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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/22)
« Reply #100 on: December 23, 2008, 03:38:53 PM »
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“I need you to buy decorations and chips. I already have Eri, Sayu, and Koharu doing something else. And I’ll be keeping Ai busy since I can do that better than anyone else.”

I grin.

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stupid assh***s   :angry:



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He just told us to not make any noise.

damn   :twisted: XD

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/22)
« Reply #101 on: December 23, 2008, 08:10:36 PM »
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I think I actually like reading them together now. *gasped* Look what your writing did to me


lol sorry, but NAH your writing skills are WAY better than mine! *bows down to you* lol

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/22)
« Reply #102 on: December 23, 2008, 09:54:05 PM »
I feel bad for it sometimes, but I'm pretty much a fan of any Eri pairing...mostly because she gets along so well with everyone. o-o  My first, though, was TanaKamei. :wub: (...And then came GakiKame... :sweatdrop:)

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/22)
« Reply #103 on: December 24, 2008, 12:47:52 PM »
oh o ho hoh, im totally on love with this fic, u're doing an awesoooooooome wooooooooooork~~ please dont stop~~ >___<

Hmm,,, I wonder what's gonna happen between TanaKame,,,, hahaha  :mon misch: :mon ignore: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon bleed2: :mon evillaff: :mon evillaff:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/22)
« Reply #104 on: January 01, 2009, 01:56:06 AM »
CHAPTER 15


“Reina?”

“What?” I tiredly ask

“We have to get ready for school.”

I groan out. I really don’t feel like going today. And we shouldn’t have to go either. I think we deserve to take the day off after the whole thing that happened yesterday. It’s just one day anyway, besides it’s Friday. Eri calls my name again and starts shaking me.

“Go back to sleep Eri. You shouldn’t go to school today.”

“Won’t your uncle ask why you aren’t up yet?”

I shake my head.

“He had to get up for work early.”

I rolled over to my side. Eri didn’t say anything after that. I guess she was going to stay here too. I wanted her to. Then we could have a whole day together and probably get to know each other more.

“Does your stomach still hurt?”

I nod.

“You can stay. I’m going to school.”

That wasn’t what I had in mind. I quickly get up and grab her by the wrist pulling her back to the bed. I pulled her a little too hard and she went stumbling on to the bed right on top of me. This is a little awkward and unexpected. Then I noted that she had this intense look in her eyes. I’ve never seen them flicker like that before. But, seeing her like this made my whole body spark with desire. I couldn’t control my actions and the next thing I know I’m doing is leaning upward to finally kiss her. She doesn’t seem too bothered by the idea either. I lean in closer. I could feel her warm breath on my face and that makes me yearn more to kiss her. Then in a split second she breaks away. And I feel highly frustrated. Damn it! I wanted that kiss! I lift myself up into a sitting position.

“I um…school…I’ll be,” She points to the door “, going.” Then she high-tails out of here.

I slam myself backwards into the bed with a groan. I’m so stupid. I moved way to fast! I shouldn’t even be kissing her anyway! She’s my friend and not only my friend, but a GIRL! And last time I checked a girl kissing or wanting to kiss a girl is wrong…right? I’m all confused now!

“BAKA!” I scream to myself

And I just lay there for a while looking at the ceiling reflecting on the incident seconds ago and try to straighten out my thoughts, but I only get more confused. Why do my emotions have to be so complicated? I hear a small meow beside me and I nearly jump out of my skin seeing how close Yuka was to my face. I take a few deep breaths and grab her, lifting her high above my face. She looks at me scared. I stare into her eyes as if she’s my key to all my confusion. I bring her close to my face so that our noses are touching.

“You wouldn’t confuse me right Yuka? You would tell me how it is and stay my best friend, right?”

She meows and I put her down. What am I thinking? Talking to a cat like she knows all the answers to my problems. I think I’m going crazy. But I don’t really care. All I care about is if Eri will talk me after this. It would kill me inside to see her not wanting to be around me any more. I roll on my side, pull the blanket over my head and try to go back to sleep.

