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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #100 on: December 13, 2009, 09:45:52 PM »
‘It’s no big deal, it’s just Reina’s house’ she kept chanting in her mind, taking great care not to show her nervousness to Aika. She’s just here to see Aika’s photographs (especially the ones with Reina). Of course, her main motive is to see Reina in her home environment, or better still a chance to get closer to the yankii girl.

“We’re here,” Aika smiled, wondering why Sayu looked so pale. She opened the door and saw…

Reina lying on top of Eri…
...fully clothed? or...... :lol:
Guess it's not 'just friends' feelings, huh Eri? Excellent. And it doesn't sound like Aika views Reina simply as her best friend either. Hm.




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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #101 on: December 14, 2009, 03:49:54 AM »
Takagaki is so cute. Ai and Airi teasing Risa :lol: And then dressing room shenanigans.

Uh-oh, Eri and Sayu and Aika, oh my! Reina is so stuck, what will she do?
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All in good time my friend
*sit crossed legged and folds hands in lap* I will wait patiently. Well, mostly patiently.

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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #102 on: December 14, 2009, 11:48:02 AM »
@Sancho - Yeah Airi and Risa are blood-related. I'm just too lazy to think up a name :lol: Wish I have a sister like that instead of a bratty brother. Anyone wanna swap?

I'll swap!! I doubt you can handle my sis though. She drives me up the wall!! But hey, maybe I can become spiderman  XD

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Eri opened the door and quietly slipped into the lecture theatre. As luck would have it, she saw Reina sitting alone on the last row, her head resting on one hand and pretending to take notes to what the lecturer was saying.

There are never any empty seats in the last row where I go for lectures :D

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“I missed you, that’s why.” Eri’s words surprised Reina, not expecting Eri to say that to her, even if she knew Eri was just joking with her. The bell chose to ring at the right time, saving her from having to respond to Eri’s weird comment.

Hmm, it's so unlike Eri to be so smooth. I wonder how many times she practiced :P

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Ai laughed at the playful banter between the two sisters. Deep inside, she couldn’t help but feel jealous for the close relationship Risa had with her sister and the rest of her family, something she had never the luxury of experiencing for herself despite having all the wealth lavished on her.

Can I trade with Ai? She can have my sister and I can have her wealth XD


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“Forget the kid. You and me have more important adult matters to attend to,” Ai naughtily whispered to Risa.

“Not here Ai-chan.”

“Huh? I was talking about the shopping. What were you thinking of?” Ai could not help but tease her girlfriend, causing her girlfriend’s plump cheek to redden further. “But since you did mention that…”

Tee hee, this was cute. Poor Risa getting teased by Ai. It's Ai!! :lol:

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“Just shut up and take it okay? Hurry up and take picture of me. Oh and happy birthday.”

This is so Reina speak.

*SayuAika Interaction*

I don't know what to think about this yet. I have to read more to decide.

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“What about your other friends?”

“Nope, never needed any. I have Reina, and she has me. We’re all we need.” Aika replied nonchalantly, sipping her now warm coffee slowly, not noticing the weird look from Sayu.

Hmmm, this seems a little drastic. I wonder if Reina feels the same way.

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Ai stepped out of the dressing room rubbing her “injured” arm. So much for helping her girlfriend to try on the new dress. Okay so she did feel up Risa’s butt a little, but who could blame her when she has such a hot girl as her girlfriend.

Ai got that right. Risa is hot. WAAAAAAAAAY hot :wub:

Gah!! Don't keep me in suspense. I wanna know what happened during the talk. Update soon!

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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #103 on: December 15, 2009, 01:26:55 AM »
Oh, one of my guesses is right? Cool, I feel so smart now. If it's the one with TakaGaki and Linlin going in between them, then I'm looking forward to it. I have a soft spot for love triangles, especially when the person caught in the middle of it all happens to be Aichan. But if you're talking about the one with Aika... then, man, I sure hope I'm wrong, lol.

Anyhow, very nice chapter. Airi teasing her sister like that was just absolutely adorable. I wonder who she's going out with, though. I'm guessing that it's Maimi, but you might pull off something totally unexpected (like, it's actually Yurina, lolbells), so I'm not laying my cards on the C-ute leader just yet.

The whole convo between Sayumi and Aika was pretty interesting; no doubt that the lil' pup is extremely determined into making Reina smile the way she used to. Speaking of the kitten -- *gasp* -- SHUCKS! She and Eri got caught (whatever they were doing)! Poor Sayumi. Hm, I wonder how Aika reacted to it...

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“Airi!” The said girl quickly covered her head with her hands for fear of a hard knock coming from her sister.

[...]

“Jeez Ai-san, I wonder how you can ever like a violent girl like my sister.” A smack on her shoulder brought a playful pout on Airi’s face.

