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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #100 on: April 22, 2008, 01:15:24 PM »
Awwww so sad! And sad! And did I mention sad? Hello there writer, short time reader first time commenter sweeety here with an update of the story so far.
     The greater zawa, Kaori, Nacchi, the Gootch, Kemeko, twotop and Konkon have are betting on who the Pimp will choose out of the
Charmer-Makoto
Princess-Rika
Heartbreaker -Goto
Player-Miki
 But all is not as it seems because only Goto knows that Yoshi is the target or that there even is a bet going on. Nakazawa cheated and told her, knowing that if she did she would go for it and start trying to get to Yoshi, this would make the rest jealous and like Dominos they will fall for Yochan and try to win her. But mucho twisties! Miki actually likes Rika currently, Aya (Pimps ex) is in love with Maki but its 100% Kataomoi as she hasn't even given her a second look. Makoto seems to be genuinely infatuated with Yoshi but it appears that she might not really be that into her. And last but not least, Rika, who has already rejected the Pimp once in the past but seems to have regreted that choice ever since. She appears to like Yoshi but I can't help but think that this is only jealousy and her just feeling like she owns Yoshi as she has profesed her love to her. She kind of feels like she owes her something, she doesn't really love her. Mako is the new face, and seems to be new at the dating game. She has a clean record which is good and I like that she seems to be the only innocent one out of all of the challengers. Maki has broken Nacchi in the past and I don't think deserves Yoshi or the one she has had a small infatuation for, Reina. She will probably live with her guilt and maybe Yuko or something as I am pretty sure they have slept together. Reina is madly in love with Nacchi, but alas she was turned away when revealing her true feelings for her. But I think they will end up together as Nacchi is now realising that she likes her too. If only she wasn't so broken and afraid to love again because of maki, then she wouldn't be afraid of letting Reina in her heart.
On to Miki. She has the hots for Rika, and I have a feeling... no I know for a fact that she wont let Yoshi get her. At least not before she does, if she just wants that. ANyway, she is gonna try and get in Rikas bed, and hopefully she will want to stay there, not just a one time thing..
Makoto is the youngest of the challengers and has helped Yoshi get over her most recent relationship failure. Quite frankly she seems to be the nicest and most innocent of all the challengers that vie for Hitomis heart.
Last but not least Rika. Rika had the hots for Hitomi for a long time, but it doesn't seem to be much more than a crush. Using Keis example, she is not her mango. But she does however want her now all of a sudden. She is very enigmatic in this fic, never really showing what it is she actually wants. I remember in the start reading something about her wanting Yoshi but not as much or in the same way as she wanted her. Now, if this is still valid for her, then she just wants her out of jealousy or so Maki doesn't get her because she thinks that Maki is going to hurt her on not good enough of whatever else helps her sleep at night.

 Long story short the only one that really wants Yoshi is Makoto, the other want her for their own personal reasons but not because they really love her. Unless I am wrong she should end up with Makoto. I like the Maki/Reina/Nacchi love triangle, and the other stuff I didn't mention and others. I like how there is TakaGaki and all the other stuff too, and I hope you keep it up. Its a really great story and I hope I got it right.
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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #101 on: May 31, 2008, 07:48:28 PM »
sorry to bump such an old thread/fic, but i really miss this and wanna know how it ends :? :(  :heart: maybe the author forgot about it, just to remind them that it's still unfinished :mon trudge:
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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #102 on: June 01, 2008, 07:50:53 AM »
sorry to bump such an old thread/fic, but i really miss this and wanna know how it ends :? :(  :heart: maybe the author forgot about it, just to remind them that it's still unfinished :mon trudge:

Ditto


Took me my whole morning to read the whole story that you’ve posted and it was a great read. Very nice story

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #103 on: June 02, 2008, 11:30:59 AM »
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah, what did happen? I wanna know toooo~! I have to know!~

 Pleeeeeeeeeeeease write more? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!
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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #104 on: June 12, 2008, 02:49:22 PM »
*bump*

i need to read this to the end... ... please let there be an ending... don't leave us hanging like this...

please?

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 13 Sleep)
« Reply #105 on: June 14, 2008, 09:25:37 AM »
I should go to school but instead of that I started to read this chapter and I couldn't stop  XD so now I'm late for school but you know what? It was so worth it... :farofflook: It was damn sad but I just love MakixNacchi  :wub:

I'm sorry ^^; hope you didn't get in trouble. Good thing it was short, nee?


Them??? :?
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeep.... them

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Damn, Maki must have REALLY done something huge. :dunno:
Funny that you mention that :sweatdrop:

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OI! WATDAFUCK!?!?! :shock:
Totally

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What's Maki thinking? Trying to make herself look like a victim against "Nacchi's rage"? She's totally sidestepping what you did to Nacchi! That's totally manipulative!  :angry: 
Ain't she good at it thought <3

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Right now, Maki =  :thumbdown:
*joins in thumbs down*

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it's Maki's fault that Nacchi's like this, what with her lying to her so much and all. 
This really drained Nacchi. Hell, It drained me and i know it's fictional!

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Because despite what she said earlier (in her dream), she really WAS having guilty feelings about what she did to Nacchi. She did wrong, and now she's suffering emotionally (and rightfully so, if you ask me) for it.
Bingo!

I gotta tell you i spent all night reading this fic.... I find it soooooooooooooo interesting. The last chapter was Great! Keep up the good work!
thank you :D, hope you keep reading in the future. Hope you didn't disturb your sleeping pattern to much.

great chapter!

