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Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #60 on: June 20, 2007, 05:09:11 PM »
Time for some crack! xD









Chapter 5: The Fujimoto family

Now. Let us go a day back…


“Miki!” came an exasperated voice, coming from a woman sitting idly on the cushion.

No answer.

“MIKI!” the woman screamed out for the entire traditional manor to hear yet again.

Yet again, no answer.

“What the hell is that woman doing?!” the woman stood up, “Making an old woman like me exercise even more than I have to…”

“Do you want me to get her?” another woman interrupted her chore of watering the plants in order to call out from the garden, watching the distressed older from the open traditional door.

“That’s alright, Kei, I’ll just beat the shit out of her myself,” the woman smiled widely, waving her hand dismissively.

That’s Yuko.

“Dakishmete~! Dakishimete~!” the cook sang as she chopped carrots into the boiling broth. Along with chopping the vegetables for the soup, the woman swung her rear left and right to the beat of the music, only exclusive to her as she was listening to that song through her headphones.

Of course it was on maximum volume.

Then she was interrupted when she hit her hip…

…To a knife which somehow thrown itself, probably aiming for her butt…

The woman turned around to find Yuko twiddling with another knife, leaning against the door way. Along with Yuko was Kei, the chief housecleaner, head honcho of the other maids among the manor, clinging to the other doorframe, looking slightly bewildered at the event that just transpired.

She looked at the knife, then back at the elder, and at the knife again…

“WHAT, ARE YOU TRYING TO CHOP MY ASS OFF OR SOMETHING?!” the woman screamed, yanking her headphones off in rage.

And that’s Miki.

“WELL ISN’T IT OBVIOUS, IDIOT?!” Yuko yelled back, waving the knife threateningly, much to Kei’s panic, “MAYBE IF YOU WEREN’T LISTENING TO THAT RACKET, YOU’D HEAR ME SCREAMING FOR YOU TO COME OVER!!!”

“It’s NOT racket! It’s Blend Kiss! You know, Mai S. and Ayaka K. the duet? They’re hot on the radio!” Miki growled at her elder adopted sister.

“Huh? K.? As in Kei?” The older woman took Kei by the shoulder and pointed at her with her other hand.

“Not that Kei!” Miki waved her hand, “The K stands for Kimura.”

“I’m sorry I look like a sexy idol!” Kei shook her head melodramatically, letting her short hair fly slowly for the attempt of the ‘sexy’ effect.

“What are you talking about?!” Miki and Yuko said in sync, staring at their housekeeper with a ‘wtf’ sort of look.

“Nonetheless, I want you and Miyabi to do some things for me when she returns from school,” Yuko composed herself, standing straight, though still fiddling with the knife.

“Again?! Come on, we were almost killed the last time you asked! By a freaking steam roller!”

“Hey, you escaped, didn’t you?” Kei asked, blinking.

“Yeah, after I took off my pants! Thanks to those no good idiots who glued them to the steam roller in the first place! That was insulting! Having to jump across rooftops in just my panties!”

“Just shut up and do my job!” Yuko twitched, throwing the knife at the younger.

With cat-like reflexes, Miki grabbed her black chopsticks from the counter and caught the knife just before it was lodged into her forehead.

“I have more knives where that came from!”

“Alright alright! Jeez! I’ll do your job! But let me cook everyone’s lunch first!”

“Speaking of lunch, the soup’s smoking” Kei pointed to the pot.

“What?!” Miki looked over at the pot, “OH SHIT! FIRE! IT’S FIRE!”

“WHAT?!” Yuko threw her arms in the air, now running around the kitchen as if she was a chicken with its head cut off, panicking like crazy while Miki was busy trying to put the fire out.

“I got it!” Miki leaned upon her knees, gasping and panting after dumping the fiery pot into the sink.

“You’re such an idiot!” Yuko let out another exasperated sigh, throwing yet another knife at her younger sister.

This time, the knife caught Miki off guard, pinning her to the upper cupboard by the sleeve.

Yuko likes to hurt Miki.

“Um… Miyabi-san…” A nondescript boy twiddled with his thumbs behind his back nervously as the object of his affections turn her head slowly to the sound of her name. He liked how her flowing layered hair moved in sync with the wind as she did so. He liked how her smile can rival that of any angel’s, if not better than them. It was his chance now to make that his forever… If he could ever say it…

“Yes?”

That voice almost sent him to heaven. He felt as if he could melt right on the spot. But that didn’t matter now… He had to get his words out…

So he decided to quickly execute his confession.

“Miyabi-san, ever since I’ve met you, I’ve always been in love with—”

“I’m sorry. I don’t feel the same way for you, I like someone else!”

…As Miyabi had already decided to quickly execute her rejection.

The boy gaped in horror as he witnessed the corners of Miyabi’s mouth turn upwards into an apologetic grin, complete with the half-praying hand gesture which was an unwritten sign language for apology as well.

“Damn, he was shot down coooold,” a random classmate whispered to her friend’s ear.

“There goes another one for Fujimoto-san…”

“The queen of rejecting others, as they say…”

“No wonder everyone loves her… She’s just so cool…”

“In fact, I don’t think she even likes anyone! They’re too good for her maybe…”

“Maybe she thinks she’s all high and mighty, always looking down on us!”

“Or she just likes to work hard instead of flirting with the guys…”

“How weird, she’s like, the complete opposite of her sister…”

Miyabi had always passed by the hallways hearing that sort of thing from her classmates. It didn’t bother her that she might be insulted by a few, though she did secretly want to shoot them had she been given the chance to. Nevertheless, she liked that she was talked about a lot by the others, it made her feel prioritized and important to be spoken of constantly.

Eventually, she exited the school grounds, not even bothering to look back at the whispering crowds who had gathered around her and then stopped as she stepped past the school gates.

Carrying her school back with one hand, and having purchased a cone filled with sesame-flavored ice cream, it was like a very typical girl coming home from school. Eventually, the cone was finished, and she contemplated on buying another at a different ice cream stand which she happened to walk to.

It has always been like this, really. The dance school which doubled as her home happened to be far, but not far enough to consider the distance worthy enough of having to drive. If Miyabi was a typical school girl indeed, she might have complained about the distance and asked for a car to pick her up and drop her off.

Now wandering within the local neighborhood, it wasn’t that far until she found someone she had wanted to meet, walking ahead of her by a few meters.

There was a real reason why she had always declined people after all.

“Risako!”

The person of her affections turned her head around smiling at the familiar voice. Miyabi ran a bit to catch up with the younger, who had stopped and waited for her.

“Ah, senpai! Energetic much?” Risako chuckled, walking now that Miyabi has caught up.

“Hehe, I guess,” Miyabi let out a sheepish grin, scratching the back of her head. “How did your classes go?”

“I think my history teacher hates me…”

“Of course, that teacher hates everyone…” Miyabi’s mood went downhill at the discussion of the aggravating teacher that everyone in the school hated.

It was always like this as well.

Miyabi would accompany Risako to her home, since it was simply there along the way to the dance school which she resided in.

And this was the perfect time…

“Erm… Risako?”

“Yeah?”

“I have something I want to give you, but you must stand still and close your eyes for me to get it, alright?”

A blush crawled upon the younger’s face, she was wondering what her senior would give her, so she did as Miyabi instructed.

Alright… Now to give her a kiss and proclaim my love to her… Miyabi thought as she moved closer…

But then she saw something coming at her from behind Risako’s head.

