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Your fic really made my day..  :farofflook: AtsuMina interactions here really sweet!!!  :luvluv1: really made my heart melts~  :luvluv2: please give us more adorable and sweet AtsuMina moment!!!  :mon innocent: I can't wait for the play!!!  :mon fyeah:

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I love Yuko, and I love Aki-p! :lol:
the Atsumina moments on the downhill road are just too.. :wub:
now I can't wait for the next chapter XD

thanks for the update :thumbsup

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The plot of the play is just so much a coincidence!!!
I wonder if there's something behind... 8)
Nice Update! :thumbsup

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ATSUMINAAA  :on bleed:

OHHHH MY HEART! ~♥

i love the ideia of making drawings and this fic is perfect, i'm looking forward to the next chapter...

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PLEASE UPDATE FAST..


I CAN'T WAIT YOUR NEXT CHAPTER..

IT;S VERY INTERESTING..
















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Good move yuuchan :D, We know that aki-plove atsumina couple... this gonna be awesone i wanna se that play!! :D

once again great job with your draws :D

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your drawings i really really really like it..
I always say that right?
grrrrr
The story made my imagination filled!
yey!!

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Thank you for reading Everyone~!!! please tune in for the update~!Sorry If I update so slow lately...
there are many weird things that is happening to my life lately  :dizzy: and I need to recover from it...
I hope you all understand.. :kneelbow: as of now I finally saw and read all of your feedbacks and I bet
you are all excited for the play~! and so I give you a little sneak peak of it~!




that's all~!!

and I really thank you all for reading this fic.!!  :kneelbow: :kneelbow: I hope this fan fic. kinda made your day nicer >.<


Chapter 6 will be updating soon~!! :byebye:
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Can't wait for your update! It's damn lovely! We need more Atsumina =)

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Can't wait for your update! It's damn lovely! We need more Atsumina =)

Thank you for reading~! :kneelbow:



Enjoy reading the latest update~! and please don't kill me  :kneelbow:

The Problems for 1 month Chapter 6 - The First Kiss
 



The Next 2 days...


 
"WHY DID YOU LIED TO ME?!WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY THAT YOU WHERE HIM IN THE FIRST PLACE?!I THOUGHT WE WERE BESTFRIENDS?!"
 
"'Acchan will you calm down?I have an explanation for th--"
 
"CUT!What the Heck Takahashi?!?!That's not written in the script!!This is Take 5 already!TAKE FIVE!!!Focus will you?!"The director was so mad at Takamina because of her clumsiness.
 
"OK! 5 MINUTES BREAK!!"
 
"Hey...what's wrong Minami?"Acchan said in a worried tone.
 
"It's just that....*sigh....It's hard to explain..."Takamina said while in the same time upset in her own self.
 
"HEY~!Cheer UP~!"The Ace gives a strong pat on the leader's back.
 
"Ack!thank hurts you know?"the leader said with a painful tone.
 
"Hehehe~"The Ace just smiled on the leader's reaction.
 
Takamina sighted she doesn't know what to do on the play.It is just so realistic to her,she just want to say what she really feels and forgets the lines on the script.
It's like all of the happenings on the script is like the prediction on her future right now.
 
Suddenly the producer arrives with Tomonobu Togasaki (the manager of AKB) and approaches the director...
 
"How is it going with the play?"the producer asked the director in a formal matter.
 
"I-It's nearly done s-sir!"the director nervously said to the producer with a blank face.
 
"Nearly  done?this play is just short but yet it's nearly done?as you know you have directed the earlier plays that involves this group and you have a beautiful career
as a 2 years experienced director but as you know that is not enough for me to be amazed by you.Remember the play you directed entitled Infinity?It turned out great
 and it only lasted 1 and a half days and yet the script is long!and this play that you are directing right now is just a short play and yet 2 days had already passed?"the
producer said still in a formal speech yet with a scary aura around him creating the director to nervously say something back.
 
"It's...It's just that....--"
 
"I'M SORRY THIS IS ALL MY FAULT!"Suddenly Takamina cuts the words of the director;The producer,Togasaki-san and the Ace looks directly to the midget captain bowing
 infront of the producer.Everyone's in shocked of the midget's sudden apology except for the producer;His face is blank with no expressions at all.........The director and
also the two doesn't know on what the producer is thinking right on that moment and the midget captain is still looking down on the wooden floor bowing infront of the producer.
It's like everyone is frozen on that time, no one is talking,no one is moving and not even the sound of the people from outside can be heard until the producer talks and breaks the ice by saying...
 
