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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #80 on: August 11, 2008, 11:42:18 PM »
Woo~ I can't wait to review this chapter!

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WOW...

She really knows how to kiss someone.

Wait, don't think that, Sayu.

You have to do something.

You have to make her yours and only yours.

I can't wait for her to call me tonight.

I wish I kissed her back..she really is a great kisser.

I wish I can kiss someone like that.

Wait, she can teach you.

Sayu...what is going on in that head of yours?

Raging hormones for Sayu? XD

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"Sayu?"

"Oh, sorry Ai-chan. I'll be out in a minute."

"Sayu? Can I talk to you for a second?"

"We gotta finish our rehearsals for the song. It's just one more routine."

Me and Gaki-san watched our leader leave before we walked out my dressing room together.
Apology time?

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"Gaki-san?" I asked.

"What is it?"

"I'm sorry."
Yup.

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"For what? You didn't do anything wrong."

"I was jealous of you and Kamei-chan being together."

I could feel Gaki-san's arms hugging me as we continued to walk towards the rehearsal room. However, I could still see that Gaki-san is still hurt about something. "What's wrong?" I asked.


"I still have to tell you what happened," she said.

"Don't worry about it now," I said.

"I have to ask..who came in just now?"
Wait a second. When did somebody come in? And where? Aren't Sayu and Risa walking to the rehearsal room?

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"It's a secret."

"Don't worry. I won't pry into it."

So, Sayu has a secret?

Wait, I know someone who had a secret before.

However, she never told me about it...or about that person.

Until I found out about it too late.

I hate to say it, but it was all her fault..and I thought she was my friend.

But I'm not mad at Sayu. I never was.

I hope she and this person fall in love..and hopefully neither of them get hurt.

Like I was long ago.

So the person who had a secret was Ai and it was about her and Reina and Ai never told Risa. So Risa must have found out about it either when she confessed to Ai or when she saw the two together. So that's how Risa was hurt.

Hmm...interesting. I don't know why but I'm beginning to wonder how the story is going to end O_o I always think about endings way too soon  :sweatdrop:
Also, shouldn't Risa's thoughts at the end be in green, not pink? But I guess you signified that it was Risa because it was in italics, so life's good. I can't wait for the next update!


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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #81 on: August 11, 2008, 11:46:24 PM »
Sayu's mind is starting to sound like Kame-chan!!! Oh no, it's about Ai-chan, isn't it? :( Poor Gaki. She was in love with her but then Reina came in the picture. I hope Gaki really loves Kame, and isn't just using her to get over Ai-chan. On a slightly happier note, I hope Sayu and blue get together.
We're not gonna find out who blue is until the end, are we? :P

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #82 on: August 12, 2008, 04:23:54 AM »
Thank goodness practice is over.

I thought that it never will end.

But thank goodness we're prepared for the video.

To be honest, I rather would be singing than dancing.

It's almost time to leave.

Too bad I have no plans for tonight.

I wonder what Sayu will be doing tonight?

I know she's been excited since this morning.

Of course, she wouldn't tell me what it was.

I sometimes feel left out when everybody is gone.

Gaki-san with Eri, Ai-chan with Reina, and now Sayu with this mysterious person...

It does seem like I'm all alone.

I could hang out with Mitsui, Linlin and Junjun...but it's not the same.

I wish someone could...

Wait, I know who to call!

What were you thinking, Koharu-chan?

I dial the one number I needed to call.

Come on...pick up..

Yes! You answered!

"Hi, are you busy right now?"

Please say no...

"Great! I just got out from practice. Wanna do something?"


* * * * * * * *

I thought you were going to meet me outside as a surprise.

To me, that would have been better than a call.

I'm almost on my way home, until you call me.

"Hello?" I answered.


"You've been waiting for me?" you asked.

"Of course. Where are you?"

"In front of you."

"Don't be silly."

"I'm at your house right now."

Rats..why can't I run faster?

I run so hard that I nearly collapse.

Luckily, I can see my house. I start to walk again until I see someone come towards me.

That was when I saw you.

You offered your hand and I took it.

That was when I saw that we were walking away from my house.