A van.

A very familiar van.

Oh shi— Miyabi knew what was going to happen, and she was going to hate her sisters, and herself for not confessing to Risako sooner.

As the van passed, Miyabi was immediately abducted by the shoulders and was thrown into the van (it was one of the vans with the sliding doors) by a laughing Miki.

“Can’t your timing be any worse than that?!” Miyabi rubbed her head from hitting the door on the other side of the van.

“Oh? Landing moves on that junior I see? My little sister is growing up!” Miki continued laughing as she shut the sliding door of the van, sitting lazily on the chair.

“Come on! Can’t the mission wait until after?!” the younger started to smack the older with her school bag.

“No way, Yuko-nee was being weird (and violent!) and wanted to do this mission as soon as possible,” the older groping demon shielded her face from the repetitive smacking her younger sister had subjected her to.

Meanwhile…

“Senpai?” Risako still had her eyes closed, completely oblivious that the older was taken away.

Last but not least, Miyabi.

She had a very keen eye for spotting. She had a very steady arm for aiming. She had to be emotionless for firing. She was a school girl by day, but a sniper by night. Always carrying out missions with her older sister as commanded by the oldest sister, Miyabi didn’t really mind the moral issues of almost working against the government. After all, it really depended on who hires them and what sort of job had to be done. She and Miki never had to kill anyone though, they were not assassins. Miyabi knows a lot of the human anatomy enough to only hit at non-vital areas such as the shoulders or legs. Most of Miki’s fighting style revolves upon disarming the opponent and knocking them unconscious.

They weren’t born to kill.

Rather, they were born to steal.

Scratch that.

They were born to snatch and relocate objects as their hirer enlists them to.

Whether it would be drugs and/or weapons or taking the files of innocent criminals who were framed away from the police station, just so they did not have enough evidence to land themselves in court, their main priority was to find items and dispose of them, or give them to their patron.

“So what mission is it this time? Stealing from a police station?”

“I dunno, she told me we had to steal a file from the Shibata Corps,” Miki said boredly as she watched the scenery zoom by.

“Shibata Corps? You mean the bio-research company?” Miyabi raised a brow at the other.

“Weird, huh? But we really have to be on our guard. Yuko-nee said that the building was like a black op building, so we can’t run through like a breeze.”

“Don’t tell me…” Miyabi slumped back in her chair.

“Yup. That means me and you are going to have fun doing this mission.”

Mission Start!

“Excuse me sir, I’m new, but I have no idea where the bathroom is,” Miki almost purred the statement, clad in a white lab coat and glasses, with her hair tied up in a messy bush on the back of her head.

Oh God… Miyabi slapped her hand to her face, evidentally sporting this attitude whenever her older sister would seduce people to get into the restricted areas. She watched (by monitors inside the van) at how Miki was weaving her way through labs and the like, hitting on practically everyone possible as she did so.

“I wouldn’t be surprised if your sister winds up bringing a lot of them home, eventually,” the chauffer of the van, also the master technician of computers, commented.

“Shut up,” Miyabi rolled her eyes, still watching her older sister being allowed into labs just because she managed to seduce some of the desperate nerds here and there.

Miki in the meanwhile, was frankly agitated. The people she has flirted with so far have no mention of a restricted area, as that was where the file was supposed to be. Well, through the headphones which Miyabi or the technician would voice their instructions (cleverly disguised as a Sansa) Miki already knew the location, but all of them had no clue on how to enter the room itself.

“Hmm, should I picklock it?” Miki mumbled into the receiver hidden underneath her navy blue turtleneck shirt.

“No, there’s someone inside of it,” the technician said to the mic.

“If that’s the case, I should wait until that person comes out…”

“Miki-nee, don’t tell me you’re going to make out with this guy and then I’d have to go in and take the file while you distract him…”

“It’s a guy? Ugh…” Miki crossed her arms as she paced non-conspicuously around the lab, “Well tell me, is he hot or another nerd?”

“I can’t really tell from the surveillance, but he looks like a nerd.”

“…Shit.”

“Your sister was kidding, it’s actually a pretty nice-looking woman. You think you can seduce her too? She seems like a strictly straight person,” the technician had taken the mic away from a pouting Miyabi.

“Murata. Punch her for me.”

“Ah… My pleasure,” the glasses-wearing technician punched Miyabi lightly in the arm.

“Megumi-saaaan!” Miyabi whined, trying to reach for the mic as the older simply pushed the younger away with her arm.

“You should go into the lab too, considering Fujimoto-chan is likely to do as you just said. I’ll manipulate with surveillance with repetitive clips so that security won’t find it suspicious.”

“First, she kidnaps me while I was confessing, then she beats the crap out of me in the van after I smacked her with my pack, and now I have to do her job of finding the file?!” Miyabi complained, gathering the disguise materials as Megumi bugged them with transmitters and the like.

“Ah… Don’t be too harsh on your sister. After all, her main use is to disarm people or knock them unconscious.”

“Feh… Stupid Neesan…”

“I heard that!” Miki hissed threateningly into her transmitter, “Murata, is the woman leaving yet?”

“In fact, she is. Go run into her. Ah… And your Mini Me is coming. So you might want her to face opposite the door.”

Miki nodded in comprehension and walked with the wall towards the exiting person. She pretended to have a spaced out look as she walked on, the woman taking out her keys in order to lock the door.

CRASH

“I’m so so SOOO sorry!” Miki apologized as she ran around the woman so she wouldn’t face the door when she spoke to her. “I was spacing out!”

“It’s okay, it’s okay!” the woman laugh, standing up from her fall as she rubbed her rear, a rear Miki was tempted to rub as well. “So are you new here?”

“Yeah I am…” Miki looked down and twiddled with her fingers to show a shy character.

“So are you a fan of playstation?” the woman smiled widely at the other.

“Eh?”

“I love the Dynasty Warrior series! It’s basically one of those mindless hack and slash games, but there are definitely the sentimental principles of the game like revenge, family, honor, clichéd things like that. Despite the clichés, everyone in the game is unique in their own way with their own weapon to suit their personality! Like the Qiao sisters utilize twin fans just like the fact that they are twins! Though Xiao Qiao tends to have the cuter fans since she’s the cute twin while Da Qiao has the mature fans and therefore, is the mature twin. And then…”

…A gaming otaku…? Miki tried her best the smile and nod as the woman ranted about this game. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw her younger sister come in and sneak into the restricted door without the woman’s knowledge.

…A woman who is STILL going on about that game, still smiling as she spoke to her. “…I really don’t like recruiting Hung Gai for the Xtreme mode because whenever he throws his bombs, they even hurt the comrades and me! Though I understand the realism of it, I find it very annoying so whenever I wind up facing him as a body guard of someone else, I found it easier to just kill the commander because if I killed Hung Gai before the commander, he’d be in my party and I would NOT be happy! Oh and my favorite character is…”

“Ah… I hate him too…” Megumi sighed, clearly empathizing with the ranting woman.

You actually play those games too!? Miki wanted to scream at the technician, but kept her smiling silence to not confuse the gaming otaku.

“What name are we looking for?” Miyabi whispered to the transmitter.

“Ah… Ishikawa is written with the characters for stone and river, Rika is written with the characters for pear tree and flower.”

“Found it,” Miyabi took the file out, closing the drawer and hiding the file in her inside pocket of the lab coat. Then she snuck out of the doors, passing the woman and her sister as she disappeared from site.

