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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [8])
« Reply #60 on: December 23, 2007, 12:14:57 AM »
I didn't like the takagaki sketches I was planning to finish for christmas and I don't really like this particular one shot either (it's sloppily done) But it was either this nonsense or... angst, lol. Something to make up for the lack of update for my other fic anyway, I'm very tired lately.

OOCness (or you could just assume that Aichan's somewhat drunk, lol)

It all started with presents.

Takahashi Ai and Niigaki Risa were seated together on fuzzy carpet in the latter’s bedroom with boxes, wrapping paper, gifts and a pile of detached price tags surrounding them. They were only in their first hour of preparing for the annual Christmas Eve party tomorrow. They had both brought over the presents they bought individually to help each other in the wrapping. It was a cold night given the season they were experiencing currently. They were both wrapped to the toes just to keep warm, but constant exchange of words kept their mind off the chill.

“What did you get Sayu?” Ai asked while searching through the bags.

“Hair bands!” Risa grinned while secretly proud of her choice. She was sure that the narcissist could never have too many hair bands.

“You mean this?” The elder pulled out a similar item and examined it carefully, and very curiously. She was very much amused by what she found.

“No, not that! I meant hair ties. That’s just a free gift that came with one of these stuff I bought.” She frowned feeling embarrassed at the sight of object.

“Not bad,” Ai put on the item on her head playfully and nodded in approval, “Santa hats were getting old anyway.” She flicked the ornament hanging off the band and smirked.

“Risa, look. This is really convenient!” She crawled over to her friend and inched close to the younger’s face with a silly grin. “Heh, mistletoe.”

“Aichan!” Risa backed away, completely surprised by how close they were suddenly when she had turned her head to face the elder. She was also now slightly colored in the face. “Mistletoe? So what?” She responded, trying to keep her cool.

“You’re supposed to give me a kiss.” Ai pouted, the mistletoe attached to a spring on the hair band she wore bounced freely above her forehead.

“W-Wha? No way, that’s not counted!” Risa argued, backing further up against the dresser and almost ready to bolt if her best friend dared to try anything. She cursed that she didn’t have a Sayu-shield this time to save herself from the attacks of attempted kisses.

“But a mistletoe is still a mistletoe! So come oooooooon~” Ai whined, scooting close to her long time friend with big puppy dog eyes. “Just one!”

“Nooo… go away!” Risa jumped to her feet and ran to another corner of the room. Following suit, Ai started to chase after her despite the difficulty in running about within a crowded small room.

“Fine, I’ll do it then.” Ai laughed out loud, aiming her portable mistletoe at her sub-leader and puckered up her lips.

“You’ll never have your way!” The younger of the two declared and jumped up on the bed when her best friend attempted to pounce on her but fell forward instead onto the soft mattress.

“Baaaaaka…” Ai smirked, already having her victim cornered at the end of the bed without even having to try. She quickly got on her feet and advanced towards Risa, the wobbling bed making it dangerous to move about quickly.

“Shit…” Not the best thing to say, but what else could the young idol do at this point of time. Her body stiffened, and she grew nervous.

“Hah, got you!” Ai had her best friend against the wall, hands pinned to both sides to prevent her ‘prey’ from escaping again.

What was supposed to be an innocent friendly joke turned different when Ai spent a good five seconds to observe the prey she had finally caught. Those lips pressed together stubbornly seemed more tempting than the cheeks she had initially planned to land a small one on. She had never really kissed anyone before, so she wondered how it’d be like.

Was it even right to kiss her best friend like that- on the lips? The thought didn’t cross her mind at all. She felt like being impulsive for the moment, and she only had those 5 seconds that felt like half an hour to decide what to do.

On Risa’s end, 5 seconds too felt like a very long time. Foolishly thinking that it was safe, she relaxed her mouth and peeked open an eye. What she never expected was a pair of lips crashing against her own at that instant. Both eyes flew open at the touch. Caught unaware, Risa immediately became dazed. However, she pushed away immediately when she felt movement from the elder’s lip.

“You… That… oh my god.” Risa blinked, dumbfounded at what had just happened. She quietly sank down to her bed, knees joined together while her arms fell limply to her sides. Her heart was beating madly, and yet just seconds ago it was actually fluttering inside. She felt relieved and happy and then confused, utterly confused.

