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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #80 on: July 28, 2009, 09:14:36 PM »
Mikitty_Ayaya-san: No I don't think I am a magician or genie  :smhid  But yes I am a bit cruel because there is so much I want to  write about it that can make the story interesting.  But here we go,

Chapter 61

In the middle of the night, Miyabi was awoken by the coughing of Maimi, she frantically ran up, waking Erika and Saki in the process.  When she arrived at Maimi’s room, both doctors were trying to help her stop coughing.  Her coughing elevated and began coughing out large amounts of blood. 

“One of you help Eri-chan hold Maimi-chan down” instructed Gaki-san.  Miyabi stepped forward and did as instructed.  “One of you I need you to pump air into Maimi’s lungs, she might choke if some of the blood flows downwards” as Gaki-san handed out the equipment.  Saki took it from her and started squeezing the bottle as instructed by Gaki-san.  The heart rate monitor beside Maimi began to quicken at an alarming rate.  Gaki-san quickly pulled out a needle and filled it with some liquid.  She then injected it into Maimi’s arm.   Soon Maimi’s coughing subsided and she began to breathe normally.  The heart rate monitor showed signs of normal beatings.

Miyabi looked at Gaki-san letting go of Maimi.  “How bad is it Gaki-san?” 

“Well we’ve managed to stop her coughing which is a good thing.  But I think it is wise that we monitor a little longer.  In the meantime, we have to apply the cream on Maimi’s wound.  I think I will need some help to move Maimi-chan’s body”

“Tell us what to do” said Miyabi

“Miyabi-chan, you have to apply the same antiseptic cream on yourself so Eri-chan will help you apply it in our room.”  She turned to Saki and Erika, “You two will stay and help me with Maimi-chan”

Miyabi left with Eri, but not before looking back at Maimi.  She cringed at the sight.  “Come on let’s go” smiled Eri, as she and Miyabi left. 

Fortunately the rest of the night was peaceful and the girls managed to catch a couple winks of sleep. 

Meanwhile on Momoko’s side

When Momoko got home, she thanked her escorts and went to her room.  Her room was light pink with lots of stuffed toys near her bed.  Her room was also covered with pictures of her friends.  2 photos particularly caught her eye.  Momoko walked over to them and stared at them.  One of them was with her and Maimi, both girls smiling brightly hugging each other tightly.  The other was of her and Airi.  Airi was sitting on a chair with Momoko hugging her neck from behind.  She moved her gaze back and forth from the 2 photos.

‘What should I do? I want to help Maimi-chan but do I want to take the risk of Airin loving her as well?  Although Miya said that she wouldn’t, why do I have a gut feeling otherwise.  I could be selfish and not tell Airin, but then why do I feel guilty?  If I tell Airin then I would be breaking Maimi-chan’s trust.  What do I do?  I guess I should keep quiet and pretend I don’t know anything.  I mean Maimi-chan trusted me to be with her right?’

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #81 on: July 28, 2009, 09:38:44 PM »
Hey... quiet ... I just joking around with you.   :doh:
I was surprised how fast it is, and i like the detail given in the chapter, you have an experience like this? The detail was very good.
just i'm intrigued with  the reaction of Osuzu.   :P
your explanations and details given in this chapter, is respectable.  :)
next chapter.  :P

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #82 on: July 28, 2009, 11:20:45 PM »
Mikitty_Ayaya-san: The answer to your questions will be left up in the air, I'll let you think of how and why it can be so detailed.   :lol:  Thank you for the complement and just for that I will update another chapter, last one before my classes.

Chapter 62

During the next 2 days, Maimi and Miyabi didn’t go to school but through Saki, Momoko managed to find out that Maimi has been healing, there is no more internal bleeding but the bruises are still there.  Miyabi could go to school but the girls knew that she used her wounds as an excuse to tend to her best friend.  Saki and Erika would go to Maimi’s house to check on things and help Miyabi.

Momoko was trying really hard to not blurt anything to Airi but with each passing minute, her heart weighed heavier and heavier. ‘Tomorrow is the day Maimi-chan goes to the warehouse.  Should I tell?’

“Hey” greeted Airi as she smiled at Momoko, who smiled back weakly.  “Is there something wrong?” asked Airi.  “You seem to be in your own world lately”

“I’m- I’m fine just thinking about some homework”

“Are you sure?” Momoko nodded slightly.  “It seems like everyone is in their own world lately.  Rii-chan and Kanna have been spacing out too”

Momoko could understand the dilemma they faced for she too was in that predicament in that whenever Momoko looks at Airi she feels guilty.  Guilty for not telling Airi about Maimi.  Momoko still believes that Airi should know about it, whether Airi will accept it is another issue.  But what if Airi was to go to Maimi?  Is that a risk Momoko is willing to take?

