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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #120 on: August 19, 2008, 12:21:41 AM »
Ahh, sorry about not replying in a while  :sweatdrop: I've been having internet problems >_>
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I didn't get any sleep tonight.

I think you know why.

I've haven't felt this way in a long time.

Even when I was hurt, I got some sleep.

But not like this.

Sayu, why do you this?

It doesn't matter. I know that I'm in love with you.

I wonder what you're doing right now.

I wonder if you're dreaming of me.

Maybe not, but I kinda wished the night never ended.

I hate to go to work and you're on my mind all day.

Okay, pull yourself together now..time to sleep with the few hours you have left.

It won't matter..I just wish you were here.

At least Blue and Sayu are holplessly in love, they can both get over their previous heart breaks.

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Oh no! I missed you again.

I tried to dream of you again, but I keep waking up.

Maybe I have one last chance to dream of you before I have to get up.

I'm telling you, last night was the best night of my life.

I wish you were here with me right now.

I wonder if you're dreaming of me right now.

If not, that's okay because you're no dream to me.
Yup, they are definitely in love. Let's just hope nothing bad happens to throw this love off course. :bleed eyes:

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I wonder if you mind if I said "I love you" to you?

I hope you don't mind, because I want to say it to you.

But, it'll take time. I hope you understand.

Besides, I know you'll never leave me.

That's why I love you regardless.

I really hope you say those three words to me soon.

I can't for when that happens! That'll be really sweet :wriggly:

Oh, about the previous chapters.
Who is this mysterious person that Koharu likes?! I still can't figure it out, you're too good at not letting us know!
So Ai is over Risa? Great to know that she's still in love with Reina. A good heart to heart talk is exactly what the doctor ordered.


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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #121 on: August 20, 2008, 01:17:14 AM »
Okay guys...new mystery character! I'll let you try to guess while I get a color on this person! :)

* * * * * * * *

I wonder...

I wonder if she's okay..?

I know she is...right?

I mean..wewere okay.

At least, that's what I thought.

How could this happen to us?

Why did this happen to us?

We said what had to be said, right?

I just don't understand why...

Why..? Why did you do this to me?

I mean, this is my fault too.

We had so many good memories together.

I thought we were going to be inseperable.

I thought nothing could ever tear us apart.

Was it something I did to you?

You said it wasn't my fault.

However, when you left, I immediately began to blame myself for losing you.

How can I ever make it up to you?

I still love you.

I always will love you.

I have to find you and make this all better.

You said that you'll be okay.

I don't believe you. I know you're still hurting.

I'll find a way to repair this.

That's how much I love you.

I also know that deep, down inside...I know you still love me too.

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #122 on: August 20, 2008, 01:30:49 AM »
It's........................ :?
I have no idea!!!

edit: Eri?
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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #123 on: August 20, 2008, 11:56:44 PM »
@strawb3rrykream: not Eri..I'll put the colors here..speaking of which, where's my group of people?

pink-Sayu
orange-Eri
purple-Reina
yellow-Ai
green-Gaki
red-Koharu
blue-???
???-mystery character

now..more from this mystery person..

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I was so shy when I met you.

But your smile took all my fears away.

How I wanted to make you mine from that moment on.

You even asked me if you wanted to do something that day.

You already knew what I was thinking...most of the time anyway.

I don't know why I didn't ask you out after that.

It was common sense to do that.

You had always been there when I needed you the most.

The late night calls, those surprise meetings, those little notes telling me you cared.

I missed those.

I should have known when they stopped, that was when you stopped too.

But why did you?

Why couldn't you tell me then?

You said I couldn't handle it at the time..damn right I couldn't.

I just wanted to know why...

Did you love someone else?

What did that person have?

Who was that person?

Does that person mean a lot more than me?

I swear, I will find you and you will tell me.

I don't want to make you my enemy, but you're making it hard not to.

I want to know one thing:

Was you doing this behind my back?

If so, what did I do wrong?

Please..please tell me..

What did I do wrong?

