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Re: One Minute (Chapter 3)
« Reply #60 on: May 24, 2008, 11:10:01 PM »
I wrote this sort of in a rush xD because I only might have time to write tomorrow and if I don't it will probably be a whole week before I can get another chapter up
so I wanted to get this one done and up now

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Chapter four: Surprises

“Are you sure you got the right amount of drugs?” Miki leaned back against a bench in a park; Koharu always dragged them to a park whenever they were just waiting for something to happen even in the dead of night.

“Of course. I had seen it on television before,” Koharu was staring down at her watch, just waiting.

It had been about two weeks since Miki had been training her and hopefully this second death would be enough and Miki could go on her merry way with her own assignments. She was tired of this babysitting job.

“Hey Miki?”

Mikis thoughts were interrupted and she faced the younger girl. “Yes?”

Koharu began to fiddle with her watch as both her hands began to shake a little like she was scared. “They can’t catch us right? I mean…” she paused and Miki looked at her a little confused. “The police…if this guy suddenly dies…we won’t be caught? Plus he deserves it right?” The last question was added very quickly.

“Of course he deserves it, we wouldn’t get the assignment if he didn’t,” at least that is what I’m under the impression of. Miki tried to smile reassuringly at Koharu.

“But we can’t get caught right? They can’t like do some weird Forensic stuff and find me,” she was starting to shake a lot more now. “I don’t want to go to jail.”

Miki sighed, “It’s literally impossible for them to trace us. Besides we have no relation to this man. It’s an untraceable assignment, no paper trail.”

Koharu looked at Miki for a moment before the shaking began to subside a little and she stared back down at her watch. “What are we anyways?”

Miki was ready for that question because she thought she would ask it much sooner than now. “No one really has a name for us,” Miki said as she leaned her head back and stared up at the starry sky. “But…” she paused. “Yocchan did come up with something. She calls us: Interfectors.”

“Oh…who’s Yocchan?”

“You’ll meet her eventually. She usually likes to introduce herself to the new ones.” Although I wonder where she has been lately…Usually I see her about once a week because she just appears out of freaking no where.

Koharu suddenly jumped and then looked up at Miki with big eyes. She opened her mouth to speak, but no words came out.

“What’s up?” Miki asked calmly.

Koharu stretched out her wrist so that Miki could see her watch. It now flashed, “00:00.”

Miki pat Koharu on the head, “Good job. Now you remember where he lives right? You better go collect it before it disperses.”

“Right,” Koharu jumped down from the bench. But then stopped and turned around to face Miki. “You’re going to wait here right?”

“Uhmm…” Mikis watch then caught her eye and she saw a time displayed. Finally she got a new assignment which meant that she didn’t have to baby-sit anymore. “Actually, it seems I’m done training you. So I have to go to my assignment okay?”

The younger girl pouted a little, “But I’ll see you some other time?”

“Most likely,” it was weird how all the Interfectors had a knack for knowing where the others were if they really wanted to find each other…and no one didn’t want to be found. That always made it a little more difficult.

Besides a lot of the time Interfectors would hang out with each other instead of regular people because of them not aging it was hard to explain to people. So you could really only stay friends with them for a couple of years before they asked question. Eventually they just stopped making other friends all together.

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“Ai…hello! Ai!” Risa waved her hand in from of her friends face as she stared out the window with a blank expression on her face. “Hey Ai!” she yelled and still got no response. Finally she grabbed her water bottle and dumped a little on Ais head.

“Cold!~” she yelled and jumped up from her seat.

Risa began to laugh, “Jeez. Eris the one whos supposed to be out of it. Not you.” She laughed as Ai shook out her head to try and get some of the water out.

“That wasn’t funny,” But she couldn’t help smile. She had been thinking about how to ask her dad about Aika. It had been over a week since her curiosity had peaked and she hadn’t got the guts up to really ask her dad anything. Ai had actually started to avoid her father at home because she wasn’t sure if she would just blurt out the question.

Risa handed Ai her bag, “You ready to go home?”

“Uhh yea but…” Ai paused as she took her bag and threw it over her shoulder. “Where is our third musketeer?”

“Who?”

“Eri duh. You know the other person you walk home with on a regular basis.”

Risa looked at Ai like she was crazy before laughing again. “Man you really must have been out of it all day.”

“Huh?”

Risa began to walk out of the classroom with Ai following her. “Don’t you remember than long conversation at lunch where Eri kept hitting me?”

“Well that’s normal so I didn’t think anything of  it. But what were you talking about then?”