“Nee, nee Airin, have you ever heard anything about your heroes?”

“Well, I did check the newspaper and radio for any deaths or injuries.  No one fit the descriptions” stated Airi “so I guess they were lucky but you never know, maybe they are dead but no one has found their bodies yet! Do you think we should go check? With that kind of beating there is no way they could possibly win against Ryo and his men” Airi started panicking.

“Calm down Airin!  I don’t think they are dead! In fact one is far from dead!”

“How do you know?”

Momoko widened her eyes as she realized what she had just said. “I- I don’t know but judging at what you’ve told me, the other person would have managed and carried the other away because there are 2 of them right?” replied Momoko hoping she was convincing enough

“I guess you’re right.  I mean if they both weren’t capable I don’t see why they would’ve risked their lives for someone else” said Airi.  Momoko let out a small sigh of relief that Airi bought her explanation.

“Nee Airin, have you ever thought what you would do if you ever meet your heroes?”

“I highly doubt it Momo-chan, their faces were covered so I don’t even know how they look like”

“Well what if you know them?”

“I don’t know.  I haven’t thought about it because if I knew the person, why hide their identity?”

“How about if they were afraid to reveal themselves and they died?”

“Why would they be afraid?  Mou, Momo-chan why are you asking all these weird questions?”  If I know the person and they died because of me then I would feel guilty for the rest of my life.  I think that would be the same for anyone”

Momoko nodded “I was just wondering.  Because it seemed weird that a random person would save someone else they didn’t know”

“Why Momo-chan are you hinting it was you?” laughed Airi “Don’t worry I truly believe that it wasn’t anyone I was close to.  Rii-chan, Kanna and you are all standing before me healthy.”

Momoko didn’t want to raise anymore suspicion so she dropped the subject.  One thing for sure which made Momoko’s heart weigh heavier would be that Airi definitely would feel guilty and regret for the rest of her life is she found out it was Maimi, after the fact.

‘If Maimi-chan does die, how are the girls going to hide it from the world?  Airin will find out one way or another.  But Airin just named her close friends and Maimi-chan wasn’t one of them, will she want to stop Maimi-chan?’

“Nee Momo-chan, Yajima-san hasn’t been around lately, do you think she is alright?” asked Airi randomly

“Er- I don’t know, when did you start noticing about her whereabouts?”

“It was just a random question but I thought you were close with Yajima-san so I thought I’d ask you.  Miyabi-chan is missing too.” ‘When DID I start noticing her?’

Momoko shrugged “Maybe she is secretly training”

“Oh! That makes sense.  She’s always training so that seems more likely.  Hey I’m going to my last class, I’ll see you after school” Airi waved and ran off.

‘Airin notices Maimi-chan more than I thought.  Maybe I shouldn’t tell her.  Miyabi-chan might be right, what she doesn’t know won’t hurt her’

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #83 on: July 29, 2009, 04:55:47 AM »
So I got a tip from someone that a good fic was to be found here... and I wasn't disappointed. :3
I enjoy how you've weaved this story together with all these different characters.
Though the cast is quite large and I can't help wanting more spotlight on some of the more minor characters at times, it's actually really good that you've manged to keep quite focused so that the story moves along at a brisk pace.

I'm quite fond of YajiSuzu too so I hope things work out with them. Though Momoko is so sweet here it's sad that she'd be hurt if it goes in that direction.

I like Reina's role as caring older cousin but I feel like I want her to just wipe out the whole of Ryo's gang and be done with it. After all, if she takes them all out then none are left to tell the tale and ruin their name, right? ;D

Nice job and keep it up FaqU. I hope you'll keep posting your stories. (^^)b

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #84 on: July 29, 2009, 07:47:55 AM »

I'm quite fond of YajiSuzu.

