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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [11])
« Reply #80 on: May 31, 2008, 06:23:00 AM »
Awww, cute! Sayu is such a good friend. She wants Eririn to be happy, rather than make herself happy. And her being jealous of Gaki is hella funny. The cunning and pure evil thing is awesome!!! :wahaha: :rockon:

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [11])
« Reply #81 on: May 31, 2008, 07:48:37 AM »
Lol, what a cute one-shot... I love evil Sayu, the way I was reading (as in the 'tone') her thoughts cracked me up so much :rofl:
It never fails to amuse me how oblivious Eri is either XD I hope Gaki only invited her as a friend and not as a proper date... Must think of Ai (and Sayu) after all ;)

Oh btw, you still owe me a Maki fic :P
« Last Edit: May 31, 2008, 07:58:23 AM by lollipopgirl »

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [11])
« Reply #82 on: May 31, 2008, 09:17:02 AM »
Oh yes..that one was a little hard to do XD But it'll come when it comes. I'm a little slow (make that extremely) with updating nowadays.

Maybe there'll be an Ai-version to this date thing too...  :lol:

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [11])
« Reply #83 on: May 31, 2008, 09:57:50 AM »
evil bunny =  :wub:

I like how sayu wins a little in the end but still..poor Sayu...I bet Ai chan was feeling the same way!  Ai chan and Sayu should go out with each other right now!  The best way to battle jealousy is with more jealousy after all =D

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [11])
« Reply #84 on: June 01, 2008, 06:49:51 AM »
Aww jealous Sayu  :D Its cute seeing Eri so flustered over a date with the Gaki :wub:
However *crosses fingers for takagaki*  XD Its pretty obvious what my pairing preferences are :P

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [11])
« Reply #85 on: June 03, 2008, 10:08:12 PM »
Ehhh how many of the awesomeness have I missed? *asks dumbly* Damnit!! A lot!! On the bright side, I get a bigger portion to read at one go?? Lol.

Well, well, Sayu has been raising up my ranks recently so this is a nice fic to read. It's incredibly funny too. I think you've improved. Not that you're weren't good before. But now, WOAH. I think I need to print this out and admire when the computer is off XD

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [11])
« Reply #86 on: June 04, 2008, 02:24:08 AM »
awww sayu


... ai pov!!! :drool: that would be awesome!!!
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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [12])
« Reply #87 on: June 05, 2008, 05:16:54 PM »
Well, no Ai-POV, no Maki/someone this time.. but I hope this 3 in 1 makes up for it  :lol:
Ai-pov for GakiKame's date will come soon enough, and I'm hoping to include Maki/someone in a series fic instead :D

So, anyway... 3 random short shorts :) Prompts are such block breakers :P

1. Beginnings.

“Could we start from the beginning?”

The coach’s displeased clapping startled her and broke her concentration. Suddenly losing her balance, she tripped over her own feet and was expecting to meet the tiled floor face first. But! Well… her face did meet something, but it wasn’t hard. It was actually quite soft! She realized that she had fallen against another body with arms gripping onto her own.

“Is Niigaki alright?” The coach called from the front of the room after witnessing the unfortunate fall.

“I think she sprained her ankle!”

“But Ai-chan, I didn’t…” Risa whispered to her friend, but was interrupted by the coach again.

“Why don’t you help her to the side first. Everyone else, from the beginning!”

“Ai-chan?” Risa called out of curiosity as Ai held her perfectly fine body close to her. “But I’m alright!”

“Ahh... Well, I didn’t feel like slacking alone.” Her best friend grinned and continued walking as snail pace.

2. Ends.

“Let’s put an end to this.” Ai spoke, cold and determined.

“You can’t do that!” Risa jerked up, anxiety in her eyes.

No, it would not just end like this. It couldn’t. Her thoughts were broken to pieces when the slamming of the table brought her back to earth.

”Ai-chan… No fair…”

“I’m sorry.”

“You’re so heartless…”

“All is fair in love and war, my dear.”

“Damn you…” Risa grumbled and toss her hand of poker cards on the table before storming away. It was already their 20th round but Ai was still relentless to letting her girlfriend win a bloody card game, not even once.

3. Not Enough.

The weather had gone chilly in the past few days, and a lot worse during the nights. And as if the cold wasn’t tough enough to battle, the girls had long nights ahead of them full of struggles and domination.

“Ai-chan! I’m trying to sleep here!”

“I know~ but I’m cold.”  Ai tugged at the blanket towards her again, rolling Risa out from under the covers to wrap herself up like a sushi roll.

“Yeah, as if I’m not.” Risa pulled violently at the edges of the blanket, flipping Ai over.

