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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 36 - (7/9)]
« Reply #200 on: July 10, 2010, 03:04:06 PM »
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“… Fine.  I’ll be there.  But I’m bringing alcohol.”
Whoa! That would be a blast party  :D

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“I, uh, um, so, uh, that, I…”
XD

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Ai still couldn’t forget how Reina had hugged Risa before. 
I knew it, she was jealous  :mon dance:

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Could she be… jealous?
Yes, you are my dear  :yep:

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Reina was sitting on the sofa, wearing a blue pointy party hat, looking utterly bored
I'm so loving  your Reina  :yep:

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“We’re going to eat, talk, and drink all night!”
And do some ahem things I hope lol

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“Nee~ Reina-chan~” Eri giggled, “Do you want to kiss me?”
OMG  :w00t:  :w00t:  :w00t:

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“What about Eri, you’re just going to leave her here?”
Why are you afraid Reina  XD

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But you’re not after her right now; Eri is after you,” Risa replied innocently.
:lol:

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“Okay, that’s it!” Reina thought.  “I don’t care if she regrets it later; she started this!”
Yay! Go Reina  :onioncheer:  :onioncheer:  :onioncheer:

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“Trust me; you’ll regret it later,” Reina whispered.
What if she wont  :angry: lol

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Unconsciously, Risa started to slowly lean down to Ai’s face.  Her face got closer and closer… until Risa closed her eyes as their lips met.
TakaGaki  :wub:  :cow:  :wriggly:  :nya: :luvluv1: :mon money: :gmon twirl: :k-inlove:

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  “So you wanted to kiss me that much?” she said.
OH!!! EM!!! GE!!! I so love it  :mon fyeah: :mon fyeah: :mon fyeah:

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But the idol didn’t answer.  Risa soon realized from her rhythm of breathing that Ai had fallen asleep again.
NO!!! But at least they kissed  :mon money: :mon money: :mon money:

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the turtle’s eyes were half closed and she had a goofy grin
One of the reasons why I so love Eri  :D

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“Reina-chan and I were having so much fun downstairs, you should’ve joined us~”
lol for threesome.?.  XD


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How was that?  :wahaha:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 36 - (7/9)]
« Reply #201 on: July 10, 2010, 09:54:06 PM »
That was HOT!!!!!!!! :D :drool:
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   It was a soft, gentle kiss; their lips were merely touching.  But Risa felt her cheeks get hotter and hotter.  She pushed her lips harder against Ai’s, eager for more.  Then, she slowly backed away and looked at Ai’s peaceful face.  She touched her own cheeks; they were burning up.
Cuuuuute! XD
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Suddenly, Ai’s lips curved into a smile.

   “So you wanted to kiss me that much?” she said.

   Before Risa could even gasp in shock, Ai pulled the younger girl towards her and flipped over, pinning Risa down to the bed.
OMG! :shocked: :lol: :drool:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 36 - (7/9)]
« Reply #202 on: July 11, 2010, 08:51:37 PM »
@kawaii beam: lol I know, I think I rly like drunk Ai too  :thumbsup

@Swtme03: I'm trying to imagine a perv chapter... still nothing's coming  :nervous but i'm working on it!

@kurosawa87: yeah, Eri's just... 'daijoubu, daijoubu~"  :grin:

@badsaints: no, Eri doesn't like Reina YET... she was drunk :P  Yeah, not necessary vacation, it's like a summer camp. but i'll enjoy it, hopefully 8)

@rndmnwierd: YES it does deserve another quote  XD

@Thor87: lol I love Takagaki too~ btw, love your pro pic  :D

@kRisZ: YES love you for the new page :D

@Fushigidane: thank you~~~ :inlove: XD


omg... so many comments... i'm crying of joy! :cow: :farofflook:
Sorry for not updating... but it's getting harder and harder to write, i just don't have enough time... :cry:
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Chapter 37

   “But that can’t be right! I was sure I was winning!”

   “Shige-san, I called ‘uno’ when I had one card left.  Then I placed it with the right number, so I won.”