“Trust me Airi. I have no idea myself,” Ai joined in the fun, earning herself a smack too.

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“Ai-chan! Stop playing around and help me zip up the dress”

“But you look so cute~”

“Ai-chan!”

“Ouch! Okay okay no need to be so violent.”

Ai stepped out of the dressing room rubbing her “injured” arm.
Wow. Aichan's got one violent gal. :lol: They're so cute, though. :heart:
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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #104 on: December 19, 2009, 02:43:33 PM »
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“Eri?! What are you doing here?” Reina exclaimed in hush tones.

“I missed you, that’s why.”

 :cow:WOOT!! FINALLY!!! ERI!!!! GO GIRL!!! :cow: :cow:


Hmm, I wonder what happened in that last scene. It hurted Sayu... and you forgot Aika's POV... I know she's hurt too. After all, Reina's her 'princess'.  And I love TakaGakiness here...ahahahah...

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“Forget the kid. You and me have more important adult matters to attend to,” Ai naughtily whispered to Risa.

 :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:
That one knocked me really hard... XD

@CY - Can I call you CY? It's sounds cool that way XD Yeah Eri, just admit it already! Er what am I saying?

Sure... no prob. You can call me that... and please update soon... I wanna know the reason as to why Eri was on top of Reina.. XD

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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #105 on: January 26, 2010, 10:52:54 PM »
Been wanting to read this from some quite time, glad that I finally did  :D

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A closet pervert?
:lol:

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Cold like an ice cream or something. Hmm, I could do with an ice cream right now.
Random, me love.

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I swear you are like a walking search engine when it comes to cute girls
A nice skill to have :rockon:

TanaKame banter :heart:

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Mama Tanaka
I don’t know but that made me XD

ReinaMiki :cow: yankiis love!

Sayu really has a bad timing :lol:

TakaGaki :wub:

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What about the sleeping pills?

Insomnia? Or tried to kill herself?

Does Aika being around Reina triggered many memories that she desperately tries to bury? Also why she’s unintentionally harsh with Aika when she’s probably was upset and mad at herself?

TanaShige date  :mon inluv:

Reina+Ai+Eri somehow have their own family companies/bussiness waiting, hmmm....

Everyone seems to give Reina much love but she’s still too afraid to take it.

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“Nope, never needed any. I have Reina, and she has me. We’re all we need.”
That sounds....scary.

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Reina lying on top of Eri…
:O

TanaKame or TanaShige? It’s too hard to choose!!!  :frustrated:


TakaSemaru  :heart:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #106 on: January 27, 2010, 05:11:53 PM »
Errr this is not an update...Sorry? I'm kinda in the emotional stage where I'm too emo to write a happy fic and too happy to write an emo one :lol:

It's been some time so I thought I'd reply to the comments first :D


@ Little k
@kRisZ - Er is the oxygen tank enough? Do you need CPR? XD
From one of the Gorokkies? Yes please  :P
LOL I was thinking more like from Camel-sama :P

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WE need to talk’
Reina?
Nope :smhid Wanna guess again? :)


@Baby Sticky
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“Forget the kid. You and me have more important adult matters to attend to,”
- Joins kRisZ  :twisted:
- Joins Little k & Sticky - :twisted:

Reina in rectangle love? Why rectangle? Why not square? Or Rhombus? *Badsaints runs away with Reina's photos*


@Trey-Trey
The happiness can never last long enough simply because I'm a sadistic writer :twisted: But I won't torture Reina...so much...I think? :D


@Stefy
Eri's "flirting" is good (or bad, depends on how you look at it :P) but there's a reason to why she's acting that way, I guess :twisted: Yupz, I love the MaiRi couple too :wub:


@22
Glad you like the TakaGaki part :w00t: Though Sayu and Eri...


@ aussie
...fully clothed? or...... :lol:
I'll leave it to your imagination :twisted:


@rndm-chan
Poor Risa :lol: 1 Ai is a handful but 2 Ai... :lol:

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Uh-oh, Eri and Sayu and Aika, oh my! Reina is so stuck, what will she do?
Maybe date all of them? :twisted:


@ Hammy
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I'll swap!! I doubt you can handle my sis though. She drives me up the wall!! But hey, maybe I can become spiderman  XD
Spandex? Ewww :lol: I think I'll stick to my brother. I still need someone to bully :P

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There are never any empty seats in the last row where I go for lectures :D
LOL really? I always got the empty seat in the corner of the last row when I'm having a leave-me-alone days :P I kinda act like the Reina that I wrote in class too XD

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Ai got that right. Risa is hot. WAAAAAAAAAY hot :wub:
Yupz :wub:


@ Retro Bubble
You like love triangles? Ohh I might have found an ebil buddy :twisted: I guess it's very easy to guess who Airi's "friend" is XD


@ CY
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Hmm, I wonder what happened in that last scene. It hurted Sayu... and you forgot Aika's POV... I know she's hurt too. After all, Reina's her 'princess'.  And I love TakaGakiness here...ahahahah...
Haha Sayu's POV coming up soon. I got a plan for her :twisted: But I'm not sure I wanna write about Aika yet :P I'm glad you like TakaGaki though :wub:

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“Forget the kid. You and me have more important adult matters to attend to,” Ai naughtily whispered to Risa.

