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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Three: Mitsui Aika)
« Reply #80 on: April 18, 2009, 11:31:28 PM »
Whoa, they almost got busted by Aika's mom?

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Three: Mitsui Aika)
« Reply #81 on: April 20, 2009, 08:30:38 AM »
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"HeEEEEEEEEY!!" Ai screamed due to Risa squeezing her hand.

"I'M GOING TO KILL AKIWHAT'SHISNAME!!!" Risa shouted, squeezing Ai's hand tighter. 'That girl can squeeze.'


I LOL'ed at these 2 lines. Somehow I can imagine Risa doing that and Ai's incredulous expression XD

EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH koha x Aika?!?!??! EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH?!?!?!? But I like :D

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Three: Mitsui Aika)
« Reply #82 on: April 21, 2009, 02:24:25 AM »
 :wub: :wub:

yeah ^^ awww that was a cute chapter ruru ^^

btw i've started a fic too over in the H!O thread and in my blog ^^ lol chapter 2 is already posted up. hmm i kinda debating about posting the story here too ^^ should i?

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Four: Kusumi Koharu)
« Reply #83 on: April 25, 2009, 01:30:25 AM »
@JFC: Aika was mad that her mom was at home. XD

@lil_hamz: After reading that chapter, I was laughing too.  :lol:

@lonewind: You should write it here Lone.  :)
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It was 5:30 P.M. The sky was dull, about to go into sunset. Koharu didn't want to leave at a time like this, but she had the dinner show with her parents.

Aika was sleeping peacefully on Koharu's lap, her glossy lips formed a smile.

Koharu's heart was beating fast as she got closer to Aika's lips. She kissed them, making Aika wake up.

"What time is it?" Aika asked, rubbing her eyes.

"5:35 right now." Koharu replied, looking at the clock on the wall.

"Are you staying for dinner?" Aika's hand was in Koharu's as she looked at her with watery eyes.

Koharu looked down and squeezed Aika's hand. Koharu didn't want to hurt her feelings, but she had to leave.

"I'm going to a dinner party." she replied, walking to the door.

"Okay then." Aika murmured, opening the door.

Koharu couldn't stand seeing Aika's sad face. It made her sad also.

Not thinking, Koharu kissed Aika's soft lips and left to go home for the dinner party.
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"Koharu!" Kusumi Keiichiro's voice boomed from the quiet living room.

Koharu had no choice but to walk inside the dark room to hear her father lecture her.

"Yes Daddy?" Koharu's voice was squeaky like a mouse.

"Get ready for the dinner party," he said, his voice a little calm. "I know you were at the Mitsui's house."

"Yes sir." Koharu went upstairs to her room, taking out her black dress and pearls.

Kusumi Marina, Koharu's mother, stepped inside the room, a look of disappointment written all over her face.

"Stop seeing Aika Koharu." her words stung Koharu.

Koharu turned around in shock. "Why?"

"Because I said so. She's not right for you."

"Are you kidding me? I lo-"

"The person you should love right now is Michishige Sayumi."

"But Mo-"

"Hurry up. We're going to be late."

"Yes ma'am." Koharu got dressed in five minutes and went downstairs.

However, she was angry that her parents wouldn't let her see Aika.

'I love Aika. I'm not letting anyone take her away from me.'
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Crappy, cute, fluffy, weird, odd chapter.  :D

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« Last Edit: April 25, 2009, 01:53:57 AM by Hotaru »

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Four: Kusumi Koharu)
« Reply #84 on: April 25, 2009, 02:16:32 AM »
holy crap ruru,that was awesome,I love you.
five out of five mr moonlight yossies.
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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Four: Kusumi Koharu)
« Reply #85 on: April 25, 2009, 02:17:27 AM »
WTF?!?!? :o

Normally, the freak-out reaction would be something like "You're a girl, you're supposed to like BOYS!" Instead, we get "You're a girl that likes THE WRONG GIRL!"
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Gonna need some backstory on this. Why is Koharu's mom saying she's supposed to be with Sayu? Were they dating before or something? :?

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Four: Kusumi Koharu)
« Reply #86 on: April 25, 2009, 08:31:50 AM »
 :shocked i thought the same! but they said that ur in love with the wrong GIRL!

mhm back story is definitely needed!

and i'll started posting the story here Ruru~ :)

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Four: Kusumi Koharu)
« Reply #87 on: April 26, 2009, 04:35:30 AM »
Ii na~

I want a mom like Koharu's! Lol
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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Five: Michishige Sayumi)
« Reply #88 on: May 07, 2009, 03:36:23 AM »
@minna: Thanks! :D
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Sayumi stretched out on her bunny decorated bed. Comfy, soft, and bouncy was perfect as Sayumi fell asleep.

