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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #140 on: December 06, 2008, 08:05:51 AM »
Sleepy, but had to get the update read. Hopefully I'm not that incoherent here. :P


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Eri yawned widely as she traipsed groggily down a relatively empty hallway. She had woken up late, thereby missing her early morning class at the university, but she had come anyway. She did have a lesson afterwards in any case, so missing her first class didn't mean she had to miss her second one.

It was not that Eri was that much of a conscientious student; it was just that when she was at school, she was out of the direct surveillance imposed on her by her father. It was the result of numerous attempts involving begging, pleading and assorted other probably underhanded tactics that she managed to get him to agree to have her bodyguards wait outside of campus instead of trailing her like obedient guard dogs.
So basically, it's the only time when Eri could actually have some REAL, private time for herself. o_o

Dang, does Eri know that dear-ol' daddy's a spy? :O



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In any case, they were merely a quick call away, and Eri had the suspicion that her father had probably stuck tracking devices on most of her belongings in case of any kidnapping. He was that kind of man, always planning for the worst case scenario.
Dang...maybe she does. :o



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It was a scene Eri was used to seeing every time she had morning classes; everyone seemed to be a veritable zombie until they had coffee or after noon...whichever came first.
Yep, that's how I usually was during my mornings in university. :lol:



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Currently, the object of her thoughts revolved around a certain enigmatic freelance journalist.

Takahashi Ai, age 21. Parents divorced when she was young, custodial rights given to her father. Both parents confirmed dead at present time, sole remaining relative being a younger half sister. Portfolio centering around war-related photography, and was involved in an undisclosed hostage situation overseas that was successfully resolved without much public outcry.

Yes, Eri had done her research. She might not look like it, but she had inherited her father's natural inquisitivity. Plus, her father's name seemed to open doors when it came to accessing archival records in general. Having a government agent for a father could be useful at times.
Wow, could Aichan's plan have gone any better? Why go after your target when you can get your target to willingly come to you? :D



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Frankly, this person fascinated her. The concept of a woman, traveling alone and free, to dangerous and exotic locales boggled Eri's imagination. For someone who had lived her entire life in metropolitan Tokyo under the watchful eye of numerous custodians and even more bodyguards, that kind of freedom to simply come and go as one willed was completely alien to her.
Well,  Aichan's little act showed Eri a type of life that she had never though possible for herself. And psychologically, it IS common for the mind to be intrigued by and desire that which it's never had/experienced before.



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Her thoughts were briefly interrupted as she turned a corner, running straight into someone else.

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"I'm sorry for bumping into you. Here, your papers." Eri looked at the girl. Pretty and fashionable, with dark hair and unbelievably fair skin. Shrugging, Eri took the papers back, feeling charitable enough not to throw a fit at the other girl for bumping into her.

...

They parted ways, shoulders brushing past each other as they moved in opposite directions. The musical jingle of a ringtone lit the air as they passed each other, punctuated by a clear voice as the other girl answered the phone.

"What do you want now?" Pause. "No I refuse to miss class again." Growing fainter now, as the distance between them increased. "Oh all right, whatever, be that way. I'll see you..."

Boyfriend, most likely. Eri surmised as the other girl went out of earshot, still talking animatedly into her phone.
Hmmmm...missing class...again? Guess this "mystery" girl had better "hop" to it.  :D



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"You had better have a good reason for making me miss class again." A disgruntled Michishige Sayumi glared at a nonchalant Takahashi Ai, who shut her book and looked up with a pleased expression as her companion sat down opposite her.
HA!!! I knew it! :w00t:

Question now is...was it just coincidence that it was Sayu that bumped into Eri? Did Aichan have one (or both of them) under surveillance?



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"Always the narcissist. I am going to miss you."

Sayu fought the curiosity from her voice. "What, are you going somewhere?"

"Perhaps." Pale fingers played with silken strands of hair. "I'm going to be otherwise...occupied for a while, so I won't be meeting you quite as often. Just letting you know in case you thought I dropped off the face of the earth or something."
Interesting.  Very interesting that a person in Aichan's position, doing what she does, would take this time to say goodbye to someone "just in case" it's the last time they see them.


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Unless, of course, this is yet ANOTHER part of Aichan's plan. This would mean that we should probably expect Eri to see the two of them (Aichan and Sayu) together from somewhere afar, which would then lead to Eri finding and befriending Sayu to find out more about Aichan, which would eventually lead to Eri getting closer to Aichan, which would THEN lead to whatever final objective Aichan had.  :shocked:



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"Ah~ That's good, I can finally catch up on my rest for once." She showed none of her concern for Ai, knowing that the latter would not appreciate any unneeded emotion between them.
Well, I don't know that Sayu should be sure about that part about Aichan not appreciating it. While they both were okay with their relationship the way it was (i.e. together, yet not "together"), they still share a closeness/intimacy that one can't have with any random person. Aichan's job makes being in a relationship a bad idea, but that's not saying that she doesn't/can't know or understand the feelings of closeness between people, of how no matter how much you try, you can't help but get attached to the various people in your life.



