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Re: Untitled (Chapter Eighteen: JunJun/Li Chun)
« Reply #60 on: March 28, 2009, 02:42:42 AM »
@minna: Thanks. :whistle:
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Saturday morning. The sun's rays crept through the window, bringing in very bright light.

JunJun woke up, her vision blurry. She knew that ShenShen's party was a sleepover, but she forgot her pajamas. She looked up at the ceiling until she was interrupted by a familiar voice.

"Li Chun." JunJun looked to her left, seeing a smiling LinLin. JunJun could tell that she was half asleep.

"Qian Lin." JunJun replied, kissing LinLin on the lips. LinLin giggled softly, holding JunJun's hand.

"Forgot your pajamas?" she asked, slowing getting up. JunJun nodded in reply. 'I can't believe I forgot.' JunJun thought, smoothing her hair.

The two girls walked into the kitchen. ShenShen was already there, making breakfast.

"Hey you two!" ShenShen greeted, her voice squeaky.

"Hi ShenShen." JunJun and LinLin greeted.

"Do you guys want breakfast?" ShenShen held out two plates of pancakes.

"No thank you," JunJun replied. "I need to go home and shower."

"Can't you stay Jun?" LinLin held JunJun's hand and gave her a puppy look.

Normally JunJun would just simply say "no" and walk away, but LinLin's look was so cute. After all, JunJun does love her.

"Okay." JunJun gave in and took the plate of pancakes and sat down at a table.

By this time, no other kids woke up, so JunJun, ShenShen, and LinLin were the only ones in the kitchen.

"You look funny when you're asleep Li Chun." LinLin blushed.

"So do you." JunJun burst out into laughter.

The two girls talked for a while and JunJun and LinLin finished their plates. Almost everyone was eating their breakfast when LinLin & JunJun were finsished.

"I think you have to go," LinLin took up JunJun's plate.

"Are you sure you want me to leave you here Qian Lin?" JunJun asked when LinLin sat back down in her seat.

"I'm sure." LinLin nodded.

"Okay then," JunJun quickly took out a piece of paper and wrote down her phone number. "If you need anything, just call." She gave the number to LinLin.

"Alright." LinLin wrote down her number on a piece of paper and gave it to JunJun.

"Bye Qian Lin. Love you." JunJun waved.

"Bye Li Chun. Love you more." LinLin waved back. JunJun blushed and walked to her apartment.
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No, I didn't forget about them. XD

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Eighteen: JunJun/Li Chun)
« Reply #61 on: March 28, 2009, 07:30:52 AM »
 :oops: awww Junjun's really caring and sweet to Linlin ^^

i must say though reading ur chapters about them, is making me memorized their chinese names ^^ 

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Eighteen: JunJun/Li Chun)
« Reply #62 on: March 28, 2009, 07:43:31 AM »
You know, I really could see JunLin as a pairing. Much more than them with any of the other girls. And I like how you make banners for each chapter. Not only are they really beautiful, it shows how dedicated you are :twothumbs

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Eighteen: JunJun/Li Chun)
« Reply #63 on: March 28, 2009, 12:23:32 PM »
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They are so rabu rabu  together :luvluv1:
I really like that Pairing  :wub: :wub:

OMG I'll forget their chinese names >_<  :sweatdrop:
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Re: Untitled (Chapter Nineteen: Goto Maki)
« Reply #64 on: March 28, 2009, 08:11:49 PM »
@minna: Thanks again.  :farofflook:
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Maki Goto went to the shoe store where Mari works after school, hoping to see her cheerful face and her tiny structure.

"Hello, may I help you?" Mari turned around and saw Maki. "Oh, hey Maki. Something wrong?"

Maki leaned over the counter, her head in her hands. "It's Natsumi Mari." she replied, her voice muffled.

"Is she jealous yet again?" Mari took Maki over to the bench and sat her down, her arm around Maki's waist.

Maki chuckled, her cheeks turning a faint pink before replying. "Yes."

"How many times has she stared assuming things?"

"A billion times," Maki shook her head. "She's annoying me Mari."

"Give her some time," Mari patted Maki's back. "She will eventually come to her senses."

"Eventually? Please," Maki rolled her eyes. "I might as well just break up with her."

Mari didn't say anything. She was stiff, and frozen.

"Marippe?" Maki looked at her, a little bit concerned.

Mari's eyes twinkled. "Please break up with her." Mari took Maki's hand and gazed into her eyes.