Suddenly, her cellphone started ringing to "Shouganai Yume Oibito". 'Who could it be now.' Sayumi thought, grabbing the phone and looking at the caller ID.

"Moshi Moshi?" she answered with a cute voice.

"Hi Sayu-Pinku." Sayumi could tell it was Koharu, but her voice sounded groggy.

"Hey Koha-Pinku," Sayumi was concerned. "What's wrong?"

"Nothing really," Koharu replied, her voice a little cheerful. "I want you to come to the dinner show with me."

Sayumi looked down at her PJs. "Um..I don't know.."

"Please?" Koharu interrupted her. Sayumi hesitated before replying.

"Um...okay sure."

"Okay, we'll pick you up in fifteen minutes!" Koharu's voice was cheerful.

Sayumi ran to her closet to get her black dress. She put it on and ran to go get her accessories, which were pearls. She picked out some black heels and focused on her hair.

It took five minutes for Sayumi to fix her hair. It was either down or in an updo, but she couldn't chose.

"Why does this have to be so hard?" she whined, staring at herself in the mirror. She decided to keep it down and she grabbed her purse.

"I'm leaving Mom!" she shouted as she opened the door, and walked to the driveway.

There was Koharu, standing outside the car door.

"Koha-" Sayumi was interrupted by Koharu pulling her close.

"I need to tell you something once we get to the show." she whispered, opening the door.

Sayumi nodded and got in the car. Koharu got in on the other side.

The two girls chatted about their day in school during the ride to the dinner show.
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The girls walked inside the huge ballroom and decided to sit at a table far away from where Koharu's parents were sitting.

Koharu's mother gave the two of them a wink before leaving them alone. Sayumi was confused.

"Uh...Koharu, what's up with your mother?"

"She thinks we should be together again." Koharu replied.

"But we only went out for two months," Sayumi even more confused than before. "Doesn't she know that?"

"She knows," Koharu crossed her arms. "But ever since I told her I liked Aika, she's been saying that I should be with you."

Sayumi shook her head. She and Koharu are just friends. 'Baka parents.' she thought.

"She needs to get over it. And your father." Sayumi said before the show started.
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I hope this wasn't confusing.  :sweatdrop:

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Five: Michishige Sayumi)
« Reply #89 on: May 07, 2009, 05:29:52 AM »
Only thing that's confusing is why Koharu's parents want her and Sayu to get back together. By the looks of it, Sayu and Koharu themselves seem to be fine and seem to have accepted things the way they are now. :?

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Six: Tsuji Nozomi)
« Reply #90 on: May 10, 2009, 04:49:58 AM »
^They do.
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Tsuji Nozomi walked the long way to Ai's house. She thought of going to the park, where she and Ai can talk, relax, and play funny pranks on each other.

Although they were known as the 'funny couple', Nozomi still hasn't told Ai her feelings yet, and she needs to tell her when they get to the park.

Nozomi got to Ai's house, fiddling with her thumbs. She stared at the door, then she snapped out of it.

"What are you trying to do Nozomi? Act like Kaorin?" she mumbled under her breath as she rang the doorbell.

"Nozomi! Welcome!" Ai's mother greeted with a smile. Nozomi smiled back, still fiddling with her thumbs.

"Hi Kago-san." Nozomi bowed. "Where's Aibon?"

"Aibon's in her room, sleeping I guess." Ai's mother replied, shrugging her shoulders. Nozomi laughed.

"Okay, thanks." she tiptoed upstairs to Ai's room, slowly opening the door. Her face turned crimson when she saw Ai sleeping peacefully.

'She looks like she's in a deep sleep,' Nozomi thought, thinking of a plan. 'I need to wake her up.'

Suddenly, Nozomi thought of a good idea. To shake her.

"Aibon...." Nozomi shook Ai back and forth, but there was no response coming from the younger girl.

'This is a stupid idea,' Nozomi thought. 'I've been doing this for fifteen minutes now, and she's still not waking up.'

"Aibon..." Nozomi repeated for what seemed to be the billionth time. Ai fell off of the bed.

