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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/27)
« Reply #220 on: February 28, 2009, 01:15:16 AM »
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“Mom?” I choke out

Awww, Reina's mom just ruined possible plans for a romantic evening for TanaKame. D:

This story continues to make me feel all mushy on the inside lol. Keep it up!

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/27)
« Reply #221 on: February 28, 2009, 03:15:48 AM »
lol I'm guessing this update was good judging by the reactions. lol Yes I do like to mess up nice moments from time to time. *ducks* You'll have to just see what happens next. Though the update might take a while. I seem to be updating later and later it seems. My muse is disappearing half way through the update and that sucks. It'll come back I think after I get to the fun parts I have planned. Thanks for the comments. They always make me feel better and want to write more. :D

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/27)
« Reply #222 on: February 28, 2009, 04:14:23 AM »
oh my. a trip to Kamei's house.
Mama Kame!  :cry:

aww staying over..
eh?! Mama Tanaka? XD

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/27)
« Reply #223 on: February 28, 2009, 06:15:21 AM »
CHAPTER 29

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But the next day Eri wasn’t in school. I even stayed a little longer at my locker to see if she was just running late and I would finally meet her, but she never came. It made me a little sad. Why would she not show up? Is something wrong?
The way I see it, especially considering her and Reina's relationship, there's really only ONE thing that I can think of that would cause Eri to willingly ditch school.  :shocked:



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“You both had your first date?” Koharu interrupts

“Yeah.” I bluntly respond

“Ah, that’s so cute! Why haven’t we had a first date senpai?”

Sayu comes up to Koharu’s side and puts an arm around her shoulder. Koharu seems a little upset that she hasn’t had a date yet.
I think Sayu skipped the "dating" part and just went straight to the making out part.  :D



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“We don’t have a plan for Halloween.

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“I thought we weren’t going to celebrate it this year?” Sayu says

“But I want to dress up!” Koharu puts on a pout
I'm sure Sayu wouldn't object to that. :twisted:



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“Aren’t we too old to be dressing up?” Risa points out

“Nuh uh!” Koharu disagrees. “Besides I like free candy.” She folds her arms over her chest and pouts again.

“I don’t think you need any more candy Koharu. You’re energetic enough as it is.” Ai cuts in
Aichan with the burn! XD



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I see Eri by her mother’s side patting her head with a cool rag dipped in water. Eri turns around and stares at me in shock. She stands up and puts the rag into the bowl beside her. Eri’s mom looks so pale and fragile. She looks like she’s in so much pain. Her breathing is weak and short. She wheezes with every breath she takes. I feel so bad. Everyone here has to see her like this. They have to see her suffer.
I knew it. Her mom's condition has gotten worse, hasn't it? :cry:



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“She’s sick. They told us that her immune system would be weaker if she went through the operation. She’s had a high fever all night. It comes and goes.”
So she needs the operation, but they're telling the family that her body currently can't endure it? :O



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*ERI'S MOM'S COUGHING FIT*
Holy geez. Hearing about how hard it is, that's one thing. Having to actually witness it, and then realize that for the family, it's most likely a common/frequent occurrence,  that's just harsh.
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*ERI'S SISTER*
OSHIT! SHE SAW?!?!?
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“Come over my place.”

“What? I can’t!”

“If you stay here it’ll only hurt more. You need a break. When’s the last time you ate? Or had a decent sleep?”

She scratches the back of her head, timid to answer. This settles it. She’s coming with me. She can stay for a little while I don’t care. Just as long as she’s not here, it’ll do her good to stay away.

“I need to play my part to being a good girlfriend. How can I do that when you’re stopping me from doing it?” I state

“I’ll get my coat.” She mumbles
Reina makes a good point here. As much as Eri is probably needed and wants to be there, she needs a break, even if it's just for a little while. She can't push herself so hard, for so long. If she does she'll just eventually crack.  A diversion, ANY diversion, regardless of how long/short it is, IS needed every now and then to keep one "functional".



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I open the front door and the second I do my heart races off the scale. I instantly let go of Eri’s hand and stand still. I can’t believe what I’m seeing. Is this real? I’m not seeing things am I?! Please tell me this is all in my head!

