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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/12)
« Reply #160 on: January 13, 2009, 12:10:48 AM »
this is the first time i post here
you are a really good writer  :kneelbow:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/12)
« Reply #161 on: January 13, 2009, 12:19:05 AM »
new reader?! Yay! And thank you for reading.  Welcome to the board by the way. =)

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/12)
« Reply #162 on: January 13, 2009, 02:41:49 AM »
Seems like the two have leveled up to making out. xD Poor girls got caught by Reina's uncle...who seems to be okay with it? o_O This guy's really, really chill.

Poor Eri... :cry:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/12)
« Reply #163 on: January 13, 2009, 06:11:19 AM »
CHAPTER 23

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When the sun started to go down, I asked if she could sleep over my house again. She talked it over with her dad and I told my uncle. They agreed and everything was set. We went home to my place after that. I wasn’t sure what we could do the whole night, but I’m sure we’ll think of something.
Oh, yeah, they'll probably be able to think of.........something. :twisted:



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“No funny business back there, Reina!” he yells, just as I enter my room

He didn’t have to say that! It’s embarrassing! Eri looks at me confused. I shake my head.

“Don’t ask.”
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“Have you heard any word from anyone?” I ask

I haven’t hung out with everyone else in a while. I also wonder how Koharu is doing with the whole Sayu situation. Maybe I’ll talk to her first thing in the morning to see how it went.
Yeah, can't help but wonder how that situation has been progressing.



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“No, I’ve just been hanging around you a lot.”  She finishes the last of her food and I take her dish into my hands.  “Being around you makes me feel much better.”
Awwwwwwwwwwwww... :oops:



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*ERI'S STORY*
:cry: :cry: :cry:

Sometimes, people can really suck.  :'(



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*ERI'S MOM'S STORY*
Gawdammit.
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*TANAKAMEI SMOOCHING*
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“Hey Reina I’m…”

Or not. Shit! It’s my uncle! Doesn’t he know better than to knock?!
DAMMIT!!! He figured out that she likes Eri, they're in her room. DUDE!!! Put 2+2 together next time and KNOCK! Even if Eri wasn't over or if they weren't making out, what if Reina was changing clothes or something? FUCK!
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I notice Eri hasn’t said a word or moved this whole time. I hope she isn’t broken or anything. I put a hand on her shoulder and shake her lightly. She turns to me and buries her face into her hands.

“This is horrible! Do you think he’ll be mad at us?” She asks, through her hands

“No he’s not mad. Just surprised I bet. He’ll probably give me this big talk about sex later though.”

Eri puts her hands down and her eyes nearly pop out of her head when I say the ‘sex’ part. I chuckle.
Eri = :mon chilly:
Reina = :bigdeal:
Eri = :shock:
Reina = :hee:



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Even though my uncle walked in on us kissing, I can’t stop thinking about when I can kiss her again. This time I hope my uncle doesn’t interrupt me!
Hear, hear. :yep:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/12)
« Reply #164 on: January 13, 2009, 03:07:19 PM »
Sorry for having delayed in such a way to make a commentary  :mon sweat:, the three chapter is excellent, good work   :mon fyeah:

in the history of the problem of it greets of the mother of Eri , could have a competition if talentos, with a very good prize and Reina it participates and ' it tries' to earn, but we know that it sings so well that she earns easy.  :mon psst:

the uncle of Reina is very comprehensive,  :cool1: is not many people who approve fast a relationship between two girls,  :farofflook: Reina this more for cupid of what yankee in fic  :on lol:, Reina would have to place a written plate ' study moment ' and to lock the door of the next time that will be with Eri in its room  :hehehe:, so that yours uncle does not interrupt its moment I summon  :mon misch:. I think that the uncle of Reina more constrained wire of what surprised with the scene of the room, because it is single and seeing that its niece has a relationship in less of one month that if has moved  :mon lol:
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/12)
« Reply #165 on: January 14, 2009, 03:08:41 PM »
OHH, Wonder how Reina could help her.  :cry:

TanaKame lurve~  :wub:
Dang was her Uncle funny! hahah.  XD
Moi demand for moar Eri-chan hotness!  :P :D

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/12)
« Reply #166 on: January 20, 2009, 05:31:51 AM »

Oh! (a very late) Update (for me)!

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READING

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ERI'S STORY

 :cry: :bleed eyes: People can be so judgemental
Don't worry little turtle the cat will make it alright for you  :cry:
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Uncle interrups makeout session

That was just too much  XD

Nice fic... keep the good work :cow:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/12)
« Reply #167 on: January 21, 2009, 09:43:30 PM »
CHAPTER 24


The rest of the night Eri and I watched movies, late night TV shows, played games, and talked to each other. It felt nice to get to know her better. It still bothered me that her mother was going to die. She was dying such a slow death. That has to be the worse for anyone to know or go through, but Eri holds her will strong. She still is able to live through all that pain. That’s something I will always admire about her. It will be such a hard time for her when her mother does pass away though and I made a promise to myself to be there for her when that happens. It’s the least I can do. I don’t want to think about that anymore though. I can never imagine how it must feel to lose someone you love so much. If my mom died I…wouldn’t know what to do or how to deal with it. It made me feel good though knowing that I helped her cheer up after her heart-breaking story. When she told me about her personal life it gave me this idea. Something I would have never thought of if I didn’t met her. I got this idea that I want to be with her—forever. We’ve only been together not for one month yet and already she means so much to me. I don’t know where such a thought came from, but it didn’t scare me. I felt…right. I couldn’t stop smiling either.
   
