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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 21 - (7/1)]
« Reply #120 on: July 02, 2010, 05:38:13 AM »
@rndmnwierd: yeh, she's nipping the bud alright...  :(

@kRisZ: did you miss all the KameLin chapters I posted (4, 11, 14, 19)?  Linlin is Eri's girlfriend~~ go back and read them before you read this next one  XD

@kurosawa87: yup, it's all confusion and madness  :panic: :D

@oddball: yeah, Linlin's going down.  Sorry...  :cry:

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This update is the last KameLin chapter... so sad, they were so sweet  :gyaaah:

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Chapter 22

   “I won’t say I saw it coming but I guess I should’ve expected it.”  Linlin turned her head to the older girl next to her on the bench. 

   “I’m so sorry,” Eri said, her head dropped down.  “It’s not that I don’t like you anymore, I just…”

   “It’s okay,” the younger girl interrupted.  “You were too good to be true anyway.”  She gave a weak laugh. 

   “That’s not true,” Eri said, turning to look at the girl next to her.  “In all honesty, you were much more than I could ever hope for.  You made me smile when no one else could.  But… it’s just… it’s not fair to you, to be with someone like me.”  Someone as unfaithful as me.

   “Well, now it’s my turn to disagree,” Linlin countered, smiling a little.  “When I first met you… I was really happy.  It seemed so unreal, to actually meet the person I’d been admiring for such a long time.  And when you accepted my proposal… that was even more dreamlike.”

   “I’m sorry…”

   “No, don’t apologize.  Never apologize.  You did nothing wrong.”

   “I did too many things wrong,” Eri disagreed.

   “Don’t say that,” Linlin said.  “If we’re not meant to be together, than we’re not.  There’s nothing we can do about it.”

   There was silence for a while.  Memories of the past couple weeks ran through both their minds.

   “There’s someone else… right?” Linlin asked carefully.  Eri nodded in response.  “Do you love her?”

   “No, I don’t love her,” Eri immediately answered.  “I actually don’t even like her that much.  But… I can’t leave her.  I’ve gone too deep into her life already, it’s my fault.”

   “I’m not sure if I understand everything…” Linlin said.  “But I won’t dig further.  You know I never really dig into other people’s business too much.”

   “Yeah, that’s true.”  Eri smiled a little at the memory when Linlin cheered her up with her cookbook.

   “But if someone needs you more than me,” the younger girl continued, “I can let you go.  Actually, I think I can even smile while doing it.”

   She jumped up from the bench as Eri also stood up.  Linlin turned to her ex-girlfriend with a big grin.

   “As long as I know that you’re doing what you want to do,” she said, “I think that will be my own happiness and encouragement.”

   Eri tried to smile at the energetic girl.  But tears of guilt started to well up in her eyes again.

   “Eri, don’t cry!” she thought.  “You don’t deserve to cry; if anyone should be crying, it’s Linlin.  Suck it up!

   She felt a pair of arms around her waist.  Linlin buried her head into Eri’s shoulder for a moment, and then stepped back again.  Fresh tears were visible on her face in contrast to her curved-up lips.

   “Just one last hug,” she explained. 

   “I thought you were going to stay smiling,” Eri teased, laughing a little.

   “I am smiling,” Linlin argued.  “I mean, I am kind of sad… it’s the first time I’ve been dumped.  But then again, you were my first girlfriend.”

   Eri hung her head, trying to wipe away her tears quickly.  “I’m sorr—”

   “Chin up and stay sharp, senpai!” Linlin ordered.  “Whatever you need to do… I wish you only the best.”

   “Yes,” Eri started.  “I’m sorr—”  Linlin narrowed her eyes.  “—I also wish you the best.”

   “That’s better,” Linlin grinned.  Her tears continued to flow down her cheeks.  “You were my first love and girlfriend, senpai.  I’ll never forget you.  No matter what, you can’t forget me either, okay?”

   Eri shook her head furiously.  “I’ll never forget you, Lin-chan.”

   “Well, I guess this is the end, senpai,” the younger girl smiled.  “Sayonara.”

   “Sayonara,” Eri whispered back. 

   Holding on to her ex-girlfriend’s last words, Linlin turned and walked away without looking back.  Eri’s eyes were dry now.  She clenched her teeth as she kept her gaze on the heartbroken girl.

