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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 18 - (6/29)]
« Reply #100 on: June 30, 2010, 07:54:24 AM »
wow ...this is amazing  :w00t:, the song, the feeling of the girls ...i can't wait more!!! , continue please  :twothumbs


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 18 - (6/29)]
« Reply #101 on: June 30, 2010, 08:57:34 AM »
That live performance is one of my faves yet  :cry: Aichan's high notes were pure heaven  :wub:
Great chapter  :oops:
So Reina was up to serious business, not in the mood for her usual naughty stuff  :twisted: Is it just me reading too much into the text, or Eri seemed a bit disappointed?  :D lmao xD
The AiGaki was sweet, D: but. Why wouldn't Aichan kiss Gaki again?  :( Oh ok I get it  :grin: It will be the other way around  :w00t:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 18 - (6/29)]
« Reply #102 on: June 30, 2010, 01:05:41 PM »
Hmm so Reina didn't molest Eri, is she falling for Eri?

the song/Eri's/Risa's thoughts part was clever, I think it worked really well!

at the end of this chapter you seem to be hinting that Ai has lost someone she loved in her past, does Gaki resemble her? was that why she suddely just kissed her?

another great chapter!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 18 - (6/29)]
« Reply #103 on: June 30, 2010, 04:34:58 PM »
shorter chapters and slowing down on updating?! Noo don't! :D :P

Wahh Ai-chan kissing Risa :wub:
Reina & Mittsi.. Tanakame ftw mwahaha! :D

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 18 - (6/29)]
« Reply #104 on: June 30, 2010, 11:15:14 PM »
@kurosawa87: thanx! it was a pretty important chapter  :D

@rndmnwierd: yup.  The answers are definitely coming.  it should get clearer soon  XD

@gab98: don't worry, I'm continuing~  :lol:

@Ada: I know~ I love that live too :wub: I don't think Eri's TOO disappointed, just confused  :nervous

@oddball: I'm glad you liked the song/thoughts part, I worked hard on it  :)  Can't answer questions~ see for yourself  :twisted:

@Fushigidane: yay! a new commenter! :cow: TanaKame DOES ftw  XD


once again, thank you for all the comments!!!!!  :wub: :wub: :inlove:

Here's another chapter for you to think about....  :D
About the updating, I will guarantee you guys AT LEAST a chapter per day  :yep: (or two).
I'll try not to go crazy with the updates though~ just trying to keep you guys tortured with questions  :twisted:

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Chapter 19

   “Senpai, the syrup is dripping out.”

   “Huh?  What— Woah!”

   Eri held the crepe away from herself just in time to avoid the big drop of chocolate syrup from landing on her shirt.  Linlin giggled beside her.

   “Senpai, you were spacing out,” she said.  “What were you thinking about?”

   “Just… nothing,” Eri said, smiling at the younger girl. 

   But that was a lie.  She was thinking about something… someone.  About that person’s actions, that person’s umbrella, that person’s tears, that person’s warm hand patting her head… Everything was jumbled up together like puzzle pieces that would never fit. 

   “I’m sorry I didn’t have time to make the crepes today,” Linlin said, interrupting her thoughts.  “But I really like the crepes they make at this stand too.”

   “Yeah, it’s delicious,” Eri answered, half-heartedly. 

   Linlin had stopped her at a crepe stand in the middle of the street to eat her favorite sweet.  The couple was now walking towards the park with the crepes in their hands.  The park was where they would have to go opposite ways: Eri to her home and Linlin back to her dorms.

   “Eri, get a hold of yourself!” the turtle thought.  “Your girlfriend is right next to you and you’re on a date with her.  Now is not the time to be thinking about other things.  It’s not fair to Linlin.

   As the two girls turned the corner, with the entrance of the park right across the street, they saw a short girl with sunglasses on, walking towards them.

   “Oh great,” Eri thought, “now I’m even hallucinating.  Eri, you’re thinking too much.

   “Tanaka Reina of High-Queen?” Linlin exclaimed with a big smile.