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We didn’t wake up until late afternoon the next day. We were alone again too. My uncle left a note in the kitchen though saying he had somewhere important to be. He didn’t give much detail on where or when he’ll be back, but I’m not worried. He’ll come back. In the meantime, I get to spend some alone time with Eri again. I always enjoy that. We cleaned up and then went to make some food. It was too late for breakfast so having lunch will do. I tell Eri to wait in the living so that I can cook her something. I want to try and make her something this time. She’s been cooking for me a lot so I can give her a break from working over the stove. The only thing is that I can only make one dish and my uncle told me I needed to work on it more. I can always serve her cereal? I shake my head. I’m trying to be romantic and loving, I need to think of what to cook and make it decently. Think Reina, think.

“Do you need help?” Eri says from the living room

I stare at the pots in front of me. “No, I’m fine.”

That’s a big lie. I have NO idea what I’m doing, but I won’t tell her that. I won’t admit defeat! I will cook and do this right. Yuka jumps up on the counter curious to see what I’m doing. Her large round eyes look from the pots to me constantly. I smile at her and stroke her back. She purrs.

“Let’s hope I make a good meal this time Yuka.” I tell her

I turn on the stove to warm up the pots. I scratch my head. Ok, what do I do next? This is horrible! The only dish I know how to make I suddenly forgot how to start it! Damn it! I should have really paid attention to my uncle. All right, relax, I’ll try and think about what he said goes first. Hmm…I place a hand under my chin as I think carefully, trying to recall his exact words. I have nothing. I give up! As I stare at the pots in defeat I feel two pair of arms go around my waist and then someone giggle. I feel myself relax as Eri holds me. I’m really getting angry over nothing.

“Are you sure you don’t need any help? You seem lost standing here.”

She presses her head against the back of my neck and I sigh. I slide my hands down her arms and settle them to her hands that are on my stomach. I look down embarrassed. I hate to admit I need help in things. I always like to do them myself. Just like I always hate losing when I play games with anyone.

“Uh…I kind of forgot what to do.” I whisper

She laughs and hugs me tighter. She pulls away from my neck and moves a little and then kisses me on the cheek. She lets me go and faces the stove. 

“Let me cook.” She insists

“You’ve cooked too much for me. Let me cook for you instead.” I explain

“I don’t mind. You can try next time. I promise.” She smiles at me

I can’t keep a stern face with her smile at me. So I give in. “Ok.” I agree

“You can wait in the living room. I’ll be done soon.” She focuses on the stove, leaving me no choice, but to go to the living room.

I really want to make her something. I want to surprise her. I’ll have to ask my uncle to give me another cooking lesson then. I sit down watching whatever channel she left on. I wonder what we can do today? We should go somewhere nice. I don’t want to stay inside all day with her. Not that I don’t like it. It’s just that I want to do something fun with her. Maybe I should call everyone and we can all hang out together somewhere nice.

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“What are we going to do today?” Eri asks, as she takes our dishes to the sink

“I’m not sure. I was thinking we could hang out with everyone today.”

I lean back into my chair and let out a deep sigh. The food is good as always. I think we should hang out with everyone today. It will be fun. Eri finishes washing our dishes and joins me to the table.

“Should we go to the movies today with everyone? What do you have in mind?”

I place a finger on my chin thinking about it for a few seconds. We’ll need somewhere fun and not far from here for us to all get to. We can’t do karaoke. I REFUSE to do that! I don’t need to sing with Ai again drunk. Eri starts to think about it too seeing that I’m having a hard time figuring out where to go today. As we think, Eri’s cell phone starts to rings. She leaves the kitchen and gets it from the coffee table in the living room. She just flips the phone open without looking at the screen.

“Hello?”

It goes    quiet for a little while after that. Eri nods and says yes a few times, but that’s about it. So I can’t hear what she’s talking about or whom she’s talking to. I look at her inquisitively. She just ignores me. So I pout seeing that’s she’s not paying me any attention.

“We’ll be right there.”

Eri hangs up and puts the phone on the table. Now will she tell who it was and what the hell is going on?! She sees me and laughs.

“You don’t have to pout you know. I’ll tell you who it was.” She says

She comes over to me and gives me a small kiss on my lips. I think I deserve more than just a little kiss. I smile and pull her back to me as she moves away. I pull her hard enough so that she falls onto my lap and I hold her down firmly. I stroke her cheek softly as I stare into her sparkling eyes. I cup her face with my right hand and smirk.

“You know, now that I think about it. I haven’t gotten my good morning kiss.”

We might as well make out a little since my uncle’s out of the house. I don’t know why I haven’t thought of that sooner! Probably because I was too hungry to think about that, Eri blushes and shakes her head.

“We can’t.”

“And why not?”

“Because Ai called me and told me she needs help cleaning out her garage. Everyone’s going to be there and I told her we’ll be there too in an hour.”

She just what?! I know I want to hang out with everyone, but cleaning and lifting heavy things weren’t what I had in mind! I scowl at her. She laughs and leans in so her forehead is touching mine. She puts both her hands on my neck to get me to look at her.

“Don’t be so down. We’ll have time to kiss later.”

“I can’t have just ONE kiss?” I beg

“Ok, but only one.” Eri agrees

I smile at her and she dips down pressing her lips to mine. Of course I lied about the one kiss thing. But I don’t tell her that. I pull her closer in and kiss her passionately, turning our one kiss into several kisses. She doesn’t seem to be against it either. My hand starts to move on their own going down her body and up her thighs. She moans when my hand touches her stomach. She grabs my hand before I can touch something else. She pulls away and looks at me. She frowns at me or tries to look like she’s mad at me. I smile at her. There’s no way she’s going to say that this is wrong and deny she didn’t enjoy that. I know she did. I can see it in her eyes.