   “Giving love only to take it back again, is much crueler than not giving love at all,” she thought.  “And I have just committed that cruel act to an innocent girl…

   Eri watched the girl she had just dumped disappear out of the park.

   “Endure the guilt, Eri.  That is your punishment.  That is the price you must pay for the cruel act.

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I'm terrible aren't I?  :fainted:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 22 - (7/1)]
« Reply #121 on: July 02, 2010, 06:11:53 AM »
Poor Lin but she took it well and didn't lash out to make Eri feel any worst which is great for Eri but now hopefully she can move on
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 22 - (7/1)]
« Reply #122 on: July 02, 2010, 06:29:23 AM »
Good, it's better to endure a little pain now, than a lot later on. Now Eri can concentrate on Reina and Takagaki can concentrate on each other!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 22 - (7/1)]
« Reply #123 on: July 02, 2010, 08:44:41 PM »
@kurosawa87: yeah... But the fact that Linlin was nice about it probably hurt Eri more  :cry:

@rndmnwierd: yup yup!  it's TanaKame time now~  :D


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Chapter 23

   Eri slipped out of her sneakers and shuffled towards the living room, dragging her feet.  Risa was sitting on the couch, eating popcorn, watching a movie.

   “Tadaima…” Eri mumbled, slumping down on the couch next to her friend.

   “Okaeri,” Risa replied without looking up from the screen.  “You were on a date with Linlin, right?  Did you eat lunch yet?”

   “No, I wasn’t on a date and no, I didn’t eat yet,” Eri answered, leaning back.  “I broke up with her.”

   Risa’s head whipped around with an alarmed expression.

   “You broke up with her?” she questioned.  “Why?  I thought you were happy with her?”

   “Long story…” Eri mumbled.  “Can we talk about this later?  I’m so tired…” 

   “Well… I guess…” Risa said, putting down the popcorn bowl on the coffee table.  She looked at her best friend, all pale and exhausted.  Something on her neck caught Risa’s eye, a pink spot that was darker than the rest of her skin.  She reached out and grabbed the collar of Eri’s shirt and pulled it to the side a little to get a better look.

   “Eri…” Risa started, her eyes wide in shock, “what’s this?”

   Eri looked down at her neck.  The mark that Tanaka Reina had left back at the stairs hadn’t disappeared yet.  She immediately slapped Risa’s hand away and stood up.  She put her hand over the pink mark to conceal it.

   “I thought you broke up with her?” Risa said.

   “I did,” Eri answered, looking down.  “Linlin didn’t do this.”

   “Then who—”

   “Risa, can we please not talk about this?  I’m really tired.”

   “No, we’re definitely talking about this,” Risa said, her expression growing more furious.  “Who did that to you?  You just broke up with Linlin and you said it wasn’t her.  That means someone did this to you while you were still Linlin’s girlfriend?  Eri, were you cheating on her?”

   “No!” Eri contradicted.  “How could you even think that?  You know me better than that!”

   “I do know you better than that,” Risa agreed.  “So someone forced this on you, right?  Who is it?  Who would do—”

   “Risa, just… just stop.  I don’t want to talk about this right now.”  Eri touched her forehead and closed her eyes.

   “Why are you protecting this person?” Risa demanded.  “You’ve been acting really weird lately, Kameha—”

   Then the memories hit.  How Eri was acting weird ever since the first High-Queen meeting… How she came back with Tanaka Reina and wouldn’t look at anybody in the eye… How she hesitated to go find Tanaka Reina at the recording studio… She gasped.

   “Tanaka Reina,” Risa whispered.  “Tanaka Reina did this to you.”  Eri looked away to the side.  “I’m right, aren’t I?  She did this to you!  And I… I didn’t know…?”

   “Risa-chan, it’s fine now,” Eri assured.  “I’m handling it.”

   “You’ve been acting weird since the very first High-Queen meeting.  That mark is still there.  You’re obviously not ‘handling’ it.  How could I not know?  You’re my best friend yet…”

   Then, a different memory hit Risa.  Someone’s voice echoed in her head… “Next victim”…

   “She knew…” Risa whispered, her eyes staring into space.  “Ai-san knew this was happening to you…”

   “That’s enough, just stop Risa-chan,” Eri said firmly.  She didn’t want her friend to get into a fight because of her.  “I can take care of myself; you don’t need to go all ‘mom’ on me.”

