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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/14)
« Reply #80 on: December 18, 2008, 02:02:57 PM »
CHAPTER 12


Those stupid girls didn’t come back after that. It was pretty much smooth sailing from there on. Eri seemed a lot better too. All my worries about her from earlier seemed to dissolve as well. I was glad to have things back to normal. I had my things packed and was ready to go. I just hope I don’t get kicked out from today’s fight. With my shady background it’ll be hard to talk my way out of trouble. I’m just glad to go home again. I don’t have to worry about this anymore.

“Reina.”

Damn it it’s that teacher again! Is she going to bring me into the office to call my uncle about the fight I had this morning? Damn it if he knows he’ll tell my parents and you could forget it! I’m dead right where I stand.

“You don’t need to worry so quit putting on this face like I’m going to gut you!” She demands

If she’s not here to get me expelled then what IS she here for? All the teachers I’ve faced were out to get me. I actually punched a teacher once because of it. That was the first time I got expelled by the way. 

“I’ve been talking with the principal all morning today.”

I don’t need to know any more about that. I already know where this is going. I should get all my stuff and tell everyone else I’ll be heading back to Fukuoka.

“It isn’t what you think. I’ve been fighting with the damn pigheaded principal to let you off the hook.”

What? Did she just say what I think she did?! I must be hearing things! No teacher has ever tried to get me OUT of trouble they only make things worse. Is she really trying to get me out of trouble?

“I’ve managed to save you from a meeting with her and your uncle. This is your warning.”

Maybe she isn’t so bad after all. I feel a lot more relieved now. That was a close call.

“Thank you.”

“You may leave.”

She points to the entrance and goes back into the office she came out from. I feel much lighter knowing this. I turn around and head towards the door. At the bottom of the steps Ai and everyone else is waiting for me. I run down to meet up with them.

“What took you so long?” She asks

“The teacher from early called me to talk to me.”

“Oh you mean Nakazawa-san?” Koharu reminds me

“Yeah her. It turns out she ended up saving my ass from having to face the principal and possibly end up expelled again for fighting today.”

Risa looks to me lost.

“Expelled for just one fight? That seems a little to harsh don’t you think?”

I cast my eyes to my feet. I don’t know if now is a good time to tell them the whole story about that. I don’t want to scare them away. I also want to keep that part of me in the pass now that I’m somewhere new.

“Uh…we should go.” Eri interrupts.

I mouth ‘Thank you’ to her for saving me from the explanation. Everyone agrees and starts walking their way to Ai’s car. As we get there it finally comes to me that there’s no way her car could fit all of us! Does that mean one of us has to walk home instead?

“Ok someone’s going to have to sit in someone else’s lap.” Ai sighs

They all look at each other. Ai shrugs and opens the driver seat door. Risa takes the passenger seat. Well makes things easy for them. I look back at everyone else and three pair of eyes settles on me. They don’t even ask if I want to sit on someone’s lap! It looks like I have no choice. They sit into the back waiting for me to get in next. Yeah easy for them! They aren’t the ones that have to sit on someone’s lap!

“You can sit right here Reina.” Sayu coaxes, and pats her lap.

She smiles at me. Ok now I know I’m NOT sitting on HER lap! Eri looks at me with a comforting face and motions for me to come over. I think sitting on her lap is the safest bet. I walk to the other side of the car door and get inside. I’m careful to not hurt her as I get in and sit down. On impulse, her arms wrap around my waist and that makes my stomach turn into a tight knot. I feel shy all over again.

“Alright everyone’s in?” Ai questions

“Hold on.” Eri leans in to close the door. “Ok we’re ready.”

She holds on to my waist tight and buries her face into my back. Having her hug me like this brings some sort of peace inside me. I don’t want her to let me go. Ai starts the car and pulls out of her parking spot.


 ***

The next day things were much better. There were no large crowds of girls in the morning. Everything was running smoothly. This was a much better day than yesterday. I collected my books to start the day off.

“There you are. How did your talk with Nakazawa-san go?” Yossie curiously asks, as she walked her way over.  Miki was right behind her.

“How did you know I had a talk with her?”

She leans against some lockers.

“I work in the office to get some extra credits for college. And I hear everything in there. So are you gonna tell me?”

“Bothering a Kouhai again Yossie?”

Yossie stands up straight and fixes her hair. Her whole behavior suddenly changes. I’ve never seen her this nervous or…shy? Miki’s face doesn’t change though. I look to the two girls standing just a few inches away from us. They’re seniors too.

“Uh…Rika…hi. I’m not…we were…”

She had just lost all her ability to talk, impressive. She must really like this girl to be turned into a complete idiot by her presence. Rika giggles and puts on a charming smile. You could easily tell she was someone that everyone liked. I turn back to Yossie. She’s blushing.

“Yossie isn’t bothering you is she?” Rika asks me next

“No we’re just talking. She’s actually pretty cool.” 

She looks at Yossie and puts on this dreamy smile.

“Yes she is.” She cooed

After staring at Yossie for a few seconds she comes out of her daze and focus back to me.

“I’m Ishikawa Rika.” She points to the girl behind her that stood quiet this whole time. “This is Yaguchi Mari.”

“Tanaka Reina.” I give them a wave ‘hello.’ I just keep meeting more and more people don’t I?

“We’ve heard about the fight yesterday. You don’t have to worry about Nakazawa-san. It may be hard to believe, but she’s only going to do good for you. She’s helped many girls like you that have gotten into trouble.”  Rika assures me

As weird as this may sound, I trust her when she tells me that.

“She’s only mean and grouchy because she’s thirty and STILL isn’t married.” Mari laughs

“Kind of like how you’re mean and grouchy because you’re so short?” Yossie jokes

Miki chuckles. Mari puts on a face like she’s going to punch her. Rika gives Yossie a swat on the arm. I’ll try and remember to not mention anything about height around Mari. These four are something else. I think I’m going to like them being around. The bell rings for class to begin.

“I’ve got to go. Nice meeting you Reina.” Rika waves, and then runs to class.

“Catch you later.” Yossie smiles and she too is off.

I better get to class too before I’m too late.

 ***

I decided to go straight home again after school. I didn’t have much homework to do, but I just wanted to be home for once rather than having to hear all their yelling and laughing. I went straight to my homework when I got there. Yuka sat in my lap sleeping as I tried to finish my homework quickly. I heard keys jingle in the hall and the lock on the door clicked open.