   “But you didn’t even give me a chance to say ‘uno’!”

   “That’s the whole point of the game!”

   Sayumi put down her cards on the bed and crossed her arms.  She puffed up her cheeks into a pout, just like a child.  Junjun stared at this black-haired beauty for a while, then smiled. 

   The two girls were playing Uno while waiting for Risa and Eri to arrive at the hospital.  Junjun had won twice already, and every time Sayumi realized the outcome of the game, she had complained and protested.  Normally, one would already by annoyed by this.  But to the panda, Sayumi’s tantrums and pouting seemed cute and charming in a way.

   “Okay, Shige-san,” Junjun finally said.  “We’ll play one more time, okay?  Do your best now!”

   Sayumi’s pout slowly transitioned into an excited smile.  “Really?”

   “Yup.  I’ll shuffle the deck again.”

   “Okay!” the younger girl exclaimed, clapping her hands. 

   “How cute,” Junjun thought, chuckling to herself.  “She’s just like a child.  I guess this is the part of her that attracts me to her…

   “Knock, knock!” Someone yelled by the door.  Sayumi immediately turned her head and grinned.

   “Eririn!  Risa-chan!” the bunny exclaimed.

   “Well, I guess there’s no third round of Uno,” the panda thought.

   “Hey, Sayu!  Hey, Junjun!” the turtle greeted.

   “You girls seem lively today,” the bean said.

   The two friends walked in and sat down on the chairs lined up by the bed next to Junjun.  Sayumi was practically bouncing in her bed as she held Risa’s hands, then Eri’s. 

   “You guys didn’t visit for such a long time!” she accused.  “I was starting to think maybe you guys forgot about me…”

   “How could we forget about you, Sayu?” Risa replied.

   “No offense, but your voice is kind of hard to forget,” Eri teased.

   “Ha-ha,” Sayumi said sarcastically, sticking out her tongue.  Eri stuck out her tongue as well.

   “You know that I’m going to be released from the hospital soon,” Sayumi reminded.  “We’re all going to hang out together, right?”

   “Of course,” Risa answered.  “Junjun, you should come along too!  Eri and I’ll treat you; after all, you’ve taken care of Sayu so well while we couldn’t visit.”

   “I guess I won’t turn down a good meal then,” the panda replied.  “Anything spicy is good, okay?”

   “Don’t even attempt to satisfy her taste, Risa-chan,” Sayumi said, frowning.  “She doesn’t think any food in the world is spicy!  Anything that burns our tongue is just a mild zest to this girl.”

   “Hey, those chicken wings really weren’t spicy!” Junjun complained.  “They were way below my expectations!”

   “I drank a gallon of water because of those wings!” Sayumi argued.  “I was going back and forth from the bathroom all night!”

   “Alright guys, we get the point,” Eri laughed.  “Junjun likes spicy food; got it.”

   “So what are you guys up to these days?  Anything exciting happen lately?” Sayumi asked.

   “Oh, we had a birthday party for Ai-chan yesterday,” Eri answered.  “You know, the leader of High-Queen?”

   “Yeah, I remember,” Sayumi said.  “Was it fun, Risa-chan?”

   “Huh?  Oh, yeah… it was… um, fun…” Risa mumbled.

   She started the remember the night before again; the way Ai had kissed her, the way she had touched her thighs, the way she had whispered in her ears…  The idol was half-dead in the morning; she had a massive headache from drinking too much.  But she and Reina had still left the house early in the morning for vocal training.  Risa didn’t have a chance to talk to her about their interaction, so the bean had decided to bring it up at DFA this afternoon.  There was a meeting about High-Queen’s next single, now that promotions for “Everyday Everwhere” was over.

   But Risa had felt uneasy the entire night and day.  Various questions had roamed through her mind.  Why did Ai kiss her?  Did she know what she was doing?  Was she still drunk during that time?  Where does this leave the two of them…? 