   “She knew but she didn’t stop it!” Risa yelled.  “How could she… how could she…?”

   “Risa-chan, I said stop!” Eri shouted back.  “I’m perfectly fine so you don’t have to worry.”

   With that, she stomped up the stairs, into her room, and slammed the door shut.  Risa stood motionless for a minute.  She processed everything in her head.

   “Tanaka Reina forced that on Eri.  That’s why Eri was acting weird.  Eri wouldn’t tell me anything.  Takahashi Ai knew.  But she didn’t say anything.  And she didn’t try to stop it… and I trusted her.

   The realization hit like a punch in the stomach.  Risa quickly gathered herself again.  She immediately put on her sneakers and dashed out the door.  She dialed a number on her cell phone as she ran down the street.

   “Tsunku-san?” she said.  “What is the address of High-Queen’s dorm?”

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uh-oh. What's gonna happen next....  :shocked

I might update again today so stick around~  :byebye:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 23 - (7/2)]
« Reply #124 on: July 02, 2010, 09:20:58 PM »
NOOOOOOOO   :mon zoom: Gaki-san .. don't do anything stupid   :mon runcry:
She may have a reason for not telling you  :mon dunno:
the only thing ya need is .. jz take some private time with her  :mon misch:
very nice chp. ... by the way  :mon lovelaff:
MORE MORE ... plz  :cow:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 23 - (7/2)]
« Reply #125 on: July 02, 2010, 09:58:12 PM »
Gaki-san rage :angry:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 23 - (7/2)]
« Reply #126 on: July 03, 2010, 04:19:53 AM »
@Thor87: oooh major TakaGaki fan, huh?  :D  I am too, but you just might come to beat me up after this chapter...  :bleed eyes:

@kurosawa87: Gaki-san rage + a bit of break down  :cry:

Yeah, I'm gonna have some people chase me down after this chapter...  :badluck:
Don't worry, this is as terrible as it gets... for now  :nervous

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Chapter 24

   “Coming!” Ai called to the restless doorbell.  She walked out of her room and to the front door.  The bell continued to ring over and over again.  Whoever was pressing the doorbell was about to break it, and that was going to seriously annoy her.

   “I said I’m coming!” Ai yelled, walking a little faster.  She reached out and opened the door to reveal her song writer, clad in jeans and a t-shirt.  Sweat trickled down her face as she breathed heavily.

   “Gaki-san?” Ai said, her eyes widening.  “What are you doing at my house?  Did you run here?”

   Risa inhaled and exhaled a couple times before wordlessly marching into the living room.  Ai stepped aside before she could be pushed away. 

   “Did you run up the stairs or something?” Ai laughed.  “You shouldn’t do that, we live on the 8th floor.  Do you want some water?”

   “Where’s Tanaka-san?” Risa huffed. 

   “Um… she’s not home at the moment... But you can leave a message with me, if you want.”

   “I guess I’ll have to settle for just one of them,” Risa thought.  “Why… why…” She tried to get the words out but nothing came out except puffs of air.  Maybe she shouldn’t have run all the way here…

   “Gaki-san, are you okay?” Ai asked, concerned.

   Risa straightened her back.  She glared right into the singer’s eyes.

   “Why didn’t you tell me?” she demanded.

   “Didn’t tell you… what?” Ai questioned, unsure.

   “Why didn’t you tell me that Eri was Tanaka Reina’s so-called victim?” Risa yelled.  The older girl’s face hardened.  “Oh, now you get what I’m talking about.  So you really did know what was going on.  You knew but you didn’t tell me!”

   “I didn’t think it was necessary to tell you,” Ai answered quietly.

   “You didn’t think it was necessary?” Risa said, her voice climbing up a couple octaves.  “Eri’s my friend!  My best friend was getting hurt because of your partner, and you didn’t think it was necessary to tell me?”

   “I have no obligation of telling you what you don’t know,” Ai said firmly.  “And I tried to help.  Kamei-san knows that.”

   “Well you didn’t help enough,” Risa growled through her teeth.  “Because she still has that damn mark on her neck!”

   “You don’t know the whole story,” Ai argued.  “Kamei-san knows a lot more.  She knows what she’s doing.”

   “You’re right, I don’t know the whole story because nobody ever thought it necessary enough to tell me!”

