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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 30 - (7/6)]
« Reply #160 on: July 07, 2010, 04:43:06 AM »
there .. she heard what I've said ...  :D she forgive her  :wub:
awesome chp.  :twothumbs
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 30 - (7/6)]
« Reply #161 on: July 07, 2010, 02:01:34 PM »
Wow amazing to see the change it Reina in chapter 29! Tanakame is surley a must now  :wub:

Risa's realisation in chapter 30 was kinda cool aswell, she was angry at Ai because she loves her so it hurt more.

was kinda worried about how Ai reacted, even though she was drunk the way she reacted to Risa was kinda scary  :shocked

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 30 - (7/6)]
« Reply #162 on: July 07, 2010, 02:25:32 PM »
So the Ice Queen seems to thaw a little after meeting Aika :) She promised not to let go huh? Guess it's a future promise with regards to a certain turtle? :P

I'm guessing no chance of rabu-rabu time for TakaGaki since Reina will be picking the girls up :lol: Darn it! Being drunk is a good excuse for Ai to kiss the bean again XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 30 - (7/6)]
« Reply #163 on: July 07, 2010, 06:12:01 PM »
@Ada: I'm trying to get my TakaGaki mind going...  :twisted:

@kawaii beam: YESS I think I still have it, but I know what I'm gonna write now! It's just how I'm gonna word it... :(

@kurosawa87: oh yeah, she's sober alright... but not for long :twisted: XD

@Thor87: yup~ even I'm to afriad to keep TakaGaki away from each other for too long...  :D

@oddball: yeah, I'm bad at making people drunk...  :panic:

@badsaints: yeah, I thought of making Ai kiss Risa again... but realistically, I figured it really wouldn't help with their current status, you know?  :P


Thanks for the comments~~~  :yossi: *WOOT*
So I got an idea for what to write about next :ding:
So here's a really short chapter that'll kinda lead up to it  :hee:

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Chapter 31

   Ai groaned as she rolled over on her bed, and fell on the floor.  Her body was aching all over as she tried to pick herself up.  She ruffled her hair and tried to come back to her senses again.

   She looked around.  Through her mirror, she saw that she was still wearing the tight tube-top dress.  But this was her room.  Ai tried to remember how she got home last night.  She remembered Risa’s voice… Thank goodness

   The idol smiled.  She had been forgiven.  Risa had come to find her and had forgiven her.  Just that fact alone took away all the previous aches the singer had felt.

   Ai reached for her pajamas— a white t-shirt and gray sweatpants— on the floor.  She quickly stripped down and put on the comfortable clothes as she hopped towards the bathroom.  She splashed cold water on her face and neck, and then put her hair up in a messy bun.  She walked out of her room to find Reina, sitting in the living room, eating cereal and watching TV.

   “You’re finally up?” the yankii asked.

   “Yeah…” Ai said.  She was surprised to hear her own voice; it was too hoarse and dry.  “Did you pick me up last night?”

   “Who else?”

   “Are you the one who told Gaki-san about the club?”

   “Once again, who else?”

   “Thanks, Reina.  I owe you one.”

   Ai smiled at her partner as Reina continued to focus on the TV.  Ai decided she would settle for cereal as breakfast as well, so she took a bowl and a spoon from the kitchen and sat down next to Reina in the living room.  As she poured herself some cereal and milk, the leader looked at the younger girl with a curious expression.

   “Do you have something you need to say?” Reina snapped.  “You’re staring at me, it’s kind of creepy.”

   “It’s just… you talked to Gaki-san,” Ai started.  “And you came to pick us up.  Does this mean… everything is settled?”

   “… I met Aika,” Reina said quietly.

   “… You did…” Ai said, trying to conceal the shock in her voice.  “Did Kamei-san…?”

   “Yeah.”

   “Oh.  So… how did that go?”

   “I got the answer I was looking for, I guess,” the yankii said.  She wasn’t watching the TV anymore.  Instead, she focused on swirling her spoon around in the bowl of leftover milk.  “I feel… lighter.”

   “That Kamei-san,” Ai laughed.  “She just changed you like that?  She’s pretty incredible.”

   “Yeah, incredibly stupid,” Reina mumbled.