“Reina, thank god you’re home!”
Oops, Reina forgot to let her uncle know she'd be home late. He's probably been worried.  :sweatdrop:



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“Mom?” I choke out
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHH?!?!?!!??
:mon wtf:


Okay, couple of things:
a) was NOT expecting this, and
b) considering that Reina (as far as we know), hasn't yet contacted her parents since the move and thus has NOT informed them about Eri......oh man this is SHITTY timing.
:mon scare:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/27)
« Reply #224 on: March 01, 2009, 02:07:28 PM »
Don’t to tell me she’ll be taken back to her hometown?  :shocked

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 2/27)
« Reply #225 on: March 01, 2009, 04:13:35 PM »
CHAPTER 30


“I was so worried about you! Where were you?”

My mom gets up from the couch and rushes to me. She pulls me into a hug, but I’m in too much shock to hug her back. Why is she here? She chose the wrong time to come! This isn’t any good. I look to my uncle for an answer. He shrugs. I faintly pat my mom’s back. Someone please tell me she’s only here to visit!

“Mom…I’m ok. There’s no need to worry.”

She lets me go and strokes my face lovingly. She starts to tear. She really does miss me. She doesn’t even notice Eri next to me watching the whole scene before her. All she cares about is, me at the moment. If my mom misses me this much I hope she doesn’t try to bring me home! Not right now at least. And I don’t want Eri to see it either.

“I’ve missed you so much. It’s been really quiet at home and your friends miss you too.”

But oddly, I don’t miss any of them. I don’t even miss home anymore. It seems like all one distant place to me now. I think I’ve made Tokyo my home and I don’t plan on leaving. I’ll fight to stay here. I won’t give in like I did with my parents when they told me I was coming here. I have so much to lose here.

“Uh…why don’t we sit down?” My uncle suggests, “I’ll go get us some drinks. Reina will you help me?”
“I’ll be right back.” I whisper to Eri and quickly rush towards the kitchen. This whole thing is too weird. It’s like some horrible dream I can’t wake up in.

“Why didn’t you tell me she was coming?!” I yell

My uncle grabs the cup from the top cabinet and places them to the counter.

“I honestly didn’t know. She just showed up on my door, literally!” He admits

He opens the refrigerator door and gets out some juice that’s in a pitcher. I shouldn’t be mad at him. None of this is his fault. I take several deep breaths to get myself together. I’ll just have to go through whatever my mom’s gonna pull on me and I just hope I can deal with it.

“What do I do? I brought Eri over to spend time with her, but now that my mom’s here what do I say about Eri?”

He puts a hand on my shoulder. He can’t tell how stressful I am. How can he stay so calm? I take another deep breath.

“You’ll just say she’s your friend. It’s no big deal. You’ll be ok Reina. Here hand these drinks out.” He gives me two cups and he takes the other two.

Carefully, I walk into the living room and place the cups on the coffee table. I sit next to Eri when I’m done. Great, she walks out of one problem and right into another. When I told her to take a break I didn’t mean this. I stare at my lap, but I can feel my mom’s eyes on me from across the table. She must have so much to say and I’m scared to know what it is. There’s just some bad news I can’t handle. I see my uncle’s black shoes in my view as I look down and he puts the cups down then takes a seat. We’re all quiet sitting in silence. I pick up my head scanning my eyes over the people around me.

“Well…let’s start with some type of a conversation.” My uncle urges

My mom looks at Eri as if she’s finally notices her. My hands slightly curl up when I see her direction focus to Eri. What is she going to think about her?! Will she take this bad if I tell her about the truth?

“Who is she, Reina?”

I turn to Eri. Relax; it’s no big deal. Like my uncle said. I look back to my mom.

“Uh…this is Eri, mom. She’s my friend from school.” I want to tell her, she’s more. That Eri’s my girlfriend, but I have no clue how she will take it.

“You’ve made friends here, that’s nice.”

“I’ve made plenty of friends.” I shoot back

“It’s nice to meet you Eri. Is she your best friend?”

Oh you can say that. She’s my kissing friend, and groping friend, and other things that people in relationships do. I won’t tell my mom that though.

“Yeah, we’re close friends.”

There’s another long pause. If she came here she should at least have something to say to me about this surprise visit. I want to so bad to hold Eri’s hand, but I know that will bring questions from my mom. There’s only so much my uncle can do to help me.

“Your uncle says you’re in an all girl school now.”

I sit up straight at the mention of that. My mom sounds like she’s disgusted by that choice of school. I’m so nervous again. This will give her ideas and in no time she’ll ask me if I’m into girls or if Eri’s someone I’m dating. That would not end so well. I might as well be dead where I stand er…sit? Either way I’m a dead man! Can I get an clearer?!