   “Gaki-san, you’re over reacting—”

   “I’m over reacting?” Risa shrilled.  “My best friend was abused right under my nose and you didn’t tell me.  And you think I’m over reacting?”  She paused to glare at Ai’s pained expression.  She lowered her voice into a soft whisper.  “And I trusted you…”

   “Okay,” Ai said, rubbing her forehead.  “Let’s just calm down and talk about this—”

   “Wouldn’t you also be like me right now if you found out that your friend got hurt like this?” Risa interrupted.  “And nobody told you?”

   “Gaki-san—”

   “And to think you were keeping this kind of thing from me!”

   “Just a minute—”

   “Are you cruel enough to just watch this kind of thing happen right in front of you?” Risa screamed.  “Why didn’t you tell me?”

   “Because I wanted to protect you!” Ai yelled. 

   She pulled the younger girl into a tight embrace.  Risa stiffened as her eyes grew wide by the older girl’s sudden action.

   “Because I didn’t want you to become like Kamei-san…” Ai said into Risa’s ear.  “Because I know Reina too well… and if she noticed you, she would’ve gone after you too.  I didn’t want to see that happen!”

   “You didn’t think of just warning me?” Risa whispered.

   “The moment I tell you about Reina would’ve been the moment you jump into her life after Kamei-san,” Ai explained.  “I am a cruel person.  I didn’t care who Reina knocked up as long as it wasn’t you.  I wanted you to be safe; I didn’t want you to get hurt.”  I didn’t want to lose you.  Not again.  Never again.

   Risa pushed the singer’s shoulders to look into her eyes, pleading in desperation.  However, her own expression was not that of sympathy.  Tears of anger streamed down her face.

   “Well you just failed your mission,” Risa said.  “Because as soon as I realized you knew… you were the one who hurt me.”

   With that, she broke away from Ai’s hold and walked out the door, not looking back.  The singer let Risa’s last words echo through her head.  She slipped down to the floor with a hopeless expression.  Her hands traveled down the wall, searching for something to hold on to, with no avail.  She bit down on her lips as tears flowed down her cheeks.

   “I lost her again…” she thought.  “I swore never again… but I lost her…

   She beat her fist over her heart.  Then, she started crying out loud, not caring about who would hear.  For no pain was worse than losing someone twice.

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It'll get a little bit lighter! the TanaKame arc is almost at its end... almost...  :byebye:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 24 - (7/2)]
« Reply #127 on: July 03, 2010, 05:34:46 AM »
 :err: gaki .. i told ya not to do anything like this ... u really let me down   :on voodoo:
 Jz forgive her ...  :frustrated: everythings gonna be fine   :kneelbow:
Ai~ u r not cruel  :cry: ... I know ya jz wanna love protect her  :mon yeah:
" I lost her again ... " ...   :mon dunno:
hmmm .. that means she lost her before ...  :mon unsure:
You are not gonna let them apart rite ...    :mon runcry: :mon runcry: :mon runcry:
NOOOOOOOO pls NOOOOOO  :on cloudeye:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 24 - (7/2)]
« Reply #128 on: July 03, 2010, 06:13:39 AM »
Damn Ai was trying to protect Risa but I guess honestly would have worked but in the end Ai just has to gain back Risa's trust
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 24 - (7/2)]
« Reply #129 on: July 03, 2010, 07:05:53 AM »
Aaaaand everything finally clicks for Gaki-san. I would probably be pretty pissed too, but maybe not as calm, so I think she handled it well. But I can't wait to see how Ai will salvage this one and what Risa will do to Reina once they meet face to face again.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 24 - (7/2)]
« Reply #130 on: July 03, 2010, 07:07:48 PM »
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Someone as unfaithful as me.
It's either she's falling or she's feeling guilty because Reina's kissing her... hmmmm

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“I’m not sure if I understand everything…” Linlin said.  “But I won’t dig further.  You know I never really dig into other people’s business too much.”
She's one in a million  :yep:

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“But if someone needs you more than me,” the younger girl continued, “I can let you go.  Actually, I think I can even smile while doing it.”
Yep, one in a million indeed

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“She knew…”
:panic:

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“Tsunku-san?” she said.  “What is the address of High-Queen’s dorm?”
OMG. Ai is so in trouble  :O  and so is Reina.

