
W-what?"
"Yeah....So...this is goodbye then?"
"Wait...WHAT?!Why didn't you said this to me and to Keitaro?!We're pals right?!!"
"....sorry but our producer said not to tell but...I can't just keep a promise"
"But why,Minami?Why are you saying this to me now?why now?"
"....Sorry."
Minami was about to leave the scene but I just can't accept the facts that she is going to leave us and that includes.....Me...
That time there was a bracelet in my pocket that I was ready to give to her.Even though it's not White Day I still want to
give her a thing for the thanks that I want to give her and for a very special reason too and that is....to say that I love her.
But then this came through.I hold Minami's hand to stop her.
"So...is AKB more important to you than us?"
'Takumi....sorry but this is my dream we are talking about..."
"I...understand.Here I want you to have this..."
"A bracelet?but it's not White Day yet."
"This bracelet resembles our friendship and I hope....you'll remember me when you see this."
"Arigatou,Takumi-kun."
"I....I love you Minami.....with all my heart I will continue to support and love you at the same time.
Even if we are apart I'm here to support you so..."
"I love you too Takumi-kun."
"Minami...."
"But I think that "love" that we feel for each other is not the same so....I'm sorry..."
"Uh....It's ok...."
"Well I need to go Takumi-kun.I hope to see you again next time."
"S...So do I....Minami."
"Byebye!"
"Ah!wait!"
"Hm?"
"R-Ribbon!A ribbon looks good on you!you should try it for once!"
"*smiles
sure!"
After that she was gone and suddenly tears rolled down to my cheeks non-stop.
"It's ok Kai..."
"Riyota..."
"I told you...just call me "Riku"..."
"Did you know this was about to happen huh Riku?..."
"Apparently Yes....sorry about that Kai."
"I-It's ok."
T.B.C.
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White Day is a celebration that happens once a year in japan and can be celebrated in other countries.White Day is the day a guy
gives the girl he loves,adores and can also be a friend a thing that can be presented.EX= chocolate,flowers,bracelets,stuff toy,etc.
Valentines in japan is reversed.Instead of the guy giving chocolates and etc. to the girl,
the girl is actually the one that gives the guy a choco and etc.~!
Well that was the fact for White Day if you are curious to know.
Actually did you know that on Chapter 4 - Rival in Problems For 1 Month.
Kai's real name was mentioned? and it was Kirishima Takumi.
Originally Riku was the one who invented Takumi's nickname, which is Kai.
Japanese of President is = Kaicho.
See the hint?
and in this Chapter Riku was Riyota Kurosawa.
Let's see.
Riyota Kurosawa.
tada~
those were the hints that was given in the previous Chapters and in this Chapter so If you already figure that
out then you should be Maeda-san's assistant detective~! :lol:
there are still many questions in this fan fic. that really needs to be unfold so please tune in~!!! :kneelbow:
--Mai
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Yeah I was half right, Kai was in love with Minami XD but she wasn't! I don't mind seeing some cute moments of these two because...it's just simply hilarious and cute at the same time, Minami and her male version :lol:
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drawing in CATTLEYA??
COOL :mon fyeah:
xDD yey an update!!! :mon cweepy:
wahhh minami and Kai xd cute cute cute :mon kungfu:
arigatou Mai-chan :mon cute:
SEXY! MAGANDA! :mon cam: :mon rockstar: :mon bye:
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Ah.. i got it finally!!..
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Sorry for the slow update :kneelbow: Busy again for school T_________T
@Tanchan Hehehe It would be fun writing a story in that kind of pattern :lol:
@yourockme yep yep~!!Cattleya FTW~!!! :on woohoo:
@Haruko yey~ It's great seeing someone not getting trouble on my story anymore OTL
Thanks for all of your comments~!!It helped me again write the next update~!!!
Problems for 1 Month Chapter 8 part 2
After what happened, Minami graduated and left the school like a dust blown away by the wind.
Is this the thing that they call "pain"?the pain of love?If it is...it does hurt so badly.I can't accept Minami leaving me from behind,I know that I have no rights on stopping her but I can't
just let her create her own path without our guide.
"Don't you you mean your guide?"
I quickly looked at my back on who's the one that said that to me and It was Riyota.
I didn't gave any reply to what he said to me, instead he approached me and seat beside me at the school rooftop and sit comfortably.
"So.What's your plan?I know you're not the type of person that gives up."
Riyota is really good at reading a person's attitude,he knew exactly what I am going to do and that is to not give up on Minami.
"Let's.....Let's create an Idol group."Riyota didn't replied fastly on what I said,he think for about a minute and finally he made up his mind and said:
"Hmm....the one that dances and wears awesome costumes?"
