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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #520 on: August 09, 2010, 07:28:44 AM »
 :cry:feeling quite blue after learning about the graduation new~  :cry:

but...back to the story... GakiKame :lol: on "cute" lingerine hunt :lol:
Reina just being so crazy over her lover!!!     XD XD XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #521 on: August 09, 2010, 07:29:41 AM »
It took me a while to get the resolve and willpower to read this... it was just too hard to bring myself to imagine everything in head after the news of Eri's graduation...  :mon cry:
so this comment might not be that insightful, but I hope you will keep fighting on and write this story til its end :mon yeah:
Everything's been pretty much hurting for me for almost a day now, so I really don't know how long I can hold out. I'm haven't been taking the news really well :cry:
If I can't get over it and continue reading, just remember I'm always here supporting you in my heart, even if I won't be commenting as much anymore. :) I'll try my best though!

@the chapter: Lol at the sexy lingerie plan! I wonder how well it would work out this time? :roll:
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“How can I be uncomfortable,” Risa mumbled.
haha, gakisan... well maybe because you were getting turned on by the hot Tanakame action behind you :twisted: :roll: jk.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #522 on: August 09, 2010, 12:51:51 PM »
Omg, I've had the worst night. I'm so glad that I could come home and read a new chapter from you, I feel better after a little Tanakame 'playfulness' and Takagaki cuteness. I can't believe Eri talked Risa into lingerie!  :drool: I so can't wait!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #523 on: August 09, 2010, 03:59:23 PM »
Mass chapter catch up again  :panic:

Chapter 67+68: Aww tanakame fluff and then tanakame SMEX!!!! :wub:

chapter 69: Hawaii ehh, nice for them, nice how Tsunku thought of Risa(if slightly convinient :P) Poor Risa canty say the word 'sex'  :lol:

Chapter 70: Ha Reina's abousing Eri in the plane :lol: I don't think it's helping Risa's nerves however XD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #524 on: August 09, 2010, 06:58:39 PM »
O_O finally i caught up and can comment! XD

left for family trip and tried to stay updated on ur chapters as best as i could, and i have to say

 :wub:  :inlove: :wub:  :inlove: :wub: :wub: :wub: LOVE them~! pervs were..  :twisted: hot~!

hmm hawaii huh? i can't wait to see what happens  :twisted: XDDD

even with the news of the grad i want to say this... tanakamei and takagaki love is forever!   :farofflook:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #525 on: August 10, 2010, 12:54:26 AM »
Ooh~this chapter is extremely amusing and funny
Reina just can't keep her hands to herself :P
Poor Gaki-san, having to do some "mental exercise"
The last line was the best! Made me :lol: when Ai said she wanted to punch Reina

Please update soon~

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #526 on: August 10, 2010, 06:49:12 AM »
@Swtme03: I shall indeed...  :gyaaah:

@kawaii beam: oh yes, the lingerie... XD

@fallenxangel: Yes, REina and her turtle-love :twisted:

@kurosawa87: of course Ai can help her relieve the feeling, who else? XD

@aussie: yeah, whenever I write about ERi now, it feels weird, and I don't like that... :cry: but i'll still continue, nevertheless!!!

@kano-chan: Ai-chan is already flipped just for Gaki herself  XD

@Ada: aww~ glad this made you feel better :)

@yellow: yes, the story shall continue on with its cuteness!!! :farofflook:

@xanimefreak13x: I totally understand... but I'm still going to do my best with this fic, especially if it makes any fans feel better :cool1:

@rndmnwierd: I'm glad this made you feel better, I think that's going to be my aim now :D

@oddball: yeah, Risa's nerves won't be calm for a while :twisted:

@lonewind: DITTO on the last statement :kneelbow:

@sapphire: update now~ XD


Even during all the graduation news, I'm glad my fic is making a little bit of happiness... thanx for the comments :kneelbow:
This story will continue, nevertheless :farofflook:

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Chapter 71

   “On the count of three, okay?”

   The rest of the girls nodded at the leader’s words.  The four friends were on the sandy beach, wrapped up in large towels.  They were all in their bikinis already, and were preparing to reveal themselves to each other.

   When they arrived in Hawaii, it was a sunny morning.  As soon as they dropped off their things at the nearby hotel and ate lunch, the four girls had run down to the beach to enjoy themselves for the rest of the day.