“Well uh… I’m sorry to interrupt your interesting talk…” Miki began, stopping the woman, “But I really need to use the bathroom now.”

“Aww! That’s okay, I can talk more about the game later,” the woman beamed widely.

“Uh… Yeah…”

“My name is Abe Natsumi by the way!”

“Lovely… I’m… Miki… Natsuyaki,” the groping demon had to quickly come up with a fake family name to give.

“Hope to see you later, Natsuyaki-san!”

“Yup! Me too!” Miki turned around and almost power walked away from the woman. A gaming otaku…?! The corner of her mouth twitched as she quickly left the lab as fast as Miyabi.

Soon, they took off the coats as they exited the lab, file snuggly attached by chords to Miyabi’s back. Then they walked casually towards the van around the block, running into it as soon as the sight of the laboratory vanished.

“Aaaand from here, I have to drop you off at an inn, tell you to go into a university, break into Ishikawa’s dorm, and you have to walk home!”

“Can’t you just drive us?” Miki panted, trying to regain energy from all that running.

“Ah…I have a life too, unfortunately,” Megumi sighed as she drove.

“Feh…” Miyabi sighed as she removed the chord straps from her back, taking the file with it, “So what’s in the file anyway?” the curiosity got the best of her as she opened the file, taking out the objects within.

“Ohhh! Stalker photos?” Miki took the pictures out of Miyabi’s hands, rummaging through them.

“Stalker photos? Oh well, at least we know what this Ishikawa-san looks like, yeah?” Miyabi said as she put her shirt and black sweatshirt on, adding the poofy white vest later on.

“Hmm, this Ishikawa’s cute.”

“I guess…” Miyabi replied as she looked over at the pictures.

“What? Saying she’s not good enough because you have the hots for that junior of your’s?” Miki smirked at her younger sister.

“Uh…” Miyabi felt the redness in her cheeks rise.

“I mean, we did kidnap you from a confession…”

“UH….” Miyabi felt like her cheeks were going to explode.

“Ah… the fountain of youth…” Megumi looked back at the passengers.

“Keep your eyes on the road, Megumi-san!” Miyabi half-yelled, placing her hand on the chauffer’s head to make it face the road.

“You know I can give you lots of tips~!” Miki drawled, grinning happily since this was the first crush and confession that her sister was experiencing, “My little Miyabi is growing up~!”

“I don’t want your tips, this is an innocent junior-high love, not some loveless love for a harem,” Miyabi said in a low voice, resting her head against her hand.

“…”

“Ah… You got buuuuurned,” Megumi chuckled.

The rest of the ride was accompanied by Miyabi’s screams from having her head bash against the window multiple times, complete with Miki’s maniacal laughter and Megumi’s shifty-eyed look towards them on the rear view mirror.

What a day.

And this is the Fujimoto Family.

Now how will the story turn out?









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« Last Edit: June 20, 2007, 05:40:08 PM by Yuuyami »

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 4: Ode to Emotion
« Reply #61 on: June 20, 2007, 05:09:43 PM »
DIBS

I laughed. A lot. XD

Kei as the housekeeper....can we expect mad driving skillz? XD And by mad, I really mean MAD. XD Hoho.

Yuko likes to hurt Miki....XDDD The flying knives made me giggle, because they remind me of the Miki in my fic. XD I like all the little references you throw in. :P Mai S. and Ayaka K. XDDDDD So obvious. XD

And Miyabi. Poor thing. Snatched away from a confession. XD How mad will Risako be with her? XD And her rejection of that random boy...so manga-ish. XD I could actually picture it in my head. XD

And I like their mission. Miki hitting on desperate nerds. The very idea makes me snort. And Miyabi was like "oh whatever". XD Even better. And your love of Murata Megumi is so totally obvious. You just cameo her in all the best ways, and give her fun lines. :P Not that I mind, cos I <3 her too. XD

I died at Nacchi's otaku-ness. XD Ah, DW rant. XD And I totally emphathise with her. XD I never recruit Huang Gai either, and if I accidentally do, I usually try and get him killed. XD Nacci is <33333 btw. XD

Miki laughing at Miyabi about the confession was gold. And Miyabi's comeback was, um, platinum? XDDDD I like how they interact. It's fun. Crack is good. ;)

Anyway, gonna bugger off now. Write more soon~ <3
« Last Edit: June 20, 2007, 05:52:16 PM by Estrea »

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #62 on: June 20, 2007, 05:18:01 PM »
DIBS TOO (Gahh damn you Essy-san, beating my low speed internet -_-)

Anyway, interesting chapter! I love how you introduced the Fujimoto family~! But before I continue my comment, why Fujimoto? XD I would think it'd be Nakazawa because she is the oldest.

Well, this family is certianly an interesting one, that's for sure. :D Yuko is certianly Yuko in this fic, that's for sure. XD First chapter where she's fully introduced and she's already screaming at Miki. :D <3

Kei seems to be randomly thrown in there. XD But it was a good choice, she seems like the type who would be able to settle things when all goes to hell. (Or at least settle things a little bit. :D)

Miki listening to Ayaka and Mai, roffle. XD I'm amazed that chopsticks can stop a knife from flying into Miki's ass O_O;; But it's sure a damn good thing, considerin' we all wouldn't want Miki's ass to get hurt. ;D

Miyabi and Risako. <333 Of course. XD Miyabi does have feelings after all. :O! Gahh damn Miki for inturrupting the confession~! D: That's no fun.

Nacchi and her Playstation. XD Gotta love it. Poor Miki.

Megumi the driver. :D I was wondering when you'd throw her in this fic. XD It's the perfect roll too, that evil genius. I love how she agrees with Nacchi. XD

Write more, yo~!
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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #63 on: June 20, 2007, 08:54:20 PM »
Ah Fujimoto Family.
How violent you are.
Rawr.

Crappiest poem ever.... But what I'm trying to get at, is that I like Yuko and Miki and Miyabi as a (sorta) team.


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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #64 on: June 20, 2007, 09:10:03 PM »
Dibs >_>....

-will edit after lunch-

<3

>_>........That was a long lunch huh?

Okay, Comment Start now!!

.......Love <3
I heart the fujimoto family, they make me laugh
Laughing makes me Happy and less cranky
So you should write about them more often, 'kay? You do that

I suppose the only semi-normal member ish Miyabi but...
I don't know, you'll probably just make her as bad as Miki...Or worse Yuko..
Nyahaha~ MiyaxRii moment ruined by Miki XDXD
In a very classic way of course!

No bajillion faces see?
Real comment with words and stuff =O

Nacchi + Gaming Dork = Love and Laughter?
XDXD I love her character

Oh yea by the way..
A message from a certain someone..
Said, "You should like...Totally update..like..now..Do it for Fred!"

So maybe you should update..For Fred <3

XD Back to Pokemon for me~
Update~
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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #65 on: June 20, 2007, 09:59:48 PM »
lol, yup, i like =)

that chapter was pretty funny :D ,

yay for miki, miyabi, and yuko being sister  :cool1:

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #66 on: June 21, 2007, 12:49:21 AM »
wee~ funny chapter there!

boy is Nakazawa-san violent! a knife? ouch.. But Miki listening so enthusiastically to Blend Kiss, that was hilarious!

Aww Miyabi is so cute... junior-high love, kawaii.. and she ranting her disappointment out on Miki in the van was again.... so cute!