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I didn’t wake up until late afternoon after that. And I was hungry. So I decided to make me some lunch then take whatever money I could find to buy the chips for Ai’s birthday party. I might as well get that out of the way since her birthday was approaching fast. I was done eating in about five minutes since I didn’t make myself a large meal. I petted Yuka goodbye and sprinted out the front door. The walk to a convent store would be sure to keep my mind of Eri. Not that I didn’t like her, it’s just when ever I thought about her I kept thinking about kissing her and then I would get all confused again and I really didn’t need that right now. I walked into the store and just grabbed any chips I first came across on. I settled for three bags of chips and I suddenly realized I needed to buy Ai a gift. Damn it, I don’t know what to get her! I slap my forehead in realization. I bought the chips and came out thinking of what I should give to Ai. I didn’t know what she liked. So I ended up walking around town for hours to try and find a good gift for Ai, but I had no luck. Maybe I can ask Risa next time I see her. After hopeless searching, I just decided to walk back home. When I got back, Eri was standing out the hallway waiting for me. I felt my whole body drop like dead weight. She looked at me timidly and smiled faintly.

“Hi.” She mumbled

“Hey.” I sighed

I tucked my hands into my pocket and stared at my feet. I didn’t know what to say and I sure as hell didn’t know if I should invite her in. That would probably scare her away for good. I shifted around for a while.

“I brought you, your homework.”  She speaks again, and takes her book bag off her back, then opens it. She hands me a bunch of textbooks.

“Uh…thanks.” I take them and look back down to my shoes. It goes silent again. This is just starting to get really weird.

“How’s…your stomach?”

“It’s…ok. I uh…went shopping for Ai’s present today.” This is getting pathetic too it seems.

“What did you get her?” She asks, trying to keep the conversation going.

You can’t blame her for trying. I rub the back of my neck.

“I didn’t know what to get her honestly, so I didn’t buy anything yet.”  I admit, “What did you get her?”

“I don’t have a lot of money so I’m…going to make her something. I’m not sure what yet.”

Ok let me at least give it a try. If she says no then I know I’m doomed.

“Do you…want to come in?”

She shook her head and I felt a sharp pain in my chest at her refusal. She’s not going to talk to me anymore! It’s my fault. I scared her away! Good going Reina!

“My dad needs me again at home. I’ll see you at Ai’s party ok?”

I nod.

“Yeah sure.”

Then she walks down the hall and to the stairs. Ok, our friendship is screwed. I can’t just keep it in my pants huh?! Stupid me! Stupid feelings. Stupid…Eri for hot and for her lips looking so kissable…wait…did I just think that last part? I’m not going to bother on that right now. I don’t need any more stress. I grab my keys out from my pocket and open the door. Things couldn’t be much worse. Hopefully my luck will get better on Ai’s birthday party.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/31)
« Reply #105 on: January 01, 2009, 03:26:08 AM »
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“Reina?”

“What?” I tiredly ask

“We have to get ready for school.”

I groan out. I really don’t feel like going today. And we shouldn’t have to go either.
Let's see...
* JFC holds hands out to sides as if checking the weight of something.


School...or stay in bed snuggling with Eri.

...

School.....snuggle with Eri.

...

I'm a teacher and even I would say they should ditch. XD



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“You can stay. I’m going to school.”

That wasn’t what I had in mind. I quickly get up and grab her by the wrist pulling her back to the bed. I pulled her a little too hard and she went stumbling on to the bed right on top of me. This is a little awkward and unexpected. Then I noted that she had this intense look in her eyes. I’ve never seen them flicker like that before. But, seeing her like this made my whole body spark with desire. I couldn’t control my actions and the next thing I know I’m doing is leaning upward to finally kiss her. She doesn’t seem too bothered by the idea either. I lean in closer. I could feel her warm breath on my face and that makes me yearn more to kiss her. Then in a split second she breaks away. And I feel highly frustrated. Damn it! I wanted that kiss! I lift myself up into a sitting position.