Also blinking to clear the fog in her head, Ai backed up a little only to fall back on the bed. She yelped at the fall with a hilarious expression, causing her best friend to giggle at the little incident. Both girls were still surprised by what one did and what the other felt, but the laugh managed to break the ice.

“Aichan? Why did you…” Risa started, touching her own lips and blushing harder.

“Uhm… Your lips made me do it?” Ai replied while rolling her eyes up to look at the ceiling rather than her friend.

“My… That’s ridiculous!” The younger frowned, unsatisfied with the answer.

“I’m sorry!! I didn’t mean to... but that’s the truth. Mmmm… Yeah, I swear that’s how it is.”

“So unconvincing,” Risa rolled her eyes at the last part. “But…does that mean that you… felt nothing?”

“Felt? Well… I wasn’t sure.” Ai rubbed the back of her neck, diverting her eyes to the edge of the bed.

“What do you mean you’re not sure?! How can you-“ Risa leaned forward as she spoke, irritated and for some reason mad at this subtle insensitivity.

“Wait, wait! Let me explain. You moved away too fast before I even realized I felt anything.”

“What kind of lame excuse is that?!”

“The honest kind? Maybe if I kissed you again for a longer time, I can give you a proper answer.” Ai placed a finger to her chin in genuine thought.

“You sneaky little…” Risa was ready to toss her pillow towards the absentminded girl, and forcefully too, just for good measure.

Sensing danger, the young leader shielded herself with her arms. Peaking through the gap between her arms, she looked at her best friend pleadingly, “Why not?! We both want to know the answer, right? I promise! One more just to make sure.”

Was it right or wrong to say that this woman’s mind work in a really strange but effective way? Whatever the gears were in the other’s head, Risa didn’t want to know. She sighed and gave in. What’s done was done anyway. It wouldn’t make a difference if done again, if there really was nothing between them… or was there? She was desperate to know as well.

“Fine, But I’m kicking you out of the room if you give me another dumb answer.”

“It’s your room, your rules.” Ai shrugged and got on all fours. She crawled towards the other until her hands were placed beside her thighs.

Time slowed down to them and Risa carefully removed the stupid headpiece that started everything from Ai’s hair since the hanging mistletoe was getting in the way. It felt like an extremely delicate and irresistible moment after that. Emotionally prepared, the familiar pair of lips landed right on the younger’s own. It was warm, soft but so very awkward.

At first just a chaste kiss, it quickly grew into something more when lips starting to move against each other. Then, it got competitive with the addition of tongues. Despite all that, it was still a very clumsy kiss on every level. But who cares, no one’s watching anyway.

Kisses trailing from the lip to the jaw line and finally to the neck prompted the hands to start going astray. But they never did go very far after that when the initiator was pushed away again.

“O-oi!” A protest was made between pants and deep breaths. “You’re getting carried away…”

“I had to make sure what I’m feeling in my stomach isn’t hunger.” Ai smiled, unashamed of her absurd excuse.

“That has nothing to do with anything!” Risa frowned and crossed her arms, looking away from the woman that stole kisses through mind games.

Sighing at the acknowledgement of how she’s running out of reasonable excuses, Ai leaned forward again to hug her friend, with some words she had promised to say. And a hug always works when someone’s upset, but she wasn’t so confident about it this time. Again on impulse, she felt this hug was important in a way that needed no reason.

“Promise we’re still friends if I told you how I felt?” She whispered into the other’s ear and received a hesitant nod. “Just so you know, I’m not going to say ‘I love you’ or anything mushy like that.” She started, only to hear a hitching sound and the muscles in the other's body tensing with disappointment. Afraid that Risa would violently try to break free, she tightened the hug.

“Let go…”

“You know, if I said those three words so easily, then it’ll be meaningless.” Ai ignored and continued to speak in a whisper, her eyes focused on her best friend’s hair. What made it annoying was the way she spoke. It was more matter-of-fact than it was emotional. “So each time I would say it, it’s like… how should I put this, I feel that I would love you less each time I say those three words…”

“You really love… Me?“ Risa froze and stopped wanting to struggle and run away. She now felt a heavy weight being lifted from her chest, but it could still be just a misunderstanding on her part, after all, nothing ever made sense with the other. But those words touched her deeply and she could feel her eyes burn a little.

