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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #260 on: March 08, 2009, 04:36:13 PM »
oh sorry, i hadn't commented in a while  :mon wind:

but i always leave a thanks, so i have been reading it XD i love this fanfic  :mon lovelaff:

huhuhu pervert huhuhu  :mon mischief: interesting

you really need a nickname, let's vote XD :mon prayer:

updatte please~~  :mon innocent:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #261 on: March 08, 2009, 05:05:21 PM »
I heard someone wants a nickname? '_'

<---is the nicknaming person of DOOM!!

But before I get to that, I have to say I've been following your story since you've started xDDD Tanakamei is adorable and so is this story! Love the silliness when the gorokkies + Koharu are together! Those chapters always give me a good laugh :3

Alright, for your nickname... Junkie-chan? LOL It sounds like a pun of Jackie Chan... Personally, I like Juchan or Juuchan but choose whatever you want, dearie~! :heart:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #262 on: March 08, 2009, 05:30:18 PM »
I'm Agree with Yuuyami-sama...

but Juuchan... sounds like Yuuchan xD and makes me remember Da Leader Nakazama The God xD

Junkie sounds like drunkie xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD and I like it *-*

Mmmm... could it be Naka-chan? o_O I take it from Ta"naka"mei xD

Or maybe mmm... you have some Peru in your blood so... a very regular nickname here is "Claun"

It mean's a person who's always smiling and makes people laugh =3

But well.. I don't know xD


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #263 on: March 08, 2009, 06:12:27 PM »
haha those are some good nicknames. It's hard! Claun hmm...I do like to make others laugh, but I don't smile all the time unless someone tell some something funny. lol

Yuuami you read this story? I love your stories! they're so good and make me crack up all the time! You're such a great writer. I wish i had skills like you. :D

Juchan or Juuchan sounds better. I like them. That doesn't seem like a bad nickname.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #264 on: March 08, 2009, 06:54:50 PM »
Got it then xDDDDDDD

It's a good one for you =3


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #265 on: March 09, 2009, 12:17:50 AM »
no~~ i like Junkie-chan like drunkie XD or Juuchan... both of them remember me of Yuko  :mon scare: i like her anyway   :mon XD:

salud! :cheers

or maybe... turtle-chan  XD
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #266 on: March 11, 2009, 03:14:15 PM »
Reina was traumatized by it with Ai-chan and Sayu drunks. :rofl: .A nickname for you, I do not bear any in mind  :(

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #267 on: March 12, 2009, 07:21:11 PM »
all i can say is that, i surprised myself for actually reading a tanakamei fic....... :shock:

i was so bored and i read the "missing you" fic and tada............. :stoned: i actually like it......no, er love it!  :luvluv1:

im not really into reina and eri, im more like the tagaki and gakikamei, aieri but not tanakamei..............but whoa author-san.......you really be a suguio writer to make me love those pair......... :hehehe: :hehehe: :hehehe:

i just finished reading this from first chappie down to the last.....its getting more "intense"  :on bleed: and interesting  :glasses:


i was hooked  to your fic now, i cant stop reading,............i want more...... :pleeease: argh! this is not so meeeeeeee

update soon?! haha hundred points to author-san! :on GJ:

« Last Edit: March 12, 2009, 07:24:11 PM by ayase909 »




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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #268 on: March 12, 2009, 08:53:44 PM »
lol I'm glad you like this fic and my new one-shot. I have others here I already posted. You can read those if you'd like. I don't just write tanakamei. I did make several Takagaki one-shots as well. I've also made a AiEri one-shot. I have them around here if you're curious to read it. Hopefully I'll update this story soon though. And thanks for your support. :D

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #269 on: March 13, 2009, 03:59:21 AM »
We love Takagaki xD and Tanakame xD and whatever xDDDDDDDDDDD

It's the writer the one who mades us love them =3

*u* Keep going n_n we support you =)


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #270 on: March 13, 2009, 10:35:58 AM »
OMG I dodn't comment a couple of you're updated T_T
Gomenasai>_< *run away to hide*

but I will comment now ^^

I really love your fic   :mon lovelaff: :mon lovelaff:

Chapter 32:

Aww so sweet moment  :wub: :wub: :wub:
I like the plan with the "ring"
it's really mromantic. :ptam-shy:
Aww Yes Reina you have to stay there :ptam-ok: for Eri

Chapter 33:

:ptam-glow: can't wait for the Halloween party.
I want to read Ai and Sayu drunk again, Lol XD
it will be really funny  :on lol: :on lol:

Keep it up and Ganbare
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/4)
« Reply #271 on: March 14, 2009, 03:42:08 PM »
CHAPTER 34

“Uncle I need your help.” I cry, as soon as I enter the apartment

My uncle comes out from the kitchen to greet me. He has on a concerned face. I didn’t mean to scare him. It must be just parental instincts kicking in.