MakixNacchi break was so... sad  :pleeease: bad maki poor nacchi i could say XD

Reina  :roll:

waiting next chapter!
I just had to add Reina in there some how.  :lol:

Awwww so sad! And sad! And did I mention sad? Hello there writer, short time reader first time commenter sweeety here with an update of the story so far.
     The greater zawa, Kaori, Nacchi, the Gootch, Kemeko, twotop and Konkon have are betting on who the Pimp will choose out of the
Charmer-Makoto
Princess-Rika
Heartbreaker -Goto
Player-Miki
 But all is not as it seems because only Goto knows that Yoshi is the target or that there even is a bet going on. Nakazawa cheated and told her, knowing that if she did she would go for it and start trying to get to Yoshi, this would make the rest jealous and like Dominos they will fall for Yochan and try to win her. But mucho twisties! Miki actually likes Rika currently, Aya (Pimps ex) is in love with Maki but its 100% Kataomoi as she hasn't even given her a second look. Makoto seems to be genuinely infatuated with Yoshi but it appears that she might not really be that into her. And last but not least, Rika, who has already rejected the Pimp once in the past but seems to have regreted that choice ever since. She appears to like Yoshi but I can't help but think that this is only jealousy and her just feeling like she owns Yoshi as she has profesed her love to her. She kind of feels like she owes her something, she doesn't really love her. Mako is the new face, and seems to be new at the dating game. She has a clean record which is good and I like that she seems to be the only innocent one out of all of the challengers. Maki has broken Nacchi in the past and I don't think deserves Yoshi or the one she has had a small infatuation for, Reina. She will probably live with her guilt and maybe Yuko or something as I am pretty sure they have slept together. Reina is madly in love with Nacchi, but alas she was turned away when revealing her true feelings for her. But I think they will end up together as Nacchi is now realising that she likes her too. If only she wasn't so broken and afraid to love again because of maki, then she wouldn't be afraid of letting Reina in her heart.
On to Miki. She has the hots for Rika, and I have a feeling... no I know for a fact that she wont let Yoshi get her. At least not before she does, if she just wants that. ANyway, she is gonna try and get in Rikas bed, and hopefully she will want to stay there, not just a one time thing..
Makoto is the youngest of the challengers and has helped Yoshi get over her most recent relationship failure. Quite frankly she seems to be the nicest and most innocent of all the challengers that vie for Hitomis heart.
Last but not least Rika. Rika had the hots for Hitomi for a long time, but it doesn't seem to be much more than a crush. Using Keis example, she is not her mango. But she does however want her now all of a sudden. She is very enigmatic in this fic, never really showing what it is she actually wants. I remember in the start reading something about her wanting Yoshi but not as much or in the same way as she wanted her. Now, if this is still valid for her, then she just wants her out of jealousy or so Maki doesn't get her because she thinks that Maki is going to hurt her on not good enough of whatever else helps her sleep at night.

 Long story short the only one that really wants Yoshi is Makoto, the other want her for their own personal reasons but not because they really love her. Unless I am wrong she should end up with Makoto. I like the Maki/Reina/Nacchi love triangle, and the other stuff I didn't mention and others. I like how there is TakaGaki and all the other stuff too, and I hope you keep it up. Its a really great story and I hope I got it right.

DAAAAYYYUMMMMM... have I ever told you how much I LOVE your posts here in the fic threads. Not just on my stories... but in others too. They always make me LMAO!!! and your predictions are always sooo interesting. Gotta give it up to you man *claps* that's one hell of a comments there. I guess you like the story? ^^;

I just have a question... and this goes for everyone.... why do alot of you think that Maki slept/is sleeping with Yuko?
Every time i read that i giggle a little inside XD. Soon, you all will see why  :rofl: very soon.



sorry to bump such an old thread/fic, but i really miss this and wanna know how it ends :? :(  :heart: maybe the author forgot about it, just to remind them that it's still unfinished :mon trudge:

HAH! reminder noted

Ditto
Took me my whole morning to read the whole story that you’ve posted and it was a great read. Very nice story
YAY ^_^ glad you think it's a nice story! and again the reminder was noted

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah, what did happen? I wanna know toooo~! I have to know!~

 Pleeeeeeeeeeeease write more? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!
I'm going I'm going  ^^;... believe me I'm trying my best right now to finish the stories.

*bump*

i need to read this to the end... ... please let there be an ending... don't leave us hanging like this...

please?

I, as the author of this story, PROMISE that I WILL finish this story. Speed of updates i can't promise all i do that all the time, but I WILL finish this.

Alright... now that I'm done answering back... i guess i should post the update  :oops:
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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #106 on: June 14, 2008, 09:41:06 AM »
A/N: I'm beyond all humanly reason sorry for having taken so long to write this. I really really am. Things got a bit tight around here and didn't have enough time and much less inspiration to write and we all know that if a writer isn't hit by insperation their stories don't inspire much of anything into a reader. Anyways here is CHAPTER 14. I might feel a bit filler-ish... but it's not. ^_^. I'd like to give a BIG thanx to my beta on this one.  Okay... i'm sure you are tired of reading my apologies so here we go:
 

“Observing”

"To linger in the observation of things other than the self implies a profound conviction of their worth."
-Charles-Damian Boulogne, My Friends the Senses   




“Goto-san did that?” Ayaka exclaimed into the speaker of her mobile phone.

“Yup” Yossy confirmed. “Hold on, I have line”

“It’s probably Mai” the coconut guessed confidently.

“Sugoi Ayaka! How did you know?!?”

“I just did, pick up the line before she’s sent to voicemail.” Yossy quickly did as told and switched lines.

“Moshi Moshi, Maicchin?”

“Hai! Moshi Moshi”

“Hold on, okay? I have Ayaka on the other line. I’ll click you in”

“Aa O.K. O.K” Yossy quickly performed the necessary combination on her phone and soon all three best friends were talking.

“Alright, so Goto-san kissed you on the cheek in front of everyone after flirting with you nonstop and grabbing your thigh?” Maicchin recapped.

“Ho-How did you know?” Yossy’s eyes widened.

“Me and Ayaka are connected” Mai explained.

“Connected? Do you mean… telepathically?” Yossy asked in a low tone. Both Ayaka and Mai couldn’t hold it in any longer. They busted out laughing.

“Yocchan” Ayaka tried to settle down enough to talk. “You are too easy sometimes.” Yossy was thankful they were on the phone and couldn’t see her embarrassment.

“For real!” Mai approved “She texted me all about it a few minutes ago. She said to call you”

“Alright, alright” Yossy was slightly annoyed. “Back to the topic”

“Right” Mai agreed.

“So what are you going to do about this? About Goto?” Ayaka asked.

“I’m not sure. Nothing, I suppose. You all know how Gocchin is, both of you have fallen prey to her before” this time it was Mai’s and Ayaka’s turn to slightly feel ashamed.