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #124 on: August 21, 2008, 01:19:02 AM »
Damn it. :lol: Yeah, where are cool_kickin_dude's ppl??? :mon annoy:
For some reason, I'm thinking Rika now. Just sounds like it but I don't know how or where she'd fit in.

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #125 on: August 21, 2008, 02:14:53 AM »
well i WAS lurkin but now that I've been called out.... :P let me reread so that i can comment/ guess

so I'm thinking new mystery person without a color is Blue's ex and now drama is going to start with Blue being torn between M. P. and Sayu but thinking strawb3rry's right about M. P. being Rika therefore Blue is either Miki or Yossi... but since I still kinda think that Blue could be Rika then M. P is Yossi or Miki


*scratches head in fustration* gahh i just don't know

I love all the mysteruy guest though it makes your fanfic oh so much more addicting
« Last Edit: August 21, 2008, 02:24:22 AM by takagakifan »
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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #126 on: August 21, 2008, 02:46:26 AM »
AHHHH!!! I'LL NEVER FIGURE IT OUT!!!!!!  :OMG:   lol, its fun to try to guess though....hmmm, I'll throw in someone random for blue....um...its....MARI!!!!!  :mon spit: 


I guessed wrong, didn't I?

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #127 on: August 21, 2008, 04:00:11 AM »
know what? i don't want to guess anymore...

and you know what else?

 I'M BLUE... yes, I am blue and Rika is white

I'm sorry rika, i've fallen for sayu and i can't get up..

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #128 on: August 21, 2008, 05:39:08 PM »
 XD ^ the ultimate twist blue is tru XD
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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #129 on: August 21, 2008, 11:34:17 PM »
* * * * * * * *

"So, what do you think?"

"About what?"

"Haven't you heard a word I said?"

"Sorry..just got distracted is all."

"You can't keep doing that. We have a concert to do tonight, you know."

"What am I supposed to do?"

"You can start by stop looking at me that way."

"Why is that?"

"Come on, you already have me. So why are you still thinking that you don't?"

"I thought it was supposed to be the other way around."

"Well, you thought wrong."

I didn't care.

I put my arms around you and kissed you so sweetly.

You didn't even resist.

At that time, I could have my way with you.

You were my comforter, my security blanket.

I, too, had a problem with love.

I loved someone else before you, but she did me the same way.

I thought we also had something together.

Now, I have to find you and "her" to figure out what was going on.

I wish I could find "her" first.

That way, I can try and fix things right before I could fix "us".

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #130 on: August 21, 2008, 11:45:21 PM »
I'm sorry Rika, there's nothing to fix... there is no "us"

XD

... man... this blue is annoying... come on, tell white that she doesn't have you... at least, not anymore...

I've fallen for Sayu and I can't get up!

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #131 on: August 22, 2008, 02:02:50 AM »
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Damn, tru's blue!!! XD

Ah, I have no guesses whatsoever!! I just really wanna know!!! But now, we know they is something going on between white and blue. :?

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #132 on: August 22, 2008, 05:00:33 AM »
Tru?!?!? You were blue?!?!?   :mon ko:  I didn't see that comming....

So lets see if I understand this, blue is with sayu, but white is also involved with blue and the two of them have some sort of relationship...white seems a little unsure that blue loves her back, and blue is trying to reasure her that
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you already have me. So why are you still thinking that you don't?
. so either this is a flashback or blue is fooling around with two girls...oOo~ tru's a player!  :on ksweat:


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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #133 on: August 23, 2008, 03:52:08 AM »
^^ no, tru is NOT blue..btw, I forgot that this is a flashback, during when everything is beginning to take shape. I think I'll do some POV's with some girls later on.

* * * * * * * *

After the concert, hours later...

Wow..that's all I can say.

How do you do that to me?

No wonder you told me before this happened that you knew how to make me do the things you want me to do.

I don't think I can do that with anyone else but you.

I really want our relationship to last.

I believe you want it more than I do, the relationship I mean.

But I don't mind this either.