“You aren’t failing a class are you?” he questions, disappointment evident in his voice

“No it’s not that. Halloween is in two weeks and I’m going to celebrate it with my friends, but I don’t know what to dress up as.” I explain

He gives me a skeptical look. This isn’t looking good. “And that’s what you need help on?”

I nod

“What are you going to do for Halloween?” He sounds unhappy with every ticking second.

“I’m going to a party then I’m camping at Ai’s house.” I say

I don’t see the big deal. He’s having a fit over nothing. He frowns. He’s not going to let me go?! He HAS to let me go! My friends are going and I was invited. It isn’t fair if he says no. I pout hoping it’ll win him over. Things aren’t looking too bright.

“Reina, most high school parties have alcohol.” He started

“I know, but I won’t drink any of it!” I cry

He doesn’t seem to buy that either. Party: a no go. He sighs and shakes hi head. He can’t be serious! He’s ok with the other things I do, but this one is where he puts his foot down? I scowl. It isn’t right. It doesn’t even make any sense.

“Peer pressure is an amazing thing.” He chuckles, faintly

He doesn’t trust me does he?! I’ve never done anything against him. I always follow his rules and don’t give him problems. I’ve been nothing but a good kid! And he knows that.

“Uncle, it isn’t fair!” I protest

“I didn’t say you couldn’t go.”

“But you don’t need to. I can tell you don’t want me to go!”

He exhales heavily. “I just need to think about this. Do you know the dangers of a teenage party? There are drugs there besides alcohol.”

“But you let me go to Ai’s birthday party last month.” I note

“That’s different. On Halloween teenagers tend to act up and do strange things. Look, all I’m asking for is some time to think this through. The last thing I want is my niece to end up hurt. As your guardian I need to be careful with what you do. I promise it won’t be long.”

“Ok, fine.” I angrily agree

“Thank you.” He goes back into the kitchen. “I made food. Would you like some?”

“I’m not hungry.” I growl and march to my room

I didn’t say I wouldn’t be angry with him for his choice because I am. I’m real mad. If he says no, I’ll be angrier! I was looking forward to the party and he just took it away from me. But he hasn’t said no yet and he didn’t say yes either. I hope he gives me an answer soon. I jump on to my bed and lay with my face into the pillows. I lay there in silence for a while trying to see things through my uncle’s view. I know he’s looking out for me, but I would never do drugs or drink, NEVER. He doesn’t believe that. My cell phone starts to ring and I fish it out of my backpack. I flip it open with out looking at the screen. I got a text message from Eri. Seeing that she’s the one to send me a text makes me a little happier. I open it and read the tiny white letters inside.

-I miss you-

I smile and notice there’s a picture attached. I open it. It’s a picture of her with a pout on her face and her hands clasped together under her face.  She looks so cute in a dorky kind of way. I let out a chuckle and go to reply.

-I miss you more-

I lift up my cell phone to take a picture of my sad face then send it.

-Kawaii! ^_^-

I laugh and she sends me another picture. This one is unexpected. It’s a picture of her in a black bra and jeans with her back facing the camera while looking into the mirror with a little smirk on her face. I nearly have a heart attack!

-O_O-

-LOL I knew you would have liked it-

I close out of the texting mode and quickly dial down her number. She picks up instantly.

“Are you trying to kill me?!”

She laughs.

“Hey.” She says casually, trying to sound like little ‘Miss Innocent.’

I go quiet to control myself, because inside I’m practically mush.

“Are you ok?” She teases

“I think so.” I giggle bashfully

“Was it too much?”

“Hey, enough with the teasing.” I whine

She laughs some more. “Sorry.”

It’s quiet again for a second.

“What are you doing?” She questions

Imagining me doing YOU! Yeah she doesn’t have to know that though. I’ll go with a more settle and none perverted reply.

“Nothing, I’m just in bed bored.”

“Oh! I have a costume to wear, but I’ll need your help to make it.”

I raise my brow, curious to know her choice of costume.

“What is it?”

“A turtle.” She says in a matter-of-fact tone. I laugh. “What? It’s a good idea!”