“How are you supposed to get a boyfriend if you’re surrounded by all girls?”

I feel that I’m about to choke. My breathing stops for a second. It’s like I got punched in the stomach. I can’t tell her the truth for sure now. I feel Eri shift beside me. She can sense the intensity around us too it seems. This is bad. This is really, really, bad. Please don’t ask any more questions! I’ll change the subject. I’ll ask her something I’ve been thinking since she’s gotten here.

“Why are you here, mom?” I try my best to not sound upset, but I’m sure that fails. She hesitates to answer. Now everything is turned on her. I rather have it that way for now. “Do you want me to come back?”

Please say no to that. She fidgets in her seat guilty. She does?! She came here to take me back home without even asking me? She didn’t even talk this over with me! She’s just going to bring me back just like that?! It’s not fair! I can’t leave. I can’t leave my friends or Eri like that. I didn’t even give a proper goodbye to anyone. A whole new feeling over washes me and it’s anger.

“Reina, I…”

“I’m not going back! You can’t make me!” I scream

I stand straight out of my seat. My mom looks at me surprised. And I’m a little surprised myself that I raised my voice at her. I never scream at her. It’s usually my dad who I raise my voice to. What’s gotten over me? I know I’m angry, but I must be fuming with such rage I’ve never felt before towards my parents. I rub the back of my neck and sit back down.

“Mom, I…I don’t want to leave. This is like my home. I can’t leave my friends and uncle behind.” I ask more softly

I’m calming down, only a little. It’s quiet again for a little and that’s always a bad sign. What if my mom just grabs me and walks out? I did kind of disrespect her. So she has a right to be angry too. But instead of grabbing me and walking out she talks to me again.

“Is that what you want?” She sounds so sad

But I can’t back down now. I can’t let her sad face make me give in. I have to stay strong. Eri needs me. And suddenly thinking about her gives me the strength I need to stand. I won’t let her go through more pain because of me. I never want that. So I can’t leave. I know how much she loves me and having me just disappear before her eyes would kill her.

“Yes, that’s what I want.” I say sternly

My mom is disappointed and I feel so bad for making her feel that way. But I have to put my foot down. I can’t let them just put me where they want me. I’m staying here and it’s final. I hope she can understand that. I know my dad won’t. He can’t seem to understand anything when it comes to me. I think that’s also why we never get along. He should be a little more like his brother.

“I’m sorry mom.”

“Well I…should get going then. I’ll talk to you another time. It was nice seeing you Reina.”

She gets up and heads towards the door. My uncle gets up to walk with her. I feel awful, but I have to do this. I have to be tough and say what I want and what I won’t agree on. This place means too much to me now. It’s too late to go back home. I’m just glad it was my mom that came here. If my dad was here instead, he would be yelling, threatening me, throwing things, and even physically pulling me out. Even if Eri’s here watching and if he knows Eri’s someone I’m dating, he’ll flip out. There’s no doubt about that.

“Are you ok?” Eri whispers

“I’ll be fine. I just feel bad having to be mean to my mom. At home she was the only one that would side with me when I got into fights with my dad. And I feel that I’m repaying her by doing this.”

Eri lays her head on my shoulder and I rest my chin on her head comfortably. I smile. It makes me feel better knowing she’s here to comfort me. She moves her arm and finds my hand then holds it. I should be the one doing this to her not the other way around. I’ll be ok. This setback is nothing; she’s the one that’s going through more than me. I hear my uncle say goodbye and then close the door. He comes back into the living room.

“Yes I’m ok.” I answer for him

“I have to go. There are some things I need to do for work. So while I’m gone, don’t make a mess, and well…I’m sure you know the other thing.”

“We won’t.” I dully reply

Happy with my answer, he grabs his coat and walks out the door. Now we’re all alone. So many thoughts and ideas are racing through my head. But I won’t do anything. Eri needs to relax. She needs a break. I’ll try all my will power to not lay her against the couch and have my way with her. It’s really hard. I get up and stand in front of her. She looks at me as she misses my warmth from sitting so close to me.

“Where are you going?”

“I’m going to get your bath ready.”

Her face scrunches up in confusion.

“I’m not going to take a bath.”

“You are now. It’ll help you relax.”

I turn around to walk towards the bathroom.