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Maybe she shouldn’t have run all the way here…
:lol:

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“You’re right, I don’t know the whole story because nobody ever thought it necessary enough to tell me!”
Nice counter. Go Risa  :onioncheer:

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“Because I wanted to protect you!” Ai yelled. 
Eh?!

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I didn’t want to lose you.  Not again.  Never again.
EHHHHHHHHHHH???????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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For no pain was worse than losing someone twice.
WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!  :shocked


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 24 - (7/2)]
« Reply #131 on: July 04, 2010, 02:08:31 AM »
AAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!  :bleed eyes:

I can't really comment anything else about how I feel now...  :shocked

JUST GET TAKAGAKI BACK TOGETHER!!!  :panic:  :cry:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 23 - (7/2)]
« Reply #132 on: July 04, 2010, 04:07:35 AM »
She may have a reason for not telling you  :mon dunno:
the only thing ya need is .. jz take some private time with her  :mon misch:


hahaha lol!!! yeah i think what this is the reason  :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 24 - (7/2)]
« Reply #133 on: July 04, 2010, 04:47:56 AM »
@Thor87: okay, I'm being evil these days but i am NOT cruel enough to break apart TakaGaki! That would ruin me...  :fainted:

@kurosawa87: yeah, she just "protected" her in the wrong way  :(

@rndmnwierd: I know, right? But nothing TOO bad will happen to Reina... not after this chapter  :)

@kRisZ: i love your last three quotes.  Curiosity is torturous, no?  :twisted:

@Swtme03: don't worry, I wouldn't be able to keep TakaGaki away from each other.  I wouldn't be able to sleep at night  :badluck:

@gab98: More coming~  :inlove:


Thanks so much for all the comments!  XD
I was gonna post two chapters today, since it's a saturday, but I had to go to my violin lesson...  :smhid
then I had to shopping for food. empty fridge, what can I say?  :err:

But I still got one update for you guys!  :onioncheer:

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Chapter 25

   The front door slammed shut as Risa kicked off her shoes and stomped back into her own house.  She bit down on her lips as she wiped away what was left of her tears.

   She heard a door open on the second floor.  Then, she heard fast footsteps, running down the stairs.  Risa could tell that Eri was not happy from the wrinkle in her nose.

   “Where were you?” the turtle demanded.  “What did you do now?”

   “I didn’t do anything,” Risa replied coolly.  She ignored her friend’s glare and walked into the living room.  But Eri grabbed her shoulders before she could sit down on the sofa.

   “Don’t give me any of that!” Eri yelled.  “I’m not stupid.  You’re eyes are still watery.  What did you do?”

   “I went to High-Queen’s apartment,” Risa answered, keeping her voice calm.

   “You what?  Wha-what did you say to Tanaka-san?”

   “I didn’t say anything, she wasn’t there.”

   “Takahashi-san?”

   “I told her what I think of her keeping secrets from me.”  Eri quickly thought of the various things Risa could be thinking.  Her eyes widened in horror.

   “Risa-chan, I told you to drop it, didn’t I?” Eri yelled.

   “You expect me to drop it when my best friend got forcefully… raped?”  Risa could hear her voice rising in pitch but she didn’t care.

   “I didn’t get raped!  Where did you get that idea?” Eri denied.  “Risa, this is my problem, my issue.  I’ll handle it.”

   “Eri, I’ve known you for too long to just let this go,” Risa argued.  She sighed and breathed in and out.  She opened her mouth and tried to take a softer tone.  “Why did you keep this from me?  Why… Why are you protecting Tanaka Reina?”

   Eri looked at Risa’s desperate eyes.  Eyes full of concern, full of love.  She sighed.  Risa had always been the “mom” since they were young.  Even though they were the same age, Eri had always been so soft-spoken that Risa would act like the older one.  And of course, Sayumi liked to be babied by her.  Eri took her friend’s hand and held it between her own hands.

   “I’ll tell you what I can, Risa-chan,” she said quietly.  “It’s not my secret to tell, but I’ll tell you as much as I can.”

   Risa could tell Eri was being sincere, so she nodded in response.

   “Tanaka-san,” Eri started, “is in a very fragile state.  She’s had a rough time in the past, so she drinks in an attempt to forget.  She can’t sleep well at night so she takes pills.  She looks strong but she can break down at any moment.  Are you getting this?”