"So I see now I get it where this is going.I don't need explanations on what are your reasons right now for this play,you all can continue on what you are all doing earlier and
Takahashi,don't blame yourself to all of this,everyone's got a reason for all of this happenings around here,you understand?"
 
the midget captain raises her head and looks up to the producer with a serious face and properly said "yes" to the producer.
 
"Good.Director-san, how many takes is this scene you're doing?"
 
"Uhm....Take 5 sir..."The director said poorly to the producer and then looks down on the wooden floor.
 
"I see....in that case I have a special announcement for this play."the four people inside the room were at shock because of the sudden announcement Akimoto-san declared to say.
 
"IF well...IF the main characters meaning Maeda Atsuko and Takahashi Minami messes up on the stage and forgets their lines to say....we will  make this play a.........
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FREESTYLE play.
 
"That's all.We have to go.Togasaki-san let's go."
 
"Yes."
 

The producer leaves...
 

"I could not believe this is happening to me!!A FREESTYLE PLAY?!Are you kidding me?!"the director is turning nuts to the producer's announcement earlier, he doesn't know on what to do in this play anymore.
 
"Director-san?"
 
"What now Takahashi?Are you going to ruin my career as a director too?!this is my chance to show my great skills as a director but then you came and ruining all of it!
and I'm doing this for the great Akimoto Yasushi!don't you know that my face will be printed on the newspaper if you fail this play in a negative way?!"the director keeps
lecturing the midget captain and  bit by bit Minami's heart is falling apart, the harsh words that the director says to her is just too much for her heart to handle. yes,Akimoto-san
said not to blame herself to all of this happenings but right now she realizes that she's still the person to blame for why this thing that is happening right now is not going so well,
that she is also the reason that the producer announced the freestyle play,that she is also the reason why the director is losing fate over his career.It's all her fault,that is what
Minami's thinking right now and as she thinks deeper she suddenly sheds a tear on her cheeks,she doesn't know why but she can't stop.she wipes and wipes her tears off yet it
wont stop flowing into her eyes.the director ignores her crying and still lectures her and so the midget captain's heart is being pounded in to bits by the harsh words of the director.
 
"WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE TO JUDGE MINAMI?!"The ace suddenly shouted but with a scared tone to the director.
 
The director was shocked.The ace suddenly shouted on him straightly while the midget captain was still wiping her tears of her skin.
 
"And who do you think you are to scream on me?!"
 
"I am AKB48's Maeda Atsuko! and I know that I have no authority to say that things to you earlier, but it's true!Minami is different!she have done many things in AKB!she's a great
leader and never gives up on us!she never gives up! she's a great person!"
 
"Hmm............So?LIKE I CARE!"
 
The Ace suddenly turned black...it's like suddenly her aura changed,she was insulted by the director's harsh words that he said to her little captain, she was pissed off by the director's behavior.
 
"You should care. And you?what have you done in your stupid and wasted life?"
 
"S-stupid?!Listen here Ms. Maeda! as you know I have directed many plays and 2 movies right now!and that is just for 2 years only!"
 
"So?"
 
"So my life is not wasted!!!"the director is getting pissed off by the ace sudden chage of attitude.
 
"Yeah right."
 
The director suddenly grabs the Ace's dress with full of anger.
 
"Listen here MS. MAEDA ATSUKO. as you know I focused alot on directing many stuffs.I studied many things to directing and that is to be famous and to know my name!and here are my efforts
being paid off until you two showed off....know MS.MAEDA ATSUKO...what can you say about that?"
 
"What can I say?I say....Your wasting your life.2 years and you just aimed to be famous and your name to be known by everyone?is that what you all did for that life God gave you?Directing movies,plays
and etc.,to be famous and to be recognize?from all the directors I know, fame is not the main reason that they started directing.Yes,there are many reasons but there is one thing that most of the directors
 say that you didn't and that is....the passion in directing and yes,I didn't even feel and see a scent of passion inside of you since I first saw you in Day 1 of this practice for this play,yeah you're a great director
but where is your passion?is it still half-baked in the oven? or is it rotten?like your heart."
 
The producer pushes the ace aways from him with incredible power.The ace was expecting that the director will do that to him, she was about to hit the wall but someone catches her and it was the midget Captain,Takahashi Minami.
 
"How dare you.....HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT TO M--"
 
 
"YOU DON'T HAVE THE RIGHTS TO TOUCH MY ATSUKO!"
 
"Well!LOOK WHO'S TALKING HERE!Ms.Takahashi Minami!you have finally stopped crying like a baby."
 
Takamina was pissed off, she was pissed off by the director pushing her Ace just like it's just toy or something.The midget Captain graps the shirt of the director.
 