   While Risa was being tortured by having no answers to any of these inquiries, Eri did not have anything weighing in her mind.  She didn’t remember anything from when she was drunk; when she woke up in the morning, the turtle was her usual cheerful self while Reina didn’t say a word and refused to meet eyes with anybody.  Risa had noticed how awkward Reina was acting in the morning, so she deduced that something probably happened between her and Eri.  But her friend seemed perfectly happy and fine, so the bean didn’t think too much about it.

   “Takahashi Ai is very pretty…” Sayumi said in a low voice, smiling.

   “Yeah, she is,” Eri agreed.  “Reina-chan is pretty too, you know.”

   “Yes, her too…” Sayumi mumbled.  Then, she clasped her hands together and opened her eyes widely, appearing like an angel.  “When I’m released, can you take me to DFA, please?  I really want to see what it’s like there.  Please, Risa-chan?  Please, Eririn?”

   “I don’t see why we can’t,” Eri replied.

   “Yeah, I guess it’s okay…” Risa agreed. 

   “Yay!  Thank you so much, guys!”  Sayumi held out her arms to hug her two friends.

   “No problem,” Eri said, grinning.  “But now we have to leave.  We have a meeting for High-Queen’s next single.”

   “Aw, so soon?”  The bunny pouted.

   “Yeah,” Risa said.  “Don’t worry; we’ll definitely hang out when you get released, okay?”

   “Okay.”  Sayumi nodded.

   “Junjun, you should also come with us to DFA next time,” Risa offered.

   “I think I’ll do that,” the panda replied.

   “Okay, we really have to leave now,” Eri said.  “Bye, Sayu.  Bye, Jun.”

   “See you!”

   “Bye.”

   Risa and Eri left the room and closed the door.  Sayumi started to fumble around with the Uno cards laid out on her bed.  Her lips curved into a small smile.

   “Junjun,” she started, “will you do me a favor?”

   “Sure.  Anything, Shige-san,” Junjun answered, excitedly.

   “Anything?”

   “Yes, anything.”

   “Great!” Sayumi exclaimed, her smile growing bigger.  “Here’s what you need to do…”

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 37 - (7/11)]
« Reply #203 on: July 11, 2010, 10:59:17 PM »
...u are one eveil lady.....thats all i will say XDD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 37 - (7/11)]
« Reply #204 on: July 12, 2010, 12:40:23 AM »
Woah! :shocked: What's that evil Sayumi gonna do?! XD Waaa~ :panic: :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 37 - (7/11)]
« Reply #205 on: July 12, 2010, 01:50:55 AM »
Sayu has an evil plan hehehehehehe
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 37 - (7/11)]
« Reply #206 on: July 12, 2010, 02:07:27 AM »
Uh-oh, evil Sayu strikes! (again?)

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 37 - (7/11)]
« Reply #207 on: July 12, 2010, 05:19:21 PM »
Chapter 36:

Naughty Risa trying to take advantage of seeping Ai  :lol:

perhaps you should of jioned in with Reina and Eri though  :drool:

Chapter 37:

Yay SayuJun return! Poor Jun, I geet the nasty feeling that she is gonna get used by Sayu, I wonder if Sayu has realised that Jun likes her and is using that?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 37 - (7/11)]
« Reply #208 on: July 13, 2010, 06:06:27 AM »
@kawaii beam: yes, i AM evil  :twisted:

@Fushigidane: he he he... you'll see  8)

@kurosawa87: yes she does~ kinda XD

@rndmnwierd: well, kinda... she'll strike alright :P

@oddball: hm... the question is whether sayu is evil enough to use jun... i'll leave that up to you for now :D


thanx for the comments~ I AM getting late on the updates, I'm doing my best!!! :shocked

Here's a REALLY short chapter. I planned it to be longer, but I wanted to update with SOMETHING.  :nervous

But I think I got the point across... right? XD

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Chapter 38

   “So nobody has anything new to show us today?” Tsunku said.  “Nothing fresh?”

   “I always have songs in my notebook,” Risa claimed.  “But I think it’s best if we wait a little longer and see what else I come up with.  I want High-Queen to get a song that they will enjoy.”