“Ehem” Mai cleared her throat. “I guess it’s just a matter of wait-&-see”

“Hnmm”

“I agree with Maicchin” Ayaka spoke up “On another note, how did Ogawa-chan take you leaving with Goto?”

“Mako-chan?”

“Un~, Hai”

Yossy sighed “I don’t think she was too happy. She seemed a bit upset”

“Actually, she was really upset” Mai declared.

“Waddayah mean?” a guilty conscience started to wake up.

“Well, two days ago when I was walking towards the elevator, ready to go home, I saw Takahashi-chan and Niigaki-chan going in it. I was about to tell them to hold it for me but I heard Takahashi-chan ask someone if they had been crying. Once I reached the elevator, the doors were already closing but…” Maicchin paused.

“But what?” Yossy urged on.

“I caught a glimpse of Ogawa-chan crying, Reina-chan was there too”

“When was the whole thing with Maki again?” Ayaka questioned.

“Two days ago” Yossy told her once more.

“Hmm interesting?”

“What’s interesting?”

“Didn’t you say that Takahashi-chan and Reina-chan randomly joined you guys?”

“Yes, what are you getting to, Ayaka?”

“Do you think they were sent in to ruin your date with Goto?” Ayaka pondered.

“For the 100th time! It was NOT, I repeat NOT a date! And NO I don’t think Makoto would send them”

“Send them to do what?” Maicchin asked.

“To sabotage my date” Yossy answered. The sound of Ayaka and Mai laughing uncontrollably made Yossy realize what she just said. “UGH!” She sighed infuriatingly.

“I thought it wasn’t a date~?” Mai picked on her boyish best friend.

“I’m guessing tomorrow will be odd” Ayaka sighed.

“Why?” Mai didn’t understand what she meant by that.

“You guys have practice tomorrow afternoon; you’ll be there with Goto and Mako practicing. Not to mention that most of haro!puro will be there to cheer you guys on.” You could hear the rustling of Ayaka’s sheets as she sat up in her bed. 

“True” Yossy said softly.

“Demo~ Daijoubu!” Mai stated. “I’m going to be there.”

“Don’t know if that’s a good thing or a bad thing, Maicchin” the would-be-captian of Gatas kidded.

“Mou~ Hidoi!”

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Dark, thick sunglasses shaded her pupils from the bothersome lights that lit up the stadium as clear as day, while her facemask made the sweat stench filled air breathable. The frequent throbbing on her upper left tempo, consequently, glued her index and middle finger to the spot, applying pressure for relief. Yet, no matter what amount of pressure she put on, her ears could not block out the excruciatingly constant chattering of the crowd around her or the screaming of the coaches “Kei, remind me why I was forced to be here” her voice was slightly muffled.

“Tsunku said you had to report today’s events back to him” Kei was leaning forward on the bleachers, hands on lap. Her eyes were studious, examining all the participating girls that ran laps around the field. She knew very well the sober Yuko wouldn’t do her job, hell she knew the buzzed Yuko wouldn’t do her job.

“I need a drink” the older woman pushed her self up to a stand. The overwhelming surroundings were making her annoyance levels go dangerously high. As she lifted one foot over Kei, she felt a something pull on her pants. She glanced down and to no surprise she spotted Kei’s hand gripping the hem of her jeans. She looked over at her companion who only shook her head from side to side.

“Sit” Kei ordered, glancing back at the still warm spot on her side.

“You’re kidding me, right?” Annoyance levels rising even more. “Who are you to make me sit? You are not my mother and certainly not my boss” due to the sunglasses and facemask, the tone of voice was the only indication of how close to death the second gen. member was.

Yasuda looked up at her and gave a smirk “Hai~ Mama, demo I am the person who is doing your job, nee” her voice had changed to this ill executed tone of cute. She puffed her cheeks and pouted along with it. “So, unless you want to give Tsunku-san a big pile of nothing and put your job at risk, I suggest you sit down, nee” she gave two awkward, yet humorously amusing, peaces signs to Yuko. It only took one quick imitation of Kemeko Deshu to make the leader of H!P realize just how serious Yasuda was. She ripped off her sunglasses and intensely looked down at her second in command. Slowly, she took a step back and sat down on her original seat, never breaking the menacing eye contact.

“I won’t forget this” she growled, putting her sunglasses back on.

“Yes, you will” Kei opened her purse and tossed a large metallic container over to Nakazawa’s lap. “Make sure none of the kids see you” all the blonde could do was stare down at her lap in astonishment. Tears of joy build up and an uncharacteristic quiet squeal emerged from her. She delicately picked up the can and stared at it in awe, as if a celestial light shine upon it. For a split moment, she could’ve sworn she heard angels, off in the distance, singing and playing their harps harmoniously. She then quickly opened the top and took a strong whiff at its contents.

“Aaaa, just what Mama likes” she looked over at Kei, who in return was just ignoring her. Abruptly, she wrapped two tight arms around her and gave a quick wet kiss on the cheek. “You know how to keep me happy” She giggled and let go of Yasuda. Redirecting her attention back to the liquid substance of her delight “Straight up vodka” she said sweetly to the container, then monstrously took a swig from it, utter desperation could be heard in every gulp she took. A satisfying sigh was the result of her short chugging session.  

After a few minutes and a couple of chugging sessions later Yuko was as genki as ever. In fact, she had single handedly entertain the crowed and motivated the running girls. Her nonstop yelling at the girls as they jogged by, probably led to their steadfast determination  to finish running quicker and the crowd of H!P members was most likely now tired of doing the wave every other ten minutes. “Se~~~NO~~~” Yuko hollered at the crowd. “WOOOOO” she stood and sat back down. As Yuko tried her best to keep busy, Kei was determined to not only keep an eye on the girls but particularly their wager investments. The only interesting thing that had happened on the field so far was an unnatural horsing around between Fujimoto and Ishikawa, Goto and Matsuura competing with one another, Mako, Konkon, Tsuji joking around while Yossy never left Mai’s side. ‘hmmmmm’ her brain processed the information carefully. The scenario was telling her something important; it was up to her to make the proper interpretation. 

“Hey, Yuu-chan” she leaned over. “I think I have new prospective betters” she whispered. As Nakazawa began to process the information, three slouched figures rapidly approached them.

“Kei-Chan~, Yuu-chan~” the shortest of the three figures jumped on the unsuspecting women.