   “Ready?” Ai said.  “One… two…”

   “Wait!” Eri cried out.

   “What’s wrong, baby?” Reina questioned.

   “Is it one, two, three then take the towel off, or is it one, two, and take it off at three?” the turtle contemplated seriously.

   “Does it matter?” Ai said, raising an eyebrow.

   “No, Kameha’s got a good point!” Risa shrilled nervously.  “Let’s do one, two, three, then take it off, okay?”

   “Whatever makes you happy,” Ai said, grinning.  “So ready?  One… two… three!”

   All four girls dropped their towels at the same time.  They all first examined the other girls’ attire first, and then turned their eyes towards their respective lovers.

   Ai was wearing a red, white, and navy blue stripped bikini; it made her voluminous chest look even bigger.  Reina had on a lacy, white and orange bikini with a skirt at the bottom; it complemented her light brown hair nicely.  Eri was wearing a light blue bikini with white stars decorated on it; it definitely gave off the bright feeling of the turtle.  Risa was wearing a white bikini with colorful tiny patterns; it was something that Eri had picked out for her.

   “I think I like what I see,” Reina smirked, extending her arms towards her girlfriend. 

   “Uh-uh,” Eri said, backing away.  “If you want to hug me in this, you’ll have to catch me first!”

   With that, the world’s fastest turtle dashed towards the water.  The yankii grinned and happily chased after her, leaving her leader behind with the bean.  Risa kept her gaze down on the sand; wearing the bikini in front of Ai was making her uncomfortable.  In a way, it continuously reminded her of the lingerie in her trunk, and that only made the bean blush even more.

   “Risa,” Ai started, worriedly, “are you alright?  You look kind of tired…”

   “I’m fine,” the younger girl mumbled.

   “Are you sure?”  The idol lifted her girlfriend’s chin, forcing her to make eye contact with her.  “We can go back to the hotel room, if you’d like.”

   “I’m fine, really!” Risa yelled, grabbing Ai’s hand and pulling it away from her face.  She planned to drop her lover’s hand but the older girl tangled her fingers with hers before she could do so. 

   “Am I supposed to believe that because I love you?” Ai questioned, leaning in to her girlfriend.  “Or am I supposed to doubt that because I love you and I care about you?”

   “I’m fine, Ai,” Risa sighed.  “I guess… I’m just uneasy.”

   “Why are you uneasy?” the leader leaned her head forward.

   “Because… I’m scared,” the bean mumbled, unable to concentrate because of Ai’s beauty simply blinding her.

   “Why are you scared?” Ai murmured, leaning in even closer.

   “Because…” Risa mumbled again.  But as Ai’s lips were about to touch her, the younger girl pushed her back and jumped away.  “Because Kameha scared the hell out of me with her stories, that’s why!”

   Then, Risa made a run for the water, after her friend and the yankii idol.  Ai cocked her head to the side, but decided that they would continue this conversation later, and went to join her friends in the water.

   Reina splashed the cold water on her girlfriend, causing Eri to scream.  The yankii then proceeded to hug the turtle from her back and kissed her neck.

   “Was that cold?  I’ll warm you up…” Reina purred.

   “I’m not sure whether to be thankful to you, or frightened of you,” Eri grumbled.

   “I’ll take revenge for you, Eri,” Ai offered.  She pulled her partner away from her lover and pushed her towards the deep side of the water.  Reina stumbled and fell in, getting drenched from head to toe.

   “Ai!” the yankii shouted angrily.

   “That’s for being so loud on the plane!” Ai laughed.  Risa also started to laugh quietly as Eri giggled behind them.  Reina scowled.

   “I’m going to get you for that,” the younger idol growled. 

   She picked herself up and started to furiously splash water towards her leader.  Ai screamed and started to splash back with Risa helping.  Eri skittered behind Reina and also tried to help.  In the end, they all ended up soaking wet from head to toe, and they all laughed it off.

   At that moment, from the corner of her eye, Risa spotted a couple guys staring at them from a few feet away, on the sand.  The bean leaned into her girlfriend and whispered in her ear.

   “Ai, those guys are staring at you,” she said.  “Maybe they recognized you.”