“But I don’t wanna take one now.” She whines

She sounds so cute when she says it like that. I turn around and give her a stern look. It feels like I’m her mother and she’s my child, oddly. She even has on a pout and it’s such a cute and luring pout.

“Nope my mind is set. I’ll throw you in the tub if I have to.” I say back

She sighs putting her head down in defeat.

“I’ll take a bath, but only if you take one with me.”

I stand there in shock, caught off guard. My mouth slightly hangs open as I start to rapidly think of things that would be going on if I join her in the bathroom. My face feels really hot and my mouth is dry. She looks at me through thick lashes and puts on this innocent smile. But it’s FAR from innocent in my eyes! She wants to see me squirm! She starts laughing and gets up from her seat, happily walking pass me.

“I’m just kidding. You don’t have to take a bath with me Reina. It’s ok.” She says and pats me on the shoulder. Then goes into the bathroom room. I hear the door shut and lock and I’m still standing there taken back.

Damn it! Why didn’t I say something?! Or at least go with her to the bathroom! Ah I’m such an idiot. But I can’t stop thinking about her now and how should would look with all her clothes off. I gulp and exhale. I need to find something to keep these thoughts off my mind. That’s going to be so hard.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/1)
« Reply #226 on: March 01, 2009, 05:41:08 PM »
HAHAHAHA!! Teasing Eri. xD I seriously started to lol. I do feel bad for Reina's mother, though. :( I hope things will work out somehow.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/1)
« Reply #227 on: March 01, 2009, 06:17:28 PM »
Reina's Mother mmmm....

then she really just go, for taken her back... but we know she will not xD

Damn it must been hard for Reina's Mother that she react like that u_u

She Love's Eri so much *o*

Damn Reina you are such an idiot xDDDDDDDDDDD How you can't said.... SURE baby let's GO!!! or at least NOD!! xD

Damn I wanna know what will happend when Eri gets out the bathroom *Q*

She will be out just in a TOWEL!!! OMG my mind is running so fast xD

I need a shower too.... a very cold one!!! jajajaja xD


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/1)
« Reply #228 on: March 01, 2009, 09:18:34 PM »
Omfg, Tanakame FTW! Oh my,,, my,,, my head is all hot,,, burning with a lot of ideas, oh my,,, I'm going crazy,,, I really need a cold shower, oh,,, my,,,,

Keep it up, reakky, this is the best TanaKame fanfic that I read in all my life, omg, *nosebleed*

WHEN WAS THAT PERV? XD! *all excited*

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« Reply #229 on: March 01, 2009, 09:26:05 PM »
lmfao you'll see the perv soon, sadly not in the next chapter, but you will see it later on. And the next chapter I'm sure you'll like as well. haha Just wait a bit.

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« Reply #230 on: March 01, 2009, 11:00:00 PM »
lmfao you'll see the perv soon, sadly not in the next chapter, but you will see it later on. And the next chapter I'm sure you'll like as well. haha Just wait a bit.


Then that's mean that you are gonna make us suffer for a while xDDDDDD????

THE HELL I like it x)

Keep writing -3- and I will give you a cookie \ (*o*) / jajaajajaja


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/1)
« Reply #231 on: March 02, 2009, 07:43:08 AM »
CHAPTER 30

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Why is she here? She chose the wrong time to come! This isn’t any good. I look to my uncle for an answer. He shrugs. I faintly pat my mom’s back. Someone please tell me she’s only here to visit!
Ah, so Reina's mom's showing up was just as much of a surprise to her uncle, by the looks of it.  Had he known, he probably would have let her know (if for no other reason than to give Reina a chance to think of how she's going to tell her about her and Eri). Still though, I'm surprised he didn't send a text/email to Reina's phone so that she at least wouldn't have had the shock of seeing her just when she came in the door.



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“I’ve missed you so much. It’s been really quiet at home and your friends miss you too.”

But oddly, I don’t miss any of them. I don’t even miss home anymore. It seems like all one distant place to me now. I think I’ve made Tokyo my home and I don’t plan on leaving. I’ll fight to stay here. I won’t give in like I did with my parents when they told me I was coming here. I have so much to lose here.
Looks like mom didn't realize just how much of an impact Reina's leaving would actually have. At the time, all she and Reina's dad were thinking of was trying to get Reina to change her ways so she wouldn't get into fights/trouble so much.  She most definitely doesn't have a clue or never thought of the possibility of Reina really doing well in her "new" life, and not wanting to go back to her old one. :O

If she DID come to take Reina back, she's going to be in for one HELL of a shock.