   Eri blinked, rubbed her eyes, and blinked again.  The singer was there, right in front of her!  She took off her sunglasses.  Her face revealed no emotion.

   “Wow, to be able to meet you like this!” Linlin babbled excitedly.  “Senpai, aren’t you her fashion coordinator?”

   “Um… yeah…” Eri answered.  “Oh my gosh, I really didn’t want Lin-chan to meet Tanaka-san… what do I do? If Tanaka-san is cruel enough to tell Linlin what goes on between us…

   Suddenly, Reina slightly tilted her head to the side and smiled, looking cute.  She actually smiled.

   “Oh my goodness, Kamei-san!” she giggled.  “To be able to meet you again like this… we do run into each other often, don’t we?”

   Eri’s eyes almost popped out of her sockets.  What was with her?  Why was she smiling like that? 

   Reina’s eyes flickered over to Eri’s hand, holding on to the hand of the jumpy girl next to her.  The singer’s eyes widened along with her smile.

   “Are you Kamei-san’s girlfriend?”

   “Huh?  Oh, um…” Linlin blushed.

   “Oh, don’t worry.  I don’t judge people like that,” Reina laughed.  “But I didn’t know Kamei-san had such a cute girlfriend.  Kamei-san, why didn’t you tell me?”

   Eri blinked furiously.  “Who is she and what happened to Tanaka Reina?” she thought.

   “My name is Linlin,” the Chinese girl started, “I’m really a huge fan of yours.  It’s an honor to meet you like this.”

   “Oh, the pleasure is all mine, Linlin-san” the idol replied, still smiling.  “It’s always nice to meet a fan.”  She shot a friendly look to Eri.  “Your girlfriend is very kind.  Nice catch, Kamei-san!”  Linlin blushed while Eri narrowed her eyes.

   “Well, I really must get going,” Reina said.  “It was nice meeting you, Linlin-san.  I’ll see you around, Kamei-san.”  She waved and smiled at the both of them, and walked past.

   “Wow…” Linlin breathed.  “She really is amazing.  She has that idol charisma, you know?  …Senpai?  Are you listening?”

   “Is that her fake image she uses in public?” Eri thought.  “She acted the way she does on TV; all happy and energetic… It’s probably because Linlin was here.  She said she was a fan…

   “Senpai…?  Hello…?”

   “Huh?”  Eri snapped out of her thoughts.

   “Senpai, are you okay?” Linlin asked, concerned.  “You should go home and rest.  I think you’re too tired.”

   “Yeah… maybe I should take a nap or something.”

   “Well, I’ll see you next time, then.”

   “Okay.  Bye.”

   With that, Eri walked ahead while Linlin turned towards the opposite side.  After a couple steps, the younger girl stopped and ran back towards the turtle.

   “Senpai!”

   As soon as Eri turned around, her lips met with her girlfriend’s.  Linlin reached up and put her arms around Eri’s neck.  The older girl’s eyes opened in shock, but they soon closed as she put her own arms around the sweet girl kissing her. 

   So many different thoughts ran through Eri’s mind.  From the first meeting, to the texting, to the proposing, to the dates… Then a different face appeared again.  Her cries, her tears, her warm hands…

   “No!” Eri thought.  “What are you thinking?  Linlin is the one you’re kissing; you’re being cruel to her!  Don’t think about anything else; think about the girl in front of you!

   Soon, the arms around Eri’s neck weakened as the younger girl pulled away.  She smiled.

   “Was… that okay?” she asked, unsure.

   “More than okay,” Eri smiled, trying to hide the doubt in her voice.

