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Offline Kuumin1234

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Re: a (very) short drabble - Pairing : Mayuki
« Reply #40 on: December 14, 2012, 06:06:04 PM »
@Kuro--Black : yea , in the last second she can touch Haruna .. Ah , thank you very much for always waiting patiently and already read my fic Kuro--black-san :kneelbow:

@haruhi16 : thank you very much haruhi16-san :kneelbow: and you cried ? Uwa , sorry for making you cried haruhi16-san :kneelbow:

@Chichay12 : u-uwa , i-i'm very sorry Chichay12 :( I'm truly sorry D: but thank you for already read this if Chichay12-san :kneelbow:

@seighcretz : ah , thank you very much seighcretz-san :kneelbow: I'm glad that you like it :)

@BbSis : a-ah , BbSis-san , you seriously cried ?? I'm sorry QwQ ahh, emm , thank you very much for already read this fic and thank you very much for the compliment BbSis-san :kneelbow:

@AkemiHomura : ah , really ? Yes , the bond that they have was strong :) errr , thank you very much AkemiHomura-san :kneelbow:

@Haruko : ヽ( ゚Д゚)ノ u-uwaaa , I'm sorry Haruko-san , to make you Kojiyuu heart become like that QwQ I'm very sorry :kneelbow: but .. Thank you for already read this fic Haruko-san :kneelbow:

@Chanaline : haha , it's okay Chanaline-san :D emm , about that , I don't know why but somehow , I got many ideas to write a sad things ... Ah , thank you so much Chanaline-san :kneelbow: 

@Kahem : ah yea , poor Yuko ... And poor Haruna too :( thank you very much Kahem-san :kneelbow:

Emmm ,, I think I made another sad story again .... And yea , this is a drabble .. I'm sorry , right now , I still don't have an idea about the gratefulness fic / happy fic .. But I will try to make it after this one .... I hope you guys like it :) ( and err ... It was very very short ) :



I open an album.

It's dusty and worn out.

I look at all of the pictures , my mind's flying.

It was full of love.

I remembered all those stories , about my life.

People said I always get spoiled.

People said she always encouraging and protecting me.

The beautiful melodies ... Always come from her.

The naughty tears from my eyes...

It will not be a burden for you.

Soft and pure hands , have lifted this body.

You willing to give all the whole entire body and soul..

Kashiwagi Yuki ..

even if you're not here anymore by my side , you will always be in my heart.

End

So just like that , very very short , isn't it ? I hope it was not awful ^^" like always , if it's not bothering you guys , please give me a comment or critic .. Thank you very much :kneelbow:  :kneelbow:

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Re: a (very) short drabble - Pairing : Mayuki
« Reply #41 on: December 14, 2012, 07:02:29 PM »
I don't understand....(the drabble) Yuki is dead???

Sorry... I don't understand...
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: a (very) short drabble - Pairing : Mayuki
« Reply #42 on: December 14, 2012, 07:56:10 PM »
:cry:  Poor Mayuyu ><

I don't understand....(the drabble) Yuki is dead???

Sorry... I don't understand...

I think it can be interpreted in two ways: first one, Yukirin is indeed dead; second one, Yukirin left Mayuyu for someone else.

Which are both sad, in my opinion ><

Sad and good, congratulations Kuumin^^

Yes, I cried^^ and please drop the -san o/

See ya next os o/

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Re: a (very) short drabble - Pairing : Mayuki
« Reply #43 on: December 15, 2012, 03:31:24 AM »
Yeah , I think the same way as BbSis(-san) It's was sad :'(  btw , I like your OS and drabble :D thank you for the update , looking forward for the next OS / drabbles :hee:

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Re: a (very) short drabble - Pairing : Mayuki
« Reply #44 on: December 15, 2012, 02:20:23 PM »
:cry:  Poor Mayuyu ><

I don't understand....(the drabble) Yuki is dead???

Sorry... I don't understand...