I found Nacchi being a game otaku weird, she doesn't seem like the gaming type. Maybe Takahashi or Yaguchi would have been a better choice? Since their both into games and all, but then again I can't imagine Ai-chan blabbering non-stop about the game.

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #67 on: June 21, 2007, 01:21:30 AM »
Nah, I remember a scandal of her's a long time ago where she was up all night in a guy's house, and she denied that they did anything other than play Playstation the entire night xD

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #68 on: June 21, 2007, 02:55:55 AM »
I wonder with whom Miki practices her seducing techniques... :mon trudge:

But she is THE Fujimoto Miki. I doubt if she ever needs practice coz anything she does is just plain sexy :pimp:

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #69 on: June 21, 2007, 05:30:03 AM »
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“What the hell is that woman doing?!” the woman stood up, “Making an old woman like me exercise even more than I have to…”

“Do you want me to get her?” another woman interrupted her chore of watering the plants in order to call out from the garden, watching the distressed older from the open traditional door.

“That’s alright, Kei, I’ll just beat the shit out of her myself,” the woman smiled widely, waving her hand dismissively.
Ah Yuko...there's a reason why Miki called her "shishou" on H!M. :lol:


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“Dakishmete~! Dakishimete~!” the cook sang as she chopped carrots into the boiling broth. Along with chopping the vegetables for the soup, the woman swung her rear left and right to the beat of the music, only exclusive to her as she was listening to that song through her headphones.
Ooooooooooooooooooooh...sexay Miki cooking!  :inlove:


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“It’s NOT racket! It’s Blend Kiss! You know, Mai S. and Ayaka K. the duet? They’re hot on the radio!” Miki growled at her elder adopted sister.
No arguments here. That was a totally hot perf indeed. :jerk:


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“Huh? K.? As in Kei?” The older woman took Kei by the shoulder and pointed at her with her other hand.

“Not that Kei!” Miki waved her hand, “The K stands for Kimura.”

“I’m sorry I look like a sexy idol!” Kei shook her head melodramatically, letting her short hair fly slowly for the attempt of the ‘sexy’ effect.

“What are you talking about?!” Miki and Yuko said in sync, staring at their housekeeper with a ‘wtf’ sort of look.
Ehhhhhhhhh???  :mon spit:


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“Again?! Come on, we were almost killed the last time you asked! By a freaking steam roller!”

“Hey, you escaped, didn’t you?” Kei asked, blinking.

“Yeah, after I took off my pants! Thanks to those no good idiots who glued them to the steam roller in the first place! That was insulting! Having to jump across rooftops in just my panties!”
Gawdayum. :jerk: :jerk: :jerk:


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“Alright alright! Jeez! I’ll do your job! But let me cook everyone’s lunch first!”

“Speaking of lunch, the soup’s smoking” Kei pointed to the pot.

“What?!” Miki looked over at the pot, “OH SHIT! FIRE! IT’S FIRE!”
How the hell do you burn soup? See what happens when you distract Miki in the kitchen?  :mon ref:


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“Miyabi-san, ever since I’ve met you, I’ve always been in love with—”

“I’m sorry. I don’t feel the same way for you, I like someone else!”

…As Miyabi had already decided to quickly execute her rejection.
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE-jected!!!  :badluck:


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“Risako!”

The person of her affections turned her head around smiling at the familiar voice. Miyabi ran a bit to catch up with the younger, who had stopped and waited for her.

“Ah, senpai! Energetic much?” Risako chuckled, walking now that Miyabi has caught up.

“Hehe, I guess,” Miyabi let out a sheepish grin, scratching the back of her head.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww... :wriggly:


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But then she saw something coming at her from behind Risako’s head.

A van.

A very familiar van.

Oh shi— Miyabi knew what was going to happen, and she was going to hate her sisters, and herself for not confessing to Risako sooner.

As the van passed, Miyabi was immediately abducted by the shoulders and was thrown into the van (it was one of the vans with the sliding doors) by a laughing Miki.

“Can’t your timing be any worse than that?!” Miyabi rubbed her head from hitting the door on the other side of the van.
I picture this in my head, and it's just too funny! :wahaha:

I wonder how long Socko's going to stand there with her eyes shut? :P


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But we really have to be on our guard. Yuko-nee said that the building was like a black op building, so we can’t run through like a breeze.”

“Don’t tell me…” Miyabi slumped back in her chair.

“Yup. That means me and you are going to have fun doing this mission.
Miki's definition of "fun" =/= Miyabi's definition of "fun".  :roll:


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“Excuse me sir, I’m new, but I have no idea where the bathroom is,” Miki almost purred the statement, clad in a white lab coat and glasses, with her hair tied up in a messy bush on the back of her head.

Oh God… Miyabi slapped her hand to her face, evidentally sporting this attitude whenever her older sister would seduce people to get into the restricted areas. She watched (by monitors inside the van) at how Miki was weaving her way through labs and the like, hitting on practically everyone possible as she did so.
Well it works, doesn't it? :yep:


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“Hmm, should I picklock it?” Miki mumbled into the receiver hidden underneath her navy blue turtleneck shirt.

“No, there’s someone inside of it,” the technician said to the mic.
Ok, who's the technician? :dunno:


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“Miki-nee, don’t tell me you’re going to make out with this guy and then I’d have to go in and take the file while you distract him…”

“It’s a guy? Ugh…” Miki crossed her arms as she paced non-conspicuously around the lab, “Well tell me, is he hot or another nerd?”

“I can’t really tell from the surveillance, but he looks like a nerd.”

“…Shit.”
Remember the mission. :lol:



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“Your sister was kidding, it’s actually a pretty nice-looking woman. You think you can seduce her too? She seems like a strictly straight person,” the technician had taken the mic away from a pouting Miyabi.

“Murata. Punch her for me.”
Anyone else hope that the name of the woman in that room starts with "Matsu" and ends with "ura"?  :shakeit:

Ah, so their techinician's Murata.


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“Murata, is the woman leaving yet?”

“In fact, she is. Go run into her. Ah… And your Mini Me is coming. So you might want her to face opposite the door.”
XD Mini-me!


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“It’s okay, it’s okay!” the woman laugh, standing up from her fall as she rubbed her rear, a rear Miki was tempted to rub as well. “So are you new here?”

“Yeah I am…” Miki looked down and twiddled with her fingers to show a shy character.

“So are you a fan of playstation?” the woman smiled widely at the other.
Playstation???  :shocked: IT'S GOTTA BE NACCHI! PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE SAY IT'S NACCHI!  :mon lovelaff:


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“Ah… I hate him too…” Megumi sighed, clearly empathizing with the ranting woman.

You actually play those games too!? Miki wanted to scream at the technician, but kept her smiling silence to not confuse the gaming otaku.
Looks like Murata's found a kindred otaku spirit!  :bigdeal:


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“My name is Abe Natsumi by the way!”
NACCHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!  :wub:


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“Aaaand from here, I have to drop you off at an inn, tell you to go into a university, break into Ishikawa’s dorm, and you have to walk home!”

“Can’t you just drive us?” Miki panted, trying to regain energy from all that running.

“Ah…I have a life too, unfortunately,” Megumi sighed as she drove.
Maybe if they paid her better.  :mon misch:


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“You know I can give you lots of tips~!” Miki drawled, grinning happily since this was the first crush and confession that her sister was experiencing, “My little Miyabi is growing up~!”

“I don’t want your tips, this is an innocent junior-high love, not some loveless love for a harem,” Miyabi said in a low voice, resting her head against her hand.

