Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [COMPLETE - EXTRA: Ch. 101 - (12/1)]

[kuro808]

Gaki-san is tired but Ai is trying to be a good friend

It gets closer to the goal

[xanimefreak13x]

Awww~ loved that make-out scene under the towel but now I'm having mixed emotions because I feel sorry for Risa lack of sleep really does that to you and it really sucks especially when your heartbeat increases ten-fold, everything feels like it's gonna crash down on you.  Hopefully Risa will wake up in time
Even though I wantz that Takagaki perv sooner... I don't want Risa to get too worried about it, LOL. I think she comes first, before everything else. 

Unfortunately, both girls knew that the “cut” signal was their cue to stop making out.

Aww DARNNIT! It would've been awesome if they were too engrossed in what they were doing and in their own world to hear the "cut" signal Heh, that would be so awesome.

Director: "And...cut. Great job, Tanaka! Go get Takahashi-san over here, will ya?"
Reina: *looks over to find Aichan* "Uhh, I don't think that's a good idea."
Director: WHAT ARE YOU SAYIN!? Are you disobeying my orders now?
Reina: *shifty* "..."
Director: "Dammit, you... Fine, I'll just do it myself!" *walks over to Aichan*
              "TAKAHASHI! WTF are you doing under that towel!!" *pulls away towel to reveal Aigaki making out*
Director:
AWW MANNN~ Amidst all this fluff, I TOTALLY forgot about Sayu. OMG, don't write me that angst anymore!!! I don't think my heart can handle it...

[fallenxangel24952]

ohh gaki-chan rest well since your goal is just tonight ......maybe

[Swtme03]

AHHH!!!!!  I need to comment!!!   

That sexy little scene beneath the towel....  
Gaki is cracking me up with her thoughts  It's so cute, I just want to pinch her painless cheeks 
Especially at this part...

In fact, she was so nervous but so determined that she just put on the lingerie underneath her clothes that morning.  It made her feel ready at any time… But then again, it also made her feel silly.

So cute~ 
Tho, it wasn't very funny that she's so worried she forgot to get some rest  and almost FAINTED!!!?? 



Risa: 
Eri: "Woah, Risa-chan!”  “Are you okay?  What’s wrong, are you sick?” 
Risa:  “I’m fine, Kameha…”  “I’m just stressed, and I didn’t get enough sleep last night… Don’t make a big fuss or Ai will come over.” 
Ai:  “Too late..."


I dunno why, but I really love it when Ai scolds Risa 

Get your rest Risa  You'll need it when you wake up 

[badsaints]

Director: "And...cut. Great job, Tanaka! Go get Takahashi-san over here, will ya?"
Reina: *looks over to find Aichan* "Uhh, I don't think that's a good idea."
Director: WHAT ARE YOU SAYIN!? Are you disobeying my orders now?
Reina: *shifty* "..."
Director: "Dammit, you... Fine, I'll just do it myself!" *walks over to Aichan*
              "TAKAHASHI! WTF are you doing under that towel!!" *pulls away towel to reveal Aigaki making out*
Director:

LMAO this is awesome! You should write a play or a story too


Phew finally caught up with the story Somehow the story is getting pervalicious? Not that your readers are complaining

As much as I love TakaGaki sweetness, I can't wait for the drama once Sayu realises what's going on Oh please don't stop writing TanaKame

[rndmnwierd]

*skips around* Takagaki, lalala, Takagaki lalaha. Poor Risa is thinking too hard, lol, freakin herself out. Again, anticipation is killing me~!!

I love the Takagaki make-out scene, so sweet and sexy.

[kawaii beam]

omg risa's so adorable! poor thing, stressing out like that wont help ya!

why do i feel like ai will be there before she wakes up or something? 

great job yet again~!

[oddball]

The girls all checking each other's bikini's out was very funny.

Poor Risa  planning the perfect evening with Ai and then them having to do a nightime photo shoot  and then poor Risa trying to stay up all night  , Ai was very caring about it which was very cute!

[kano-chan]

Whew! Finally I can post.