I think it can be interpreted in two ways: first one, Yukirin is indeed dead; second one, Yukirin left Mayuyu for someone else.

Which are both sad, in my opinion ><

Sad and good, congratulations Kuumin^^

Yes, I cried^^ and please drop the -san o/

See ya next os o/

Then I prefer choose the first one... Even if Yuki is dead...

And me too drop the -san
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Re: MaYuki's OS : Bitter and Sweet's life
« Reply #45 on: January 05, 2013, 07:01:00 PM »
@Chanaline : um , sorry for making you confused .. I'll tell you the detail under this message :) and thank you very much Chanaline :kneelbow:

@Bbsis : there are some parts that are right :) I will write the detail under this and thank you ver much Bbsis :kneelbow:

@Kuro--Black : Thank you very much Kuro , and if you're still a bit confused , please tell me with email because I rarely online in jphip :D :hee:

So .. Um , the story was about Yuki and Mayu's got an accident ( maybe .. A car accident ) Mayu was hit on the head so she got some kind of amnesia I think .. While Yuki's was hit directly so she was death ( I'm truly sorry that I killed Yuki ^^" :nervous: ) so all of their ( Mayu and Yuki )'s friends told her how Yuki would spoiled Mayu , etc... And Mayu could only see all of the memories by the picture on the album , it was all contain of Mayu and Yuki's pictures before that accident came ... And I hope you guys understand what I say ^^" .. I made another MaYuki's OS .. Sorry for the grammatical errors and for the ... Bad words .. ( But I censored it anyways :nervous: )

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Everyone , everybody , everything's that have life and lives in this world definitely have a story.

So do I , and I'm gonna tell you about my story.

I'll introduce myself first. The names Mayu Watanabe , age 16 , live in an ordinary house , like to read Manga , watching Anime , buy doujinshi and anime figma. I like to made many mechanical works , like sometimes if my tv was broken , I can repair it by myself. And I used my hobby to protect my house , I made a cctv in many room , such as : dining room , living room and of course I'll not put it in the toilet. That it's , now I could told you about my story now.
 
Alarm. Everyday , every morning , that sounds always come out hurting my ears. It's irritated me , seriously , though I'm the one that set it to rang in the morning but I found it was annoying. Maybe , you guys agree to me.

New day , but still the same usual boring day. Wake up , brush teeth , take a bath , and eat breakfast. Different from others , I eat my breakfast all by myself. Yea right , my parents always got busy so I rarely see them. I loved them actually , but I hate it when they are too busy and don't have time to accompany their daughter. Well , about that we will skip it shall we ?

After that , I got on my bike and go to my school. On the way to the school , I see my best friend. Her name was Kashiwagi Yuki . Shortly , she's my best friend and my one and only friend , known as Queen reaction , kind with others and popular with boys and girls.

"Morning"

"Ah , Mayuyu , good morning. You're riding a bike ?"

A nod.

"Hmm ... then , mind if I ride with you ?"

"Sure" information for you guys ..  maybe my body is small , but I have a huge stamina , so don't underestimate this CG.

She smile and get on my bike  But don't know why she nearly fall down , so with a quick decision , I grab her wrist and help her so she won't fall down.

"Be careful Yukirin" I said to her , and then let go of her wrist , she nod and this time I watch her sit so then I can make sure that she's okay.

"Ready ? If you afraid of fall down , just hug me" I said.

"E-ehhh" she look at me with a wide eyes

"Hey , its not that kind of meaning.." I said as I look back to her and sweat drop.

"Well , if you sure that you wouldn't fall down or don't want to hug me , then it's up to you" I said and start to pedal the bike.

I can feel that her hand is holding my uniform and her head lay down to my back . Somehow , I think I feel that her cheek was kind of ... Warm , but her hands temperature was just normal.

Silent.

"Are you blushing ?" I said , keep on pedaling the bike , and keep look front.

"A-ah .. N-no I'm not" she replied as she don't let her head lay down to my back anymore. Well .. that was awkward. I take a glance to her and it's giving me a shock.