   
I have the same opinion that you.  (^^)b  XD
in question of couples, MaimiAiri, is my favorite couple in the  stories of the fic.
Momoko was fun ...
she  not know    that   do... was interesting to hear the thoughts of Momoko.
 and Airi ...
 I want  see that it happens, when she discover to her hero.
The meeting Ryo and Maimi already is too close.  kowaiii.....
Miyabi and Tanaka, I think such people are respecting the decisions of Maimi.
they always  be with her to support the decisions of Maimi.
promises are promises and appears that they  have much respect to one promise.
is nice to have to a fast writer.   :)
Domo Arigatou Gozaimasu.  :)
ganbare!!   :)
« Last Edit: July 29, 2009, 07:50:39 AM by Maimi_Yajima »
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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #85 on: July 29, 2009, 05:27:29 PM »
Kuji: First and foremost,  :shocked , another great writer's comments.....GETS!!!!!  Thank you for reading and commenting, although I doubted the "good" part, it is still under major development to become better.  Thank your tipper for me too.

From time to time I would try to include the minor characters as much as the situation lets, but then again the minor characters don't know what's going on so it tends to be a little bit harder, but I will see if I can do something about it.  Reina cannot actually wipe out Ryo's group because although Ryo's group may be smaller compared to her own, the fact that he is still under another organization would be a factor, he is not as high of a position as Reina and his organization not as big but still none the less in a business perspective, it may not necessarily be the best idea.

Maimi_Yajima: I am a person that respects a promise very much and the value of one and the meaning behind the term promise is something that I don't take lightly.  It is also my belief on promises that I have managed to write out the weight of them.  Thank you for your comments!

Chapter 63

The Next Day

It was the fearful day of Maimi’s deal.  Momoko wanted to be there as support and because she was curious.  She decided to text Airi.

Airin, I won’t be coming to school today, I’ve got some errands to run.  Please get my homework from Saki-chan or Erika-san

Why? Is everything okay?


Momoko decided not to reply, she was running late.  She quickly gathered her things and headed towards the warehouse.  When she got there Risako, Kanna, Erika and Saki were already outside waiting.

“Hey! you guys didn’t go to school either?”

“We couldn’t!  Even if we did, we would be wondering about it all day” replied Saki

A car stopped right in front of them…out stepped Miyabi.  She quickly went over to the other side and opened the door and reached in to help Maimi get out.  Miyabi held onto Maimi tightly and helped her walk to the girls.

“You guys shouldn’t be here” said Maimi weakly.  She was leaning onto Miyabi for support. “I don’t want you guys to see this, it is not something you guys should see at least.  That is not my intentions”

“Maimi-chan, we had to come, we just couldn’t leave you here by yourself” Saki said as tears were flowing down her face as she saw the physical condition Maimi was in.  Sure, she and Erika had helped Maimi during her healing period but Maimi never got out of bed so no one knew whether Maimi would be physically okay.

Maimi lifted herself from Miyabi and stood on her own two feet.  She pushed Miyabi towards the girls “Go!” she demanded.  No one moved “Please go” pleaded Maimi “I don’t want you to witness this”

“No!” cried back Miyabi “I am not leaving you! I have always stood by your side and this time is no different” she had been holding back her tears but at her outburst the tears had finally escaped.

“Awww!  Look at this boys!  It’s such a beautiful scene” teased Ryo as he and his boys walked over.  “Too bad you can’t do anything” He looked at Maimi who was glaring at him “Glad you didn’t chicken out!  This will be fun” he laughed “I’ll be waiting inside.” Maimi slowly limped her way inside and the girls followed.  Ryo’s men all took out lead pipes and bats, grinning at each other.

“You know, I respect you” confessed Ryo “You’re still standing from before, it’s surprising honestly.  Let’s see if you are still standing after today”

“You will leave the girl alone as promised right?”

“I promise but if Reina-san comes after me then the deals off and you can say goodbye to your little friend”

“She won’t” replied Maimi as she walked closer to him.

Ryo’s men had formed 2 columns on either side of Maimi.  As she walked by the whacked her.  Maimi at first was unfazed by the first 4 blows, however at the fifth she fell to one knee, holding in her breath as she got right back up.  The girls who were watching winced at each blow.  Momoko had to turn her head away.  They watched as she went past each of Ryo’s men in pain until she stood in front of Ryo.

“You know if you want to back out now and stop interfering, you can walk away before we really lash it out” he exclaimed.  Maimi just looked at him silently as an indication that she won’t leave. “Is this all worth it?” he was curious at the extent Maimi was going to protect one person

“She is worth it!” declared Maimi “It will all be worth it as long as she is happy and safe, safe away from you sick, perverted rapists!”