“I was trying to convince Eri to offer to walk Michishige home today after school.” Risa looked at Ai as if telling her to piece it all together but she still looked puzzled. “And that’s when Eri left the table…” still nothing from Ai. “And walked over to where Michishige was sitting and didn’t come back…You really must have something on your mind to not notice that whole thing.”

Ai noted that Risa looked worried so she quickly came up with an excuse, “oh I’m just tired. Not enough sleep you know? I’ll catch it up because tomorrow is Saturday.” Ai smiled at Risa to reassure her.

They began there path down the sidewalk. “So speaking of the weekend…” Risa tone was slightly nervous. “Since we might be losing our favorite turtle to a quick bunny, do you want to go see a movie or something?” Risa was nervous because it would have been the first time they did something just the two of them. Before it had always been her, Ai and Eri all together.

Too bad Ai wasn’t listening as she had stopped and was watching a young girl playing with her father in the front yard. She was captivated at how happy they looked and the young girl reminded her of Aika because she was so carefree in her movements. But what struck her the most was that there was that there was no mother playing with them.

“Ai?” Risa asked walking over and placed a comforting hand on her shoulder.

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Miki got out of a taxi and paid the driver for his service. She arrived at a small hotel right at the edge of Tokyo where her next assignment was. The thing that struck her oddly about the assignment was that the time span given to her was a little over a month. Never had she even heard of one lasting more than two weeks. Not like Miki really cared, this just meant she had more free time to do things before it came down to the wire and she had to kill her.

Soon she had paid for her room, with money that would disappear as soon as she was gone from the city, and was preparing for a nice long shower.

She was just about to start undressing when there was a very aggravating knock at her balcony door. One: who could have even got to the seventh floor balcony? and two: who would dare interrupt her relaxation time?

Miki marched over and flung the curtain open violently.

“Hey.”
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #61 on: May 24, 2008, 11:26:47 PM »
ahh cliff hanger!!! i bet its AYA!!! lol aww eri and sayu getting together and now risa going to make a move sadly Ai is barely paying attention! (pay attention Ai!! :O)
can't wait for the next chapter!
btw are you going to add any more members like Reina and JunJun and LinLin, Im just wondering  :)

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #62 on: May 25, 2008, 04:42:38 AM »
Ooo...Interfectors sounds soo cool :cool1:

I'm thinkin the person on the balcony is Yossy, only because Miki seem to hint that Yossy might be coming soon and 'out of freakin nowhere'....and the 7th floor balcony of her hotel room is an unexpected place for someone to just drop by...

I wonder what Ai's connection to all of this is?....*gasp* :mon spit: don't tell me she's the next target that Miki mentioned!!!!  :mon scare:

...heh, probably not, :bigdeal: I'm terrible at trying to guess at things...anyways looking foward to see what happens next.  :grin:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #63 on: May 25, 2008, 05:17:46 AM »
Nice chapter! I guess you'll connect the Interfectors to AixRisaXErixAika's life soon and I wonder who Miki would kill  :roll: It will be so sad when that happens... :cry: I have a nagging feeling it's Ai's dad or Aika...

I guess that person is Yossy too!  :)

Keep it up!

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #64 on: May 25, 2008, 10:18:56 AM »
I bet that the person that open de curtain is Yossy OMG  :shy2:

i'm thinking who will be miki's next target... ai's dad?? i don't know  :dizzy:

i love your fanfics :luvluv1:

waiting next chapter

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #65 on: May 25, 2008, 12:25:46 PM »
"She was just about to start undressing when there was a very aggravating knock at her balcony door. One: who could have even got to the seventh floor balcony? and two: who would dare interrupt her relaxation time?"

 Yoshi

 As for the other things I was thinking of. I think maybe Aika was a bit superntural. And obviously its either Risa or Ai that is her new target.. At least that's what I think. But if it really is just bad people, then maybe it is supposed to be Ai's mum. She seems desperate and low enough to do something horrible. And I think something very very bad will happen when Ai asks her dad.

 I think that Aya can't really see her Miki. At least not in the real world. Maybe in dreams hey?

 OMG Aya better not be the next target! I know it is a girl (you mentioned that somewhere) and I'm pretty sure she is gonna bond with her or something and sympathise with her. I have a bad feeling it is Ai or someone close to her. I think it might even be Michishige though I doubt it.

 The Eri and Sayu thing is sweet though. Can't wait for more updates. Waiting loyally, your sweeety
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #66 on: May 25, 2008, 05:07:35 PM »
Ooh...this is getting better and better.