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"You should work out more often, usagi-chan. Your stamina is horrible." Ai teased back, eliciting a light flush across said bunny girl's cheeks.

"You give me enough of a workout any day, why should I bother?" Sayu shot back instantly, and a self-satisfied smirk crossed Ai's face.=
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayum. :twisted:



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Much, much later, they lay tangled between the sheets, panting slightly from their exertions.

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"Don't die." The whisper cut through the room like a chill wind. A soft, wispy sound, huffed out by someone very much out of breath. Ai stilled, still on top of Sayu, but her hands had frozen.

Clear, watery eyes looking up, through the darkness. They could not see each other, but Ai definitely felt it as Sayu's small hand cupped her cheek, pulling her closer.

"You can't die." Repeated, more firmly this time. Ai closed her eyes, felt the warmth traveling from Sayu's palm and on into her. She leaned into the caress, just briefly.
Sayu's just let Aichan know that she's important to her.  Considering the dynamic of their relationship, this is probably as close to an emotional/raburabu moment between the two of them that we'll get.   :wub:



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"You talk too much."

The next time, they came together.
:mon blood:



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As if it was their first time, as if it would be their last. Past and future didn't exist; there was only the now.

Only the now mattered.

Now and forever.
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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #141 on: December 06, 2008, 01:52:24 PM »
awesome update~!

hehe I find it funny how everyone is missing their lessons due to one Takahashi Ai.  I bet Risa missed several classes if not a couple of days after what happened with Ai.

I got all excited knowing that Eri was at school...had the feeling she would run into someone.  I kept hoping for Sayu since she's been away for awhile and I miss the fun she brings to the story.  And the chapter was certainly funny with her reappearance. 

lol princess Eri was funny too! with letting the commoners pick up the mess and all XD  Too bad Sayu didn't say Ai's name...that would have kept Eri's interest...though I can't see the two of them getting together in this story.

Sayu telling Ai not to die...darn...I just can't stop wanting this pair to work out.  poor risa. 

ahhh so brainwashed...can't stop thinking of bishi Ai after this chap


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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #142 on: December 06, 2008, 01:54:28 PM »
Yay~ New chapter~ XD (sorry for not commenting lately, but I have been keeping up, I promise!)

As usual, I love Eri. XD; But I do pity her because her life is so controlled. :( I hope Aichan can fix that ;D (or do I? o_O)

I gotta say, I like how you made Sayu and Eri run into eachother, then pass eachother. Even if they didn't pay any attention to one another, it was a good transition to one character to another :D (would make an awesome movie scene like that~)

Now onto Sayu and Aichan. I gotta say, their relationship intrigues me. I like how they're close physically, but not at all emotionally, but at the same time, I don't like it :/ I'm curious as to what happens to them in the future. XD

Hmm, what's Aichan's next mission? Write more, already~ XD!!

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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #143 on: December 07, 2008, 05:25:18 PM »
i got this feeling that ai-chan cares about sayu than gaki........hmp! i hope eri and gaki will meet and will make ai-chan jealous! hahahaha :fainted:




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Re: Fic of the Month // Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #144 on: December 08, 2008, 03:51:43 AM »
yyaaaaaaa! yay~ new chappie~   :w00t:
Kamei is sleepy <3 thinking of Ai.  :lol:

Ai n' Sayu part is sweet~  XD , i need to know moar~ <3

@ Sukoshi omfg.  :wub: , yea. after that thing. i want them to work out XD , they're so cute. and..fleshy XD

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Re: Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #145 on: December 10, 2008, 06:37:02 AM »
If I didn't know better I would have thought Ai actually liked Sayu. Wait.... she doesn't, does she? I mean so far she seems like she treats all the girls equally. In the "love" sense I mean.

I liked the KameShige bumping into each other's part. I would've said "banged" but Stef knows why using that terms seems so wrong XD

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Re: Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #146 on: January 01, 2009, 10:16:34 PM »
I'm back! Sorry about the delay! I know it was vacation and all, but I was busy gaming instead of writing. >_> Sorry...^_^;;;;

Comment replies first then!


rokun: Hehe well I guess it does rather feel that way doesn't it? o_O Haa....Gaki never stood a chance here to begin with? *is shot by all the TakaGaki fans* Oops. XD The Eri plot is a pretty big part of the story, I admit. Main plot though? I dunno. I don't even know if I have a real plot or if I'm just making it up as I go along. :P Let's just say that this mission will take a bit longer than usual since it's not your average kill and all. :D That's all I'm giving away.

Ichigo-chan: You just keep bringing Gaki up...which means that I will have to bring her back somewhere in the future. >.> Well, not that I wasn't planning to already, but seriously....xD Heh Ai did her job well enough such that a cursory search would turn up basic information. It's not really all that difficult to plant things if you know the system. >D

Fenrir: The Ai/Sayu seems strong in this one, no? Heh. I wonder. XD Poor Gaki-san indeed. Ehehehe.