“…”

“Ah… You got buuuuurned,” Megumi chuckled.
My thoughts exactly.  :kekeke:

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #70 on: June 22, 2007, 08:44:58 PM »
Just wanna say - great fic. Loved Our Cursed Gift although I found it after you had finished it so never commented on it.

I love that Maki's an evil character. Whilst I was reading that chapter I was thinking to myself 'I hope Maki's going to be in this one' and then she was. Makes me happy  :)

An poor Miyabi getting whisked away before she could declare her love (kiss) Risako  :lol:

Keep up the good work  :D

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #71 on: June 22, 2007, 09:16:35 PM »
This is one of my favorites stories...I really love it  :luvluv2:
I like the Fujimoto Family....they're amazing....

I hope in the next chap you we'll see an evil Goto in action!!!!

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #72 on: June 23, 2007, 03:38:40 PM »
I'ma start adding teasers now :0

This time, with the title and themes of the next chapter (Aka, the bold lettering) xD So you'll some idea of what the next chapter will be of. Then again, this is my writing style xD I write the chapter title and theme, and work in between xD


Chapter 6: The Celestial Maiden

It is the end of dreams.

It is the beginning of the end.

Treasure all the memories possible.

Because eventually…

Everything cherished will be gone.


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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #73 on: June 24, 2007, 07:22:25 PM »
I'ma start adding teasers now :0

This time, with the title and themes of the next chapter (Aka, the bold lettering) xD So you'll some idea of what the next chapter will be of. Then again, this is my writing style xD I write the chapter title and theme, and work in between xD


Chapter 6: The Celestial Maiden

It is the end of dreams.

It is the beginning of the end.

Treasure all the memories possible.

Because eventually…

Everything cherished will be gone.


Does this mean that eventually Rika will be gone and Maki will be the dominant one?

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #74 on: June 26, 2007, 12:06:10 AM »
I'm being lazy to comment again xD

But I'll just sum it all up.

I'm glad all of you enjoyed the chapter xD Unlike the first OCG, I'm going to try and write crack chapters once in awhile instead of making a huge focus of them in the first half of the story xD I fear I may have scared readers away last time because the story got more angsty and dramatic xDDDD

Hopefully, this won't happen again =_=...

My favorite part from the last chapter HAS to be when Miyabi was snatched away during a confession xD And yes, I bet Risako was mad xD I can just picture the scene perfectly... It's the sudden humor, yo xD!!!

Anywho, none of the Fujimotos appear in this chapter, so suck it up and comment, there's good material to try and interpret xD

wedge call? xD

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« Reply #76 on: June 26, 2007, 12:12:46 AM »
La di da... o-o










Chapter 6: The Celestial Maiden

It is the end of dreams.


Maki levitated in the air with a menacing aura. Her arms were crossed as her eyes scanned the room, making any quick observation of the layout and terrain she was now in. The ends of her blood red hair floated slightly, giving the impression that the power released during levitation was strong enough to push it upwards a bit. Then, her eyes rested on the guard, who had been in a cautious stance in case she made a move.

“Maki, was it? What happened to Rika?” Hitomi called out, still wary of the threatening atmosphere that came as soon as she asked.

“Didn’t I already tell you? She’s gone to sleep.”

“Then how are you able to…?”

“The existence of Ishikawa Rika is a mere shell. And it happens that this shell’s character is simply a personality that came from the development of her surrounding environment and interpersonal relationships. We are not different however. I am ‘Rika’ but it’s simply a name that one’s parents gave to their child. Little did they know that there was another soul hidden away in their child’s body. I am that soul.”

“So you’re the one the Shibata International Company want dead, not Rika?”

“Pfft, even if they could find a way to kill only my soul, that dreadful clan will still slaughter the innocent in order to subdue me.”

“So you’ve possessed people other than Rika, right?” Hitomi tightened the grip of her weapons, slowly switching to a more offensive stance.

“Why should I bother answering all of your questions?” Maki let her arms drop to the side, no longer wanting to cross them.

“Why not?”

“Gravijira. Allow me to borrow the weaving creature of which power can impersonate that of demons among us,” Maki pointed her hand at the other. A tennis-ball sized sphere materialized in front of the point finger. “I must slaughter that clan, even henchmen like you count towards the quota.” the ball immediately uncurled towards Hitomi, unraveling itself to be a ball of black spider-thread-like substances which came at the other in the blink of an eye.

But the guard was faster and immediately rolled out of the way. The black threads past her and immediately decimated the floor she once stood on, leaving them to become splinters.

The ball in front of Maki’s finger faded away in black ash, tracing it’s disappearance through the individual thick threads which weaved into each other in a beam of a sort until the tips which laid in the hole were also gone.

“I guess I would be considered your enemy after all. There was a change in orders, you see? So instead of killing you, I was to bring you back to the laboratory, alive.”

“Gravijira. No eyes shall look upon me. No ears shall listen for me. Cloak me in the darkness of the terrain.”

There was an odd sound. A sound that sounded like a futuristic laser being fired. With that noise, Maki disappeared by turning herself into countless black butterflies that held her form, and then dispersed and faded.

Hitomi kept her guard up, looking about frantically to see where the woman had teleported off to. What is she, a wizard? Nonetheless, I’m going to have to watch out when she says Gravijira…It seems to be her magic trigger… She must have a lot of experience with this… For one thing, her incantations are so damn fast…Then she noticed something glowing beneath her feet. She looked down to find herself standing on tattoos of butterflies and lotuses on the floor. Feet rendered completely immobile thanks to the supernatural ink on the floor, Hitomi struggled in futile attempting to release herself from it.

She heard that weird noise again, probably signifying that the maiden had reappeared nearby. She crouched down to dodge the next black-thread attack, hitting the fire place behind her, destroying the bricks.

“Hmmph. Persistant little rat, aren’t you?” Maki scoffed, levitating closer to the trapped Hitomi. “I guess I’ll give you something to bring back to that clan,” a smile worked its way up the maiden’s lips, “Your flesh, disintegrated and twisted to the extent that they can’t recognize you!” Maki pointed her finger at Hitomi again. This time, the tattoos crawled from her body and exited through the tip of that finger, slowly coming towards the guard.

The tattoos spread out around Hitomi, as if predetermining where it was going to land so that it matched the maiden which it came from. After arranging itself, the tattoo stood still in ready.

“Gravijira. I shall bestow upon you the hell of transcendent suffering.”

And with that incantation, the tattoo rushed at Hitomi, unable to escape.

Much to Hitomi’s surprise, she was not hit.

Much to Maki’s surprise, there was an odd barrier preventing that tattoo from closing in any closer.

“A barrier?” Maki raised a brow, summoning her tattoo back to her body. “No… No such modern technology could duplicate something like that… You have a magic nullification ability?”

“I don’t know, but it’s helpful,” Hitomi smiled as she jogged in place, happy that the tattoo at her feet was dispelled thanks to the random barrier. Then she stood in a fighting pose again, ready to counter attack. “I wonder if fighting you is going to bring more miraculous discoveries about myself.”

“Gravijira. I call upon the condensation of power in my hand,” Maki spread out her hand, a white light in the form of a sword materialized in front of it. Then as she gripped the white light, it became a katana whose hilt was wrapped in white bandages, with the excess bandage magically billowing out at the end a meter.

“Quite a flamboyant sword there,” Hitomi raised a brow.