It has to be Yossi right??? We're all thinking the same thing here so I hope we're not all wrong :lol:

So I'm guessing Miki is the person in the prologue...but who was she with? I'm hoping that it's not Ai / Risa / Eri or Sayumi (because I don't like any of those pairings - sorry). Maybe an Interfector had to kill a fellow Interfector. It could then be Miki x Aya or Miki x Yossi...Oh but hang on...it tells them the name of the person right? Must be someone else.

Speculating again...I think I'll just wait and see as I'm crap with guessing stuff.

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #67 on: May 25, 2008, 10:29:56 PM »
I'm back! And I'm happy to see updates from you, heyyouhiya!!

CH. 3:
hahahaha! Miki is training Koharu!!! That's awesomeness~ And she's at least trying to be nice to her! Poor Ai-chan and Aika. Mom seems to be jealous. So I'm thinking that Aika is some kind of foster child and Ai's dad is a social worker or something like that. Whoa, Miki's mentor was Aya. And Miki couldn't really kill someone. The ending was sad.  :cry:

CH. 4:
So they are some kind of spirit/devils maybe.....they kill ppl? Awww, Kame and Shige! So cuteeee! Poor Risa, though, Ai-chan is too pre-occupied with her own family problems to be with her.  :cry: Yeah, I think the person on Miki's balcony is either Yossy or Aya. But I'm leaning towards Yossy.

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #68 on: May 26, 2008, 12:17:30 AM »
I would just like to thank everyone for there comments and support!
I'm pretty sure I've already said this...but I was very nervous putting this fic up because I didn't think it would be well liked and well
only four chapters and I've already got 4 pages and over 1,000 views so I am very please
I hope its not weird how excited I am about all of this but Thank you thank you thank you! to everyone...

Btw I wish I could reply to comments more but I'm afraid of accidentally letting things slip to do that
but once again all of you just Thank you so much!

and yea I just remembered tomorrow is Memorial day so I do not have time to write another chapter today but I will tomorrow =]
But then after that not until friday =[
anyways thanks!

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #69 on: May 26, 2008, 12:24:16 AM »
yeyet new chap tomoz! Yey! Its ok that you dont reply specifically to comments, creates mystique, lol. Keep up the great work, you're doing good kid. I hope you get well soon. Have fun, see ya mwah!
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #70 on: May 26, 2008, 04:58:08 PM »
so not only do the kill people but the drug them to!!!  :OMG:
what the hell is the deal with Interfectors does it mean something?? or did Yossie pick it because it sounds cool and important :smoke:(which it does :P)??
Poor Ai because of all the issues regarding her family... what's the deal of Aika at first i thought she was a foster child but Ai's hesitation to ask her dad about her is kind of peculiar and could kinda (but not really excuse) explain Ai's mom's behavior
Oh and poor Risa because... well that sucks
and I think it Yossie just because of (what i think to be) foreshadowing of her popping up everywhere and because she said "hey" which i don't picture ayaya doing... i picture her more as a HI TAN  :gmon bye: no matter what the situation is... if that makes sense

i can't wait to see how they all relate to each other.... oh and i voted all the unanswered questions :D
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #71 on: May 26, 2008, 09:57:23 PM »
Blegh so I really don't like how the first part of this is written
But yea...a lot of this chapter is very filler
I promise the Ai/aika/Risa/Eri part of the story will intertwine with the Miki/Koha/Yossui/Aya part next chapter

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Chapter five: Family Matters

After Ai woke back up from her trance they both began to walk home together again. But now it seemed a little awkward. Well not for Ai, she began to talk and talk and talk about just random things. To Risa though, she felt that Ai had deliberately ignored her question about this weekend and was now trying to cover up her strange behavior by talking a lot.

As they approached the Takahashi residence Ai suddenly changed the subject from how much she wanted a new puppy to, “So what are you doing this weekend Gaki?” It was a very innocent question that confirmed Ai just hadn’t heard Gakis earlier question.

Gaki brightened up, “Nothing yet. Why?”

“Just curious,” and they kept walking. Ai said nothing more about the subject. Like she was truly just curious and nothing more.

Gaki paused and said hesitantly, “What about you?”

“Oh I don’t know. I have nothing really planned yet besides choir on Sunday.” She smiled and they turned the final corner and now were only two houses away from Ais.

Last chance Gaki, “Want to hang out tomorrow?”

“Sure,” she answered like it was just another weekend with all three of them. “Why don’t you invite Eri to?”

“No,” Gaki answered a little too quickly making Ai look at her curiously. “I mean…she probably is going out with Michishige tomorrow. I think she mentioned something about that,” Gaki lied.

“Oh ok, then just the two of us.” Ai paused in front of her house and winked playfully. “Then it’s a date,” she said jokingly.