SxY: I guess I really have to bring Gaki back in soon. People keep asking after her. Don't worry, she's not dead (yet...oops, did I say anything? :P).  Yeah Ai/Sayu <3.

JFC: Your long comments make me happy. Unfortunately my brain can't churn out anymore long replies at 5 in the morning. Sorry. ^^; But the Ai/Sayu is complicated, yes it is. Whether they're just denying it or not...well, who really knows? *shrug*

Sukoshi: Come to the dark side! Ai/Sayu <3. XD Brainwashed is good. Bishie Ai is hawt. XD If you're straight, you still get shot. If you're already batting for the home team, well, there's a home run for you. Ok now I'm lame. Must be the lack of sleep talking. XD

Saikami: Yeah poor Eri and her controlled life. D: And you're right about the physical relationship Ai/Sayu have. Not so much emotional but who knows? XD I'm more a tea person myself but....I need sleep now! :P

ayase909: Haha you're also for the TakaGaki camp huh. Lol. Ai does care about Gaki in her own way...it's just really hard to see. XD Like, really. Very. A lot. I'm not making very much sense now am I? XD

ringo-hime: Well, here's moar, just not moar of the right thing? I have to get the plot advanced somehow, or a certain someone *coughrokuncough* will nag me about it again. XD

lil_hamz: Haha who knows what Ai is up to? Hehehe. I like keeping things vague. You and your double entendres. :P You think too much la. XD


Alright time to edit and post. :P

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Re: Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #147 on: January 01, 2009, 10:23:25 PM »
-squeazes in- Weeedge o_

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Re: Nocturne [File #11]
« Reply #148 on: January 01, 2009, 10:24:18 PM »
me tooo~~~~
Finally!!! XD

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Re: Nocturne [File #12]
« Reply #149 on: January 01, 2009, 10:25:50 PM »
File #12


The soft clink of wine glasses, the swirl of red splashing against the sides. Dark brown met hazed grey, marred only by thin lenses reflecting the soft lighting of the restaurant. Thin lips pursed into a tight smile, geniality coming as naturally as ducks to water.

The two men regarded each other diffidently as they sipped at their own glasses, not really drinking but merely taking the opportunity to observe. Glasses-man put down his glass, looking politely at his senior as his long fingers threaded into each other before him.

"I am glad that we can work together again, Kamei-sama." The younger man seemed less sturdy next to the older but still athletic-looking Kamei Otosuke, whose silver-shot hair lent him a distinguished air but did not indicate any signs of frailty.

"The pleasure is mine." An exchange of pleasantries, after the actual business had already been conducted. The older man set down his glass. "But you should know that I prefer not to mix business with pleasure, Ichijiro."

"Ah yes, of course." A tactical error. A lunch between former acquaintances should not be tainted by matters related to work. That was what Otosuke preferred to maintain. Of course, sometimes the confluence was inevitable. Regrettable, but unavoidable.

"The ambience here is good, is it not?" Ichijiro attempted to shift the topic to inconsequential matters. The meal was simply to please his sometimes finicky business partner and senior in life, and he was anxious to make a good impression on the older man.

"The pianist is moderately skilled." Otosuke allowed, glancing around. The booth allowed some privacy from the rest of the restaurant, but vision around its interior was largely unimpaired. Age old paranoia had ensured that he always picked a location where he could not be easily surprised, regardless of where he went.

"It's a relatively new place, I hope you did not have much trouble locating it." Ichijiro seemed apologetic, almost anxious for approval. Otosuke shook his head shortly.

"Not at all." His smile turned ironic. "Though you will forgive an old man for being late, I hope?"

"Of course! Surely a busy man like yourself will naturally be delayed..." Otosuke tuned the rest of it out. He knew what the man's intentions were, naturally. However, he was not particularly susceptible to bribery nor flattery.

Instead, he kept a close eye out on his surroundings. Never mind that he could afford bodyguards and did have them lurking around, but old habits died hard. That and, considering how he was delayed on his way here, he had every reason to remain cautious.

The music stopped. His gaze shifted sharply to the slightly raised platform in a corner of the dining area, where a grand piano stood. The pianist, a tall girl with a distinctly foreign cast to her face, was talking urgently to the manager, gesturing at her watch with a worried expression on her face.

Ichijiro had also stopped to regard the minor scene outside. At this time of the day, there weren't particularly that many people in the restaurant, and few of the tables were occupied. The pianist appeared slightly agitated that she was apparently not being allowed to leave, and from what little Otosuke could read from her body language, she seemed to be in a hurry.

"Foreigners these days...they should count themselves lucky to employed with the economy in such a state." Ichijiro seemed dismissive of the situation, turning away to look back at Otosuke.

"Of course..." The older man appeared mildly distracted as he started to turn his attention back to his companion across the table, but a new arrival managed to snag his attention. His gaze raked sharply back across that vaguely familiar outline, his mind piecing together the image almost instantly.