   Eri, hold on to yourself.  If you don’t, the girl in front of you will end up getting hurt…

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Just more of Eri's thoughts...  :thumbsup
THe next chapter is a bit more important.  I'll update again soon~  :byebye:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 19 - (6/30)]
« Reply #105 on: June 30, 2010, 11:49:20 PM »
this is going to be interesting, Eri seems to be stuck in a pickle and thnx to Reina she can't talk stink about her to Lin XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 19 - (6/30)]
« Reply #106 on: July 01, 2010, 12:19:22 AM »
This is my first post for JPH!P, obviously  :D, and yay ... I am new Reader   :cow: of your fic
Dude .... you are so awesome  :bow:
I have been reading your fic for quite awhile, without registering to the Fourm  :roll: , but now .. I feel like I wanna make a comment for your awesome writing  :twothumbs
Oh .. by the way ... pls pls don't slow down your update  :(
man .. I am really addicted to your fic now ..  :banghead:
are you gonna update Chp. 20 today?  :huhuh
Coz .. I wanna read it before I off to school  :D
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« Reply #107 on: July 01, 2010, 01:17:43 AM »
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 19 - (6/30)]
« Reply #108 on: July 01, 2010, 05:12:14 AM »
@kurosawa87: yeah, Eri is in some major confusion  XD

@Thor87: YAY YAY YAY! Another commenter! :w00t:  you don't know what this means to me  :inlove:  thank you so much~ i'll definitely keep the updates going~   :onioncheer:


Thanks for the comments! I love how I'm just pulling lurkers out of thier hole  :lol: :cow:

this next chapter isn't worded nicely as the other chapters... I literally just hit a wall, sorry  :banghead: :bleed eyes:

But it's chapter 20 already! Time goes fast, huh?  :D

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Chapter 20

   “Five minutes left!  Get High-Queen on the set, quickly!”

   The producer for the TV program Song Fighter was yelling, running around all over the hallway.  Although the dressing room door was shut tight, Eri could still hear the panic in the man’s voice.

   Today was the first scheduling for promoting “Everyday Everywhere”.  High-Queen was to go on Song Fighter, talk, then perform.  Since it was a live recording, they had to be careful of every word and action, for there were no redoes.

   “Okay, you’re all done, Takahashi-san,” the fashion coordinator said, giving the High-Queen leader a pat on the back.  “Tanaka-san, are you finished in there?”

   Eri had just tied a fluffy yellow belt, the last accessory on High-Queen’s costume, on to Ai’s waist.  Reina walked out from the curtains of the dressing stall.  She held up a black choker.

   “I can’t hook it,” she said.

   “Risa-chan, help her please?” Eri pleaded to her friend, sitting on the couch.  She then grabbed a pair of pink boots by the door and set it in front of Ai.  “Takahashi-san, put these on.”

   “Three minutes!” the panicked voice echoed.  “Where are the girls? Get them out!”

   “Okay, you’re both ready,” Eri said.  Both singers were now dressed in pink.  Reina had glitter on her bangs— her usual trademark— and Ai had a headband.  “No wait, something’s off here—”

   “Kameha!” Risa interrupted.  “They look fine, let them go!”  Ai laughed at Eri’s flustered expression.  Reina didn’t even seem to notice the conversation going on in front of her.

   “Okay, okay,” Eri said, calming herself down.  “Let’s go.”

   All four girls ran out of the room and down the hallway.  When they reached the studio, the two singers started to bow over and over again to the staff members they passed by, saying “Yoroshiku onegaishimasu”.  The audience on the bleacher-like seats cheered when they spotted their idols, so Ai and Reina waved a little to them too.

   The producer quickly motioned the duo to the set, where a white round table was in the middle.  The three MCs were already seated, leaving two empty seats in the middle for the girls.  Risa and Eri sat themselves in the two reserved seats in the front of the audience.

   “Okay,” the producer started.  “We’re live in five… four… three…”  He mouthed the next two numbers.

   “So let’s welcome today’s guest,” the MC started.  “High-Queen!”

   “High-Queen desu!” the two girls said in unison.

   A loud cheer burst from the audience.  Risa and Eri—who was still red from all the adrenaline rush—clapped along.  Risa patted her friend on the back.

   “Relax, now,” she whispered.  “You did great.  They look awesome.”

   “Thanks,” Eri whispered back.

   Throughout the entire talking segment, the ratings slowly rose higher and higher.  Ai spoke fluently as usual while Reina never lost the smile she plastered on to her face.

   “So tell us a little bit about your new single,” one MC said.