“It’s called aerodynamics,” Maki lunged down at Hitomi with a vertical swing, “Enough speaking, where are my celestial robes, you servant of the Shibata clan?!”

Hitomi raised her stiletto horizontally, blocking the blow and pushing forward so that Maki was sent higher in the air from recoil, “Sorry, I’m just a ‘servant’ that knows nothing of the sort. I’m sure they do not, either.”

“Feh! You Shibata peasants go as far as to withhold information from their own servants? I guess I will have to find my celestial robes myself, and then destroy them after I dispose of you!”

It is the beginning of the end.

Rika slowly came to herself. She twitched her body, a sign that she was about to awake soon. She felt extremely air-headed as she lifted her upper body up, feeling that doing such a thing was a bad move. She opened her eyes, curious as to why the ‘bed’ she was in was so… sandy…

She was at a beach.

But something seemed off… The sand was a dark shade of grey. The cloudless night sky above had no stars. The blue moon was setting, its reflection glistening on the endless black water. In the far off distance, she saw silhouettes of people walking on water towards that blue moon. Rika looked around to find people, slightly transparent, stepping on top of the water, walking on it and also headed towards that blue moon.

Was this hell?

Was this heaven?

“Am I dead?”

No one answered her. Nor did she expect them to answer. She ventured closer to the black waves, watching people walk on it as if it was solid. Wondering if she really was just an apparition, Rika stepped into the water, only to sink in.

Nope, not dead.

“Don’t be foolish.”

Rika turned around to find that tattooed woman standing in the air with her arms crossed.

“Oh, now you decide to converse with me?” Rika retorted, offended that the spirit decided to finally show up in front of her without any intention of haunting or giving her supernatural grotesque imageries to vision.

“I have every right to. I’m the one possessing your body after all,” Maki drawled off.

What Rika found odd was that the spirit was flickering transparencies…

“Why am I even bothering with talking to my host?” Maki looked up in a different direction seemingly only half paying attention to Rika and half concentrated, “I’m really… busy with something…”

“What are you doing in the outside world?!”

“What I do in your place is not for you to know.”

“What is this place?!”

“The bridge between the living and the dead. When someone passes on, their soul can either rest here or the world of the living. When they’ve finally reached their peace, they cross the beach into the blue moon, reaching eternal rest.”

“But why am I here?!”

“What, did you think you would split in half when I possess your body?” Maki raised a brow. “I am a high ranked celestial maiden. I govern this place. So I thought, why not drop off my host here to wait until after I massacre that dreadful clan?”

“What do the Shibatas have to do with this?!” Rika glared at the floating tattooed woman above.

“Long ago, they stole something precious from me, defiled me, and on top of that, killed me for their greed. What person wouldn’t want revenge?”

“But that was long ago! Why are you trying to kill those which are already dead?”

“They still have what I am looking for.”

“And that is…?”

Maki was borderline fading, and she was evidently annoyed by it. “Feh… I can’t even bother speaking to you now. The body requires my full attention.”

“Don’t leave me! I’m just going to get really confused unless you tell everything!”

“Unfortunately, I’m not in the mood for that!” Maki almost said angrily as she spun herself around, transforming into black butterflies. After a moment’s fluttering, the butterflies vanished into thin air, not leaving a single trace.

Treasure all the memories possible.

It was a close fight. A particularly close fight. If there were spectators, they would have been speechless due to the display of skill that the fighters have. Their skills were incredibly balanced, so much so that they could even be considered on par with each other. No one would have been able to choose a ‘favorite’ because of that equality in fighting.

Maki swiped from left to right in a wide arc with her summoned sword. No hit was truly landed, for Hitomi blocked the swing midway with her stiletto. While she focused blocking there, she swiped at Maki’s face with her switch blade. With concentration and a quick incantation, Maki managed to call up a small shield stopping that blow. As both blows were blocked, the maiden then did a well placed kick to the other’s stomach.

Round one went to Maki.

Hitomi was thrown aback a few paces, not having much chance to recover as Maki pressed forward for another attack. This time, she went for a vertical swing from the bottom up. Hitomi feinted to the side and rammed into the maiden. After colliding, she used the arm she pushed with and swung outwards with the switch blade. When Maki blocked that with her sword, the guard tried to trip the other by swinging her foot past her leg and bringing it forward so that Maki’s knee would buckle. The maiden caught that tactic, and popped her leg back in place, reflecting the leg blow that Hitomi tried to deal.

Round two was neutral.

Maki brought her sword back and thrust it forward in a huge step. Hitomi sidestepped, but not fast enough to avoid having a rip in the side of her blouse, grazing her skin so slightly, but enough to draw blood. By reflex, the guard stepped forward to Maki, bringing her stiletto against the sword to prevent the maiden to swing sideways, then gave her a strong punch to the face.

Round three went to Hitomi.

With a grunt, the maiden swung in a wide arc despite staggering slightly from the blow to the face. Hitomi was wrong in thinking that the other had to recover from the hit, for her left upper arm was hit and was bleeding. Recovering instantly, Maki attempted to sever the other’s hand with a vertical strike. The guard moved into the blow, dodging by a hair’s width, and  then elbowing the sword arm away with her left, and then adding a matching scar on Maki’s upper arm with her right hand’s stiletto.  Afterwards, Hitomi turned halfway and with her left arm, elbowed Maki backwards in the head. She completed her turn by punching Maki in the chest with her right arm. From behind her body, Hitomi’s right leg tensed itself with power and then she brought it upwards to knee the maiden in the chest, lifting her higher in the air. The guard proceeded to send the maiden airborne by jumping and kneeing her with her other leg. To add even further, Hitomi brought her weapons into her opposite hips and released them outwards in a fast motion in an X formation, scarring Maki’s stomach with the latter letter.

In fits of revenge, Maki regained her footing in the air and flew forward, swinging her sword as she did so. Hitomi accidentally raised her hand with the switch blade instead of the stiletto in the air, so as a result, the blade broke from its small hilt. Now that the switchblade was useless, the guard chucked the hilt at Maki’s forehead, landing a good stunning hit on the possessed woman.

Then Hitomi charged at the maiden, swinging her stiletto diagonally from low-left to upper right. Maki, knowing that a stiletto is more of a long nail rather than a blade, blocked with her arm at the side, the most it could do at the side was bruise her, but Hitomi was focused on the sharp tip rather than the side, therefore, the block did not hurt the maiden in any way. As she blocked, Maki swung herself in a circle to swing her blade with intention of cutting the guard’s head off as she held the stiletto in place with her left arm. Seeing how Maki extended her arm for a wide swing, the guard caught Maki’s hand and twisted it.

Thus, the sword dropped from her grasp, fading into white light and dispersing now that its only purpose for existing has released it.

But that didn’t stop the maiden from resorting to fist fighting.

Maki snapped her wrist back in place, grabbing the foreign hand which snapped it before, and pulled Hitomi onto her, only do a backwards head bash which sent the other reeling. Then the maiden did a strong backwards kick, sending the guard to the wall with a crash. While the other was recovering from the blow, Maki recited the incantation again, summoning that katana back into her hand.

“Doing well for a servant,” Maki commented, holding the sword a little behind her side upside down so that the blade was facing upwards. With her left hand, she made a motion for the guard to come forward, inviting her to take the first strike. “It’s been awhile since I’ve been released this far, so my skills have become rusty.”