“Eri, how would you make the shell? And on top of that I don’t think you can move around well in one.”

“Ah, I never thought of that! Now I don’t know what to be again.” She wails

“Don’t worry I’ll help you.”

“Do you have a costume?”

I shift uncomfortably in my bed. I was hoping she wouldn’t ask that.

“No.” I mumble, “I don’t think…I’ll go.”

“What?! Why?! But you have to go!” she demands

“My uncle isn’t sure about me going because it’s ‘unsafe’. He said he would think about it.”

“Then that’s good! Because you might still go, right?”

“I suppose.” I sigh, I really don’t want to bring her hopes up then bring them down.

“You’ll go, don’t worry.” She encourages

She sounds so sure about it. I feel myself start to smile again and relax. Only she seems to calm me down when I’m about to flip. I can’t thank her enough for that.

“I love you.” I say

“I love you too.” She repeats back and my insides turn to jelly.

“Listen, I have to go. My dad needs my help doing grocery shopping. I’ll see you tomorrow.”

“Ok, bye.”

We both hang up and strangely…I don’t feel so angry with my uncle anymore.
« Last Edit: March 14, 2009, 10:07:18 PM by writerjunkie »

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/14)
« Reply #272 on: March 14, 2009, 09:36:33 PM »
OMG!!! I want that pic too =___________________=

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Damn why He doesn't want  Reina to go :/ ????

Come on!! Drugs??? Alcohol??? I wonder if in that age anyone probe it x_x

Well... I don't xD I'm very Innocent  0=) ..... .*yeah.. sure* ... xD

Damn I want Eri have an Athena Battle Custom *o*... that golden one xD

The Hell xD

Update u-u


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/14)
« Reply #273 on: March 14, 2009, 09:52:11 PM »
CHAPTER 34

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*REINA-UNCLE HALLOWEEN PARTY TALK*
Uh-oh. :O

Might it be that uncle speaks from experience, or maybe Reina's mom (during her surprise visit) hinted that he needed to be more strict with her?  He does a good job at explaining to Reina why he's hesitant though, he's not doing the "because I said so" routine, nor does he just arbitrarily decide she can't go, but rather says that he just needs some time to think about it (meaning there's at least a chance).  On the other hand though, Reina IS right about him trusting her before with Aichan's birthday party, and unless I'm mistaken, he didn't find out about the booze that was at that party (whch, by the way, Reina didn't drink, thank you very much).



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I got a test message from Eri. Seeing that she’s the one to send me a text makes me a little happier. I open it and read the tiny white letters inside.

-I miss you-

I smile and notice there’s a picture attached. I open it. It’s a picture of her with a pout on her face and her hands clasped together under her face.  She looks so cute in a dorky kind of way. I let out a chuckle and go to reply.

-I miss you more-

I lift up my cell phone to take a picture of my sad face then send it.

-Kawaii! ^_^-
Awwwwwww...
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I laugh and she sends me another picture. This one is unexpected. It’s a picture of her in a black bra and jeans with her back facing the camera while looking into the mirror with a little smirk on her face. I nearly have a heart attack!

-O_O-

-LOL I knew you would have liked it-
Reina = :mon bleed2:



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“Oh! I have a costume to wear, but I’ll need your help to make it.”

I raise my brow, curious to know her choice of costume.

“What is it?”

“A turtle.” She says in a matter-of-fact tone. I laugh. “What? It’s a good idea!”
How apropos. :lol:



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“You’ll go, don’t worry.” She encourages

She sounds so sure about it. I feel myself start to smile again and relax. Only she seems to calm me down when I’m about to flip. I can’t thank her enough for that.

“I love you.” I say

“I love you too.” She repeats back and my insides turn to jelly.
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/14)
« Reply #274 on: March 15, 2009, 12:18:11 AM »
xD Eri knows just how how and then to push Reina's buttons. xD Love how she wanted to be a turtle.  :yep:

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« Reply #275 on: March 15, 2009, 11:18:21 AM »
that KAME pic is a muuusssttt!!  :banghead: XD

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/14)
« Reply #276 on: March 17, 2009, 10:43:09 AM »
So sweet TanaKamei texting and phoning  :ptam-shy: :luvluv2: :luvluv2:

Damn It!!!  :ding: I would like to have that picture!  :on hypto:
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/14)
« Reply #277 on: March 17, 2009, 02:19:40 PM »
Eri's such a tease  XD