I try to say something but you put your fingers to my lips.

I let you take me where you want to go.

I rather have you take my lips into yours right now.



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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #83 on: August 12, 2008, 03:07:27 PM »
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Thank goodness practice is over.

I thought that it never will end.

But thank goodness we're prepared for the video.

To be honest, I rather would be singing than dancing.

It's almost time to leave.

Too bad I have no plans for tonight.

I wonder what Sayu will be doing tonight?

I know she's been excited since this morning.

Of course, she wouldn't tell me what it was.

I sometimes feel left out when everybody is gone.

Gaki-san with Eri, Ai-chan with Reina, and now Sayu with this mysterious person...

It does seem like I'm all alone.

I could hang out with Mitsui, Linlin and Junjun...but it's not the same.

I wish someone could...

Wait, I know who to call!

What were you thinking, Koharu-chan?

I dial the one number I needed to call.

Come on...pick up..

Yes! You answered!

"Hi, are you busy right now?"

Please say no...

"Great! I just got out from practice. Wanna do something?"

So it was Koharu! :O Well now I want to know who she phoned :P Miki maybe?


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I thought you were going to meet me outside as a surprise.

To me, that would have been better than a call.

I'm almost on my way home, until you call me.

"Hello?" I answered.


"You've been waiting for me?" you asked.

"Of course. Where are you?"

"In front of you."

"Don't be silly."

"I'm at your house right now."

Rats..why can't I run faster?

I run so hard that I nearly collapse.
XD Sayu's really running, huh? Considering she isn't exactly the best runner...

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Luckily, I can see my house. I start to walk again until I see someone come towards me.

That was when I saw you.

You offered your hand and I took it.

That was when I saw that we were walking away from my house.

I try to say something but you put your fingers to my lips.

I let you take me where you want to go.

I rather have you take my lips into yours right now.

All I can say is  :wub:


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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #84 on: August 12, 2008, 05:18:42 PM »
Ah, so red is Koha! I wonder who she called too! Can't wait to see where blue takes Sayu!! :w00t:

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #85 on: August 12, 2008, 07:06:04 PM »

DAMNIT!!!  :farofflook:

WHO THE F**K IS BLUE??? :OMG:

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. by the way NICE STORY  XD...

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #86 on: August 12, 2008, 08:41:08 PM »
Woohoo i was right... FINALLY!!!


Oh Blue who are you???
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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #87 on: August 12, 2008, 11:05:10 PM »
She's doing it again...making me wait.

I know I love her, but she's starting to get on my nerves on her waiting.

I wonder how things got this way.

Wait..she couldn't be that she and...

No, Reina! She's supposed to be yours and yours alone.

Still though, I sometimes wonder if she has feelings for...

There are other girls that I like to date, but...

Oh no...

That feeling is here again.

I've had that feeling for a while now, but I never told anybody.

Besides, they wouldn't believe me anyway.

Uh-oh...here she comes..

Pull yourself together here!


"Sorry about that," you said. "Ready to go?"

"Let's go already," I said impatiently.

"Okay, okay." You gave me a kiss on the lips before we headed out. Then, unexpectedly, you had an idea.

"You know, my parents are gone for the weekend."

"So? What are you saying?"

"Wanna sleep over tonight?"

I hand her my phone.

"Call my parents and we'll be even."


* * * * * * * *

"Gaki-san?"

"Mhm?"

"Thanks for the movie and ice cream."

"You're welcome. Now will you let me sleep?"

"Okay, sorry. Goodnight."

"Goodnight. I love you."

"I love you too."

You wrap your arms around me as I try to go back to sleep. Unfortunately, she ruined my dream.

The one dream I had for a while.

I would tell you about it, but I would never want to hurt you.

It's all that person's fault.

But I believe I'm a lot happier when I'm with you.

Whoever thought a Gokkie would love a Rokkie this much as I love you?

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #88 on: August 13, 2008, 12:10:50 AM »
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She's doing it again...making me wait.

I know I love her, but she's starting to get on my nerves on her waiting.

Uh-oh :-\

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I wonder how things got this way.