Ryo punched Maimi in the face at the last statement, which only fazed Maimi to a minimum.  Maimi still stood strong from the punch, she shifted her face from the side to look directly at Ryo.  So one of Ryo’s men grabbed a wooden chair he saw and broke it over her back.  “Argh!” Maimi screamed.  Her old wounds were not completely healed and Maimi felt that the last hit may have opened wounds as her breathing started becoming irregular.  The impact of that last hit caused her to fall onto both her knees.  Maimi placed a hand onto her torso and tried to regulate her breathing before trying to get up.  With every attempt of her getting up, Ryo and his boys would take turns attacking her.

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #86 on: July 29, 2009, 05:43:45 PM »
Wow...
   
chapter is a very sad, :cry: miya especially ...  :cry:
i am very intrigued, next chapter, please.  :cry: you was cruel in the chapter.
The detail is good in your chapter.
next chapter.

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #87 on: July 29, 2009, 06:03:56 PM »
ouch ouch... *winces*

You better not kill maimi!

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #88 on: July 29, 2009, 07:38:16 PM »
Mikitty_Ayaya-san:  Thank you! Trust me it was hard writing this chapter, I couldn't believe I finished the chapter because it was painful to write about one of your favourites being hurt.

stefy: I don't think I will kill Maimi....yet, still under consideration

Chapter 64

Momoko couldn’t take it anymore, she ran out towards the school.  She searched for Airi and found Airi walking to her class.  “Airin!” she yelled

Airi turned around to see Momoko running towards her. “Momo-chan! I thought you weren’t coming today?  It’s weird, Saki-chan, Erika-san, Rii-chan, Kanna, Miyabi-chan and Yajima-san didn’t come to school too”

Momoko huffed and wheezed and tried to catch her breath.  “Come with me” she huffed as she grabbed Airin’s arm and walked towards the school entrance.

“Wait!  I have to go to class!” said Airi as she struggled to stop.

“Airin!” Momoko stopped pulling and looked at Airi “If you don’t follow me now, you will regret it” Airi was shocked, she has never seen Momoko so serious.  Seeing that Airi was not fighting against her grip, Momoko pulled Airi with her.

Airi remained quiet until she recognized the building they were heading towards.  “Why are you bringing me here?” she asked

“You’ll see” replied Momoko.  Momoko continued leading Airi inside

“Hey guys! Why are you here?” asked Airi as she saw the missing girls.  Everyone turned and was shocked to see Airi.

“Airin!” whispered Risako and Kanna wide-eyed

Airi looked past them and her smile slowly faded.  She pushed past them and saw Maimi bloody and battered trying to get up with Ryo and his men not letting up, frustrated that she still managed to try to stand.

“What’s going on? Why is Maimi not fighting back?” asked Airi as she turned to look at the girls.

“Momo-chan, why did you bring her here?” demanded Miyabi.  She turned to Airi, “You shouldn’t be here” as she grabbed onto Airi’s arm and tried pulling her away.

Airi struggled out of Miyabi’s grasp. “NO! Tell me what is going on!” demanded Airi.  She looked at Risako and Kanna, who took their eyes away from hers, she then turned to Erika-san.  Erika-san shook her head and turned to where Maimi was.  She then turned to Saki and Miyabi and they both walked to stand with Erika.  Finally she looked at Momoko for an answer.

“Airin, she’s…”

“Momo-chan no!!!!” yelled Maimi from where she was.  She had noticed Airi’s arrival.  Ryo and his men looked towards the girls and also noticed the arrival of Airi.

“Well look at this, the one who started this all” laughed Ryo. “You know you’re one lucky girl” he said to Airi “to have such people do anything to help you and make us leave you alone”  Airi’s eyes widened “Oh~ you didn’t know?”  He grabbed Maimi’s hair and pulled it lifting her head for everyone to see clearly.  Maimi’s face was covered with blood flowing from her head and blood was dripping from her mouth. “Your friend here is the person who saved you 3 days ago” Airi put a hand over her mouth.

“Please stop” pleaded Maimi weakly

“Oh you didn’t want her to know?” he mocked “Why did you hide it from her?  Is it possible you love her but your love was never reciprocated? Oh this is grand” he laughed as he and his boys continued to beat on Maimi.  Maimi finally didn’t have the energy to try to get up as she fell on all fours

“MAIMI!!!” yelled Airi she tried to run over but Miyabi stopped her holding her back.  Airi struggled and got out of her grasp but Risako and Kanna stopped her “Let me go guys, why aren’t you helping her?  She’ll die!!!” Risako and Kanna were crying but shook their heads.