"LISTEN you gay...you don't have and always have the rights to say that to Atsuko.you have to go through me to do
that."
 
"G-gay?!Why you!!!"the director tries to push the midget captain but he was shocked my the strength of it's grip to his
shirt.
 
"GET OFF OF ME!!!"
 
"Sure!"The Midget Captain pushes the director with great power thus the director face was accidentally banged on the wall.
 
"Atsuko lets go!"
 
"Carry me~"the Ace suddenly teases the Captain on a serious scene that is happening right now but yet the Captain didn't noticed that the Ace was teasing her because she thought that
 the Ace has an injury because on the director's push to the ace earlier.Atsuko's heartbeat became so fast, it was the first time Minami carried her in a princess way.her face is so red, she
was so nervous yet so happy that this thing is happening right now.
 
"Hey.are you alright?"the Captain questioned the ace and still running out of the building.The ace nodded on the Captain's question, she just can't speak on that moment while her heart is screaming out of joy.
 
 
Many Minutes later...
 


@Atsuko's Apartment...
 
"UWAH~!!We finally get away from that creep!"the ace said with a relief tone.
 
"You know Acchan....what you did there was so brave...thank you...and sorry if that stinky gay director pushed you...
this is all my fault."Takamina turned down again because of her ace being hurt by blaming herself again.
 
"Mou~ you're blaming yourself again!"
 
"But it's really my fault..."
 
"For the last time,it's not!you're innocent Minami so stop blaming yourself ok?"
 
"*smiles  ok."
 
"and if it wasn't for that stinky gay director I will not hear the sweet sentence that you said earlier~!"
 
"What sentence??"
 
"YOU DON'T HAVE THE RIGHTS TO TOUCH MY ATSUKO!I don't know that you love me that much~!"
 
".....E-EEEH?!?!?!I-I didn't said that!!"the Captain was so shocked that she let her guard off by saying that
embarrassing thing to the director.
 
"hahaha then who did?the director?"the Ace just teased her blushing Captain.
 
"Mou~Atsuko!!"Atsuko was laughing yet so happy while seeing her little captain's face pouting and blushing at the same
time.
 
"Ne Minami."
 
"Yeah?"
 
"I know that I'm too late to say this but I want to end this thing that I'm feeling inside my heart...."Suddenly the atmosphere changed in Atsuko's apartment they were joking earlier but suddenly it became serious.
 
"What is it?you can say it right now."The Captain was so worried to her beloved ace, she can see her holding her chest
making the Captain to know what's running in the mind of her beloved Ace.
 
"Minami...*Suki dayo...Do you love me too?"
 
"Is that a *Suki dayo as a friend?"
 
"Bakamina!!!do you think I will talk like that if it was a *Suki dayo as a friend?you're such a slowpoke!!"the ace pouted
for the slow understanding of her Captain.
 
"So I think that's a yes then?"
 
"MOU!!!"the ace pouted again but the Captain is just teasing her to see her cute and childish face.( and also to get some payback for teasing her too much.)
 
"I'm just kidding around...but you know honestly I was thinking that you just liked me as a friend...but in the end you're really just a pure tsundere!
why didn't you get in the sub unit of the Tsundere girls?"Takamina keeps teasing her beloved ace."MOU Minami!I'm not a TSUNDERE~!!!"the ace is pouting and blushing at the same time.
 
"Ne...I didn't hear your answer..."
 
"Answer?"
 
"Bakamina..."the ace pouted.
 
"hahaha....yeah....I love you too...so much more than a bestfriend....you are my life,you are my only one."
 
the cheesy words that Takamina said to Atsuko made her blush so much she almost looked like a tomato.It was the first time she heard that thing from Minami
 to her ears,it was a pure joy to her on that night and so to make Atsuko's night complete she said...
 
"Then.....Kiss me."
 
The Leader suddenly blushed so hard by the sudden words of her beloved Ace.She suddenly remembered her first kiss that was from Atsuko too that happened on the
Heavy Rotation PV Making, she remembered that she was making effort to move her lips away from Atsuko from that time but after Atsuko's lips touch her lips she craves for more
 and now this is her chance.
 
"This is my first time on kissing someone so....sorry if it's not the best kiss that I could give."
 
"It's ok infact I'm quite happy that I'm going to be the first girl that you are going to kiss..."
 
the two girls are blushing with each other making the atmosphere even hotter that usual.The Ace suddenly leans forward to Minami and then closes her eyes and awaits for the leader's
lips to touch hers.Minami's heart is pumping so hard, it's the happiest and the greatest day of her life because she finally knew that the love that she is feeling is not one-sided after all
 but it was a pure love that they were feeling for each otherand so as the ace's face is so close to hers, she closed her eyes and let their lips touched together.As the Leader's lips touches
 the lips of Atsuko bit by bit
their kisses gets wilder and wilder and wilder until they stopped to get some air.
 