 :on bleed: :on bleed: :on bleed:
That one knocked me really hard... XD
XD XD XD


@ C
Been wanting to read this from some quite time, glad that I finally did  :D
Domo Arigatou :oops:

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What about the sleeping pills?

Insomnia? Or tried to kill herself?
Maybe both? XD Just kidding

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Does Aika being around Reina triggered many memories that she desperately tries to bury? Also why she’s unintentionally harsh with Aika when she’s probably was upset and mad at herself?
Maybe because the closer you are to that person, the harsher you will be compared to people you are not close to. At least that's my view :P

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“Nope, never needed any. I have Reina, and she has me. We’re all we need.”
That sounds....scary.
:on freeze:

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TanaKame or TanaShige? It’s too hard to choose!!!  :frustrated:
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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #107 on: January 31, 2010, 12:04:15 AM »
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Reina lying on top of Eri…

"..."
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OMFG!!  :w00t: :w00t: :w00t:
Chapter please >_< chapter, chapter, chapter.  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
*Michi dies now  :imdead:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #108 on: January 31, 2010, 01:10:38 AM »
Hmmm...

UPDATE  :wigglypanda:  UPDATE  :wigglypanda:  UPDATE

Those Pandas won't stop until they see an update  XD

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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #109 on: January 31, 2010, 05:04:14 PM »
*Badsaints pokes Michi's body* Rest in peace, my friend :prayers:


UPDATE  :wigglypanda:  UPDATE  :wigglypanda:  UPDATE
Those Pandas won't stop until they see an update  XD
Oh my god the trauma :shock: Okay okay I'm updating soon...in a few days? After I come back to Earth? :sejinemo: (but can I ask for Panda Lin2?) :lol:

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Solus (Chapter 12 - 05/02)
« Reply #110 on: February 05, 2010, 04:31:37 AM »
Chapter 12

The air was heavy with the Christmas spirit as the people rushed with their last minute shopping. But for one girl, the joyful atmosphere only adds to the sorrow she felt in her heart. Keeping her head down, Michishige Sayumi walked aimlessly through the faceless crowd, for seeing the loving acts by couples only add to the pain in her heart. She would have continued her course of action if not for someone bumping hard into her, knocking her down.

“Itai!”

“Oh I’m sorry. Are you alright?”

“Hey! Watch where you’re going!”

“Sorry, let me help you up.”

Sayumi looked up to the tall girl who bumped into her, swatted away the outstretched gloved hand offered to her and gasped,

“You?! Why do things always go wrong whenever I meet you?”

“Eh? What are you talking about? Have we met befo... Oh the festival!”

“First you dirtied my kimono, now I’m wet and dirty because of you,” Sayu painfully got up, ignoring the curious stares from the passerbys. The same thing, however, could not be said for the other girl who was turning red from the embarrassment.

“Look I didn’t bump into you on purpose. As a matter of fact, you were the one who weren’t looking where you were going. Whatever it is, I apologise.”

“Hmph whatever! I hope I never see you again,” Sayu stormed away from the girl, fuming mad, leaving the confused girl behind. It wasn’t long, however, that she sensed someone following her. Turning around, she saw the same girl walking behind her.

“You’ve taken to stalking me now?”

“Hey take a chill pill, girl. My home’s this way too.”