“We have to get ready to leave.” She reminds me

I start kissing her neck to try and distract her. She sighs and puts a hand on the back of my head to bring me closer. She lets out a low moan.

“I’m sure Ai can wait.” I whisper

I kiss her collarbone and bite firmly at her shoulder. Her breath hitches in her throat when I bite her. See…she’s enjoying this all right.

“No, I…um…I promised we would…be there.” She pants

My hands find the end of her shirt again and go inside her clothing to touch bare skin. I don’t want to go out anymore. I want to stay here with Eri inside, doing this. This is SO much better. She pushes me back and gets off my lap. I look at her upset. Just when we were getting to the good part, she puts on a much more stern face.

“I’ll…I’m going to get ready.”

She rushes out the kitchen and to the bathroom. I groan out and place a hand on my face annoyed. I hope I didn’t scare her off. Is she mad at me? I lost control. It’s my entire fault. Now she won’t talk to me! I get up and go to my room to change. I hope she’s not really mad at me. Suddenly, going to help Ai clean out the garage isn’t so much of a bad thing.

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We didn’t have to walk to Ai’s place out in the cold. She agreed to pick us up since we’re the farthest away from her house. It was nice of her to pick us up. I didn’t talk much during the ride. I was still worried over if Eri’s mad at me or not. She was ok talking with Ai. I could just be taking this whole thing the wrong way. I decided to stay quiet while they talked though. It was probably the best thing to do. The ride to Ai’s house wasn’t that long being that we were going by car. I’m sure by foot it would take us nearly an hour to get there. When we reached Ai’s house everyone else was already there working in the garage. We got out of the car and joined everyone. Everyone was there except Sayu.

“Where’s Sayu?” I question

“She couldn’t make it. She had something important to do with her mom.” Koharu replies

Of COURSE she would know. That reminds me! I have to ask her how are things with her and Sayu. Hopefully, she finally got Sayu to be her girl. I’ll have to confront her later. Ai stands in front of us and calls for our attention.

“Ok, I need everything to be thrown out. We need to make room in here and make it look neater. My parents finally see how crowded this place looks.” Ai instructs to us

“We can do it Ai. Don’t worry.” Eri says

Ai smiles. “Ok let’s start then.”

Everyone breaks up into different directions and starts cleaning whatever they can get their hands on. At least this will help me get my mind off of Eri. But no one better ask me to help lift up something heavy!

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Since there were five of us cleaning at once we were able to clean this whole place in almost an hour. I’m glad that this is over. My clothes are covered in dirt and dust and all I want is to go home and take a bath. Right after I take my break. All this cleaning tires me out. I wipe away the sheet of sweat on my forehead and take a deep breath. Normally I don’t work hard so that I don’t sweat because I hate sweating and I hate doing all the physical stuff. But this took a lot out of me. With all the heavy lifting we had to do. I spot an empty seat next to Koharu and go next to her. I let out a tired sigh. I’m never doing this again!

“Water?” Koharu asks

And takes out a cold bottle of water from the cooler Ai brought us from her house. I take it and twist the cap off. I take a large gulp from it and put it down. I’m going to take one LONG bath when I get back home. This is just gross.

“Thanks.” I say, and take a smaller sip this time.

“You’re welcome.”

Then everything goes quiet between us. And she’s back to her quiet self like at Ai’s party. I know she must have something’s on her mind. I’ll just make it easy for her and be blunt once again.

“What’s bothering you?”

“Nothing.” She tells me quickly, that isn’t very convincing.

“How are things with you and Sayu?”

I see her go tense. Yep, I found me the reason of her quietness. And it looks like I hit a nerve too. Don’t tell me things went wrong again with her! I swear if I have to lock those two in a room alone to get them together I will!

“It’s…good.”

She sounds happy when she says that. She even has on this dreamy smile. Wait…is she with Sayu and she’s trying to cover it up? I have to know now!

“Wait a minute…so you and Sayu are,”

Her cell phone rings suddenly. Stupid phone! I need to know what’s going on between them damn it! That way I know I don’t have to stick them into a room alone. Koharu looks at her phone and she has on this goofy smile. I know that smile anywhere. It’s one of those lovesick smiles. Kind of the ones I give Eri when I see her. So they ARE together! Oh yeah! I’m good. I smirk. I just need her to confirm it.

“Hello?”


I look at Koharu trying to hear what they’re saying. I need to make sure that I’m correct. Koharu’s face goes pink and she looks down at her feet bashfully.

“Michishige-san, right now isn’t a good time. Can we try another day?”

This is getting good! I lean in to try and hear more. I wonder what’s going on. From the way Koharu’s acting it must be good. Maybe Sayu’s is asking for her to come over her place to get some “Alone Time.”  I laugh out loud at that thought. Koharu looks at me and looks way embarrassed.

“I’ll see you tomorrow.” Her face turns pink again. “Do I have to?” she sighs and slumps down, covers her mouth with her hand before she speaks again. It makes it a little harder to hear what she’s saying when she does that. But somehow I manage.

“I love you too…Usa-chan.”

They even have nicknames for each other?! This is funny. Koharu closes her phone and looks at me. She smiles shyly. She doesn’t have to be all embarrassed. I mean there’s nothing wrong being with Sayu. Sure she’s a little scary to be around and I’m pretty sure she’ll try and jump Koharu’s bones everyday now that they’re together, but other than that I think she’ll be great for her.

“You’re with Sayu and you never told me?” I ask

“I was gonna tell you. Just not today.” She admits

“What did she say?”