“You’re here a little early.”

My uncle gives me a hello and goes straight to the kitchen.

“I bought you something.”

I lift my head up in joy when I hear that. I wonder what’s the occasion. My birthday wasn’t coming up. My uncle places a bag on the kitchen table. He really got me something and he’s not just saying it to mess with my head either.

“Well…are you going to see what it is or not?”

I put Yuka on the couch and go over eager to see what’s inside. I look at him before I look inside. He smiles at me and tells me to keep going. I put my hand inside and I pull out whatever is inside.

“You bought me a cell phone?!”  I scream excited.

He laughs and nods.  How did he know my parents took my cell phone away from me? They disconnected and everything too.

“How did you know I didn’t have one anymore?”

“I didn’t know actually. I just took a guess.”

I quickly begin to tear at the top. He has to be by far the greatest uncle I have. I take the cell out of the box and give him a big hug. He chuckles and pats me on the head.

“Just be good alright? I would hate to do the parental thing and take the cell away from you.”

I end the hug and nod my head. I look over my new phone. I’ll try not to easily lose this one just like my other ones.

“Another thing don’t go over your minutes. I don’t need to be in anymore debt.”

I nod.

“I won’t. Thank you!”

I grab the cell phone battery slid it into the back and grab the cord to charge it. Normally I would have to beg for things, but it seems with him I’m really starting a new slate. He trusts me and I don’t want to break someone’s trust again. I go over to my room and put the cord into a socket. I go back out. He’s over the store starting to cook diner.

“Come over here I’ll teach you an easy dish to cook.” He calls to me “Wash your hands first.”

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #81 on: December 18, 2008, 02:55:47 PM »
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #82 on: December 18, 2008, 03:03:43 PM »
Great chapter    :mon fyeah:
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“Ok someone’s going to have to sit in someone else’s lap.” Ai sighs
“You can sit right here Reina.” Sayu coaxes, and pats her lap.
Sayu don't lose time  :twisted:   :mon misch:

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She holds on to my waist tight and buries her face into my back. Having her hug me like this brings some sort of peace inside me. I don’t want her to let me go. Ai starts the car and pulls out of her parking spot.
each time Tanakame goes fortifying your friendship  :luvluv1:

Yossie not this together with Miki, but has Rika, pparently she this gotten passionate by Rika

it is good for knowing that Yuuko is trying to help Reina

the uncle of Reina goes to teach as to cook  :w00t:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #83 on: December 19, 2008, 01:40:00 AM »
Aww... HEY LOOK. *points at my av frantically*

IT'S JUST LIKE THAT!!!! :wub:

I'm glad to see Reina's life getting better. :)

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #84 on: December 19, 2008, 03:37:41 AM »
better life for Reina ~  :D

awwww, sit-on-my-lap-party~  :lol:

moar characters~  :D :D

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #85 on: December 19, 2008, 08:29:56 AM »
CHAPTER 12
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Those stupid girls didn’t come back after that. It was pretty much smooth sailing from there on.
Really? Wow, I thought that it would have been one of those "nice at school/bad outside of school" type of things.



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*YUKO-REINA TALK*
NOICE!!! Yuko went to bat for Reina! :rockon:



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Everyone agrees and starts walking their way to Ai’s car. As we get there it finally comes to me that there’s no way her car could fit all of us! Does that mean one of us has to walk home instead?

“Ok someone’s going to have to sit in someone else’s lap.” Ai sighs
Ooooooooooh, I like where this is going. :D



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“You can sit right here Reina.” Sayu coaxes, and pats her lap.

She smiles at me. Ok now I know I’m NOT sitting on HER lap!
Yeah sure, Sayu's arms would make a really good "seatbelt". XD



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Eri looks at me with a comforting face and motions for me to come over. I think sitting on her lap is the safest bet. I walk to the other side of the car door and get inside. I’m careful to not hurt her as I get in and sit down. On impulse, her arms wrap around my waist and that makes my stomach turn into a tight knot. I feel shy all over again.
Awwwwwwwwwwwww... :wub:



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*REINA MEETS RIKA*
I have to agree with Reina here. Yossi couldn't be more gaga for Rika if she had it tattooed on her forehead. :lol:

It's pretty damn cute, actually. :P



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“She’s only mean and grouchy because she’s thirty and STILL isn’t married.” Mari laughs

“Kind of like how you’re mean and grouchy because you’re so short?” Yossie jokes
XD



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“You’re here a little early.”

My uncle gives me a hello and goes straight to the kitchen.

“I bought you something.”
He did?  :?



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“You bought me a cell phone?!”  I scream excited.

He laughs and nods.  How did he know my parents took my cell phone away from me? They disconnected and everything too.

“How did you know I didn’t have one anymore?”

“I didn’t know actually. I just took a guess.”
When you think about it, it wouldn't have been that hard to figure out.  It's been about what, a week since she moved in? If she still had a keitai she likely would have been texting on it like mad to her friends back from the old town. Then, after meeting Aichan and the others, she would have been texting and calling them like mad.



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“Just be good alright? I would hate to do the parental thing and take the cell away from you.”

I end the hug and nod my head. I look over my new phone. I’ll try not to easily lose this one just like my other ones.

“Another thing don’t go over your minutes. I don’t need to be in anymore debt.”
Smart move by Uncle. By stating this he's establishing what's almost like a contract for Reina's phone privileges.  She's allowed to have her phone, but there are certain conditions that have to be met. He's made her aware of the conditions, as well as the consequences that would result in him having to take it away.

Smart move indeed. :yep:



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Normally I would have to beg for things, but it seems with him I’m really starting a new slate. He trusts me and I don’t want to break someone’s trust again.
For people like Reina (though not just kids) who are/have often been thought of as "bad apples", to suddenly have someone in their life who is willing to give them a fresh start like this, instead of always giving them the impression that they're under constant scrutiny can be very emotionally significant. It lets them know that not everyone will automatically doubt or mistrust them, which is part of why they continued the behaviour that they've become known for in the first place.




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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/18)
« Reply #86 on: December 21, 2008, 06:30:10 PM »
CHAPTER 13


 “Reina.”

I turn around and see Risa rushing down the hall. For once Ai wasn’t with her. That made me kind of worry. Did they get in a fight?

“What’s wrong?”

“Nothing’s wrong. I just needed to ask a favor from you.”