   “Well,” Ai started.  “I think compared to our last single, ‘Subete wa Ai no Chikara’, we show off a more mature and mellow sound in ‘Everyday Everywhere’.  We were able to put a lot more effort into recording this too, since the song means something to the both of us.”

   “The song is about a farewell, isn’t it?  So does that mean you both experienced a farewell, just like in the song?”

   “That,” Reina said, holding up a finger to her lips, “is a secret.”  She winked.  Risa and Eri could’ve sworn they heard someone faint in the back of blood loss.

   The talk continued to go smoothly.  Before they knew it, the MCs were already making their closing while High-Queen and their two staff girls rushed to the studio next door for their performance.  Since it was a live recording, they had to start singing as soon as they were on set so there would be no blank segment in between the talk and the performance.

   The instrumental started to flow out of the speakers.  Both singers’ faces turned serious as they concentrated on the rhythm of the song.  Risa and Eri stood near the back wall, watching.  As always, a live performance was no problem for the two girls.  The ratings continued to rise. 

   “I wonder if she’s thinking of her…” Eri thought.  “I wonder if she’s hurting…

   The song came around to the first chorus.  But while Ai sang her lines, Reina suddenly looked down, putting her hands to her eyes.  Confusion swept through the studio.  When Reina’s lines came, she missed the first couple words as she covered her face.  She sang her second line while looking down.  Her voice cracked.

   “What’s going on?” Risa whispered, panicked.  “Is she… Is she crying?”

   “She’s thinking of her,” Eri thought.  “She’s thinking of Mitsui Aika right now!

   The bridge followed right after the chorus along with Ai’s vocalization.  The two singers crossed each other.  But now, Ai was also facing down.  But trying to be as professional as possible, she lifted her head to sing out more.  In the process, she revealed two trails of tears, trickling down her cheeks.  Her voice was still smooth but her expression was not.

   “Ai-san…?” Risa whispered.  “What’s wrong with her?  Why is she crying?  I don’t want to see her cry like that!

   Reina now had her back turned to the camera.  She held the mic away from herself while she tried to wipe away her tears as best as she could without ruining her makeup.  By the time her part came, she turned to face the camera again, and sang with her all.  Even though she had just gotten rid of them, fresh new tears flowed from her eyes.

   The song finally came to an end with Ai’s vocalization.  As soon as the producer’s “Cut!” ran through the studio, the entire staff went rampant with confusion.  Why did they cry?  Don’t they know this is a live recording?  What happened?

   The two singers stepped off the set, wiping away what tears were left.  Ai forced a weak smile.

   “Otsukaresama deshita!” Ai yelled.

   “Otsukareina…” Reina mumbled, keeping her head down.

   Before they idols could be questioned more, Risa and Eri dashed forward and rushed them out of the studio, down the hall, and into the dressing room.

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   The crowd of people gathered in Tokyo went wild.  Everybody had witnessed the tears on High-Queen’s faces through the big screen TV in the middle of the square.  They were all full of questions with no answers.

   One girl wearing a school uniform just kept on staring at the screen that was now black.  She had short black hair and was carrying a backpack.  The crowd was too preoccupied with their own confusion; nobody cared enough to notice this girl’s eyes watering.  She closed her eyes and let her tears fall.

   “Ren-chan… Ren-chan…

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As you can see, the plot is unfolding  :glasses:

Stay with me guys!  :fap  :byebye:

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« Reply #109 on: July 01, 2010, 07:43:00 AM »
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 20 - (6/30)]
« Reply #110 on: July 01, 2010, 08:19:12 AM »
hmm ... I have no idea what's going on ...  :?
Everytime I post a reply it's said .. " I have already posted one bla ..bla .. bla ... Error Message and when I check it .. it's not there ..  :cry:
how' terrible I am ..
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 20 - (6/30)]
« Reply #111 on: July 01, 2010, 08:26:30 AM »
back from scu .. n' yay .. there's Chp. 20  :cow:
all rite .. I am new so .. don't know how to give comments with multiple quotes  :cry:
but if one word is enough, I js wanna say > fantastic  :twothumbs
the next chp 21, any TakaGaki awesomeness   :D
man .. pls do some ..  :wub:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 20 - (6/30)]
« Reply #112 on: July 01, 2010, 10:52:06 AM »
nice what's with the fap at the end XD

hmm it thickens as we try to figure out the Eri situation and Ai with Risa
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« Reply #113 on: July 01, 2010, 01:39:43 PM »
Chapter 19

Hmm Reina being all nice, it must be because other people were about, and with LinLin there she couldn't be all nasty to Eri.