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“What do I do? I brought Eri over to spend time with her, but now that my mom’s here what do I say about Eri?”

He puts a hand on my shoulder. He can’t tell how stressful I am. How can he stay so calm? I take another deep breath.

“You’ll just say she’s your friend. It’s no big deal. You’ll be ok Reina. Here hand these drinks out.” He gives me two cups and he takes the other two.
Uncle's got the right idea. Now is definitely not the right time to say "Hey mom, this is my Eri, my girlfriend." For now, just get her introduced to and, more importantly, used to Eri and seeing her and Reina as friends. Seeing that Reina isn't lonely and that she has made some good friends with good people will/should help calm her and (hopefully), get her to accept Eri as a person. It's too early to try and get her to accept Eri as Reina's GF.  :sweatdrop:



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“It’s nice to meet you Eri. Is she your best friend?”

Oh you can say that. She’s my kissing friend, and groping friend, and other things that people in relationships do. I won’t tell my mom that though.
Um...yeah, no need for her to hear that.  :-X

Now let's just hope that Eri doesn't end accidentally wind up letting the proverbial cat out of the bag.



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“Your uncle says you’re in an all girl school now.”

I sit up straight at the mention of that. My mom sounds like she’s disgusted by that choice of school.

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“How are you supposed to get a boyfriend if you’re surrounded by all girls?”
WTF? Mom?  :shocked:

Surely Reina's uncle told her parents that THAT was the only school he could get her enrolled into on such short notice/under the circumstances?  Besides, considering that Reina has been "living away" from home for the past while, shouldn't she, as a mother, be WORRIED that Reina might have a BF and there might, oh, I don't know...have gotten knocked up or something?  O_o




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“Why are you here, mom?” I try my best to not sound upset, but I’m sure that fails. She hesitates to answer. Now everything is turned on her. I rather have it that way for now. “Do you want me to come back?”

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“Reina, I…”
Oh shit, she DID want to bring Reina back!  :shocked:



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*REINA TAKES HER STAND*
Well, she didn't really have much of a choice, when you think about it. Her parents were the ones who sent her here in the first place, so if anything, they brought this all on themselves. They can't go back, they can't have things back the way they used to be.  They sent Reina away, and in doing so, her eyes were opened to a new life, with new people, and new chances/opportunities. They basically gave that to her, and now they want her to give it up? I don't think so.



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“Are you ok?” Eri whispers

“I’ll be fine. I just feel bad having to be mean to my mom. At home she was the only one that would side with me when I got into fights with my dad. And I feel that I’m repaying her by doing this.”
It's not that Reina hates her folks or her hometown or anything like that, it's just that she has more reasons to stay than she has to go back. Hopefully her mom at least can understand that what's behind Reina's desire to stay. If it was her dad, even though he does love her and means well, he's just too close-minded on some things and is stuck in the "my way or the highway" mentality.



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“I have to go. There are some things I need to do for work. So while I’m gone, don’t make a mess, and well…I’m sure you know the other thing.”

“We won’t.” I dully reply
I like how uncle is...subtle about the way he refers to...well, you know.
:mon sweat:

He probably has nothing to worry about. Even if they wanted to, the mood's kind of been killed with what just happened.



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“Where are you going?”

“I’m going to get your bath ready.”

Her face scrunches up in confusion.

“I’m not going to take a bath.”

“You are now. It’ll help you relax.”

I turn around to walk towards the bathroom.

“But I don’t wanna take one now.” She whines
Dammit that's cute. :oops:

I can totally see where THIS is going, BTW. :D



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“I’ll take a bath, but only if you take one with me.”

I stand there in shock, caught off guard.
Booyah! :twisted:



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My mouth slightly hangs open as I start to rapidly think of things that would be going on if I join her in the bathroom. My face feels really hot and my mouth is dry. She looks at me through thick lashes and puts on this innocent smile. But it’s FAR from innocent in my eyes! She wants to see me squirm! She starts laughing and gets up from her seat, happily walking pass me.