Now I’m curious. Why would she need my help? If it’s not relationship help then what is it? I listen and wait for her to tell me.

“I know Ai isn’t so excited about her birthday, but I want to throw a party for her at my place. I was wondering if you could help me with it?”

“Yeah sure, I can help you. What do you need me to do?”

“I need you to buy decorations and chips. I already have Eri, Sayu, and Koharu doing something else. And I’ll be keeping Ai busy since I can do that better than anyone else.”

I grin.

“I’m sure you can.”

She blushes and nudges me.

“Not like that!”

I chuckle.

“But don’t worry, that I can do. Here’s my number in case you need to reach me.”

I pull out my cell phone from my book bag. Risa takes out her cell and copies down my number. She wraps me into a hug after. That was unexpected. Faintly, I hug her back.

“Thank you. This is very important and hectic for me. And it’s hard to keep a secret from Ai-chan, she knows me very well. So I’ll need all the help I can get.”

“No problem. When is her birthday?”

“Next Tuesday. I fill you on all the details later.”

“There you two are. You aren’t trying to steal my girl are you Tanaka?” Ai interrupts

We both jolt. She just came out of nowhere! I hope she didn’t hear about what were planning. Ai walks up behind Risa and puts a protective arm around her waist. She puts on a playful smile and I shake my head smiling back. I think she didn’t hear what we were saying.

“Nah she’s all yours Ai.” I joke back

Risa smiles and plants a kiss on to Ai’s cheek. They’re so cute together.

“What were you two talking about anyway?”

“Nothing! We were just talk about school work that I needed help on.” Risa nervous says

Ai raises a brow. She isn’t buying it. Damn that could be trouble. Quick, I have to think of something else to change the subject! Uh…

“Where is everyone else?”

I let out a squeal of surprise and in a flash I ran to Risa and Ai, hiding. Sayu stood where I was grinning her little mischievous smile. I rub my aching butt. She laughed seeing my reaction.

“Did you just…”

She nods. I feel my cheeks burn in embarrassment. Ai and Risa laugh making my cheeks feel even hotter.

“Hey Reina, whoa what’s up with your face?” Koharu asks point at my redden face.

I look away trying to hide my face. This is just awkward and weird now. Close behind Koharu I could see Eri make her way over to us.

“Hey guys what’s up? Why is Reina’s face so red?” She looks at me curiously

Before I could say anything the bell rings, saving me from having to explain everything. I’m for once actually happy to get to class.

“I’ll see you guys later bye!” I say that in a rush and hurry to my class.

 ***

I was avoiding and dodging Sayu the whole day after that, you can never know when she would strike again. Everyone found it funny, but yeah I would like to see it happen to them, and THEN find it funny! That was pretty much my day though. I got some homework like I always do and another project due next week. Other than that my school day was boring. I decided to walk home today. I needed to pass a couple of stores anyway to get things for Ai’s surprise party.

“Hey wait up!”

I looked behind me to see Eri hurrying down the stairs towards me. What was she doing here? Her house was in the opposite direction of mine. I wasn’t going to push her away though. I enjoyed her company the most out of everyone else.

“Aren’t you going home?”

She rubbed the back of her neck and looked around. That was a bad topic to talk about. I put an arm on her wrist to get to look at me again.

“Come on let’s go to my place then.” I suggest

Her smile instantly goes back up. She agrees and follows me away from the school grounds. We’re quiet after that. I didn’t know what to say. I was too afraid I might just say something she wouldn’t want to talk about. I knew she didn’t want to be home right now, but I wasn’t going to ask why. I really wanted to know, but I just won’t push things. We walked down the street and made a turn and walked into a small alleyway. It was a shortcut I took to my house almost every day.

“There you are.”

On instinct I pushed Eri behind me and turned around. It was the guy that groped Eri’s butt before. I glared at him. He had a lot of nerve showing up again. My body went heavy and my heart was racing a mile a minute. Something told me this wasn’t right.

“What are you doing here? Looking for another beating?”

He laughs a cold and scary laugh. A smug smile appears on his nasty face, I want so much to just punch it off. I could hear Eri whimper faintly and grab on to me for comfort. I had to get her out of here. I was somewhat ok with him trying to hurt me, but he wasn’t going to lay a FINGER on her.

“I was thinking the other way around.”

He puts both his hands that were behind his back in front of him and his smile gets even bigger. Shit! He has a crowbar! This really is not looking good. If I knew we would play unfair I would have brought my switchblade with me. But my parents took that away from me when they found it, but I have just in case things like THIS happen.

“What’s a matter? Don’t think you can take me on?”

Can he be anymore of an asshole?! My body grew hot and my muscles were so tight they were starting to cramp. I wanted to punch his lights out. I looked around me. There was no one here or watching. This could get bad fast. Eri clutched my hand even tighter. She knew what was going to happen.

“Eri, I want you to get out of here.” I whisper sternly

I don’t keep my eyes off of this guy. I know better than to do that. He twirled the crowbar in his hands grinning from ear to ear. I felt Eri tug at my arm.

“I-I can’t leave you! You’ll get hurt!”

“Eri don’t argue with me just go. I can handle him. Don’t worry about me.”

Her hold on my hand loosens. She’s hesitant at first, but her grip on me gradually disappears. She can’t be here to see what would happen. I know for a fact I would not leave this fight unharmed, but I won’t tell her that. And I sure as hell won’t let her see that either. I hear her feet smacking the ground as she runs away to the end of the alleyway. Now it’s just this son of a bitch and me.

“You’ll be sorry. You made me look like a fool in front of my friends!”

I laugh. Can he be any stupider? Is that why he’s back? To try and get some of his pride back? Boys are always so stupid. He runs at me swinging his weapon. I was lucky enough to doge this attack, but I wasn’t so lucky on the second hit. He swung his crowbar again and the steel weapon hit my stomach, knocking the wind out of me. I bend over out of breath. I bite my lip pushing all my pain aside and tackled him to the ground. The crowbar went flying out of his hand. I threw punches wildly, not caring if they landed or missed. I just wanted to hurt him so bad, he wouldn’t even think about coming near me ever again. I was throwing hit after hit as hit face. Somehow he got his arms free and grabbed me by both shoulders and pushed me to the floor. My head hit the ground with a loud smack. I felt dizzy; he took this chance to get the crowbar back and stands over me. I can barely see, my sight is blurry, but I can still make out his stupid little smirk.

“Any last words?”