Eri has such conflicting feeling, she likes LinLin but has all the feelings for Reina confusing her, but it's LinLin that I feel sorry for she's stuck in the middle of ReiEri!

Chapter 20

Ha Ha Erin panicing that she's fogotten something, lucky Risa was there to calm her down  :lol:

Wow can't believe the emotions of the song got to both singers!

Hmm the end of this chapter, Is this the introduction of Aika? has she come to find Reina?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 20 - (6/30)]
« Reply #114 on: July 01, 2010, 06:20:41 PM »
EriLin~! Uh-oh, Eri's losing herself already. poor Lin.

Ch. 20 started off cute, with Eri panicking, but then got serious. I guess the girls feel the emotions in the song a little too much.

Can't wait for next time!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 20 - (6/30)]
« Reply #115 on: July 01, 2010, 07:03:21 PM »
@gab98:  :D YAY! you're here~  :twothumbs

@Thor87: it's okay, I don't bother with the quotes thing either :? TakaGaki will come a bit later, but I'm brainstorming, don't worry  :twothumbs

@kurosawa87: I'm threatening you guys to stay  :twisted:

@oddball: yeah, major tsundereina XD yeah, Linlin's got the worst end of the stick :smhid  you'll see~  :D

@rndmnwierd: yeah, Eri really loses it...  :shocked


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i feel like the story is going too fast... maybe because I plan to focus more on TakaGaki after TanaKame is settled, so I'm excited...?  XD

Here's the next chapter!  I might update again today, but we'll see  :P

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Chapter 21

   “Yes, I understand… yes… we’ll both be there… we understand… okay.”

   Ai snapped her cell phone shut and leaned back into the couch.  Risa and Eri were sitting on folding chairs in front of her.  Reina was in the dressing stall, changing.

   “What did Tsunku-san say?” Risa asked carefully.

   “Well, he definitely saw the live recording,” Ai answered, rubbing her forehead.  “I don’t how he tuned in to a Japanese show from Paris, but he did.  He’s not too happy; he thinks it was unprofessional to show tears.  And Reina’s voice cracked too… We’re going to have a meeting about this as soon as he comes back from his business trip.”

   The room was silent for a while.  Eri looked down at her hands, trying to think.  Risa eyed the singer’s annoyed expression.

   “Ai-san…” she started in a low voice.  “Why did you cry?”

   “I told you already,” Ai answered, closing her eyes.  “Your song just got the better of me.  I got too into it.”  She smiled weakly.

   Risa saw that Ai wasn’t going to say more than what she already had told her, so she decided to keep her mouth shut… for now.  At that moment, Reina burst from the curtains, dressed in a black tank top with a gray miniskirt.  She stomped over, grabbed Eri’s wrist, and dragged her out of her chair.

   “Tanaka-san?  Wha—”

   “You come with me.”

   “Where are you two going?” Risa asked.

   “Just… it’s okay, we’ll be back,” Eri said while being pulled out of the room.  “Stay with Takahashi-san, Risa-chan.”

   Ai shot up from the couch and glared at Reina’s back.  Eri sent a comforting gaze toward her.  She was prepared now; maybe this was when she would finally face the yankii and stand up to her.  After all, she held a pretty dark secret of hers.

   Reina continued to drag Eri by her wrist, down the hallway.  The older girl stumbled after the singer, turning many corners.  Soon, they came to the emergency stairs.  Reina pushed the door open and let it close.  She slammed Eri against the wall and immediately met lips with her.  Eri didn’t fight back, but kept her eyes and mouth shut tight.