“I’m just kidding. You don’t have to take a bath with me Reina. It’s ok.” She says and pats me on the shoulder. Then goes into the bathroom room. I hear the door shut and lock and I’m still standing there taken back.
Reina = :stunned:
Eri =  :bingo:
Reina = :stunned:
Eri =  :ptam-glow:
Reina = :stunned:

Oh Eri, you tease. Gotta wonder though...just how much WAS she kidding?  :roll:



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Damn it! Why didn’t I say something?! Or at least go with her to the bathroom! Ah I’m such an idiot. But I can’t stop thinking about her now and how should would look with all her clothes off. I gulp and exhale. I need to find something to keep these thoughts off my mind. That’s going to be so hard.
:banghead: :doh:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/2)
« Reply #232 on: March 02, 2009, 02:33:24 PM »
CHAPTER 31


Remember when I said I would distract myself to stop the bad thoughts? Well that isn’t working! In fact, it makes things worse. Don’t ever try doing it, because it’s pointless! That’s my advice. I can’t keep my mind off her. First I tried drawing, but my hands were shaking so bad it made my cat look like a bunch of scribbled squished lines a two year old would make. Then I tried watching TV and it was ok at first, until the girls on the game show had to wear bathing suits for the game to start. Of all the damn luck! Couldn’t they have done that a week ago?! So I kept picturing Eri in the bathing suits instead, which lead me back to realizing she’s naked in the bathroom bathing. I just can’t win, can I?! You try staying still while you have Eri naked just a few steps away from you, then you’ll understand. She’s been in the tub for an hour and a half too. She must be part fish besides half turtle. Yuka walks into the living room and I reach down, quickly placing her onto my lap. I start petting her smooth fur to try and keep my head clear. But this time she doesn’t want to play or be petted. Oh she chose a great time! She starts squirming in my lap and her legs go flying everywhere. Stay still, damn it! She’s getting angry. I let her go before she decides to scratch my face off. She runs for safety when I put her down. And now I’m left staring at the walls again.

“Yeah some pet cat!” I yell to her before she’s out of my sight.

“Reina, can you get me a towel? I forgot to get one.” Eri says from behind the bathroom door.

My brain goes into overload again. Ok, calm down Reina. You’re just getting Eri a towel and then you leave, quickly. Yeah that sounds like a good plan. I get up to grab a towel.

“I’m coming.” I tell her

I get the first towel I see and head towards the bathroom. I can do this. I can do this. It’s no big deal. I knock on the door first when I get there.

“Is it ok to come in?”

“Yes.”

I open the door slowly to brace myself when I get inside. Eri is still in the tub sitting there and covering her-self. My throat instantly goes dry. Look at her face, Reina. Her face! I hold the towel out for her to take. She seems shy about this too. Her eyes are cast downward and her cheeks are starting to turn pink. I think my face is completely red.

“Thank you.” She whispers and carefully gets up to grab it.

I think I’m about to die! I close my eyes and turn my head as she stands up fully to take it. I can hear the water swishing around and trickle down the floor. Oh I’m going to die any minute! I feel her fingers touch mine and this chocked sound automatically comes out of my mouth. The towel leaves my hand. I’m taking things VERY smoothly! I’m such an idiot.

“Are you ok?” You sound like you’re in pain.”

“Oh, I’m fine! Really, I’m great. Just…peachy.” I cry “Can I open my eyes now?!”

“Yes.”

I open them and breath out. And I don’t know what’s hotter; Eri naked and wet or Eri wet, covered by a towel that she’s naked under. That’s a tough one. Just keep looking at her face and I’ll be ok! I think…

“Can you help me out?”

“Uh…um…sure.”

She holds out her hands and I grab them then she slowly gets out. She’s careful to not slip or lose her footing. She lets go when she’s safely on the ground.

“I’ll go get you some clean clothes.”

We walk towards my room together.

“You should really bring a bag of clothes over here since you seem to be here a lot.” I suggest

“I’ll bring it next time.” She promises

I start digging in my draw for clothes while Eri stands next to the bed, waiting. I get the things I need and hand it to her. I better leave now. I don’t think I can control myself any longer. I sprint towards the door.

“It’s ok.” Eri suddenly calls out

I turn around lost. She has on a serious face.

“Huh?”

“When I’m naked it’s ok to look at me. As long as you’re the one that’s looking at me, I’m fine with it.”