If this is ‘her’ when she is rusty… I might be in deep trouble if she fought at full strength… Hitomi could feel some blood lying dormant in her mouth, and concluded that colliding with the wall probably busted an organ thanks to a broken rib of some sort. For now, her top priority was to try and knock out the maiden so that she would bring her to the lab right after. As she stood up, Hitomi spat out the accumulating blood onto the floor, finding it necessary to clear her mouth so she could breath easier.

“Shall we continue?” Hitomi asked huskily, the blood trickling down her mouth.

“It’s no use fighting something that’s broken, but you are welcome to try!” Maki taunted, daring the other to initiate the next part of the fight as she flipped the sword so that she was holding it upwards.

Hitomi charged with a strong thrust, hoping to hit the maiden without trouble. It was a mistake to use the same tactic, for Maki did the exact same defense as she did before: she ran her arm against the stiletto and prepared to do a diagonal slash on the defenseless guard.

However, it wasn’t an accidental mistake to use the same tactic twice.

After all, once the move was seen once, the second time will not result in the same success as the first one.

Because after seeing it once, one could devise a plan to defeat it the next time it is used.

Hitomi ducked after Maki swung her blade and proceeded to kick her passing hand, having her release her weapon yet again. Afterwards, the taller rammed into the maiden so that she also collided against the wall. When Maki swiped at her with her right hand, Hitomi backed up, her nails narrowly missing her head, and charged forward to hold Maki in place with the stiletto. How?

By driving it into Maki’s swiping hand of course: thus, nailing her hand to the wall.

“You ungrateful miscreant…” the maiden growled, clearly in pain as Hitomi watched the excessive blood drip down the wall.

Hitomi simply stumbled backwards out of exhaustion, trying to catch her breath by panting. “Now if you hadn’t broken my switch blade, I would have pinned your other hand as well…”

“HA! I have experienced…” Maki yanked her hand from the wall, taking the stiletto with it, “MUCH worse than that!” the maiden pulled the stiletto from her hand, Maki then threw the stiletto back at Hitomi, hitting her right through the left shoulder.

The guard let out a straining scream at her own weapon lodged in her shoulder. She felt her reality slipping away as the blood was pouring out just as profusely as Maki’s hand wound.

“I didn’t think anyone could be on par with me, especially given the era you reside in…” Maki’s breathing became ragged as she covered her wound with her other hand, attempting to slow the blood loss down.

“Just because you’re a celestial maiden doesn’t mean you are perfect…” Hitomi tried to stand up even with the stiletto in her shoulder, refusing to dislodge it for she knew that she’ll accidentally give herself a death time limit before returning to the lab to be treated of her wounds.

Maki remembered those words… Though it wasn’t from Hitomi’s mouth that had first said it… Then she began to fear… What if fate was cruel and allowed the guard to say what was said from that person back then…

“You have good power, but your swings are too wide, so that leaves you open for a lot of attacks. Let’s add to the fact that I’m using a much shorter ranged weapon than you, so my attacks are obviously faster…”

Maki’s eyes widened. It just had to happen again, didn’t it?! Hitomi having to say the same thing that person said to her in the past.

“Ah… That was a good spar…”

“Yeah that was… Though I lost, haha… It’s hard to fight with a sword against a spear…”

“You have the advantage really, since your weapon has a shorter range than my spear. You should have had the upper hand because you are faster. But I can say the reason why I beat you was due to the length of your swings. Because they’re so wide, you’ve left a lot of blind spots, you know?”

“Is that so?” Maki chuckled, “I guess I have to work harder, don’t I?”

The other ran their hand against their forehead, wiping off the sweat. Along with that, the person smiled serenely, a smile that the maiden found herself smiling with the same honesty back.


No.

This wasn’t supposed to happen.

“I’m not supposed to recall those memories…!” Maki clutched her head with her unscarred hand, as if trying to prevent herself from lashing out.

Hitomi watched in awe as Maki’s eye and hair color began to flicker amidst her internal struggle. Maki even resorted to hurling herself against the wall to retain her possession on the body. But her efforts were futile, the ends of the tattoo, in other words, her hand and the sides of her face, began retreating. The black supernatural ink was receding back to its starting point, her right shoulder blade. The tattoo eventually vanished, and then the maiden leaned against the wall by her back, her knees close to buckling.

Hitomi knew that Maki’s reign over Rika’s body was soon to pass.

“I will come back… And I will kill you…” were the last words the maiden uttered before she became consumed completely by black butterflies, leaving no trace of her within the hoard. Then the hoard of butterflies dispersed and faded, leaving Rika in their wake.

“Rika!” Hitomi rushed forward, catching the woman who collapsed into her arms.

“What happened…” Rika looked about wildly, but then started to groan in pain in the wounds that had never left. “Did I attack you…?” she uttered weakly, feeling very dizzy.

“Rika! Stay with me!” the taller shouted desperately, concern undermining her voice.

But it was too late.

The cursed woman passed out.

Hitomi simply sighed. She leaned heavily on her hands backwards, letting Rika’s limp body rest on her.

“Maybe I shouldn’t have done that…” Hitomi panted, eyeing the wound in Rika’s hand. Then she leaned her head back, looking at the ceiling, still panting.

When Maki took over… she called Rika ‘that foolish lovesick human…’ Hitomi looked down at Rika’s face again, brushing her hair out of her face.

“So you’re in love with me now…?” she knew that there was no reason to sound so cautioned, but her voice somehow ended up like that. “But I’ve only seen you about four times…” Hitomi now looked off to the side, avoiding Rika, “I can’t…”

“You’re just… ‘there’… It’s not exactly ‘love’… Or is it?”

Because eventually…

It was dark.

It was also painful.

She opened her eyes slowly, blinking ever so often because she couldn’t see out of the darkness. Yet no matter how much she did so, she could not see out of this darkness.

Her right hand ached horribly. She would inspect what had happened to it, but her energy was completely drained, and something seemed to prevent her from moving in general.  There was no longer a floor beneath her like she last remembered.

Instead, it was a bed.

Then she realized what that ‘something’ was.

That ‘something’ was also quite heavy.

Rika felt her body tense all over, and it wasn’t because of the pain of her wounds.

It was because Hitomi was lying on top of her, embracing her tightly.

And she happened to still be sleeping.

How am I supposed to get out of this now?! Rika panicked internally, not wanting to accidentally wake the guard up. But the more she confirmed her presence…

The more she felt comforted by it.

I guess I’ll… let this moment go by… Rika smiled inwardly, idolizing and engraving into her memory the touch of the taller woman. With the remainder of her recovered strength, Rika embraced the other’s upper back, pulling Hitomi closer into her, careful as to not wake her up.

I’m not going to deny it this time…

It’s a truth to me now…

I’m in love with you…


Everything cherished will be gone.












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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 5: The Fujimoto Family
« Reply #77 on: June 26, 2007, 12:13:59 AM »
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Woo! Fight chapter~! <3 Love fights. XD Anyway, Maki is REALLY pissed...Which makes her REALLY hawt! XD Damn, Yossie kicks ass. ;D! Who knew she could stand up to an evil Celestial Maiden like that. Must be about something in her past. :x

By the way, my hand felt really weird after reading that! :O! Damn...Ouchie. x_x; And then Yossie got it right in the shoulder. X__X!! (It was really cool though :D)

IshiYoshi moment made me happy~! <3333 Those two are so cute. <3 Although, it's such a love at first sight thing, odd but still cute! XD

o_o;; sorry for the short comment. ^^;;

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 6: The Celestial Maiden
« Reply #78 on: June 26, 2007, 02:26:11 AM »
Aha, fight chapter. XD

You and your camera work. XDDDD Credible though. ^_~ I was entertained. :D

Interesting revelations. Maki's past eh? I wonder who was "that person". Mmm. XD And Yossi seems like a suspicious person too, frankly. Anti-magic nullification ability? Hmm. I wonder.