Wait..she couldn't be that she and...

No, Reina! She's supposed to be yours and yours alone.

Still though, I sometimes wonder if she has feelings for...

There are other girls that I like to date, but...

Oh no...

That feeling is here again.

I've had that feeling for a while now, but I never told anybody.

Besides, they wouldn't believe me anyway.

Uh-oh...here she comes..

Pull yourself together here!

I don't like the sounds of where this is going :(
I wonder who the "other girls" are?

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"Sorry about that," you said. "Ready to go?"

"Let's go already," I said impatiently.

"Okay, okay." You gave me a kiss on the lips before we headed out. Then, unexpectedly, you had an idea.

"You know, my parents are gone for the weekend."

"So? What are you saying?"

"Wanna sleep over tonight?"

I hand her my phone.

"Call my parents and we'll be even."
Wait a sec, wasn't than't a bit mixed up? Ai said that Reina had an idea, but Ai was the one with the idea. Or are you referring to Reina saying to Ai to phone her parents?


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"Gaki-san?"

"Mhm?"

"Thanks for the movie and ice cream."

"You're welcome. Now will you let me sleep?"

"Okay, sorry. Goodnight."

"Goodnight. I love you."

"I love you too."
Risa seems a bit annoyed at Eri, but not in a bad way just as in about how Eri keeps thanking her.
Hehe they're sharing a bed :shy2:

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You wrap your arms around me as I try to go back to sleep. Unfortunately, she ruined my dream.

The one dream I had for a while.

I would tell you about it, but I would never want to hurt you.

It's all that person's fault.

But I believe I'm a lot happier when I'm with you.

Whoever thought a Gokkie would love a Rokkie this much as I love you?


Ahh, I wonder if Risa should tell Eri... I think that either way Eri might be hurt.
All I can hope is that Risa really does love Eri and that she's not just believing that she's happier.
Maybe the plot will take a twist and Reina and Ai break up and Risa and Eri break up. Then Ai and Risa will be together and Reina and Eri will be together? I highly doubt it. Afterall, GakiKame=WIN :D


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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #89 on: August 13, 2008, 05:52:03 AM »
"Where are we going?" I asked.

"You'll see," you said.

I couldn't remember if I asked you that question the second time or the hundreth time.

My head's still a little dizzy from running, but your embrace makes me feel a little better.

I wish you would just take me to where we were going.

I know I'm impatient, but I want you to surprise me.

Just like that kiss you gave me this morning.


"Well, here we are," you said.

"Wait..are we at your house?" I asked.

"Of course. Where was you think we were going?"

You led me inside without saying a word. No sooner than we stepped inside, we began to make our way to the one room which we would stay for awhile.

Your room.

"Ummm...are you sure it's okay?" I asked.


"Sayu...you worry too much."

That was when you began to tickle me. I wanted to tickle back, but you were too strong for me to do so.

That's another thing I like you to do to me.

Unfortunately, if I wasn't so dizzy from the running, I would have enjoyed it.

The next thing I remembered was lying on your bed, with you curled beside me.

The next thing...your lips to mine.

Oh, how I wanted you to do that to me all night.

How I wanted to stay with you all night.


"My cute bunny Sayu," you replied softly to me.

"Cute?" I asked. "I'm supposed to be sexy, remember?"

"I heard about that. Why don't you show me?"

"You mean...for you?"

"Sure, why not?"

"Can we just kiss for right now?"

"Sure, but I want to see your sexy side later."

We began to kiss for quite a while. It was everything that I hoped for.

No..what I wanted for so long.

I really want her as my girlfriend.

I'm not ashamed to say it at all.

I want to tell the whole world about it.

I'll worry about all that tomorrow.

Right now, I just want you.


So, Sayu's in charge of sexy, eh?

I'll have to make sure she lets me see it.

Usually, in concerts, she usually addresses her cute side.

But now, she tells me that she's in charge of the sexiness of the group.

Hmmm...wonder what I could do?

I'll have to think of something during work tomorrow.

Right now, I just want to get lost in your kiss for the rest of the night.

Don't worry, I'll practice you.