Tokyo's too big for such coincidences. He thought grimly to himself, tugging contemplatively on his cuffs as he faced the talkative Ichijiro. Instinct warned him of danger; curiosity yearned to take better measure of the one girl who had met his gaze head on and not so much even as blinked.

The hidden dragon smiled to himself as he waved a waiter over. Time to see if the young phoenix would be worthy of its name.

~*~*~

"Are you sure you can play? This is a high-class restaurant, we can't let third-raters in here." The manager seemed rather concerned as he eyed the tiny girl next to his usual pianist.

"Takahashi-san should be fine. You will help me, won't you?" The tall Chinese girl looked positively distressed as she turned pleading eyes on the shorter woman.

"Of course, you go on your way now, your sister's waiting." Takahashi smiled and patted the taller girl's arm. To the manager, she only shot a flippant glance before striding over to sit down by the piano.

"I haven't played in a while, but this should still be tolerable." Soft fingers stroked the keys almost lovingly, coaxing gentle tones from the instrument. She exhaled slowly as she played a few notes, flexing her fingers before setting them back down on the keys.

"Hush now..." Her hands glided over the keys effortlessly. Her eyes seemed oddly distant as fingers picked up the melody effortlessly. The sound was almost eerie, ominous even, but strangely beautiful.

"Nocturne..." She breathed, eyes closed in silent yearning.

Let our festival begin!

~*~*~

"That's an unusual tune to hear..." Ichijiro raised an eyebrow as the music began again.

"Interesting choice though." Otosuke observed, calmly taking another sip of wine. His eyes did not leave the pianist. "Certainly, a lot of restrained passion in it."

And to begin in the middle... Kamei Otosuke was a man of fine tuned instincts. And right now instinct told him that there was something to be read from this performance.

"Kamei-sama is well versed in music too?" Ichijiro inquired politely. Otosuke smiled briefly.

"In my free time. It calms me." He tugged at his cuff links again. Though outwardly relaxed, his shoulders were still tense from an earlier encounter. Fending off an attempt on one's life did tend to put one's nerves on edge.

Kamei Otosuke was fully justified in his paranoia given his colorful past and its current effect on his present life. Any less care and he would have been a dead man. Such was his life.

"Regrettably, it seems that my time is short." Ichijiro seemed a little disappointed by the announcement, but inclined his head in acquiescence, calling for the bill. Kamei kept staring at the new pianist, already wondering if his previous action had been correct. Instinct wanted him to leave this character alone; but something above that overruled it.

His daughter, his only child, had unfortunately taken an interest in someone. And if he was not mistaken, that someone was currently playing the piano no less than 10 feet away from him.

He would do anything for his daughter, never mind that he occasionally seemed distant to her. She was all he had, after her mother, his wife, had passed away more than 10 years ago. He would do anything to make her smile, even if it cost him his life.

Not that he intended to pay that much. The elder Kamei was as miserly as a turtle was slow. But he did what had to be done to win the race. That was what was important.

Their eyes met as he stood, and there was no question that she had noticed him, though he felt no malice, or indeed, any other emotion. Just a studying curiosity, as a child would behold some strange new creature and wonder what it does. His own gaze was as frigid as an igloo, revealing nothing.

And then the moment was lost to the music, as she threw herself back into it. Restrained passion had ebbed into a more stately cadence, yet losing none of its yearning, the magic inherent within.

The last note trickled off into stone silence as he stepped out. And waited.

One would come, and he would be ready. When was he ever not?


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References to Hidden Dragon and Young Phoenix. Blame it on me playing too much Romance of the 3 Kingdoms lately. Those two terms refer to genius strategists during the 3 Kingdoms era of China. Hidden Dragon usually refers to Zhuge Liang (for those unaware, he's considered the master strategist of his time), while Young Phoenix refers to Pang Tong (also a good strategist, but unfortunately was caught in an ambush and died). Does it have any bearing on the story? Who knows? XD

The piece that Ai was playing is the piano solo adapted from the Fetes or Festivals movement of the orchestral composition by Claude Debussy, known as Nocturnes. Yes I chose it deliberately. Hehehe. Here's a link for anyone who wants to hear it.

Alright I'm bushed. Time for bed. XD

Edit: Two wedges? o_O *feels stretched* Ahhh I'm falling~ *bricked*

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Re: Nocturne [File #12]
« Reply #150 on: January 01, 2009, 10:38:15 PM »
Now we get Papa Kamei's look on his daughter's fondness of Ai-chan as well as a little more detail about him. :P He doesn't seem to be too bothered but suspicious? I'd say so. I think he sees more into Ai-chan than Eri does. Now I'm really curious about why Ai-chan is watching him in the first place. Is it really him she needs to eliminate? Or is it an associate of his? If it indeed is him, why? Too many possibilities and knowing you, it's probably something no one else can think of. :lol:

What can I say? TakaGaki is my favorite pairing! XD

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Re: Nocturne [File #12]
« Reply #151 on: January 01, 2009, 11:05:09 PM »
Father Kamei-san seems to have already picked up more about Ai-chan than Eri herself... He's already suspicious of her, too. I wonder if it's really him she's tailing though. Maybe it's just someone he's around more often? Hmm... I wonder how things will play out...