Nice Ishiyoshi moment. :D I wonder what's going to happen next? XD

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Re: Our Cursed Gift II [NOT A SEQUEL] Chapter 6: The Celestial Maiden
« Reply #79 on: June 26, 2007, 03:49:05 AM »
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“The existence of Ishikawa Rika is a mere shell. And it happens that this shell’s character is simply a personality that came from the development of her surrounding environment and interpersonal relationships. We are not different however. I am ‘Rika’ but it’s simply a name that one’s parents gave to their child. Little did they know that there was another soul hidden away in their child’s body. I am that soul.”
Makes sense when you think about it. It's like the same car, but with a different driver.


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“So you’re the one the Shibata International Company want dead, not Rika?”

“Pfft, even if they could find a way to kill only my soul, that dreadful clan will still slaughter the innocent in order to subdue me.”
Scary thing is, what she said is probably true. Considering  that this is probably akin to a blood-feud that has gone on for generations, they're going to be dead-set on eliminating any and all traces of the spirit. Anything and anyone that has any type of connection to it will likely be in danger.


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“Gravijira. Allow me to borrow the weaving creature of which power can impersonate that of demons among us,” Maki pointed her hand at the other. A tennis-ball sized sphere materialized in front of the point finger. “I must slaughter that clan, even henchmen like you count towards the quota.” the ball immediately uncurled towards Hitomi, unraveling itself to be a ball of black spider-thread-like substances which came at the other in the blink of an eye.
Evidently, the same can be said about the other side as well. Now who or what is "Gravijira"?


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“I guess I’ll give you something to bring back to that clan,” a smile worked its way up the maiden’s lips, “Your flesh, disintegrated and twisted to the extent that they can’t recognize you!” Maki pointed her finger at Hitomi again.

 ...

“Gravijira. I shall bestow upon you the hell of transcendent suffering.”
Damn, she'd probably be better off (and maybe even prefer being) dead than having to suffer that.


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And with that incantation, the tattoo rushed at Hitomi, unable to escape.

Much to Hitomi’s surprise, she was not hit.

Much to Maki’s surprise, there was an odd barrier preventing that tattoo from closing in any closer.

“A barrier?” Maki raised a brow, summoning her tattoo back to her body. “No… No such modern technology could duplicate something like that… You have a magic nullification ability?”
Maybe Rika's spirit isn't completely "asleep" as Maki thought?


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Maki lunged down at Hitomi with a vertical swing, “Enough speaking, where are my celestial robes, you servant of the Shibata clan?!”
Celestial robes? Either the spirit is very particular about how she looks, or she might be preparing for some sort of ceremony.


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Rika slowly came to herself. She twitched her body, a sign that she was about to awake soon. She felt extremely air-headed as she lifted her upper body up, feeling that doing such a thing was a bad move. She opened her eyes, curious as to why the ‘bed’ she was in was so… sandy…

She was at a beach.
Oooooooooooh Rika's spirit is in some type of spiritual limbo within her own body?


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Rika turned around to find that tattooed woman standing in the air with her arms crossed.

“Oh, now you decide to converse with me?” Rika retorted, offended that the spirit decided to finally show up in front of her without any intention of haunting or giving her supernatural grotesque imageries to vision.

“I have every right to. I’m the one possessing your body after all,” Maki drawled off.
Being a spirit must come in handy in situations like this when she has to converse with 2 people at the same time. :P


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“What do the Shibatas have to do with this?!” Rika glared at the floating tattooed woman above.

“Long ago, they stole something precious from me, defiled me, and on top of that, killed me for their greed. What person wouldn’t want revenge?”

“But that was long ago! Why are you trying to kill those which are already dead?”

“They still have what I am looking for.”

“And that is…?”
Perhaps the aforementioned celestial robes? If they were special to her for some reason, it would be somewhat understandable that she'd be pissed off. Problem is, as Rika said, the family members that stole those robes and that killed Maki are long dead. There's no way to know if those robes still physically exist, or if the Shibatas still even have them.  If they're no longer in existence and/or if they no longer have them, what then? Maki evidently won't settle for anything less than what she's demanding, but if it just can't physically be done, then the Shibatas, unless they can eliminate her first, are as good as dead.


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Maki was borderline fading, and she was evidently annoyed by it. “Feh… I can’t even bother speaking to you now. The body requires my full attention.”
Looks like splitting her attention between this limbo and the real world is taxing Maki more than she'd like.  It must not be as easy as she'd like it to be, which could prove to be a potential Achilles heel.


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It was a close fight. A particularly close fight.
Let's hope Yossi remembers that while it's Maki she's fighting, it's still Rika's body, so she can't damage her too much. :O


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When Maki swiped at her with her right hand, Hitomi backed up, her nails narrowly missing her head, and charged forward to hold Maki in place with the stiletto. How?

By driving it into Maki’s swiping hand of course: thus, nailing her hand to the wall.
Shit, Rika's gonna be hurtin' when she gets back.


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“Now if you hadn’t broken my switch blade, I would have pinned your other hand as well…”

“HA! I have experienced…” Maki yanked her hand from the wall, taking the stiletto with it, “MUCH worse than that!” the maiden pulled the stiletto from her hand, Maki then threw the stiletto back at Hitomi, hitting her right through the left shoulder.
Thing about being a spirit in possession of another person's body, you tend not to worry as much about injuries/physical damage. After all, she could always just possess someone else.  The same cannot be said for Yossi.


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“Just because you’re a celestial maiden doesn’t mean you are perfect…” Hitomi tried to stand up even with the stiletto in her shoulder, refusing to dislodge it for she knew that she’ll accidentally give herself a death time limit before returning to the lab to be treated of her wounds.

Maki remembered those words… Though it wasn’t from Hitomi’s mouth that had first said it… Then she began to fear… What if fate was cruel and allowed the guard to say what was said from that person back then…
Something similar must have been said to Maki shortly before the Shibatas originally killed her long ago.  Something as cryptic as that isn't something that you forget easily.

Question now is...who was "that person"? Subsequently...could it be possible that "that person's" spirit has somehow found a way to survive all these years as Maki did?


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“I’m not supposed to recall those memories…!” Maki clutched her head with her unscarred hand, as if trying to prevent herself from lashing out.

Hitomi watched in awe as Maki’s eye and hair color began to flicker amidst her internal struggle. Maki even resorted to hurling herself against the wall to retain her possession on the body.
So Maki shows that possessing a body is not that easy after all. Whether there was a single, particular trigger, or whether or not it was a combination of the fight, her flashbacks and her speaking with Rika in the spirit realm remains to be seen.


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Then the hoard of butterflies dispersed and faded, leaving Rika in their wake.

“Rika!” Hitomi rushed forward, catching the woman who collapsed into her arms.

“What happened…” Rika looked about wildly, but then started to groan in pain in the wounds that had never left. “Did I attack you…?” she uttered weakly, feeling very dizzy.
Awwwww, despite being in pain herself, her first concern was for Yossi's well-being.  :love:

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