She looks away embarrassed by her announcement and my brain fries after that. It just works on it’s own. I go over to her and kiss her. I’m hungry for her. Having her against me is all I can think of. She kisses me back passionately. I put my arms around her to bring her closer, then push her on to my bed. I miss this so much. She feels so soft against me. I get on top of her then go back to kissing her, feverishly. She moans into my mouth and it drives me wild. I want her so bd. Surprisingly; she puts her tongue into my mouth and touches it with mine. I break away from her lips to catch my breath. Her hands tie around my back.

“Eri.” I pant

I go down and place delicate kisses on her exposed skin. She sighs and puts a hand behind my head to encourage me. I kiss her shoulders, neck, collarbone, and then go back to the base of her neck. I scrap my teeth against her tender flesh. She smells fresh like flowers and her skin taste good too. I lick her skin softly and she moans out again. Then I start biting her and sucking on her skin. I do this several times then go back to kissing her. I love her lips; they’re like silk and they’re so warm. I could kiss them forever. We begin to make out again, but my hand travels as I kiss her roughly, it goes lower than her waist. She doesn’t stop my hand from going any lower, so it’s ok, I guess. I open her towel and slip my hand inside. This is what I want the most. It’ll make her feel good, really good. I go between her legs and brush my fingers against her opening. She’s wet and this wave of heat meets my fingers. It makes me want this more. I don’t want to wait any longer. I go to finally claim her, but suddenly her hand goes over mine and pushes my hand away.

“No.” she sternly commands “I um…I’m not ready.”

I let out a frustrated sigh and burry my face into the bed. Fuck! I was so close! This is more flustering than having her sit in the tub all naked and wet. I pull my hand away from her legs and get up. I have to respect her choice. She isn’t ready and that’s ok. This will be our first time together so I know how she must feel. She wants it to be special and I do too. My hormones just got the best of me, that’s all. I need a cold shower. I get up and leave.

“I’m sorry.”

I look back to Eri. She sits up on the bed with this guilty face on.

“I didn’t mean to get you angry. Please, don’t be angry at me, Reina?!” She sounds like she’s going to cry

I feel so guilty! I didn’t want to pressure her into thinking she should have sex with me! At least not at this moment, it’s way too early. Let me clear things up.

“You don’t have to be sorry, Eri. It isn’t your fault and I’m not angry with you. I understand that you want to wait and that’s ok. You did the right thing.”

She still doesn’t feel like she did though. So I kiss her quickly on the lips and hug her.

“I can wait. I’ll wait until your ready. I love you and nothing will change that.”

I love you too.” She whispers into my ear

I let her go and kiss her one more time on the lips. She has on this bright smile. I can feel myself starting to smile back too. I’m glad she’s ok now. I stroke her damp hair.

“Get dressed. I’ll be in the living room.”

I plant a kiss on her forehead then dash out. I would never rush things with her. I just lost control and that will never happen again. Unless she’s ok with it.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/2)
« Reply #233 on: March 02, 2009, 04:39:56 PM »
Me mataste ya ni siquiera me acuerdo como escribir en ingles xD

Nah nah tendre que esperar a que mi cerebro vuelva a procesar informacion @_@

Despues de eso editare xD porque ahora aparte tengo clase en la universidad...

Rayos mis manos estan temblando y justo estaba tomando agua xD

Bueno bueno... d(*o*)b


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/2)
« Reply #234 on: March 02, 2009, 05:07:18 PM »
ahh! I'm spanish but I can barely read it. So I really have no idea what you said. lol sorry =/ My parents never did teach it to me. Oh and it's funny cuz my dad was born and raised in Lima too. But yes I'm gonna guess and say you said good things about this update? lol

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/2)
« Reply #235 on: March 02, 2009, 05:16:15 PM »
*go out of my lurking mode*

I really like no LOVE this story   :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:
thankyu  :wub: :wub:


 
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OMG
Chapter 31 is really HAWT  :on roll: :on roll:
I know how Reina can feel when Eri's in the bathroom
and when Eri said that sentence
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“When I’m naked it’s ok to look at me. As long as you’re the one that’s looking at me, I’m fine with it.”
and it's just so lovely :mon inluv:
Honto ni TANAKAMEI win
and thankyu again for this story

Can't wait to read more and Keep u good work
Like I didn't hear it, like I couldn't hear it.... I shouldn't have heard your love in the first place
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/2)
« Reply #236 on: March 02, 2009, 05:16:42 PM »
ahh! I'm spanish but I can barely read it. So I really have no idea what you said. lol sorry =/ My parents never did teach it to me. Oh and it's funny cuz my dad was born and raised in Lima too. But yes I'm gonna guess and say you said good things about this update? lol


Jajajajaja I'm guess, i can write again xD

well...