“Get your own route!” Sayu huffed and walked away. She didn’t care if she was being unreasonable or if she was venting her anger on an innocent party. Life is not being fair to her anyway.

~~~

Risa blew her warm breathe onto her hands, the white mist dissipating quickly into the air. She stood alone at the corner of the street; wondering the reason Ai has to be so secretive that she was asked, no ordered, to wait in the freezing cold whilst that girlfriend of hers disappeared among this torrent of crowd.

“Cold?” Risa managed to stop herself from giving the public a show of her infamous Reaction Queen scream when she felt someone glomping her suddenly from the back.

“Ai-chan! That surprised me,” Risa lightly smacked Ai’s arm.

“Heehee sorry~ Couldn’t help myself.” Ai gingerly rubbed her hands against Risa’s, hoping to warm the girl up a little, before slipping their linked hands into her coat pocket, causing Risa to blush a little.

“So...what did you buy?”

Ai just smiled at Risa’s question and just continued leading Risa through the crowd, only stopping in front of a huge overly decorated Christmas tree. She retracted her hand from the pocket, ignoring the cute pout from Risa at the lost contact and proceeded to hug Risa from the back again. Resting her chin on the younger’s shoulder, Ai let out a contented sigh. Both girls were enjoying the illumination of light colouring the tree when Risa felt something cold slipping into her finger. She lifted her left hand, surprised to see a ring.

“I have the same one. See?” Ai showed an identical ring on her left finger.

Risa just stared at the rings, not knowing what else to say. Unsure of the meaning of Risa’s silence, Ai began to panic internally, thinking the rings are not to Risa’s taste or that her actions are too cheesy. But continue she did, even if she had to prepare herself to be laughed at.

“You don’t like it?” Risa just shook her head.

“Promise me,” Ai choked, the tears beginning to glaze her eyes, “that you’ll stay by my side forever? Please?”

Risa turned to face Ai, unaware that she had been crying too, though out of definite happiness.

“Do you even have to ask? Silly girl.” Risa cupped Ai’s face and leaned in to kiss her. “Ne Ai-chan, you do know this sounds like a proposal?”

"Would you like that?"

Ai just laughed and hugged Risa tighter, afraid to let go.

“I don’t need anything else if you are here with me”

The last words faintly whispered, barely heard by anyone but the one intended for.

~~~

“The shower’s free.’

“Unn,” Reina answered, not looking up from her blueprint. She scratched her head, tapping her pencil against her chin whilst looking at her assignment.

Finally putting her pencil down, she turned to face Aika, seeing the girl has been sitting still on her bed for a while now. It was not easy to concentrate on her drawing board when someone kept staring at her back.

“What?”

“Nothing.”

“I’ve known you long enough to know that nothing does not mean nothing. Just say it already.”

“Princess,” Aika sucked in a deep breath before continuing, “Do you like Eri?” The question caught Reina off guard. It has never crossed her mind on how she felt for Eri. 

“Ehhhhh, what are you talking about?”

“You heard my question. Do you like Eri?”

“Uh yeah, she’s nice. You know, uh, funny...sweet...aho...”

Unconsciously, a small smile appeared on Reina’s face. Of course, that was not missed by Aika, further increasing the irritation in her.

“You know that’s not what I meant, Reina,” Aika snapped, “Do you have any feelings for Eri?”

“What kind of question is that?” Reina scoffed, “There’s no way in a thousand years that’s gonna happen.”

“Then what about this afternoon? You were literally all over her.”

“I told you it’s just a misunderstanding. I don’t know what the big deal is. You make it sound as if I’m in love with her.”

Reina looked away from Aika, to the direction of her study table, her stare penetrating through all barriers to reach the picture tucked in safely between the folds of her diary. Reina frowned, remembering how she should be feeling and to whom her feelings are for.

“Ne Princess, I’m just asking. No need to get so worked up,” With a smile, Aika moved quietly towards Reina and kneeled next to the still-sitting short girl. Grasping Reina’s hand, Aika looked up and smiled at Reina.

“Come back to Fukuoka with me tomorrow, Princess. We’ll spend Christmas there just like we always do.”

“You know I can’t...”

“You don’t have to go back to your family. Spend it with mine. My mum and dad miss you lots”

“I can’t,” Reina tried to pull her hand from Aika’s tight grip.

Not giving up, Aika tightened her grip, “Yes you can. You can’t possibly run away forever.”

“I’m not ready yet,” Reina whispered. Her heart tightened and she could feel a lump in her throat.

With a sigh, Aika kissed the back of Reina’s hands lightly, “Alright. You don’t have to push yourself too hard. Just forget about everyone else. I’m here for you.”

Eri stood in the shadow, paralysed by the heated conversation that just took place on the other side of the thin wall. Given that the door is not exactly soundproof, it was inevitable for her to overhear what was being spoken between the best friends, especially when the subject includes her.

Allowing a small smile on her face, she carefully placed Reina’s gift for Sayu in front of the door before stepping away from the door. 

“There’s no way in a thousand years that’s gonna happen.”