Sexy back reminds me of someone

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 3/14)
« Reply #278 on: March 17, 2009, 04:22:38 PM »
People here remember their funny times xD

Blackmailing?? xDDDDDDDDD

I need to sleep ~_~ but first a little breakfast =D


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« Reply #279 on: March 20, 2009, 12:58:04 AM »
CHAPTER 35

So it’s been a week and there’s still no answer from my uncle if I can go to the party. I’m tried of waiting. It’s unsettling. I hate this feeling I get when I’m sure of something. Halloween is in five days and I still have no costume. I’ve come to terms that my uncle really doesn’t want me to go. He just wants me to suffer. This is pissing me off! Everyone at school can’t stop talking about Yossie’s party either. It’s so annoying. They constantly remind me of something I can’t go to. I’m going to ask my uncle if I can go already. Time is running short and I don’t have enough time to wait anymore.

“Are you ok?”

I look to Eri who’s getting her books out of her locker ready to leave. She closes her locker and gives me her full attention. There’s no point in trying to lie to her or hide the truth. This stuff is really bothering me.

“Your uncle still hasn’t said yes?”

“He hasn’t said anything.”

She locks her arm with me and we walk down the hall together. Having her close to me helps me forget, a little.

“I’m sure he’ll let you go.”

I smile at her and walk down the stairs where everyone is waiting for us.

“You want a ride home, Eri?” Ai ask, from the diver seat window

“No thanks, I have to hurry home so my brother can give me a ride to my job.”

I groan, disappointed. I was looking forward to spending time with her after school.

“You have to work today?” I whine

“I’m sorry. I want to be around you, but I have to do this.” She explains, feeling guilty to leave me.

I put an arm around her. “It’s ok, I know that it’s important. I’ll see you tomorrow instead.” I give her a kiss on the head and say my goodbye then go to the car. I can hang out with her tomorrow. If she doesn’t have any work that is. Right now I have to get home. I’m going to confront my uncle. I’m running out of time and I need to know. No more playing games!

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“Uncle! We have to talk, right now.” I order

I slam the door and march into the kitchen. The instant I step inside, he places a plastic bag on to the table. It draws my attention away from him and I stare at it. There has to be something inside it that’s for me. He wouldn’t slam it down like that without a reason. I turn to him with my brows raised high in question. He has on a neutral expression so it’s hard to tell what he has up his sleeve.

“Look inside.” He instructs

I go over and pull the bag up to peek inside. I can’t tell what it is clearly like this so I take out whatever is inside. There isn’t much, just a make-up kit, cat ears, a tail, cat paw gloves, and a choker necklace. What’s this for? Then it hits me and I mentally slap myself for being so slow. Wait a minute…

“I can go?!” I scream in joy.

He laughs. “It took you long enough to see.” He jokes

I rush over to hug him. He laughs some more and pats my head. I go back to look at the pieces to my costume.

“Why a cat?”



He shrugs. “It looked like it would suit you.”

I smile again and pick them up. I’m sure I can get something to make it match the outfit. I’m looking forward to Halloween again. Eri will be happy to hear the good news. I grab everything off the table and run to my room. I place them on to my bed and take out my cell to call Eri. It rings several times.

“Hello?”

“Hey, guess who’s going to the party this Friday?”

“He let you go?!”

“My uncle even gave me stuff for my costume.”

“What is it?”

“A cat.”

She laughs

“How fitting.”

“Did you get a new costume for yourself?”

I hear animal noises in the background for a second. She talks to them and everything calms down for a second.

“What was that?”

“The animals are just acting grumpy because it’s feeding time.”

Maybe I shouldn’t have called her at this time? She seems so busy and she has to focus on her work to get paid.

“I’ll talk to you another time then.”

“No it’s ok, I’ll just-ahh!”

“What happened?!”

I start pacing around worried for her safety. Farm animals aren’t killers, right? They don’t go around eating humans either, right? So Eri’s safe…I think.

“Relax. One of the horses nudged me because he’s hungry. And another kinda nipped my butt. Maybe I should feed them.”

“Yeah before they go taking pieces out of you.”

We both laugh.

“I’ll see you tomorrow ok?”

I reply and we say our goodbye then hang up. I’m so glad I can go to Friday’s party! I’m looking forward to it. I get up from my bed and go towards my closet. I’ll need to think of an outfit to match the things I have for my costume. I better start thinking of something now.

I'm sorry that this is short. I'm having some trouble with this story again. =/ Hopefully I can think of something a lot more interesting.

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