“I would be unfair if I said it just to make you happy because sometimes I might not actually mean it, and I don’t want to do that to someone special to me… and-”

“I get it already!” She sniffed. It wasn’t as great as a dream coming true, but she felt happy even if the confession was about as weird as how the woman would just go into a talk on Japan History. At least this time, it had something to do about the both of them rather than some man and his many wives that Risa honestly don’t care about. “Is there anything else you want to say?” She pulled away and waited hopefully.

“Uhm.. Oh! Merry Christmas!” Ai smiled innocently and greeted cheerfully.

“… Idiot!” Risa cried out and leaned in to kiss her best friend senseless, a third for the sake for revenge for the earlier displays, another because Ai was being dumb on purpose and obviously stole those lines from some movie or another (at least she stole the right lines) and the last third could be cut down to tenths for all the little reasons Risa is not obliged to mention.

But, of all things she had wanted to hear and what the other could’ve said, she least expected this, especially when Christmas was technically still 2 days away.

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [8])
« Reply #61 on: December 23, 2007, 01:26:12 AM »
Omgosh Takagaki is <3.

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Yeah, they're adorable. <3

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [8])
« Reply #62 on: December 23, 2007, 01:58:18 AM »
Woo... you go Ai-chan~


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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [8])
« Reply #63 on: December 23, 2007, 04:12:22 AM »
As Konkon would say...


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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [8])
« Reply #64 on: December 23, 2007, 05:33:40 AM »
Takagaki is so adorable...
and i love Ai's warped common sense ;)

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [8])
« Reply #65 on: December 23, 2007, 06:39:10 AM »
I love TakaGaki!!!!!!!!!!! You make me fall in love with this couple every time I read a story by you :) It's a nice change that Ai initiated the kiss this time XD

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [8])
« Reply #66 on: December 23, 2007, 07:24:01 AM »
Woo that was great!  I could easily imagine Ai chan being drunk per your suggestion but at the same time it's also easy to  image Ai chan being so....well Ai chan like XD  This was pretty funny and warm and fuzzy too!

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [8])
« Reply #67 on: December 23, 2007, 02:00:12 PM »
I woke up forgetting that I ever wrote this ;-;
Anyway, thanks alot for the comments.
Maybe I'll do one more christmas fic and then disappear for awhile.

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [8])
« Reply #68 on: December 24, 2007, 07:03:08 AM »
Santa knows all.

Huddled against the wall on her couch, Rika held her knees close to her chest in a state of being half asleep and yet still struggling to stay awake. There is a nagging feeling in her chest, as though she is waiting for someone or something to show up, but she had no clue as to what she’s torturing herself for. She finally couldn’t keep it in any longer and yawned a great yawn.

It was half an hour before midnight, before Christmas would arrive and she wondered why she was alone on such a meaningful night. She looked at the Christmas tree she had set up with her sister just last week. The ever changing lights were very hypnotizing from her point of view and that star right at the peak made her sigh.

There had always been this desire to want that star since she was a child, and she would have it of course, when Christmas was over and when the tree would be stored back into the attic or some other place her father could find. They would let her keep it, because she is their precious daughter. But there wasn’t any point to holding such a pretty ornament when the season’s already over. The star never stayed in her possession for long as there was always a need to keep it in a safer place where it wouldn’t be defaced and would look as perfect as always for next Christmas.

Rika’s eyelids grew heavy and the silence of the room was no difference from a lullaby. Just as her head was about to fall forward, she heard shuffling and struggling from outside her window, which brought her out of her semiconscious state.

What was that?

She slapped herself awake on the cheeks and crept towards her window carefully to peek over the edge.

It had been snowing that night, why hadn’t she noticed? Realizing how a thin layer of snow now surrounded her home, she thought maybe it was just that that fell onto her roof and was making all that noise. But there it was again, echoing from just behind her in the living room.

“Uhm… Who’s there?” It came out as a squeak. She took the closest offensive object she could find – a tennis racket and walked towards where was lounging at just minutes ago. There was a lump of red in front of her couch, bent over in search of something in his or her equally red bag. Rika raised an eyebrow at the figure, was it a robber or some weirdo? Unthreatened by this strange sight, she lowered her weapon.