“You can’t go over there Airi-chan” said Miyabi who was crying as well forcing herself to sound alright “if you go over, everything that Maimi took will be a waste”  Airi stopped struggling as she hugged Risako and Kanna crying onto their shoulders.



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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #89 on: July 29, 2009, 09:44:47 PM »
I don't think I will kill Maimi....yet, still under consideration

Nani???

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                                                         COLD
My body... feels so cold ...


These chapters were overly intense and a little violent ...
well ... something I do not like the gangs ...
I never see such movies, because I do not like to see... when THEY hit with iron chains, to THE PERSONS.
is ... something ... unpleasant to see ...
Typically, I ...
I could, imagine on the inside of my mind, every explanation ...
every detail, every meaning of every word ...
everything I read... in those letters black that form  part of this  text ...
throughout the text... take shape  in images  inside my mind ...
Despite that is a chapter that was too strong ... you did a good job with the explanation, I believe that you are immersed and heavily concentrated in these two final chapters.

but I like the chapter ...
The chapter has sad moments, moments of despair ... time of grief ... moments of revelation ... times of distress ...
These two chapters are really good, had a good combination.  :)




yeah ...
promises ... are important ...
are very important in our lives ...
but also ... sometimes the people are enslaved to the promises.
enslave people, because even though that this promise has the target to be risky and with a contract a bad result ...
   makes that person unable to do anything ...    
that's why ... that sometimes ... a promise could enslave the heart of one person. (um ... that good, that  this is just a fan fic ...)
but...
you know... when you, break that oath ... ...
and when you stop being a slave to that promise ...
If a friend is in danger ...
or will do something bad ...
then I would without hesitation ... I am ready to break that promise ...
although my friend comes to feel hatred for my ...
or my friend, stop talking the rest of my life to my...


or stay with that:
Why I did not do anything?
Why  not talk, when  could  do it?
Why was  a coward ...?
Why?  
But I do not like to stay with these questions ... T.T

I also greatly respect the promises ...  :P

   

Maimi is an amazing person in your fan fic.
AIRI poor ...
Poor miyabi, and all.
Ryo is to fear ...
you did a good work with your story.
Thanks for your chapter.  :)
These two chapters are too intense, but with good quality of your part.   :)




« Last Edit: July 29, 2009, 10:12:24 PM by Maimi_Yajima »
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« Reply #90 on: July 29, 2009, 11:39:55 PM »
AH!
I forgot to thank to you and congratulate.   :)
Domo Arigatou Gozaimasu, and next chapter.   :nervous
« Last Edit: July 29, 2009, 11:42:32 PM by Maimi_Yajima »
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« Reply #91 on: July 30, 2009, 12:00:30 AM »
Maimi_Yajima-san: Congradulate me on what???  Does you body feel better now??? Thank you for the compliments and hopefully it wasn't too bad to read about.  If only reality was as easy as this fic that would be great, but reality is much more cruel than we see it as.


Chapter 65

Maimi finally fell flat on her face, passing out.  It was only then that Ryo and his boys finally stopped and laughed as they walked away cheering each other at what they did.  Miyabi, Erika and Saki ran over to Maimi’s limp body.  They carried her out to the awaiting car, leaving Risako, Kanna, Airi and Momoko.  Momoko went up to Airi and hugged her, freeing her from Risako and Kanna.

“Take care of her!  I’ll message you with details later” was all Risako said as she and Kanna left the warehouse to go with Miyabi

Airi continued crying until she was all cried out “What is this all about?  How come Maimi wasn’t fighting back? Why is she letting him do this?”

Momoko pulled away from Airi and looked Airi in the eyes.  She saw the hurt and sadness in them and knew that she had to tell her everything that she knew, but before she did she had to make Airi realize something that Momoko had noticed.  “Airin, you love her, don’t you?”

Airi was taken aback by the question “I- I don’t”

“Airin don’t lie to yourself anymore!” demanded Momoko “As much as I hate to admit it, I know you do but you don’t know it.”

“I do know and I don’t love her”

“Look Airin, you’ve been noticing about Maimi-chan for a while now.  I haven’t said anything but it has been nagging at me.  You were always concerned about Maimi’s condition when you first heard she collapsed.  I saw!  Do you remember the day you were out in the field?  I saw everything at the way you were looking at her and at the way you were worried about her.  Maybe it’s because of your theory on Maimi-chan’s type of people that you denied your feelings after the fact but before that?  Before that you noticed her and you paid more attention to her than you think.  Airin, you know and I know that Maimi-chan is not the same type as those others.  She’s different.  You can’t generalize that all of Maimi-chan’s so-called type are the same!  She’s proven that throughout the whole time we’ve known her” exclaimed Momoko venting out everything that weighed on her mind.  Momoko looked at Airi to make sure she was listening.  “Maimi didn’t fight back and let Ryo and his guys do that to protect you.  She made a deal with him!” Airi’s eyes widened at the information she had just received.