“YAAAGUUUCCHI!” Kei quickly turned, pouting comically from her seat.

“What took you so long?” Nakazawa bellowed at the three arriving girls.
   
“Nacchi kept forgetting things in her house” Yaguchi rolled her eyes. Kaori scooted over Yuko and sat at the end of the bleachers.

“And I got to the point where I just simply refused to move from her door until she was sure she hadn’t forgotten anything” the tallest of the girls stated.

“Aww, come on guys. Stop picking on me” the baby faced one plopped down next to Kei and rested her head on her shoulder.

“Now, now Nacchi” Yaguchi took her place between Kei and Yuko “No need to get so upset. We all don’t need phone calls from your mother” Abe shot her a dirty look. 

“ha ha ha funny” the buzzed ex-Momusu leader said dryly. “Now cut the crap and shut up, Kei was just about to tell me something important” the freshly sat girls looked over at Kei expecting some kind of recap.

“Well…”she started “I was just about tell Yuko I have two new prospecting betters in mind” she cleared her throat. “I’ve been observing the girls on the field for a while”

“Eeewww Kei-chan! Hentai” The Gooch joked but was quickly reprimanded by Yuko’s smack on her head.

“I said cut crap, now listen” Yaguchi pouted and rubbed her head.

“Right, so… while observing, I’ve noticed hardly any interaction between the girls. I tried understanding why. It’s not doubt that if we set strategies and such, we’ll see them interact but we need them to interact on their own. I realized that the girls were probably not going up to Yossy at all because of Mai. Which made me realize, we need Mai and Ayaka to stay away from Yossy… that would give openings for our bets to come in and do their thing.” They were now in a tight circle listening intently.

“But Kei-chan” Kaori interjected “Ayaka, Mai and Yossy are really close friends. I doubt they’ll ever leave each others side for extended periods of time” Everyone else nodded in the group, except for Kei and Yuko. You see, Kei and Yuko have always had an interesting bond. One they noticed very early in their relationship. They had the ability to know exactly what the other had in mind just by looking at each other. Hence, Yuko already knew where Kei was taking this.

“Exactly” Yasuda pointed at Kaori “You can’t beat them… but if you can’t beat them… then join them… and if you can’t join them… then have them join you” she smiled confidently.

“What… do you mean?” Abe was perplexed.

“Ayaka and Mai are my perspective betters. I want them to join us, not only would we have the “opening” issue resolved, but we’ll have an intimate look at Yossy’s feelings through this all.” She leaned back against the cold metal of the bleachers and extended both hands behind Yaguchi and Abe, sitting proudly. Nakazawa started a slow clap.

“Kei-chan…. SUGOOII~” Abe complimented, the shortest and the tallest ones joined in on Yuko’s clap. Suddenly, Yaguchi stopped.

“…you know I’ve been thinking about this too” Every one now looked over at her “it’s nothing much. But here I go” the cute shorty stood up as straight as possible. “Having been Yossy’s Mentor, I do know a thing or two about the girl” They all agreed with a nod “Everyone here has great traits that anyone would be lucky enough to find in a partner, but they also have qualities that can make them loose” Yaguchi pointed out. “Rika tends to be over sensitive, Miki vicious,” Nakazawa frowned. “Goto cold,” Nacchi frowned “and Ogawa clingy. When you really think about it,” Yaguchi giggled “it comes down to choosing the lesser evil” The others smiled at it but became concerned with the points Yaguchi had made. It really does come down to the lesser evil.

Having nothing else to say about the matter, they quickly drew their attention back to the field, where training continued. Spectators could see the girls being separated into five groups. There was one group who stood out from the others though; it was the group with gloves.

“What are they doing?” Nakazawa questioned.

“I think they’re being separated into five groups, each group is going to be training for different positions. The group with gloves is going to give it a go at the “goalie” position” Yaguchi piped up.

“How do you know?” Nacchi stared at her in alarm.

“The pamphlet says so” She lifted a yellow sheet of paper up.

“They were giving out pamphlets?” Kaori looked dumb struck.

“Yup” Yasuda confirmed. Out of the blue, a familiar voice filled the air.

“Kei-chan, Yaguchi, Nakazawa-san, Koari, Nacchi~” Ayaka walked over.

“Crap, who invited her” Yuko breathed.

“Not me” Kei-chan said through her tight smile.

“How are we going to talk about the bet?” Yaguchi looked worried.

“Just don’t talk about it” Yuko glared.

“I’m sorry to interrupt but do you think maybe I can sit with you guys, the people I’d normally be visiting this with are… well… out in the field” she smiled sheepishly.

“Of course you can” Kei nodded approvingly.

“Here, you can sit next to me” Abe patted the side that was available next to her. As Ayaka shuffled to the spot indicated, Kei looked  back at everyone and gave them a wink

‘Trust me’ She whispered.

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“Tanoshii nee~” Sayu poked her cheek cutely.

“Neee~” Eri imitated back. They waited a few second before shifting their gaze over to Reina, who was, at the moment, staring intently at something and clenching her jaw.  “Oi, Reina!” Eri called out, but there was no response. “REINA, it’s your turn” she all but screamed.

“What the…” Sayu blinked.

“I don’t think she can hear us” Eri lifted her hand slowly waving it in front of Reina’s face.

“Wow… no reaction” Usagi was in disbelief. “What is she looking at, anyways?” she stood up from where she sat and walked over to Reina, sitting exactly behind her she tried to figure what was fellow gen. member’s current bulls eye.

“What do you see?” Erinrin asked.

“Hmmmm I see Ayaka-san.”

“Reina is starting at Ayaka-san!?”

“Ayaka-san and… Abe-san!” Sayu exclaimed.

“ha?” Reina blinked out of her daze “Did someone mention Nacc- I mean, Abe-san?” the magic Reina-summoning word had been mention. Her fellow rokkies rolled their eyes at the fact.

“Reina, why don’t you just give it up?” Sayu shook her head. “I don’t think you’re her type” she smacked Reina on the back while swooping her head uncomfortably close with a silly grin.

“Pshaw… you don’t know what you’re talking about”

“Really? Then what were you staring at?” Sayu’s grin grew wider.

“I was just thinking” Reina nodded.