This chapter is super cute! A little action there under the towel.

Really love how Ai-chan scold Gaki out of care.

Good chapter!

[sapphire]

Ah~I really like this chapter. It didn't feel that rushed, don't worry.
Risa shouldn't worry so much about her first night with Ai. She should sleep more instead of getting lack of sleep, if ya know what I mean.
Wooo~please write many many about Eri~

Chapter 71: I really like the feeling that you created with them playing in the water at the beach. It seemed very relaxed and romantic in a way.

Please update soon~

[yellow]

i sort of detect TakaGaki previness for next update?!!
really look forward for your next update...

[NekoMioko]

Poor Gaki-san she was forcing herself to stay awake in order to be with Ai
so sweet *-*

I really liked the make out scene under the towel

I'll try to not read the fic in school... but the fic is way more interesting than my math class -w-
Keep writing please :3!

[SarangAi]

@aussie: aww~ glad it's making you feel better and it's good that you didn't forget about sayu yet

@Ada: you're 6th sense is AMAZING

@lonewind: yeah~ she can save her energy for something more important

@kurosawa87: ah yes, their goal...

@xanimefreak13x: LOL I love your scenarios and sorry, the angst is still coming   but meanwhile, just enjoying what's here

@fallenxangel: you are totally right

@Swtme03: YO i missed you! and your emoticons the towel is the best

@badsaints: pervalicious, but I still wanna keep some sweet moments in there and don't worry, I haven't forgotten about TanaKame

@rndmnwierd: Anticipation is good

@kawaii beam: well, Ai promised her. And promises shouldn't be broken... right?

@oddball: yup~ TakaGaki sweetness

@kano-chan: I'll never think of bath towels the same way again

@sapphire: I'm glad my atmosphere-creation worked!

@yellow: you detect correctly

@Neko.Mioko: i certainly HOPE my fic is more interesting than math class... if it's boring than math then... tha's not good


You guys probably don't wanna hear me ramble when I'm posting htis chapter

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Chapter 73

It's what you've all been waiting for...

TAKAGAKI HAWTNESS~

Pervers: http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=25888.msg757586#msg757586
Lurkers/Non-Pervers: http://sarangaifanfiction.wordpress.com/2010/08/12/kokoro-no-uta-ch-73-takagaki/

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So I still suck at writing pervs
But I think I did better at this one than the TanaKame perv, right?
 

[sapphire]

All righties! I am the first to post. That's probably because I felt like you might have posted, and you actually did. I'm so glad I came and checked. I am actually posting as I read.

I love the entire  moonlight+photo-shop effect talk. Ai is getting a lot better with her cheesy lines.
LOL.  Major rofl-ing moment when Ai admitted that Risa is sexy.
Oh...oh.... I am actually quite surprised that you had them "take turns" (unlike tanakamei, where it was one-sided). Biased SarangAi

All in all, it was extremely hot and demanding. Update soon~

[kawaii beam]

HOLY

SWEET

GAKI!

that was so hot!   



 
i can now go to heaven X3


lol all emocons asaid that chapter was epic, i love how  they just had their little convos while doing it and ai is certinly getting better with those cheesy lines XDDD

great jobby job~!!!
 

[fallenxangel24952]

My reaction:

TakaGaki just perfect

Good job SarangAi

[yellow]

  finally  it's their turn
that's hot and sweet!!!
(i wonder how would Sayu react when she learn about Ai and Risa being together ???)

[Ada XD]

^ Sayu will kill herself  (hopefully. cough)

Finally  ok so this was plain awesome xD
*nosebleed*   
I agree with Beam chan, GREAT JOBBY JOB   
lol xD

So Gakisan DID have the opportunity to wear the sexay lingerie  Gosh I wish I'd see that   

[kuro808]

nice chapter TakaGaki goodness to the ultimate level

[xrainbowgumdropsx]

Takagaki = Best thing ever. 'Nuff said. (:

...But, why is part of me kinda craving to some tear-jerkin' angst? D: -shot-