“Ah ha! Found it!” The figure threw their hand up into the air in triumph with a small box held within.

“Ah!” Rika screamed at the outburst and lifted her racket again.

The figure immediately turned around at the exclamation. Two pair of eye’s were wide opened in surprised, but seeing who they were facing, both relaxed and smiled.

“Where did you come from?” Rika dropped her racket before she started to advance towards the person. She recognized the other even with the ridiculous outfit the other wore.

“A crack in the wall, maybe the pipes, hmm…” The other thought carefully, pulling at their fake beard. “Oh, you said WHERE. In a far away cold country.”

“No, seriously, how did you get in?” Rika was growing impatient with the help of her sleepiness. She sat back down on her couch and yawned without taking her eyes off the other donned in red.

“If I told you, then there’s no magic to all this.” The person in red sat down beside Rika and smiled widely, although a little mysteriously.

“Yocchan, you’re being weird tonight.”

“Weird?” Yoshizawa shook her head, “I’m hurt, after coming all this way to deliver your present and you call me weird…”

“Present? You’re Santa now, huh?” Rika was growing sleepier by the second and she leaned down on her friend’s shoulder unconsciously.

“Isn’t the outfit obvious enough?” Yoshizawa wondered out loud, rubbing the missing huge belly under the red velvet.

“The beard is just… silly.” The older woman commented between yawns.   

“I’m leaving if you’re just going to keep criticizing my fashion sense.” The grandfather clock in the house began to chime at the struck of 12. It reminded both of them of what day it finally is.

“No… don’t go,” Rika struggled even more to stay awake. She tugged at ‘Santa’s’ sleeves in attempt to keep the other from leaving. “I’m really happy that you came even if you did break into my house illegally…”

“You need a chimney, milk and cookies.” Came a respond that made Rika giggle.

“I’ll remember next year. There’s a present for me right?” Rika remembered as she turned inwards to cuddle against the outfit’s material comfortably. It was warm and better than her blanket.

“That’s right! Santa always comes with presents.” She opened her palm that had been holding on to a mini gift box all this time. She removed the lid and pulled out the accessory from inside.

“Yocchan!” Rika suddenly sat up when the object was held in front of her, “This is…”

“You wanted a star, didn’t you? It’s small but it’s yours to keep, and not just for tonight, or the holiday. Nobody would take it away from you.”  Yoshizawa smiled softly and moved in to hug her friend from behind, pulling her in close.

“But how did you know?” Rika asked, touching the present with one finger and tracing its shape. She unconsciously leaned into the hug and wondered if what the other said had another meaning.

“Santa knows everything.” The other grinned widely.

“Then does she know what I’m thinking right now?”

“Yes.” Yoshizawa replied confidently and took the present from Rika’s palms. She had the older woman lift up her hair so that she could the gift on for her. Carefully, she closed the latch of the necklace and rested her chin on the other’s shoulder to take a look at it. “It looks really nice on you.”

“Thank you.” Rika sounded touched and her voice was quivering. She felt something wet trailing down her face.

”Did I do something wrong? Why are you crying?” The woman in red turned her friend around to check on her as well as wipe away the tears staining her lovely face.

“It’s just,” Rika quickly sniffed and wiped away the drying tears from her face, “I’ve been alone all night thinking that I’d just sleep Christmas away and then you show up and I got this…” She lifted the star symbol made of white gold from around her neck, “I don’t know if I should believe it because somehow I feel like I’m only dream-“

Yoshizawa suddenly frowned and swiftly, she planted a long chaste kiss on Rika to shut her up. After an eternity, she broke the kiss to breath. The other was pretty much dazed.

“Everything around you could be a dream,” Completely in control of the situation, she placed both hands on Rika’s shoulders. “But please don’t cry, because Santa’s here and that’s for real. Besides, I can pinch you if you really want proof.” She grinned and rubbed her finger and thumb together.

“Yocchan!” Rika scolded between sniffing and laughing. One thing she really can never believe was how the other can insert something that completely ruins the mood without feeling remorse. Regardless, she felt her heart flutter and she really wanted to feel the reality of this ‘Santa’. Without saying any more, she fell forward into a hug, resting quietly on the athletic chest.