‘I know,’ Eri sighed inwardly, ‘I’ve always known that’

~~~

Sayu slipped her mobile phone into her pocket. She decided to ignore the countless text messages and missed calls from Eri for the moment.

Deciding a short walk to the konbini will clear her mind a little; she grabbed her keys and stepped out into the freezing night. Barely two steps from her door, however, she heard the faint melody of the piano from the next house.

‘A little late tonight’ Sayu noted, looking at the time on her mobile phone. She had come to get used, anticipate it even, to her neighbour’s performance every night. She sat on the steps of her front door, carefully though, since her butt still hurt from the earlier fall. Unconsciously, she found herself humming along to the tune of the piano, her own personal aria; closing her eyes as she recalled the day’s event.


“Nope, never needed any. I have Reina, and she has me. We’re all we need.” Aika replied nonchalantly, sipping her now warm coffee slowly, not noticing the weird look from Sayu. Sayu stirred her own coffee, trying to comprehend what Aika has just said.

“So I heard from Reina that Eri is your bestie. How long have you two known each other?”

Sayu looked up from her coffee and saw Aika’s bright smile. She smiled too, as her aho best friend’s face came to her mind.

“Since we were born? Our parents themselves were best friends in college and both of us were born few months apart. You can say that we practically grew up together.”

“Then you’re both close then.”

“Yeah, I guess you can say that we know each other too well that there’s absolutely no secret between us.”

 “Strange that I’ve never seen you around.”

“What?”

“It’s nothing. Say, would you like to come home with me? I have a few more photos of Reina that I can show you.”

“You mean...Reina’s place?”

Aika nodded and Sayu immediately called for the bill, excited for the chance to visit Reina’s place for the first time.



The music ends, bringing Sayu back to the present. She thought of Eri. The shocked expression on her best friend’s face when she saw Sayu standing at the front door. Of course, the shock Eri must have felt is nothing in comparison to her own. But who wouldn’t when the person you have a massive crush on is lying on top of your best friend?

There is no denial that what happened is nothing but a misunderstanding. Don’t that always happen in those dramas that Sayu used to watch with Eri? After all, Eri has said that Reina is just a friend. Then...what is this uneasiness in her heart?

Sayu looked at the unreplied messages again. She knew she has to talk to Eri about this some time.

Just not tonight.

~~~ :cry: ~~~


Donno if anyone still remember this story :lol: Why do I get the feeling this chapter is gonna confuse some people? :lol: Anyway~ the next chapter is coming up substantially soon (hopefully) and maybe things will get clearer towards the end :) And yes, there's a new character (though I have mentioned her a few times) :P

One hint though...it's not Sayu who sent Eri the text message.

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Re: Solus (Chapter 12 - 05/02)
« Reply #111 on: February 05, 2010, 06:24:32 AM »
I still remember  :lol:

although i might need to refresh, TakaGaki :heart:
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Re: Solus (Chapter 12 - 05/02)
« Reply #112 on: February 05, 2010, 10:29:54 AM »
*Confused*

Sayu bumped into someone during the festival??  :huhuh guess I'll be doing some recapping myself too! I'm guessing this person is Koharu! And the piano neighbour is her isn't she? XD

Aww Reina likes Eri~ Reina likes Eri~! but damn Eri for evesdropping! She didn't see Reina's face!! Grrr...

Sayu and Eri should talk soon! Friends are more important then crushes yo! Sighz..   

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Re: Solus (Chapter 11 - 13/12)
« Reply #113 on: February 05, 2010, 03:01:32 PM »
Maybe because the closer you are to that person, the harsher you will be compared to people you are not close to. At least that's my view :P
That makes sense.

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TanaKame or TanaShige? It’s too hard to choose!!!  :frustrated:
:frustrated:
Eh? Are you still unsure about the paring?


Poor Sayu, but the stranger seems like an interesting character.

TakaGaki rings+the proposal thingy  :wub: :wub:  they're so sweet!
I forgot to ask about the perv chap of them, will I miss something important if I skip reading it? Besides the perv, of course.

Was Aika becoming kinda possessive?

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“There’s no way in a thousand years that’s gonna happen.”
‘I know,’ Eri sighed inwardly, ‘I’ve always known that’
TanaKame....  :(

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she carefully placed Reina’s gift for Sayu
:?

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One hint though...it's not Sayu who sent Eri the text message.
Someone from Eri's past? If that's even possible...



TakaSemaru  :heart:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 12 - 05/02)
« Reply #114 on: February 05, 2010, 07:28:31 PM »

*Peeks the thread*

An update...???

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! :w00t: AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

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“You?! Why do things always go wrong whenever I meet you?”

:mon huh:

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“Eh? What are you talking about? Have we met befo... Oh the festival!”

OMG! Who is it??????

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“Promise me,” Ai choked, the tears beginning to glaze her eyes, “that you’ll stay by my side forever? Please?”

:wub: Awwwww...!! :mon inluv:

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“Do you like Eri?” The question caught Reina off guard. It has never crossed her mind on how she felt for Eri. 

“Ehhhhh, what are you talking about?”

:mon suspect: Oh come on... :err:

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“Uh yeah, she’s nice. You know, uh, funny...sweet...aho...”

Unconsciously, a small smile appeared on Reina’s face. Of course, that was not missed by Aika, further increasing the irritation in her.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh...

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“What kind of question is that?” Reina scoffed, “There’s no way in a thousand years that’s gonna happen.”