"Uwa !! What happen to your face ??? Are you catching a fever ?!" I said as I stop pedaling and stare at her while she panic and try to cover her face by her two hands.

Cute~

.........

The heck did I just thought.

"Emmm ... Errr , the weather is just very hot , right ? So , emmm ... Yeah , my face become like this .. A-ahaha~" She said following by an awkward laugh. That's weird , but I just decided to ignore it.

"Well then , if you're okay , we should go now"
I look back to front while she grab my uniform again but this time she don't let her head lay down on my back.

*at the school*

"We're already arrive" I said to her as I stop pedaling my bike while she stand up from the bike.

"Thank you Mayuyu .." She said as we walk to the school together. Ps : we're in the same class so we could walk together.

"Your welcome" I replied. When we come to the class , like always , they greet us .. Eh , no. I mean they greet Yukirin while I don't get any of that but I'm already use to it so I just ignore it and went to my seat .. Somehow , I can feel that Yukirin was looking at me with a sad face.

"Hi" a girl suddenly greet me with a smile . I feel suspicious about that smile but I just greet her back.

"..hi"

"Mind if you come with me?" She ask.

"Well.....okay.." I reply a bit hesitate and then I follow her. She keep on walking , walking and walking until we arrived to a certain place. She brought me to the place where it was dark and no one was there. I feel a bit relieve if she want to fight with me because I could fight one people , but the one that make me surprise was that suddenly many girls came out and surrounded me.

"you'll have to pay this , your Father make our parents suffer!" One of the girls said.

'Not again..' I though.

"My Dad never made anyone suffered ." I reply.

"You just never see that right !? I've seen it with my own eyes . Your parents hit my mom with a car by will" the other one say.

"No. My Dad would never do that , You guys just don't know anything about them!" I shout to them.

"What ?? You're the one that don't know anything about them!!" Another girl shout to me and they start to kick me like a crazy people.

"You little brat! After what your Father has done , you still want to fight with us ?!" the girl said shouting back as they keep on kicking me while I don't reply it , I just trying to resist the pain by protecting my stomach with my hands and bit my lower lips. But then , I feel that someone was standing in front of me.

"Yu-yukirin??"

'Yu..kirin?'

"What are you doing here ?? move away" the girl said but she just got a glare from Yukirin.

"And what are you doing here bullying her !? GET AWAY YOU TRASH!!!" That voice .. It's definitely was Yukirin .. And I guarantee that she was mad now... But honestly , I feel happy because she was protecting me.

"Because she's an useless human , when somebody was useless they should just vanished from this world" the girl replied. That words.. It's hurt me really much .. My body got really hurts now but yet it was replace .. My chest was hurt. And suddenly , In a second after she said that , I hear a loud 'pak' and it's make me to look up and I see the girl cheek was red.

"You jerk , don't talk about Mayuyu like that." Yukirin said and then she let out a black aura.

"..crap , it's hurt so much !! Why are you protecting her ?? She's no one to you !!" The girl said as she rub her cheek.

"Then I should tell you this , if that hurt you so much , how about her that you guys kick it and bullying her with a full power ?? .. And I will tell guys this , you guys was just a WEAK PEOPLE. It's definitely hurt like hell when one people get a kicked by so many people. And NO. She not anything to me , she's my LIGHT. Since I already explained it , GET LOST NOW" Yukirin reply. I just stare at her while they took a glance at us and leave us.

"Mayuyu , you okay?" Yukirin said as she kneel in front of me and stare at me with a concern look. Then , she suddenly silent for a while.

"Mayuyu.." She said and wipe something from my eyes. It feels wet and I just realized that she was wiping my tears. I even don't know that my tears just came out from my eyes. I think I can't ignore the pain anymore , my chest become more hurt.

"The words that they said .. Ignore it. You didn't fit like that .. I ... Miss your smile" Yukirin said and it make me startled. She cup my cheek and make me to look directly to her.