“Merry Christmas, Rika-chan.” Yoshizawa Hitomi removed her beard and placed a soft kiss on her friend’s forehead. Rika closed her eyes to receive it, and she never did opened them again as she falls into a deep sleep finally giving in to how tired she was. She remembered to take note of how comfortable it was to be sleeping in the other woman’s arms. She could forgo her bed for this any day.

She didn’t wake up again until the next morning when the loud honking of a truck from outside jolted her out of slumber. She sat upright instantly in shock and didn’t calm down until she notices a blanket over her.

Was it really just her fantasy that happened last night?

She got out of the couch and was about to head for the bathroom when something fell from her lap. It was a small gift box and she wondered what it was doing in her possession. Suddenly she remembered the necklace and quickly felt around her neck, it was still there. Rika was starting to believe, but what bothered her was the missing person that made last night possible.

She carefully opened the box and found a key and a piece of paper folded inside. As she read the note, a smile crept up to her face.

HO HO HO! Once again, Merry Christmas Rika-chan!

I had to leave to deliver more presents to hopeful children. 

Indefinitely yours,
Santa Yoshizawa ★

PS: I borrowed the key from your sister.


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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [9])
« Reply #69 on: December 24, 2007, 10:17:10 PM »
*squeal!* Ishiyoshi ties with TsujiKago as my OTP. I'm such a sucker for holiday romance!

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« Reply #70 on: March 03, 2008, 11:02:56 PM »
Been riding the train lately.
It's a little hard to write this :/ but enjoy!

Train Ride

Most of the passengers lifted their tired heads at the ring of the bell, and the followed announcement of the next stop. Some readied themselves by gathering their belongings or rising from their seat, and to those that were not intending to alight, they lowered their heads again.

It was a slow, peaceful journey within the cabin. Different from the sardine packed rides that most evenings bring. And some would also notice how spacious the train actually was, or clean even. And also how bright it really was, and quiet without the massive crowd. It was almost surreal, in a way.

Her name was Tanaka Reina; she repeated in her mind as she read the kanji printed on her schedule of the month. She held the work folder close to her like a buoy.

She was a Morning Musume- the ideal Musume, as her producer had once stated.

She was an idol; a celebrity, and she was taking a public train home.

Not that she had expected something more luxurious that was worthy of a famous figure. Reina wasn’t a materialistic girl like that.

She had always taken the train home as a child and into her early teenage years, and almost every other day after that. It simply was that, being in a half empty train cabin was something new to her given the busy life people in Tokyo frequently had.

She liked this new experience.

There were times when Reina was fond of observing people, especially from the higher levels of the arenas where Morning Musume or Hello! Project would have their concert tours at. Standing behind clear glass to watch the audience wait patiently for admittance. It was fun, to see the antics that fans can some up with while they fill up their time. She had once wanted to join them, wishing that she was just another ordinary girl.

But of course she did like her current status as an idol, and very much too. Reina wouldn’t exchange it for anything else in the world.

Right now in the train, there weren’t any interesting acts to watch, nor can she burst out into a song under the pretense of rehearsal. She felt nothing more than being incredibly bored. Perhaps she could practice the art of observation. Reina perked up at the idea and turned her head to the side to find a subject.

It was only then that she realized how she wasn’t alone to begin with.

She was in fact wedged between an elderly woman and to the right, the leader of Morning Musume.

Takahashi Ai was her name, and she didn’t need a tag to know that. They had earlier plan to travel back together, because it was along the way.

Her leader, a woman with an extraordinary presence was seated comfortably beside Reina with her eyes closed. Her chestnut hair having grown slightly longer than it was after that (rather surprising) change in length was now resting gently on her bare shoulders. The calm unmoving expression on her was somewhat alluring.

Reina noticed the gloss on her lips, and the fading makeup around her cheeks. The apparently sleeping form of Ai was mesmerizing, as it is captivating when the woman was putting in a hundred and fifty percent of her effort when on stage.

Even if doused in sweat, or bothered by the arena’s heat, or even if she had a troubled day, Ai was always working hard. For the sake of being an idol with a contract, for the sake of the group she was dedicated to, or amazingly even, for herself.