   Risa slowly nodded.

   “Well,” Eri continued, “there’s a lot more I could tell you but I don’t think I should.  It’s not my own story.  Can you understand this?”

   Risa nodded again.

   “Okay,” Eri started again.  “So I do know a lot more about Tanaka Reina now.  A lot more than I bargained for.  And because I know too much, I feel that it’s too cruel to leave her in such a fragile state.”

   “Why is it your job to straighten her up?” Risa whispered.  “Why can’t someone else do it?”

   “Because nobody else knows this much about her,” Eri answered.

   “Her leader seems to know a lot,” Risa grumbled.

   “But she hasn’t seen the way Tanaka-san suffers,” Eri replied.  “I’ve seen her cry, I’ve seen her tears.  They left a mark on my memories that I can’t erase.  I feel cruel to just leave her with all those scars.  I have to help her.”

   “How?  You met her two months ago, how can you help her?”

   “Actually, I think I already know how,” Eri answered.  “I’m not sure if it’s the best way, but I have to try.  Risa-chan, you just have trust me on this.”

   “… Are you sure you know what you’re doing?” Risa asked slowly.

   “Absolutely sure,” Eri confirmed with no hesitation.  She squeezed her friend’s hand in reassurance.

   Risa sighed deeply.  She then put her other hand on top of Eri’s.

   “Okay,” she whispered.  “I trust you.  But if you get into any kind of danger, you have to let me know.  Can you do that for me?”

   “Yes,” Eri answered, smiling.  She took her friend into a hug.  “Thank you, Risa-chan.  I’ll let you know what happens, okay?”

   “Okay.”

   “And make up with Takahashi-san,” Eri said, backing away.  “I don’t want you to fight with your friend because of me.”

   “… I’ll handle that myself,” Risa grumbled, arching her eyebrows at the thought.  Eri rolled her eyes.

   “Everything will be fine, Risa-chan,” she assured.  “I promise.”

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A little more friendly, right?  :hee:
Next chapter should be more exciting!  :byebye:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 25 - (7/2)]
« Reply #134 on: July 04, 2010, 05:45:27 AM »
Phew talk about catching up on the updates. You update fast :sweatdrop:


So Eri broke up with LinLin because of Reina? I wonder if its more than just feeling sorry for the singer? XD But you know, I would keep LinLin if I were Eri. Just for the crepes :lol: But how will Reina react if she finds out about Eri's dumping the panda? And I'm guessing Aika will be making her appearance soon?


Oh the drama in TakaGaki world :doh: Will Gaki let go of her dream and quit being the girls' songwriter? How will Ai pacify the bean? Will they kiss and make up (literally? :twisted:)

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 25 - (7/2)]
« Reply #135 on: July 04, 2010, 09:45:29 PM »
@badsaints: I DO update fast, don't stay away for too long!  XD


Okay, here's a SUPER long chapter with the entrance of another character!  :cow:
I also threw in some random extra characters, just for the hell of it  :D

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Chapter 26

   The turtle continuously poked her head in and out of the school gate.  Various high school students wearing uniforms flooded out of the school.  They all passed by looking at her oddly or just ignoring her.  She sighed.

   “I hope I’m doing the right thing…” Eri thought.  “Get a grip Eri!  You have to do this!  Think of Tanaka-san.  Think of Linlin!  If you fail, that means you hurt Linlin for nothing.  You can’t live with that!

   She finally straightened her back and started to watch the students coming out of the gate again.  She noticed two girls walking out, talking to each other.

   “Um, excuse me,” Eri said, slowly.  The two girls turned around.  One of them had a blue ribbon in her thick, shoulder-length hair.  The other girl had her long hair in a ponytail.

   “Yes?” the ponytail girl answered.

   “Do you know a student named Mitsui Aika?” Eri asked.

   “Hm… I don’t think so…”  The pony tail girl rubbed her chin.  “Do you know her, Risako-chan?”

   “She sounds familiar…” Risako mumbled.  Then, she clapped her hands.  “Ah! Mitsui Aika-senpai!  You know her too, Nakki!  Second year, class 5?  The one with the smile?”

   “Ah! The one that’s obsessed with dogs!”  the girl called Nakki exclaimed, also clapping her hands.  “She’s pretty famous, isn’t she?