Maki, still confused, was wondering why Mari was acting...differently. "But Mari-"

Maki was interrupted by a kiss from Mari. It only lasted five seconds, leaving Mari shocked, and Maki about to pass out.

"I'm...I'm...sorry." The shorter girl's cheeks were crimson. 'I like it when she blushes.' Maki thought, blushing herself.

"What about Nacchi?" Mari was freaking out. "I'm so sorry I kissed you."

"Ah, don't worry about it." Maki replied. "I liked it." Thank god nobody was even in the store, since it was closing.

 Her cellphone rang. It was Natsumi.

"Hold on just a minute Mari." Maki walked out of the store and answered, "Moshi Moshi?"

"Hey Maki..."

"Nacchi? Something wrong?"

"Yes."

"What is it?"

"It's over."

"Eh?"

"Yes Maki. You and me. Done."

"Oh, okay then," Maki understood what Natsumi meant. "I hope we can be friends."

"Sure."

"All right then. I'll see you at school."

"Bye."

Maki walked inside the store, a worried look on Mari's face.

"What happened?" she asked.

"She broke up with me." Maki sighed, fiddiling with her keychain.

"Maki..."

"Yeah?"

"Do you want to come over my place tonight?"

"Of course," Maki replied. "I need to stay away from my place."

Mari laughed. "You go wait outside. I have to close the store."

"Okay." Maki stood outside the store and sat on a bench while Mari closed the store.

"Let's go." Mari held out her hand. Maki took it and kissed her on the cheek. They both giggled and talked until they got to the Yaguchi household.
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That was a long chapter....

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Nineteen: Goto Maki)
« Reply #65 on: March 29, 2009, 03:08:49 AM »
wow! Maki sure did moved on fast!

i hope her and Abe stay good friends. but this is new, a maki and mari pairing. to be honest reading about the lower generations pairing stories outside of Yossie pairings lol and then konkon and makoto are really rare! reading other pairings are nice ^^

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Nineteen: Goto Maki)
« Reply #66 on: March 29, 2009, 04:12:48 AM »
Did Junjun have banana pancakes? :D



MariMaki??? :O

Didn't expect that one.

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Nineteen: Goto Maki)
« Reply #67 on: March 31, 2009, 10:53:27 AM »
O_o
Gaki&Mari.............

1st time I read that pairing............
It's gooooooddddd  :twothumbs  :twothumbs

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty: Abe Natsumi)
« Reply #68 on: April 04, 2009, 12:40:57 AM »
@minna: Yep. Maki & Mari.  :D
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Natsumi put down her phone on her dresser as she walked over to her bed. She sat on her big, fluffy, bed, thinking about what she had just done.

She heard a knock on her bedroom door.

"Come in." Natsumi whispered softly.

"Hey, I just made some cookies and-" the woman opened the door and went inside the bedroom. "Something wrong?"

"I broke up with Maki Kaorin." Natsumi sighed, sitting up and taking a cookie.

"I told you that girl's a player." Kaori munched on a cookie, a smile forming on her lips.

"You're always right Kaorin."

"Of course I am Nacchi," Kaori gave Natsumi a soft smile. "I'm always going to be here for you."

'What did that mean?' Natsumi thought, her cheeks turning pink.

Kaori winked at Natsumi and left the room, leaving Natsumi a little suspicious.

But she did feel heartbroken over Maki. Although the two girls usually fought a lot, they had some fun times too.

Those days were over when Yaguchi Mari came along. Maki has been staring at her and denying it for the past few months.

Natsumi finally went to the kitchen to go get Kaori's cookies. 'God they are so delicious!' she thought.

"Ah, hello Natsumi," Kaori was watching TV on the couch in the living room.

"Hello Kaorin." Natsumi grabbed a plate of cookies and sat next to Kaori, her cheeks a little pink.

"Anything you want to talk about?" Kaori asked, putting her arm around Natsumi's shoulders.

"Why are you acting so weird right now?" Natsumi felt a little uncomfortable.

Kaori fell silent. Natsumi was confused.

"Are you going to answer?"

"Nacchi..."

"What? You can tell me."

"You deserve to break up with Maki."

"You already said that." Natsumi was a little angry.

"But.."

"But what?"

"I like you Nacchi." Kaori said, taking Natsumi's hands.

Natsumi couldn't believe what was going on. Her cheeks were red and she felt like screaming.

But she didn't know what to do.