“I um…school…I’ll be,” She points to the door “, going.” Then she high-tails out of here.
Oh jeez!
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I slam myself backwards into the bed with a groan. I’m so stupid. I moved way to fast! I shouldn’t even be kissing her anyway! She’s my friend and not only my friend, but a GIRL! And last time I checked a girl kissing or wanting to kiss a girl is wrong…right? I’m all confused now!
Raburabu is NEVER wrong! 
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I didn’t wake up until late afternoon after that. And I was hungry. So I decided to make me some lunch then take whatever money I could find to buy the chips for Ai’s birthday party. I might as well get that out of the way since her birthday was approaching fast.
Another plus is that by doing this while the others are still in class, there's less of a chance that she'd get spotted/caught by someone who might blab it to Aichan. :yep:



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I ended up walking around town for hours to try and find a good gift for Ai, but I had no luck. Maybe I can ask Risa next time I see her. After hopeless searching, I just decided to walk back home. When I got back, Eri was standing out the hallway waiting for me. I felt my whole body drop like dead weight. She looked at me timidly and smiled faintly.

“Hi.” She mumbled

“Hey.” I sighed
Eri =  :mon whimper:
Reina =  :mon whimper:



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I can’t just keep it in my pants huh?!
Eh? :P



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Stupid me! Stupid feelings. Stupid…Eri for hot and for her lips looking so kissable…wait…did I just think that last part? I’m not going to bother on that right now.
:pimp:



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Things couldn’t be much worse. Hopefully my luck will get better on Ai’s birthday party.
Oh....they could be worse. Reina could have done something to make Eri pissed at her. Right now things are just a little awkward, so it's not too bad. And with a little luck it won't be long/difficult to smooth things over.

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/31)
« Reply #106 on: January 01, 2009, 05:49:08 AM »
hi, really liking this fic.

heh, I'm rather confused that Reina is confused. Probably, since I thought she was cool with Ai's and Gaki's relationship. Maybe she forgot that they are both girls or something and they are in a relationship...hehehe. Anyways, I have a feeling she might talk to those two for advise in the future.....Maybe????


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/31)
« Reply #107 on: January 01, 2009, 06:02:30 AM »
Hey, thank you for reading my fic and most importantly commenting. And well the reason why Reina confuse is because she's in denial and she thinks that it's ok for Ai and Risa to be together, but it's not ok with her to be with Eri. You'll see lol.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/31)
« Reply #108 on: January 01, 2009, 06:18:57 AM »
UPDATE!!!  :muffin:

>< I was 'Aww'ing and laughing throughout the whole chap ><
JFC's comment made me laugh out really loud too XD

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Damn it! I wanted that kiss!
Damn it! And I wanted to see that kiss!!
Eri is probably as confused as Tanakacchi, except, she's keeping her actions intact, whereas Tanakacchi is just letting her emotions take over, as long as Tanakacchi doesn't think about it, its okay it seems ^^;

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Ok let me at least give it a try. If she says no then I know I’m doomed.

“Do you…want to come in?”

She shook her head and I felt a sharp pain in my chest at her refusal. She’s not going to talk to me anymore! It’s my fault. I scared her away! Good going Reina!

“My dad needs me again at home. I’ll see you at Ai’s party ok?”
>___> thank god nobody is at home, I screamed out loud.. I wanted Eri to agree!!

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I can’t just keep it in my pants huh?!
!?  LOL!!! XD

I wish my comment was longer, but if I were to put down parts that I liked I would have quoted the whole chapter ><
So as always, I will be waiting for the next chapter!!!