But Ai wasn’t the ideal idol that Tsunku had planned of. She did not even have an amusing character. Neither does she make good first impressions at times; at least that’s what Reina thought.

Ai was, to say the least, ordinary.

How was it that this woman could play her role so well? It wasn’t simply talent. Reina wanted to know how it was possible. She could push twice as much of an effort into her performances, but it’ll always differ from her leader’s.

She blinked suddenly when she noticed a smile creeping onto the older woman’s face. Every movement and change from Ai intrigued Reina now.

Why was she smiling?

What is she thinking of?

Reina stared long and hard at the unknowing woman, shifting her eyes about as though to scan the other from head to toe.

She noticed white wires dangling beside Ai’s parka, but that doesn’t explain anything other than telling her that her leader was listening to an mp3.

She looked further down; pass the bulky pocket of the outerwear and to the slender feminine hands of Ai. Her fingers were tapping against the fabric of her coat in rhythm.

Does her leader like the particular song she’s listening to?

Reina was as curious as a cat now. She wanted to know what song it was as well.

Without thinking, she leaned over Ai to reached for her earpiece on the other side of her head.

Feeling the sudden weight on her lap, Ai jerked up in surprise and snapped her eyes open. She could see skin as well as smell the sweet fragrance of a brandless perfume. She recognized the curls that were bouncing in front of her, and the glitter that stuck to alternate strands of brown hair.

She had wanted to call out for the girl only to refrain herself when Reina had finally gotten off her. As curious as she was, Ai remained observant on the young idol with half opened eyes. She felt the wire connecting to her earpiece shift and came to conclusion.

Reina had successfully pulled the right earpiece off from Ai’s ear without asking and like an excited kid, she quickly places it securely into her own ear.

Amused by the child-like behavior of her friend, Ai widened her smile and closed her eyes again, hoping that Reina might like the song she was listening to.

It took awhile for her to adjust to the music, but Reina was sure that the song was unknown to her. Making sure that the earpiece was still in her ear, she took a quick glance at Ai’s relaxed position and proceeded to do the same.

She gently closes her eyes and listens to the lyrics of the song carefully.

Is this how it is like to be like Takahashi Ai?

Even if to just listen to the same music, to sit in the same position, to breath in the same pace, is it the same?

It might be, but there was still something different that Reina couldn’t pinpoint. To be like Ai was nothing from being ordinary, even if to mimic something so mundane and simple as what she had just done.

The bell rings again, announcing a new station. As usual, passengers eagerly get ready to alight. The shuffling of feet was apparent, showing that quite a number of passengers were now waiting for their stop.

But to the girls connected by a mere white wire, shut away from the noises of the world, that stop never did seem to arrive.


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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [10])
« Reply #71 on: March 04, 2008, 01:22:54 AM »
Awwwwwww...:)

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [10])
« Reply #72 on: March 04, 2008, 06:14:35 AM »
awww Reina admiring Ai chan is so cute!  :wub:  I love all the imagery~ I also like how Reina's mind works...the world fading away leaving just her and Ai chan~  super sweet~ :wub:

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [10])
« Reply #73 on: March 10, 2008, 10:26:59 AM »
The number of replies make me sad  :cry: lol, kidding. Better than nothing, no?

Anyway, been having blocks recently so I am here to ask for help.
Right now, I'd be willing to write any pairings in any situation, so suggest away.

Currently working on an IshiYoshi one though. Would prefer not to have to do the same pairing more than once until it's actually done.  :)

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [10])
« Reply #74 on: March 10, 2008, 11:53:21 AM »
Maki/Reina or Maki/Nacchi or Maki/Shiba or Maki/Miki... I'd be really really stoked with either the first or the last though :D
I love your one shots especially TakaGaki moments :heart:

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [10])
« Reply #75 on: March 31, 2008, 02:04:16 PM »
OMG I LOVED THE ISHIYOSHI! MADE Me NEARLY CRY! (scratch the nearly ;) But sadly I have no time to comment on the other new one as my mom is currently dragging the computer chair away from the desk XD Sorry, I will read it asap though, and comment on that one too, but for now the ishiyoshi is so cuuuuute, and I love Yoshi more now! Im probably gonna have dreams about this, buut maybe me instead of one of those :) jks, jks..... Hey, you should write a story about how Miki spent her Chrissy, maybe with Aya, maybe not...... Anyway, thanx for updating and GJ!
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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [10])
« Reply #76 on: April 01, 2008, 12:21:55 AM »
Maybe I'll take up writing Miki for this christmas, lol.