It was like ammmm OMG O_O... xD something like that

It's really great xD I was in college while i was reading it xD I'm still inside xD

My hands shake and i was drunk some water x_x

my mind stop working xD and forget all about English xD

I'm from Lima and if you want I could teach something, we can make a school like YOROSEN xD

I'm hyper ._. and ... I have classes xD THE HELL... thank good I have my PSP and I can read it again in class xD

Well for now I gotta go xD or I will never move ._.

and I need a shower too xD

See you *o*


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/2)
« Reply #237 on: March 02, 2009, 05:21:27 PM »
excuse me but can someone pass the tissues I have a really bad nosebleed now. eri and reina action  :inlove:
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/2)
« Reply #238 on: March 02, 2009, 10:13:11 PM »
CHAPTER 31

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Remember when I said I would distract myself to stop the bad thoughts? Well that isn’t working!

...

I tried watching TV and it was ok at first, until the girls on the game show had to wear bathing suits for the game to start. Of all the damn luck! Couldn’t they have done that a week ago?! So I kept picturing Eri in the bathing suits instead, which lead me back to realizing she’s naked in the bathroom bathing. I just can’t win, can I?!
Poor Reina. Poor, poor, horny Reina. XD



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“Reina, can you get me a towel? I forgot to get one.” Eri says from behind the bathroom door.
Does Eri even have a clue as to how horny she's making Reina right now? :pimp:



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“I’m coming.” I tell her
Oh, that's too easy.
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I don’t know what’s hotter; Eri naked and wet or Eri wet, covered by a towel that she’s naked under. That’s a tough one. Just keep looking at her face and I’ll be ok! I think…
nekkid, wet, towel-covered Eri = :shy1:
Reina = :mon blood:




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I start digging in my draw for clothes while Eri stands next to the bed, waiting. I get the things I need and hand it to her. I better leave now. I don’t think I can control myself any longer. I sprint towards the door.

“It’s ok.” Eri suddenly calls out

I turn around lost. She has on a serious face.

“Huh?”

“When I’m naked it’s ok to look at me. As long as you’re the one that’s looking at me, I’m fine with it.”
Yabai...
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*TANAKAMEI HOT 'N HEAVY*
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I go to finally claim her, but suddenly her hand goes over mine and pushes my hand away.

“No.” she sternly commands “I um…I’m not ready.”

I let out a frustrated sigh and burry my face into the bed. Fuck! I was so close!
CRAP!
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“I’m sorry.”

I look back to Eri. She sits up on the bed with this guilty face on.

“I didn’t mean to get you angry. Please, don’t be angry at me, Reina?!” She sounds like she’s going to cry

I feel so guilty! I didn’t want to pressure her into thinking she should have sex with me! At least not at this moment, it’s way too early. Let me clear things up.

“You don’t have to be sorry, Eri. It isn’t your fault and I’m not angry with you. I understand that you want to wait and that’s ok. You did the right thing.”

She still doesn’t feel like she did though. So I kiss her quickly on the lips and hug her.

“I can wait. I’ll wait until your ready. I love you and nothing will change that.”
Eri's undoubtedly petrified and her mind has got to be racing a mile a minute.  As Reina said, she, like Eri, wants their first time to be special, and if she's not ready yet, then she has to let Reina know. Making Reina wait will probably be frustrating, but it won't make her love Eri any less. :yep:



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I plant a kiss on her forehead then dash out. I would never rush things with her. I just lost control and that will never happen again. Unless she’s ok with it.
Seriously, someone needs to clue Eri in on just how HAWT Reina is for her. Maybe then she'd get a better idea why Reina gets so...excited...around her.  8)

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/2)
« Reply #239 on: March 03, 2009, 01:22:10 AM »
OMFG .___.
again OMFG!
My brain just...I don’t know was like Holy Crap this is Hot *0* I think...well something like that was in my pervy mind
this chapter was...well (that’s all mi mind can said at this moment) HOT I love it *-*
My brain was like asdffdfsfa :drool: ssdfjfjk xDD
hothothothothot that’s all
Hell my comments are just... horrible Promise I would put a better one next chapter x3
Reina in some strange way (that I’m not going to explain) reminds me of my LOL
And sorry for my bad english x_X hope you can understand me u_uU
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