She rubs the back of her neck and laughs nervously.

“Um…I don’t think you want to know.” She laughs

I think she’s right. So I’ll move on to the next question to prevent me from mentally scaring myself.

“When did you two get together?”

“Yesterday. I went to her house to straighten everything out. I was tired of her playing games.”

“Then what happened?” I ask

I doubt it went wrong because they’re together now. But I am curious to how it happened. Koharu was for once being the mature and dominating one huh? I laugh out loud at that thought. Koharu raised a brow looking at me like I’m crazy.

“It’s nothing, go ahead.” I encourage; she continues.

“Well when I was talking to her very seriously and telling her how I felt she just kissed me and told me she likes me too. And that was it.” Koharu laughs

“And you two made out all day didn’t you?” I joke

Koharu looks down turning a bright red. I look at her in shock and point at her.

“You did!?” I scream

Koharu looks away. God, Sayu going to corrupt poor Koharu quickly at this rate! Unless…Koharu is hiding the perverted side of her she wants no one to see. Then those two will get along just fine. I notice that everyone is still looking at me from my outburst. Great I just embarrassed her more.

“It’s nothing! Now go mind your own business!” I yell

They turn back around talking to one another. See staring crowd fixed. I turn back to Koharu.

“Sorry I didn’t mean for everyone to find out that you two are together.” I apologize.

“Well actually I want to tell everyone, but I don’t know how. I was hoping that you can help me with that.”

“Sure no problem.” I agree. “Hey everyone! Sayu and Koharu are dating! You got a problem with that?!”

Everyone looks at me again in shock. It’s quiet for a moment. I glare at them to say something. Ai looks lost, Risa’s kind of surprised, and Eri well…she seems a little bit calmer than the others. I’m guessing they’re taking this well?

“Nope no problem at all.” Risa says. Then a string of agreements from Ai and Eri come after.

“There you go. They now know.” I smile

“I didn’t have it in mind like THAT but…thanks?” Koharu says

I laugh and get up from my seat. She’ll recover soon. Though I didn’t mean to make her that embarrassed. I go over to Eri. I have to try and fix up whatever is going on between us. I’m sure it’s nothing, but I keep having these assumptions that I did something wrong to get her angry with me. I’ll have to talk to her to see. She sees my slump down posture and turns to me. I feel a little more nervous now that she’s looking at me.

“Uh…are you ok?” I ask

“Yeah, why wouldn’t I be?” She ask

“Really?”

She nods

“Yep, everything’s fine. Why you thought that I wasn’t? I’m ok about what happen in your house. I was just uh…” She blushes

I see. I got it all wrong it! I was worried over nothing. She enjoyed what we did, but she ended up really turned on. I feel much better knowing that. I laugh and hug her. I step back and pinch her cheeks with both hands.

“You’re so cute.” I coo

She pushes my hands away and rubs her cheeks. She is really cute. I put my arm around her waist and bring her close to me.

“Are you ready to go home?”

“Nope. If I go home that means I’ll have to be away from you and I won’t like that. I’ll miss you.” She says honestly

I feel myself nearly jump for joy at those words. I’m such a dork. I smile and kiss her on the cheek.

“Don’t worry. I’ll see you tomorrow.” I remind her

She shakes her head. “It’s not the same.” She pouts

I lean in and kiss her on the lips. I can’t resist. When she pouts like that I have to kiss her. She blushes and puts her head down. I hear snickering and turn in front of me. Everyone is looking at us and grinning.

“If any of you say a word you’re dead.” I growl. They laugh and go quiet after. I thought so.

“I’ll drive you both home.” Ai offers

“And I’ll walk Koharu home.” Risa cuts in

“Thanks.” I say

We all go our own ways again. This day wasn’t so bad. I got to spend sometime with my friends and Eri at the same time. Koharu and Sayu finally ended up together after all the hell they went through. I’m looking forward to school tomorrow and that kind of scares me. I wish it were the weekend already though. But I can wait. It’ll be worth it once I have Eri by my side again. I open the back seat to Ai’s car and sit with Eri in the back. On the ride home I had our hands into a tight lock the whole time. She makes me so happy.
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/21)
« Reply #168 on: January 22, 2009, 03:09:58 AM »
Whoa!! :w00t: Update yay~~~~
This is just the right thing for somebody who just came back home exhausted XD

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My uncle left a note in the kitchen though saying he had somewhere important to be. He didn’t give much detail on where or when he’ll be back, but I’m not worried.
LOL anyone else think that he's just avoiding the love love atmosphere those two give off? Plus he still has the shock of seeing those two going at it, he probably doesn't want to accidentally run in on them again XD

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“You’ve cooked too much for me. Let me cook for you instead.” I explain
Aaah~ I understand that ^^; you feel so helpless/useless >< Tanakacchi better listen to her uncle next time

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I know I want to hang out with everyone, but cleaning and lifting heavy things weren’t what I had in mind!
XD Tanakacchi is such a lazy bum sometimes..

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Normally I don’t work hard so that I don’t sweat because I hate sweating and I hate doing all the physical stuff. But this took a lot out of me. With all the heavy lifting we had to do. I spot an empty seat next to Koharu and go next to her. I let out a tired sigh. I’m never doing this again!
Correction: Tanakacchi is such a princess sometimes ><

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“How are things with you and Sayu?”
  :lol: I've been wondering that too ><

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“I love you too…Usa-chan.”
OOOMG That made me laugh out really loud XD and when I LOL suddenly, its very scary ><
I got a couple of looks.. yeah my parents probably thought I was insane

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“And you two made out all day didn’t you?” I joke

Koharu looks down turning a bright red. I look at her in shock and point at her.