As for the suggested pairings before of Maki/someone =x I'll write it, eventually. You'll see :P

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [10])
« Reply #77 on: April 02, 2008, 09:12:48 AM »
Oooh, I just read the train one! It was awesome! I loved it, it was so sweet.. I like how you left like, everything to the imagination. Slight hints of Takanaka and the whole sweet contentment in merely being in each others presence which most other stories lack, and how Reina realises that she doesn't really want to be like Ai, just with Ai, and the whole starting out saying that Ai looks normal and how to Reina she is evevrything but normal.............. So sweeet :'( Bravo! Bravo!
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« Reply #78 on: May 06, 2008, 11:44:21 AM »

Aichan? Why did you…” Risa started, touching her own lips and blushing harder.

“Uhm… Your lips made me do it?” Ai replied while rolling her eyes up to look at the ceiling rather than her friend.

“My… That’s ridiculous!” The younger frowned, unsatisfied with the answer.

“I’m sorry!! I didn’t mean to... but that’s the truth. Mmmm… Yeah, I swear that’s how it is.”

“So unconvincing,” Risa rolled her eyes at the last part. “But…does that mean that you… felt nothing?”

“Felt? Well… I wasn’t sure.” Ai rubbed the back of her neck, diverting her eyes to the edge of the bed.

“What do you mean you’re not sure?! How can you-“ Risa leaned forward as she spoke, irritated and for some reason mad at this subtle insensitivity.

“Wait, wait! Let me explain. You moved away too fast before I even realized I felt anything.”

“What kind of lame excuse is that?!”

“The honest kind? Maybe if I kissed you again for a longer time, I can give you a proper answer.” Ai placed a finger to her chin in genuine thought.


yay takagaki  :cow: i loved it especially this part that sneaky little devil.... i approve  :mon thumb:
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« Reply #79 on: May 31, 2008, 04:38:24 AM »
Implied pairings, but I like Sayu more so she gets the lead here :D

The turtle to the hare.

“How’s this?”

“Mmm, pink doesn’t fit you that well.”

Her honesty made the girl before her frown in disappointment. After watching the other spin round after rounds in hopes of convincing herself into liking the dress, it just wasn’t possible. Pink wasn’t the girl’s color, or perhaps the girl just wasn’t meant for pink. Either way, Kamei Eri needed a different outfit, and Sayumi wasn’t too ready to help.

“Just wear something normal, like what you always wear during outings.”

“But that’s normal! I want to impress. Today’s important!”

“Of course it is.”  Sayumi’s voice was dipped in enough sarcasm to drown the world. She rolled her eyes and returned to her opened wardrobe in search of something fitting, and at the same time taking her own sweet time to do it. 

Eri had been invited to lunch, hence the clothes fitting that had started since an unholy hour of the morning. Normally the girl wouldn’t spend this much time on clothes, but naturally, it made sense. After all, she was invited by none other than the other half of GAKIKAME, the <i>‘Gaki’</i>. Sayumi scoffed at the thought.

“Have you caught a cold, Sayu?”

“What? Oh, no. It was just dusty in here.”

She should’ve scoffed with more discreet. Whatever. Sayumi always knew there was something between those two. The closeness irked her no less. Risa has her Ai-chan, Sayumi thought. So why take Eri away from her? Of course, there was always Reina to pester if she needed friendship, but that wasn’t the case. Eri was the turtle to the bunny (Hares weren’t as cute), and brats wouldn’t treat a poor gullible turtle well! Sayumi felt sorry for her best friend, believing that Risa would break her heart someday. But really, it was just jealousy eating into her. Or is it? Images of Risa and Ai started popping into her head.

“Sayu, have you found anything yet? Were you even doing anything?!”

