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Offline kano-chan

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 22 8/26)
« Reply #340 on: September 02, 2010, 02:48:58 AM »
Wow! I was really behind, but finally caught up to everything! :w00t:

Your story is really awesome! :on GJ:

Maimi hurt Captain, her lover!  :(

So what's gonna happen to Kamei? There's TanaShige now... :( Just saying, but I thought there would be TanaKame. :yep: :heart:

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 22 8/26)
« Reply #341 on: September 06, 2010, 01:56:54 PM »
Comment replies go here! Eventually!

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 22 8/26)
« Reply #342 on: September 06, 2010, 01:59:58 PM »
Happy one day late anniversary B&B! So I failed in finishing the arc in time, but I might as well put up what I have. I like to call this one the flashback chapter. :lol: I tried to do it all movie scene like, but I'm not sure if it came out cheesy or not.

Ch. 23: For want of the price of tea and a slice


Pacing around the neighborhood, Risa ran frantically back to the place where she had last seen her girlfriend, the old Blue’s hangout, but the older girl was nowhere to be found. She was always faster than the bean, always leaving her behind and this was no exception. Sinking to her knees in the familiar backyard, Risa finally allowed the tears to leak from her tightly shut eyelids. Where would she go? What would she do without Ai? The other girl had literally been her life and now she had disappeared.

The teenage gunner patted the sidearm tucked into her belt affectionately, a mirthless chuckle bubbling up from her throat, “Guess it’s just you and me again. It’s been a while, but I’m sure it’ll come back to me. Like riding a bike.” Ai had taught her how to ride a bike. “You never forget.” The pain in her heart was still as fresh as it was two days ago.

Voices from inside the house caught her attention and Risa snapped to the ready, recognizing the voices as those coming from prepubescent children. Slowly, she crept closer, not making a sound, intent on finding out who was on her turf. She peeked around the corner into the living room and spied two young boys dressed all in blue talking on the couch.

“So some lieutenant from the Takashi gang is in town.” the one on the right said conspiratorially, “If we take him out, we can make a name for ourselves and get the Blues back on the map.”

Risa could barely control her gasp, knowing that not one of her brother’s gang had survived the massacre that night. To hear this was like poking a bruise, it was small now, but the pain was still there, “I don’t think so.” the kid on the left said cautiously, “You’re talking about murder.”

“So?” The first boy replied, “We didn’t get into this for kiddy stuff. Besides, I heard that it’s actually his right hand man that’s here.”

A face flashed through Risa’s mind, a man mouthing sorry to her brother as he pulled the trigger on his gun, the barrel pointed at Hiro’s frightened face. “How do you know that?” the second kid asked, shifting a little in his seat.

“My brother is planning the same thing, so I know where he’s staying and I even have the maps right here, I copied them down.” He pulled two sheets of folded up paper out of his pocket.

Her brother’s smile, his laugh, his warm hugs, his gentle chidings. If he hadn’t died, none of this would have happened, if Hiro was still alive, Risa would never have had to suffer like this. This pain in her heart and in her mind wouldn’t exist. It was all that man’s fault! She pressed her hands against her temples, a burning, throbbing sensation growing behind her eyes as everything began to turn red.

“Why not let your brother do it, then?”

“Why should my older brother get all the glory. I hate that asshole.”

Without thinking about it, Risa pulled the Colt from her belt and marched into the room, “Where is he?” she demanded as both boys stood in shock.

“Who the hell are you?” The second kid asked snottily and she didn’t waste a second shooting him in the arm. He cried out in pain and fell back on the couch, clutching his wound.

“You think this is a game of glory?!” she roared, “You think being in the Blues is all about making a name?! You selfish brats don’t deserve to kill that man! He’s mine!” she pistol whipped the first boy and he fell to the ground, a fresh bruise already forming around his eye, “Now tell me where to find him!”

“Alright!” The kid with the maps cried, throwing them at her, “He rented out a mansion just north of town. The address is written there, that’s where he is. Crazy bitch.” he mumbled and she jerked the gun at him again, “I’m sorry! I’m sorry!”

“If I ever come back to Yokohama and find that you’re still playing at being Blues like it’s some game, I swear here and now that I’ll kill you myself. The Blues aren’t some two bit street thugs, they did good things too and they looked out for each other. Remember that. My brother died for that.” She whispered harshly before storming out of the house, not realizing it would be the last time she’d ever see it. She didn’t care, now she had a purpose.



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Ai looked down at her hands as they sat in their original war room in the hotel. She couldn’t believe the way she had acted at the manor, she had so easily broken her own creed and took someone’s life. Each bullet retort, each splatter of blood, each death remained in her mind constantly revolving around each other. She should feel bad, she should feel like a bad person, but she didn’t. She felt nothing except a sense of satisfaction.

Those men had been bad, they had hurt and tortured people and killed without provocation. They had deserved to die! She should be awarded for ridding the world of them. She wasn’t in the wrong because there was no way they could have been saved. They enjoyed the pain they put other people through and she had done a service in killing them.

Nodding to herself, satisfied with her justification, Ai raised her eyes up to survey the room, taking in the others in quiet conversation with each other on the two beds. Reina and Sayumi were exchanging flirtatious looks and touches on one side and Ai couldn’t help but roll her eyes. Really, now they were just playing around.

Eri and Jun were talking about something or another across the gap in beds and Aika was showing Lin something with a gesture, the hacker’s eyes lit up in understanding. The only one that wasn’t enjoying herself was Saki, sitting across from her on a chair.

“What’s wrong?” Ai whispered, leaning closer to the girl. The Captain looked up, slightly startled out of her thoughts, and shook her head, “You look like you need someone to talk to.”

“That would probably be smart, huh?” Saki commented mirthlessly, but said nothing more. Ai stared at her expectantly for a moment and then shrugged.

“Well, I’m here if you need to.” she offered, gaining a grateful nod in return. At that time, the door to the room opened to finally admit the last of their group and the most anticipated presence.

Ai almost gasped at her lover’s dramatic appearance, her chopped hair was cut to just below her jaw and dyed a deep brown, so dark it was almost it’s original black color, but with noticeable highlights. She was wearing stretchy black, formfitting pants and a light blue tank top covered by a vest that matched her pants. Her tattoo stood out strikingly on her bared arm, the rotting dragon seeming to shimmer strength as it was slowly devoured by the parasitic snakes that weaved in and out of his body.

Her body still bore the marks of her recent treatment, the red standing out against her lightly tanned skin, but she smirked underneath the brim of a black and light blue fedora, cocking an eyebrow upwards. Her cuts stretched precariously on her face as she did so, but the slight pulling sensation didn’t bother her as she said, “We’re back in business, ladies.” She put her tattooed hand on her hip and held up the other to show the files she was holding. “This is where we attack next and no more of this Mister Nice Guy act.” here she turned to Ai for confirmation.

“Right, I’m pissed.” was all the demo expert said, growling out the last word. The others in the room seemed shocked, even after the brutality that she had showed at the manor, just the fact that she was so heartily endorsing killing someone was so foreign to them. They all knew that there was a limit to how much someone could take before they lost whatever morals had been holding them back from giving it their all.

“We will bomb and shoot and throw rocks from a catapult if we have to, but we are going to level every one of these warehouses to the ground.” Risa declared, tossing the files on the bed, two on one and two on the other. The girls shifted forward to pick up the files and look through them. “Not all of them are on the warf, though the first two are. The other two are on opposite sides of the city.”

“Get me some blueprints.” Ai suddenly piped up from her position leaning forward with her elbows propped on her knees and fingers steepled together in front of her face, “Bringing down buildings is my expertise, after all.”

The gunner grinned at her lover’s initiative and flipped through a few pages she swiped from the bed, “Here you go.” she said, handing them over with a flourish. Ai looked up and met her clear gaze with her own stormy one and a part of Risa cried out loudly before it could be stamped down. There was something missing in her eyes that was only lost with your first kill. She hadn’t wanted this for her, she hadn’t wanted this for any of them, even sweet Lin had taken a life.

There was no going back for them now, as if there had been an option before, but they wouldn’t hesitate to use lethal force after all of this. Risa knew that it wouldn’t stop at the warehouses or the Tanaka clan, they were truly gangsters, they were truly criminals and they were soon to take the whole city in their hands. The gunner had realized when she became head of the Takashi gang that she was going to have to continue the business and become what she had been long ago, once more.

She was running, trying to keep her panting breaths quiet. It was only her and probably a hundred of them, but she had the advantage of night and silenced weapons, leaving their bodies where they dropped. Up ahead, she spied another guard and reacted instinctively, firing two shots into his head at close range. The man next to him couldn’t even get out a shout before he joined his companion on the ground.

She was finally at the mansion, after a full day of preparation, and not a moment too soon. Doro-san was due on a flight the next morning, if she was going to exact her revenge, it had to be tonight. She had a brilliant plan, something so crazy, there was almost no way for her to be stopped.