“What deal are you talking about?  What do you know Momo-chan?”

“Airin, Maimi-chan was the one that saved you one year ago from Ryo, she is also your masked hero from 3 days ago with Miya” the truth had to be told.  Momoko was feeling guilty and she didn’t want to keep Airi in the dark anymore.  “I don’t know much I just know that much so far.  I’m sure you will know more if you ask Rii-chan or Miya.  But I do know this, Maimi-chan loves you.  She’s loved you for god knows how long.  She refused to confess to you, saying that she had her reasons. “  Momoko felt her phone vibrate.  She opened it and read the email from Miyabi

Maimi is in the hospital not far from where you are

“I don’t know about you but Maimi-chan is in the hospital if you want to see her.  I’m going over now do you want to come?” asked Momoko.  Airi nodded still stunned though.

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« Reply #92 on: July 30, 2009, 12:20:19 AM »
  Does you body feel better now???
um... plop...  XD
you ...  use a bit of sarcasm here ...  XD  XD
hey ...
that quickly, move to  maimi to the hospital.
is that the family of Maimi and Reina are rich?...
again, I'm curious ...
for to know that is what happens to Maimi ...
because  you it always leaves suspense...
Ryo is going to fulfill its promise?
that guy, I can imagine, as a person who is a traitor ... and dirty ...
Reina has to be angry ...
Next chapter...
" a look can say more than words" and " a look can even denude the heart"

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #93 on: July 30, 2009, 03:41:31 AM »
Hi, new reader
i love your fanfic, you have so much imagination, and it got me even when i'm not a h!p kids fanfics fan >.<
PLEASE DON'T KILL MAIMI T.T, she's the best character here
I'll wait the next chapter
Ps: i read it all at once, my eyes aches T.T

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #94 on: July 30, 2009, 03:50:56 AM »
Maimi_Yajima-san:  Unfortunately, I have made Ryo a character that is not too small that he can afford to back out of his promise so no I don't think Ryo will appear again.  Of course I have to leave it as a suspense, otherwise where is the fun???   :w00t:

Yukari: New reader...GETS!!!!  Thank you for your comment and  :bow: for reading it all in one shot.  Props to you!!!!  It means a lot when a reader who was not a h!p kids fanfic fan get intrigued.  As to not killing Maimi...that is undetermined yet as of the moment, debating about what the ending should be. 

One thing for sure is that when readers request, I deliver, hence next chapter it is.

Chapter 66

When they reached the hospital, it was evident that Reina was there.  Some of her men were there and Aika and Koharu as well.  They looked like they were about to cry.  “Aika-san! Koharu-san! Where is she and how is she?”

Aika wiped the tear that threatened to escape and choked out her reply “Maimi-chan is in the intensive care unit.  She hasn’t woken up yet” Momoko nodded and quickly walked in pulling Airi along.  From down the hall they can hear Reina yelling.

“Eri!! Gaki-san!  You have to save her!  What will it take? Reina can donate blood or an organ just make sure she is alive!”  Momoko walked up to the doctors as well.

“We’ll monitor her for 24 hours, she is in critical condition.  Like I told you before, she may die or she may never wake up if she was to obtain more injuries like the last.  We will have to do some more tests on her.  But be prepared.  Reina I know it is hard on you, it is for us as well.  We’ve watched Maimi-chan grow with you.  We wouldn’t want anything to happen to her either” said Eri as she and Gaki-san both hugged Reina tightly before they left.