Gaki nervously laughed trying to pretend like the joke was funny, when in reality she wished it had been said much more seriously. “I’ll see you tomorrow then,” and she turned to walk away.

“Bye Gaki!” Ai yelled.

As she entered her house her mood suddenly changed. She had been acting all cheerful just to try and not arouse anymore suspicion from Gaki. She didn’t need to know about her family life…

Ai was surprised that when she looked around he wasn’t home. Actually, neither was Aika. Soon she did find her mother sitting in the living room watching television.

“Uhmm where’s Dad and Aika?”

“I don’t know.”

“Do you know when they’ll be home?”

“Nope.”

“Oh,” Ai sighed. She had great memories of how nice her mother used to be but that was from over ten years ago. “Why do you…” she trailed off.

“What?”

“Nothing,” I’ll just ask dad when he gets home. I have to…

* * * * *

Miki stared at the blond haired girl in front of her before sarcastically replying, “What are you doing here?”

“Aww come on, let me in.” she whined leaning against the door like a child. Miki rolled her eyes and unlocked the balcony door before sliding it open. She swiftly turned around and headed back to the bathroom for her shower. “What I don’t even get a hello?” Yoshizawa Hitomi asked as she closed the door and curtains behind her.

Miki stopped walking and turned around, “Hello Yossui.”

“Aww that’s better. I knew you missed me,” she smirked walking over to the slightly shorter girl.

Miki couldn’t help but smile. As much as she was sour to the whole world, Yossui was probably one of the only people she didn’t hate. “So to what do I owe this pleasure to this time?”

“I kind of miss working with you, you know?” Yossui said with a slightly sad tone.

Miki sighed; mentioning them working together always brought back memories of Aya. “Yea, I know what you mean.”

Yossui leaned in very close to Mikis ear and whispered very slowly, “Besides, I just missed you.” Miki shivered with every word.

“Is that supposed to be suggestive?” Miki asked pulling back from Yossui a little bit.

Yossui smirked and cocked her head to the side, “A little.”

Miki smirked back and began to walk to the bathroom once again, where her relaxing shower awaited her. On the way she pulled off her shirt and looked back at Yossui winking. Right at the door she pulled off her pants so she was left in a just her undergarments, Yossui couldn’t tear her eyes away.

“I’m going to take my shower now. You can wait here if you’d like." She paused, "or not.” She raised an eyebrow at Yossui suggestively before walking into the bathroom and closing the door behind her.

Yossui stood there with her mouth slightly open before regaining her senses and walking over to the bathroom door. She knocked three times. “May I come in?” she asked as she turned the handle.

But was then surprised to find the door locked and heard maniacal laughing from the inside of the room. “I want to relax tonight Yocchan,” she said still laughing.

Yossui growled and banged her head against the door. “You suck.”

* * * * *

“So zoo tomorrow?” Gaki asked over the phone to Ai.

“Yea, I’ll meet you there at eleven.”

“Ok cool,” Ai noted that her friend seemed a little more excited than usual about just going to the zoo. “Is the zoo really that exciting?”
 
“Uh…well…” she stuttered. “There’s a new tiger exhibit I want to see..yea.”

“Ok whatever,” Ai laughed but then suddenly stopped as she heard the door open and two familiar voices came from the entry way. They were laughing and talking about something Ai couldn’t make out. “Hey Gaki, hold on really quick.”

“Ok-“ Ai set down the phone and walked through the kitchen to the entry way where she was just able to see her mother leaving through the front door and her father and Aika standing there. Her dad didn’t look very surprised, but Aika looked very disappointed.

“Mama?” she asked staring at the door.

Quickly Ai walked up to Aika, “Hey kiddo!” She said ruffling her hair a little to try and distract her from her disappointment.

“Ai!” she yelled embracing the taller girl.

“Hey Ai.”

“Welcome home Dad.” She smiled and led Aika into the living room where they sat down and Ai changed the channel to some kid show for Aika.

After a little while she heard the sink running in the kitchen, dad was making dinner. “I’ll be right back, k?” she said to Aika, who nodded mesmerized by the television.

Quietly she walked into the kitchen trying to think of how she was going to ask about Aikas past. She knew it had to be something he didn’t want to talk about since he never seemed to bring it up, yet it was destroying his marriage.

Her dad was standing at the counter cutting some vegetables when he turned around and noticed her. “So how was school?” he asked like he normally would.

“Fine,” she replied like a typical teenager. But usually Ai wasn’t a typical teenager and would tell her dad all about her day, they had a good relationship.

He paused his cutting and looked at her. “Is everything alright?”