Full frontal assault. Charge in the front door and kill as many men as possible on her way to the master bedroom on the top floor, which was actually only the second story. She rounded the corner and took out a man having a smoke break in front of her entrance goal. Before she could even reach for the handles, it swung open, revealing another man coming out with his head turned back to talk to his friend. Grinning and not believing her luck, Risa capped him, shoved him aside and shot the second man point blank in the face.

Leaving the faint thud behind her, she charged onwards down the main hallway, aiming for the stairs at the end. Her footsteps were muffled on the padded carpet as she ran, pain beginning to shoot up her side. She encountered no one else on her trip and finally paused outside the door to the master bedroom. She reached out to test the knob and found it unlocked, her heart jumped, her jaw clenched, she adjusted her grip on her pistol.

She pushed the door open and walked inside, eyes widening at the view. The room was empty! Her eyes darted left and right, taking in what was in front of her. On the bed was an open suitcase, filled with clothes, next to the bed was more luggage. On the other side of the room was an empty couch with a tv remote on the arm and the television in front of it on mute.

Behind her, she heard the door close firmly and jumped, spinning around to find her target pointing his own weapon at her. “Well, well, well, what do we have here? A lost little school girl?” Where had he been?! Risa’s eyes fell on the minibar and fridge that sat behind the door and felt like smacking herself. He had been there the whole time, having gotten up to get a drink as she entered. What luck! And it would be the end of her, she realized.

Glancing at his weapon, Risa involuntarily dropped her eyes to her own, “Ah ah ah! Don’t even think about it.” But she had and she jerked her hand to point at him. A loud retort sounded and a white hot pain filled her gut. With a groan, Risa fell to one knee, her free hand clutching her side, where a very big bullet had passed through her, “Now, now, I told you not to.” Her enemy said, almost apologetically as he approached her.

Shakily, she tried to raise her pistol again, but her just grabbed her wrist and pointed it harmlessly to the side. She’d never been shot before and she felt the excruciating pain sapping her energy, “Why are you so determined, child?” he whispered and she looked up into his painfully curious gaze, “What have I done to you to make such hatred seep from your eyes?”

“You don’t remember me?” she rasped out, glaring with her whole being at him. His eyes suddenly widened and she knew he did, “You killed my brother.” Talking hurt, so she left it at that, looking down and waiting for him to strike that final blow. He pulled her weapon out of her hands and tossed it aside, behind him, the door burst open and men crowded around the doorway, shouts filling the room and becoming indistinguishable as words.

A warm feeling engulfed Risa and it took her a second to realize that he had surged forward to embrace her instead of finishing her, “I’m sorry, child. I took everything from you, didn’t I?” he whispered against her hair. Her brother’s warm scent flashed through her head for a moment, followed by Ai’s cold face as she had broken up with her, “I left you with such anger and pain and no outlet for either. Let me rectify that, let me give you that outlet now. Join me.”

Risa couldn’t believe her ears; the man she had hated for so long, who she had come here intending to kill, was asking her to join him? How could she? Why would she ever?! She had nothing and it was his fault! She had nothing.

Tears sprang to her eyes, even if he killed her or really took her in, it wouldn’t matter, she had nothing to live for now. Had she really expected to escape the mansion alive anyway? What else could she do?

Her vision swam and then went black, the pain finally taking it’s toll. When she woke up, days later in Africa, she would give him her answer. She would become a part of his gang.


“Thanks.” Ai said softly, taking the plans from her hand. Risa blinked, the memory playing in a flash.

“Okay.” The gunner cleared her throat, “After this, we bring the fight to their doorstep. We kill the lieutenants and take over the clan. Tanakacchi?” Risa questioned, turning to the cop to confirm.

“My younger brother.” she said quietly, looking at the gunner pleadingly, “Fuji’s not a bad kid, even if he was at the manor, I’m sure it’s only because they forced him to be there. He used to cry when we came across road kill, there’s no way he could take a human life.”

“He wasn’t there, actually.” Risa said, smirking at the surprised look she got, “He refused to go and your brothers set him up. He’s currently sitting in a cell awaiting sentencing, supposedly three years in Juvie. He’s a minor and his crimes were all petty, at least the ones they can prove, the only reason they’re going to give him that much time is because they’re so numerous.”

“How do you know that?” Reina breathed out. Risa just laughed.

“What? Did you think it took that long to get a hair cut? I still have a few connections in the city, anyhow.” The yankii’s look turned grateful and she just nodded. “And Captain.” The gunner turned to the solemn girl, “When you face you’re opponent, try not to do anything rash, remember your feelings.” Saki slowly nodded and the others looked intrigued by the vague conversation. “Alright, if that’s settled, let’s head back to our rooms to rest up, we do this tomorrow.”

All except for the two cops and Sayu got up and shuffled out, Risa catching Saki’s arm out in the hallway, “I’m fine.” Saki preceded, trying to forestall any questioning.

“You and Maimi have been in love with each other for ages.” Risa said seriously, “I know you’re hurting about what happened at the manor, but don’t do anything rash.”

“Like what? Kill her?” The younger girl laughed mirthlessly, a low sound filled with unshed tears that didn’t show on her face, “Kill my lover, my heart?”

“She’s just as trapped as you are, Saki-chan.” the gunner said compassionately, “This doesn’t have to end with death for you two. Once we take over the Tanaka clan, she’ll retain her position, just as you’ve retained your’s.”

Saki knew Risa wasn’t just talking about their gang status, she meant that their relationship would go back to normal. Sure everything hadn’t been all stars and rainbows for them, but this was quite possibly the worst fight they’d ever had. Mostly because they were physically fighting! She hadn’t laid her hands on Maimi like that since the first day they’d met.

It had been almost ten years ago, the three gangs had met up for a huge annual party and for the first time, Saki’s parents had allowed her to go. She’d been so excited, but tried to play it cool in front of all the adults. They’d ruffled her hair and laughed and called her cute, but thought nothing of her, so she’d been able to listen in on all their conversations and learn a bunch of juicy secrets. She’d also learned that there was another girl her age around here, somewhere.

Deciding to search for her, Saki had set off around the huge building, turning a corner and immediately running into someone, “Watch where you’re going, midget!” the person had said rudely and Saki didn’t give another thought to landing a fist square on the much taller person’s jaw. She’d been hit back and they’d fallen to the ground in a tangle of arms and legs.

It was soon very obvious that they were a perfect match, unable to best the other, and they finally stopped, winded. “I’m Saki.” She’d introduced and gotten a beautiful, bruised smile in return. It had been love at first sight on her part and she’d constantly beg her parents to take her to the Tanaka mansion, where Maimi’s mother was a lieutenant. Eventually, love blossomed on both sides and they’d gotten together, becoming partners in crime quite literally. They’d beat up dead beats together and gotten arrested together, their first kiss had been in a jail cell.

Remembering all this, Saki sighed; Risa was right, she loved Maimi and Miami loved her. There was no way the other girl enjoyed them being on opposite sides, but the fact was that they were. They’d never been able to beat each other in a fight, so hopefully, when they met again, Saki would just be able to keep her busy long enough for the others to win the day. Hopefully.


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Gasping, Risa spit out the blood that was filling her mouth from the cut on the inside of her cheek onto the dusty, African ground. She was kneeling on all fours in the dirt, where she had landed when the fist had connected to the side of her face. It wasn’t the first time Hyoki had hit her and it probably wouldn’t be the last, the older man didn’t like the favoritism Doro-san showered her with when she proved herself more than capable over the few weeks she’d been with the group.

The gunner wasn’t a very confrontational person, though, and she hadn’t fought back yet, “That’s right, little bitch, take it. Take every thing I give you like a woman.” the rest of the gang, crowded around them in a circle, just laughed at his words, also thinking her weak for her gender and the fact that she wouldn’t stand up for herself.

Now, Risa definitely didn’t enjoy being hurt like this and a part of her that sounded and awful lot like her brother begged her to hit him back, but she also wasn’t stupid. She was no match for him and at her current state, a punch would barely sting. For now, she would let it go. “Fuck you.” she spat, lips turning bloody, before she got up and trudged away, their mocking laughter behind her.

Not far from the disturbance, Doro watched the fight and shook his head, disappointed.


Gunfire erupted all around her as the girls opened fire on their targets. The first warehouse was well guarded, but no match for an all out assault by the determined and pissed off group. Sayumi cackled next to her ear as her shots hit home and a young man collapsed to the ground. Risa glanced at her lover, a few feet to her other side and spotted her grim face as she took practiced aim and fired a single shot at a time, just like the gunner had taught her.

A high pitched squeal of triumph from inside let her know that the other group had infiltrated the side entrance. “Let’s go!” Reina commanded from the far side of Sayu and the four charged forward, laying down some fire to ward off any returns. The were inside in no time.