"Okay?" She smiled. I just silent for a while , staring at her black eyes.

"..thank you Yukirin" I say with a smile and somehow her face show a relieve face.

"But .. I can't resist the pain... Why .. Why do I live in this kind of situation??" I said and tears start to came out from my eyes.

"Don't worry Mayuyu .." She said as she wipe back my tears with her thumb and hug me.

"I'll protect you" Yukirin said.

"Remember what I use to say to you when you feel this way ?" Yukirin ask as she broke the hug and look at me.

"Live your life .. As yourself.." I said , still with a teary eye.

"Yes.. Definitely , your life would become better.. Trust me" Yukirin said with a smile.

"Uhn.." I nod.

"Now , let's go to the infirmary first to heal your wound , alright?"

"Okay.." And then I got a smile from her.

*after school*

After school , I and Yukirin walk back to our own house . Yes , we walk together because coincidentally our house was a bit near to each other. We walk , but differently I walk as I brought my bike but It doesn't matter for me.

"Well , I will walk this way , bye Mayuyu" she said as she wave her hand.

"Yes , bye Yukirin" I replied with a smile.

"And if something happen , just call me okay?" Yukirin said while I nod.

"Okay , bye" I said and then we walk separated.

"I'm home" I said as I realized that there's my dad sitting in the living room , reading a newspaper.

"Welcome home .. Ah , what happen to your face ??? Somebody hurts you??" he ask as he approach me with a concern look.

"Em , no , nothing happen , I just play with my friends and got into an accident .. That's all" I lie , because I don't want him to be mad at them and made another case so I just choose to lie.

"Well .. If you say so.." He reply still feeling a bit concern. I like that side of him .. but why they keep on telling me that they're evil?

"Where's mom?" I said , hoping that I could change the topic.

"Well , I think she'll come back so--" before he manage to finish his words , the door suddenly slam , revealing my mother-in-law with an angry look. She walk in fast pace to dad and suddenly she slap his cheek hard in front of me , making me shock. Because the slap was very hard , in the corner of his lips , there's a bit blood.

"Wha??"

"You..you...you did it again !?"

"Did what ??"

"Don't fooling around, you killed a man"

"What ?? I stay at home from this noon ! There's no way I could killed a man when I stayed in this house!"

"Hmphh , hahahaha" then she laugh loudly while Dad stare at her with a "what the" look.

"Seems like my acting failed , well then I should tell you now" she said.

"I'll take all of your money. Remember , 'ALL'. And it would be easy ! I just tell the police about this and bam! I got many money for me" she said as she smirk.

"What ? W-what are you talking about ?? H-how could you do such a thing ... So after all this years your love for this family was just an acting and you only want .. My money??" Dad said with a sad look and depressed tone.

"Yup" she said as her smirk goes wider.

"Because it's hard for me to get out now , I'll just make you pass out for a while. And I know that you'll never want to hit a woman , that is your weakness. So it's easy" she said as she approach Dad and punch his stomach while Dad was shock and he can only stare at her.

"Y-you are the one that made all of the sick issue about me ??" Dad ask still don't believe what has he heard and saw.

"Hmp .. Indeed. All of this, all of the issue about you made other family suffered was made by me , your own wife" then she laugh again. What she has done , what she has said , really .. It was sick. My blood boil hearing what she said that she's the one that made the issue. Can't hold the anger , I run approach her and this time I'm the one that slap her. AND I slap her really really hard. I felt satisfied though.

"You ... You SICK WOMAN!!" I shout to her. Instead of angry , she laugh again.

"BITC* !! Stop laughing !!" I shout again, but to my surprise she suddenly kick me , make me fall down and groan in pain while she just continue to laugh. What a crazy woman.

"MAYU !!" My dad shout as he look at that crazy woman with anger.

"What ? Don't stare at me like that , I know you could never punch , me slap me or kick me" she said with a wide grin.