"Atsuko...I love you..."
 
"*smiles...I love you more~"
 
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Meanwhile at a secured place...
 
"Akimoto-san....Don't you think you pushed to far?"
 
"It's ok Togasaki-san....I think this play is going to be an interesting one..."
 
"But the director said that he is going to quit!"
 
"He is going to quit?*smirks then let's fire him before he quits this play."
 
"but we don't have a director!"
 
"It's ok Togasaki-san because right now this play is going to be a Freestyle Play from now on."
 
"You sure are full of surprises Akimoto-san."
 
"hahaha.now let's fire that director,shall we?"
 
"Yes Akimoto-san."
 
 
T.B.C.
 
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WOOT~!!as you all notice I didn't draw anything here in this chapter and that's because....THE TABLET'S CABLE IS MISSING~!!  :stoned: :OMG: :dizzy: :imdead:
 and btw I made the hot scene not that detailed because I can't handle the heat on writing it! :on lol: it just makes me go :nya: so sorry if I lack of details on that
kinds of scenes  :err: :depressed:

and still the next update still lies in your hands:DD


ja~ sankyuu for reading~!! :byebye:
 
« Last Edit: August 12, 2012, 03:23:15 AM by Mai-chan »
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Thank you for posting your next chapter

please update always

thank you

i always wait for your next chapter
hello.

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I really love their songs.

I really like their fan fiction.




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aki-p you minnie!!

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Thank you for posting your next chapter

please update always

thank you

i always wait for your next chapter

Thank you for your support :)

aki-p you minnie!!

bhahaha :on lol: atleast the director was gone~!
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON

I WANT TO READ YOUR NEXT CHAPTER

HUHU :(
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #54 on: August 16, 2012, 12:27:49 PM »
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

I WANT TO READ YOUR NEXT CHAPTER

HUHU :(

Well I was about to write something about this so please read.




AUTHOR'S NOTE:
I know some of you are expecting the update Chapter 7 but I'm sorry because it's not... :(
As some of you noticed I haven't updated this fiction for the past few days and it's because
1ST obviously School and 2ND the disaster that happened to our country and that is a trouble
for me and my batch schoolmates because our time to submit our project for every subject is
risky and is hard to do and what I'm focused on right now is the play that we are having that will
be happening tomorrow and I was the one assigned to write the summary of the play~!look at the
coincidence!writing a play in school and writing the play in this fic. XD anyways the story that I'm
going to summarize is entitled "Iliad and Odyssey" it's a great epic by the way so why not try and
read it! :D

so that's my author's note right now and I will just HOLD this fic. for a while and if I have the chance
of writing or continuing this fic. I'll do it right away~! :on speedy: for the readers that really craves for
the next update I am really sorry and I beg for your patience that's all,thank you. :kneelbow:
« Last Edit: August 17, 2012, 12:20:51 PM by Mai-chan »
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #55 on: August 17, 2012, 04:20:53 AM »
I hope you will be ok... but ii wanna know what happen in your country? PM maybe?

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #56 on: August 17, 2012, 12:18:48 PM »
I hope you will be ok... but ii wanna know what happen in your country? PM maybe?

a large typhoon got in to our country and has caused many lives of our people here though our
family is not affected our school is so that's why :(
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #57 on: August 17, 2012, 01:35:03 PM »
I hope you will be ok... but ii wanna know what happen in your country? PM maybe?

a large typhoon got in to our country and has caused many lives of our people here though our
family is not affected our school is so that's why :(

I came from the same country... it's not really a typhoon, but almost like one anyway. It was just rain and a really hard one at that.
Btw... What city are you from? I'm from QC.

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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #58 on: August 17, 2012, 01:59:15 PM »
I came from the same country... it's not really a typhoon, but almost like one anyway. It was just rain and a really hard one at that.
Btw... What city are you from? I'm from QC.

I'm also from QC but my school is in Manila and as we know that was the part that mostly suffered from the floods and stuff :(
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Re: Problems For 1 month [Atsumina~! UPDATED!- 8/16] AUTHOR'S NOTE
« Reply #59 on: August 17, 2012, 02:18:54 PM »
HOW A SAD :(

I'M ONE OF YOUR FANS

I LIKE YOUR FAN FICTION VERY MUCH

BUT I WILL UNDERSTAND YOU

PLEASE.. IF YOU MAKE AN UPDATE ONE OR MORE CHAPTERS

THANK YOU

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