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/31)
« Reply #109 on: January 01, 2009, 06:29:18 AM »
lmao your comments always make me laugh. And JFC's too hehe. I'm glad you like the chapter. I'm working on another chapter so it should be up tomorrow. But whatever happens next you'll have to wait and see. hehe.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/31)
« Reply #110 on: January 01, 2009, 04:54:34 PM »
woo woo update update~~

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That wasn’t what I had in mind. I quickly get up and grab her by the wrist pulling her back to the bed. I pulled her a little too hard and she went stumbling on to the bed right on top of me. This is a little awkward and unexpected. Then I noted that she had this intense look in her eyes. I’ve never seen them flicker like that before. But, seeing her like this made my whole body spark with desire. I couldn’t control my actions and the next thing I know I’m doing is leaning upward to finally kiss her. She doesn’t seem too bothered by the idea either. I lean in closer. I could feel her warm breath on my face and that makes me yearn more to kiss her. Then in a split second she breaks away. And I feel highly frustrated. Damn it! I wanted that kiss! I lift myself up into a sitting position.

“I um…school…I’ll be,” She points to the door “, going.” Then she high-tails out of here.

OH, OH OHHHHHHHHHH!!  :on roll: :imdead: Mou~~ Reina~~ U should have kissed her! awww! :tantrum:



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I can’t just keep it in my pants huh?!

?! OMG, Don't wanna think of what was the meaning of this... XD!!!

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Stupid me! Stupid feelings. Stupid…Eri for hot and for her lips looking so kissable…wait…did I just think that last part? I’m not going to bother on that right now.

TOTALLY RIGHT! >/////////< REINAA, U SHOULD BOTHER MORE,, IN,,, THOSE,, LIPS.... AAARRRGHH... *drools*




WOOOO Can't wait for the next chapteer! I wanna know what's gonna happen in Ai's Party yea yea yea!

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« Reply #111 on: January 01, 2009, 06:37:54 PM »
CHAPTER 16

For the past two days I hadn’t talked to Eri. I wanted to, but I didn’t think it was the right time to talk to her yet. With her I can never be sure if I’m too close or too distant. She was definitely distant to me. She didn’t talk to me when we hung out with everyone else. She would wave hello to me each time she saw me, but after that there was no real conversation. Risa and Ai seemed to notice and asked if I was ok. Of course I lied and told them everything was fine. I didn’t need them to get involved on this. Though I could use their help. I mean they’re dating and they could help me with my feelings with Eri. I’ll have to ask them later for advice. The weekend went so fast after that. It was Monday again before I knew it and we were back in school. The only thing I look forward to was Ai’s party tomorrow, not because we were celebrating it, but because Eri said she would see me there. I really wanted to talk to her again. I entered the school building heading straight for my locker as usual.

“Reina!”

It was Risa. She seemed worried. It must be about the party she’s throwing. She’s having a last minute freak out I guess.

“What’s up?”

She gripped my arm tightly. That kind of hurts, ouch.

“Tell me you got what I asked you to?!” She exclaimed

I pull my arm from her death grip. Yep, she’s freaking out all right.

“Relax, I got it. Why are you so worked up?”

“Ai-chan’s birthday is tomorrow and I haven’t even gotten the cake yet! I need to get that cake before tonight!”

“Ok, first off…breath! And secondly, you don’t have to worry. If the cake isn’t done in time I’ll make a cake myself.”

She cheers up. Then pulls me into a strong hug. I can’t breath now.

“Thank you! I’m normally not like this, but I just need everything to go perfect for her. It means so much to me.”

I weakly pat her back. I really need the breath.

“You’re…welcome, now…can you let go so that I can breath?”  I manage to let out

She backs off.

“Sorry.”

“It’s cool. Just…not too hard next time ok?” I chuckle. She laughs too.

“There you guys are.”

Damn it’s Ai again! She really has some timing huh? If she came a second earlier she would know about the party we’re throwing her. Risa jolts and turns around to her.

“You know, I keep finding you two like this. I’m starting to think you’re planning something behind my back.” Ai chuckles

She looks at me then to Risa. She looks nervous. If she does that she’ll look obvious to what we’re doing. Looks like I’ll have to save her again.

“Can’t we just talk and enjoy each other’s company Ai?” I reply

She places an arm around Risa’s shoulder and smiles.