“You did you!?” I scream

Koharu looks away. God, Sayu going to corrupt poor Koharu quickly at this rate! Unless…Koharu is hiding the perverted side of her she wants no one to see.
I definitely think its the latter XD Koharu is secretly a pervert
and did you mean;
"You did!?" XD what's with the extra you (couldn't choose where to put it??) Kidding~ lol it was funny tho ^^;

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“I didn’t have it in mind like THAT but…thanks?” Koharu says
Oh my dear god, I would have died of embarrassment at that point if Tanakacchi did that to me ><

Eri and Tanakacchi are so cute together >__> reading this can heal me from Letting Go XD
for some reason jphip is blocked on my school computer.. so coming here is getting kinda rare for me, nevertheless
I love this fic ><

However, I would hate for something bad to happen at this point.. :: stares at you ::

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« Reply #169 on: January 23, 2009, 06:12:10 AM »
CHAPTER 24

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It still bothered me that her mother was going to die. She was dying such a slow death.
The sucky thing about a situation like this is two-fold, firstly because there's someone having to suffer through it, and secondly because there's little that others can do but wait and hope for medical treatments to work.



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Eri holds her will strong. She still is able to live through all that pain.
Eri doesn't have much of a choice in the matter. For the sake of her family as a whole, she has to stay strong. :cry:

At least now Reina can be there to help her.



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She’s been cooking for me a lot so I can give her a break from working over the stove. The only thing is that I can only make one dish and my uncle told me I needed to work on it more. I can always serve her cereal? I shake my head. I’m trying to be romantic and loving, I need to think of what to cook and make it decently.
Hey, cereal would be a good "breakfast in bed" sort of thing. :D



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I turn on the stove to warm up the pots. I scratch my head. Ok, what do I do next? This is horrible! The only dish I know how to make I suddenly forgot how to start it! Damn it! I should have really paid attention to my uncle.
Poor thing, she's wanting so much to do this well for Eri...that she's forgotten how to do it! XD



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As I stare at the pots in defeat I feel two pair of arms go around my waist and then someone giggle. I feel myself relax as Eri holds me. I’m really getting angry over nothing.

“Are you sure you don’t need any help? You seem lost standing here.”

She presses her head against the back of my neck and I sigh. I slide my hands down her arms and settle them to her hands that are on my stomach. I look down embarrassed. I hate to admit I need help in things. I always like to do them myself. Just like I always hate losing when I play games with anyone.

“Uh…I kind of forgot what to do.” I whisper
GODDAM THAT'S JUST ADORABLE!!!
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“Let me cook.” She insists

“You’ve cooked too much for me. Let me cook for you instead.” I explain

“I don’t mind. You can try next time. I promise.” She smiles at me

I can’t keep a stern face with her smile at me. So I give in. “Ok.” I agree

“You can wait in the living room. I’ll be done soon.” She focuses on the stove, leaving me no choice, but to go to the living room.

I really want to make her something. I want to surprise her. I’ll have to ask my uncle to give me another cooking lesson then.
Hey, why leave? She could stay and watch/help Eri. That way they spend more time together, something productive gets done, and Reina still gets her cooking lesson. :yep:



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Eri’s cell phone starts to rings. She leaves the kitchen and gets it from the coffee table in the living room. She just flips the phone open without looking at the screen.

“Hello?”

It goes    quiet for a little while after that. Eri nods and says yes a few times, but that’s about it. So I can’t hear what she’s talking about or whom she’s talking to. I look at her inquisitively. She just ignores me. So I pout seeing that’s she’s not paying me any attention.
Uh oh...this is a bit worrisome. :O



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“We’ll be right there.”

Eri hangs up and puts the phone on the table. Now will she tell who it was and what the hell is going on?! She sees me and laughs.

“You don’t have to pout you know. I’ll tell you who it was.” She says
Huh...maybe it wasn't bad news after all?



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“You know, now that I think about it. I haven’t gotten my good morning kiss.”

We might as well make out a little since my uncle’s out of the house.
Good idea.  :grin:



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Eri blushes and shakes her head.

“We can’t.”
Eh?  Weaksauce. :huhuh



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“And why not?”

“Because Ai called me and told me she needs help cleaning out her garage. Everyone’s going to be there and I told her we’ll be there too in an hour.”

She just what?! I know I want to hang out with everyone, but cleaning and lifting heavy things weren’t what I had in mind!
Well, at least now they don't have to worry about not having anything to do all day. :lol:



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“Don’t be so down. We’ll have time to kiss later.”
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“I can’t have just ONE kiss?” I beg

“Ok, but only one.” Eri agrees

I smile at her and she dips down pressing her lips to mine. Of course I lied about the one kiss thing. But I don’t tell her that. I pull her closer in and kiss her passionately, turning our one kiss into several kisses. She doesn’t seem to be against it either.
Well...it's more like one really, really, really, REALLY long.....kiss.

Yeah, that sounds okay. :wahaha:



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She pulls away and looks at me. She frowns at me or tries to look like she’s mad at me. I smile at her. There’s no way she’s going to say that this is wrong and deny she didn’t enjoy that. I know she did. I can see it in her eyes.

“We have to get ready to leave.” She reminds me

I start kissing her neck to try and distract her. She sighs and puts a hand on the back of my head to bring me closer. She lets out a low moan.

“I’m sure Ai can wait.” I whisper
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“No, I…um…I promised we would…be there.” She pants

My hands find the end of her shirt again and go inside her clothing to touch bare skin. I don’t want to go out anymore. I want to stay here with Eri inside, doing this. This is SO much better. She pushes me back and gets off my lap. I look at her upset. Just when we were getting to the good part, she puts on a much more stern face.