And...well, when a girl is tied up, and just sexually abused/used, you tend to worry about her. :sweatdrop: Poor Gaki-san...

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Re: Nocturne [File #12]
« Reply #152 on: January 02, 2009, 09:25:01 AM »
File #12

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The soft clink of wine glasses, the swirl of red splashing against the sides. Dark brown met hazed grey, marred only by thin lenses reflecting the soft lighting of the restaurant. Thin lips pursed into a tight smile, geniality coming as naturally as ducks to water.

The two men regarded each other diffidently as they sipped at their own glasses, not really drinking but merely taking the opportunity to observe. Glasses-man put down his glass, looking politely at his senior as his long fingers threaded into each other before him.

"I am glad that we can work together again, Kamei-sama." The younger man seemed less sturdy next to the older but still athletic-looking Kamei Otosuke, whose silver-shot hair lent him a distinguished air but did not indicate any signs of frailty.

"The pleasure is mine." An exchange of pleasantries, after the actual business had already been conducted. The older man set down his glass. "But you should know that I prefer not to mix business with pleasure, Ichijiro."
Ummmmmmmmm...nohomo? :?

Ichijiro knows "the business" that Eri's dad is in, doesn't he? He's probably in it himself (possibly even as a former protoge of Otosuke's).



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The booth allowed some privacy from the rest of the restaurant, but vision around its interior was largely unimpaired. Age old paranoia had ensured that he always picked a location where he could not be easily surprised, regardless of where he went.
Well, you know what they say about old habits.



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The music stopped. His gaze shifted sharply to the slightly raised platform in a corner of the dining area, where a grand piano stood. The pianist, a tall girl with a distinctly foreign cast to her face, was talking urgently to the manager, gesturing at her watch with a worried expression on her face.

Ichijiro had also stopped to regard the minor scene outside. At this time of the day, there weren't particularly that many people in the restaurant, and few of the tables were occupied. The pianist appeared slightly agitated that she was apparently not being allowed to leave, and from what little Otosuke could read from her body language, she seemed to be in a hurry.
Ah. I'm guessing that her shift is probably done, but her replacement hasn't arrived yet. Problem is, at a swanky place like this the diners "cannot" go without some "ambiance".



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The older man appeared mildly distracted as he started to turn his attention back to his companion across the table, but a new arrival managed to snag his attention. His gaze raked sharply back across that vaguely familiar outline, his mind piecing together the image almost instantly.

Tokyo's too big for such coincidences
. He thought grimly to himself, tugging contemplatively on his cuffs as he faced the talkative Ichijiro. Instinct warned him of danger; curiosity yearned to take better measure of the one girl who had met his gaze head on and not so much even as blinked.
Aichan? Here? Does she frequent this place a lot? Perhaps Otosuke even had her tracked by Ichijiro (who thus found that she dined here)?



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"Are you sure you can play? This is a high-class restaurant, we can't let third-raters in here." The manager seemed rather concerned as he eyed the tiny girl next to his usual pianist.
Whoa, Aichan's the replacement pianist?  :shocked:



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"Takahashi-san should be fine. You will help me, won't you?" The tall Chinese girl looked positively distressed as she turned pleading eyes on the shorter woman.

"Of course, you go on your way now, your sister's waiting." Takahashi smiled and patted the taller girl's arm. To the manager, she only shot a flippant glance before striding over to sit down by the piano.
Evidently the Chinese girl (Junjun? :D) is already acquainted with Aichan, which would likely mean that Aichan has more "side jobs" that we were aware previously of (probably to help with possible cover scenarios that she might one day need). The other possibility is that the Chinese girl and her sister (Linlin? ;D) know Aichan because they are also part of the same assassin/spy organization.  O0



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"I haven't played in a while, but this should still be tolerable." Soft fingers stroked the keys almost lovingly, coaxing gentle tones from the instrument.

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"Nocturne..." She breathed, eyes closed in silent yearning.

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"That's an unusual tune to hear..." Ichijiro raised an eyebrow as the music began again.

"Interesting choice though." Otosuke observed, calmly taking another sip of wine. His eyes did not leave the pianist.
Evidently, the song has some significance that Otsuke is aware of.



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"Certainly, a lot of restrained passion in it."
Oh, don't let it fool you, Otosuke. Aichan has ways of "releasing". :twisted:



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"Kamei-sama is well versed in music too?" Ichijiro inquired politely. Otosuke smiled briefly.

"In my free time. It calms me." He tugged at his cuff links again. Though outwardly relaxed, his shoulders were still tense from an earlier encounter. Fending off an attempt on one's life did tend to put one's nerves on edge.