"Kaorin," Natsumi let go of Kaori's hands. "I need to think this through."

Natsumi went to her room and closed the door behind her.
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Okay, kind of long.....XD

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty: Abe Natsumi)
« Reply #69 on: April 04, 2009, 05:37:50 AM »
KaoriNacchi?!!?? :o

This is becoming the fic of unexpected pairings (and I mean that in a good way). :lol:

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty: Abe Natsumi)
« Reply #70 on: April 04, 2009, 09:57:41 PM »
 :O
Really surprise pairing,
but I like it ^^ :wub: :wub: :wub:

I want to know what is Abe answer??? >___<

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty One: Ishikawa Rika)
« Reply #71 on: April 05, 2009, 05:14:13 AM »
@minna: Kaorin & Nacchi? You've never heard of that pairing before? I'm shocked... :shocked:

Domo arigato. :D
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Rika was panicking.

It was obvious, because Yossie was right next to her, holding her hand as the two walked to Rika’s apartment.

‘Be calm Rika, be calm.’ She thought, shivering.

Yossie noticed and took of her coat and put it around Rika’s shoulders.

“You’re going to be okay Rika.” Yossie whispered.

Rika couldn’t think of anything to say, her posture frozen.

“Yossie?”

“Yes?”

“Thanks.”

“You’re welcome Rika-chan.” Yossie hugged Rika, the two girls blushing.

“I like you Yossie.” Rika let all the words come out of her mouth. Although she just met Yossie a few hours ago, she could never take her eyes off of her.

Rika hoped for a reply from Yossie, but there was just silence.

“Yossie?” Rika broke away from the hug, looking at Yossie with a concerned face.

“Can I try this Rika-chan?” Yossie asked, walking closer to Rika. ‘…What should I say?’

“Erm…yes…?” Rika replied.

“Good.” Yossie’s soft lips met with Rika’s.

They kissed for about two minutes until Yossie stopped the kiss.

“I like you too Rika.” Yossie replied, taking Rika’s hand and started walking.

“Why are you walking me to my apartment?” Rika asked, a little shocked by the kiss.

“I live in your apartment complex.” Yossie gave Rika a strange look.

‘Duh.’ Rika smacked her forehead.

“Stop that,” Yossie pulled Rika closer. “I don’t want you to get hurt.” Yossie kissed Rika’s forehead.

“Gomen.” Rika blushed, not knowing what else to say.

“It’s getting late,” Yossie looked around. “Let’s hurry.”
And the two girls got to their apartments in five minutes.
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Thought I would forget about these two?

Nope.

Next chapter is going to be Ai-chan! :theking

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty One: Ishikawa Rika)
« Reply #72 on: April 05, 2009, 07:00:18 AM »
They live in the same apartment building? Noiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. ;D

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty One: Ishikawa Rika)
« Reply #73 on: April 05, 2009, 09:50:28 PM »
 :wub: yay ^^ rika/yossie  :twothumbs

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty One: Ishikawa Rika)
« Reply #74 on: April 05, 2009, 10:21:03 PM »
 :wub: :wub:
IshiYossie rabu rabu
great story ^^

OOOOhhhh
cAn't wait for Ai-chan story ^^ :heart: :heart:
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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Two: Takahashi Ai)
« Reply #75 on: April 07, 2009, 02:34:44 AM »
@JFC:  :rofl: Your comments crack me up.

@lonewind: Thanks Lone.

@YumePouk: Rabu-rabu. XD
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"We need to go over to the ramen shop." Ai suggested, closing her phone. Makoto, Risa, and Konno nodded, waiting for her father's answer.

Ai looked inside the shop, seeing a huge crowd of people waiting for their food. 'As usual.' Ai sighed, turning around and seeing the impatient look on the girl's faces.

"Come on, let's go." Risa held Ai's hand, while Makoto's arm was around Konno's shoulder.

Akihito perked up when he saw Ai, and ran over to her. "Hey Ai-chan."

Ai could tell that he was breathing hard and blushing.

"HeEEEEEEEEY!!" Ai screamed due to Risa squeezing her hand.

"Oh, do you need me to get your father?" Akihito asked.

"Yes." Risa replied, giving Akihito a glare.

"Okay, I'll be right back." Akihito went into the kitchen.

The girls waited for what seemed to be four minutes when Ai's father walked out with Akihito.

"Hello girls," Ai's father greeted, bowing in front of them. "Hello Risa."