You're already asleep. Looks like you couldn't keep up your energy like you said you would.

Still, that was the best night ever.

I knew we had to wait, but you didn't want to wait any longer.

I wonder what you're thinking right now as you're sleeping.

Maybe I should get some sleep..who knows? I might see you in my dream.

I love you.

I kiss you goodnight and fall asleep next to you.

I never want this to end.

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #134 on: August 23, 2008, 05:53:21 PM »
Hehehe, I was wondering when you'd say something, cool_kickin_dude.

Oh, did they do what I think they did? :? That's interesting.... :P

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #135 on: August 28, 2008, 11:53:38 PM »
sorry for the long delay..have to make sure you guys know who blue is! :lol:

* * * * * * * *

Weeks later...

I can't believe it...

Why?

Why did she..?

No, it had to be a mistake.

She couldn't have done this to me.

I thought she would stay with me forever.

I should slap her. Slap her in the face hard.

that's exactly what I should do.

I'm so angry right now.

I'm angry at you.

I don't even want to see you again.

If it wasn't for concerts and rehearsals, I would do just that.

Also, there's that "other" thing we do.

I want to not even go on performing.

I thought she was better than that.

I thought she was my friend.

My one and only.

You said you would never betray me.

You lied to me right in my face.

I want to know why...before I slap her.

Then, I never want to see her again.

I never want to fall in love again.

I hope something bad happens to her.

Maybe she'll finally get what she deserves.

Maybe the person she falls in love with leaves her.

I don't think I'll ever find anyone like her. I'll be surprised if I do.

I'll go to sleep now..I have to meet her tomorrow.

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #136 on: August 29, 2008, 09:26:06 PM »
Just to clear things up... the last few chapters have all been flashbacks right? Blue isn't with mystery person now, that was before when she was hurt by someone else?
It better be coz if blue is with mystery person when she is with Sayu :angry:  :mon mad:

I'm still gonna stick to saying blue is Maki, which would then make mystery person Nacchi (in my eyes) and the person Koha is fangirling over would be Yossy coz I can't imagine Miki would be so into spending time with her like that XD But then where is Rika? Maybe mystery person is Rika coz wasn't there that rumor in some crappy tabloid about a love triangle between Rika/Yossy/Maki waaay back in the day? :lol: Which would then mean mystery person left blue for Yossy... Hmmm, so many possibilities, including ones we haven't thought about yet... Like Mako being blue!
Mako + Sayu would be  :mon lovelaff: (but I'd still prefer Maki :P )

EDIT:  Wait a minute, we've been making these guesses about who blue is but have we thought about the actual colour yet? I mean, all the other characters get their official colour when possible so maybe blue is blue for that reason too... oooohhhh, wasn't Mako blue?!?! :o :mon wtf:
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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #137 on: August 30, 2008, 12:42:33 AM »
Oh no, blue... :cry: I wanna know who they are for sure!!!

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #138 on: September 03, 2008, 01:37:14 AM »
sometimes I wonder where KonaKaga is..it's like I can't write without her! :lol:

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #139 on: September 03, 2008, 01:56:04 AM »
sometimes I wonder where KonaKaga is..it's like I can't write without her! :lol:

AHH! OMG! :bleed eyes: I didn't even realise that the story had been updated! I'm SO sorry! :on cloudeye:
Stupid notify didn't even notify me...
I'm pretty sure that you can write without me, but in a sad sort of way I'm happy that you can't?
Ok, ignore what I just said :sweatdrop:
Anyways! I read over the updates and..............................................I still have no idea who blue might be! :doh:

^^^ That's exactly what I was thinking about the colours!!!!! But maybe it's because CKD (cool_kickin_dude, can I call you that? Or is there some other nickname? Or should I just stick with cool_kickin_dude? :oops:) started off with that colour so therefore it's stuck to the character. Plus, if it's not Makoto then it makes it more interesting to solve :P
Since there's a few updates that I missed I won't quote and stuff BUT I'll do it on the next update. I'm keeping my eyes peeled for it! :stunned:
 


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