“Right, it looked more like you wanted to rip someone’s head off” Eri was unconvinced. Sayu’s eyes hen enlarged with realization.

“You’re upset at how close Yasuda-san and Ayaka-san are to Nacchi, weren’t you” she clapped while laughing at Reina. The sound of Sayu’s mocking laughter made chills of anger run up Reina’s spine and down to her clenched hands.

“I WAS NOT STARING AT HER!” Reina stood and slammed her fist on the aluminum seats. Ironically, though, everyone else in that stadium was now staring at her. Slowly turning her head towards the crowd of faces that now looked worried for her she quickly sat down and mumbled an apology. Thankfully, everyone else returned to their previous activities. Lifting her head up, assuming it was safe to look up again, her eyes automatically zeroed on to the only pair of eyes that hadn’t turned back to the court. Abe gave a quick giggle and flashed her a smile before turning her head back around. A silly little smile appeared on the Yankii’s face. She lifted her hand gently and gave a quick wave.

“Reina” Eri looked concerned “are you okay?” Eri’s cold hand came crashing on to Reina’s forehead. “Sayu, I think she might be sick”

“No, I’m not sick” Reina stated dreamily. “It’s hard to be sick when an angel smiles at you” the silly grin grew wider…

“Oh dear God” Sayu shook her head in disbelief. “Honestly, Reina, with you… there’s a fine line between corniest girl alive and H!P’s most bad ass yankee under 18 years old”

“We can give her the Most Corniest Yankee Ever title” Eri thought out loud.

“I worry about you, Reina, one day she’s gonna catch you stalking her”

“WHAT!? Reina’s been stalking Abe-san?” Eri got surprised.

“You didn’t know? For the past three days she’s been stalking her and I see any probability of her to stopping anytime soon”

“Reina” Eri placed her hand on the day dreamy’s shoulder “Reina, that’s CR-EE-PY! You should, no you need to stop”

“Sayu… Eri” Reina sighed gladly “Shut up before you become the next thing my fist wants to meet at full force, nee” she raised her arms up, placing her chin on her palms.

So close yet so far away’ she thought as she stared at the person she wanted the most.


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It had been about two hours since practice had finished, one hour since the stadium had cleared out and 30 minuets since Yoshizawa had thrown herself on the floor of the court, resting her head on a futsal ball. She looked all around her, taking her surroundings in. The cold hard floor she laid on, the slightly moist sneakers she wore, the lights that shined upon her from the ceiling. Unbeknownst to many, but today had been a life changing experience for her. Today, for the first time, she felt something she hadn’t felt in a long time. She felt inspiration. Running along 20 plus girls on a field who were all striving for a goal, made a fire grow in her and that fire that lit in her caused perspective for her life. Running and pushing her self to be better didn’t make her feel that emptiness she had been experiencing for a while, seeing how the other girls pushed themselves as well, made her feel full and with depth. Not only did she want to make sure she became better, but wanted to see how the other progressed as well. She wanted to be a part of the comradity, she wanted to experience that kind of dependency. Dependency where you have to depend on all the other and the others have to depend on you. Yossy was jolted out of her deep though by a nudge on her foot.

“Mai-chin, I told you to just leave without me. Tell Ayaka not to worry about me, too.” This was the fifth time they came to bother her. Instead of hearing a response, Yossy felt someone suddenly lay next to her. The smell of strawberries quickly identified who it was and it certainly wasn’t Ayaka or Mai. “What do you want?” she asked coldly.

A sigh escaped the other girl’s lips “Yossy, can’t we just have a normal conversation, once?” Rika placed her hands behind her head, her elbow slightly touching the taller girl’s. “All I really wanted to do was tell you “you did great today”, it’s been a while since I’ve seen that face of yours”

Yossy rolled her eyes, but the mention of a “face” caught her curiosity “What do you mean face?” she asked.

“One where you have a non-disappearing smile, and your eyes crinkle up. I don’t know, it’s just this aura that I get from you. You look so happy and carefree. It reminded me of the first time I saw it.” Rika giggled. Curiosity seemed to once again grab a hold of the blond girl.

“What time?” She slightly turned to face Rika. The sudden genuine interest from Yossy caught her off guard and the fact she was now being starred at caused her heart to slightly beat faster.

“Um…” she stuttered a bit. “When we had just joined, we went to Hawaii, remember?” the younger girl nodded. “We all got put in different teams and every time you had an event, even you were nervous as hell” they both laughed at that remark “yet, you seemed so happy once the game started.” She finally built enough courage to look over into Yoshizawa’s eyes. They locked on each others gaze for a while, it was the first time since they had that fight years ago that they could look at each other smiling rather than glaring. “Yossy, I…”

“It has never been a secret to anyone that I like sports” she quickly interrupted Rika’s sentence. “Then again, I was never much of a spectator, but when it came to playing I was all up for it.” She looked back up to the ceiling, not wanting to look at the girl that had hurt her “I’ve never been much of a talented player either, but I put the most heart in my game. One of the many reasons besides the thrill of the game that made physical activity so important to me, was its honesty. You can’t lie when you play. There is no way a physical movement can be corrupt. If you fall, you fall, if you get hit, you get hit, if you score, you scored. It’s a simple, easy to understand language, one that would never lie or betray you” she added extra spite to those last words. Rika only nodded. “All in all, Rika-chan, you did really well too” she pushed herself up and brought her knees to her chest, resting her elbows on them “I really hope you make it to the final cut” Yossy nodded.

“Me too” Rika turned on her belly and then lifted her self up. “Well, I know you want to be alone. So I’ll see you later” She waved good bye and took a quick jog to the locker room. Unwillingly by Yoshizawa, she stared at her as, she just couldn’t help but check out the girl she never had. After a while, she too stood up and looked around stadium. The stage where she sang was her job, but the field where she played on would now be her domain.

From a far place, two eyes had been studying her for the hour or so. The man had secretly been spectating the training session, but closely observing Yoshizawa Hitomi. Without saying much, he crossed his arms and turned on his heels. He reached into his pocket as he walked into the darkness of the corridor. Taking out his cell phone he dialed a number. “Ano… Iida-san?” he confirmed the voice “It’s me Tsunku… I need to talk to you, in private”




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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #107 on: June 14, 2008, 10:08:54 AM »
HEY EVERYONE!!! OUR PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED!!!!!!!

i don't have time to elaborate on this now... i'll just edit later!!!!