   The older girl turned around, gazed at where Risa and indicated, turned back, and smirked.

   “Oh, they’re not staring at me,” Ai grinned.  “They’re staring at you.”

   “Me?” Risa said, confused.  “Why me?”

   “You’re a beautiful girl,” Ai shrugged.  “And you look pretty astounding in that bikini, my dear.  I’m almost considering taking you back to the hotel so nobody else would be able to see you in that.”

   “Oh, you’ll see me in something that should be much more enticing… hopefully,” Risa thought, looking down. 

   “Girls!  Come out of the water for a while!”

   The two couples turned around and spotted one of the photo shoot directing staff.  Ai and Reina quickly shuffled out of the water with Risa and Eri right behind them.

   “Is something wrong?” Ai questioned.

   “We decided to add a couple more shots for the photo book, because one of our venues closed,” the lady said.  “We found a different scene to do, but they can only lend us the place tonight.”

   “Just get to the point already…” Reina grumbled under her breath.  But then, she smiled and masked her irritation.  “So, Staff-san, what does this mean?”

   “It means we’ll have to start shooting today,” the lady announced.  “We can only have the place during late evening, so I’m sorry to say that you girls won’t be getting much sleep tonight.”

   “What?” Risa yelled, her eyes widening in shock. 

   “Risa-chan, calm down!” Eri chided, surprised by her friend’s sudden reaction.  “You know, you don’t have to stay up late.”

   “That’s right, Risa,” Ai agreed.  “You have the spare key to our room, right?  Use that and get some rest.”

   “But… but…” Risa stuttered. 

   “I know what you’re thinking,” Eri whispered so that only the two of them could hear.  “You still have the night after that, don’t worry.”

   The bean finally sighed and stared down at the sand.  The staff lady gave Ai and Reina the exact time for the start of the shooting and walked away.  The yankii moaned and hugged her girlfriend.

   “And I was looking so forward to our first night in Hawaii…” she complained.

   “What was there to look forward to in the first place?” Eri said innocently.  Reina backed away and glowered at her smiling girlfriend.

   “Risa, it’s fine if you stay in your room while I work,” Ai comforted, taking the younger girl’s hands.

   “That’s not it,” Risa whined.  “I just… It’s just…”

   “Are you going to be lonely without me tonight?” Ai teased.

   “Yes!” Risa cried out unconsciously.  “Wait, I mean, no… I mean—”

   “I get it,” Ai laughed, embracing her girlfriend.  “I’m sorry I have to leave you.  But we’ll still be together tomorrow, right?  You’ll watch the photo shoot during the day.”

   “Can’t I watch you tonight?”

   “Nope.  Because I want you to get some rest, and that’s final.”

   “… Fine,” Risa muttered.  “I guess I’ll just have to wait one more night… Wait, this is a good thing!  It means I have one more night to prepare, right?  But… why do I feel let down…?

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I am so tired... :fainted:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #527 on: August 10, 2010, 07:22:26 AM »
I love this chapter! It's so cute. I love all the teasing.  :wub: :heart: :twothumbs

Next update(s) shall be interesting... :twisted:

Sorry it's a short comment, but I need to pack. :panic: Going on vaycay. :) I'll try to keep up with the updates!  :grin:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #528 on: August 10, 2010, 07:27:24 AM »
XD ai's revenge~! XDDD that was cute but WTH STAFF-SAN?! :frustrated: making poor risa wait even MORE! :mon uggh:

:mon thumb: great job my loves~X3 :mon love:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #529 on: August 10, 2010, 10:08:51 AM »
I gotta thank you for writing this chapter :onioncheer: it made me smile for the first time today~ XD
Hmm, just wondering... when writing this, do you picture Risa with long or short hair? Cause my mind keeps switching between the two, especially in this chapter  :nervous

awesome job as always~ :cow: and sorry for the short comment! I'm not in a writing mood right now...  :sweatdrop:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #530 on: August 10, 2010, 10:14:03 AM »
somehow its coming soon, maybe on a private beach XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #531 on: August 10, 2010, 12:14:01 PM »
Noo! Staff-san! :mon ref: why did you do thats to risa :mon annoy:

hope the next chap would be loving cool :twisted: :twisted:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #532 on: August 10, 2010, 01:14:24 PM »
Lol, poor girl's gonna explode from anticipation before she explodes from something else. I think I might die from all the waiting you're putting us through, but then again, that will make it all the sweeter when it finally happens. :drool:

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But… why do I feel let down…?”
Because you want to do her!!! :panic:
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« Reply #533 on: August 10, 2010, 01:26:44 PM »
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But… why do I feel let down…?”
Because you want to do her!!! :panic:

OMGSH, this just totally made my day~ LOL~~~~ :mon lmao:

@SarangAi: Takagaki perv WANTZ NAO!! I finally got access to the perv  :cow:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #534 on: August 10, 2010, 07:30:44 PM »
I'm still depressed about the graduation news :cry: but this sweet chapters made me feel a lot better ^^ thanks for keep writing this fic~  :thumbup

Oww poor Gaki-san! she is so anxious about spending her night with Ai
Damn you Staff-san XD don't make us her suffer!

By the way I read this chapter at school, so It will be your fault if I fail my math class D: xD

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #535 on: August 11, 2010, 05:19:51 AM »
this chapter is cute :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 70 - (8/8)]
« Reply #536 on: August 11, 2010, 06:22:52 AM »
@Kano-chan: that's fine~ have a nice vacation! :D

@kawaii beam: lol it's always the Staff's fault XD

@xanimefreak13x: It's long hair.. it's essential that it's long hair at the moment :D i'm glad this made you smile :twothumbs

@kurosawa87: well, something's coming... :twisted:

@HashirePomeranian: Another Lurker pulled out~ :otomerika: :yossi: :cow: awesome! glad you like my fic! :twothumbs

@fallenxangel: lol I needed someone to blame XD

@rndmnwierd: LOL that quote made my day as well XD

@NekoMioko: Aww~ glad it made you feel better :twothumbs and you really shouldn't read my fic in school, i usually try to keep comedy in it so.... :twisted:

@yellow: thank you~ i try XD


Thank you so much for your comments~ they make me feel better about everything, rly :D
And I'm glad that my fic is making some of guys feel better, in return :twothumbs

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Chapter 72

   “Now take off the shirt slowly, Takahashi!  That’s right… and don’t forget about the camera!”

   Flashes and camera clicking came from various angles around the High-Queen leader, who was taking off a t-shirt to reveal the black bikini underneath.  Her long hair flowed with the light breeze as she took off her top while smiling at the camera. 

   “And… cut!” the director called.  “That was good, Takahashi!  You can take five; Tanaka, you’re next!”

   Ai stepped out of the sand and on to the boardwalk to face her partner.  The yankii was in a tank-top while wearing a bikini underneath; the two idols high-fived each other as they passed by.  Risa then met her girlfriend with a friendly smile, and draped a towel around the older girl.

   “Arigatou,” the leader thanked.  “What did you think of those shots?”

   “They were great,” Risa said plainly.  “They’re always great.”

   “Risa, are you alright?” Ai asked worriedly.  “You seem a little pale.”

   “I’m fine… I guess I’m just tired,” the younger girl mumbled.

   Indeed, the bean was very tired.  During the night-time photo shoot, Risa had sat alone in the hotel room, eyeing her trunk nervously.  During the entire night, all she could think about was how their next night would go, which scared her yet somehow excited her.  These mixed feelings for what was to come had completely ruined her beauty sleep.  In fact, she was so nervous but so determined that she just put on the lingerie underneath her clothes that morning.  It made her feel ready at any time… But then again, it also made her feel silly.

   “If you’re that tired,” Ai continued, “I think you should go back to your room and rest.  Reina, Eri, and I are here for work but you’re here on vacation.”

   “I don’t want to go back,” Risa whispered.  “I want to stay here with you.”

   “Even though I’m still worried, I’m kind of glad to hear that,” Ai grinned. 

   She leaned in close to her girlfriend and covered both sides of their faces with the towel around her.  Then, the idol placed a kiss upon Risa’s lips, which started off sweet.  But as soon as the bean’s lips parted, Ai took the initiative to shove her tongue in, making the younger girl moan. 