“I’ll…I’m going to get ready.”
Oh pooh.

That's right, you heard right. I said "oh pooh". :(



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I groan out and place a hand on my face annoyed. I hope I didn’t scare her off. Is she mad at me? I lost control. It’s my entire fault. Now she won’t talk to me! I get up and go to my room to change. I hope she’s not really mad at me.
Could be that Eri's just not ready yet for this degree of intimacy. Hopefully Reina realizes this and doesn't keep pushing things before Eri's ready.



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When we reached Ai’s house everyone else was already there working in the garage. We got out of the car and joined everyone. Everyone was there except Sayu.

“Where’s Sayu?” I question

“She couldn’t make it. She had something important to do with her mom.” Koharu replies
Now then, did Sayu mention the thing with her mom before or after she found out Koharu was going to be there? :roll:



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That reminds me! I have to ask her how are things with her and Sayu. Hopefully, she finally got Sayu to be her girl.
Oh if only it were that easy.  :sweatdrop:



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“How are things with you and Sayu?”

I see her go tense. Yep, I found me the reason of her quietness. And it looks like I hit a nerve too. Don’t tell me things went wrong again with her! I swear if I have to lock those two in a room alone to get them together I will!

“It’s…good.”

She sounds happy when she says that. She even has on this dreamy smile. Wait…is she with Sayu and she’s trying to cover it up? I have to know now!
Yeah, spill the beans already!  :-X



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*KOHARU TALKS TO SAYU ON THE PHONE*
Looking good so far.  :)



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“I love you too…Usa-chan.”
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! WE HAVE SHIGEKOHA RABURABU!!! :cow:



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I mean there’s nothing wrong being with Sayu. Sure she’s a little scary to be around and I’m pretty sure she’ll try and jump Koharu’s bones everyday now that they’re together, but other than that I think she’ll be great for her.
And who said the "jumping her bones" thing wasn't great?  :rockon:



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“You’re with Sayu and you never told me?” I ask

“I was gonna tell you. Just not today.” She admits

“What did she say?”

She rubs the back of her neck and laughs nervously.

“Um…I don’t think you want to know.” She laughs

I think she’s right. So I’ll move on to the next question to prevent me from mentally scaring myself.
* JFC raises hand.


Can I know?
:hee:



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“When did you two get together?”

“Yesterday. I went to her house to straighten everything out. I was tired of her playing games.”

“Then what happened?” I ask

...

“Well when I was talking to her very seriously and telling her how I felt she just kissed me and told me she likes me too. And that was it.” Koharu laughs
Wow, sometimes it CAN be just that easy.  8)



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“And you two made out all day didn’t you?” I joke

Koharu looks down turning a bright red. I look at her in shock and point at her.

“You did!?” I scream

Koharu looks away. God, Sayu going to corrupt poor Koharu quickly at this rate! Unless…Koharu is hiding the perverted side of her she wants no one to see. Then those two will get along just fine. I notice that everyone is still looking at me from my outburst. Great I just embarrassed her more.

“It’s nothing! Now go mind your own business!” I yell
Reina =  :mon misch:
Koharu = :mon sweat:
Reina = :mon spit:
Koharu = :shy2:
Aichan-tachi = :mon huh2:
Reina = :mon blowhorn:



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“Sorry I didn’t mean for everyone to find out that you two are together.” I apologize.

“Well actually I want to tell everyone, but I don’t know how. I was hoping that you can help me with that.”

“Sure no problem.” I agree. “Hey everyone! Sayu and Koharu are dating! You got a problem with that?!”
:on lol:

Hey considering who's finding out, no real need to tiptoe around it.



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I go over to Eri. I have to try and fix up whatever is going on between us. I’m sure it’s nothing, but I keep having these assumptions that I did something wrong to get her angry with me. I’ll have to talk to her to see. She sees my slump down posture and turns to me. I feel a little more nervous now that she’s looking at me.

“Uh…are you ok?” I ask

“Yeah, why wouldn’t I be?” She ask

“Really?”

She nods

“Yep, everything’s fine. Why you thought that I wasn’t? I’m ok about what happen in your house. I was just uh…” She blushes

I see. I got it all wrong it! I was worried over nothing. She enjoyed what we did, but she ended up really turned on. I feel much better knowing that.
She should. It means she was doing it right.
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“Are you ready to go home?”

“Nope. If I go home that means I’ll have to be away from you and I won’t like that. I’ll miss you.” She says honestly

I feel myself nearly jump for joy at those words. I’m such a dork. I smile and kiss her on the cheek.

“Don’t worry. I’ll see you tomorrow.” I remind her

She shakes her head. “It’s not the same.” She pouts
:mon inluv:



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I hear snickering and turn in front of me. Everyone is looking at us and grinning.

“If any of you say a word you’re dead.” I growl. They laugh and go quiet after. I thought so.
:banana:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/21)
« Reply #170 on: January 23, 2009, 07:18:03 AM »
Reina's uncle is a really laidback guy. It's kinda hard imagining as a former Yankee, still, he wouldn't understand Reina that well if not for that. Actually, at some point I thought he was gay! :lol:
Oh well, that'd have been too much of a coincidence... :P

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/21)
« Reply #171 on: January 24, 2009, 10:43:51 PM »
a very good and very 'hot' read, now I need to get ready for scolding I didn't get to sleep the whole night reading and it's almost morning... damn  :grin:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/21)
« Reply #172 on: January 28, 2009, 12:56:12 AM »
CHAPTER 25

The following day I was actually happy to go to school. It kind of scared me to tell you the truth. But I had a good reason to want to go to school. Eri was there and that’s all I need to know really. I got up at my usual time and was ready just in time for the train. I said goodbye to my uncle and headed out the door. If I’m early enough I can spend sometime with Eri before class. So I hurried quickly to the train station.