   “I guess she didn’t change your way of speaking yet, huh?” Ai continued to laugh.  Reina ignored her.

   “Well, you seem to be in a better mood too,” Reina stated.

   “Yeah… I guess I am,” Ai answered, smiling to herself.  Risa had forgiven her; she had lost her but Risa had come back for her.

   “We have to leave soon,” Reina announced, turning the TV off.  “We have another recording for ‘Everyday Everywhere’.”

   “I guess neither of us will cry this time, right?” 

   Reina didn’t answer.  She just didn’t want to admit that she had cried last time.

   “Well,” Ai continued, standing up and stretching, “I guess I’ll change and go pick our staff up.”

   “What?  But I—” 

   Reina stood up, then stopped herself from saying more.  Ai noticed the yankii’s car keys dangling from her fingers.  The leader processed what her partner was about to say, and smiled mischievously.

   “Oh, that’s right; you got your car back from the repair store!” Ai gushed.  “Were you going to go pick Kamei-san and Gaki-san up?”

   “A-as if!” Reina yelled, her cheeks turning into a faint pink.  “They have legs; they can walk!” 

   With that, the yankii stomped back to her room and slammed the door.  Ai chuckled to herself as she went into her own room to get ready for the day.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 31 - (7/7)]
« Reply #164 on: July 07, 2010, 07:02:22 PM »
yay~ more takagaki now??? and longer chapter??? YES!
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 31 - (7/7)]
« Reply #165 on: July 07, 2010, 09:38:34 PM »
Hehe Reina is the same and yet changed slightly but I guess there is more to the action that meets the eye
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 31 - (7/7)]
« Reply #166 on: July 07, 2010, 11:26:02 PM »
Yay! Things are settling down! Now to concentrate o romance~!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 31 - (7/7)]
« Reply #167 on: July 08, 2010, 07:14:29 AM »
@kawaii beam: yes~ i'm excited too  :D

@kurosawa87: yup, Reina definitely is changing, little by little  XD

@rndmnwierd: I'm trying to get better at writing romance~  :wub:


Okay, this is the chapter that will lead up to the fun part (which comes in another couple chapters)  XD

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Chapter 32

   “Risa-chan, I’m going in after ten seconds!  Juu… kyuu… hachi… shichi—”

   “Niigaki Risa, present and ready to go!”

   “Aw, come on!”

   Eri crossed her arms and blew up her cheeks.  Risa ran down the stairs and jumped over the last three steps.  She made a mock salute to her friend with a grin.

   “And I really thought I was going to get to dress you today,” Eri complained.

   “Gomen, Kameha,” Risa said, winking.  “That day won’t come just yet.”

   The two friends were getting ready to leave for the studio.  There was another recording for the “Everyday Everywhere” promotion, and Eri wanted to get there with enough time to pamper High-Queen with all her fashion senses.  As usual, Risa had spent the night writing songs, so she had woken up late.  But luckily for her, she had managed to get ready fast enough to avoid the turtle’s fashion tornado. 

   “Fine fine,” Eri grumbled.  “But we still have to run, or we’re going to be late!”

   The two girls quickly ran out the door.  Eri ran for the sidewalk and froze.  Risa quickly locked the door and ran after her friend.

   “Eri, what’s wrong?” the bean asked, observing her friend’s surprised expression.  She turned her head towards the place Eri was staring at, and gasped. 

   Ai was leaning on the hood of her black convertible with her sunglasses shoved on her head.  Her wavy hair was tied into a low side ponytail that flowed down her shoulder.  She met Risa’s eyes and smiled.

   “Ohayou,” the idol greeted, trying to sound as gentle as possible.

   “Ohayou,” Risa replied, her shock slowly melting into happiness.  Happiness.  Yes, she was happy to see Ai.

   “Hi Kamei-san!  Oh, hi Takahashi-san!” Eri said in a sarcastic tone, acting out the scenario she had imagined.

   “Good morning to you too, Kamei-san,” Ai laughed.  “Don’t worry, I didn’t forget about you.”

   “Yeah, sure you didn’t,” Eri said, grinning.  “So what brings you here, Takahashi-san?  I thought we were meeting up at the studio.”

   “I came to pick you two up,” Ai answered.  “If that’s okay, I mean.”