I stare at him. I wasn’t going to plead for him to stop. I wasn’t going to give him that satisfaction. He shrugged and lifted the crowbar above his head. For some strange reason the only thing that was on my mind was Eri. I needed to know if she was ok. I waited for crowbar to meet my face. I closed my eyes. There was nothing I could do.

“Hey you!”

I opened my eyes; the guy above me turned around and got a fist to the face, sending him stumbling back. I rubbed my eyes to see who it was that just saved me. Yossie looked down at me. She held out a hand for me.

“Are you ok?”

I took her hand and stand back up. The guy groans and I look back at him. The punch wasn’t enough to knock him out. He gets back up and charges. Yossie grabs him back the back of his shirt and throws him into a wall face first. His crowbar clatters to the floor. That would be sure to knock him out. I go and kick the crowbar to the other side as far as I could.

“Are you hurt?”

I clutch my stomach. It really hurts and so does the back of my head, but other than that I’ll be ok. In the back of my head through all these horrible events I’m thinking about Eri.

“I’ll be fine. Thank you for helping me.”

“Why was he after you anyway?”

“It’s a long story.”

I begin to walk to the other end of the alleyway. Yossie doesn’t ask any more questions after that. That had to be the smartest thing; I really wasn’t in the mood to answer them. Not when I was in so much pain. When we reach the end of the alleyway there was a scream not far by. My body went stiff. I knew that voice.

“Eri! We have to save her!” I scream to Yossie

I forget about all my pain and run in the direction the yell came from. She follows close behind me. I look around franticly for anything to tell me where Eri was. I had to save her! I couldn’t live with myself if I didn’t. There was another alleyway I spotted and ran to the entrance to see if she was there.

“Shut up! You’re so whinny!” One-guy growls

The bastard, he sent his two friends to wait at the other end, just in case one of us got out. That didn’t piss me off though, what did was that one guy who held Eri down while the other one was trying to rip open her shirt. Eri’s face was covered with tears and her skirt was lifted up high to her waist. She had a few cuts around her legs and it was covered in dirt. Seeing that made something in me just go crazy with rage. I rushed over and punched the guy on top her straight in the nose. I felt something in his nose crack when my fist connected with his face. He cried out holding his nose. The other guy holding her let her go and tried to attack back. I easily dodged his hit; I punched him right in the eye and kicked him in his balls. He went down after that. Both of the pigs got up and ran away. That should teach them! I kneeled down to Eri’s side. She was crying hysterically. I pushed down her skirt, smoothed it out, and fixed her hair. The first few buttons to her shirt were ripped off. I wanted to do more than just hit these guys. I wanted to murder them!

“Eri…it’s ok, I’m here now. They won’t hurt you ever again.”

She clung on to me sobbing, uncontrollably. From some reason…I was crying too. I could feel my tears slowly drip down my cheeks. They were silent tears of course; I didn’t want Eri to know how scared I was for her. I was so terrified of losing her or having something bad like that happen to her. I swallowed down my own sobs to try and stay strong for her.

“I’ll give you a ride home, hold on.” Yossie tells me

She pulls out her cell phone and started pressing buttons. I didn’t care who she called, just as long as it wasn’t my uncle. I didn’t want him to know about this. I stroked Eri’s hair trying to sooth her. She was still crying and her body was shaking so much in my arms. I was afraid she would just break out any minute. I stayed with her until the Yossie told us the car was here.

“Come on we have to go.”

I tried to get up, but Eri pulled me back down and tightened her grip. She was terrified. I had to try and calm her. I had to get her to move. If I let her stay like this who knew what could happen to her. She was just too fragile.

“Eri it’s ok. We’re going to my house now. We’ll be safe there.” She wasn’t letting out. “Eri?”
I lift her head up to look at her straight in the eyes. “You can trust me.”

Her crying stops, she gives a small nod and lets me go. I get up, help her up and walk out the alley. Yossie opens the back door to the car and we get inside. She takes the front. Eri buries her face into my neck and I put a protective arm over her.

“Is she ok?”

“She’s fine Rika just take them home.” Yossie mumbles

Rika faces the front of the car again and pulls out to the street. I give her the directions to my house and sit in silence the whole ride after. My body might be in tremendous pain, but all I was worried about was Eri. And I was glad she was ok.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/21)
« Reply #87 on: December 21, 2008, 06:55:51 PM »
Uh.. yeah, I wanna murder those guys too...

YAY you updated~
Haha, I love how Tanakacchi already whips out her cellphone as soon as she gets it ^^;

But it was sweet though, Tanakacchi telling Eri to trust her ><
and that small small TakaGaki moment was good too, I wanted to see jealous Takahashi for a moment though :lol:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/21)
« Reply #88 on: December 21, 2008, 08:39:26 PM »
Stupid guys and their pride. ¬¬ I hope Eri will be better... :( Reina'll be there for her. And Yossi to the rescue! ^__^

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/21)
« Reply #89 on: December 21, 2008, 09:18:35 PM »
haha
the first part was cute..then..it became intense!  :w00t: :w00t:

oHHH. TanaKame going strong! :D

cnt wait for Ai's suprise bday~  :P

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« Reply #90 on: December 22, 2008, 12:14:19 AM »
Great chapter
first part moment takagaki is very pretty, Ai-chan jalousie :twisted: , Reina fighting but if worrying about Eri :inlove: . why these guys are mattering with tanakame in such a way :angry:, this only increase the friendship of them  :wub:
as for example ...

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“Eri, I want you to get out of here.” I whisper sternly
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When we reach the end of the alleyway there was a scream not far by. My body went stiff. I knew that voice.

“Eri! We have to save her!” I scream to Yossie

I forget about all my pain and run in the direction the yell came from. She follows close behind me. I look around franticly for anything to tell me where Eri was. I had to save her! I couldn’t live with myself if I didn’t. There was another alleyway I spotted and ran to the entrance to see if she was there.
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“Eri?”
I lift her head up to look at her straight in the eyes. “You can trust me.”
much emotion for me  :imdead:
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« Reply #91 on: December 22, 2008, 08:16:15 AM »
CHAPTER 13
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“Reina.”

I turn around and see Risa rushing down the hall. For once Ai wasn’t with her. That made me kind of worry. Did they get in a fight?

“What’s wrong?”