Kamei Otosuke was fully justified in his paranoia given his colorful past and its current effect on his present life. Any less care and he would have been a dead man. Such was his life.
Given what's just been said about Otosuke, now I'm wondering just who Aichan's real target is.  :-\

Could it be that the previously failed attempt that was mentioned is something that Aichan's supposed to correct?



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The last note trickled off into stone silence as he stepped out. And waited.

One would come, and he would be ready. When was he ever not?
Question now is (if it IS Otosuke that's Aichan's target)...why?

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Re: Nocturne [File #12]
« Reply #153 on: January 02, 2009, 11:35:59 AM »
Ah, gaming... I totally understand. I played games all day everyday during my vacation. XD So addictive, but so much fun. Ah, the 3 Kingdoms;  Koei's Dynasty Warriors (Sengoku Musou)  :heart:

Tall Chinese girl = Junjun?
That's the first person that came to mind when I read that.

Kamei's dad is already suspicious of Ai-chan, as he should be. Ai-chan may have been the person who planned the attempt on his life earlier! o.O Or not... lol
I wonder if he'll give in to making his daughter happy or following his instincts. If you ask me, you should always follow your instincts. *nods head*
Assassin, photographer, being bishi, and now pianist. Wonder what other skills does Ai-chan have. Hehe

When Ai-chan was playing Nocturne, I thought of Chopin instead. I blame Eternal Sonata. :lol:

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Re: Nocturne [File #12]
« Reply #154 on: January 03, 2009, 09:45:24 AM »
wah! you really did make Ai-chan's character an outstanding one......talented, very indeed! i guess she's good at other things too......well, she's a skill agent...lol

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Re: Nocturne [File #12]
« Reply #155 on: January 03, 2009, 03:08:51 PM »
See, I told you I would comment! ^_^

Alrighty, so this chapter was short, but nice. I'm always happy to find an update from you =) But there is something about Ichijiro that makes me just want to.....punch him in the face? XD; I dunno, he just irritates me for some reason '_'

Nocturnes is a lovely melody :3 I listened to it as I read the chapter XD made it all the more realistic.

So...would Mr. Kamei even let his daughter get it in with a no good killer like Ai? >D (even if he doesn't know it LOL) he said he'd do anything for his daughter...kekeke

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Re: Nocturne [File #12]
« Reply #156 on: January 09, 2009, 03:23:29 PM »
Back! I guess filler chapters don't get any interest from anyone. XD But 6 comments make it easy to reply to! (Except for JFC-kun's epic replies lol :P Keep it coming though!)


Ichigo-chan: Papa Kamei's a smart one. But he's also a good father. Kinda. More interesting things will happen in the coming chapter! And the return of Gaki. XD

SxY: Hehe...you'll get to see what happened to Gaki in the meantime here....ehehehe....

JFC: Yeah that was Junjun. XD I'm good at cameos even if they don't really figure that much into the main plot. ;) As for the song, he's more concerned about why someone would start in media res...it signifies that something has already begun before he's aware of it, at least metaphorically speaking. Or he could just be paranoid, you know. XD Reasons will become clear eventually~

Fenrir: Yeah Ai-chan is an assassin of many talents. How many assignments has she gone through? XD She probably had to pick up any number of skills just to blend in at the right time for any "deep-cover" missions. Anyway Otosuke has a gut feeling that something is wrong...but you know what they say about keeping your friends close and your enemies even closer...XD A battle of wits now!

ayase909: Takagaki? Do you mind previous takagaki? XD I think it's almost time to reveal their past together anyway...soon. XD GakiKame has no possibility in this story unless I really stretch it lol. :P Sorry to disappoint...^^;

Saikami: Mah panda! XD Don't worry Ichijiro annoys me at a fundamental level too. XD The music is meant to complement the chapter, so I'm glad you liked it. :3 Hehe...sometimes its not a matter of whether he wants it to happen...things just keep on moving on their own. >D


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Re: Nocturne [File #13]
« Reply #157 on: January 09, 2009, 03:27:15 PM »
File #13


"An~" The tired groan from the back row of the half-filled lecture theater sounded louder than intended no thanks to the acoustics of the place.

However, since everyone else was still in a half awake status with the lecturer yet to be in sight, no one really cared. Neither did the person in question, who flopped over like a dead fish on top of the little writing space attached to her seat.

"...really hurts...owie..." Michishige Sayumi grumbled a half-hearted complaint as she stared out through lidded eyes before letting them flutter shut. Her whole body felt like it had been put through the blender and then spun dry in the nearest washer.

Really, it's been a couple of days since that time, and she still hadn't fully recovered from the aftereffects. Maybe she really did need to improve her stamina...

"Ahh...baka Ai-chan..." She mumbled almost incoherently, her speech slightly slurred as she drifted ever closer to dreamland...only to be yanked out rather abruptly by a sharp tug on her ear.