Eri had been towering over Sayumi for some time, watching the girl below stare into the darkness of her closet while resting her arms on a pile of t-shirts. Having enough of waiting, she proceeded to interrupt the younger girl.

“I was looking for your outfit, what does it look like I’m doing?”

“Uhm, falling asleep on your clothes?”

“Argh! You’re so picky! Here!”

Pretending to be irritated, Sayumi picked something out of random and flung it at her friend. She had hoped it was something ugly that would waste more of Eri's time, but man, was she horribly wrong. It was a white one piece with floral patterned embroidery by its’ hem.

“Sayu! This is great! Thank you!”

Eri caught the dress and had already started holding the one piece up to her chest while spinning around before the full-sized mirror, waving the outfit about as if she was dancing with it. The jealous girl had to admit, even if she just held it before her, the dress did suit the other quite well. It was suitable for the weather and made her best friend look completely innocent, beautiful even.

‘Well, shit’, she thought in the end of it all. So much for wanting to delay Eri’s ‘date’.

“Why didn't you show me this early?” Eri spun around and looked at Sayumi with mock anger. A shrug of the shoulder was all that the narcissistic idol could do. She never knew the dress existed in the first place, and she’s beginning to hate its existent now.

“Guess I for-…” Everything prompted to shut down immediately when Eri started to strip herself of the undesired pink dress in front of her best friend. As shy as the girl was, changing in front of her friends was an exception. What was there to hide anyway? Sayumi on the other hand was seated on the carpeted floor watching with her mouth hanging open.

She wanted to go up to Eri and touch her, hold her, and keep her from leaving the room. She wanted to push her down against something, anything, and ravage her. And when they would next open their eyes, Sayumi hoped that Eri would’ve come to her senses and cancels that date she had which was already over by then anyway. And finally, Sayumi wished she could do these.

But she was Michishige Sayumi. She wasn’t weak, or blatantly desperate. She was cunning, smart, pure evil behind the shamelessly cute mask. She can’t possibly admit that she wants to beg for her best friend to be hers alone. No, of course not! In fact, she wanted Eri to come to her instead, willingly too.

When she next blinked, Eri was already dressed.

“Hey, how is this? I think it’s lovely.”

The girl was delighted as she observed her entire self through the mirror. Blushing at how pretty she felt in the dress as well as at the body contact she felt suddenly. Sayumi had appeared from behind without a word and had her arms wrapped around her best friend. One arm snaking down from Eri’s shoulders and the other came from under the arms and around the other’s waist. Full of pretense, Sayumi touched the strap of the one piece delicately and hummed with empty thoughts. Her other hand started to fiddle at the small folds around the waistline.

“It looks good, feels comfy too!” <i>Ah, you feel nice...</i>

“I’m sure Gaki-san would like it.” <i>I hope she doesn’t.</i>

“Yup. It’s lovely.”

Sayumi stopped with her light frisking and backed away, reluctantly letting go of her best fiend. Behind her cuteness, and behind the shrewdness, was a new part of her that truly wishes for Eri’s happiness, and nothing satisfies her more than that. Knowing Eri, the girl would smile the brightest if she were punctual for her date.

“You’ll be late if you keep ogling at yourself in the mirror, you know that?”

“I’m not ogling at myself!”

“Whatever. Now get going before Gaki-san thinks you stood her up.”

“She wouldn’t do that!”

Sayumi gave a face and shrugged, forcing a laugh when she saw Eri stumble over the clothes strewn over the floor in an attempt to rush to the door. The poor girl fell for the threat.

“Guess it’s time to say bye…” The younger idol mumbled, when a thought hit her. “Oh, wait! Eririn!”

Grabbing something from the closet, Sayumi rushed after the girl and managed to catch her in time.

”It’ll be cold if you’re going to stay out for too long. Here, wear this.”

“Ooh, you’re so thoughtful. Thanks!”

Helping Eri put in the denim jacket, Sayumi finally waved goodbye to her friend and locked the door behind her after entering her house again. The jacket was a good idea, she mused to herself. She wouldn’t want Risa to stare at Eri’s bare arms like what she herself did earlier after all. It’ll be her loss to benefit her sub-leader. Smiling with a moment’s worth of satisfaction, Sayumi returned back to her room to clean the mess that she did not make.
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