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #108 on: June 14, 2008, 11:35:38 AM »
New chap! :w00t:


“No, I’m not sick” Reina stated dreamily. “It’s hard to be sick when an angel smiles at you” the silly grin grew wider… 

Awww~~ :mon lovelaff: Reina is so in love in her senpai and it's so cute :wub: More ReinaxNachhi love! :inlove:


“I’ve never been much of a talented player either, but I put the most heart in my game. One of the many reasons besides the thrill of the game that made physical activity so important to me, was its honesty. You can’t lie when you play. There is no way a physical movement can be corrupt. If you fall, you fall, if you get hit, you get hit, if you score, you scored. It’s a simple, easy to understand language, one that would never lie or betray you”

As a former football player I totally agree with this and I also never regarded myself as a very talented player so I think I can identify myself with Yossy  :hee:


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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #109 on: June 14, 2008, 07:26:59 PM »
WeeeeeeHeeee~ it's back!!

whoa-ohh Makocchan's plan got found outt!!

I'm finding it very amusing that Reina's the stalker types... maybe Eri and Sayu sld try harder to knock some sense into Reina. Liking Abe-san is one thing.. stalking her is another!

by any chance.. does Tsunku know about the bet?

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #110 on: June 14, 2008, 07:31:41 PM »
I'm excited, I miss this story!
The connection Ayaka and Mai have is hella funny! It's not really telepathy but it's totally confusing Yossy!!! Kei and Yuko are pure win! But Reina's freaky stalking of Abe is weirding me out... :shocked:
I hope you keep updating this story! It needs to have a winner!!!

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #111 on: June 14, 2008, 11:38:54 PM »
wojooo it's back!!

mauajajaj yossy is so blur  :on lol: ayaka and mai just were bothering her  :kekeke:

and yuko is so hilarious, she needs to drink Yuko: Before---->  :angry1: After---->  :onioncheer:

kei hentai... ewwww  :sweat:

i want to see her plan  :wahaha:

poor reina... i cheer her up! go yankee fightoo  :mon blowhorn:

i understand yossy when she told about sports... it's all true  :mon thumb:

what will do Tsunku about Yossy?? could it be Gatas?? and she will be with miki, aya, maki, mako, rika...  :mon inluv:

i think they are all who are in the bet (ooh i wanted that it happen again in reality)  :mon cry:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #112 on: June 15, 2008, 02:10:06 AM »
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*YOSSI-MAI-AYAKA CONVO*
Man, it's scary sometimes how well those three know each other. :lol:



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“So what are you going to do about this? About Goto?” Ayaka asked.

“I’m not sure. Nothing, I suppose. You all know how Gocchin is, both of you have fallen prey to her before” this time it was Mai’s and Ayaka’s turn to slightly feel ashamed.
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh?!?!? Both Mai AND Ayaka??? :o



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“When was the whole thing with Maki again?” Ayaka questioned.

“Two days ago” Yossy told her once more.

“Hmm interesting?”

“What’s interesting?”

“Didn’t you say that Takahashi-chan and Reina-chan randomly joined you guys?”

“Yes, what are you getting to, Ayaka?”
It's going to be interesting to see Mai and Ayaka's perceptions of events, seeing as how they don't know about the bet. :)




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“Do you think they were sent in to ruin your date with Goto?” Ayaka pondered.

“For the 100th time! It was NOT, I repeat NOT a date! And NO I don’t think Makoto would send them”

“Send them to do what?” Maicchin asked.

“To sabotage my date” Yossy answered. The sound of Ayaka and Mai laughing uncontrollably made Yossy realize what she just said. “UGH!” She sighed infuriatingly.

“I thought it wasn’t a date~?” Mai picked on her boyish best friend.
Ayaka =  :mon dunno:
Yossi =  :scolding:
Mai =  :gmon blonde:
Yossi = :bigdeal:
Mai/Ayaka = :on lol:
Yossi = :temper:




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Dark, thick sunglasses shaded her pupils from the bothersome lights that lit up the stadium as clear as day, while her facemask made the sweat stench filled air breathable. The frequent throbbing on her upper left tempo, consequently, glued her index and middle finger to the spot, applying pressure for relief. Yet, no matter what amount of pressure she put on, her ears could not block out the excruciatingly constant chattering of the crowd around her or the screaming of the coaches “Kei, remind me why I was forced to be here” her voice was slightly muffled.

“Tsunku said you had to report today’s events back to him” Kei was leaning forward on the bleachers, hands on lap. Her eyes were studious, examining all the participating girls that ran laps around the field. She knew very well the sober Yuko wouldn’t do her job, hell she knew the buzzed Yuko wouldn’t do her job.
Looks like someone's got a hangover. :P



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*KEI LECTURES YUKO*
Whooooooooooooooooooooooooooa Kei's lucky Yuko didn't kill her right then and there. :mon scare:



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Kei opened her purse and tossed a large metallic container over to Nakazawa’s lap. “Make sure none of the kids see you” all the blonde could do was stare down at her lap in astonishment. Tears of joy build up and an uncharacteristic quiet squeal emerged from her. She delicately picked up the can and stared at it in awe, as if a celestial light shine upon it. For a split moment, she could’ve sworn she heard angels, off in the distance, singing and playing their harps harmoniously. She then quickly opened the top and took a strong whiff at its contents.

“Aaaa, just what Mama likes” she looked over at Kei, who in return was just ignoring her. Abruptly, she wrapped two tight arms around her and gave a quick wet kiss on the cheek. “You know how to keep me happy” She giggled and let go of Yasuda. Redirecting her attention back to the liquid substance of her delight “Straight up vodka” she said sweetly to the container, then monstrously took a swig from it, utter desperation could be heard in every gulp she took. A satisfying sigh was the result of her short chugging session.
Good thing Kei came prepared.  XD



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“Hey, Yuu-chan” she leaned over. “I think I have new prospective betters” she whispered.
Oh really now? :O



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“What took you so long?” Nakazawa bellowed at the three arriving girls.
   
“Nacchi kept forgetting things in her house” Yaguchi rolled her eyes. Kaori scooted over Yuko and sat at the end of the bleachers.