“There’s nothing wrong with that.” She agrees

“Ai-chan!! You’re birthday is tomorrow! Aren’t you excited?!” Koharu yells from across the hall.

Ai flinches at the mention of her up coming birthday. She’ll a little early with the birthday wishes. Not far behind her, Sayu and Eri come along too. And my heat races when I see Eri make her way to us.

“Don’t remind me.” Ai complains. Risa nudges her.

“Come on it’s going to be your birthday. Can you at least try to sound a little happy about it?” She asks

Ai frowns and mumbles under her breath. I hope she’ll be a little happier when she sees her surprise birthday party. We’re all working hard on it. The bells sounds and we all say our goodbyes and go our separate ways. I’m a little nervous about tomorrow. I’ll be around Eri and I’m not sure if she’s ok being around me again after the last stunt I pulled. I’ll just have to wait and see.


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I had a free day when school was over. I had no homework so that meant I could spend some time looking for a decent gift for Ai. I completely forgot to ask Risa on what to get her and it was too late to ask now. She had left with Ai and the others. And I had decided to walk home instead of getting a ride. As I walked I then  realized I have no idea where to start to look for a gift. I don’t want to show up with no gift at the party tomorrow. I wouldn’t be much of a good friend if I didn’t. I stand on the sidewalk thinking where to look. This is hard.

“Reina?”

“Wahhh!” I scream and turn around.

“I-I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to scare you.” Eri apologizes

I place a hand to my beating heart and try to calm down.

“Uh…it’s ok. What’s wrong?”

“Well…I’m going to make Ai’s present today and I wanted to know if you would want to come with me to help. Maybe you can make one too since you don’t have one yet.”

That could work. I’m in a desperate need of gift right about now. I might as well give it a try. So I agree.

“Yeah sure, let’s go.”

She smiles and starts leading me down the street to where ever she’s going to make her gift. I wonder where we’re going or what it is. We walk down a couple of blocks and then she stops in front of this small store. From looking outside I can’t tell what it is, but I’ll just trust her on this. We go inside and she talks to the owner for a few seconds. He nods take the money Eri paid him and then leads us to the back. Where ARE we? We get to the back and I notice this type of wheel and chair that’s next to it. Ok I’m lost.

“We have to put aprons on first.” Eri tells me

She grabs two aprons from the hooks and hands me one. Now I’m even more curious. What are we doing making meat? That wouldn’t really be a great birthday gift for Ai and I don’t even know her well to say if that’s a bad gift. I tie the apron around my waist and wait to be told what to do next. The storeowner hands us this wet orange blob and I stare at it like it’s some type of creature from the sea. Eri laughs.

“It’s clay Reina. You can touch it.”

I take the wet clay and look to her on what to do next. I’ve never done this before. I’m completely clueless. She laughs again and puts her clay on one of those wheel tables. She goes over to help me.

“You’ve never done this before have you?”

“Nope, not at all.”

Normally I would say yes to keep my pride, but with her I feel that it’s ok to admit defeat. She won’t go making fun of me or tell others about it. Unlike some people back at Fukuoka did. She takes the clay and puts it down on the wheel looking table.

“Sit down.” I don’t complain and listen. “Ok, rest your foot on this pedal.”

So I’m guessing this isn’t a table after all. She stands behind me, takes both my hands and puts it on to the clay. It’s cold and kind of sticky on my fingers.

“Now press the pedal to spin the wheel, but don’t do it too fast or clay will go flying everywhere.”

This is tough. I take a deep breath then start pressing the pedal at a steady pace. The wheel slowly starts spinning around and around. Eri takes my hands and starts to form the clay. She makes it stand up and then she lets go of my hands.

“You can make whatever you want from there. If you need help just tell me.” She goes back to her seat and starts doing the same thing.

Ok, I can do this. No big deal. I think I’ll make a cup. That would be easy. I go back to trying to form the clay only it goes really bad and topples over. I look over to Eri. She makes it seem so easy when she does it. How can she do that?! I look back to my pieces of clay and try again. I think I’ve got it. But then it falls over again. I hate this thing! I let out a growl. Eri giggles.