   “Sure! We’re late anyway; might as well take up on the offer.  Right, Risa-chan?”

   “Um, yeah… I guess.”

   “Okay then.  I’ll sit in the back.  Risa, you can sit in the front.” 

   With that, Eri elbowed the bean and skipped over to the back of the car and helped herself in.  Risa calmly walked towards the front of the car to go around to the passenger seat.  Her eyes met with the idol’s.

   “How are you?” Ai said with a soft smile.

   “I think that’s my line,” Risa said in a teasing tone.

   “I guess you’re right,” Ai chuckled, recalling all the alcohol she had consumed the night before.  She looked at the bean with such gentleness and sincerity that Risa could almost tell what she was thinking.

   “Thank you for coming back.”

   “I could never leave you.”


   The younger girl proceeded to take the passenger seat and strapped herself in.  Ai crossed over to the driver’s seat and started the car.   

   As they were driving, the singer decided that she should thank Risa with actual words.

   “Gaki-san… thanks for coming to get me last night.  I guess… I kind of overdid it with the alcohol.”

   “Kind of?” Risa said, raising her eyebrows.

   “Okay, I definitely overdid it,” Ai admitted, grinning.  “So thank you… for forgiving me too.”

   “I kind of did it for myself too, though,” Risa said.  “I think I would’ve really regretted it if I didn’t go… I value our friendship too much.  I guess you’re a closer friend to me than I thought.”

   “And you are also a very important friend of mine,” Ai said, smiling.

   “Hey!” Eri interrupted, poking her head in between the two girls in the front.  “Sorry, Takahashi-san.  But no matter how close you two get, I’ll always be Risa-chan’s best friend!”

   “I just might fight you for that spot, Kamei-san,” Ai teased.

   “Oh, bring it on,” Eri said, grinning.  All three girls laughed as the black convertible dashed down the road.

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   Reina frowned as she tried to hook the black choker around her neck.  She let out a groan of frustration and turned to her fashion coordinator.

   “A little help?” the yankii yelled. 

   “There, Takahashi-san, you’re done,” Eri said to the High-Queen leader.  She walked over to Reina and took the choker from her hands.

   “You need me to do this again?” Eri said, smiling.  “It’s not that hard to put on, Tanaka-san.”

   “Just put the damn thing around my neck,” Reina snapped.

   “Turn around,” Eri giggled.  She easily hooked the choker around the singer’s neck and started to touch up on other parts of her costume.  “You know, Tanaka-san… I think we’re getting to be pretty good friends, don’t you?”

   “As if,” Reina grumbled.

   “Let’s change our referral names!” the turtle suggested.  “Can I call you by your first name?”

   “It doesn’t matter,” the yankii growled.

   “Maybe something cuter?  How about Tanakacchi?  Or Tanakitty?”

   “Reina is fine,” the singer sighed, giving up.

   “Then Reina-chan!” Eri exclaimed.  “I’ll call you Reina-chan, okay?”

   “Whatever.”

   “You should call me Eri-chan!  Or Eririn!”

   “I think just your name is fine.”

   “Fine,” Eri decided, puffing up her cheeks. 

   But her pout soon turned into a smile.  At least the idol was okay with the turtle calling her by her first name.  And she didn’t yell too much.  That was definitely an improvement in their relationship.  As long as they were going to work together, Eri had figured that she might as well get to know the stubborn yankii better.  She didn’t seem too terrible of a person.

   Soon, High-Queen was rushed to the set.  Once again, Eri and Risa placed themselves amidst the audience to watch the recording.

   “Takahashi-san,” the MC started.  “I heard it’s your birthday soon, isn’t it?”

   “Yes, it’s September 14th,” the leader answered.

   “Do you have any special plans for that day?” the MC questioned.

   “Nothing yet,” Ai answered as she put an arm around Reina.  “I guess I’ll just spend it with my favorite member right here.” 

   The idol group laughed as the audience cheered.  Risa gasped out loud.  She elbowed her friend next to her.

   “What day is it today?”

   “Friday.”

   “No, the date.”

   “September 7th.”