   “Do you know where I can find her?” Eri asked.

   “Oh, I see her coming out of the building now!” Risako said, pointing to the school across the field.

   “Thank you very much,” Eri said to the two students, bowing.  She then focused on the other two girls coming out the school, walking towards the gate.  One girl was incredibly tall, and had long wavy hair.  The other girl was petit with short hair.  They laughed and talked until Eri caught them at the gate.

   “Excuse me?”

   The two girls turned to look at the stranger.

   “Mitsui Aika-san?” Eri questioned.  The shorter girl looked up at the taller girl, and then looked back at the stranger with a small smile.

   “I’m Mitsui Aika,” the short-haired girl answered.  “May I ask who you are?”

   “My name is Kamei Eri,” the turtle introduced herself.  “I’m High-Queen’s fashion coordinator.”

   Aika’s smile dropped a little as her eyes grew wide.  She looked down for a while, and then slowly smiled again, a little sadly this time.  She looked back at her tall friend.

   “Kumai-chan,” Aika said, “you can go ahead.  I’ll see you tomorrow, okay?”

   “Okay, Mittsi,” the tall girl answered.  “Don’t forget the Siberian husky picture!”

   “I won’t,” Aika reassured, grinning.  She waved to her friend who walked away from her.  She then turned back to face Eri with a smile.

   “Well, I’m sure you’re not here just to visit me,” Aika said.  “We can go talk by the swings, if that’s okay with you.”

   “That’s fine,” Eri answered, smiling.  Aika had a nice impression; her uniform was ironed and her overall appearance was neat and clean.  Unlike other high school girls, she wasn’t wearing any make up. 

   The two girls walked over to the swing sets in the field.  The school was almost empty by now, except for club meetings and such.  Aika sat on one swing and Eri took the swing next to her.

   “I read about Tsuji-san’s pregnancy in the paper,” the younger girl started.  “You must be her replacement.”

   “Yes, I am,” Eri answered. 

   “Since you succeeded in finding my school, I assume you know about me and Ren-chan.  Right?”

   “I know the basic idea, but not everything.”  So she calls her ‘Ren-chan’…

   “… How is she doing?” Aika asked, hesitantly.

   “I won’t lie to you,” Eri replied.  “She’s not doing so well.  She drinks a lot and she takes sleeping pills too.  She’s trying to forget about you but that’s not something she can force upon herself.  She’s suffering, Mitsui-san.”

   “… And she’s been like this for the last three years?” Aika asked with a sad smile.

   “Yes… that’s why I’m here, Mitsui-san,” Eri said.  “I’d like to know the full story, including the reason you left Tanaka-san.  That’s the one piece of information she’s missing.  That’s the one thing that keeps her in the past.”

   Aika closed her eyes.  She breathed out shakily.  Eri could tell she was trying to hold back the tears.  The younger girl opened her eyes again and sighed.

   “I was a really big fan of High-Queen,” Aika started.  “I would follow their schedule and make scrap books and sing their songs…  I was one of the top members in the fan club too.  I could only watch them from afar in concerts but I always dreamed of meeting them in person.

   “One day, a fan club member got sick so she handed over her backstage pass to me.  I was ecstatic; I would finally be able to meet my idols!  So that’s how I first met Ren-chan.  She stared at me for a long time, even when she was signing my autograph book.  She asked what my name was.  She whispered to me that she would remember that name.  For the next couple weeks, all I could think about was whether Tanaka Reina would really remember me.

   “The next live came around.  I followed them after the recording, even to their van.  I accidently dropped my autograph book in the middle of the crowd.  I crouched down to pick it up but someone had already kicked it away.  I crawled on the ground, looking for it.  Then it got really quiet.  I realized the people around me had backed away.  I spotted my notebook right near the door of the van.  Someone picked it up, walked over, and crouched in front of me...”

   Aika paused for a while, smiling at the memory.  Eri waited patiently.

   “Ren-chan handed me the autograph book.  She said, ‘Here you go… Mitsui Aika-chan’.  I was so happy she remembered me that I didn’t even realize she was giving me a different piece of paper along with my notebook.  I looked at it later; it was an advertisement for a pizza shop.  I took a cab there as fast I could and… Ren-chan was there.  We ate together and we talked.  She said she wanted to get to know me better.  Until then, I had only thought of Tanaka Reina as my idol.  But from that moment, I started to think of her as… just a girl.  We started to meet often and we would always talk like old friends.