Reina looked defeated, as did the girls at the state that Maimi is in.  Reina turned and spotted Airi “YOU!!!” she shrieked which shocked everyone.  Miyabi, Saki, and Kanna got up and tried to restrain Reina from doing something she’ll regret.  “It’s all because of you!  Maimi might die because of you and if it wasn’t because of you Reina wouldn’t be losing Maimi, she wouldn’t have left the family business, and she wouldn’t have to deal with Ryo.  If it wasn’t because of you she wouldn’t be in this state!” vented Reina in one breathe as she fought against Miyabi, Saki and Kanna’s hold

“Hush!  Calm down, Reina-san!” soothed Miyabi.  She has never seen Reina in this state, crying and emotional.  It was hard to blame her for trying to fight the three, Maimi was family and the only family that Reina has left.  “You know Maimi would never want you to be this way.  You have to stay strong for her”

At the outburst of Reina, Airi was shocked with what was being told to her.  It was too much information to absorb in one day.  The proximity was getting to her, as she slowly stepped back a couple of steps before she turned and ran “Airin” shouted Momoko.  Momoko was about to chase her but Risako stopped her.

“Momo-chan, let me and KanKan handle this” as she and Kanna, who had managed to stop the aggravated Reina, went out to search for the distraught friend.  They found her sitting on a bench crying uncontrollably.

Risako and Kanna went up to Airi and sat beside her.  Airi noticed Risako presence and just turned and hugged her, crying on Risako’s shoulder.  She needed the comfort.  Risako and Kanna said nothing and just let Airi let it all out.  They knew this was going to happen, the amount given to Airi was a lot to handle in one day.  Risako kept on brushing Airi’s back to soothe her.  When Airi finally calmed down she asked everything that weighed on her mind.

“Rii-chan, why did you lie to me one year ago?” as she looked at her best friend in the eyes.

“Judging on Reina-san’s outburst, I figured that you would ask me that first… Maimi-chan told me to”

“How did Maimi-chan know me then?”

“Did you seriously forget?”

“Forget what?  I didn’t know Maimi-chan until recently when I met Momo-chan”

“Airin!  She went to the same junior high as us!”

“Really?! How come I never noticed her?”

“Well hello~ do you remember the one type of people you don’t like?” At the mention of this Airi’s faced saddened.  Risako didn’t want to mention it but she went on.  “Do you remember the girl Megumi-chan? She hit on you remember?”

Airi thought about it.  “Yeah, the punk who came up to me thinking she was all that.  She was one of those.  I rejected her”

“Do you remember anything else?”

“She didn’t like the fact I rejected her and asked me why so I told her that her type of people were not the type I want to associate with and that I hate it.”

“BINGO!!! Glad you remembered that.  Megumi-chan was one of those few that knew of Maimi’s background and she was against Maimi-chan at the time.  When Maimi-chan was still in it all of course.  Maimi-chan heard that Megumi-chan was going to get you for rejecting her so Maimi-chan intervened.  It was at that moment that Maimi-chan knew that you would never accept her nor will you accept her background” explained Risako.  “It is also because of Maimi-chan that people that have tried to hurt you throughout the years would walk away”

Airi started tearing again.  She recalled the conversation she had with Maimi and the fact that she yelled at her and said things she shouldn’t have.  She then realized that people around her have warned her time and time again that she would regret and they were right, she is regretting it now.

“Is- is it true?” asked Airi “Is it true she isn’t in it anymore?”  Risako slowly nodded “But why did she lie to me?”

“SIGH~ Airin if you haven’t noticed 1) Maimi-chan’s background will still be an issue and 2) Reina-san is her cousin.  She will never really leave Reina-san when she knows Reina-san is in danger.  Do you remember the time when Maimi-chan and Miya left abruptly?  I think it was the time when we all went to the amusement park, the time Erika-san flared up.  I got upset at Reina-san and her people.  Maimi-chan and Miya had already decided to not get involved and have stepped away for good in which Reina-san agreed to.”

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #95 on: July 30, 2009, 04:52:49 AM »
Next chapter.  :P

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #96 on: July 30, 2009, 05:31:31 AM »
Poor airi, so much info in a day u.u maimi is her gangs hero xD <3
Keep writing please XD you do it well

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Re: My Guardian Angel
« Reply #97 on: July 30, 2009, 08:11:04 AM »
Mikitty_Ayaya-san: As you wish, more flashbacks  :w00t:

Yukari:  Thank you!!!

Chapter 67

Risako’s Flashback

Miyabi had called Saki and told her that she was at Maimi’s house.  Saki found Erika and Risako.

“How are they?”

“We don’t know Rii-chan.  By the sound of it, they should be fine but I wanted to make sure and most likely they have minor injuries”

As predicted, Miyabi and Maimi were fine but still managed to obtain some cuts.  None were life threatening but they weren’t cat scratches either.

“NATSUYAKI MIYABI!!!” hollered Risako with her hands on her hips as soon as Miyabi opened the door.