   Seeing that her lover’s movements were limited because she was holding up the towel, Risa saw this as a chance to have the upper hand.  She quickly ran her hand over Ai’s cheeks, then down to her neck, then to her chest.  She cupped her breasts firmly, which made Ai moan softly.  Risa’s hands continued its adventure down to her lover’s slim waist; it lingered there for a while, feeling the smooth skin of Ai’s stomach.  Then, the younger girl reached down and got a good grip on the singer’s butt, which made Ai jump a little but she made no sign of displeasure. 

   “And… cut!” the director’s loud voice boomed.  “Great job, Tanaka!”

   Unfortunately, both girls knew that the “cut” signal was their cue to stop making out.  Unwillingly, Risa backed away as Ai dropped the towel down to her own shoulders again.  The bean pouted a little; she was enjoying being in the lead.  Ai grinned, reading her girlfriend’s mind, and gave her a quick peck on the forehead.

   “I have to go back,” Ai murmured.  “We can continue this later.”

   “That better be a promise,” Risa muttered.

   “If you want it to be, sweetheart,” the singer chuckled.  She gave a wink before shuffling off the boardwalk.  Eri skipped towards the bean and smirked.

   “I saw that,” the turtle giggled.  “You guys are getting really close.  Was that a prelude to tonight’s event?”

   “Hopefully it happens tonight,” Risa sighed.  She was starting to feel awfully dizzy now.  The sun was too bright on her face and everything was too hot…

   “Woah, Risa-chan!” Eri yelled.  “Are you okay?  What’s wrong, are you sick?”

   Her friend’s yelling made Risa realize that she almost collapsed just now.  The turtle was holding her arm up, but she was already kneeling on the ground. 

   “I’m fine, Kameha…” Risa whispered.  “I’m just stressed, and I didn’t get enough sleep last night… Don’t make a big fuss or Ai will come over.”

   “Too late,” a different voice growled.

   The bean looked up to see her girlfriend bending down towards her; she was not happy.

   “Risa, if you’re too tired, you should be back at the hotel,” Ai scolded.  “I want you back in your bed, immediately.”

   “I’ll take her back,” Eri offered.  She started to pull Risa up and swung her arm around her friend’s waist.  “Come on, Risa-chan.”

   “I’m sorry, Ai,” the bean mumbled, her eyes half-closed.  “I wanted to stay for the whole shoot…”

   “Don’t worry about that,” Ai whispered back.  “Go to bed and get some sleep.  When you wake up, I’ll be there, okay?  And that’s a promise.”

   “Okay…” Risa mumbled.  “Keep that promise…”

   With that, the two friends stumbled away together, out of the beach and down the street.  It took a little longer than it had to, but the girls eventually reached Ai and Risa’s hotel suite.  The turtle dropped her friend on the bed and pulled the blanket over her.

   “I don’t want you moving an inch out of this bed before Ai gets here, understand?” Eri ordered.

   “I understand…” Risa mumbled back.  Everything in the room was really spinning now; she was definitely suffering from lack of sleep.

   “And don’t worry too much about your first night,” Eri whispered.  “When you feel like you’re ready, it feels completely natural to do something more.  It’s hard to explain, but you’ll know when you feel it.  Trust me.”

   “Okay…” Risa said, barely comprehensible now.  “Thanks, Kameha…”

   With that, the bean quickly fell asleep, putting the thoughts on her future events aside.

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I had to kinda rush this one... I'll try not to be so lazy next time :nervous
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« Reply #537 on: August 11, 2010, 06:30:22 AM »
Your story is helping me feel a whole lot better even if it's just a short while when I'm reading new chapters.
In fact, the story is turning too sweet that I'm sorting of dreading the confrontation with Sayu that will inevitably come up at some point  :nervous



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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 72 - (8/11)]
« Reply #538 on: August 11, 2010, 06:37:45 AM »
AWWWW  :w00t: interesting stuff happening under the towel  :wub: :lol:
I'm glad that FINALLY Gaki gets some sleep xD
And do I sense some perv coming in the next chappie? :D My 6th sense for detecting perv is never wrong xD Unless I'm sleepy like right now, cause it's so early xD
Can't wait for tomorrow's update  :heart:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 72 - (8/11)]
« Reply #539 on: August 11, 2010, 07:06:25 AM »
awww poor gak-san =( but after a good rest things will be much better for her nee~? :thumbsup

and i'm with the other readers on this.. reading ur fic makes me feeling better ^^

keep up the work  :thumbsup

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