“Dad can I talk to you about something?”
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Oh and yea Interfector does mean something
but that will come up later in the story...much later

Comment please so I feel better about this chapter...
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #72 on: May 27, 2008, 02:25:56 AM »
aww don't feel bad about the chapter~  It was very enjoyable! 

I hope Ai chan's dad will really answer the question...but wah...Gaki is going to overhear everything over the phone  :O  That will sure put a damper on their date..

and I still can't believe that Miki et al. are killers for the  :twisted: :-X

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #73 on: May 27, 2008, 02:59:26 AM »
 :wub: i enjoyed it! cant' wait for the next one!

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 4)
« Reply #74 on: May 27, 2008, 03:35:35 AM »
I hope Ai will soon know how Gaki feels towards her. Unrequited love is quite sad. Plus I hope that Gaki will overhear the conversation at Ai's house.  :P

Yossui leaned in very close to Mikis ear and whispered very slowly, “Besides, I just missed you.” Miki shivered with every word.

“Is that supposed to be suggestive?” Miki asked pulling back from Yossui a little bit.

Yossui smirked and cocked her head to the side, “A little.”

Miki smirked back and began to walk to the bathroom once again, where her relaxing shower awaited her. On the way she pulled off her shirt and looked back at Yossui winking. Right at the door she pulled off her pants so she was left in a just her undergarments, Yossui couldn’t tear her eyes away.

“I’m going to take my shower now. You can wait here if you’d like." She paused, "or not.” She raised an eyebrow at Yossui suggestively before walking into the bathroom and closing the door behind her.

Yossui stood there with her mouth slightly open before regaining her senses and walking over to the bathroom door. She knocked three times. “May I come in?” she asked as she turned the handle.

But was then surprised to find the door locked and heard maniacal laughing from the inside of the room. “I want to relax tonight Yocchan,” she said still laughing.

Yossui growled and banged her head against the door. “You suck.”

I love this part! Cheeky Miki rocks :shifty:

You plan to intertwine AixGaki with Miki's side in the next chapter?  :cry: I expect some tears...

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #75 on: May 27, 2008, 05:42:19 AM »
AI-CHAN!!! HELLOOOZ! Risa is totally in love with you!!! I know your family has a buncha secrets you want to find out but please don't make her sad!!!!!  :mon geek:
Now that I got that off of my chest, I really wonder what the secret is. Why Ai's mom seems to hate Aika so much. I hope it's something interesting. And Gaki's still on the line!  :mon scare: She's gonna find out why Ai's been acting so weird!
I knew it was Yossy! She and Miki seem to have something more than friendship but where does that leave Ayaya?  :dunno: Was she just Miki's senpai or did they have something more and then something happened to her? So many questions! But even though some get answered as you update, I come up with more!!! But I wouldn't have it any other way!
GO AI! Let's find out the truth!!!
So the stories are gonna overlap? I think someone's gonna die.... :pleeease:

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #76 on: May 27, 2008, 06:17:33 AM »
Strange that everyone thinks that Miki and Koharu are grim reapers, and yet Koharu is worried about getting caught via forensic evidence.  Take into account what has been said in the two most recent chapters about what they do, and this could possibly mean that they're not reapers, but instead members of some sort of secret society of assassins...or they really are reapers and Koharu is just a real noob at it. :P


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“I’m going to take my shower now. You can wait here if you’d like." She paused, "or not.” She raised an eyebrow at Yossui suggestively before walking into the bathroom and closing the door behind her.

Yossui stood there with her mouth slightly open before regaining her senses and walking over to the bathroom door. She knocked three times. “May I come in?” she asked as she turned the handle.
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But was then surprised to find the door locked and heard maniacal laughing from the inside of the room. “I want to relax tonight Yocchan,” she said still laughing.

Yossui growled and banged her head against the door. “You suck.”
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #77 on: May 27, 2008, 06:39:46 AM »
woooooooooooow

miki is such an evil!!! :hiakhiakhiak:

Yomiki  :luvluv1:

poor takitty, she is very worry about all the aika thing  :farofflook:

pleease, waiting next chapter (and if in it appear yossy, so much better) XD

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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #78 on: May 27, 2008, 09:28:47 AM »
Ahh! This story has so many secrets  :dizzy: But it's damn exciting :w00t:

I can't wait to find out about Aika's past but I guess what I really can't wait for is Aya appearance XD I wonder what kind of connection was between her and Yossy and Miki :mon dunno:

And btw YoMiki moment was awesome :lol:
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Re: One Minute (Chapter 5)
« Reply #79 on: May 27, 2008, 05:18:31 PM »
YoMiki  :inlove: The tease and the gullible  XD

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