   “I like the sound of that,” Ai agreed.  “Reina and I’ll work with Risa to see if we can find anything we like.”

   “You mean you’ll work with Risa,” Reina cut in.  “I don’t really care.”

   “Okay, okay,” Tsunku concluded.  “Do whatever you need to do.  But for now, don’t you girls have vocal training soon?”

   “We had it in the morning,” Ai replied.  “We have dance training now.”

   “Okay then, hop to it,” Tsunku ordered.  “Meeting over.”

   The producer got up from his chair and left the room.  The other staff members also started to gather their things and leave.  Ai and Reina also got up and started to leave the room.  Eri skittered over to Risa who was packing her notebook in her bag.

   “Nee, Risa-chan,” the turtle started.  “I think I want to go watch High-Queen’s dance practice; I’m kind of curious.  Do you want to come with me?”

   “No, I think I should go home and think of some new songs I could write,” Risa said.  “But I do have to talk to Ai before I leave…”  The bean felt that she really needed to talk to the leader about their… incident.

   “Okay, suit yourself.” 

   With that, Eri skipped out of the room to follow the idol group.  Risa walked after her into the hallway and looked around for the leader.  Reina and Eri were already in the elevator but Ai was nowhere to be sighted.  Suddenly, someone grabbed the bean’s shoulders, causing her to jump.

   “Hey, Risa!” Ai greeted.

   “Ai!” Risa whispered loudly.  “Don’t scare me like that!”

   “Sorry,” Ai laughed.  “I just wanted to thank you for the party last night; it was absolutely phenomenal!”

   “Yeah, um, about that—”

   “I’m so sorry that Reina and I had to stay overnight though.  I guess I must’ve dozed off in the living room.”

   “Yeah, about— wait, what?”  Living room?

   “I guess drank a little too much, huh?” Ai scratched her head and grinned.  “I’ll lay off the alcohol a bit, I guess.  But thanks for the party, it was wonderful.”

   “Um… yeah… I guess,” Risa said slowly.  “She doesn’t remember anything? She doesn’t remember the kiss? That’s… good, isn’t it?  Things won’t be awkward between us.  We can be the way we always were… but why do I feel uneasy?

   “So I have to go to dance training now,” Ai said.  “I’ll catch you next time, okay?”

   “Yeah… next time,” Risa answered, smiling awkwardly.

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Let me just say I actually got the next couple chapters laid out, so i AM working on this. I just have to type it XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 38 - (7/13)]
« Reply #209 on: July 13, 2010, 06:10:48 AM »
lol u are~ and great to know that u have everything laid out XD i'm pretty lazy to type up my next chapter in my fic lol and i feel kinda bad that ai forgot but happy for risa at the same time^^;
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 38 - (7/13)]
« Reply #210 on: July 13, 2010, 06:14:27 AM »
ai forgetting???? hmm can't wait for the next chapter
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 38 - (7/13)]
« Reply #211 on: July 13, 2010, 06:38:23 AM »
NOO!!!!  :bleed eyes:
REMEBER AI!!! REMEMBER!!!  :cry:

*sigh.... I guess I could wait a few chapters before things get heated again...  :(
Risa obviously wants Ai to remember so I think she'll stay pretty close  :)

And as for TanaKame...how about that sweet and innocent torture?  :roll:  :twisted:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 38 - (7/13)]
« Reply #212 on: July 13, 2010, 07:15:20 AM »
" ..... but why do I feel uneasy.. ?" ... coz .. U LOVE HER Gaki~   :kekeke:
still don't wanna admit ... hmmm ..   :angry:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 38 - (7/13)]
« Reply #213 on: July 13, 2010, 08:26:01 AM »
Hmm is that just Ai telling Risa she doesn't remember so they wouldn't feel awkward :P
They should just write a song about their cute and hot relationships! ♪ :P

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 38 - (7/13)]
« Reply #214 on: July 13, 2010, 11:47:16 AM »
Hmm poor Risa, wants to aplogise to Ai for kissing her but when Ai says she cant remeber Risa is upset, she wanted Ai to remeber  :wub:. I wonder if Ai might remember however and just not be saying anything as she is afraid of loosing Risa again!