"Hey! What was that...eh, Gaki-san?" The sleepy Sayumi grinned broadly at the appearance of her senpai, whilst rubbing sheepishly at her ear.

Speaking of ears...she quickly smoothed her sleek black hair over it. She was fairly sure that there were still some faintly visible teeth marks left there...

"Working too hard at your part-time job again, Sayumin?" Same old concern, same old Gaki-san. Or should it be said, almost.

Despite her sleepy state, Sayumi was still an observant girl, and there was no way she could have missed the absence of the usual vibrant sparkle in her genki senpai's eyes. Those lively eyes seemed somehow...dead...to her. As if someone had stolen Risa's soul and left an automaton in its place. The instinctive motherly comment was just that: instinctive. The lack of exaggerated reactions sort of highlighted that to her.

"Nn...I suppose you could say so...I'm getting sort of a break for now though." Sayumi started cautiously. With Ai off doing god knows what, she would probably be having less strenuous nights out. Which was good, since she needed the recovery time. Ai's usual generosity when it came to paying her was also very useful, since it meant that she didn't really have to go out with anyone else for the next month or so at least, unless she wanted to.

Thus, with her own financial issues in good shape at the moment, Sayumi turned her attention to her haggard senpai, who looked tired beneath that radiant smile that did not seem as cheerful as usual. Something was obviously wrong with the girl.

"Good to hear. You shouldn't overwork yourself." Always putting others before herself. Sayumi could appreciate that aspect of Gaki-san's character, but honestly, sometimes the older girl really had to learn how to be selfish for her own sake once in a while.

"I'll be fine Gaki-san. How about you? You don't look too good..." Sayumi asked intently, but Risa simply smiled gently with a little shake of her head.

"No, I'm fine. Just a little...tired."

Anyone else would have believed her. Sayumi, however, didn't. She knew people, and her instincts when it came to this sort of thing had so far failed to let her down before. Those downcast eyes, that wistful smile, distant expression...something had obviously happened.

"I know that I'm in no place to question you, since we really haven't known each other for all that long..." Here she placed a hand over Risa's pale ones, clasping it tightly. "But as your concerned kouhai, I'm allowed to show my concern right?" Sayumi smiled. "You don't have to keep it all to yourself, really. If you need anyone to talk to, you can always look for me."

Risa looked up, their eyes meeting, and Sayumi was struck again by how lost those eyes were. Her smile was a little more genuine, although still holding that aura of sadness.

"Thanks Sayu, but it's not something you'll be able to understand."

"It's A--Takahashi, isn't it?" Sayumi's voice came out before she could stop herself, and she only just managed to stop herself from calling out Ai's name with that much familiarity. Wouldn't do to show off their underground connections, after all.

The minute flinch as Risa withdrew her hands confirmed the suspicion that Sayu had birthed on the spur of the moment. Sayumi looked at the older girl seated next to her, feeling a surge of pity for her. She knew first-hand how callous Ai could be, sensed it under the facade, even though the woman could be disarmingly sweet when she wanted to be.

Knowing that it was not her place to probe any further than Risa was willing to reveal, Sayumi nodded half to herself since Risa was still looking very intently at her own feet.

"I understand. You don't have to tell me what happened." I can still see the rope burns on your wrists...ah, Ai-chan, how could you do this to someone like Gaki-san... "But if you want to talk about it, I'm always available." A comforting smile from the bunny girl, rewarded with a barely perceptible nod of Risa's lowered head.

"Do remember to take care of yourself though, and..." Sayumi, who had been subconsciously reaching for Risa's outstretched arm, suddenly paused mid-sentence quite abruptly.

"What's this?" Before Risa could react, Sayumi flipped the wrist over to reveal some obviously fresh scars, cuts actually, on the older's lower arm. Risa quickly pulled her arm back into herself, cradling it protectively near her chest. Sayu pinned her senpai with a deadly look.

"Niigaki-senpai...don't tell me...you tried to kill yourself?" She kept her voice low to preventing alerting anyone else, but there was no mistaking the urgency in her tone.

"...it was an accident." Risa was rubbing the marks with her thumb, as if they would disappear by that action alone. Sayumi took another long, hard look at the arm, before raising an eyebrow.

"Right, and I'm no longer ichiban kawaii." The bunny girl's tone held none of its usual lightheartedness. "Gaki-san...Risa...is she really worth it?"

Risa looked up slowly, their gazes penetrating each other. When the older spoke, there was no hesitation nor regret in her voice, only a firm, quiet declaration.

"If I lost her, there's no longer any meaning in this world." In a lower voice, she continued. "If not for Ai-chan, I would be dead. If not for Ai-chan, I wouldn't be me."

A distant smile. Luminous tears lighting up those dulled eyes, making them seem almost alive again.

"Ai-chan is my everything."

Sayumi looked at the broken girl next to her, and silently cursed that damnable flirt into the lowest level of hell for a week for hurting such a wonderful person. She glanced at the scars again, at a loss for what to do and say at the moment.