   “One day, she confessed to me.  She said she knows that I’m still young but she also said she can’t imagine a life without me.  I accepted.”

   Aika smiled and turned to look at her listener.  Eri smiled back and nodded in encouragement.

   “We were together for three months.  I was happy during our relationship.  But I was also very uneasy.  Ren-chan was an idol so she always had people around her.  We did get privacy sometimes, but that was a rare occasion.  I always had to watch other girls, fawning over her…”

   There was silence.  Eri looked at the younger girl to see what was stopping her.  Aika was still smiling but the tears streaming down her face contradicted her happy mask.

   “I… I was jealous.  I was still in middle school, it was a natural emotion.  But… just watching Ren-chan smile at other people… it wasn’t something I could take.  I wasn’t mature enough to tell the difference between her smile for me and her smile for her fans.  That’s why I broke up with her.  I realized I couldn’t handle Ren-chan’s publicity so I left her.

   “I know that I hurt her.  I didn’t mean it when I said I hated her.  I actually… I actually still loved her… so much.  But I was too young to handle the stress, even for our love.  That’s why I left her.”

   Aika hung her head and let her tears drop in the sand box.  Her curved-up lips trembled as she wiped her eyes with her sleeves.  Eri reached out and stroked her back. 

   “Mitsui-san,” she started, “I’m going to ask you to talk to Tanaka-san.  I think you need to tell her why you left her.  ‘Hate’ is such a strong word; you can’t leave it in Tanaka-san’s heart like that.”

   Aika nodded.  “I’m willing to be honest,” she said.  “But… Ren-chan probably doesn’t want to see me.”

   “That’s not true,” Eri whispered.  “This will help her, I promise.”

   “… Kamei-san, can I ask you something?”

   “Yes?”

   “Are you in love with Ren-chan?”

   Eri smiled and shook her head.  “I’m just someone butting into her business.”

   Aika smiled back.  “But the fact that you came to see me like this means you care, right?” she insisted.  “Kamei-san, please take care of Ren-chan.  She’s a good person.”

   “I’ll only keep that promise if you complete your side of the deal first,” Eri teased.

   Aika laughed and nodded.  “I’ll talk.  I’ll do whatever I can to help her.”

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So most of it was kind of explanatory, huh?  :P
Ah~ I had so many things imagined for ReinaxAika but I didn't want to make this too long :panic:
see ya next time~  :byebye:


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 26 - (7/4)]
« Reply #136 on: July 04, 2010, 10:13:07 PM »
wow the last two chapters were very informational

Risa gets the truth

Eri talks to Aika and still I guess Reina is still in her own world
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 26 - (7/4)]
« Reply #137 on: July 04, 2010, 10:35:42 PM »
Oooh, finally we get to know why Aika left her D:
Poor Reina  :( And poor Mittsi too D:!

So many chapters around Eri and Reina, but very small amounts of AiGaki  :cry: Please give us more in the next chappies xD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 26 - (7/4)]
« Reply #138 on: July 05, 2010, 12:19:00 PM »
Man just caught up, Again!

chapter 22

well at least LinLin went out with style, her being nice about it seems really to be biting at Eri's concience.

chapter 23

Uh-Oh Risa found out about Reina attacks on Eri - and she figured out that Ai knew and din't tell her  :panic:
this can only go badly....

chapter 24

I think we can safely say that Risa is pissed!

Poor Ai she completly miss judged the situation and she thinks she has lost Gaki because of it. Wonder who the person is that Ai is refering to when she says 'not again?'

Chapter 25

Eri's reasoning for being with Reina is kinda weird but it does kinda make sense, in a odd sort of way!

Chapter 26

H!P Kids Cameo, nice!

So Eri meets Aika, poor Aika she was too young to handle the relationship and so she ended it, she should relly of told reina the real reason rather than tellingReina she hated her when she did not.

Will Aika manage to bring Reian round, with Eri of Course?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 26 - (7/4)]
« Reply #139 on: July 06, 2010, 01:26:48 AM »
NO UPDATE TODAY???  :gyaaah: dude .. ya'r killing me  :imdead:
Pls don't slow down your UPDATE  :cry:
I want more ... MORE ..  :tantrum: :tantrum:
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