 ***

“Good morning!” I chime to my friends as I walked down the halls

They all give me strange looks when I approach them at the lockers. I frown and smell my breath to see if that’s the cause of their silence. My breath smells fresh. I brush a finger under my nose. Maybe there’s something on my face. I wipe away whatever’s there, but I find nothing.

“What? Do I have a booger in my nose?” I ask, giving up on guessing

They laugh.

“No it’s just…you seem happy this morning. It’s weird.” Risa notices

“And creepy.” Ai throws in

“Yeah, it’s a little strange.” Sayu agrees; she eyes me skeptically.

“Did you finally get laid?” Ai questions like it’s no big deal

Now it’s my turn to give out a strange look. Why would she think such a thing?! And even ask me that out loud in front of everyone!

“Ai-chan!” Risa yells, she nudges her. Ai goes quiet after that.

“Oh come on you guys! Can’t you see she’s happy because she gets to see Eri? Duh!” Kohru tells them like it’s the simplest thing to say.

They let out a big “Oh” and laugh. I smile at Koharu thanking her. She smiles back. I can trust her to help me with things. Sayu steps closer to her to hold her hand. Koharu turns her attention to Sayu and hugs her. They’re really cute together. Seeing them hold hands though reminds me of Eri. And I feel a little sad. Where is Eri? I miss her. I start to frown until two hands go over my eyes, blinding me. I already know who it is though. I laugh and put my hands on the person’s wrist.

“Eri is that you?” I say

“Aww poo, you knew it was me from the start didn’t you?” she pouts

I turn around and laugh. “Your touch gave it away.” I pull her into a hug and sigh. Being away from her for one day is too much. She laughs when I don’t let her go.

“Reina, you can let go now. I’m not going anywhere you know.”

I release her, but I hold her hands instead of hugging her. I wonder if she can hang out with me after school. We go join in with the others after our little moment.

“Can you two be anymore obvious that you’re dating?”

No one here said that. I look around to see who said it. A few inches away I see Yossie with Miki. I glare at Yossie. She shouldn’t be talking when she’s so in love with Rika. She smirks and laughs with Miki. They come over to us.

“You know you really shouldn’t say anything about us when you know you turn into a little school girl around Rika.” I snap back

“It’s about time those two dated too! Now I don’t have to hear Yossie rant about how cute Rika is!” Miki grumbles

“Shut up.” Yossie whispers

It’s my turn to laugh now. Miki grins enjoying the fun. She says something to Yossie and the two instantly start arguing. And they call each other best friends! Their verbal fighting turns into them wrestling each other next. It’s pretty amusing to watch too. I hear Eri and everyone else laugh. I look at Eri. She seems a little worried about them.

“Do you think we should break it up?” She asks

“Nah, I’m sure they can handle it.” I reply

“Ahh, let go of me!” Yossie screams

Miki somehow has her in a tight headlock. It’s really funny to watch even though I know I should break it up. After watching Yossie try and get free a few times and fail I decided to break them apart. But someone else already beats me to it.

“Miki what are you doing?”

Miki quickly lets Yossie go and she falls to the ground on her butt.

“Aya!” Miki yells, she starts stuttering and laughing nervously. “I um…we were just…”

She has a lot of nerve making fun of Yossie and me when she hasn’t even asked Aya out because she CLEARLY likes her. It looks like my job isn’t done just yet. I turn to Yossie and he looks at me with a smirk in place. She must have the same idea as me. I smile and nod at her.

“What are you doing?” Eri asks seeing the smirk on my face

I ignore her for a second, let go of her hand, and walk over to Miki who’s still trying to form proper sentences to Aya. By the look on her face she doesn’t understand anything Miki says. Miki is just digging herself a bigger hole by talking still. Maybe I can help her. Yossie stands to the other side of Miki. It’s kind of funny how the two of them don’t notice us too, but that makes things easier for us. Yossie gives me a questioning look and I smile to tell her it’s ok. Together, we push Miki forward and watch her tumble towards Aya. She kisses Aya when she falls like we planned and they both seem surprised. Aya shoves Miki off and Miki tries to apologize, but Aya smacks her before she could say anything. I stare in shock. Ok that is unexpected! Aya glares at her and walks away furious. Miki turns to us beyond angry. Who knew her glaring could be this scary!

“You!” She growls pointing to us

I turn to Yossie. “Run for it?” I question

“Run for it.” She agrees

I run grabbing Eri as I pass by her and hurry to class. Miki follows me.

“Come back here!” she demands

Oh this is some morning!

 ***

I was lucky I had no classes with Miki or else she would be glaring at me the whole time trying to plan a way to get me. It’s scary really. I would tell her I’m sorry, but she might strangle me as I try to. So I’ll just avoid her at all cost. I don’t get how my plan didn’t work though! It went fine for Yossie. I couldn’t have read the signs wrong about those two either. Maybe Aya is just playing hard to get. I’ll need a better plan to get them together. That can wait for now. I’m on my way to lunch and that means I get to be around Eri for a whole period. I can’t wait. I get my bento out of my locker and enter the café. I easily spot everyone at the table in the back.

“Hey guys.” I sit down next to Eri and lean against her

“I was wondering where you went. You’re a little late to lunch today.” Eri states

“I was extra careful so that I didn’t meet Miki on the way here.” I sheepishly say, “You don’t think she’s still mad at me do you?”