'Uh .. I couldn't fight her with that 'superwoman' force. What should I do know ?? ..' I though to myself.

"Hehe , this is fun.. I'll continue it tomorrow , you guys better thanks me for letting you guys live for one day. And you , my husband , don't tell police about this or I would tell them about Your another issue that I made.. You too girl.." She said as she laugh and leave.

"Mayu , you okay ?" Dad ask as he walk weakly to me.

"Uhn , I'm okay .. I better heal your wound" I said.

"No , I should heal yours first"

"It's okay , there's no wound on me , it's only my stomach that feels a bit hurt." I said , smiling to him while he smile back.

"Mayu.."

"Yes?"

"I'm sorry I brought you in this kind of situation" he look at me sadly.

"It's okay" I said smile to him , then he hug me.

"It's okay" I murmur as I hug him back.

*next morning*

My stomach become more hurt that yesterday
So I got no choice to keep on hold my stomach. And differently , this morning there's my dad sitting in the living room and greet me with a smile while I smile back to him.

"I'll be going now Dad"

"Be careful"

"Okay"

And yea , today , I can't ride my bike to school because I have to walk holding my stomach with my one hand so I walk to school and like usual I met her again. I greet her and she greet me back. Good that she didn't recognize me holding my stomach until we arrived at the school.

"Ne Mayu ?"

"Yes?" I said.

"Why are you hold---" before she could finish the sentence , I cut it.

"Ah ! 5 more minute before school start ! We better hurry" I said.

"O-okay.." She replied. Good , nice job Mayu. And so we walk to our classroom.

*break time*

Crap. I don't have an appetite to eat this food , my stomach hurt so much. Now what should I do ?? I can't let her about this... Now readers , I would tell what was the problems. Today , she made a food especially for me but I can't eat it because of that stupid woman.

"What's the matter ? You don't like it ?" She ask.

"No no , I like it ! I'll eat it then" I said and then I got a smile from her. I gulp when the food was already near my mouth .. Ain't got no choice , I eat it slowly with my own two hands and praying to God so that my stomach would be just fine. And wow , I can still taste her home made cooking . I'll tell the truth , it was delicious ( Author Note : in this Fic , Yuki's home made cooking was delicious :p ) but well my stomach become more hurt. I flinch and hold my stomach again with my two hands. After my stomach become more relax , I take a peek at her and I become panic as she look at me with a confused look.

"Eh ? What happen ?? Is it not good ??" She ask.

"NO !!! It was delicious !! I don't lie here ! It's the best food I ever eat !!" I said with a smile as I rub the back of my neck with my one hand.

"Really ?? Thank you" she said , smile back to me.

"But .. Why are you holding your stomach?"

'Oh great ,thank you Kami-sama , THANK YOU !!!!' I though annoyed.

"N-no no , it's nothing ... You don't need to worry about it" I stutter. Why did I even stuttered ??

"You sure?" She said as she stand up and walk approach me while I became panic.

"Wa-wait ! No , it's okay , really" I said which I think making her more suspicious .

"Something's .. Not right " she said and then come near me and without I realized , she already pull my shirt up , revealing my bruise. then , her face shows a shock face.

"Oh my God .. Mayuyu , what happen ??" She look at me and look back to my stomach as she touch it with her finger smoothly which made me flinch.

"Ummm ... T-this is .. Err" I just said like that as I don't know what I should say.

"Someone did this to you ... Don't tell me that the girls that attack you yesterday.." She said as she let out a black aura.

"No , wait Yukirin , it's not them .." Mayu said.

"Then who ?"

"I-i can't tell you.."

"Why?"

"I .. Just can't" I said , look at the floor.

"Mayuyu , I can help you.." She said as she hold my chin and pull it up , making me to look back at her.

"... Okay" I said.

"My mother in law did this to me .."

"Eh ? But didn't you said she was kind .. ?" She said.