"Hello Takahashi-san." The three girls bowed in reply.

"So, what is it you wanted to tell me Ai-chan?"

"Can Mako-chan, Konkon, and Risa come over to our house?"

"Yes sure," Ai's father replied. "I have to go, but I will see you girls in the morning."

"Bye Takahashi-san." The girls waved, and left the ramen shop.

"Your father is really nice Ai-chan." Konno complimented.

"FINALLY he says yes." Makoto spoke. Ai knew she was losing her patience.

"I'M GOING TO KILL AKIWHAT'SHISNAME!!!" Risa shouted, squeezing Ai's hand tighter. 'That girl can squeeze.'

"It's...Akihito..Risa...OW!!!" Ai tried to break free of Risa's grasp, but it was too late.

"I guess we're here." Makoto pointed to the Takahashi residence.

"We are." Ai took out her key and unlocked the door.

"Oh wow Ai..." Konno was speechless. Makoto finished her sentence, "Your house is so cool!"

"Thanks you too." Ai replied, smiling.

"I'm going to your room." Risa took Ai's hand as the two girls went upstairs.

"I want to come too!" Makoto & Konno shouted.

Ai and Risa looked at the two girls. "No." they said and they opened Ai's bedroom door.
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Not really that good... :sweatdrop:

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Two: Takahashi Ai)
« Reply #76 on: April 07, 2009, 02:43:12 AM »
lol i love risa in this chapter!

and the end was priceless when both girls said no to mako and konkon lol :twothumbs

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Two: Takahashi Ai)
« Reply #77 on: April 07, 2009, 04:35:51 AM »
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"I'm going to your room." Risa took Ai's hand as the two girls went upstairs.

"I want to come too!" Makoto & Konno shouted.

Ai and Risa looked at the two girls. "No." they said and they opened Ai's bedroom door.
Pervvy thoughts...increasing. :twisted:

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Two: Takahashi Ai)
« Reply #78 on: April 07, 2009, 09:15:36 AM »
Lol
Jealous Risa XD XD

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"I'm going to your room." Risa took Ai's hand as the two girls went upstairs.

"I want to come too!" Makoto & Konno shouted.

Ai and Risa looked at the two girls. "No." they said and they opened Ai's bedroom door.

I wonder what will happen in that room :dunno: .............................................. :whistle: :wahaha:
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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Three: Mitsui Aika)
« Reply #79 on: April 18, 2009, 11:07:53 PM »
@minna: You guys will see later.... :)
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"I guess this is goodbye." Koharu murmured in a sad tone, holding on to Aika's hand.

Aika bit her lip, trying to say something, but no words came out. She messed with her key.

Suddenly, an idea popped in her head.

"Why don't you come inside?" Aika asked, her pearly whites showing. She hoped Koharu would say yes.

Instead, Koharu wrapped her arms around Aika's waist and shouted, "I WOULD LOVE TO!"

Aika could tell Koharu was very hyper. She blushed and unlocked the door.

"Hello Aika," Kyoko Mitsui greeted. "Who's your friend?"

'Crap.' Aika thought, her blush fading. She didn't expect her mother to be at home.

"Uh..Mom..this is...."

"Kusumi Koharu!" Koharu interrupted, bowing.

"It's nice to meet you Koharu," Aika's mother was about to leave the room. "If you need anything Aika, just let me know."

"Hai." Aika put on a fake smile as her mother left the room.

"She's so embarrassing." she whispered.

"I know what you mean," Koharu blushed. "I have a mother like that."

'Our mothers are embarrassing.' Aika giggled.

"What's so funny?" Koharu questioned, looking at Aika with a funny look. This made Aika laugh even harder.

"Can't you see?" Aika said in between.

"What?"

"We have so many things in common."

"That's true." Koharu hugged Aika.

"Koharu?"

"Yes?"

"Why do you like me?" Aika couldn't believe she asked that question. 'Great.' she thought, biting her lip.

"Well," Koharu looked at the ceiling, still hugging Aika. "You're smart, very pretty, and you're a nice girl."

Aika couldn't stop giggling.

"Do you want to watch anime?" Aika grabbed the remote.

"Kirarin Revoultion is good." Koharu replied, her voice a little squeaky.

"That's why I like you." Aika muttered.

"Why...what?" Koharu was a little lost.

"Nothing. Let's watch."

"Alright." Koharu and Aika watched the anime together until it was time for dinner.
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