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #90 on: August 13, 2008, 06:04:02 AM »
For some reason with that part
It made me think the blue was Yossui...weird...

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #91 on: August 13, 2008, 06:20:49 AM »
^i get the same vibes as you... ... ....... .. eh?!

* tru  falls on her knees in the middle of a field

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

nice short updates! keep it up and keep 'em coming!

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #92 on: August 13, 2008, 07:13:49 AM »
Boo, I missed an update! :lol: Anyway, Reina is thinking about other girls... :shocked: NOOO!!! Ai-chan broke Gaki's heart to be with her, she can't just do that!!! And Gaki still thinking about Ai-chan, but she loves Eri more. At least they seem ok.
Ooooooooooh, blue and Sayu in bed!!! :twisted: And blue wants to see the sexy side!! As do I. As for it being Yossy, I don't think so. I'm just not seeing that.

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #93 on: August 13, 2008, 09:33:54 AM »
hmm i want to say the blue is a H!P soloist but i can't finger who it could be  :?
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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #94 on: August 13, 2008, 11:09:43 AM »
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"Sayu...you worry too much."

That was when you began to tickle me. I wanted to tickle back, but you were too strong for me to do so.
this gave me the vibes...

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #95 on: August 13, 2008, 04:18:18 PM »
^ but it's not too hard to be stronger than Sayu XD And Maki still fits for that part.
With saying that, I also got the Yossy vibes in that part :lol:
I'm gonna keep hoping it's Maki though seeing that's how I'm reading it now... I just can't help but see Maki there.

This ReinAi and GakiKame stuff is getting really really interesting too!

I must say, this is becoming as addictive as Runaway from the Past... I've even dreamt about reading the both of them before XD

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #96 on: August 13, 2008, 11:08:59 PM »
@lollipopgirl:thanks for reading! I'm glad I got new people ehre reading..who knows? it MIGHT(grain of salt) win FotM. Was you dreaming of reading both fics or both couples?

* * * * * * * *

"Gaki-san?"

"Ai-chan?"

"Where are you?"

"I'm right here..where are you?"

"Just stay there..I'm coming."

I see you.

You feel sad and lost.

I run to you, but you start to turn away.

I had feelings, but I thought that...

No..I really did like you.

I wrap my arms around you from behind.

"Gaki-san...I need you."


"I need you too, Ai-chan."

"Let's start over together."

"I really want to..but I can't."

"Why not?"

"Because...you--

"No!"

I'm awake.

I look over and see that you're not there.

I was so close to wishing you were.

Having you there next to me.

That's the only thing I want.

Wait, Ai-chan. Are you forgetting something?

Reina could have heard you..thank goodness she didn't hear me.

I lay down next to her, wishing it was you.

Why, Gaki-san, why?


* * * * * * * *

"Gaki-san? Gaki-san!"

"Huh? What is it?"

"You were talking in your sleep."

"I was?"

"You're scaring me. Are you okay?"

"I think so. Just a bad dream, that was all."

"Don't worry. I'll protect you."

You wrap your arms around me as you fall asleep again. I kissed your nose as you wake up and smile. You kiss me for a few minutes before we fall asleep together.

I know you'll protect me.

I promise you I'll never hurt you.

I wish it was that easy, since I see Ai-chan every day.

I wonder if we'll ever be able to talk?

Could we ever move on?

The problem is...I love Kamei-chan.

I'm sorry, Ai-chan. I don't want our friendship destroyed over this.

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #97 on: August 13, 2008, 11:17:17 PM »
/meow roars: MOAR! /roar

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #98 on: August 14, 2008, 12:05:19 AM »
Oshit, Ai-chan loves Gaki when she's with Reina but not when both Gaki and herself were available???? AHHHHHHHH!!!! But Gaki has some feelings for her still, but she loves Kame. And she doesn't want to hurt the one she really loves. So they aren't talking?
You are tugging on my heartstrings, cool_kickin_dude!!! :D

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Re: Acceptance
« Reply #99 on: August 14, 2008, 01:45:26 AM »
soo sad everyone in this story is getting hurt... was already hurt... or about to be hurt :cry:
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