Nozomi's eyes grew big, and she started laughing. Her laughter woke Ai up, who rubbed her head and mumbled some words under her breath.

"Nono! You baka!" Ai shouted, struggling to get up.

"Sorry Aibon, but we need to go to the park." Nozomi held out her hand. Ai took it and a heat went to the girls' cheeks.

"Uh...I'll get dressed now!" Ai grabbed a T-shirt that had random English words and a white skirt. She went to her bathroom.

Nozomi giggled. She's never felt this way, but something about Ai always made her blush. She lie down on Ai's bed, and she looked up at the ceiling.

"Okay Nono, I'm ready." Ai grabbed her purse and put on her white flip flops.

"That was long." Nozomi teased as she slowly stood up from Ai's bed.

"Shut up." Ai smirked in reply, slamming the door in front of Nozomi.

"Hey! Open up!" Nozomi shouted, trying to turn the doorknob, but Ai had control of it. 'Such a little jokester, that's why I like her.'

Ai let go of the doorknob, and Nozomi walked out of Ai's room. She noticed that Ai was downstairs waiting for her. 'Whoa. That was fast.' she thought.

"Let's go," Ai took out her key as the two girls walked out of the house. "I always need a day alone with you."
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Kind of funny....XD I like this chapter. :D

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« Last Edit: May 10, 2009, 04:58:53 AM by Hotaru »

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Six: Tsuji Nozomi)
« Reply #91 on: May 10, 2009, 05:55:28 PM »
love this.  :heart:  :D

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Seven: Kago Ai)
« Reply #92 on: May 12, 2009, 01:53:21 PM »
^ :welcome Thanks!
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Kago Ai's heart started pounding as she and Nozomi walked to the park. It was a clear and bright sunny day, the perfect weather to be going to the park. Kids were running around, parents chasing after them.

Ai and Nozomi have known each other since junior high. They were shy at first, but then they started getting to know each other, and then Ai started hanging out and joking around with Nozomi.

But then things started to change. Nozomi was always there for Ai whenever she was crying over the phone about her family, and it would cheer her up.

Ai had feelings for Nozomi. She was always there for her, no matter what happened.

Without thinking, Ai held onto Nozomi's arm, the both of them could feel the heat rising to their cheeks.

"Nono..." Ai was about to say, but then Nozomi started running towards the center of the park, making Ai follow her.

Ai loved these kinds of games. She could tackle Nozomi in a heartbeat.

But instead, Ai wrapped her arms around Nozomi's waist, and she didn't let go. Her cheeks were red, but she didn't care.

"Nono," Ai let go of Nozomi and took her hand, their hearts beating faster. "I really, um, have-"

All of a sudden she could feel soft lips pressing on hers, people staring at them, some "Oohs, Ahs, Aw, and Ew."

But Ai could tell that Nozomi didn't care about those people. She didn't care either.

"Nono.."

"I have feelings for you too Aibon," Nozomi whispered, kissing Ai on the cheek.

'What do I do now?' Ai knew she had to think of something, but Nozomi sat down in the grass and unwrapped something.

"What are you doing?" Ai sat down next to her, the grass was still a little wet.

Nozomi gave Ai half of her peanut butter sandwich. "I knew you were hungry so-"

"Thanks Nono." Ai interrupted, eating her half.

"So, did anything happen over at the Kago household?" Nozomi's voice was filled with concern.

"No." Ai replied, shaking her head.

"Good." Nozomi nodded, finishing her slice and looking up at the clear blue sky.

"It's so clear." she said, holding Ai's hand.

"It is," Ai replied. "That's kind of strange."

Ai tried thinking of something to say, but she couldn't. She loved being with Nozomi. Heat was rising in her cheeks.

"You make my day Nono."

Nozomi laughed, her cheeks a little red. 'Was it something I said?' Ai thought, a little embarrassed.

"You make my day too Aibon."

All of a sudden, Nozomi's cellphone rang. She got a text message.

"We should get home Aibon."

And the two girls left the park, hand-in-hand.
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A little more serious in this chapter.  :sweatdrop:

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Seven: Kago Ai)
« Reply #93 on: May 12, 2009, 08:29:43 PM »
I'm all fuzzy inside now.  :wub:

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Seven: Kago Ai)
« Reply #94 on: May 13, 2009, 09:17:01 AM »
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awesome chapter~ ruru~ hmm i'm curious about koharu's parents

ganbare~ with the work x3

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