This was what she had been waiting for, Risa tried to keep her face calm as Hyoki sidled up beside her as she sat on a stool at the counter in the mess hall and dragged a finger up her back. All these months of training on livestock had honed her gunning abilities to the point where she didn’t even need to see her barrel in such close quarters to know where she was aiming. Her eyes never left the counter top she was glaring at as she eased her pistol up in her lap.

“Well, well, little bitch. Happy birthday.” The young gunner flinched at his words, a calculated move that had the effect she was looking for, he laughed and began to let down his guard, “I think I have the perfect present for you, eighteen’s a big number, ya know. In America, that’s adult age.” One of his hands began to run up her thigh, she smirked.

“No thanks.” She waited until his fingers touched the cold metal of her weapon and recognized the feel before she pulled the trigger. The bang echoed on the aluminum walls of the small shack they were in and the other people around came crowding over. Hyoki screamed as his crotch exploded n red and fell back onto the dusty floor. “Ah, that’s satisfying.” Risa smiled, rising slowly and turning to address the writhing man. “Now, fuck you, Hyoki! You’re the little bitch now!” she growled, her face morphing into a cruel mask as she raised the pistol to his face and blew him away with a well placed shot between the eyes.

When she turned to leave, the men parted for her like she was Moses, all feeling the pride that wafted off of her as though it were tangible. Across the shack, Doro smiled and nodded to himself. She was ready.


Blood splattered her face as Ai took out a man that wandered a little to close to Risa with a machete, the gunner nodded her thanks to her lover. It had been too easy to rig up the explosives in the first building, but the second one was putting up a better fight. A bullet whizzed by her ear and Risa swiftly turned to find the sniper before he could do any real damage.

The group was on the bottom floor of the concrete warehouse, fighting in fours again. The gunner’s group, affectionately referred to as the lover’s group, were to provide distraction so the others could creep in and hit the targets from behind. While they were reeling, Risa’s team would charge in and finish them, but these men were proving to be numerous and resilient.

Looking up through a hole in the ceiling, Risa saw the sniper, fumbling with his apparently jammed rifle. He jerked the bolt, but it wouldn’t budge and Risa’s laughter caught his attention, “Oh, bad luck there, boy.” She said, taking aim between his eyes. He only had a second to realize his fate before her met it.

”You are going to kill this man, without the use of your guns.” Doro ordered, pointing to a terrified looking farmer he’d had chained to a wooden pole, buried in the desert ground. The man began to babble in an incomprehensible language of fear, his dark skin paling noticeably. Risa furrowed her brows together as she watched him in concern.

“Who is he?” The gunner inquired curiously.

“His name is Jabar Kulim, he is twenty-two, has a wife and three kids. He is a farmer of cattle and a devout Catholic. His parents and grand parents both live in that village and are farmers as well.” Her mentor offered easily.

“What has he done?” she asked quietly.

“It doesn’t matter, I want him killed.” Doro answered swiftly. “And I want it to be carried out by your hands.”

“Why tell me all about him if you want me to kill him?” Risa replied incredulously, “Getting to know him just makes it harder to do it. He hasn’t even done anything serious, has he?!”

“No, I just want you to kill him.” He cocked his head at her indignant growl.

“He hasn’t done anything wrong, though? Why?” Risa implored. “He’s innocent.”

“No one is ever innocent!” Doro snapped, turning on her and gripping her neck in one hand, “Even if he hasn’t wronged me, it doesn’t matter, I still want you to kill him. The crime will never matter, neither will their families and friends. All that matters is that he has been marked!” He shook her thin frame and she sucked in a breath, “Rest assured, they will all have families and friends, they will have and be brothers, sisters, sons, daughters, mothers and fathers! And you will kill them anyway! Because that is your order and that is their mark!”

“The reason I have done this,” his voice lowered compassionately at her sudden tears, “Is so that you can learn this lesson now instead of later. Most times, you will need a lot of information on a target to get the job done properly and you will begin to feel sympathetic. That’s fine if you feel bad for killing them, as long as you finish the job.” He released her throat and she sobbed once, pulling a large knife from her belt, “Kill him, he is your target.”

“I’m sorry.” she whispered as she walked towards the frightened man. He began to slowly shake his head back and forth, pleading for her not to end him. ‘He has a family,’ a part of her pointed out, ‘he has loved ones, something you will never have again. He deserves to die for being so happy when you can’t be, he deserves it!’ It growled and she latched onto it’s words, taking any justification she could get, not matter how much she didn’t believe it.

She raised the knife high and the man screamed when it plunged into his chest. ‘Monster! Monster!’ Familiar voices cried out in her head, only to fade away as though having dirt shoveled over them. Tears dripped down her face for the last time for four years.


“This only leaves one more to go, right?” Sayu asked as she leaned up against the doorway, ostensibly to be lookout.

“You could help out, you know?” Reina grumbled as she helped hold up the huge chunk of C4 while Eri taped it onto a support beam.

“But then how would we know if anyone was coming?” The con asked innocently, batting her eyelashes at the yankii cop.

Reina opened her mouth to retort, but was quickly cut off by Risa raising her voice over them, “Yes! One more after this. Just one…”

’One shot, just need one shot.’ Risa kept repeating in her head as she lay still as death upon the ridge. It had been days since she’d moved, though she wasn’t sure how she knew anymore, her entire being was focused on the building she saw through her scope. She was pausing to look away only ever few hours so that she wouldn‘t lose herself to tunnel vision.

Her target wasn’t stupid and he had taken himself into protective custody and into hiding. She’d tracked him halfway around the world and now here she was in snowy Switzerland! She was freezing her ass off on this mountain and she had to pee like nobody’s business, but she couldn’t leave until she got her shot. He would get bored soon enough and open the window to take a look out at the amazing view of the mountains and when he did, she’d bee ready.


The explosion was magnificent, a mini mushroom cloud licking the sky before dissolving into flames, the building practically disintegrating from the force. It was brilliant and fierce and exhilarating and Risa pulled her lover close to her side as the group stood on the rooftop of another building to watch the fireworks. No matter how many times she saw something like this, it always got to her a little.

“Great job, baby.” The gunner whispered into Ai’s hair, feeling an appreciative squeeze on her behind for it. “This is it, guys. We’ve sent our message, now we just wait for their response.”

Risa raced through the mansion, popping off a few shots from her pistol as she ran. It was like a flash back to her teenage days, but the gunner was in too much of a rush to appreciate the irony. She’d just gotten into LA from her last job and had been so excited to see her mentor again after so long, but to come home to this news. The mansion under attack by Takashi himself!? She’d hurried immediately to find Doro-san.

She made it to his room in no time, most of the other occupants of the mansion and the attackers were too busy with each other to pay her any attention, so she’d slipped by them easily. When she reached the familiar door, Risa kicked it in as she entered and raised her pistols to fire off a few rounds at the men standing over her mentor. They dropped like bloody rocks and the gunner rushed to Doro’s side.

“Doro-san! Doro-san!” she called, sliding on her knees painfully to come up beside him. He grinned at her weakly as she took in his appearance, two bullet wounds in his chest, multiple other lacerations and bruises on his face and visible skin. “Oh, Doro-san, no.”

“Welcome home.” he rasped, “Sorry I couldn’t have cake for you, Happy Birthday. There’s a present for you in my dresser drawer.” He pointed above his head and they both looked up at it.

“Is now really the time?!” Risa cried, tears welling up in her eyes, “I’ve got to get you out of here, come on.” she tried to move him, but her groaned loudly and she stopped, resting him back on the carpet.

“I’m afraid I’m not leaving here, child.” he intoned ominously, “Now, my drawer.” he gestured again.

Sighing and rolling her eyes, Risa raised up on her knees and opened the dresser, grabbing a heavy box from inside, “You want me to open it now?” she asked, when he nodded, she lifted the top. “Oh.” she breathed. Resting inside the box was an old American military issued Colt .45, “You kept this?” She hadn’t seen it since she was seventeen and first assaulted his mansion in Japan.

“Figured it was time to give it back. It’s a reliable weapon and works effectively, too. I’ve been repairing any damage it had sustained over the years recently so that I could return it today. Talk about timing, huh?” He began to laugh, but cut himself off with a gurgling couch, “Now, go. Go! Use what I’ve taught you and live how you want, now.”

Reluctantly, Risa rose to her feet, “What about you? I mean, how could Takashi betray you like this!?”

“Oh, it’s been a long time coming, child, but don’t worry. This old bear still has some fight left, yet.” From his pocket, he pulled a cylindrical object with a single button at the top, a detonator, “Get as far as possible from here, I’ll try to give you five minutes.”

She shared one last look with him before bolting out the door, tears sliding down her cheeks. There was no need for more words, everything that needed to be said already had been, without any words at all. The explosion was magnificent.



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“Those bitches not only took out our brother, but our four biggest warehouses, too!?” Baku screamed, reading the report handed to him.