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« Reply #215 on: July 13, 2010, 02:07:29 PM »
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But to the panda, Sayumi’s tantrums and pouting seemed cute and charming in a way.
Hit by cupid  :D

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“No offense, but your voice is kind of hard to forget,” Eri teased.
XD

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  “You know that I’m going to be released from the hospital soon,”
Interesting  :w00t: but wait it's TakaGaki's fate that's on the line  :O

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Risa had noticed how awkward Reina was acting in the morning, so she deduced that something probably happened between her and Eri.  But her friend seemed perfectly happy and fine, so the bean didn’t think too much about it.
XD

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“Anything?”
Sounds fishy

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“I’m so sorry that Reina and I had to stay overnight though.  I guess I must’ve dozed off in the living room.”
No! She forgot about the kiss!!!  :smhid or maybe she lied  :w00t: lol


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 38 - (7/13)]
« Reply #216 on: July 13, 2010, 03:00:05 PM »
Takagaki plot thickens. Now, just to add in a spice of sexiness and some chopped lovin' and maybe a dash of evil Sayu plans and we'll be set to serve. Mmm, food metaphors, man I'm starving. :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 38 - (7/13)]
« Reply #217 on: July 13, 2010, 03:23:17 PM »
Osnap Jun is about to become a pawn in Sayu's game :shocked


Ai remember the previous night event the first time but not this time. WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU AI?! :angry: That was some alcohol Reina brought :lol: So will Risa try to jolt Ai's memory? :P


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 38 - (7/13)]
« Reply #218 on: July 14, 2010, 06:14:53 AM »
@kawaii beam: yup yup~ TakaGaki will continue on thought :thumbsup

@kurosawa87: the chapter after this one should explain more XD

@Swtme03: well... there's torture but it's a different kind of torture :)

@Thor87: LOL I second your statement XD

@Fushigidane: hm... we'll see 8)

@oddball: again, we'll see  :twisted:

@kRisZ: this whole story is fishy XD

@rndmnwierd: LOVE food metaphors (and just plain food) XD :inlove:

@badsaints: LOL no, not just the two of them. I imagined the other staff members being in there too, i was just too lazy/busy to write it XD


Guys... I LOVE YOU ALL. :wub:
It is a happy night when I come back from this horrible summer program thing and I read all the comments. :cow:

So I worked all night on this chapter for y'all~  :P
Things are definitely heating up so stay tuned! :twothumbs

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Chapter 39

   “Reina, you missed that beat again!”

   “Okay! I’m doing what I can, damn it!”

   High-Queen’s dance instructor shook her head in misery.  The idols were dressed in T-shirt and sweatpants as well as the teacher herself.  She picked up her water bottle from the corner of the mirrored room.

   “You know what? I went over this part so many times; there’s nothing I can do for you girls anymore.  Ai, work with Reina please?  I’m supposed to be leaving early today.  I have to pick up my niece from her kindergarten school.”

   “Will do that,” Ai answered.

   The stressed dance instructor grabbed her gym bag and walked out of the dance studio.  On the way out, she gave a polite nod to Eri, sitting on a folding chair by the door.

   “Why are you here?” Reina yelled at the turtle as soon as the teacher was out of sight.

   “I was curious,” Eri answered innocently, “about how your dance practices work and stuff.”

   “There’s nothing interesting,” Reina snapped angrily.  “Go home!”

   “Reina,” Ai said sternly.  “Over here, with me, now.”

   The yankii glared at the turtle on more time before turning to face her leader.

   “What?” Reina asked, annoyed.

   “Hey, why are you bagging out on Eri?” Ai whispered.  “And you usually pick up on the dance steps fast; what’s wrong with you today?”

   “I don’t like having an audience,” Reina grumbled, tilting her head towards Eri.