   Reina’s lips were quick and desperate as she kissed Eri’s lips over and over again.  She then dropped her head to suck on Eri’s neck, leaving a pink mark.  She suddenly seemed to realize her prey wasn’t fighting back, like her usual self.  She backed away little to look at the older girl’s face.

   “What are you thinking?” she asked, glaring.

   “I’m thinking why,” Eri answered.

   “Why what?”

   “Why do you do this, Tanaka-san?” Eri asked, opening her eyes.  Her gaze was almost as strong as the singer’s.  “Does doing this make you feel better?  What’s your reason for taking such actions?”

   “Because nothing matters,” Reina smirked.  “Every kiss we share, every touch… in the end, it doesn’t mean anything.  So I don’t care even if I do it with you, because it’ll absolutely mean nothing.”

   “Wrong answer,” Eri fought back, causing Reina to narrow her eyes.  “That’s not your reason; that’s only your justification for your actions.  But I know the reason.  I know why.”

   “Oh?” Reina questioned, smirking.  “Then why?”

   “Mitsui Aika,” Eri answered, holding on to Reina’s eye contact.

   The singer’s smirk wiped off her face.  Her eyes widened in fury.  “Who—”

   “You told me the day you were drunk,” Eri claimed.  “Maybe you don’t remember.”

   Reina glared as she took a step back.  “So what about Mitsui Aika?”

   “No, you want to ask me what I know about her,” Eri corrected, taking one step away from the wall.  “I know that you loved her.  I know that you trusted her more than anything.  And I know that she betrayed you.”

   “Stop.”  Reina took another step back as she put her hands to her head. 

   “I know that you dream about her,” Eri continued.  “I know that you do these kinds of things to me and to other girls so you can convince yourself that you’re over her.”

   “Stop…” Reina muttered, taking another step back.  She was clenching her hair in her fists.

   “But I also know that you can’t get over her,” Eri said.  “The fact that you cried while singing just now proves it.  You can’t get over her because you still don’t know why she left you.  You still don’t know what exactly made her ‘hate’ you.”

   “Stop,” Reina said, her voice a little be louder.

   “You know what I think, Tanaka-san?  I’m thinking that I pity you.  I pity you because you let one girl ruin your life for three years, and you don’t know how to get out of that pattern.”

   “Stop!” Reina shouted.

   “Because you let one girl change who you are… Because you let one betrayal determine the rest of your life.”

   “Stop!” Reina screamed.  She slammed the older girl back into the wall.  Eri clenched her teeth and shut her eyes, bracing herself.  But nothing met her lips.  She only felt a slight weight on her right shoulder… and something wet.

   Eri opened her eyes.  Reina was holding on to Eri’s shoulders as she cried into her shirt. 

   “Stop…” she sobbed.  “Please… just stop…”

   The singer slipped down to the floor as she held a firm grasp of the edge of Eri’s shirt.  She hung her head and cried out, pleading “stop” over and over again.  Eri looked up at the ceiling.  Her own tears started to well up.

   “Ah…” she thought.  “Now I know why I think about her so much.  Because I pity her… because she’s so weak and fragile… I need to help her… I’m so sorry…

   She kneeled on the ground and took the idol into her arms.  Reina continued to cry endlessly into Eri’s shoulders.

   “I’ve taken too big of a part in her life… I can’t turn back anymore... I’m so sorry, Linlin…

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I hope that wasn't too confusing... maybe I didn't build up the atmosphere enough...  :?

but if this chapter completely threw you off, leave a question.  I'll clear up what should be cleared up  :)

But things are definitely starting to roll  :twothumbs
Until next time....  :byebye:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 21 - (7/1)]
« Reply #116 on: July 01, 2010, 07:13:59 PM »
Tsunku's not happy, damn. Go Eri! Fight back! But oh no, she's going to have to talk to Lin Lin now, before she gets too wrapped up in everything. If she wants to help them both, it's best to nip it in the bud now.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 20 - (6/30)]
« Reply #117 on: July 01, 2010, 08:03:20 PM »
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  She had also written that she was skipping work to go out on a date with her girlfriend. 
Eri has a girlfriend?  :O and Reina's kissing her?   :O

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“I’m here to pick you up.  Get in.”
Ain't that sweet  :wub:

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Ai reached over and secured the Risa’s seat belt.
Awww  :inlove:

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“We’re ditching,”
:lol:

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“because Reina left the house early today too.  No doubt she’s ditching.”
Everyon'e ditching work  :lol:

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“Are you one of those backseat drivers?  Because I really hate that.”