“Nothing’s wrong. I just needed to ask a favor from you.”
Risa probably wants to plan some type of surprise for Aichan. :D



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“I know Ai isn’t so excited about her birthday, but I want to throw a party for her at my place. I was wondering if you could help me with it?”
Oh yeah. Totally called it. Risa's such a nice girlfriend.  :oops:



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I already have Eri, Sayu, and Koharu doing something else. And I’ll be keeping Ai busy since I can do that better than anyone else.”

I grin.

“I’m sure you can.”

She blushes and nudges me.

“Not like that!”
Hey, one thing for sure, it would work. :twisted:



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“Thank you. This is very important and hectic for me. And it’s hard to keep a secret from Ai-chan, she knows me very well. So I’ll need all the help I can get.”
And if she tries, Aichan undoubtedly has her ways of making her talk.  O0



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“No problem. When is her birthday?”

“Next Tuesday. I fill you on all the details later.”

“There you two are. You aren’t trying to steal my girl are you Tanaka?” Ai interrupts
OSHIT! AICHAN'S THERE!
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We both jolt. She just came out of nowhere! I hope she didn’t hear about what were planning. Ai walks up behind Risa and puts a protective arm around her waist. She puts on a playful smile and I shake my head smiling back. I think she didn’t hear what we were saying.
Ooooooooooooooooooo...looks like they're safe.
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“What were you two talking about anyway?”

“Nothing! We were just talk about school work that I needed help on.” Risa nervous says

Ai raises a brow. She isn’t buying it. Damn that could be trouble.
Uh-oh...maybe not.  :sweatdrop:



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Quick, I have to think of something else to change the subject! Uh…

“Where is everyone else?”

I let out a squeal of surprise and in a flash I ran to Risa and Ai, hiding. Sayu stood where I was grinning her little mischievous smile. I rub my aching butt.
Saved by Sayu!

...

Okay maybe not Reina's butt, but as long as it makes Aichan forget her being suspicious, what the hey.  :lol:



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“Hey wait up!”

I looked behind me to see Eri hurrying down the stairs towards me. What was she doing here? Her house was in the opposite direction of mine. I wasn’t going to push her away though. I enjoyed her company the most out of everyone else.
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“There you are.”

On instinct I pushed Eri behind me and turned around. It was the guy that groped Eri’s butt before. I glared at him. He had a lot of nerve showing up again. My body went heavy and my heart was racing a mile a minute. Something told me this wasn’t right.

“What are you doing here? Looking for another beating?”

He laughs a cold and scary laugh. A smug smile appears on his nasty face, I want so much to just punch it off.
Shit, something tells me he's gotten some help. Mind you if word ever got out that he needed HELP to get back at a girl who had beaten his ass...
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He puts both his hands that were behind his back in front of him and his smile gets even bigger. Shit! He has a crowbar! This really is not looking good. If I knew we would play unfair I would have brought my switchblade with me. But my parents took that away from me when they found it, but I have just in case things like THIS happen.

“What’s a matter? Don’t think you can take me on?”

Can he be anymore of an asshole?!
A better question would be, "Can he be any more of a coward/punk that he has to fight dirty against a girl that's smaller than him?!"  :angry: :angry: :angry:



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“Eri, I want you to get out of here.” I whisper sternly

I don’t keep my eyes off of this guy. I know better than to do that. He twirled the crowbar in his hands grinning from ear to ear. I felt Eri tug at my arm.

“I-I can’t leave you! You’ll get hurt!”

“Eri don’t argue with me just go. I can handle him. Don’t worry about me.”
I'd have to side with Reina on this one. Never mind the fact that if Eri sticks around, there's the possibility that she'll get hurt during the melee. There's also the chance that the punk would take advantage of her presence by using her as a shield or something to keep Reina from being able to fight back. Another reason for her to leave is so that she can get away from him. If, by hook or by crook, he manages to win the fight (don't let him Reina!), then the last thing that Eri wants is to continue to be within his reach.
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Her hold on my hand loosens. She’s hesitant at first, but her grip on me gradually disappears. She can’t be here to see what would happen. I know for a fact I would not leave this fight unharmed, but I won’t tell her that. And I sure as hell won’t let her see that either. I hear her feet smacking the ground as she runs away to the end of the alleyway. Now it’s just this son of a bitch and me.
Obviously this punk doesn't know about Reina's history when it comes to fighting. Now that Eri's (hopefully safely) away, Reina can UNLEASH THE WONKY FURY!!!
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“You’ll be sorry. You made me look like a fool in front of my friends!”

I laugh. Can he be any stupider? Is that why he’s back? To try and get some of his pride back? Boys are always so stupid.
Yeah, there's no denying it. We guys can be really dumb when our egos are busted like that.

Fortunately it looks like he's on his own here, so none of his friends will see what Reina's about to do to him.
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My head hit the ground with a loud smack. I felt dizzy; he took this chance to get the crowbar back and stands over me. I can barely see, my sight is blurry, but I can still make out his stupid little smirk.

“Any last words?”

I stare at him. I wasn’t going to plead for him to stop. I wasn’t going to give him that satisfaction. He shrugged and lifted the crowbar above his head. For some strange reason the only thing that was on my mind was Eri. I needed to know if she was ok. I waited for crowbar to meet my face. I closed my eyes. There was nothing I could do.
Onoes!
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“Hey you!”

I opened my eyes; the guy above me turned around and got a fist to the face, sending him stumbling back. I rubbed my eyes to see who it was that just saved me. Yossie looked down at me. She held out a hand for me.

...

The guy groans and I look back at him. The punch wasn’t enough to knock him out. He gets back up and charges. Yossie grabs him back the back of his shirt and throws him into a wall face first. His crowbar clatters to the floor. That would be sure to knock him out. I go and kick the crowbar to the other side as far as I could.
YAY YOSSI! :banana:



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“Are you hurt?”

I clutch my stomach. It really hurts and so does the back of my head, but other than that I’ll be ok.
Reina should probably see a doctor to make sure she doesn't have a concussion or cracked ribs. Only problem there would be that she'd likely have to tell her uncle about what happened...assuming of course the punk doesn't become even more of a douche and tells his parents or the school and THEY contact her uncle.



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When we reach the end of the alleyway there was a scream not far by. My body went stiff. I knew that voice.

“Eri! We have to save her!” I scream to Yossie

...

