One Minute (Chapter 13, two days in a row!)

[sweeety]

OH MY GOD MIKI IS A REAPER! SHE TAKES PEOPLE"S SOULS WHEN THEY DIE AND SHE IS GONNA TAKE RISA'S OR AI'S (IM THINKING RISA'S) SOON! Weelll maybe not too soon... but still    Meanie! I love itHope you keep it up!

[kRisZ]

A turtle and a bunny

wow i got to say i am very intested in this fic!! can't wait to read more

me too

[heyyouhiya]

I'm glad so many people like it because I was pretty hesitant about putting this story up (Idk why I just didn't think anyone would enjoy it )

I'm totally loving where this is going so far! I know exactly what outfit you are describing Miki in.....it's this one, huh?

Love it, btw. She seems to have some kind of power where she can time ppl's deaths.....

That exact outfit (although I didn't include the hat)
And are you sure she can time it? hmmmm...think about  it...reread it...ponder...

love the little Eri and Risa argurment! Eri and Sayu, is one paring i haven't heard about in a long time!

Really? I always considered them a pretty common couple guess I was wrong...but they're just so adorable

OH MY GOD MIKI IS A REAPER! SHE TAKES PEOPLE"S SOULS WHEN THEY DIE AND SHE IS GONNA TAKE RISA'S OR AI'S (IM THINKING RISA'S) SOON! Weelll maybe not too soon...

 

[chibilolli]

Huh? WTF is Miki??? Now I'm even more intrigued.

Risa falling asleep in class is so cute If you were in a classroom with her and she kept sleeping, at least you could stare at her without her knowing I love the interaction between the 3 of them and Eri already being in love with Sayumi is adorable. Hopefully there will be some TakaGaki love. Or even better...TanaGaki.

Can't wait for the continuation.

[strawb3rrykream]

Wait, does she kill ppl?  Or does she just see when they die? I have no idea what to think.

[takagakifan]

i think i got it now Miki's the grim reaper so that means in the first chapter she had to take the soul/mist thing from someone she bonded with (aya) 
Anywho I love the Ai, Risa, Eri interaction it was AWESOME I laughed so hard:

Soon that daily ritual got boring and they began to talk of other things. Gaki looked over at Ai smiling mischievously. “So Ai-chan, did you hear our little Eri has her eye on a girl in our class?”

Eri turned a bright shade of red and immediately smacked Gaki across the back of her head hard, “Gaki!”

She rubbed the back of her head once again, “Eri what’d you do that for? I’m just trying to inform Ai about your crush on Michishige. Ow!” Eri had smacked her once again and stuck her nose up in the sky.

“I can’t believe I told you that,” she grumbled as Ai began to laugh at the two of them.

Gaki was still rubbing her head as she also laughed. “Oh like it isn’t obvious.” This time she was able to duck and avoid Eris hand as it swung down once again.

“So Eri,” Ai said sounding serious. “When are you going to propose to her?”

Eri growled slightly and looked away. “Never.”

“Aww why? You two would be so cute! A turtle and a bunny, I can see it now.” This time Gaki wasn’t able to avoid another smack on the head. “Stop hitting me!” she whined.

“Then shut up!”

“No.” Smack. “Stop!”

[JFC]

I'm stuck wondering what it was that got Miki pissed off after she collected that one guy's soul. It has to be more than just a coincidence that her watch started beeping after he entered it. Does her watch act as some type of gateway/portal? If so, where do the souls go? And what's the significance of her watch turning red and having the "100%" displayed on it?


Aichan/Risa/Eri = wuvable LULZ.

However, something tells me they're going to be getting a visitor soon.

[Kreuz_Asakura]

Maybe the watch is full?
This is very interesting... I like science fiction stories so I'm going to follow this

[sweeety]

Me thinks she waits till they die (of course she knows when that is) and she takes their soul.. The watch saying 100% means its full of souls and she has to let them go to the next plane of existence and whatnot and Risa Eri and Ai probbably will get to meet her or something.. Or maybe Ai will become one.. Possibly after getting killed  by a falling space ttoilet.... ok thats from a show.