“Fuck this!” Daisuke cried, standing up to slam his hands on the table with more force. Everyone looked unimpressed by his show of power, Etsuo adjusting his glasses, Chion examining his nails and Maimi and Erino sitting there with grim faces. “Let’s take the fight back to them, then! Rocket launchers! Grenades! Mines!” he shouted.

“It’s always explosions with you, little brother.” Chion murmured, emphasizing the ‘little’, “When will you learn?”

“Maybe when he starts thinking with his upped head?” Estuo chimed in with a chuckle.

“Oh, you’re one to talk,” Baku sneered, “You just like to pretend you’re all high and mighty, when the truth is you’re just as base as everything you say you hate.”

“No.” A deep voice barreled out, instantly silencing brewing arguments, “We will not attack them head on again, I will lose no more of my men. It’s obvious that you cannot be trusted to do anything right, so I will take command again.” Reiki ground his teeth audible. “We will wait.”

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #343 on: September 06, 2010, 03:34:22 PM »
So Ai and the gang arn't taking any more prisoners  :panic:

So Risa was trained as a killer by someone in the Tanaka group? she has quite the tragic backstory, I wonder how much of what Risa does if for revenge for her old master.

Big brother is back in comand then, I wonder what new plan the Tanaka brothesrs will come up with?

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #344 on: September 06, 2010, 03:49:28 PM »
Actually Risa's mentor was the right hand of Takashi, betrayed by his leader because he was too dangerous. I think I said that quite a few chapters ago, but just in case I didn't, there ya go~! :D
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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #345 on: September 06, 2010, 04:12:19 PM »
Ah Sorry thats what I meant to say, was obvoiusly thinking about something eles when I wrote that  :doh:

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #346 on: September 06, 2010, 05:52:51 PM »
yay~ happy belated b-day~! that probably explained why i didnt talk to u much yesterday :nervous

flashback niigaki ftw~! its pretty good (and sad) to see how risa pretty much grew up gunner wise,she was one tought bean/cookie! u could really feel the emotion and everything through it. and u can tell she feels kinda bad that ai (and even linko!)had killed someone
i almost cried at the part where she killed the farmer cus i was like "no~! dont do it~!D:"

darn u for making such lovely epic works that i cants stay mad at since u spoil me so much >.>

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now kawaii shall wait till great master rndy does the next one!
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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #347 on: September 06, 2010, 06:19:28 PM »
 :lol: :lol: I know I tend to have a lot of typos and such, but this one amused me enough to mention it.

NG:  He began to laugh, but cut himself off with a gurgling couch
Ok:  He began to laugh, but cut himself off with a gurgling cough

I haven't changed it because, one, I'm lazy, but also it is just too funny.

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #348 on: September 08, 2010, 04:40:42 PM »
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She felt nothing except a sense of satisfaction.
:mon freeze:

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Reina and Sayumi were exchanging flirtatious looks and touches on one side and Ai couldn’t help but roll her eyes.
Very lovely  :D

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“Bringing down buildings is my expertise, after all.”
Time to show off  :bounce:

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shot the second man point blank in the face.

Whoa!

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“Watch where you’re going, midget!”
:lol:

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their first kiss had been in a jail cell.
Ain't that lovely  XD

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As always, very impressive  :bow:

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #349 on: September 12, 2010, 01:27:26 AM »
omg I just finished this fanfic after my computer shut off and i couldn't write Chigatte anymore  :D
I read everything on my cell phone cuz i couldn't stop reading!!  XD

anyway, it sounds SOO GOOOD SO FARRRRR  :heart: :heart: :heart: :thumbsup

you HAVE to give us more, MORE MOREEEE  :cow:

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #350 on: September 12, 2010, 02:08:26 AM »
Uh oh...sounds to me like they're going to plan something that will totally put the girls in danger. :mon chilly: :panic:

But then again, these girls are way too tough. :mon kungfu:

I need MOAR of this! :twothumbs

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #351 on: September 12, 2010, 02:37:34 PM »
Firstly, happy belated anniversary to B&B!

 :yossi: :cow: :otomerika:

It's a pity I wasn't here from the beginning, but I'd just like to congratulate you, rndm, for all the work you've put into this story and how awesome it has turned out.  :yep: And thank you too, truly, as it's been such a joy reading this.  :heart:


Ch. 23: For want of the price of tea and a slice

Firstly, interesting chapter title   :P
I kind of like to make assumptions as to what the chapter may be about from the title alone, but it sure is difficult sometimes! >.<


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She should feel bad, she should feel like a bad person, but she didn’t. She felt nothing except a sense of satisfaction.

Sadistic Ai-chan  :twisted: I like.
I'm not surprised that she's taking it this way though, that she's not simply crumbling into a sobbing heap about it. She's been through a lot too, so it's hardly surprising.
I guess she's beyond the point of caring as well, seeing the terror and the chaos that she'd just walked through. Kill or be killed, a survivor's instinct!  :yep:
We know Ai-chan has a pretty gangster side to her already anyway  :nervous


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They had deserved to die! She should be awarded for ridding the world of them.

Although when I read this part, I became kind of worried for some odd reason  :sweatdrop:
Is Ai-chan becoming some remorseless killing machine? You know, I'm just getting Light/Akira vibes there...
I guess in a way, it might be that she's just trying really hard to console herself. She's probably thinking what in the heavens overcame her like that... I know I'd be worried  :O


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Reina and Sayumi were exchanging flirtatious looks and touches on one side

Awww, why no details?

You could've spent a few more sentences elaborating that, rndm...  :P


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Ai almost gasped at her lover’s dramatic appearance, her chopped hair was cut to just below her jaw and dyed a deep brown, so dark it was almost it’s original black color, but with noticeable highlights. She was wearing stretchy black, formfitting pants and a light blue tank top covered by a vest that matched her pants. Her tattoo stood out strikingly on her bared arm, the rotting dragon seeming to shimmer strength as it was slowly devoured by the parasitic snakes that weaved in and out of his body.

 :drool: :drool: :drool:
Holy smokes, I just can't keep my imagination from running wild and freely fangirlsquealing whenever I think of Gaki-san in your story...  :wub:
Descriptions like this certainly don't help to calm me down xD
She sounds so sexay...  :w00t:


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black and light blue fedora

Does that have anything to do with the title of the story?  8)


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“Get me some blueprints.” Ai suddenly piped up from her position leaning forward with her elbows propped on her knees and fingers steepled together in front of her face, “Bringing down buildings is my expertise, after all.”

HELL YEAH!
I've been waiting for a while for Ai-chan to put these delicious demolition skills to use!  :inlove:


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There was something missing in her eyes that was only lost with your first kill.

I guess going through such an experience would really harden you as a person...   
It's kind of sad that we've lost such a gentle, innocent side to Ai-chan...  :cry: But you can't expect her to continue to carry such soft an attitude, not when things are this intense and crazy explosive as they are in this story!  :shocked:


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Eventually, love blossomed on both sides and they’d gotten together, becoming partners in crime quite literally. They’d beat up dead beats together and gotten arrested together, their first kiss had been in a jail cell.

Awwwww, that little description dedicated to Saki & Maimi was really cute!  :oops:
They must be going through some rough times right now, literally having to beat each other up and all, but hopefully you won't be so mean and they'll be back in each other's arms soon enough  :heart:


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“No thanks.” She waited until his fingers touched the cold metal of her weapon and recognized the feel before she pulled the trigger. The bang echoed on the aluminum walls of the small shack they were in and the other people around came crowding over. Hyoki screamed as his crotch exploded n red and fell back onto the dusty floor. “Ah, that’s satisfying.” Risa smiled, rising slowly and turning to address the writhing man. “Now, fuck you, Hyoki! You’re the little bitch now!” she growled, her face morphing into a cruel mask as she raised the pistol to his face and blew him away with a well placed shot between the eyes.

Ruthless Gaki-san!  :shocked

I honestly don't know whether to be afraid or to find her callousness attractive >.<

But it was somewhat satisfying to read this part - some guys can sure be infuriatingly... annoying. I'm all for girl power and trampling on men (especially those who deserve it)  :lol:

So I guess... nice one, Gaki-san, going for the jewels  XD


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“I’m sorry.” she whispered as she walked towards the frightened man. He began to slowly shake his head back and forth, pleading for her not to end him. ‘He has a family,’ a part of her pointed out, ‘he has loved ones, something you will never have again. He deserves to die for being so happy when you can’t be, he deserves it!’ It growled and she latched onto it’s words, taking any justification she could get, not matter how much she didn’t believe it.

 :OMG: :err: :fainted:

Our poor Gaki-san has been through soooo much. That must have been a real pivotal point in her criminal life - to kill scum is one thing.. but to kill somebody entirely innocent is on a whole other level. Look at all the justification she had to make for herself just to push forward and commit the evil deed.  :thumbdown:

I'm glad she's no longer like that though. I can stand her killing evil criminals, but innocent civilians is a no-no.  :smhid


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The explosion was magnificent, a mini mushroom cloud licking the sky before dissolving into flames, the building practically disintegrating from the force. It was brilliant and fierce and exhilarating and Risa pulled her lover close to her side as the group stood on the rooftop of another building to watch the fireworks. No matter how many times she saw something like this, it always got to her a little.