“Relax. You will get it. Just try again and go a little slower.” Eri instructs.

I nod and start over again. It went better than the last two tries. This isn’t’ so bad. It goes quiet after that and I focus on trying to make my cup. It took us about twenty minutes to finish making our pottery. Mine was fine, but at the opening of the cup it kind of clasped and it was bent all weird at the edges. Eri’s was kind of funky, but she said she wanted the vase to be like that. When we were done it was time to let the clay bake for a while. That was about thirty minutes alone to let it cook. When the time was up the storeowner took the pottery out of the furnace and then we had to wait a while for it to cool down. This is a really slow process. When can we get to decorate it already? So I wait some more.

“Is it done yet?” I mumble, sitting tiredly in my seat

I swear this is like watching paint dry. Eri looks both of our pottery over and touches hers lightly. She nods.

“It cool. Come on let’s decorate it.”

I shot out of my chair as Eri goes to take out the paint and brushes. She’s done this a lot hasn’t she? She seems to know where everything is around here. I’m glad I went with her to do this. I wouldn’t have gone to do it with anyone else. When I get the paint and brushes I start painting away around the cup. I know just what to put on it. I’m careful to paint each letter neatly and in different colors. This actually is really fun and cool to do, I should have done it soon. Decorating it took us a little quicker than baking it, but it was still time consuming.

“I’m done.” I announce.

I look my work over and smile proud. It’s pretty good I think. I hope Ai will like it. In big letters I wrote Happy Birthday then put little designs around it like cakes and balloons. It’s stupid, but it’s all I could think of. I turn to Eri. She looks like she’s having some trouble painting hers. So I go over to see what I can help her on.

“That’s a good cow.” I note

“It’s supposed to be a monkey.” She grumbles

“Really? Those look like horns.”

“Those are its ears.”

“Oh…”

I’m just digging myself a hole here! I feel stupid now. Uh…quick say something else! I grab her hand and grip on to the paintbrush. I think I can fix it just a little so it looks more like a monkey.

“You’ll need to make the ears a little more round and big. Here, let me help.”

I dip the tip of the brush into the pain and carefully begin to round the ears and face of her painting. I move the brush slowly, making sure I don’t lose control of the strokes. I dip my brush back in and give the monkey eyes, a mouth, and a nose. I then give it a hand and put a banana in it. It’s looking better. I add a few more things. I’m so focused on painting; I didn’t notice Eri was looking at me now instead of the vase. Feeling her eyes on me I look down and see how close she is to me.  I stop painting and put the brush down on to the table. She has that look in her eyes again. The one she had at my house when we were about to kiss. I nervously gulp. We’re really close. She leans back into me and I feel my heart race nearly out of my chest. This is it? She’s not going to pull away is she? Then I feel it. Her lips touching mine and I kiss her back. Her lips are so soft against mine. They sweet just like the lip-gloss she puts on. I don’t do anything than kiss her. There’s no tongue. I’m afraid if there was, I might scare her again and I don’t want that. Both my hands wrap around her waist, pulling her close to me. She feels so good against me. I want to hold her and kiss her forever. I fight against my strong desire to just do her right here on the table. Ok, that’s a very…hot image. I don’t need that right now. After a few kisses it’s over and I let out a breath I never knew I was holding. I open my eyes and look into hers. A small smile forms on my face. She smiles back. I rest my head on to her shoulder enjoying her pressed against me. I guess this means we’re ok now?

“I have to go soon. My uncle will start to worry about me.”

“Ok.” She sounds sad to see me go. I don’t want to leave her feeling down. Maybe this will help her.

“I’ll give you my cell number. You can call me anytime.” I tell her

She takes out her cell phone from her pocket and flips it open. I pick up my head from her shoulder and tell her my number. I give her a firm hug and sigh. I really don’t want to leave her.