"well....kind of."
"In that case count me in."
Riyota really is a weird person if you'll know him well.It's different for the first time we met.That time he was so different from the Riyota I am with today.
Minami sure is amazing,she can change someone by just consulting to that person.She really is an amazing person....
"Hey...from all the girls that you fell in love with...why Minami-kun?"Riyota suddenly asked me that question,it also made me think on why I fell in love to her.
"I don't really know actually...but every time I see her...my heart is beating so hard...."
Riyota grinned of what I said and said "Hmm~" in a teasy way."Hey stop humming....it's embarrassing talking about her."Riyota just laugh on what I said and just patted my head like a kid.
It makes me want to punch him in the face but the problem is that.....I'm to short to reach his face...
"About the Idol group,I know a person that can help us!"
"Eh?you know one Riyota?Who?"
"I'll take you there for tomorrow."
"Ok then..."
Riyota and I agreed on seeing each other at the meeting place and show me to the person that will help us.
The Next Day....
@ a luxury house...
"uh....." I was speechless on the person in front of us.It's non other than Akimoto Yasushi.
"Come,Sit down,Riyota and?"
"Ah!It's Takumi!Kirishima Takumi sir!"
"In short...Kai...is that right?"
"Ah....yes sir."
After that Riyota and me sat to the sofa chair,which is the first time that I sat on one.I'm still wondering on how Riyota has a connection through Akimo Yashushi himself.
Riyota talk to Akimoto-san and said,"About the Idol group we taked about yesterday....We....we are the members for it!I would like to start an Idol Group!"I didn't moved
any muscle after Riyota saying that to Akimoto-san,instead I just look away and still not saying a word or a feedback to what Riyota said.
"Ah,I see.Well isn't that nice."Akimoto-san grinned after hearing Riyota's words.It's like those words maede him happy and interested by Riyota's offer.
"Why exactly to you want to create an Idol group huh Kai?"
"Ah...uhm....I'm doing it....for the person I love...."
Akimoto-san didn't comment back on what I said for a minute or so.He just crossed his arms and thinks for the words I said.He kept saying "Hmm..."over and over letting me wonder
on what's running inside his mind."Why for the person you love?Do you want to impress that person or to reach her?"Those words also made me think."Why do I decided to create
an Idol group?"I said in my mind.Do I want to impress Minami to let her show that she shouldn't let my love go from her? or is it about the thing called "Jealousy?"
"I....I want to reach that person..."
"Hmm....Interesting...."Akimoto-san let go of his arms that were crossed earlier and laid it on the solid wooden table in front of us.He take a deep breath and said...
"Well...I'm happy that you are willing to do that but there is one problem and that is...the Idol group that I need should have 3 members in it."
"W-We'll find the 3rd person!we promise!"I suddenly spoke to Akimoto-san.After what I said he grinned again,"I see.well that's good.I can see that you are willing to find
that 3rd person so I will give you enough time for it."
"When is the due date?"I asked.
"Tomorrow ofcourse."Me and Riyota got shocked by what Akimoto-san said."Tomorrow?!!You got to be kidding me!"that was the sentence that can be read through our faces as Akimoto-said
that thing to us.Yes it's only one person but it is still hard!
Suddenly someone entered the room.A tall black-haired guy came in and whispered to Akimoto-san's ears with a serious face on it."Is that so?...I'll speak to them don't worry."
That were the words Akimoto-san said as we hear it from him.
Before the tall black-hair guy leave,Akimoto-san suddenly called his name by saying,"Togasaki,wait a minute."
Togasaki-san came back to Akimoto-san,this time Akimoto-san didn't whispered anything and so is Togasaki-san.
"The 3 member Idol group search is canceled."
"W-What?!Why sir Akimoto?!What happened?!"
"I found the people that will do that project and here they are in front of you."
Togasaki-san stared at us for a second and answer back to Akimoto-san.
"Really?Why sir?especially him!"Togasaki suddenly pointed A finger to Riyota.
"Now Togasaki.Even though Riyota is a clumsy guy.This is the first time I saw him get this serious."
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"But sir where is the third member???"
"Togasaki stop asking questions,this problem will be solve.Cancel the search okay?"
Togasaki-san left a sigh and have nothing to do but to listen to Akimoto-san's command.After that Togasaki-san left the room and left a silence to the whole room.
"So!Tomorrow is the deadline for the 3rd member is tomorrow,okay?"
we both nodded at Akimoto-san's words.
"Well we have to go."Riyota said after he stand up to the sofa chair.
"Sure.Goodluck finding that 3rd person Riyota.....my son."
"Ok dad."