“Shut up! You’re so whinny!” One-guy growls

The bastard, he sent his two friends to wait at the other end, just in case one of us got out.
So THAT's why the guy was on his own.  Should have known that he might have pulled a stunt like this.
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That didn’t piss me off though, what did was that one guy who held Eri down while the other one was trying to rip open her shirt. Eri’s face was covered with tears and her skirt was lifted up high to her waist. She had a few cuts around her legs and it was covered in dirt. Seeing that made something in me just go crazy with rage. I rushed over and punched the guy on top her straight in the nose. I felt something in his nose crack when my fist connected with his face. He cried out holding his nose. The other guy holding her let her go and tried to attack back. I easily dodged his hit; I punched him right in the eye and kicked him in his balls. He went down after that. Both of the pigs got up and ran away.
:shilivid: :shilivid: :shilivid:



It's really unlikely that Reina's uncle won't find out about this incident. Question is, how will he react when he does find out? Hopefully he'll at least let Reina give her side of the story (and hopefully she tells him ALL of it so that he truly understands it fully).

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« Reply #92 on: December 22, 2008, 07:05:23 PM »
CHAPTER 14

It was a good thing my uncle wouldn’t be back until nine today. Or else he would start asking questions when he saw us. And I don’t think Eri needed that right now. She needed to rest. She needed somewhere to feel safe. I opened the door quickly and lead Eri to the couch. She had stopped crying, but she hadn’t said a word when she stopped.

“Do you want something to drink?”

She looks down to her hands on her lap. I’ll have to clean the cuts there.

“Water is fine.” She croaks

 I enter the kitchen, and I started to move around, the sharp pain in my stomach came back again. It really hurts. I think that bastard might have left a bruise, when the crowbar hit me. I’ll take a look at it later. I get the water and come back to the living room. I watch Eri take several shaky sips from the cup and put it to the side.

“You should rest. Hold on, I’ll get you clean clothes.”

Just as I get up, Eri’s hands cling around my wrist and bounds me back to the couch. Her eyes begin to tear up again. I shift closer to her and hold her. She has every right to feel how she does now. She was almost raped! I instantly get angry when I think about it again. No one should do such a thing to her. She deserves to be treated much better than that.

“I’ll get you new clothes. I’ll be right back. I’m not going to go anywhere.”

Yuka jumps on to my lap, startling Eri. I stroke her smooth fur a few times. I got an idea. I take Yuka and place her on to Eri’s lap. I pet the top of Yuka’s head.

“Yuka can keep you company. Don’t worry; she’s not a bad cat. She’s one of my best friends. Isn’t that right Yuka?”  I scratch under her chin. She almost instantly goes to sleep.

Eri laughs. I must look like an idiot right now when I said the last part. Eri agrees and takes Yuka into her own lap, then starts petting her. It looks like my idea worked. I get up to get a new pair of clothes for her. She should spend the night over here for today. I’m sure my uncle wouldn’t mind either. I’m not sure if anything will fit her though, but it’ll have to do. I go into my draw and pull out a shirt and pajama pants.

“Thank you.” Eri takes the clothes and puts it on the nightstand.

“We should take care of those cuts first. I don’t want them to get infected.”

Yeah so they’re little cuts. I’m just very worried about her! She’s so vulnerable. I don’t ever want anything bad like today to happen to her again. She puts Yuka to the couch and carries the clothes in with her. I lead her to the bathroom and tell her to sit on the toilet. I go under the sink to look for any disinfectant. My uncle has to have it around here somewhere. It’s too dark to see inside, blindly my hands search for anything. I wrap hands around a box and I pull it out. Yep, here it is, the first aid kit. I flip open the lid and get out the things I need. I kneel in front of Eri with a cotton ball dabbed in peroxide.

“You uh…need to lift up your skirt.”

She twitches when I say that. I’m sure she’s thinking about what happened to her moments ago when I say that. I didn’t want to bring up a horrible memory like that, but I need her to do it so that I can take care of her cuts. She looks in my eyes and I can’t tell what she’s thinking. I don’t want to scar her anymore than she already is. She just has to trust me. Carefully, she lifts the skirt herself.

“Go ahead.” She softly tells me

I know how hard this must be for her. She’s hurting so bad inside. I carefully dab each scrap and cut I could find with the cotton ball. My hand was a little shaky as I cleaned away the dirt. I felt my hand tingle, when my hand accidentally brushed against one of her thighs. She took a sharp in take of breath. I pulled my hand back quickly. She had this strange flicker in her eyes. They seemed…darker and more passionate. She didn’t look scared. I gulped. I felt exposed with her eyes looking so deeply into mine. My skin felt hot. I don’t remember it being this hot during the winter. Eri stroked a piece of my hair and rested her hand on the back of my neck. The hair on my body stuck up. My eyes focused suddenly, to her lips. They looked so soft and…kissable. They also had this unique and cute curve at the edges. I leaned up, getting closer and closer to her temping lips. My whole body was shaking and my stomach felt like there were butterflies flapping around trying to get out. I’ve never felt this nervous or eager to kiss someone. Hell! I never even had my first kiss yet! I was ok with that, because a huge part of me wanted Eri to be my first kiss. My first and only kiss. I was so lost in the moment, that I didn’t see Yuka make her way inside and jump onto of the cupboard that was a few inches above the toilet. Everything fell down on top of us. Breaking our moment.

“Itai.” Eri cries, rubbing the top of her head where various cleaning products fell.

I stared right into familiar glowing yellow eyes. I sighed frustrated. Yuka doesn’t have the greatest timing.

“Yuka you know better than to get up there.” I scold to her.

I take her off the cupboard and place her down to the floor. She isn’t normally this much of a troublemaker. I wonder what’s gotten into her. I start collecting the bottles that fell and place them back to the shelf.

“I’m sorry about that. Are you ok?”

She nods. I take the first aid kit and put it back under the sink. Her cuts will go away in a few days. She had nothing to worry about and either do I. I got back up and cringed. My stomach was killing me. It only hurt every time I had to bend down. Other than that it was ok.

“Reina?”

She must have seen me. I can’t let her know I’m in pain. And I had to tell her something. But I didn’t know what.

“You’re hurt.” She sounds scared

I shake my head.

“It’s nothing.”

I go to make a quick dash for the door. If I were out fast enough, I wouldn’t have to tell her anything.

“Let me see.”

I freeze. I might as well tell her. There’s no point in trying to lie or cover it anymore. I lift up my shirt. I’m kind of afraid to see what’s under it. I haven’t even looked at my stomach myself yet. I just hope it’s nothing bad. I lift it up passed my bellybutton. Eri lets out a gasps. I hope it isn’t that bad.