:cry: Noooooo... Don't say that!! :cry:

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‘I know,’ Eri sighed inwardly, ‘I’ve always known that’

NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! :on blackhole:


God...

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The happiness can never last long enough simply because I'm a sadistic writer

Indeed you are... damn...

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Donno if anyone still remember this story

XD I remember... in fact I've been re-reading... :mon sweat:

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Anyway~ the next chapter is coming up substantially soon (hopefully) and maybe things will get clearer towards the end

That "hopefully" bothers me... :fainted: Don't make us wait too much... XD :P


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Re: Solus (Chapter 12 - 05/02)
« Reply #115 on: February 06, 2010, 05:39:57 AM »
 :D

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swatted away the outstretched gloved hand offered to her
- Somehow.... a white pair of gloves came into my mind... along with a very charming Prince Jun2.. XD Was it her anyway? I guess so.. with the Chinese Restaurant plus Piano.. :)

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Why do I get the feeling this chapter is gonna confuse some people?
Have we met befo... Oh the festival!”
- FESTIVAL?! What!? *Checks back* Is there anything about it or my speed reading is failing me? <- Anyway it isn't very fast too.. lol

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“I don’t need anything else if you are here with me”
- Alicia Keys's If i ain't got you pops into my mind :)

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One hint though...it's not Sayu who sent Eri the text message.
- o.O Aika? <- It's a 99.9% wrong guess... but anyway.. :D

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Re: Solus (Chapter 12 - 05/02)
« Reply #116 on: February 07, 2010, 04:15:10 PM »
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“Hey take a chill pill, girl. My home’s this way too.”
:twothumbs

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“Get your own route!”
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“Heehee sorry~ Couldn’t help myself.” Ai gingerly rubbed her hands against Risa’s, hoping to warm the girl up a little, before slipping their linked hands into her coat pocket, causing Risa to blush a little.
:wriggly:

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“I have the same one. See?” Ai showed an identical ring on her left finger.
:inlove:  :inlove:  :inlove:

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Unsure of the meaning of Risa’s silence, Ai began to panic internally
:lol:

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“Promise me,” Ai choked, the tears beginning to glaze her eyes, “that you’ll stay by my side forever? Please?”
Hmmm

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“Do you even have to ask? Silly girl.”
:rockon:  :luvluv2:

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“Ne Ai-chan, you do know this sounds like a proposal?”
OMG

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"Would you like that?"
:w00t:

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Unconsciously, a small smile appeared on Reina’s face.
:mon fyeah:

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“There’s no way in a thousand years that’s gonna happen.”
Sure?  :twisted:

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“Then what about this afternoon? You were literally all over her.”
:lol:

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Eri stood in the shadow, paralysed by the heated conversation that just took place on the other side of the thin wall.
:scared:

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she carefully placed Reina’s gift for Sayu in front of the door before stepping away from the door. 
:?

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‘I know,’ Eri sighed inwardly, ‘I’ve always known that’
:O

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Donno if anyone still remember this story
lol I still do  :yep:




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Re: Solus (Chapter 12 - 05/02)
« Reply #117 on: February 07, 2010, 06:13:05 PM »
Arghs! It's JJ isn't it? This is gonna end up with a SayuJun pairing *faints* Its a little scary to see Aika so aggressive. I can just imagine her with a creepy smile when she is questioning Reina*shudders* Poor Kame!*wails* Why is she so pitiful is every fic XD TakaGaki is love :) Matching rings. How sweet is that. Did you notice Ai is wearing a ring on her pinky again? She stopped doing it for some time. I wonder what made her start again. A certain bean maybe? Reina should really tell Aika to buzz off. She's becoming a little controlling? When's the next update? *anticipates*

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Solus (Chapter 13 Part 1 - 26/02)
« Reply #118 on: February 25, 2010, 06:28:08 PM »
Would have updated earlier but the chapters gets longer with every updates. Not sure if that's a good thing :lol: So here's Part 1 first (though it's more of an explanatory chapter :P)

But first...comment replies yay! :w00t:

@22 - Oh you remember! I was worried that people might forget the storyline :lol:

@Stefy - Actually she did bump into someone. That's why she's grumpy when they met up. Just that I'm too lazy to put that in the story. Maybe later? Yeah Reina likes Eri but she's too dense and walled up to know it :lol: Koharu? Hmm....