"EHHHHHHHHHHHH?!!!!!"is the word I said in my head after hearing those sentences that these two people said in front of me.
T.B.C.
Next Chapter Will still be about How Persona Started and about many things too. :)
btw if you have twitter let's follow each other~!! My twitter link is on my Siggy portion~ :P
See you again~!!
That's all~ :)
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So an excite~
Want to know more...
Waiting for new update!!
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aki.p!!!
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Riyota is akimoto son, :w00t: :w00t:
Why minami run when she find out that kai is takumi? Takumi the one who's has feeling for minami, I'm bit lost :?
Thanx for the update ^^
Waiting for the next update :D
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Riyota.... AkiP's son.... great thinking :? :lol: :)
Wah.... Kai trying to follow Minami... interesting :twothumbs
Great update, Thank you!!! :thumbsup
Looking forward to the next one. :fap :fap :fap
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How come Riyota is Aki-p's son? XD
Looking forward for next chapter :)
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I fell for her fics, I found it today and thought it was very creative, it is the differential the drawings is as if the scenes imaginable stay clearer and, hopefully looking forward to the next chapter =) :thumbsup :thumbsup :bow:
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why no update yet :cry: :(
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I miss the drawings
I miss the chapters
and I miss atsumina
but now I'm reading XD
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Nooo....this fic is on hiatus :cry: :cry: :cry:
But since you said its for the fic
I will be waiting for your update ^^
Ganbatte!!!!! :twothumbs
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H......HOLD?!!!!!! WTF??? :grr: why now?! I marathon-ed this story because I thought it's done but then it's on hold?! OTL :(
What ever is happening to you Mai-chan that involves this story please don't give up and if your loosing inspiration I'll wait for you to grab some :)
more power to PF1M \m/
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I was so stupid that I didn't noticed that link of this fic. on your siggy XD although I know it's already on hiatus I really liked it.
I read it from the start to chapter 8 part 2 and I like your idea on drawing stuffs in this fic!It makes it a lot easier for us readers to imagine the whole story for every scene and I hope you will continue this because it will be a waste if you don't :( plus there are so many readers on this fiction too :(
Again,I like this fiction and I hope this fiction will have a great ending in the end :)
Good Luck and Thanks for this story Mai-chan! :twothumbs
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Mai-chan~ Goodluck! I hope you can update this fanfic of yours... :bow: :bow: :bow:
I'll wait patiently :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Yes!!! Finally update :D
Poor kai, tough love
I kinda get the feeling minami only consider the boys as friends
Is it true?
Never imagine riku is akimoto step son
So twisted hahaaa....
Thank you for the update ^^
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Wohohoho!!!An update~!!! Finally~!!! :shakeit: *butt dance~* anyways every drawing is on grayscale...I wonder why???
Poor Kai....one-sided love sure hurts... :( but I still want atsumina in the end!It's a MUST ending! :P
thanks for the update!
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a fic with pictures i love
great fic :)
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Ouch....sad chapter about Kai....I have felt that one-sided love....OTL
@DarkEye I think Mai-chan used grayscale because this is all a flashback???not really sure though :smhid
Waiting to the update! :twothumbs
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what the... :catglare: so I want to say that PF1M chapter 8 part 3 is deleted due to some issues and some of you are all wanting to know the summary of chapter 8 part 3 then I will summarize it for you :)
sorry for this late notice and I hope you all will understand.
I am planning on stopping this fiction soon if its demand is low :sweat:
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Mai-chan,
Please don't discontinue this series... I like the story very much...
It's Atsumina fic... it's my fav. pairing
Some more there is some crossover with Mendol even if a different version of Mendol... Still it's great.
Please post back the chapter 8 part 3 please pretty please... if possible because I would like to know the whole story... please.
Thank you for writing this nice story I enjoy reading it.
:wub: :inlove: :love: :heart:
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What?I didn't even noticed that chapter 8 part 3 was gone :shocked
you can just do the summary mai-chan and pleasseeeeeee continue this story!!!Don't waste it!For me as your reader :(
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Mai Chan... please don't discontinue this fic...
I beg you :bleed eyes:
I've been a silent reader of your fic, so sorry I only replied/commented recently... :cry:
i will not accept if you discontinue this fic :tama-mad:
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Whaaaaaaaaa..... Awwww man..... is this on hiatus? (wait, is that how u spell it o.o) I was reading this until midnight and I have school to go to... >.< crap didn't notice the time.... The stories are just freakin awesome that's why... XD
Man....I'll play the consequences of staying up late....... IMMA WAIT FOREVER UNTIL THIS GETS UPDATED.... :|
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hope u can continue this story again soon :(