"Yes .. She was kind but not until yesterday night .. I hear that she was only acting about it .. She married Dad and pretend to love my family only because she wants my Dad money ... And she said that all of the bad issue about my Dad was made by her.." I said looking sadly to Yukirin.

"That was so mean ... I can't forgive her .. " Yukirin said as she tighten her fist.

"That happen yesterday right ? So is she coming again today?"

"She said today she will come again.."

"... Then I would see the situation first as I hide , okay ? Do the activity in your house like usual" she said.

"O-okay"

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"I-i'm home" I said nervously but was shock that she already come here and Dad was lying on the floor , passed out while she smirk when she see me.

"Nice timing girl , now I can enjoy it more.." She said as she walk approach me with a smirk while I become panic and move back step by step. I trip because I don't see my back and fall down. I thought she would kick me or punch me , but she just walk in front of me , to the door and lock it.

"Now , it's just the two of us .." She said grinning widely as I can't step back cause my foot seems so heavy. She start to punch me and kick me.

*meanwhile on Yuki's side* ( no one's POV )

"What ? So that woman serious about this ???" Yuki whisper as her blood start to boil. Seeing the scene that Mayu was got a punch by her mother-in-law, she can't hold it anymore and so on she want to go in and kick the ass of Mayu's mother-in-law but when she grab the doorknob and pull it , it has no affect.

'It's lock from inside ??? Crap' Yuki though as she still try to open the door.

*inside the house*

Mayu was already panting and lying on the floor weakly due to the attack of her not real mother. Her Mom stop walk to Mayu when she heard the doorknob was making a noise and she heard a kick from outside.

"Looks like you told someone about this,eh ?"
She said as she look back to Mayu.

"I told you that you can't tell anyone didn't I ?" She said as she smirk again , making Mayu shiver.

"You break my rules , so you have to get something from me.." She said.

'No ... Yukirin ... Help me' Mayu though as she stare at the woman who approach her slowly in fear and try to walk back but she was already in a bad condition so she can't move.

"Prepare for this" as she walk slowly to Mayu , the door suddenly break showing someone who Mayu's hoping the most.

"Oh , it's you .."

"Please don't act too calm , Ma'am." Yuki said as she look at her.

"Move away.. I already called the police about this" Yuki said as she walk approach Mayu while she was shock hearing what Yuki's said.

"What ? Yo-you call the police ? Haha , But it's just the same as you dig your own hole" Mayu's mother in law said as after that , police car siren start to come. They start to examine the situation first before one of them start a conversation.

"Okay , you guys come to our office first .. We will ask everything about what was happening here .. While we will bring this young girl and this man to the nearest hospital.." The police said and after that Mayu's vision start to become black.

----skip----

*Back to Mayu's POV*

I open my eyes only to found a white ceiling. I look at my hand , realize that there were many infusion. And after that , I heard a voice.

"Please take care of her miss" a voice said.

"Okay" and this time , it's a familiar voice. I smile as I know who's the voice belong to.

"Mayuyu , you already awake" Yukirin said as she sit beside me and smile.

"Uhn ... Just when you came here" I said , smiling back to her.

"And ... Am I hospitalized here ? Aren't we in my house back then ?"

"Yes you are ... You were hospitalized for almost 3 days .. And you passed out after police came.." She reply.

"What happen to her ? And where's dad ??"

"She was in jail because of the action that she did and your dad was in the next room ... Before that , I and her was in the police officer .. She told them different story while I told them the real one , but they got confused by it because there are still no evidence .. So they ask another one , it's your dad .. They ask many things that I don't hear and your dad said that you like to made many mechanical work such as cctv ... He said that there is one in the living room .. So they got back to the house and saw the real scene that was on your monitor screen.. And so now , we were already got free" Yukirin explain.

"Oh..."

"Hm , O yea .. I want to sing one short song for you before you fall asleep" she said as she smile while I look at her.

"Okay then , sing it" I said while she smile and so she start to sing.

You were born to be loved
And you are receiving that love through your life.