“You shouldn’t be walking around with that.”

I look down finally to my stomach. There’s a large black looking bruise. No wonder it hurts so much! He did hit me really hard with that damn crowbar. I put my shirt back down.

“It’ll be ok. You don’t have to worry.”

“You have to put ice on it.”

She gets up to walk me out the bathroom. I pull my hand back. She looks at me a little sad when I did that. I rub the back of my head. I flinch. I think I have a cut back there. It doesn’t hurt so badly as before though. She puts my hand down and goes behind me to take a look. She pushes strands of my hair on one side to get a better look.

“You’re bleeding.”

Her breath is warm against my neck. I feel paralyzed. The hairs on my neck point up. I clear my dried throat to speak.

“It’s nothing. It doesn’t even hurt. I’ll be fine Eri.”

I run my fingers over the cut. It stopped bleeding and most of the blood feels dry and crusted. But that doesn’t stop her from worrying over me. Yuka walks pass my feet and out the door. That seems like the smartest move to do right now. So without another word, I follow Yuka out and close the door behind me before Eri could say anything else. I really should put ice on it though. The pain is starting to kill me.

 ***

When Eri was done changing, she some how got me to put ice on my bruise. After that we sat on the couch watching TV. I still had the ice on my stomach. If I wanted to get something to drink she insisted on getting it for me. She didn’t want me moving around since I had that big bruise. I tried to do things myself, but she would just push me back down and get whatever I needed. So I was stuck to the couch, watching whatever show came on. Right now she was in the kitchen cooking me something to eat. She looked cute as she worked over the stove. So focused on whatever dish she was making. Watching her cook, was a lot more interesting than the TV.

“Can I take the ice off now? It’s making me cold.” I complain

I shivered as a cold drop of water fell. I couldn’t even feel the pain in my stomach anymore. Everything there was completely numb. I don’t even know why I’m asking her. I could just take the damn thing off myself.

“The food’s ready.” She announces

I get up and throw the ice right into the garbage. I’m glad to get rid of that thing. I take a seat beside Eri and look at the food she’s made. It looks really good. She knows how to cook more things than me. I grab my chopsticks and dig in to take a bite. It’s really good. She cooks way better than me too!

“Is it good?”

I nod.

“You have to cook for me again sometime.”

She smiles at me and goes back to eating. I like seeing her like this, happy and carefree. Hearing her laugh or seeing her smile makes me feel happy too. I’m glad she put aside the horrible events that happened today. It was best to just leave it in the past anyway. We eat in silence through out the entire meal, but it was a comfortable kind of silence.

 ***

My uncle like I guessed, agreed to let Eri sleep over. He didn’t ask any questions why I wanted to her to spend the night. He just said yes and that was it. That’s what did surprise me. It took me a minute to realize he wasn’t lying or trying to just mess with my head. Eri was so happy she gave him a hug as a thank you. He just told us to not make any noise. That was the only catch. That was easy for us to agree to. He went straight to bed after. He must have been really tired from work. Eri and I stood up watching TV for a while and talked. I never brought up any questions that were related to her house though. We both got tired around ten. Eri was the first to fall asleep. She had her head resting on my shoulder. I decided it was probably a good idea to go to bed too. I was pretty exhausted myself from what happened after school. I didn’t want to wake Eri, so I picked her up and walked to my room. She was kind of heavy, but after the entire struggle I managed to get her into my room. I put her gently on my bed and changed before joining her. My bed was kind of small, so it was hard to find space for myself, so I wouldn’t have to sleep on top of her. I ended up having to put one of my legs on hers. I let out a deep sigh and felt my body relax as I hit the matt. I didn’t think I would be this tired. It must have been from all the stress I was put through in a matter of seconds. I closed my eyes feeling sleep over take me.

“Reina?”

I opened one eye, lazily. Eri looked at me alarmed. I thought she was asleep. She looked around her freaked. She must have had a bad dream.

“Yeah?”

“Can you…hold me?”

I put an arm over her waist. She scooted over, so that we were nose to nose. She then put her face into my neck and her hand wrapped around my free hand. She immediately went back to sleep. Having her this close made me go stiff. My body shivered each time her light breath touched my neck. I shouldn’t be feeling like this. Its just Eri, It’s no big deal. But having her close to me made me not so tired anymore. I was going to have a hard time sleeping tonight.

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« Reply #93 on: December 22, 2008, 08:03:38 PM »
Excellent chapter   :mon star:

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“You uh…need to lift up your skirt.”
She twitches when I say that. I’m sure she’s thinking about what happened to her moments ago when I say that. I didn’t want to bring up a horrible memory like that, but I need her to do it so that I can take care of her cuts. She looks in my eyes and I can’t tell what she’s thinking. I don’t want to scar her anymore than she already is. She just has to trust me. Carefully, she lifts the skirt herself.
:mon determined: it must be very difficult for Eri at this moment, to have painful and recent souvenirs, very affectionate of the part of Reina if to import more with Eri of what with same it, but it is the mind of a gotten passionate person who this occupying the body of Reina

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They seemed…darker and more passionate. She didn’t look scared. I gulped. I felt exposed with her eyes looking so deeply into mine. My skin felt hot. I don’t remember it being this hot during the winter. Eri stroked a piece of my hair and rested her hand on the back of my neck. The hair on my body stuck up. My eyes focused suddenly, to her lips. They looked so soft and…kissable. They also had this unique and cute curve at the edges. I leaned up, getting closer and closer to her temping lips. My whole body was shaking and my stomach felt like there were butterflies flapping around trying to get out. I’ve never felt this nervous or eager to kiss someone. Hell! I never even had my first kiss yet! I was ok with that, because a huge part of me wanted Eri to be my first kiss. My first and only kiss.
:imdead: it is sad that did not occur the kiss  :mon hanky:

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I was so lost in the moment, that I didn’t see Yuka make her way inside and jump onto of the cupboard that was a few inches above the toilet. Everything fell down on top of us. Breaking our moment.
Reina don't worried other oprotunidades will come  :mon evillaff:

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When Eri was done changing, she some how got me to put ice on my bruise. After that we sat on the couch watching TV. I still had the ice on my stomach. If I wanted to get something to drink she insisted on getting it for me. She didn’t want me moving around since I had that big bruise. I tried to do things myself, but she would just push me back down and get whatever I needed. So I was stuck to the couch, watching whatever show came on. Right now she was in the kitchen cooking me something to eat. She looked cute as she worked over the stove. So focused on whatever dish she was making. Watching her cook, was a lot more interesting than the TV.
now  is the time of Eri to take care of Reina  :wub:
TanaKame in bed
it gave to perceive that the uncle of Reina is a person of few questions

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/22)
« Reply #94 on: December 22, 2008, 10:03:34 PM »
awwww man. this chapter was way too cute! :D  :wub: :wub:

moar.  :lol:

every scene was cute. >______<; :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub:

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« Reply #95 on: December 23, 2008, 12:23:40 AM »
Reina's lovestruck~ :D The ending was very, very cute. I can't wait to see them interact with each other some more. ^___^ Oh, and I hope Reina will heal soon. T__T

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« Reply #96 on: December 23, 2008, 01:59:49 AM »
:P
Tanakacchi should have just slept on top of Eri XD

Dammit, you're the writer!! >< make that bed smaller LOL
In any case, those two are so cute together ><
definitely looking for the next chap!!

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« Reply #97 on: December 23, 2008, 02:37:46 AM »
Thanks guys for the comments. I'm not sure when the next chapter will come, but I'll try my best. Try not to stalk me too much KizuRai while you wait! lmao *hides*

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« Reply #98 on: December 23, 2008, 08:08:00 AM »
CHAPTER 14

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It was a good thing my uncle wouldn’t be back until nine today. Or else he would start asking questions when he saw us. And I don’t think Eri needed that right now. She needed to rest. She needed somewhere to feel safe.
True. Definitely true.  Reina might be bruised up right now, but because of her past experiences, she's able to cope with what happened mentally/emotionally. Eri doens't have that experience to fall back on, so she's got no idea of how to deal with what just happened (particularly what those 2 arses were trying to do when they caught her outside of the alley). She's traumatized, and it's understandably so.



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I enter the kitchen, and I started to move around, the sharp pain in my stomach came back again. It really hurts. I think that bastard might have left a bruise, when the crowbar hit me. I’ll take a look at it later.
Considering she was hit with a crowbar, it could be bruised or even cracked ribs. I still vote for a visit to the doctor's.  :O



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“I’ll get you new clothes. I’ll be right back. I’m not going to go anywhere.”

Yuka jumps on to my lap, startling Eri. I stroke her smooth fur a few times. I got an idea. I take Yuka and place her on to Eri’s lap. I pet the top of Yuka’s head.

“Yuka can keep you company. Don’t worry; she’s not a bad cat. She’s one of my best friends. Isn’t that right Yuka?”  I scratch under her chin. She almost instantly goes to sleep.

Eri laughs. I must look like an idiot right now when I said the last part.
Hey, if it helps calm Eri down after what she's just been through, then looking like an idiot isn't so bad. :yep:



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*REINA CLEANS ERI'S CUTS*
Hell of a time for the two of them to...well...you know.  :-X



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I was so lost in the moment, that I didn’t see Yuka make her way inside and jump onto of the cupboard that was a few inches above the toilet. Everything fell down on top of us. Breaking our moment.

“Itai.” Eri cries, rubbing the top of her head where various cleaning products fell.

I stared right into familiar glowing yellow eyes. I sighed frustrated. Yuka doesn’t have the greatest timing.
Actually, I'd have to say that she probably does. I mean, seriously, does Reina want her (hopefully) first kiss with Eri to be done under THESE circumstances, when Eri's so emotionally...unpredictable (to say the least)?  Of course it's pretty evident that they both like each other, but for it to happen this way, after the events that just happened, I have to say it just doesn't sit right with me. They shouldn't have to look back and see THIS as what lead to their first kiss. :(



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I got back up and cringed. My stomach was killing me. It only hurt every time I had to bend down. Other than that it was ok.
At this point, I'm DEFINITELY thinking Reina's got cracked ribs (at the very least, it could be worse). Doctor. The sooner, the better. :o



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I rub the back of my head. I flinch. I think I have a cut back there. It doesn’t hurt so badly as before though. She puts my hand down and goes behind me to take a look. She pushes strands of my hair on one side to get a better look.

“You’re bleeding.”
Oh, please say that she doesn't have a concussion too. :cry:



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I was stuck to the couch, watching whatever show came on. Right now she was in the kitchen cooking me something to eat. She looked cute as she worked over the stove. So focused on whatever dish she was making. Watching her cook, was a lot more interesting than the TV.
Yeah, I'll be it was.

Reina watching Eri = :wub:



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My uncle like I guessed, agreed to let Eri sleep over. He didn’t ask any questions why I wanted to her to spend the night. He just said yes and that was it. That’s what did surprise me. It took me a minute to realize he wasn’t lying or trying to just mess with my head.
That's awfully cool of him...but does he suspect that something is amiss?



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I didn’t want to wake Eri, so I picked her up and walked to my room. She was kind of heavy, but after the entire struggle I managed to get her into my room. I put her gently on my bed and changed before joining her.
:wriggly:



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My bed was kind of small, so it was hard to find space for myself, so I wouldn’t have to sleep on top of her. I ended up having to put one of my legs on hers.

...


“Reina?”

I opened one eye, lazily. Eri looked at me alarmed. I thought she was asleep. She looked around her freaked. She must have had a bad dream.

“Yeah?”

“Can you…hold me?”

I put an arm over her waist. She scooted over, so that we were nose to nose. She then put her face into my neck and her hand wrapped around my free hand. She immediately went back to sleep.
They're snuggling!!!
 :mon inluv:



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My body shivered each time her light breath touched my neck. I shouldn’t be feeling like this. Its just Eri, It’s no big deal. But having her close to me made me not so tired anymore. I was going to have a hard time sleeping tonight.
Eri = :sleep:
Reina = :on bleed:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 12/22)
« Reply #99 on: December 23, 2008, 08:16:24 AM »
Chapter 12

I knew Sayu was gonna ask Reina to sit on her lap XD
I'm serious, this uncle is such a good man *thumbs up*


Chapter 13

A crowbar on 2 girls!??!!? This idiot needs some help. In the form of a tank rolling over him :angry:


Chapter 14

Eri!!! *I hurt when I read she was hurt* :cry:

TanaKamei!! I think I actually like reading them together now. *gasped* Look what your writing did to me :D

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