“Oh she’s still mad.” Sayu bluntly replies

“Yeah, she’s glaring more than usual too. It’s really creepy.” Koharu agrees and goes back to eating.

This talk isn’t making me feel any better about me embarrassing her in front of Aya and everyone else. How can I make it up to her? Eri puts a hand on my thigh to get my attention.

“Don’t worry about Miki. She’ll calm down eventually.”

I smile and agree. She always makes things for me better. I open my bento and start to eat. We eat together like always and talk casually with each other. Minus Ai, since she always seem too focused on her food to speak. She only talks when Risa pokes her once in a while and nags about her lack of words. Other than that she’s quiet. It feels nice to be around everyone though like this. I like it.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/27)
« Reply #173 on: January 28, 2009, 02:30:26 AM »
Aww, it's happy time again. :D ...Well, with the exception of GAM. D:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/27)
« Reply #174 on: January 28, 2009, 07:25:33 AM »
CHAPTER 25

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“Good morning!” I chime to my friends as I walked down the halls

They all give me strange looks when I approach them at the lockers. I frown and smell my breath to see if that’s the cause of their silence. My breath smells fresh. I brush a finger under my nose. Maybe there’s something on my face. I wipe away whatever’s there, but I find nothing.

“What? Do I have a booger in my nose?” I ask, giving up on guessing
It's da raburabu. It's making her happy. :D :yep:



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“Did you finally get laid?” Ai questions like it’s no big deal

Now it’s my turn to give out a strange look. Why would she think such a thing?! And even ask me that out loud in front of everyone!

“Ai-chan!” Risa yells, she nudges her. Ai goes quiet after that.
Aichan = :mon determined:
Reina = :mon spit:
Risa = :mon scare:
Aichan = :mon speechless:



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*SAYUKOHA AND TANAKAMEI HUGGIES*
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“Can you two be anymore obvious that you’re dating?”
...

A few inches away I see Yossie with Miki.

...

“You know you really shouldn’t say anything about us when you know you turn into a little school girl around Rika.” I snap back

“It’s about time those two dated too! Now I don’t have to hear Yossie rant about how cute Rika is!” Miki grumbles

“Shut up.” Yossie whispers
BURN!!!
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“Miki what are you doing?”

Miki quickly lets Yossie go and she falls to the ground on her butt.

“Aya!” Miki yells, she starts stuttering and laughing nervously. “I um…we were just…”

She has a lot of nerve making fun of Yossie and me when she hasn’t even asked Aya out because she CLEARLY likes her.
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It looks like my job isn’t done just yet. I turn to Yossie and he looks at me with a smirk in place. She must have the same idea as me. I smile and nod at her.

“What are you doing?” Eri asks seeing the smirk on my face
Time for Matchmaker Reina! :rockon:



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Yossie stands to the other side of Miki. It’s kind of funny how the two of them don’t notice us too, but that makes things easier for us. Yossie gives me a questioning look and I smile to tell her it’s ok. Together, we push Miki forward and watch her tumble towards Aya. She kisses Aya when she falls like we planned and they both seem surprised. Aya shoves Miki off and Miki tries to apologize, but Aya smacks her before she could say anything. I stare in shock. Ok that is unexpected! Aya glares at her and walks away furious. Miki turns to us beyond angry. Who knew her glaring could be this scary!
Uh-oh...a goof?
:mon scare:



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“You!” She growls pointing to us

I turn to Yossie. “Run for it?” I question

“Run for it.” She agrees
Reina/Eri = :mon runcry:
Miki = :mon mad:



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“I was extra careful so that I didn’t meet Miki on the way here.” I sheepishly say, “You don’t think she’s still mad at me do you?”

“Oh she’s still mad.” Sayu bluntly replies

“Yeah, she’s glaring more than usual too. It’s really creepy.” Koharu agrees and goes back to eating.

This talk isn’t making me feel any better about me embarrassing her in front of Aya and everyone else.
Well, first thing to do would be to straighten things out with Aya, who is probably under the false impression that Miki intentionally put the moves on her. Whether or not she knows that Miki likes her is something for another time (especially when we don't know how she feels about Miki).

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/27)
« Reply #175 on: January 28, 2009, 05:33:33 PM »
Oh, something tells me Reina won't hear the end of this for a while. Then again, Miki doesn't really need to talk, her glare is more than enough.  :lol:

I'm surprised she's fine, though, I figured Miki would go all yankii on her. But she's probably busy trying to talk to Aya...  :sweatdrop:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/27)
« Reply #176 on: January 29, 2009, 10:09:24 PM »
I'm wondering what's next *o*  :shocked

Hope Aya don't be serious u_u  :O

Poor Miki ;_;  :cry:

Miki should catch Reina and Yossie and give them of some the Groping Demon xDDDDDDDDD :shakeit:





PS: Estoy soñando mucho con Miki ._. <3


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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/27)
« Reply #177 on: January 30, 2009, 04:07:40 PM »
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I was lucky I had no classes with Miki or else she would be glaring at me the whole time trying to plan a way to get me. It’s scary really. I would tell her I’m sorry, but she might strangle me as I try to. So I’ll just avoid her at all cost

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/27)
« Reply #178 on: February 13, 2009, 01:31:27 AM »
been reading the whole thing, waiting for an update..hope it doesn't end like this... :(

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/27)
« Reply #179 on: February 13, 2009, 04:58:29 AM »
Damn!!! Wow Tanakame xDDDDDDD

I hope see them making out in L.A xD

Jajajajajaja

I love this fics make's me remember when I was in love =3


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