“And I got to the point where I just simply refused to move from her door until she was sure she hadn’t forgotten anything” the tallest of the girls stated.

“Aww, come on guys. Stop picking on me” the baby faced one plopped down next to Kei and rested her head on her shoulder.
Awwwwwwwwwwww...that's both funny AND cute.  :oops:



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“Now, now Nacchi” Yaguchi took her place between Kei and Yuko “No need to get so upset. We all don’t need phone calls from your mother” Abe shot her a dirty look.
From her "special" phone, no less! :rofl:



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“I’ve been observing the girls on the field for a while”

...

I’ve noticed hardly any interaction between the girls. I tried understanding why. It’s not doubt that if we set strategies and such, we’ll see them interact but we need them to interact on their own. I realized that the girls were probably not going up to Yossy at all because of Mai. Which made me realize, we need Mai and Ayaka to stay away from Yossy… that would give openings for our bets to come in and do their thing.” They were now in a tight circle listening intently.

“But Kei-chan” Kaori interjected “Ayaka, Mai and Yossy are really close friends. I doubt they’ll ever leave each others side for extended periods of time”

...

“Exactly” Yasuda pointed at Kaori “You can’t beat them… but if you can’t beat them… then join them… and if you can’t join them… then have them join you” she smiled confidently.

“What… do you mean?” Abe was perplexed.

“Ayaka and Mai are my perspective betters. I want them to join us, not only would we have the “opening” issue resolved, but we’ll have an intimate look at Yossy’s feelings through this all.”
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh I see. Damn that's rather brilliant.  Mai and Ayaka would undoubtedly get a kick out of being part of the bet, AND they could be observers on the inside and keep tabs on who might be doing well/poorly with Yossi.
 :mon determined: :mon thumb:



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Out of the blue, a familiar voice filled the air.

“Kei-chan, Yaguchi, Nakazawa-san, Koari, Nacchi~” Ayaka walked over.

...

“I’m sorry to interrupt but do you think maybe I can sit with you guys, the people I’d normally be visiting this with are… well… out in the field” she smiled sheepishly.

“Of course you can” Kei nodded approvingly.

“Here, you can sit next to me” Abe patted the side that was available next to her. As Ayaka shuffled to the spot indicated, Kei looked  back at everyone and gave them a wink

‘Trust me’ She whispered.
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*ROKKIES CONVO*
Oh give it up Reina. Eri and Sayu can totally read you like a book, you know. :D



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“I WAS NOT STARING AT HER!” Reina stood and slammed her fist on the aluminum seats. Ironically, though, everyone else in that stadium was now staring at her. Slowly turning her head towards the crowd of faces that now looked worried for her she quickly sat down and mumbled an apology. Thankfully, everyone else returned to their previous activities. Lifting her head up, assuming it was safe to look up again, her eyes automatically zeroed on to the only pair of eyes that hadn’t turned back to the court. Abe gave a quick giggle and flashed her a smile before turning her head back around. A silly little smile appeared on the Yankii’s face. She lifted her hand gently and gave a quick wave.

“Reina” Eri looked concerned “are you okay?” Eri’s cold hand came crashing on to Reina’s forehead. “Sayu, I think she might be sick”

“No, I’m not sick” Reina stated dreamily. “It’s hard to be sick when an angel smiles at you” the silly grin grew wider…
Reina =  :mon mad:
Everyone in the stands =  :dunno:
Reina =  :fainted:
Nacchi =  :hee:
Reina =  :wriggly:
Eri/Sayu =  :mon misch:
Reina =  :gmon twirl:



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“I worry about you, Reina, one day she’s gonna catch you stalking her”

“WHAT!? Reina’s been stalking Abe-san?” Eri got surprised.

“You didn’t know? For the past three days she’s been stalking her and I see any probability of her to stopping anytime soon”

“Reina” Eri placed her hand on the day dreamy’s shoulder “Reina, that’s CR-EE-PY! You should, no you need to stop”
Oh crap!
 :pig laugh:

Oh, to be young and flippin' head over heels in raburabu. :heart:



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*RIKA-YOSSI CONVO AT MIDFIELD*
Too bad the betters weren't still around to see this.  :grin:



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From a far place, two eyes had been studying her for the hour or so. The man had secretly been spectating the training session, but closely observing Yoshizawa Hitomi. Without saying much, he crossed his arms and turned on his heels. He reached into his pocket as he walked into the darkness of the corridor. Taking out his cell phone he dialed a number. “Ano… Iida-san?” he confirmed the voice “It’s me Tsunku… I need to talk to you, in private”
Then again... O0

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #113 on: June 15, 2008, 03:12:57 AM »
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She delicately picked up the can and stared at it in awe, as if a celestial light shine upon it. For a split moment, she could’ve sworn she heard angels, off in the distance, singing and playing their harps harmoniously. She then quickly opened the top and took a strong whiff at its contents.

 XD


Me wants YoAya in this fic  :oops:
Reasons:
(1) I don't know, maybe because for me the break up reason was just lame  :D
(2) I don't want anyone from the 4 to win  :P
(3) I want to see the reactions of the betters when they all lose   :shakeit:

Go YoAya  :muffin:


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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #114 on: June 15, 2008, 09:50:55 AM »
(1) I don't know, maybe because for me the break up reason was just lame  :D
(2) I don't want anyone from the 4 to win  :P
(3) I want to see the reactions of the betters when they all lose   :shakeit:

Go YoAya  :muffin:

*opens mouth in utter shock* You think the reason for them breaking up is a lame reason  :cry: ...... fine.... since i can guarantee you Yossy wont end up with Aya...

I'll find a way to add more YoAya moments. *mutters to self* I'm such a sucker for the readers *walks out thinking of how to add more YoAya interaction into her story*

*Runs back into room* Okay i just had two ideas damn on me  :twisted: .... See this why comments kick so much ass... it helps the author catch what readers really like and don't like. Which reminds me of a motto: You scratch my back and i'll scratch yours... WIN WIN situations  :rockon: :cow:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #115 on: June 15, 2008, 10:38:18 AM »
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*opens mouth in utter shock* You think the reason for them breaking up is a lame reason   ...... fine.... since i can guarantee you Yossy wont end up with Aya...