   “First of all, I’m in the passenger seat.  Second of all, I’m willing to be one those drivers if it means I’ll go to work!”
:rofl:  :rofl:  :rofl:

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“Oh my gosh, it’s a rollercoaster!  I’ve always wanted to go on that thing!”  She pulled the door open and dragged Risa out by her hand.  “Come on, come on, come on!”
Lovely to imagine  :w00t:

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Instead, it headed straight for the loop-de-loop, in which Risa made a glass-breaking scream, and cut off Ai’s blood circulation in her arms.
OMG   :wahaha:

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“Gaki-san, I’m sorry I can’t carry you.  You have to walk, come on,” Ai said, still laughing.
Jezzzzz  XD

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Risa would’ve broken down already, but the one thing that kept her going was that Ai kept on holding her hand.  That was the only thing that made Risa feel like it was all worth it.
Lovely  :wriggly:

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They both turned towards the direction of the sound and spotted a couple teenagers staring at them… no, staring at one of them.
Sighted  :lol:

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Ai removed her hands from Risa’s mouth and noticed that the younger girl’s cheeks were flushed dark red.
Hmmm, sensing some ahem  :D

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Ai leaned in until their lips met.
:mon money:  :mon money:  :mon money:

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“I need to leave,” Risa interrupted. 
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't leave!!!!!!!!! lol



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The ice in the glass rattled as Reina drank up the rest of the beer
:O

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She had had her first date with Linlin, her newly found girlfriend
EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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“Ta… Tanaka-san?”
I knew it, she went to Eri's house  :wub:

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“Only Aika can touch me.  Only Aika.”
Hmmm

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Reina tightened her arms around Eri’s neck and buried her face into her shoulders.  Just like that, she cried.  She cried, continuously screaming.
:cry:

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Eri touched the place where the yankii had patted.  The warmth of her hand was lingering there.
Hmmm

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“Okay, I’m turning the mics on,” Risa said.  Ai gave a thumbs-up as a signal.  Risa ignored it and looked down.  Ai shot a pleading look to Eri in the back, who just shrugged.
Like to think it's a lovers quarrel  :D


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  “Senpai, the syrup is dripping out.”
Eh.?. Aren't they lovers.?.

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But that was a lie.  She was thinking about something… someone.  About that person’s actions, that person’s umbrella, that person’s tears, that person’s warm hand patting her head… Everything was jumbled up together like puzzle pieces that would never fit.
She's starting to feel Teh LOVE

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As the two girls turned the corner, with the entrance of the park right across the street, they saw a short girl with sunglasses on, walking towards them.
:w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:

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Eri’s eyes almost popped out of her sockets.  What was with her?  Why was she smiling like that?
XD

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As soon as Eri turned around, her lips met with her girlfriend’s.
No!!! Reina might be hiding somewhere and looking!

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“She’s thinking of her,” Eri thought.  “She’s thinking of Mitsui Aika right now!”
Maybe she's thinking about you Kamei!

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  “Ren-chan… Ren-chan…”
Aika


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“Ah…” she thought.  “Now I know why I think about her so much.  Because I pity her
Is it.?. Hmmm


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 21 - (7/1)]
« Reply #118 on: July 01, 2010, 10:06:52 PM »
Ah Eri broke down Reina and that leaves a very interesting dilemma for Eri
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 21 - (7/1)]
« Reply #119 on: July 02, 2010, 12:41:16 AM »
Man Reina got complety broken down because of Eri!

Eri feels pity for Reina, so she's gonna go with her insted of LinLin, hmm that can only end in tears, quite literally for Eri and Reina and as suspected Lin gets the 'shoert end of the stick' as you put it, wondering if thats the best thing to happen to her though :cry:


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