   “Yeah, right,” Ai scoffed.  “You can perform in from of thousands of people at Nakano Sun Plaza but you can’t dance in front of one girl.”

   “She’s not just one girl, she’s…”

   “Yes?”

   “… Ugh! Never mind, you won’t understand!”

   With that, Reina turned back and stomped towards the boom box to turn on the music.  Ai’s lips curved up a little as she started to realize something.  She gave a comforting smile to her fashion coordinator, who had a worried expression.

   “Right,” Ai said, trying to hold down a laugh.  “So let’s go from the top again.”

   Reina kicked the boom box alive and the fast dance beat started to fill the studio again.  Ai and Reina crossed as they started to dance while Eri stared with admiration.  The yankii seemed unfocused and kept on turning her head this way and that. 

   Once again, half way into the song, Reina missed a beat as she tripped over her own foot and fell.  Eri jumped out of her chair as Ai ran to the radio to turn the music off.

   “Reina-chan!” Eri yelled, panicking.  “Are you okay?  Are you hurt?”

   The turtle crouched in front of the yankii and put her hand on her shoulders.  Reina froze at that moment; her head was still down.

   “I’m fine,” the idol muttered.

   “Here, let me take a look at it,” Eri said.  Before Reina could protest, the older girl pushed up Reina’s pants above her knees to reveal a large pink spot; a burn from the glossy dance floor.

   “That doesn’t look… good,” Ai said, whistling.

   “Oh my gosh, that must hurt a lot!  Here, let me help,” Eri said. 

   She scavenged a handkerchief and a water bottle from her bag.  She wet the hankie and lightly dabbed Reina’s wound.  The idol’s hands shot forward to grab Eri’s wrist.

   “Stop, I’m fine!” Reina yelled.  She felt the heat rising up her cheeks.  “And don’t touch me, I—”

   “No! Not this time, Reina-chan,” Eri said firmly.  “Just stay still!”

   The yankii glared at the turtle for a while, realized she was still holding her wrist, and immediately removed her hands and looked away.  Eri carried on her medical action for the idol.  Ai stood behind Eri and studied Reina’s red face with a smirk.

   “There, it feels better now right?” Eri asked with a smile.  “It should’ve cooled down the burn a little bit.”

   “Whatever,” Reina mumbled.  She immediately got up before anybody could stop her and walked out of the room.

   “I’m guessing dance practice is over,” Ai said.

   “She still isn’t so fond of me, is she?” Eri sighed.  “I can tell she’s a nice person; how can I get her to open up more?”

   “Don’t worry, Eri,” Ai comforted.  “She’ll loosen up; just give her time.  She’s actually opened up more than you know…”

   “She is?” Eri asked, widening her eyes.

   “Well, I know her from before so… yeah,” Ai rephrased.  “Don’t worry, just be yourself.  Everything will be fine.”

   “Really?” Eri questioned, unsure.

   “Yeah,” Ai smiled mischievously.  “I promise.”

   Meanwhile, Reina was limping down the hallway to the locker rooms, so she could get her bag.  She kept on slapping her own cheeks as if to stay awake.

   “Get a hold of yourself!” she thought.  “What the hell is wrong with me? It’s just when she touches me… I don’t know anymore!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 39 - (7/14)]
« Reply #219 on: July 14, 2010, 08:26:42 AM »
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“And you usually pick up on the dance steps fast; what’s wrong with you today?”
I know  :w00t: she's self-conscious that the turtle's around watching  :D

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“I don’t like having an audience,”
See I'm correct  :P

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“She’s not just one my girl
Fixed  XD

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Reina froze at that moment
She's feeling the LOVE electricity  :grin:

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the older girl pushed up Reina’s pants above her knees
When I read it what registered in my mind was she pulled down Reina's pants  :lol: damn

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Ai stood behind Eri and studied Reina’s red face with a smirk.
Good leader  :D

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“What the hell is wrong with me? It’s just when she  touches me… I don’t know anymore!”
Totally electrified  :yep:


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