“I’ll…see you at the party.” I whisper next to her ear

She turns around in my arms and gives me a proper hug. I’m happy to hug back. We stay like that for a little. Just holding each other. What does this mean about us? Are we friends? Or are we going out now? I’m not sure. I’m starting to get all confused again. I have to get out of here.

“I’ll see you then.” She agrees

I let her go and take my deformed looking cup. I touch my lips. They tingle and burn from our lips touching. It felt good and the only thing I can think about is kissing her again.
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/1)
« Reply #112 on: January 01, 2009, 07:15:14 PM »
Yay!  :cow: This is the first thing I've read this year and it was great!

Finally they've gotten somewhere! Hopefully this means they'll start dating now.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/1)
« Reply #113 on: January 01, 2009, 07:23:55 PM »
:shy2: I can't get my mind off that kiss... :wub: Very nice way to start the year. :yep:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/1)
« Reply #114 on: January 01, 2009, 08:32:07 PM »
Chapter 15 Tanakame almost kissed  XD XD as Eri is most shy  :shy1: has logic it to be reserved, Reina for the fact to have if gotten passionate for a girl who is its friend was not in such a way.  :shy2:
Chapter 16 finally they had kissed  :luvluv1:  :onioncheer:, were a torture not to see the kiss
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/1)
« Reply #115 on: January 01, 2009, 08:37:01 PM »
lol thanks guys.

@ShikyoxYaiba- lol thank you I wanted to make the kiss be both romantic, cute, and passionate.

@Tay- lol yes I know the kiss took a while, but hey better than never.

The next chapter will probably be put up tomorrow. Keep a look out for it.

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« Reply #116 on: January 01, 2009, 10:09:12 PM »
Happy New Year!!!

Another great chapter. The kiss scene was just *awww speechless*



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« Reply #117 on: January 02, 2009, 03:26:19 AM »
Great way to start off the year!!! :lol:

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“Tell me you got what I asked you to?!” She exclaimed

I pull my arm from her death grip. Yep, she’s freaking out all right.
XD Typical Niigaki-san reaction ftw ^^; it just wouldn't be the same if she didn't freak out lol!

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“Reina?”

“Wahhh!” I scream and turn around.
lmao, knowing Tanakacchi, it would have been more accurate if she quickly ran away while screaming XD
but then.. there goes all sense of pride ^^;

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The storeowner hands us this wet orange blob and I stare at it like it’s some type of creature from the sea. Eri laughs.

“It’s clay Reina. You can touch it.”

I take the wet clay and look to her on what to do next. I’ve never done this before. I’m completely clueless. She laughs again and puts her clay on one of those wheel tables. She goes over to help me.

“You’ve never done this before have you?”

“Nope, not at all.”
I love how Eri just gives zero explanation and just throws her into the complete unknown XD Tanakacchi's reaction to the clay made me laugh though.

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“That’s a good cow.” I note

“It’s supposed to be a monkey.” She grumbles

“Really? Those look like horns.”

“Those are its ears.”

“Oh…”
LOL aw man, Eri's drawings huh? >__>
+points for Tanakacchi for trying but
-points for digging her own grave XD

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I fight against my strong desire to just do her right here on the table. Ok, that’s a very…hot image.
::stares at screen with jaw open and a small nosebleed::
Oh wow... >__> you should totally write that scene :lol:

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I guess this means we’re ok now?
LOL I hope so >< it would be odd if they weren't at this point

Aaaah~ its not like these two confessed to each other or anything, so for all we know, what they're feeling is just lust (their point of view)
So they're probably both fairly confused; I wonder if they're gonna ask Takahashi and Niigaki-san for advice? :P
Awesome chap as always, wanna see if the surprise party works out~

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/1)
« Reply #118 on: January 02, 2009, 04:19:42 AM »
@ 15 .haha, poor Reina she scared off Eri-chan XD.
though Eri-chan needs to be more honest with wat she feels  :P