Great description!  :w00t:
I could really picture this in my head vividly. This is no average romantic gathering to watch celebratory fireworks... this is destruction. Pure, utter destruction. Man, these girls are KICK-ASS:love:


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“Great job, baby.” The gunner whispered into Ai’s hair, feeling an appreciative squeeze on her behind for it.

Quoted for the yum yum TakaGaki moment.
 :mon fyeah:


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He began to laugh, but cut himself off with a gurgling couch

 :rofl:

I actually didn't notice this at first - regular reading has trained our minds to anticipate words and make sense of stuff pretty naturally. You pointing it out like that... LOL.

A gurgling couch... the image rocks  :lol:


As to all of Gaki-san's flashbacks ----

Great job with weaving these into the chapter - they flowed so well, and was really fluently expressed. And of course, as your flashbacks always do, they really add more layers to your characters and I'm continually building my impressions of them. Gaki-san was the prominent one in this fic, and I enjoyed reading about her past. She's been pretty badass for a while now, huh? As expected from someone who's pretty much grown up in such a dark, underworld kind of environment. I can really see where a real chunk of her drive is coming from now too, with her mentor's death. I hope Gaki-san is able to fulfil herself in every respect by the end of the story. I'm sure you will give her that satisfaction!  :heart:

Again, congratulations on the fic birthday, and here's to another year (hopefully?) of Black and Blue. *cheers*

Thank you for the wonderful chapter, and as always, I'll be here cheering you on and waiting patiently for the next one to come out and savour. 
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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #352 on: September 15, 2010, 06:11:34 PM »
Papa Tanaka taking over control? Horrors! :shocked This mean Reina will have to face off her daddy soon :(

Oh I can actually imagine the chapter in the movie scenario as the past flashes in between the present :yep: So stylo lol XD


Ya know, I really hope this story will go on for another year, or better still, it'll never ends cause it'll mean we get to read it forever and ever and ever :D

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #353 on: September 27, 2010, 12:34:31 PM »
I don't have a chapter ready as I'm suffering some serious writer's block right now and everything I write comes out like a mud dragon in the toilet. I just thought I'd give some replies, since I didn't do it last time. Usually I say I will and then stare at the reply box for twenty minutes before giving up. XD Sorry I'm so lazy, guys.





@Kawaiw00 - You know I adores you, my padawan. *patpats*




@HaPo-san - Yeah, a year. I can't believe it either. I just happened to be in the first post, fixing up my index when I noticed the date. I was like, WAO! :O :lol:
I'm trying to make it epic, buts it's not really coming out that way. I asked a friend for some help and everything he said was in contradiction of what I wanted, so now I'm back to square one. The suck square. XD



@KZ - Thanks, your emotes and minimally worded response to quotes is always so charmingly simple and yet so eloquent. A real 'I couldn't have said it better' post.




@SarangAi - Dang, your poor phone. Though I'm glad for the interest! I'm definitely not going to abandon this story, so more will come. Just not sure when... :sweatdrop:



@kano-chan - Uh-huh! That's right! There's nothing these girls can't get past! .....Right..? :O



@B^3 - Thank you. This is the longest running story I've ever done. Usually my brain just fires up for a quick one shot, but I have to say, I'm more impressed with myself for keeping it going rather than the content, which can always be better. :lol:

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Firstly, interesting chapter title   :P
I kind of like to make assumptions as to what the chapter may be about from the title alone, but it sure is difficult sometimes! >.<
Actually, wanna know a secret? The titles are the lyrics from a song I like. I hadn't done titles in the beginning, but I decided to do it for one chapter and I picked a lyric that matched, then the next chapter had the next line that happened to match. Then I had a lightbulb and went back to edit my posts and it all happened to lay out evenly. Ironically, most of the titles match the chapters. Though the next chapter might not.... Or maybe it will. If you can find the song, I'll steal you a dino cookie. XD

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*sadistic/scary Ai-chan comments*
This will play out later. Hopefully I can make it satisfactory.

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Awww, why no details?

You could've spent a few more sentences elaborating that, rndm...
Yes. Yes I could have, but I didn't. :twisted:

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She sounds so sexay...
Can you tell I'm a Risa fan? I've actually thought about this a lot, her character, I mean. All it is, is nature vs. nurture. I truly believe she has the potential to be bad ass, just as Sayu has the potential to be a little psycho and that Ai has the potential to change herself to suit the circumstances, even these. Things just manifest them in different ways due to our life experiences, the things we're taught as children and the things we see others close to us do.

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Does that have anything to do with the title of the story?
I...have no idea what you could mean. :sweatdrop:

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I've been waiting for a while for Ai-chan to put these delicious demolition skills to use!
I've been trying to think of some way to make her pwn, but it's just not coming to me. :nervous Maybe next arc I'll have something better.

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Our poor Gaki-san has been through soooo much. That must have been a real pivotal point in her criminal life - to kill scum is one thing.. but to kill somebody entirely innocent is on a whole other level. Look at all the justification she had to make for herself just to push forward and commit the evil deed.
Risa is regretful for a reason. She was a bad person, she did bad things; she killed two hundred something people and maybe not all of them deserved it. People hire snipers/mercenaries/weapons experts for many reasons, sometimes petty reasons. I imagine that she has a lot of innocent blood on her hands, not because she wanted to be a killer, but because she felt she had no other choice. And even though she's 'free' of Doro-san, she still thinks there's no hope for herself.

I've seen a lot of good kids do bad things because they thought they had only one way to live by and that they couldn't change themselves.


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Gaki-san was the prominent one in this fic, and I enjoyed reading about her past. She's been pretty badass for a while now, huh? As expected from someone who's pretty much grown up in such a dark, underworld kind of environment. I can really see where a real chunk of her drive is coming from now too, with her mentor's death. I hope Gaki-san is able to fulfil herself in every respect by the end of the story. I'm sure you will give her that satisfaction! 
I was trying, at first, to get everyone in equally, but my love isn't exactly equal, so my favorites shine through. :sweatdrop: Gaki and Ai and Takagaki are the ones that I've put the most thought into, so of course they have the most and best, but I'll try better to give everyone a little closure. Or not give them closure. I haven't decided yet. :twisted:

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Again, congratulations on the fic birthday, and here's to another year (hopefully?) of Black and Blue. *cheers*
Gosh, at this rate, I'm sure it'll be another year before I finish this. :lol: And thank you for another long and apparently inspired review. :D




@baddie - Yep, face off. 'Twas inevitable. Ah, I'm glad I got my idea across as smoothly as everyone keeps saying I did. XD This is the story that never ends? It just goes on and on my friends! :lol:

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 23 9/06)
« Reply #354 on: December 13, 2010, 05:06:42 PM »
I'm back biotches!! And with a new chapter, too! I apologize for the crappiness of the first part, but I rewrote it, like, four times before I was at least satisfied with this. I hope the last scene makes up for it.


Chapter 24: The old man...died?



The music was pounding in Reina’s ears as she sat alone at the table, nursing her drink and watching with burning eyes as Sayumi grinded up against a good looking man on the dance floor. She didn’t even notice Risa and Ai close by, practically making love in public, lips sealed together and hands wandering. She probably wouldn’t have noticed if someone came up next to her and blatantly spiked her drink and she jumped when Eri tapped her on the shoulder.

“Where did everyone go?” The turtle asked when she got her attention. The five of them had decided to go out and celebrate together, leaving Saki at the hotel with the children, even though Jun was actually older then them. Tomorrow, they would assault the Tanaka Manor, having received their message loud and clear when one of Gaki’s contacts showed up at their door, half dead and bearing a note, his tongue long cut out.

“Off to dance.” Reina grumbled to her partner, nodding her chin to Sayu. When Eri looked up, her eyes widened and she scanned the rest of the club for their other companions.

“Where are Gaki-san and Ai-ch-”she cut herself off when she spied the lovers with their hands shoved down the front of each other’s pants, completely oblivious to the world around them. “Oh, ahem.” she blushed as the throbbing crowd swallowed their forms, seeming to become more energized by the sexual energy they emitted. “Why aren’t you out there with Sayu?”

“I don’t like to dance.” The cranky cop grumbled. “Ow!” she cried when a hand landed hard against the back of her head, turning around to glare at her partner, “What the hell, Eri!”

“Idiot! Who’s cares if you don’t like to!? Get out there with her before someone steals her away!” The turtle cried, shoving her friend out of her chair and making her stumble, “Now come on!”

“No!” Reina cried in panic, tugging against the grip her partner had on her wrist, “I can’t dance, Eri! I can’t!”