   Risa gasped again.  One week.  There was only one week left until Ai’s birthday.  Risa couldn’t just let that pass; she had to do something for her! 
A party!  Yes, a party would be great!  Just the four of them together: Ai, Reina, Eri, and herself.  They could celebrate at her house.  It could be a surprise…

   Risa clenched her fists.  She had decided.  She would plan a small party at her house with Eri and Reina.  Ai could not find out.  That meant Risa had to avoid her for the rest of the week.   After all, she was a terrible actress and a very bad liar. 

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 33 - (7/8)]
« Reply #168 on: July 08, 2010, 07:32:20 AM »
got me scared for chapter 33 XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 33 - (7/8)]
« Reply #169 on: July 08, 2010, 10:48:12 AM »
  :mon fyeah: Gaki gonna plan a surprise b-d party for Ai~
AWESOME~  :mon lovelaff:
hmm ..but why jz 4 of them ..  :roll:
why don't ya invite us ...  :D
We gonna have a big party then ..  :deejay
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 33 - (7/8)]
« Reply #170 on: July 08, 2010, 03:02:36 PM »
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“You’re so loud…” Reina grumbled.
XD

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“Are you always loud because you can’t hear yourself?” Reina said.  “I said get in the car.”
:lol:

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“I want you to go make up with her.”
Aww, very bossy  XD

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“I won’t go,” Risa said determinedly.  “I have nothing to say to her.  I won’t go.”
So stubborn  :angry:

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“Yeah, I guess you’re right, Yossy,”
Whoa!!! Ishiyoshi   :w00t: :otomerika:  :yossi:

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When she looked back, she saw that the couple had gone back to making out.  Rika was giggling.
OMG  XD  I so miss these two  :yep:

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A different girl was grinding into her from her back.  Her hands slipped down from Ai’s waist to her thighs…
NO!!! No one touches Ai but Risa  :angry:

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“What took you so long? I missed you~” 
Aww  :wub:

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The idol’s whiny protest continued all the way to the restroom.
Very lovely to imagine  :yep:

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The bean could've sworn she heard the yankii smirk through the phone.
Damn Yankii  XD

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“Who else?”
I'm now loving the yankii more  XD

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“Once again, who else?”
:lol:

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“Do you have something you need to say?” Reina snapped.  “You’re staring at me, it’s kind of creepy.”
Damn  :lol:

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“Hi Kamei-san!  Oh, hi Takahashi-san!” Eri said in a sarcastic tone, acting out the scenario she had imagined.
:lol:

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“Thank you for coming back.”

   “I could never leave you.”
:wub: :wub: :wub:

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party!  Yes, a party would be great!
Yes! Party! Fours... I mean the four of them  XD


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 33 - (7/8)]
« Reply #171 on: July 08, 2010, 03:14:24 PM »
So Reina is fully recovered from the Aika incident, it seems as though she is really struggling to not be really nice to Eri  :lol:

Hmm it's a nice idea to have a party for Ai but I'm worried about Risa avoiding her for a week, judging Ai's character it seem likely she will flip out again!

p.s. what's happening with Jun and Sayu? we havent had any of them for a while!  :cry:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 33 - (7/8)]
« Reply #172 on: July 08, 2010, 05:05:25 PM »
PARTY TIME~~~

but wouldnt that cause a bit more drama cus ai will probably think she did something wrong again if risa's avoiding her

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 33 - (7/8)]
« Reply #173 on: July 08, 2010, 05:29:52 PM »
@kurosawa87: yup! Risa's planning alright~  :D

@Thor87: There's a reason why it's just the four of them~  :P

@kRisZ:
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Yes! Party! Fours... I mean the four of them  XD
LOL I prefer two-two  XD

@oddball: I was actually waiting for someone to ask about SayuJun XD They're coming back after the party so don't worry. Sayu's bringing the evil back  :twisted:

@kawaii beam: eh, Ai won't freak out too much... I don't want to torture TakaGaki again... yet  XD


thanx for the comments~  :cow:
The next two chapters will be kinda short... But the chapter after that should be good  :D

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Chapter 33

   “So tell me; why do I have to do this again?”

   “Because it’s your leader’s birthday, that’s why!”

   Risa was hunched over in the hallway while whispering to Reina about her party plan.  The yankii had taken a more comfortable stance of standing up straight and crossing her arms.  She raised an eyebrow.