 I reckon the other girl in the start is Aya but the bit about Risa having black hair and the fact tat I have no proof of her even existing makes me think that maybe the other girl in the beginning will be her (Risa).

 About Eri, I think she will get with Sayu eventually and hopefully Risa and Ai will get together.

 And I hope that in the end Aya and Miki find a way to be together... But then again it could always be Yosh..... I mean, black is her original hair colour so it could easilly be her before she dyed it......

 But hang on, does this mean that the person in the start is diseased? Because that would explain the sudden dropping dead. I don't think she has the deathtouch or anything, it seems the watch is the only abnormal thing about her.. But I think she probably can't touch people because of some magic that would cause catastrophic events to occur.

 This is such an interesting story and I cannot wait for the next chapters. I hope you post again soon! Mwah! cya!

[heyyouhiya]

These are awesome theories
Some of them are leaning on correct too =]
I won't tell you which ones...but its getting close

Oh but as much as you guess love the Ai/Risa/Eri interation
I'm letting you know in advance that Eri (and Sayu) are very side story and I don't consider them main characters =]
But they'll still be there a little

Anyways, here is a little gift for all of you that has the potential to confuse even more
what can I say...I personally even haven't figured this all out to complete understanding myself...and probably never will (and its my own idea xD)...but enough to tell the story
It's an almost trailer...thats more like an introduction to characters and such
oh and I think I mixed up the last ones name by putting it in the wrong order...(not putting name here so you have to watch the trailer to know one of the characters haha)


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9P9IWTTxa5g

I actually can't remember if they are in a particular order
I think I just put them in that order because of who I found clips I want to use of first...
But yea very short and just to keep you all amused until I get out of school this Thursday and shall have an unlimited (sort of) time to write =]

[sweeety]

nice clip! New hypothesis and I hope this one is right.

She kills Koharu.

Yes I am only saying that cause I hate Koharu.... hehe

[lonewind]

nice trailer!! like the background music, where is it from??
one question are by any chance going to put Reina in the story? i'm just wondering, but please update soon!! can't wait to see what happens! 

[takagakifan]

ok so now im more confused  but this is what i think now yossie and miki are grim reapers or something like that they're not human since there both really over 500yrs old yet look like teens...  but whats with aya not having an age and koharu (the mistake,  teehee i caught it ) being 0     Noooo  that just gives me a whole bunch of questions with  guess i have to ponder that later
but the trailer was awesome!! and got me even more excited for the next chapters 

[zay05ohayou]

The trailer was awesome it totally confused me though..  Watching the trailer made me feel like i was in the movies. My heart beats really fast whenever i watch them. So i'm dokidoki right now..  so...... the numbers are their age and year?

[chibilolli]

That trailer was really good but has made me slightly more confused.

I'm not too upset that Eri and Sayumi will be more of a side story as it looks like Risa has a main part. Just don't forget the pair of them completely though.

I'm also wondering the same as shadowolf8. Will Reina pop up in this story anywhere?

Damn you for updating thursday (possibly). I'm not gonna be able to read it until saturday afternoon

[ringo-hime]

cool trailer~ <3

[Yukari]

first... ai/gaki/eri are so lovely!! eri smacking on the head at gaki   

miki is a shinigami?? a angel??? a soul thief? a... soldier of god?? 

if someone die i think that it will be takitty 

Gaki=

XDD

wainting next chapter here too

[sweeety]

i loved the trailer and can't wait for the next chapter.... I hope it is up soon

[Sukoshi]

Ooo from the trailer I'm going to have to guess that

Ayaya isn't human nor shinigami because she doesn't have an age
Yossie is a shinigami..who is probably Miki's boss since she's older
the both of them probably go to school with the others to blend in with society
Koharu is a newborn shinigami? or another type of being since her age is 0
Risa and Ai chan are the only humans in the trailer...so it's either gaki/ai who ran out of time in chapter 1

now I can't wait to read more and see if any of my guesses are even close

[strawb3rrykream]

The trailer is awesome! Soo kakkoiiii~ The song sounds like the theme for cold case. I'm still confused so I'll wait for an update.
PS: I watched the trailer for Settling too! It was so romantic! The ending was love!