“You can have sex, can’t you?!” The older girl cried out surprisingly, spinning around and eliciting a fierce blush. When Reina tentatively nodded, she continued, “Then you can dance. Now, let’s go!” The turtle’s face turned serious as she went into mission mode.

They took up a spot nearby their targets, Eri grabbing Reina’s sides and pulling her almost uncomfortably close so that they could roll their hips together rhythmically. Neither were looking at each other, though, like good tactical partners, they were focused on their next move, slowly sidling into position. Sayumi was grinning and carrying on a conversation with the man through gentle whispers in each others’ ears. Reina’s temperature skyrocketed in jealously and Eri patted her lower back comfortingly.

“Excuse me! Can we cut in?” Eri shouted over the music, gaining their attention. The handsome man looked delighted at the attention and nodded eagerly, not having a chance to say anything before Eri grabbed his arm and ripped him away from the con, twirling Reina into his place in Sayu’s arms. “Come on, handsome.” Eri giggled, tugging him away, “You’re mine.”

“Hello there.” The con grinned, tightening her grip on the blushing Reina, “Guess you decided to dance, after all.” She slid one leg in between the yankii’s two and pressed close to her, beginning to grind to the beat.

Unexpectedly, Reina placed both hands on Sayu’s round lower cheeks and squeezed, eliciting a surprised squeak. She used her grip to pull the con in and lifted her knee up higher to grind against a sensitive part. “Only with you.” Reina murmured into her ear, nibbling on the lobe.

“Oh, Reina.” Sayumi moaned, falling into the grinding motion happily and trying to return the favor as best she could with her legs quickly turning to jello. Their months of foreplay were taking effect and both girls felt a strong desire building low in their bellies. Sayumi let her hands slowly stroke up and down the cop’s back, scratching through her thin shirt and sending tingles down her spine. Reina responded by dipping her head downward and trailing kisses across her smooth neck.

Throwing her head back, the con brought her hands up to thread fingers in the other girl’s hair, rocking her hips in a sensual mimicry of an ancient act. Reina felt so warm even through so much cloth and she definitely seemed to appreciate the action, if the way her hands massaged Sayu’s ass was any indication. The yankii pulled back to stare into the con’s dark, half lidded eyes, seeming to try to convey a million thoughts to her. Sayumi felt something inside her chest tug almost painfully for a moment, in that way that made her want to run away, but she ignored it; instead, she leaned forward to close the distance between their lips.

Their bodies stopped moving as both girls concentrated on the kiss, Sayu slipping her tongue inside her willing victim’s mouth and energetically beginning a duel. Reina felt a cloud of happy feelings form inside her as her wet muscle slid against the con’s, keeping up with her energy with sheer intensity. There was a cheer and a catcall from beside them and the noise made them break apart, but their eyes never left each other.

“Stay with me in my bed tonight.” Reina offered in a voice that really made it sound like a command and Sayu eagerly nodded. Across the floor, looking over her dance partner’s shoulder, Eri pumped her fist in victory and made a mental note to be far away from the room later.


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“Thanks for letting me stay with you guys tonight.” Saki said gratefully, bowing to Aika and Jun and causing them to scramble to return the courtesy.

“No, no, really, it’s a pleasure to have you here, Shimizu-san.” Aika said politely as Jun finally turned to flop on her bed. “We don’t mind sleeping together and you can take my bed, though I’m quite surprised that Kamei-san asked to stay in Lin Lin’s room.”

“I’m not, would you want to be in the room when Tanaka-san and Michishige-san get it on?” The hitter giggled, rolling onto her back. She turned to Saki, “And if you don’t want to sleep by yourself, Shimi-chan, you can bunk with me instead.” she winked at the suddenly blushing girl, “I’m sure Aika wouldn’t mind, right?” Jun grinned at her young companion and received a pillow to the face in return.

“Quit it, you.” Aika grumbled to her muffled laughter. As if to spite her teasing, Saki hopped onto the bed next to the hitter and laid her head on her shoulder, “Oh, don’t encourage her.” The thief sighed as they batted their eyelashes at each other playfully.

They fell quiet for a moment and began to notice a few sounds coming in from the room next door. When they realized what they were hearing, they scrambled for the television remote to drown out the noise.


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After a night of much needed levity, the gang found themselves approaching the manor in their most comfortable and movable outfits while clutching their weapons warily close. Risa could see, as they entered the wide opened gate, many eyes watching their trek from the windows as Reina led the way. The cop marched up to the door and prepared to kick it in, but it opened suddenly before she could, nearly causing her to stumble.

“Welcome home, Ojou-chan.” an older man said pleasantly, “Your father and brothers await you in the dining hall.” Reina glared while, behind her, the others traded uneasy glances. Of course they had known they were expected, but this wasn’t the reception they’d thought they would get. The yankii led the way down the hallway and to their destination. The large double doors swung open easily to admit them.

“Welcome.” Reiki boomed out as they entered the giant room, “We’ve been waiting for you.”

The dining hall was huge and round, the floors and walls were marble and the ceiling a thick crystal with lights behind it to always give the illusion of daylight shining in. The massive table that took up most of the room could have easily sat everyone there and still left space between them. The walls were covered in an eclectic, but extensive collection of art, everything from paintings of Greek Gods and European Kings to abstract shapes and landscapes. There were usually pedestals that seated statuettes, but they had been removed in preparation of the coming battle.

At the far end of the room, spread out near the entrance to the hall that was used by the manor’s residents, were the Tanaka higher ups. On the far left was Maimi, holding Saki’s gaze as unwaveringly as she could manage. On her left was Etsuo, then Chion, both looking quite bored. In the middle was the towering Reiki, hardened eyes on his daughter from across the long table in between them. Further down the line was Baku, Erino and Daisuke, each grim faced.

Lined up across from them were the girls, standing in front of the guest’s entrance and gripping their various assault weapons firmly. Next to Saki was Ai, sizing up Etsuo and Risa was watching Chion. Reina, of course, only saw her father, but she acutely felt Sayu’s encouraging warmth as she and Eri stood across from Baku. Aika, Lin and Jun seemed unconcerned with their opponents and their noncommittal attitudes seemed to irk Erino and Daisuke.

For a long moment, the two gangs just stared each other down and with the forever noon time lighting and the stiff atmosphere, Eri felt a sense of déjà vu. She was certain she’d seen a movie like this, once, but she wasn’t sure she had liked the ending. She remembered the most of the heroes being decimated in the fight.

“You are on my turf now, Princess, we fight my way.” Reiki snapped his fingers and a handful of servants came into the room, all holding swords, “We will do battle the way you were trained, the way I was trained and my father and his father. We will fight like warriors.” Reiki commanded, his booming voice leaving no room for arguments, even from his opponents. His lieutenants already carried their favored weapons on their belts, but the girls had to trade in their firearms. Risa was especially reluctant, but in the end, each girl took a single, finely crafted long sword.

“You kept these?” Reina asked breathily as she was handed two customized blades, one long and one not that much shorter, in dark blue sheaths. This was her specialty, two swords, and the only person who had ever bested her when she had these particular blades was her father. He didn’t answer, only giving them a moment to secure their sheaths to their sides before pulling his massive broadsword from his back.

Taking their cues, the others in the room also readied their weapons and took up their stances. Tension rose thickly into the air. Suddenly, Reina gave a cry and ran forward, hopping up onto the long table to sprint down the length towards her father. This was all that was needed for chaos to break out in the hall. Reiki swung his broadsword as Reina came within reach, missing as she jumped over it and tried to bury her long blade in his head.

He may have been big, but Reiki was unbelievably quick, leaning back out of the way of the surely fatal blow with a swiftness that he shouldn’t have been able to pull off. He twirled his body and extended his sword in the same motion, forcing Reina to fall backwards into a practiced tumble, but he kept his momentum going and twirled again, his sword aiming for her waist as she righted herself.

The little yankii knew there was no way in hell she could block a brute force like that, the only way to keep herself from being chopped in half would be to use her blades to deflect his energy in another direction. She crossed her swords in an X and thrust them out to the side, slipping them underneath his broadsword. Then she jerked her arms upward and his blade scraped off her own, flying harmlessly upward and pulling his body closer to her where she gave his meaty middle a swift kick.

Reiki laughed, “Well now Princess, I’m glad to see you’ve been keeping up with it while you’ve been away.” He brought his sword back to his original offensive position, held out in front of him and she readied her own crouching stance, her long sword held horizontally above her head and her short sword parallel to it at her waist. She waited for him to make the next move.

Taking Reina’s cue, Saki began her own charge towards her estranged lover, katana held up straight, parallel to her body, elbows bent and held out evenly. Maimi, grim faced, met her rush with much the same stance. Even before their blades clashed, Saki knew it was a hopeless battle. They had trained together, so they knew every move the other would make. There would be no victor in this battle, so the little captain could only hope to talk her girl back to her senses.