Make that two weeks, Takahashi Ai. You and I have a lot to talk about the next time you choose to grace me with your presence...

~*~*~

"Father..." A pouting Kamei Eri whined cutely at her stern parent, hoping that he'd at least reconsider what she had told him. She had been nagging at him for the last few days without any visible result though, not that she was giving up.

Eri could be very stubborn when she really wanted something. As one Kamei Otosuke knew very well, judging from the frown lines that appeared almost permanently set into his forehead.

"Eri-chan...I'm busy right now. We'll talk later. I'll be back in a few hours."

Then he cut her off. Literally. The video screen went blank, a dull buzz signaling that the call had ended. Eri stared at the darkened screen before blowing a raspberry at it childishly, her lips still pursed in an indignant pout.

Her father rarely did that to her. No matter how busy he was, he was never this abrupt with her, unless it was a life-and-death emergency, but how often did that kind of thing happen nowadays? Eri flopped backwards onto her large bed, staring at the ceiling.

After a few moments of zoning out, she rolled back onto her belly and almost smacked her nose into an open book with pages full of delectable sweets. Easily distracted, she went back to her original activity, that is, flipping through the book and admiring all the tasty-looking creations.

Eri was not entirely sure where the time went, but somehow during her picture book frenzy and taking a nice long soak in her bathtub, she managed to wipe out the hours in between the call and her father's return. Idly getting dressed, the sleepy eyed turtle girl wandered down the stairs to wait for her father in the sitting room.

She didn't have to wait long. The ornately carved front doors opened almost majestically, the imposing figure of Kamei Otosuke sweeping in like a king returning to his castle. Eri gave a little yawn as she waved sleepily to her father, giving him a hug as he came in.

"Have you been at home the whole day again, Eri-chan?" His tone was affectionate, though his eyes were somehow a bit sad as he ruffled his daughter's hair, earning a little squeak from Eri as she tried to get the tangles out again.

"I didn't feel like going out." A simple answer that drew a light sigh from her father. Eri didn't see the big deal about going out. She'd rather stay home most of the time. A lot less troublesome.

They were still stuck at the entrance, and since Eri was far shorter than her taller father, she did not immediately notice the smaller shadow behind him. When she did, however, she started briefly, but her father merely smiled blandly, turning to reveal the person behind him.

"Eh?" Eri's eyes widened to the size of dinner plates at the unexpected visitor. "Ehhhhhhh???"

Otosuke smirked, shooting a glance at the nonchalant girl behind him, who was currently eying Eri with a certain exasperation as if the reaction really wasn't necessary.

"Eri-chan, I remember you wanted to pick up a new instrument a few months ago, so here's your new piano instructor. Don't give up on it again, alright?"

Eri picked up her jaw from her floor, trying to rescue some form of dignity in front of this person. Thank you daddy! She grinned just a little foolishly as she grabbed onto the other girl's hands.

"Nice to meet you again! I'll be in your care!" Eri looked absolutely radiant, prompting a smile from her father in return, although he gave another pointed look at the "instructor".

"Yeah...nice to meet you, ojou-sama." Barely a hint of mockery in there, but there was certainly a profound lack of enthusiasm in the whole greeting. A hint of a smile, more a smirk really, graced her features.

"Takahashi Ai, at your service."


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I know I skipped what happened in between, but that's the point. I won't show certain scenes directly, except through other means. :P The timeline is pretty tight, it's been a week or less since Ai left Gaki's place that time. And so many chapters in between...haha I know I move slowly. >.> But yeah, here's the chapter. XD Have fun everyone!

And T_T classes start next week....
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Re: Nocturne [File #13]
« Reply #158 on: January 09, 2009, 04:16:04 PM »
Damn, I don't even wanna know what Ai-chan did with Sayu to make her so tired. XD GAKI IS BACK!!!! :heart: Sayu does seem quite observant, especially considering her job. Ouch, rope burn on her wrists still? :( Ai-chan is one crazy mofo. :P NO! Hell no~ :shocked: Gaki, don't do this..... :cry: I must say that I respect her love for Ai-chan, though. Even after all the things she did to her, she's still in love. :heart:
ERI ERI ERI!!!! XD This girl is just too damn cute. Papa Kamei is definitely a good dad. Nice, Ai-chan as piano teacher. Well played. :lol:

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Re: Nocturne [File #13]
« Reply #159 on: January 09, 2009, 06:45:18 PM »
ah............ :OMG:

poor gaki-san......she's madly in love with the pimp Takahashi.....well, in my opinion, who wouldn't fall for her anyway???hahaha :luvluv1: :luvluv1: :luvluv1:  i feel so bad about gaki-san.......hahaha, nice bunny comforting her! so sweet, and so caring! but, i cant imagine sayu being like that.....her character....and, is she a prostitute or just doing it with Ai-chan?... :hehehe:

well, on the last part....all i can say is that....Ai-chan suguio! she pass the first barrier already and being the instructor of Eri...haha poor her father..... :wahaha:




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