@C - I always feel that when you lose something/someone dear to you, you'll react in 2 ways: watch passively as they move further from you or fight for it. Aika just made her choice of action, thus her possessiveness. No worry about about the perv. It's just a little extra to the story. Nothing big unless you want to read sthg about TakaGaki's 1st time :lol: Doesn't affect the story in any way. But you can go to the ecchi section if you want to read it. As for the pairing, you'll see :twisted:

@Trey-Trey :heart: - You have been re-reading? Aww thankew *blushes* I'm trying to write faster but there's too much drama here that it's getting harder to write :(  Need to write/read sthg happy for a change :lol: How about updating your TanaShige one-shot? That will make me very very very happy. Pleeeeeease? *puppy eyes*

@Stinky (sorry can't help myself :lol:) - Prince charming Jun2? :O You might just be right :D Glad you caught the clues (don't want diaper? How about a pacifier as a reward? :drool:)

@ Lil k :pimp: -
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Eri stood in the shadow, paralysed by the heated conversation that just took place on the other side of the thin wall.
:scared:
Ya know, this actually made me laugh the first time I saw it. Yeah I got weird sense of humour

@Hammy - SayuJun pairing? Hmm dunno. I don't really like JJ so I might kill her later after she expires her usefulness :twisted: Just kidding :lol: Aika acting a little psychotic with a creepy smile? Hmm...I like that! And Reina will tell Aika to buzz off :twisted: And ooooh I notice Ai wearing the pinkie ring again. Maybe the bean has a similar couple ring? :inlove: Ya never know...



Chapter 13 (Part 1)

“I’m still hungry~” Reina wailed as she peeked into the refrigerator, “Where are the eggs? And the bacon? And the chocolate pudding?”

Eri giggled at the childish Reina. “Thought you just had a bowl of cereal?”

“But that’s baby food! I’m a growing child, you know. A growing child!” Reina stood on her tiptoe to emphasize her point.

“Yup I can see that” Reina stuck her tongue out at the laughing Eri, nudging the taller girl to stop laughing. And it worked.

Eri flinched momentarily at the short skin contact before putting the cereal box back into the cupboard. She then moved to the end of the counter, putting a distance between Reina and her. Reina raised her eyebrows at the sudden change of mood, but thought nothing of it.

“So where’s Aika?” Eri asked.

“On the first train back to Fukuoka. She said something about having to go back to her office before going home for Christmas for a few days.” Reina continued to rummage through the fridge, looking for something edible enough to eat.

“I see...”

“So...shall we continue part 2 of our shopping trip after I knock off from work later? I still haven’t gotten any Christmas gift for Ai-chan.” Reina smiled gleefully at the treasure she found in the fridge; a pre-cooked yakiniku.

“Sorry Reina, I have to look for Sayu later. To clear up the misunderstanding?”

“Oh....hmm okay then.”

Reina made her way to the counter end where the microwave is, near the spot Eri was standing. To her surprised, Eri moved away. It was as if Eri was trying to put Reina at arm’s length, to minimise any closeness between them. Reina was now fairly certain that Eri was avoiding her. Reina wondered the reason to Eri’s sudden strange behaviour.

Eri left Reina alone in the kitchen and made her way to the transparent tank in the living room, where two reptilians lazed around, ignorant of the happenings of the world. Dropping some turtle food into the tank, Reina’s words kept playing in her mind like a broken record.

“There’s no way in a thousand years that’s gonna happen.”
“You make it sound as if I’m in love with her.”


Eri swallowed the lump forming in her throat and took a deep breath in her shaky attempt to stop herself from crying. Though she knew full well that Reina does not like her in that way, hearing those words coming from Reina do not make the hurt any lesser. Eri knew she should not harbour any special feelings towards Reina, not when her own best friend has a massive crush on her housemate.

It never meant to happen. But it did.


Eri took a sip from her glass of milk as she watched Reina talked animatedly about the album of the Korean boy band that she bought that afternoon. She shared about the fun she had at the band’s concert that she went with Sayu. Eri could not help but feel a tinge of jealousy when Reina spoke about Sayu. While she knew that she should not enter into the equation between Sayu and Reina, she had wished that it was her who brought back Reina’s smile.

Her thought brought her back to Sayu. Eri had insisted that Reina go shopping with her so that Reina could get a Christmas gift for Sayu. Eri knew nothing would make Sayu happier this Christmas than to receive a gift from Reina.

She picked up Reina’s gift for Sayu from the stack of shopping on the table but changed her mind when she saw a small pink packaging among the stack. She didn’t recall seeing Reina buying whatever that thing is. A small card pasted on the packaging read her name.

“Hey give me that!” Reina yelped, trying to grab the small box back.

“Don’t wanna. You’re going to give me this anyway. Why not now?” Eri tried to get away from Reina, though unsuccessfully.

“It’s supposed to be your birthday gift surprise. So wait for your birthday, you aho.” Reina tried to grab the gift back from Eri. Since her hands are shorter than Eri’s, it seems like a foolish attempt.

“Wait, you remember my birthday?” Eri asked, surprised by the fact that Reina had actually bothered to remember.