“Damn women!!! I think you set off a couple of alarms already.  You’re so loud.  Maimi and I are tired, we haven’t slept yet”

“Where were you?” asked Risako as they walked into the living room where there was a doctor (Eri) tending Maimi’s wounds.  “It was them wasn’t it?  I thought that Reina-san agreed to letting you guys go?  She wasn’t suppose to find you anymore”

“I’m sorry Rii-chan!  I got Miyabi into all this and made you worry” apologized Maimi as she bowed at Risako.

Risako felt bad when Maimi was apologizing, recalling that it was Maimi that saved Miyabi when they first met, so she decided to drop the subject.  “I’m sorry Maimi-chan, I’m not blaming Reina-san or you, I was just worried that you guys were hurt, so I lost my temper”.

End of Risako’s Flashback

“I let it go the first time but at the next when Aika-chan and Koharu-chan came by at Maimi’s party, I didn’t think I could let it go…”

Risako’s Flashback #2

Risako, Saki and Erika both held on to the injured Aika and Koharu, walking to Maimi’s old house.  When they entered it they saw a bruised and battered Maimi and Miyabi, cleaning their own wounds on their arms.

“MIYA!” cried Risako as she went up to check on Miyabi as Saki and Erika placed Aika and Koharu safely on the couch.  “Why?  Why did this happen?  I thought you have left this life for good?”

“I’m sorry Rii-chan!” apologized Maimi “I wanted to go alone but Miya wouldn’t let me and then I couldn’t protect her enough…”

“Maimi don’t!  You have done more than enough for everyone in this room, if anything you took the brunt of it all.”  Miyabi looked at Erika “Look at her legs!”  It was then that they noticed that Maimi’s pant were painted in red lines whereas everyone else wasn’t. Erika put down the supplies she brought with her and tried to roll up Maimi’s pant leg, but Maimi didn’t want her or them to see the injury or the extent of the injury.  “Maimi, stop it! Just let Erika-san help you!” scolded Miyabi.  Erika rolled up the pants and they all saw gashes all over her legs.

Miyabi was furious and banged her fist on the couch “They whipped her with chains!!!  They knew Maimi was the best we’ve got so they attacked her from a distance” exclaimed Miyabi

“You still haven’t answered me why?  Why did they find you?  Reina-san had agreed you can leave whenever you want!” screamed Risako.

“Rii-chan!  It wasn’t Reina-san who called us!” flared Miyabi.  “Reina-san was ambushed near Maimi’s house at the time, Aika-chan and Koharu-chan thought of Maimi so they ran to find her.  Reina-san was not pleased at Aika-chan and started beating her up, but Maimi stopped her.  Reina-san is Maimi’s blood cousin, did you think Maimi will not try to save her?  Leave her to get hurt?  Did you think I was going to let Maimi go alone?” yelled Miyabi

“MIYA!!” Maimi called “Don’t get upset at Rii-chan!!!  She was only concerned and worried.  It is my fault for getting you involved.  It’s my family issues, you shouldn’t have come with me”

Aika had gotten up after Saki had tended to her and bowed at Risako “I’m sorry, Reina-san was ambushed and we just didn’t know who else to find in all the commotion but Maimi-chan”

“Aika-chan don’t worry about Reina.  I will explain it to her.  You did the right thing by calling me.  I always told Reina that I would fight side by side with her but because of my own personal issues I broke that promise.  From now on, if these issues appear I want you to tell me right away I will deal with Reina if she asks” said Maimi

“Reina already knows!” Maimi turned and saw that Reina was hobbling into the room.  She quickly went up to support her.  Reina hugged Maimi “Reina doesn’t want Maimi to be unhappy but Reina fears for Maimi.  You’re hurt because of Reina”

“I will always fight side by side with you.  Even if I have left the family business I can still be your number 1 right-hand girl” smiled Maimi

End of Risako’s Flashback #2

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Re: My Guardian Angel-Chapter 67
« Reply #98 on: July 30, 2009, 08:46:50 AM »
More flashbacks, it helps to understand many things o.o
Nice chapter, you updated so soon, it's great XD
Ps: i like your nick lmfao XD

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Re: My Guardian Angel-Chapter 67
« Reply #99 on: July 30, 2009, 06:51:22 PM »
Me and my sister read this story together and so far we love it!!!! <3

keep up the good work..

My sister is a big fan of Miya/Saki and she wonders how Miya and Saki ment and got together..

Oh well.. Update soon but take yout time if you want..

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