@ 16. Risa is so cute worrying like that XD.
HUZZUH! TanaKame! ;D, the pottery thing reminded me of ghost. lol.
haha. Eri-chan's art skillz.  :rofl:

chu~ hehe. thats cute. >____<

ok now cant wait for the next one. HUZZUH TO YOU!

you're SOSAM! :D

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« Reply #119 on: January 02, 2009, 08:12:27 AM »
CHAPTER 16

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For the past two days I hadn’t talked to Eri. I wanted to, but I didn’t think it was the right time to talk to her yet. With her I can never be sure if I’m too close or too distant. She was defiantly distant to me. She didn’t talk to me when we hung out with everyone else. She would wave hello to me each time she saw me, but after that there was no real conversation.
Have to keep in mind that this is most likely the closest that Eri's ever gotten to anyone outside of her family (wouldn't be surprised if it's the first "relationship" that she's been in). She's evidently had a really sheltered life, so she's not sure how she's supposed to deal with what she's feeling towards Reina.

Oh, and "defiantly" or..."definitely"?



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“Reina!”

It was Risa. She seemed worried. It must be about the party she’s throwing. She’s having a last minute freak out I guess.

“What’s up?”

...

“Ai-chan’s birthday is tomorrow and I haven’t even gotten the cake yet! I need to get that cake before tonight!”
What? No cake? It really doesn't take that long to go and arrange to purchase one. What's she been doing all this time, keeping Aichan "distracted"? :P



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“Ok, first off…breath! And secondly, you don’t have to worry. If the cake isn’t done in time I’ll make a cake myself.”
Reina can bake? :?



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“There you guys are.”

Damn it’s Ai again! She really has some timing huh? If she came a second earlier she would know about the party we’re throwing her. Risa jolts and turns around to her.

“You know, I keep finding you two like this. I’m starting to think you’re planning something behind my back.” Ai chuckles
Why, whatever would give her that idea? :roll:



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“Reina?”

“Wahhh!” I scream and turn around.

“I-I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to scare you.” Eri apologizes
Hey, Eri's talking to Reina again. Good sign, right?  :w00t:



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She smiles and starts leading me down the street to where ever she’s going to make her gift. I wonder where we’re going or what it is. We walk down a couple of blocks and then she stops in front of this small store. From looking outside I can’t tell what it is, but I’ll just trust her on this. We go inside and she talks to the owner for a few seconds. He nods take the money Eri paid him and then leads us to the back. Where ARE we? We get to the back and I notice this type of wheel and chair that’s next to it. Ok I’m lost.

“We have to put aprons on first.” Eri tells me
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaait a sec... A wheel and chair? I'm guessing Eri's taken them to some sort of DIY craft store. :O



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The storeowner hands us this wet orange blob and I stare at it like it’s some type of creature from the sea. Eri laughs.

“It’s clay Reina. You can touch it.”

I take the wet clay and look to her on what to do next. I’ve never done this before. I’m completely clueless. She laughs again and puts her clay on one of those wheel tables. She goes over to help me.

“You’ve never done this before have you?”
Oh you're kidding me...

* JFC hears "Unchained Melody" playing in the background. ;D



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“It cool. Come on let’s decorate it.”

I shot out of my chair as Eri goes to take out the paint and brushes. She’s done this a lot hasn’t she? She seems to know where everything is around here.
Eri must spend quite a bit of time here in this store. Evidently she also has a bit of an artistic streak in her.



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I turn to Eri. She looks like she’s having some trouble painting hers. So I go over to see what I can help her on.

“That’s a good cow.” I note

“It’s supposed to be a monkey.” She grumbles

“Really? Those look like horns.”

“Those are its ears.”
Okay, ignore the "artistic" comment I just had.
:mon sweat:



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*REINA HELPS ERI PAINT*
* JFC once again hears "Unchained Melody" in the background.  :D



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*ERI KISSES REINA*
:mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:



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I let her go and take my deformed looking cup. I touch my lips. They tingle and burn from our lips touching. It felt good and the only thing I can think about is kissing her again.
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