“Maimi.” she grunted, pushing back an overhead blow, “Please, we don’t have to fight!”

“What do you want me to do?” The taller girl asked with a quick slash, “Give up? Surrender?” She jabbed, but was easily deflected, “You know I can’t do that,” she blocked a swing at her head, staring down into Saki’s face as they pushed against each other, “Not anymore than you can.”

Ai held her sword awkwardly, repeating in her head the brief lecture she’d had from Reina in defense. She understood the concepts, but had serious doubts about her own abilities to survive. Etsuo ran at her with his naginata lowered, apparently confident in his ability to break her guard. Good thing she had no intention of letting their blades connect if she could help it.

The demo expert had already decided that the less time their weapons locked, the less chance there was of this obviously much stronger and more experienced man overpowering her. Ai had been a dancer for a long time, she bent her waist around his first thrust, those reflexes didn’t just go away. Letting instinct take over, Ai swayed to the music of battle.

At the same time the monkey was avoiding her opponent’s weapon, Risa was having a much harder time of it. Sure, melee weapons weren’t her forte, but the gunner was no stranger to an old fashioned sword fight, she could hold her own. Unfortunately, this was no sword fight; she swore when a sharp tip poked a hole into her baggy cargo pants, narrowly avoiding impaling her knee.

Chion jabbed at her with wild eyes in much the same style as his brother beside him, but his piercingly sharp trident offered thrice as many things to look out for. She’d never encountered such a style or weapon before, so Risa really had no idea how to defend against such speed and maneuverability; in the face of her panic, her lessons fled her mind. A stiletto tip just grazed her side as she jumped away, arms flying up in time to miss becoming skewered.

Letting go of her sword with one hand, Risa grabbed a chair and flung it at the scarily grinning Chion, hoping to catch him off guard enough to press her own attack. With one swipe of his trident, the chair continued flying, landing somewhere behind Ai as he continued his relentless assault. She knew he was just playing with her; she was the mouse and he the hungry cat, sharp claws at the ready.

Baku stumbled backward under the dual pressure on his sword from Eri and Sayu, who had wasted no time in getting the upper hand in their battle. The older man found himself more than a little terrified and distracted by Sayu’s maniacal grin; she was obviously enjoying the struggle, while Eri was more concentrated on defeating him. The bunny pushed on frantically, keeping his attention on her while Eri came in to strike while he defended.

Using much the same tactic, Aika and Jun engaged Erino and Daisuke while Lin dealt out the real damage to them. They wanted to make this a short fight, but the swordsmen were skilled enough to deflect any killing blows and whatever did hit them, they ignored. Jun dealt an overhead chop that was easily blocked and Erino directed her sword down to clang against Lin’s thrust. At the same time, Daisuke pressed towards Aika, who stumbled a little under his strength.

In a slight pause in the battle, Aika and Jun looked at each other and gave a nod, deciding to switch partners. The youngest rolled under a slash and darted to the side, coming up underneath Erino’s guard and kneeing her in the stomach. Lin followed with a quick slash across the woman’s back which elicited a cry, and the thief used her distraction to get in a jab of her own. Erino quickly recovered, blood dripping from a cut on her face, which darkened into a heavy frown.

Daisuke grunted when Jun’s sword clashed hard against his own, sending a shockwave down his wrist. She was obviously much stronger than he was, which was not good. He wasn’t nearly as refined as his brothers, relying on brute force in his style, rather than grace and skill, and Jun found this out rather quickly. They were evenly matched, she realized with a grin, but she never played fair, she played to win.

He tried to keep up the attack, but she easily blocked every clumsy move he made. She allowed him to wear himself out for a while, before outright sidestepping a particularly violent, overhead slash, causing him to go stumbling forward right into a well placed knee. The air left him in a huff and Jun slammed the hilt of her sword down hard onto the back of his neck, sending him to the floor. When she went to cut off his head though, he rolled out of the way.

“I’m not going to that easily.” he growled, getting to his feet. Before he could properly ready himself, though, Jun was charging, sword held high. Daisuke jerked his arm up and moved into a more defensive stance, expecting her blade to come arching at him from above, but she surprised him by kicking him hard just underneath his right knee.

With a sickening crack, his leg bent backwards and his upper body fell forward as the broken leg collapsed under his weight. Jun turned and swung with all her might and Daisuke’s head rolled to a stop against the wall. The hitter turned away with a satisfied smirk as the rest of him hit the ground, blood spurting out as his heart continued to beat for a moment.

Out of the corner of her eye, Erino noticed her comrade’s demise, noticed Jun stalking closer. She dodged a swipe from Aika, blocked a jab from Lin and then backed away, hands shooting into the air when the hitter began to lift her sword, “I give!” her blade clanked as it hit the ground, “Three on one? No way. This isn’t worth dying over.”

The three girls exchanged a glance, lowering their own weapons, “Alright.” Jun agreed, “I won’t kill you, turn around.” Reluctantly, the female lieutenant did so and the hitter grabbed her in a choke hold, squeezing her neck until her struggling ceased and she fell limp in her arms. “Don’t worry.” Jun hurried to ease the horrified looks she got from her companions, “She’s just knocked out.”

Ai gasped as a sharp blade ran against her side, barely slicing into her sweater. That was too close, she gave a half hearted swipe back in return. Her plan had been successful so far, she’d sustained no injuries at all, but then she realized that she really had no means of dispatching him. He was more skilled than she was, stronger too, and she was beginning to feel dizzy from the constant twirling she was doing.

The only thing was that he was becoming quite frustrated by her uncanny ability to dodge his pole arm’s attacks. Ai could only hope that he made a mistake soon and she would be fast enough to exploit it. Suddenly, he gave a loud growl of anger and pressed forward furiously, jabbing with seemingly lightening speed. Ai shrieked and scrambled backwards, knowing there was no way she would be fast enough to dodge everything.

She jumped, throwing her weight hard behind her as a swipe came for her head, just missing her nose, unfortunately, Ai didn’t see the chair that was toppled over behind her. With another short scream, she fell on her ass, feet scrabbling for purchase on the wood underneath her, but finding none. Instead, her movements sent the chair flying forward and colliding hard with Etsuo’s shins, knocking his feet out from under him.

As he flew forward, Ai gasped and instinctively threw her sword out at him. The tip slammed into his chest, dove between two ribs and protruded from his back in a split second, Etsuo was dead before he even realized what had happened. Ai stared up at him in amazement, his naginata clattering to the ground beside her head, what luck! She almost couldn’t believe she had so easily pierced his heart like that.

Her arms began to shake from holding his full weight and Ai struggled to direct the body to fall to her side, planting her feet on his torso to pull her blade from him. It wouldn’t budge, no matter how hard she tugged; her eyes fell on his pole arm. Well, it was pretty cool, she supposed she could take it and use it. With a shrug, she grabbed the naginata and stood, where was Risa?

The gunner hissed in pain as three points speared her right bicep; it actually hadn’t hurt when the needle like tips entered her flesh, but damn had she felt them ripping out. She held her sword awkwardly in her left hand, her right hanging uselessly by her side. Slowly she began to back up, still feeling like a hunted animal and even more so when her heel hit the wall behind her.

“No where to go~!” Chion sing songed to her cheerfully. Risa glowered at him, trying not to give him the satisfaction of looking as terrified as she felt. “I’m going to enjoy this, let’s see how long I can drag it out.”

With a cry, the gunner swung at him wildly, clenching her jaw when he easily knocked her blade aside. His face suddenly went angry and he jabbed forward hard, thrusting his weapon into Risa’s forearm. She gave a silent cry of pain as the tips were forcefully ripped out of her skin, her blood splattering across the floor as he jerked his trident to the side. Her numb fingers fell away from the hilt of her sword, the weapon clattering to the floor.

“Aw, perk up!” Chion chuckled harshly, his face back to it’s psychotically cheerful visage. In a way, he really reminded her of Sayu when she fought. The thought kind of made her laugh, so she did, not really seeing why she couldn’t do whatever she wanted if she was about to die, “What’s so funny?”

“I can’t believe someone as pathetic as you is about to end my life.” She couldn’t help letting loose on him, seeing his face darken.

Face going angry again, Chion jammed the trident through Risa’s shoulder, “Bitch!” It was excruciating, but she kept laughing anyway, knowing that it infuriated him, “Shut up!” The three points kept her pinned to the wall, so that when he kicked the side of her knee, even though her leg buckled, she didn’t fall.

He buried his fist into her abdomen again and again, but Risa was beyond caring, eyes rolling around to find the rest of her crew. She noticed that most of them were cleaning up, she saw Sayu hacking away at what must have at one point been her and Eri’s opponent, while Eri just looked a little green. Reina was still trading blows with her father, neither really getting the upper hand.

Ai, where was Ai? Worried for her lover, Risa turned her head to her left trying to find the older girl. Chion gave a stunned cry when Risa grabbed his hand with her seemingly useless right arm, holding his limb outstretched with a smirk. Before he could even begin to struggle, a naginata blade slashed down swiftly and chopped the appendage off below the elbow.