Taking the distraction as an opportunity, Reina tackled Eri down and tried to seize back the gift that Eri has somehow managed to hide behind her back.

Before Eri could realise the awkward position they were in, the front door opened and she saw Sayu standing behind Aika. The door closed almost immediately. Grinning sheepishly, Reina got off Eri and help her up, before proceeding to open the door for Aika and Sayu who were still standing dumfounded outside.



How did things go so wrong?

Eri felt a lone tear dropped onto her hand as she watched Eric and Elizabeth crawling towards their food.

“You will miss me...right?”

Remembering the text message she received the night before, she sighed, knowing that she had procrastinated long enough. Pressing those familiar numbers, she waited for the person on the line to answer.

“Hello...Mummy?”

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Reina tched; not sure whether to be amused or irritated by the excessive attention shown by her best friend. This is the nth text messages she received from Aika since that girl left for home this morning. As much as she appreciates the concern the girl has showered on her, Reina believes she is old enough to take care of herself.

Her thoughts then wandered to Eri and her strange behaviour this morning. It felt to Reina that Eri was trying to put more than physical distance between them. Was it because of the previous night’s incident? It should not be since nothing happened last night. At least that’s what she felt.

A ringing bell at the door alert Reina of a customer entering the shop. Reina decides to push the issue to the back of her mind. Since there doesn’t seem to be any problem, it is not worth mulling about. She’s better off concentrating on her job right now.

Maybe she’ll just continue her shopping alone later.

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Ai came out of the bathroom shivering from the cold. Slightly regretting turning down Risa’s offer to bath together, she is proud of herself for being firm in her decision despite Risa’s cute pouts. That’s not to say that there weren’t any cracks in her resolution. But a girl has to set a good example in front of her “sister-in-law”. She slowly makes her way to Risa’s room when she heard Airi calling her quietly.

“Psst! Ai-san! Over here”

“Airi? Why are you whispering?” There was nobody but the two of them in the house, save for Risa who was bathing.

“Shhhhh. Come in.”

Ai entered Airi’s room, wondering why Airi was being so secretive. Airi patted the spot on bed next to her, hugging a hardcover album. Taking the hint, Ai sat quietly, watching Airi opening the album and showing her the family photographs. One photo did catch her attention as she gazed at the picture of a little girl with black marker smudges on the face.

“She’s ugly, isn’t she?” Airi giggled.

“Un...She is,” Ai laughed, gently thumbing the image of a chubby girl in the photo as she stared lovingly at the picture. “She definitely is”

“Mum drew those on her face. But don’t ask why though.”

“Why do I get the feeling that I don’t want to know why?” Ai nudged Airi, eliciting more giggling from the girl.

“Ne Ai-san. Do you really care for my sister?”

Ai blinked, surprised at the sudden question, especially with Airi’s serious expression fixed intently at her, but quickly recovered and answered determinedly. “More than anything else in the world.”

“Then promise me you’ll never make her sad. She’s the most beautiful and the best sister I have in the world.”

“She’s the only sister you have in the world,” Ai corrected Airi in amusement, “But I promise.”

“Pinkie promise?” Airi held up her pinkie. Ai chuckled, but placed her pinkie against Airi’s.

“Pinkie promise.”

The pledge made, the girls continued flipping through the album whilst making small talk. Their conversation soon lead them to Airi and the mysterious girl.

“So tell me about that tall girl.”

“Who?” Airi would have successfully feigned ignorance, if not for the deep blush tinting her face.

“Aww come on, you know who I’m talking about. Introduce her to us.”

Airi nodded. They heard a soft knock on the door and Risa entered the room.

“What are you girls doing here? You are not trying to steal my girlfriend, are you Airi?” Risa joked.

“I was, but you have to come and ruin the moment.” Airi snickered, winking at Ai.

“Hmph very funny. Okay, time for bed babies.”

~~~ :lol: ~~~


And I shalt retire to bed myself :yawn:

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Re: Solus (Chapter 13 Part 1 - 26/02)
« Reply #119 on: February 25, 2010, 08:31:35 PM »
Yeah, though the way Aika fight for it is what making it scary  :nervous
I haven’t asked the access to perv section so I’ll just skip it if I don’t miss anything important.

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As for the pairing, you'll see :twisted:
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Noo! Usually that kind of answer doesn't end up good for me LOL (nowadays that smiley reminds of ebil K  XD)

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“But that’s baby food! I’m a growing child, you know. A growing child!” Reina stood on her tiptoe to emphasize her point.

:D  how cute.

Ah so that's what happen, but Eri trying to distance herself from Reina and thinking she'll never likes her back  is   :mon cry:  :fainted:

Yay for Ai and her "sister-in-law" pinkie promise bonding.


TakaSemaru  :heart:

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