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Author Topic: (School AU) ~Innocence~ A high school love story [Prolouge: 9.7.15]  (Read 3398 times)

Offline りりかのはな

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Hello~ It's Riri a.k.a RirikaNoHana~ This is my first fanfiction and English is not my mother tongue, critics are welcome but please go easy on me! Try guessing the main three pairings! (There might be some side parings though.)

Prologue

Gardenia

I'm still a freshman and unexperienced, still my heart yearns for her affection. She who is the pride and glory of the school, she who is older and full of elegance. Even if she acknowledges me, surely I'm not the only who has feelings for her. How can I compete? There many more beautiful girls who also love her, much more beautiful and dignified girls than me. Even so, I selfishly hold these feelings for and hope one day, even if it takes a thousands miracles, that she will love me back. I know love hurts, it isn't as sweet as those shoujo-manga Miki-chan reads even so I'll train for love and I hope one day I'll become worthy of standing next to Kojima-senpai as her lover...


Iris

It feels so wrong to love her. She's younger than me, and on top of that, she's a female. I mean, in America, and even Shibuya, it's legal but the road to acceptance is still far. Am I really willing to take such a risk? Even if I was, did she even love me? I am serious, boring, and strict, I act like a 50 year old father of 10. I'm too uptight and I worry that I scare her away. It doesn't help that she keeps avoiding me every time I eat lunch with her group. Yet still, I can hear the beat of my heart going ba-dump, ba-dump, ba-dump when I see her big smile and her crazy antics. It has it to be her, it has to be her and no one else. I mutter a soft and low 'I love you' purposely quiet enough so no one could hear. I can't help but fall for that over-excited Nishino.

Magnolia

We were always together, for as long as I can remember. We were... The best of friends, and even if I loved her, we have known each for too long for anything to start. I didn't want to ruin my friendship with her, because if I did, my already frail heart would break into a thousand pieces. So I accepted my faith, even if I can't be together with her romantically, I will be here as a sun shining down to her awkwardly. I won't move anywhere. I'll be watching her far away, not daring to get too close to her, because it feels as if I will lose a precious something in our relationship if I get anything closer. It hurts, this distance, but I'm just an awkward sun quietly shining down on her. I love you, but it seems I love you too much to get too close, Rena...
Shimazaki Haruka Fukumura Mizuki Kojima Haruna

Offline Ruka Kikuchi

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Re: (School AU) ~Innocence~ A high school love story [Prolouge: 9.7.15]
« Reply #1 on: July 09, 2015, 12:36:05 AM »
Ooh~ Looks interesting. :cathappy: :deco:

Can't wait to see more. Ganbatte! :heart:
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Offline りりかのはな

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Re: (School AU) ~Innocence~ A high school love story [Prolouge: 9.7.15]
« Reply #2 on: July 09, 2015, 12:51:03 AM »
@Ruka Kikuchi
Rukachi, you have a JPHIP account? I didn't knoooow~ Hehe, well, since you're my senpai in here too, best regards~
Shimazaki Haruka Fukumura Mizuki Kojima Haruna

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Re: (School AU) ~Innocence~ A high school love story [Prolouge: 9.7.15]
« Reply #3 on: July 09, 2015, 02:08:40 AM »
Also, my guess is that the three main pairings are MakoNaanya, NanaMiki, and JuriRena. :3
« Last Edit: July 09, 2015, 10:41:33 PM by Ruka Kikuchi »
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Offline jhom_09

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Re: (School AU) ~Innocence~ A high school love story [Prolouge: 9.7.15]
« Reply #4 on: July 09, 2015, 06:13:28 AM »


Hmmm...? interesting, i like it

but im bad in guessing, hehe so its up to you author-san

waiting for the next chapter


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Re: (School AU) ~Innocence~ A high school love story [Prolouge: 9.7.15]
« Reply #5 on: July 09, 2015, 09:10:04 AM »
I smell Nana
Looking forward for the next update 8)2

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Re: (School AU) ~Innocence~ A high school love story [Prolouge: 9.7.15]
« Reply #6 on: July 09, 2015, 03:29:41 PM »
Interesting My OTP couple is here!!!!

Pls contiue it

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Re: (School AU) ~Innocence~ A high school love story [Prolouge: 9.7.15]
« Reply #7 on: July 09, 2015, 08:13:07 PM »
First is MakoNaanya, second is NanaMiki, third is...I don't know who are the third couple><
I'll wait the first chapter, author-san><
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Re: (School AU) ~Innocence~ A high school love story [Prolouge: 9.7.15]
« Reply #8 on: July 10, 2015, 01:58:47 AM »
Waiting for chapter 1 author-san  :P

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Re: (School AU) ~Innocence~ A high school love story [Prolouge: 9.7.15]
« Reply #9 on: July 10, 2015, 05:48:07 PM »
all my favorite people in this fic!! My three musketeers!! :cow: :cow: :cow:

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