   “So you want me to help you get this ‘party’ going?” Reina asked, making air quotes with her fingers.

   “I can do all the work with Kameha, Tanaka-san,” Risa reassured.  “Just be at my house on the fourteenth! And don’t tell Ai-san!”

   “And what do I get for doing this?” Reina asked, narrowing her eyes.

   “Come on, you can’t even go to a party for your own leader? I thought she was important to you!”

   “… Fine.  I’ll be there.  But I’m bringing alcohol.”  The idol smiled smugly.

   “… Fine,” Risa decided, grinding her teeth.  “You can indulge yourself in it, but I’m keeping Ai-san away.”

   “Fine.”

   “Fine.”

   “What are you two talking about?” a familiar voice asked.

   Risa let out a “GAH!” as she jumped away from the voice behind her.  Ai looked at her with a confused expression.  The bean kept her head down to hide her “lying face” and skittered behind Reina.  Ai raised an eyebrow.  Reina shrugged.  Risa tugged on the yankii’s shirt.

   “Help me!” the bean whispered.

   “Why do I need to—”

   “Just help me!” Risa whispered desperately.

   “Um… Gaki-san?  What’s going on?” Ai asked.

   “Oh, our song writer just had a couple things to critique me on,” Reina said, smiling sweetly at her leader.  She wrapped her arms around the bean into a hug.  Risa buried her face into the yankii’s chest.  “Thank you so much, Niigaki-san.  You helped so much.”

   “No problem,” Risa mumbled.

   “Well then, let’s get back into the dressing room—”

   “Wait!” Ai interrupted, pulling Risa away from Reina’s embrace.  “I have something to say to Gaki-san.”

   Risa looked at Reina with an alarmed expression.  Reina just shrugged, making her “I tried” face.  She proceeded to walk back into the dressing room, leaving Risa completely unguarded.  The bean covered her face with both her hands.

   “Gaki-san, are you okay?” Ai asked, concerned.  “Did you get hurt somewhere?  Let me see—”

   “No!” Risa yelled, backing away from the singer’s extended hands.  “Uh, I, uh… Oh, look! Someone’s calling me!”  The younger girl turned around to run but Ai caught her arms.

   “No one’s calling you,” the leader laughed.  “What’s going on, Gaki-san?  Why are you covering your face?”

   “I, uh, um, so, uh, that, I…”

   “There you are, Risa-chan!”

   Eri grabbed Risa by her shoulders and started to drag her away.  She held up a hand to Ai.

   “Sorry, Takahashi-san,” the turtle apologized.  “I need to see Risa-chan for a while, please excuse her.”

   With that, the two friends ran down the hallway and turned a corner.  They leaned on the wall and breathed heavily.

   “Kameha,” Risa huffed.  “You’re a lifesaver.”

   “I don’t know… how you’re planning this party… when you’re such a terrible liar,” Eri gasped. 

   “That’s why I have to avoid Ai-san this week!” Risa explained.  “I can’t have her find out about this!”

   “But you just made up with her!” Eri argued.  “She’s going to think you’re mad again or something.”

   “It’s only a week,” Risa said.  “Ai-san is mature enough to handle herself… I think.”

   “That makes one of us,” Eri said, rolling her eyes.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 33 - (7/8)]
« Reply #174 on: July 09, 2010, 01:17:26 AM »
what happened?????

cmon we can't break the TakaGakiness :)
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« Reply #175 on: July 09, 2010, 01:27:17 AM »
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“… Fine.  I’ll be there.  But I’m bringing alcohol.”  The idol smiled smugly.

 I'm really fond of this line  XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 33 - (7/8)]
« Reply #176 on: July 09, 2010, 01:30:25 AM »
ah! finaly this site works!!! all day i've been trying to get on her for the next chappy!

if only risa knew how hard its gonna be to avoid ai for a week XDD and i wonder what ai wanted to talk to risa about??
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 33 - (7/8)]
« Reply #177 on: July 09, 2010, 03:13:21 AM »
@kurosawa87: don't worry, i'm not breaking TakaGaki  XD

@Swtme03: LOL I'll try to write whenever I can!  :D

@kawaii beam: I KNOW i've been trying to access it for the whole day! during that time, I finished two more chapters...  XD


OKAY I was going to post this chapter right after I posted the last one, but it wasn't letting me access the site  :smhid
So anyways, here's the next short chapter.