“Don’t hog the blanket! There isn’t enough for me.”

“There isn’t enough for any of us.” Risa spoke matter-of-factly.

“Gaki-chan~” Ai whined, but her best friend only kept quiet, snoring quietly.  “Fine, have it your way.”

After 5 minutes of silence and what she hoped to be peace that would last for the next 10 hours or so, Risa sadly felt movement from behind her. She held on to the edge of her blanket tightly just incase another tug-o-war were to happen again. As expected, she felt the other end of the blanket to be lifted up and she tensed only to relax again when she felt arms wrapped around her stomach, one leg thrown over her own and heat brushing against the crook of her neck from behind.

Smiling like an idiot, she closed her eyes again. The two girls were both feeling warm and fuzzy right now, which was more than enough.
 

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [12])
« Reply #88 on: June 05, 2008, 05:58:21 PM »
Oh..i like the last one..not enough!!  :lol:  XD

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [12])
« Reply #89 on: June 05, 2008, 06:28:19 PM »
Awww, so much cute TakaGakiness... Glad you got your brain switched back to that mode (from GakiKame), we always need more of them and I know you agree ;) :heart:

Glad you haven't forgot about my Maki fic, and I'll stop bugging you about it seeing you have plans :P

Back to these ones, I can imagine Ai being pretty much to oblivious to how she should let her gf win a game, as well as being too competitive, but Gaki will forgive her each time!
The 3rd one was the cutest, felt like "the night after THAT poker stad off" :lol:

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [12])
« Reply #90 on: June 05, 2008, 11:23:55 PM »
Those were three great short shorts :wub: *sings* who likes short shorts? We like short shorts!

I think I liked the last one the best too.

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [12])
« Reply #91 on: June 06, 2008, 01:26:51 AM »
OMG!!!! Takagaki!!! So cuteeee! Love it!!!! I think I've gone crazy!!!! :shocked:
The last one is the cutest but the second really got me!  XD

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [12])
« Reply #92 on: June 06, 2008, 02:49:02 AM »
second one was my favorite i laughed so hard... but the third  :wub:
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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [12])
« Reply #93 on: June 06, 2008, 03:46:21 AM »
so cute  :wub:  I like how Ai chan knows how to win in all 3 stories~  warm and fuzzy  :shy1:

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [12])
« Reply #94 on: June 06, 2008, 09:47:30 AM »
Thank you all for liking it  XD
I didn't realize that Aichan was winning in all three fics until Sukoshi mentioned it though XD That's cool.

I'd initially wanted to do a 50 takagaki short shot, but... knowing me, that'll probably take 50 years :P Still, I'll try to do more short shots and update in bulk! Then maybe I can rename this to "When Takagaki attacks" lol...

Well, off to do Ai's POV~

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [12])
« Reply #95 on: June 09, 2008, 03:58:12 AM »
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I'd say that Risa's doing quite well in the 3rd one as well.  8)


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“Ai-chan?” Risa called out of curiosity as Ai held her perfectly fine body close to her. “But I’m alright!”

“Ahh... Well, I didn’t feel like slacking alone.” Her best friend grinned and continued walking as snail pace.
Risa = :dunno:
Aichan = :mon misch:
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“You’re so heartless…”

“All is fair in love and war, my dear.”

“Damn you…” Risa grumbled and toss her hand of poker cards on the table before storming away. It was already their 20th round but Ai was still relentless to letting her girlfriend win a bloody card game, not even once.
Well, now that they've gotten the "war" part out of the way...time for... ;D



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After 5 minutes of silence and what she hoped to be peace that would last for the next 10 hours or so, Risa sadly felt movement from behind her. She held on to the edge of her blanket tightly just incase another tug-o-war were to happen again. As expected, she felt the other end of the blanket to be lifted up and she tensed only to relax again when she felt arms wrapped around her stomach, one leg thrown over her own and heat brushing against the crook of her neck from behind.

Smiling like an idiot, she closed her eyes again. The two girls were both feeling warm and fuzzy right now, which was more than enough.
Hey, everyone knows that body heat is a perfectly natural way to combat the cold.  O0

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Re: When Insomnia Attacks (One shot collection [12])
« Reply #96 on: June 13, 2008, 10:04:54 AM »
Beginnings
I liked this one the best. For some reason I can picture that really happening and it's quite funny with Ai-chan crushing Gaki during PE XD

Ends
At first I thought Ai was going to break up with Risa. Then I went "ooohhhhhhhhhh" Lol. Great one there letting readers think otherwise.

Not Enough
When they fight over the blanket like that they are like an old couple :lol: So very Cute :wub:

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