OMG  :O please don't cry *looks at the left, looks at the right and prepares to run for dear life* but wait, they won't end up together!?  :O  :'(  :scolding: *runs*

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I'll find a way to add more YoAya moments. *mutters to self* I'm such a sucker for the readers *walks out thinking of how to add more YoAya interaction into her story*

*Runs back into room* Okay i just had two ideas damn on me  .... See this why comments kick so much ass... it helps the author catch what readers really like and don't like. Which reminds me of a motto: You scratch my back and i'll scratch yours... WIN WIN situations 

Yay!   :muffin: YoAya interaction  :wriggly:  onegai shimasu :kneelbow:


*sits at the corner and waits for it*   O0

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #116 on: June 15, 2008, 12:35:07 PM »
So, I've been thinking about which of the girls is gonna get Yossy and I have two theories (although i think I've forgotten one now, so I'll try and remember as I type :lol: )

Ok so theory 1: You LOOOOVE Charmikitty, so ideally for you, they would end up together :lol: You don't like YoMako, so lets rule her out as well so look who that leaves, Maki :o but now that seems to easy and plus, as much as I do love YoMaki, I don't think Maki would be too nice for Yossy and thus would break her heart as well :cry:

Theory 2 (i remembered ;) ): Mako and Rika are all actually emotionally attracted and connected to Yossy so they care and are trying, Maki knows about the bet (doesn't she, I can't remember :oops: ) so she is trying coz of that... But Miki, just doesn't want her ego being hurt by losing a flirting/groping victim... Thus, I think Miki will win coz she is less desperate and without trying and just being herself, Miki and Yossy can get closer and actually develop feelings for each other, awww :wub:
BUT WAIT!!! If that happens, where does that leave Aya, biggest no-no is to date ur friend's ex (let alone best friend's) but does Miki even know about YoAya? :o

Wow, this is too much :imdead:
Update soon my dear, or my head will explode :P *guilt tripping*
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(and I just realised this is my 1st comment on this fic, WTH?!?! I've been reading since the start, or almost the start, i'm so sorry I didn't comment earlier :( )

ohhhhhhhhhh, do you even know who is gonna win the bet yet or will you decide that later? :lol:

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #117 on: June 15, 2008, 01:10:04 PM »
of course, because i eat, sleep, breathe and exist for ishiyoshi... i want them to get back together...

but after the indirect rejection, crying in the rain, yoaya, yossui's still hurt... not possible... charmikitty's a good theory... i like that pairing... ... i think...

yo-nobody? she'll find out about the bet and deliberately not choose a person even if she falls for one just to spite the perpetrators...

:lol: insane theory... just waiting for the next chapter

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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #118 on: June 15, 2008, 02:07:38 PM »
*sweeety checks out the new replies to her posts*

"hmm, runaway from the law....for you information......sweeety takes a bite out of the slash challenges.....oh ......my.......GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
 *Hallelujah chorus plays in the background*

 "AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNEW IT WOULD HAPPEN!!!!!!!! I KNEW IT!!!!! I NEVER LOST FAITH IN YOU!!!!!!! I KNEW SACRIFICING MY FIRST BORN WOULD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU ZEUS!"

OHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAHOHMYGAH!!!!!

 SOOOO AWESOME! AND IT'S BIG TOO! TOOK ME TWO DAYS TO READ THE WHOLE THING! I'll stop yelling now....the neighbours are getting a little scared and freaked out, plus we have visitors....my brothers' gay homosexual lover boytoy friend (who doesn't yet know he is those things ^)


  oh my gah! I can't believe it ssitll. Does this mean we can expect a new chapter soon? OH MY GAH! I WANT SOME TANABE!!!!!!! AND SOME CHARMIKITTY!!!!!!!! Onegai shimasu.

 ok, there's some plotting and scheming. I want to just skip the part where they lure Ayaka and Mai and go straight to the them telling us Yoshi info bit. I can kinda see Mari with a candy bar, luring them to a dark empty looking rroom, and then Kaori and Nacchi jumping them and tying them to chairs and such. Then making them join, as they threaten them with torture, such as waxing their eyebrows off, and pulling off their fake nails and such.

  anyway, I hope to see some loving for the elders too, even though I have a bad feeling that either Yuko, Kaori or Maki are fucking Dzunk! Which royally sucks. I know Yuko has some powers over him but that might mean that she is sleeping wit him which really sucks. I want her to hook up with Mari, not Kei, not Tsunku, MARI!! cause they look soooo cute together.

  Anyway, write another chapter, because I am holding your cat hostage -say hello miss kitty fantastico- *muffled high pitched tone* heelloooo, dooo asss shhheee saaaysss nyan! *back to normal* I love this fic, please don't let it die :'( If you found a beached whale, you wouldn't just leave it there, so don't just leave this story there, finish it!

 PS I like the charmikitty, I hope they end up togetherr, they are sweet and cute together, and both deserve rabu rabu.
 I think that Abe should give in to her primal urges/desires and such and make sweet sweet love to Reina. Oh, and stay with her and be her girlfriend and tehy should be happy ever after
 Maki should repent. I kinda think she should get back withh Abe san but I think that she might be better suited with someone else as it just seems like it's gonna end up like that..

 maybe it'lll be Yuko, maybe it will even be Reina.... but good god, I hope no one is sad and desperate enough to get Tsunku.

 also, I want YoMako! there isn't enough of that plus since I want a charmikity it only leaves Maki and Mako, and I don't think Maki deserves her yet.

 Because Yoshi deserves someone who wouldn't cheat on her, and someone who will love her and be all she can be. Not someone who will use her and dump her. In the contrary, Mako will probably be clingy, which is not a bad thing, because it just means she loves her, and doesn't want her to go away, but I know that Mako is subservient enough to do as Yoshi asks, so she wont be smothering her either. So I think the ideal gf for her is her, especially in this fic. But why don't we just let Yoshi decide.
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Re: Tears, Kisses, Cowards and The Brave (CH: 14 OBSERVATION)
« Reply #119 on: August 01, 2008, 01:08:14 AM »
WOOW  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
who is gonna win yossie´s heart ??  :dizzy: :OMG: :fainted:

waiting for the next chapter  :hee:

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