The one after this is longer, I just have to edit it  :)

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Chapter 34

   The black convertible raced down the road, away from the city area.  Ai had gotten a phone call from Eri, just a couple minutes ago, to come to her house.  Apparently, Risa wanted to talk to her about something important.

   The bean had ignored the leader for the entire week.  Whenever Ai started a conversation, Risa would completely butcher her words and turn her attention on someone else nearby, like Eri or Reina. 

   Ai still couldn’t forget how Reina had hugged Risa before.  What was going on between those two?  Reina was supposed to be harmless now, wasn’t she?  Why would she hug Risa?  And why would Risa let her?  Wait. Stop.  Why was Ai even thinking about this?  Could she be… jealous?

   Actually, yes.  Ai didn’t mind admitting that she was jealous.  She considered Risa a very good friend; a friend she couldn’t bare to lose.  She wanted to be one of Risa’s closest people.  Eri was very close to Risa, which was understandable.  But when did Reina come in to the picture?  She didn’t hate all humanity now, but the yankii still preferred to be left alone, right?

   Ai had suffered from thinking about various things that could’ve made Risa ignore her again.  Did she regret forgiving her?  Was she mad about something else?  Does she want to cut off ties with her?  Is that why she called her over to her house? 

   What a great day.  And today is Ai’s birthday too; was Risa going to make her special day a miserable one?

   Ai finally parked in front of the familiar white house.  She jumped out of her car and locked it.  She sighed, straightened her back, and marched over to the front door. 

   “Calm down,” she thought.  “I can do this.  I’m sure it’s nothing too bad…

   With that, Ai rang the doorbell.  There was no answer.  Ai knocked a couple times and received silence again.  She tried the door handle; it was unlocked.

   Ai slowly pushed the door open.  She took off her shoes and walked into the living room.  All the lights were off.

   “Hello?” the idol called, nervously.

   Suddenly, the lights turned on with a loud explosion of a firecracker.  Ai screamed as streamers and confetti shot into her face.

   “Surprise!” Eri and Risa yelled, laughing.  “Happy birthday!”

   Ai looked around, turning her head this way and that.  The living room was decorated with various streamers and ribbons.  There were plates of food and a cake on the coffee table, along with a pyramid of beer cans on the ground.  Reina was sitting on the sofa, wearing a blue pointy party hat, looking utterly bored.  Risa and Eri were on either side of the doorway, also wearing the party hats, holding empty firecrackers.

   “What, I, huh?” Ai stammered.

   “It’s your birthday party, Takahashi-san!” Eri exclaimed, who was wearing an orange party hat.  “Risa planned it, just for the four of us!  Do you like it?”

   Ai turned towards the bean who was wearing a green party hat.  Risa grinned and placed a yellow party hat on Ai’s head. 

   “Happy birthday, Ai-san!” Risa congratulated.  “Were you surprised?”

   “Is this why you were avoiding me the whole week?” Ai asked.

   “Yup!  You’re not mad… are you?”

   “I am so mad,” Ai said, laughing.  She hugged Risa tightly, and then proceeded to hug Eri.  “Thank you.  All of you.  Especially you, Reina.”  The leader pointed at the yankii and winked.

   “Yeah, you’re lucky I’m here,” Reina grumbled.  “Just spare me from the hug, will you?”

   All three of the girls laughed as Reina waved a piece of ribbon from her hat away from her face.

   “Sit, sit, sit!” Risa ordered, setting down four cushions on the floor.  “We’re going to eat, talk, and drink all night!”

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The next two chapters should be a bit more exciting~ (I always say that, don't I?)  XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 34 - (7/8)]
« Reply #178 on: July 09, 2010, 03:22:37 AM »
ok so i wasnt the only one that couldnt get in cant wait for the longer chapter and i see ai's jealousy is slightly knawing at her lol
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 34 - (7/8)]
« Reply #179 on: July 09, 2010, 03:26:54 AM »
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The next two chapters should be a bit more exciting~ (I always say that, don't I?)  XD

You never fail to disappoint either  :thumbsup

CAN'T WAIT!!!  :panic: :)

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