The love from God that started
since the beginning of the world

Becomes connected with us meeting each other.
And your existence in this world Is a very huge happiness for me.

You were born to be loved
And you are receiving that love through your life.

And then she stop and look at me with a smile. "How is it?"

"It was ... Beautiful" I said.

"Haha .. Glad that you like it , though it was so short" she said.

"Un , yes it was short but the meaning of that was so great .." I said with a smile and she smile back to me.

"Well then.. Seems that you still have to take a break here ... And I'll give you surprise later when you've fully heal , so get well soon 'kay?"

"Uhn , thank you so much Yukirin ... You're the best" I said with a wide smile and I saw again she was blushing.

Cute~

.......

And this time , I really meant it :D


Few days have pass and as she promised me after I got fully heal , she brought me somewhere that I realized that love the view so much.

"Wow , so beautiful.." I said , amused by the view in front of me. She brought me to a mountain that the view was the whole Tokyo. It was sunset when I stare at the view, and it's making a beautiful light.

"Beautiful isn't it? As like I promised , I made you a surprise that I hope you'll always remember it in your life.." She said with a smile as I look back to her and after that a warm thing press againts my lips. Few second after that the warm was gone as she pull back her own lips.

"I'm sorry if this was so sudden , I decide that now is the right time to confess my feeling to you .. I've been alway-" before she can finish her sentence , I cut it by kissing her back. We stay still like that for a moment and then I pull back because the lack of air.

"This Is the answer" I said as I smile widely while she was in the thought few a moment and in an second , she smile back.

"I'm glad" she said as she look at me with a sweet smile , making me blush for the first time.

"Wow ,it's the first time I see you blushing! Hahaha" she said.

"Well , it's showing that my feeling for you has grown up" I said and smirk when I see her face turn slightly red.

"I love you Yukirin" I said as I look at her with the sweetest smile that I can make it.

"I love you more than you do" she said smiling back to me and as the sun was fading , we're holding each other hand.

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I want to tell you guys this.

our life's sometimes make us regret , but sometimes make us glad.

But , always gratitude every time and anywhere you are .. Because there are many people beside us in this world that suffered more than you do. And don't give up if you're down , keep strong and stay still until one day .. You'll pass the bad side of this world and then you will got a wonderful life.

My story is about Bitter and sweet's life. How about yours?

END

I hope it's not awful :) and I'm sorry for those who don't understand the drabbles .. I can't explain it to long because in my country now it's already midnight and I have a wake up when it was sunrise (⌣́_⌣̀) .. Anyway , thank you for all the readers :hee:

Offline Chanaline

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Re: MaYuki's OS : Bitter and Sweet's life
« Reply #46 on: January 05, 2013, 08:29:44 PM »
It is a really good story!!

I love it!!! Poour Mayu!! :cry: Super Yuki yay!!! :deco:
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Re: MaYuki's OS : Bitter and Sweet's life
« Reply #47 on: January 05, 2013, 09:21:09 PM »
great mayuki fanfic thank you for this :yep:
love it :heart
awww poor mayuyu and love yukrin shes is mayuyu's protector :deco:
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Re: MaYuki's OS : Bitter and Sweet's life
« Reply #48 on: January 06, 2013, 12:56:06 AM »
That was a really sweet story.
I'm loving this devoting Yuko here so much :heart:

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Re: MaYuki's OS : Bitter and Sweet's life
« Reply #49 on: January 06, 2013, 04:05:18 PM »
I'm glad to see the sweetness coming, after all the bitterness from the past!  :peace:
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Re: MaYuki's OS : Bitter and Sweet's life
« Reply #50 on: June 27, 2014, 07:04:11 PM »
Ah, I'm so touched. This is really a great fanfic. And I like the ending part, you give a nice quote and morality value. Great job '-'d
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Re: MaYuki's OS : Bitter and Sweet's life
« Reply #51 on: June 28, 2014, 01:31:34 PM »
I love your Mayuki OS

It was so touch


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