Ai was glaring at him with all the strength of her anger, twisting the pole arm and bringing it up on the backswing, the blade embedding itself in his throat. He gave a gurgle of surprise, backing away quickly and causing the sharp edge to remove itself with a sucking sound. Blood spurted from his severed artery and his head lolled as his muscles and tendons were no longer attached enough to control the movement. The gaping wound only bled more and within few seconds, he collapsed backwards, dead.

Wasting no time, Ai didn’t even pause to watch her handiwork, more concerned with her pinned lover, “Risa!” she cried, dropping her weapon in favor of gripping the trident, but the gunner’s cry of pain when she so much as twitched it caused her pause, unsure.

“It’s going to be hard to get it out.” The bean warned, “I’ll probably scream, but it has to be done, I can’t stay up here all day.”

About this time, Jun materialized at her side, “Gaki-san!” The two youngest weren’t far behind while Eri was busy trying to pull Sayumi off the bloody pulp she was basically playing in.

“Good, alright, Jun! Put both hands on my shoulders, don’t worry about hurting me, I guarantee you will.” Hesitantly, the hitter did as she was told, “Aika, get some cloth strips ready, Lin, you help her. Ai, you have to pull this out.”

Saki held her sword up, panting in exertion; as she had guessed, neither girl was gaining the upper hand. She had to do something or this battle would go on indefinitely and she didn’t want to hurt Maimi any more than she had already. Seeing blood dripping from various shallow slices along the taller girl’s body was already so painfully to see.

The both ran towards each other again, Saki’s sword raised high and Maimi’s held at her mid section. The captain knew that her girl would go for a thrust, just as Maimi knew that she knew and would be able to easily block. This time, though, Saki had a plan; she knew what would end this once and for all.

As Maimi neared, Saki readied herself for the blow to come, locking eyes with her opponent. At the last second, instead of swinging her arms downward to block, Saki simply dropped her weapon, letting it hit the floor. Maimi’s eyes widened and she started to put on the brakes, but it was too late, with a meaty thud, the two girls collided, the sword protruding from Saki’s back shining red with her blood.

“Saki!” Maimi’s cry was nearly drowned out by Risa’s scream of pain across the room, but the captain still heard the concern in her girl’s voice. Tenderly, Saki embraced the Tanaka captain, feeling the action returned as she slumped into Maimi’s arms, “Why did you-?” the taller girl trailed of with a tearful choke.

“I didn’t want to fight you.” Saki replied weakly, looking into her girl’s eyes with a loving smile, “Don’t cry, I know you didn’t have a choice. If we had lost, they would have hurt you for not fighting properly.” Her eyes closed suddenly as she grimaced and Maimi shook her once.

“Saki, don’t-!” She breathed a sigh of relief when the older girl just opened her eyes and smiled again.

“You didn’t want to hurt me either, did you? This wound isn’t even fatal.” It was true, though painful, Maimi hadn’t been aiming for anything serious and the sword just jabbed into her side, missing her vital organs.

“Stupid.” Maimi sobbed, “You’re so stupid!” She was happy to feel familiar lips press against her own and kissed back hard.

Reina panted harshly as she dove over a wild swing, apparently, she wasn’t the only one getting tired; the sword pulled up a little slower than normal and she easily ducked the backswing. She darted forward and poked her short blade at Reiki’s arm, but he just swatted at her as though unconcerned. She knew he was feeling at the wounds she had given him, though, as he was positively soaked in blood and sweat. He had to be woozy at least!

Rolling out of the way of another swipe meant to decapitate her, Reina again tried to reassess her strategy. If little slashes wouldn’t do then she would have to try big ones, but he was so thick that all she was likely to hit wouldn’t kill him. The only place he was really unprotected was his neck, but she couldn’t get passed the stupid broadsword.

The thing was so huge, it looked like a diving board to her, she probably couldn’t even lift the thing. It was sharp, though, and he swung it like a pro. Like a light bulb going on, an idea suddenly came to her and she paused. As she expected, he tried to take advantage of her apparent lack of attention and swung at her extra hard, but Reina was ready.

She crossed her swords and locked them together on his blade, using his own momentum to send the sword over her head and slamming into the floor with a dull thud. As Reina pressed her attack, Reiki tried to raise the weapon, but it was stuck. His eyes widened as he realized too late that she had used the broad sword’s size and his own strength against him.

He tried to let go and raise his hands in defense, but Reina had already run along the length of the blade up to his face. Jamming both swords into the top of his shoulders, Reina jumped over his finally defensive hands and, using her weapons for leverage, swung both feet into his face. Reiki tumbled over backwards and landed hard against the floor.

The cop tore her swords from their fleshy sheaths and crossed them like scissors against her father’s neck. “Well?” Reiki asked when she didn’t move, “Aren’t you going to kill me?” To his surprise, she dropped her weapons and started to cry.

“My brothers are dead. Fuji’s probably going away for a while, but I can at least visit him. I don’t want to kill you, papa. I don’t want you to die.” She sobbed, falling to her knees and throwing her arms around him, ignoring the blood that seeped from his wounds.

Reiki hugged her back, petting her hair gently, the way he used to when she was a child. She only cried when her brothers picked on her, he remembered fondly. “Alright, you win. The gang is yours, princess. I’m too old for this shit anyway, but I’m not going back to jail.”

Slowly, he began to sit up, watching as the others gathered around. Before anyone could so much as take a breath, though, the door burst open and paramedics rushed inside, immediately beginning to tend to the wounded. A tall, slim teenager followed behind them, clapping her hands enthusiastically, “My that was an impressive show of your skills!”

Most of the girls reached for their weapons, but Risa didn’t bother. No one tries to patch up their opponents, “Who are you?” she asked as Ai pushed her behind her defensively.

“Me? Oh, I’m Kusumi Koharu!” she gave a peace sign and grinned cutely, “And I have a proposition for you.”

“And what might that be?” The gunner inquired with a tilt to her head, Ai finally letting the EMT’s close enough to begin examining her.

“I want your help to kill my father.” Koharu said, her smile never faltering.

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END OF SECOND ARC
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Oh and a side note, the song lyrics I used were to Pink Floyd's Us and Them. In case anyone was interested (I know your not, but that's just my narcissism kicking in). XD

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 24 12/13)
« Reply #355 on: December 13, 2010, 08:49:50 PM »
Hey, you remember when I used to lurk? i carried this story in my phone and ipod (saved on my opera browser). I didn't realize it was you, or rather, i probably knew but didn't connect the dots because I am so far behind my reading list. I swear, its still in my phone which I will take out to read from time to time when I'm idle.

I love this story. I love the premise of the story. My preference in TV shows, movies and books revolve around this theme.

So. You cannot imagine how ecstatic i am that you've updated.

Thanks, Rndy. Fantastic update.

Looking forward to Arc the Third.

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 24 12/13)
« Reply #356 on: December 14, 2010, 01:10:07 AM »
I love how your story is so descriptive! It makes the story seem more real and believable! I really enjoyed reading this chapter!

Oh dang... All the action, with Ai-chan dancing around, Eri/Sayu, Jun/Aika/Lin teaming up and Gaki just being a little too awkward with the sword.  XD

Aww...Saki let Maimi stab her.. :O

haha! And Koharu just jumped in, telling them to help kill her own father! :lol: Why do I find this funny? :roll:

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 24 12/13)
« Reply #357 on: December 14, 2010, 03:09:25 AM »
Oh sweet lord, that was GREAT!!!  :thumbsup :cow:

The beginning was just... jw;oiekjfmoa.lksfmsSEKUSHII :drool:

And you wrote everything with such detail, i loved it! :inlove:

And at the end, you threw in Koharu, and now you've got me wondering what will happen in the THIRD arc! :bleed eyes:

Can't wait for more, rndy, you have failed... in losing your readers.   :lol:
KEep it up! :twothumbs

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 24 12/13)
« Reply #358 on: December 14, 2010, 12:45:23 PM »
Randmnweird, you brought black and blue back!  :twothumbs

and you brought it back with a bang! These were denfinatly some of the best action secene I've read in a while, It makes me wanna wirte a action fic myself!

and to finish it off with Koharu, wanting the gang to kil her dad?!?  :shocked, I'm wondering where the third arc wil take us.....

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Re: Black and Blue (Ch 24 12/13)
« Reply #359 on: December 14, 2010, 04:17:29 PM »
olbbgwy d by4wfvuhnnue FINALY~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ yay~~~~ and omg poor everyone!!!!!!!!!! :cry: poor saki and maimi >.< and i wait for the day risa actually passes out from all of the beatings she gets XD fight scene was epic and ai-chan fighting always makes me laugh for some reason^^;

cant wait for moar~~~~*huggles*

and LOL for koharu-like entrance XDD
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